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Old June 20th, 2009, 08:11 AM   #1
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Power Rangers Godzilla Force

Some of you may remember that I posted a comic book about Power Rangers with the powers of Japanese Kaiju. Well, I've gone back and started from scratch. I've rewritten and redrawn the comic book and shall be posting it here on RangerBoard. I hope you'll like the new comic.

For those of you new to this idea, here's the plot.

Logan and Josh move to Tokyo in hopes of reuniting with Sam, Logan's good friend. Sam had moved away to start inventing for Sony. There, the three of them met and Sam introduces his co-worker/roommate Tsubasa. To celebrate the team's arrival to the land of the rising sun, Sam and Tsuabsa bought curse tickets. Their pleasure cruse is cut short when a monsters attacks the boat and sinks it. The fearless four wind up on an uncharted island where they not only find a giant egg, but the first four kaiju stones that give these four friends the powers of four mighty kaiju legends. With this power, they become The Power Rangers Godzilla Force. Here to save the world from the Xillans.

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Old June 20th, 2009, 08:20 AM   #2
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Issue 1 Cover

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Old June 20th, 2009, 08:21 AM   #3
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Old June 20th, 2009, 08:32 AM   #4
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Old June 20th, 2009, 09:12 AM   #5
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Deleted due to accidental repeat.

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Old June 20th, 2009, 09:15 AM   #6
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Old June 20th, 2009, 09:42 AM   #7
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Old June 20th, 2009, 09:43 AM   #8
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Old June 20th, 2009, 09:59 AM   #9
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:03 AM   #10
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:05 AM   #11
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:05 AM   #12
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:06 AM   #13
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:08 AM   #14
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Old June 20th, 2009, 10:09 AM   #15
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Old June 20th, 2009, 03:37 PM   #16
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PRGF Monsters

Here are the monsters that will later appear in the series so far, drawn by Deadpoolrus.

The All Seer
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...Seer-115845898

General Pillager
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...ager-115846822

Jawsaurus Rex
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...-Rex-122649992

Giganoto D.
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...to-D-122649399

Tri-Jaw
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...-Jaw-124241530

Pudgy Pig
http://deadpoolrus.deviantart.com/ar...-Pig-124945251

What do you all think?
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Old June 20th, 2009, 11:07 PM   #17
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I think you should skip the comic idea and just write it as a story but keep the cool monster pictures coming
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Old June 21st, 2009, 07:22 AM   #18
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What's wrong with the comic? I put a lot of hard work into those pages, and I'm going to keep doing so.
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Old June 21st, 2009, 09:25 AM   #19
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the first few pages are repeated of the same page and honestly the arts ok but the overall story isn't very good

"I wanted to see if I could still sneek up on you"

"The cruise ship leaves in a FEW days now. kindly let go of sams colllar."

Then "The next day"

I think if you told it as a story rather than a comic it would accomplish the story you want to tell the comic seems like your focused to much on the drawing
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Old June 21st, 2009, 10:34 AM   #20
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the first few pages are repeated of the same page and honestly the arts ok but the overall story isn't very good

"I wanted to see if I could still sneek up on you"

"The cruise ship leaves in a FEW days now. kindly let go of sams colllar."

Then "The next day"

I think if you told it as a story rather than a comic it would accomplish the story you want to tell the comic seems like your focused to much on the drawing
Those are easily fixable problems. I am not quitting the comic!
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