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Old January 9th, 2017, 03:08 AM   #1
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Sukuu Sentai Seishinger

When the planet itself forsakes mankind five brave heroes brimming at the seams with rescue spirit will rise up and save humanity. Using special Energizer Crystals and Sukuu-Changers five young men and women from distinct backgrounds will come together and defeat Earth’s most ancient guardians and the demons that have corrupted them, the Jokeral. Will you join them, and unleash your Rescue Spirit?!

I'm going to be posting this sentai on fanfiction . net. Please feel free to give me criticism in the form of either comments here or as reviews on there.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1231493...tai-Seishinger

Enjoy!

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Old January 9th, 2017, 09:25 AM   #2
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It's a pretty interesting start to the season, though I do think that the main cast could have used some characterization just for this episode since the only characters we see forming their personalities are the commander and Hiyori, Blue to a small extent. Other than that, the pacing was good, the action fun to read, and I'm intrigued enough to want more. Might I recommend posting the chapters on this forum in addition to FF.net? Makes it easier to just read it on the forum.

Also, I would like it if you could come over to my story and you can give your thoughts on it if it's ok with you. Welcome to the FF side of Rangerboard, if its your first time.
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Old January 9th, 2017, 09:31 AM   #3
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It's a pretty interesting start to the season, though I do think that the main cast could have used some characterization just for this episode since the only characters we see forming their personalities are the commander and Hiyori, Blue to a small extent. Other than that, the pacing was good, the action fun to read, and I'm intrigued enough to want more. Might I recommend posting the chapters on this forum in addition to FF.net? Makes it easier to just read it on the forum.

Also, I would like it if you could come over to my story and you can give your thoughts on it if it's ok with you. Welcome to the FF side of Rangerboard, if its your first time.
Thank you very much. I have seen your fanfiction but I have yet to dive in. And yeah Hiyori and Kabutole are actually my more important characters for these first few episodes. Honestly I think I could've expounded on stuff more with Kabutole. I mean you may have noticed when I casually slipped in there that all Jokeral are human.

But yeah Ill make sure to check your out. Thanks for readin!
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