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Old April 24th, 2017, 01:06 AM #20
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ShadowDragonRanger
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Outstanding work as usual. Love the flair delivered in your style - a way with details and depth to the narrative. I appreciate that there's quite a number of allusions and it seems like even a little glimmer of your own universe peeking through in some spots...or maybe I'm just seeing things. Atmosphere is an important factor in a story like this and I feel that you convey it in just the right way.

I'm enjoying what's been put on display so far and we're getting a sense of who these precursor Rangers were. It will be interesting to see what we come across as this reaches its inevitable conclusion. One of the best things about a "start of darkness" is the journey.
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