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Old 04-13-2009, 12:11 PM   #801
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Name: Jason Scott

Age: 18

Height: 5"7

Weight: 195 lbs

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Birthplace: San Angeles, CA

Birthday: October 20

The strong and fearless leader of the Power Rangers, Jason Scott is the Red Power Ranger. Following the destruction of Lord Zedd and the retreat of his forces to deep space, Jason continued to master several martial art forms before meeting Linhau 'Howard' Kaku, the uncle of the Yellow Power Ranger, Trini. Jason convinced Master Kaku to use his time in Angel Grove to train him and his fellow Rangers in the mysterious art of the Chi-Quan.

At first skeptical of his role as a defender of the Earth, Jason has now comfortably adjusted to his role as superhero. His undying sense of duty to his world has helped him achieve a new level of self confidence. Jason has also made amends with the Green Power Ranger, Tommy, who Jason once considered his mortal enemy. Together, the two powerhouse martial artists are the cornerstones of the Earth's newest champions.

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Name: Trini Kwan

Age: 19

Height: 5"7

Weight: 150 lbs

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: Korean-American

Birthplace: Houston, TX

Birthday: August 9

Calm and composed, Trini Kwan is the Yellow Power Ranger. Her quiet determination helped the Rangers achieve victory against the vile Lord Zedd and his evil forces. At the request of her friend and the leader of the Rangers, Trini has begun studying the art of Chi-Quan from her Uncle Howard, who recently located to Angel Grove.

The go-to counseling spirit of the team, Trini is always there for her friends and teammates, to lend a helping hand or non-judgmental ear. Her relationship with Adam Park has taken a particularly romantic turn in the three years since their victory over the Immortal Vast and has become a vital link in the strength of the Power Rangers with her self-sacrificing heroics and peaceful spirituality.


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Name: Adam Park

Age: 19

Height: 5"9

Weight: 160 lbs

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: Korean-American

Birthplace: Seoul, South Korea

Birthday: December 16

Shy, sensitive, and spiritual, Adam Park is the Blue Power Ranger. His training of martial arts has made him a disciplined and efficient fighter, specializing in Shaolin Kung Fu. Like his romantic interest, Trini, the Yellow Ranger, Adam's dedication to his spiritual growth has given the Rangers a distinct advantage against the universe's evil forces. When the Red Ranger, Jason, urged the team to commit to the training in the Chi-Quan arts, Adam was the most enthusiastic of the team.

Adam struggled with self-confidence early on, but after helping defend his planet from the forces of darkness, he has grown and matured into a strong-willed individual. This personal growth allowed him to confront the Yellow Ranger with his romantic interest in her, which blossomed into a long standing relationship.


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Name: Kimberly Hart

Age: 19

Height: 5"5

Weight: 145 lbs

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Birthplace: Seattle, WA

Birthday: February 14

Compassionate, witty, and energetic, Kimberly Hart is the Pink Power Ranger. Once foolish and materialistic, Kimberly has evolved into a strong, confident, and caring person. A kind and compassionate soul, Kim cares a great deal about her friends and teammates. This growth has allowed her to possess the discipline needed to begin her training in the Chi-Quan Martial Arts.

No longer reluctant of her powers, Kimberly has fully embraced her role as one of Earth's elite defenders. Her relationship with the Green Ranger, Tommy, has only grown by leaps and bounds in the three years since the team's victory of Lord Zedd. It is this union that has given her the knowledge and interest to become a proficient martial artist.


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Name: Zack Taylor

Age: 18

Height: 6"1

Weight: 172 lbs

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: African-American

Birthplace: Washington, DC

Birthday: May 3

Clever and upbeat, Zack Taylor is the Black Power Ranger. Still remaining a bit cynical of his role as a superhero, Zack has matured, yet still has his defiant streak. His strong willed personality has caused him to clash with other members of his team, although he is usually quick to crack a joke to ease the tension. Ever the ladies man, he has is always hard at work trying to impress the ladies with his charm.

Zack has become confident of his skills as a martial artist, bordering on cockiness. However, it is his ability to put aside his faults for the best of the team that helped them defeat Lord Zedd and the Immortal Vast forces. While he was reluctant at first to adapt a new fighting style, Zack eventually gave in and took up training under Trini's Uncle Howard in the Chi-Quan martial art.


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Old 04-18-2009, 01:42 PM   #808
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Name: Tommy Oliver

Age: 19

Height: 6"0

Weight: 186 lbs

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Birthplace: UNKNOWN

Birthday: July 10

Loyal and courageous, Tommy Oliver is the Green Power Ranger. Still dark and brooding at times, Tommy has become good friends with his teammates, most notably, the Red Ranger, Jason. The two are still competitive with each other, although as they study the Chi-Quan martial art form, they have begun to learn to 'Gung Ho' and work together.

Tommy's relationship with the Pink Ranger, Kimberly, has also grown in the three years since he defeated Lord Zedd. No longer plagued by Zedd's manipulation, Tommy is now one of the cornerstones of the Ranger team, along with Jason.


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Name: William "Billy" Cranston

Age: 18

Height: 5"8

Weight: 175 lbs

Hair: Blonde

Eyes: Blue

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Birthplace: Chicago, IL

Birthday: April 1

Super-intelligent and inventive, Billy Cranston is the human link between the Power Rangers and Zordon's command center. While the Rangers have begun to study the Chi-Quan style of martial arts, Billy has shyed away from Trini's Uncle Howard, yet he still has sought to improve himself physically through other forms.

Ever the inventor, Billy has created new technologies for the Rangers as contingencies for many of their weapons and technologies, many of which the Rangers have no knowledge of. Billy also secretly desires to be a Power Ranger, but has yet to let anyone know of his dreams of becoming one of Earth's defenders.

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Those are nice BR, a great cast selection, but do you NEED to post them all separatley?
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I don't see what difference it makes ... besides, I will link to these later on for my fanfic and I'd rather have them separated ... I just didn't think it mattered either way ... its just the same amount either way, ya know ...
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Old 04-19-2009, 08:25 PM   #812
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Power Rangers: Samuari Force


Everything from the suits, weapons, villains, monsters, and zords are based on Samurai Sentai Shinkenger.

Plot

Millennia ago, a pure evil force known as the Onyx Empire had spread its darkness throughout the world. However, a squad of powerful samurais used their collective power and their animal gods to erase the darkness and stop it from growing; the empire was led by its daimyo, Draken. Draken toke his sole mission into stopping the samurais, but they overpowered him and imprisoned him into a dragon statue. Since his defeat, his empire crumbled, most of the warriors were forced into exile, and the world was safe.

Now in 2010, the remaining members of the Onyx Empire return from their exile to seek their daimyo. And eventually with the help of Seiren, a young ronin (masterless warrior) who betrayed his people, they soon discover the cave where the statue is located. There the warrior’s father, Kanto, is continuing to keep the barrier of the statue strong until the evil warriors attack him; Seiren uses the reversal chant, which was only created for a unperceived notion to free the evil lord. As his father watches, Seiren breaks the barrier and unleashes Draken from his millennial imprisonment. Draken freed from his entrapment unleashes his wrath first on Kanto by stealing his ki—spiritual power—killing him on contact. Before he was imprisoned, Draken captured the Saaki stone, an ancient artifact that hold the power of renouncing one’s ki to either be held or be used by another; while imprisoned, Draken fuses the powers of the stone within his own and now has the power to steal one’s ki. Realizing this as his fuel for vengeance, Draken and his renewed empire begin their revenge by destroying the descendants of the ancient samurais that defeated them centuries ago.

Meanwhile at a temple, the master of the temple, Kenji and his son, Lee, discusses Lee’s samurai training and the future. However, as they discuss, Kenji senses the power of Draken; and then without caution the evil army attacks the temple. While escaping, Kenji tells his son to find an old contact using the locator chant. As he questions his father’s request, Lee gets attacked by the soilders of the empire, the Nanashi. As he is under attack, his father faces off with Draken; Draken soon takes Kenji’s ki killing him in front of Lee. Seeing his father dead, Lee decides to take on his father’s last request and searches for the person he was sent to continue his training. Using the locator chant, Lee escapes a bunch of Nanashi at the temple to the city of Angel Grove.

Now at Angel Grove, Lee begins to find his old friend and then discover him at his dojo. Soon Lee sees his old friend, Adam Park, a former Power Ranger who now owns a dojo with Alpha 6. However, the relations between him and Adam are not just friendly, but kin related as Adam is then revealed to be Lee’s cousin and Kenji’s nephew. Lee still having trust issues with his cousin knows that Adam is the only one to help him into stopping the empire once more, but Lee continues questioning his confidence and his cousin’s trust. When he gets attack by one of the empire's warrior monsters, Lee receives unexpected help from Valerie, a dance instructor; Mason, a mechanic training in kung fu; Chris, a comical, yet smart artist; and Jasmine, a hard working community aid. Along with his cousin’s mentorship and Alpha’s help, Lee and the others must train in the skills of the samurai, knowledge of the bushido, and gain the assistance of the ancient animal gods to become Power Rangers and stop the empire once more.

Rangers

Lee Han – Color: Red; he is a underachiever and martial artist, who is the son of Kenji Han; when his father was killed by Draken after what happened when his ancestors trapping Draken into a shield, Lee escapes his father’s overtaken temple to the city of Angel Grove to find his cousin, Adam Park, to help him train the arts of the Samurai. Soon Adam appoints him as the leader of the team by being the Red Ranger.

Mason Fields – Color: Blue; he is a mechanic, who loves riding motorcycles and hot rods; and sometimes loves to do kung-fu for other reasons. When he sees Lee and Valerie in trouble, he helped them out. Understanding his true potential, Adam recruits him to be the Blue Ranger.

Valerie Bailey – Color: Pink; she is a spirited dance instructor. She loves to dance and helps young kids into achieving their goal to be a dancer. When she meets Lee, they get attack by a group of the empire’s warriors. After defending against them, Adam is impressed of her dance-infused fighting and by a request from Lee; Adam recruits her as the Pink Ranger.

Chris Landon – Color: Green; he is a comical and free-spirited artist. He might be lacking some skills of martial arts, but he is very smart when he has skills of getting out of sticky situations. He has doubts of being a samurai ranger, but Adam convinces him to be the Green Ranger. However, Chris continues having the doubts and buts heads a lot with Lee; the others are skeptical when he becomes second command.

Jasmine Diaz – Color: Yellow; she is a hard working community aid, who has some interesting fighting skills. When she meets Adam and Lee, Jasmine doesn’t quit understand the potential of helping them, but with Chris’s help and her sister’s talk Jasmine saw the light after getting attack from the same creature that attacked Lee and Valerie. Finally understanding the truth and by request from her sister, she becomes the Yellow Ranger.

Golden Ranger aka Adam (beginning in episodes 12 and 13)

Allies

Adam Park – He is a former Black Power Ranger, who used to protect Angel Grove years ago. After helping another squad of rangers three years ago, he and Alpha 6 began a dojo right here in Angel Grove. When he sees his distant cousin, Lee, returning, Adam tries to find out what happened. Lee still distrusting Adam eventually tells him Adam’s uncle was killed from the return of Draken and the Onyx Empire. Knowing this could have come true, Adam received a gift from his uncle a year ago and in it is a note to take care of his cousin and train him in the arts of the samurai along with the morphers and the Onis. Seeing the threat is close to home, he recruits his cousin and four others to become Power Rangers and becomes their mentor.

Alpha 6 – Robotic assistant that helped previous rangers years ago, now after being reassembled three years ago it helps out Adam with his new dojo. And now helps the new rangers against the Onyx Empire.

Quentin – A friend and old rival of Mason’s. He treats Mason like a brother he never had, but with their bitter feud it’s impossible for them to get along.

Lewis – Chris’s boss, who owns an art gallery, is very strict in his art and gets selfish when his art is ruined.

Serena Diaz – Jasmine’s older sister. When the others were under attack, she helped them and originally considered to fill the Yellow Ranger role until she falls ill and requests her sister to replace her.

Jacob – A twelve-year-old kid who is one of Adam’s students. He is recurrently appearing in Adam’s dojo sometimes helping him and the others.

Mr. Bailey – Valerie’s arrogant father who she continues to try and be nice to gain some stuff from him especially money to run her own dance studio. He controls a wealthy business, and don’t approve of the Ranger’s actions after he disapproved of previous Power Rangers, who saved Angel Grove a long time ago.

Others

Kenji Han – Lee’s father and Adam’s distant uncle; he is the Jin of his temple. He along with his son is descendants of a legendary ancient samurais who had stopped an evil empire centuries ago. Now that it’s back and their leader, Draken, is freed from his imprisonment, Draken kills him by stealing his ki in order to gain vengeance on his ancestors.

Kanto – Father of Seiren; he somewhat as the protector of guarding the imprisoned Draken. When his warriors returned from their exile, he soon discovers his son was the one who led them to the location of the statue. Seeing his son has betrayed him and the Bushido law, he witnesses his son using the reversal chant to free Draken. Now that he is back, Draken seeks revenge on the ancestors by killing their descendants and noticing Kanto is one of them he begins his wrath with him by stealing his ki thus killing him.

Villains

The Onyx Empire

Draken - He is the leader of the empire, known as the Dark Daimyo; carries a large sword. He is relentless and always gets angry to everyone and everything besides his second-in-command, Ziras. A millennia ago he almost controlled the world until powerful samurais imprisoned him into a dragon statue. Centuries later, his warriors discovered where he was kept and with the help of a ronin they break him free. Now set with newfound powers, he begins his crusade of vengeance on the ancient samurais’ descendants. When one of them flees to Angel Grove, he sets out to find him and rule the world once again.

Ziras – Second command of the Onyx Empire; she is a loyal warrior and a siren-like creature, who loves to collect things as treasure and plays strange songs with her shamisen. Draken knowing she is loyal to him treats her nice than others.

Namdek – A squid-like warrior, he is the strategist of the Onyx Empire; he sees humans as incurable waste and loves to use them in most of his experiments. He is usually the one who sends most of the monster warriors to stop the rangers.

Seiren – A young ronin, who not only betrayed his father Kanto, but his samurai teachings as he helped the empire freed Draken from his imprisonment. He is then nowhere to be mentioned until later when another warrior from the empire, Greckin, mentions the whereabouts of Seiren to Lee during a fight.

Nanashi – Crab head-like warriors who are the foot soilders of the empire. They are summoned by any upper level warrior and the monster warriors; they carry swords to defend against the rangers.

Warrior Monsters – Creature spirits that inhabited imprisoned humans of the empire; they use their two eyes to grow in case they are destroyed in their human form.

Arsenal

Bushi Cell Morphers (Cellphone-like Morphers that rangers use to change into; they also use the built in brush to spell out chants mostly summoning their zords)
Power Disks (Colored disks they put on the heel of their katanas to summon each of their elemental attacks)
Element Katanas (Long-thin blades the rangers used to defend against the evil warriors)
Blaze Sword/Blaze Cannon (Red Ranger’s weapon; a long, wide sword that can turn into cannon using all of the rangers’ color disks to perform a collective attack)
Crest Bow (Blue Ranger’s weapon that is a bow)
Light Fan (Pink Ranger’s weapon that resembles a fan)
Terra Spear (Green Ranger’s weapon that resembles a long spear)
Mountain Striker (Yellow Ranger’s weapon that resembles a dagger )

Oni Zords
Origami zords shaped from the ancient animals, who helped the ancient samurais, and is structured out of basic shapes; they are originally small emblems carried by the rangers and are summoned by the Oni chant to become full grown zords.

Shoku Megazord
Lion Oni (a red pentagon shaped origami; body and head)
Dragon Oni (a blue hexagon shaped origami; left leg and helmet)
Turtle Oni (a pink circle shaped origami; right arm)
Bear Oni (a green square shaped origami; right leg)
Monkey Oni (a yellow triangle shaped origami; left arm)

Auxiliary Zords:
Beetle Oni (an orange animal zord summoned by the orange power disk; turning helmet)
Marlin Oni (a light blue animal zord summoned by the light blue power disk; torpedos and duo sword)
Tiger Oni (a white animal zord summoned by the white power disk; four drill helmet)

Other Zords:
Squid Oni (a black animal zord later summoned by the Gold Ranger)
Lobster Oni (a crimson animal zord later summoned by the Gold Ranger)

Episodes
  1. Enter the Samurai (1)
    A evil empire almost spread the world through darkness until a group of powerful samurais overpowered them forcing them into exile and imprisioning their leader, Draken, into a dragon statue. Now centuries later, a wayward warrior helps breaking Draken out and now Draken and his renewed empire begins its vengeance on the ancestor's descendants. However, one of the descendants, Lee, flees to Angrel Grove prompting the empire to follow him.
  2. Enter the Samurai (2)
    Seeking refuge in Angel Grove, Lee has to find a familiar face, Adam Park, in helping him learn the arts of the Samurai. However, his reluctant trust issues with his cousin forces Lee to battle unprepared against one the empire's monsters, Dualface until he is helped by others, Mason, Valerie, Chris, and Jasmine. Adam makes a decision to make them into Power Rangers.
  3. In the Name of the Warrior
    As they begin their lessons of the samurai, Lee and Chris are not to convince. Not until Draken sends Wind Weasel to stop them and take over the city. Seeing them not able to combine their collective power, it will be harder for them to summon their megazord.
  4. Golem Game
    Chris has a rocky appointment when one of Lewis' clients wants him to make a priceless picture. Seeing no inspiration, Namdek, gets inspire and sends Bouldnok to use ability to send Angel Grove underground. The rangers must find a way to stop it after it continues to get away underneath, but Chris might have a alternate plan into stopping it.
  5. Folly Me Once
    Mason meets a young kid who is sad that his grandfather just died recently and wants to see him, but Tigror tricks the boy into believing his grandfather is coming back. Mason must find a way to convince the kid that his grandfather is not coming back.
  6. The Beetle Whisperer
    When Draken sends the Specter monster into making citizens of Angel Grove feel despair, the rangers tries to stop it, but since it is immune to physical attacks Adam sends Lee on a mission to find a power disk that can bring a much needed arsenal into their collective.
  7. Call to Harm
    Jasmine decides to help an old friend she had promised before she was a power ranger. However, when this friend is gone Jasmine tries to find her. Meanwhile, the others must stop Masterminder, but the monster's ability to hurt others emotionally and making inflict pain on them physically will make a hard task to do.
  8. Tree’s A Crowd
    The rangers go on a mission to stop Leafhead. However, Leafhead pulls one on the rangers as it uses its ability to poison the team. As the others are infected, Mason tries to find a lost ancient animal by fishing it.
  9. Siren Song
    Valerie gets into trouble and her father is probably the only one to stop him, but her father decides not to help. Realizing this is a major problem, Adam and the others must try a way to convince Mr. Bailey into helping his daughter while they fend off against Ziras and a mysterious warrior known only as Greckin.
  10. Control from Within
    As the team try to search for a new zord, the rangers crosses path with the Puppet Master. They soon find out it is in control of the new zord, the Tiger Oni. As they try to find a way to stop it, Puppet Master places a spell on Chris, but Mason gets in the way to save him instead Mason is put under the Puppet Master's spell to be his new puppet. Now with the Tiger Oni and the Blue Ranger under the Puppet Master's control, the others must a find way to save both without defeating them both.
  11. Catastrophe in the Air
    Adam lets the team know about a new combination with the three new zords and as he tasks Lee, Mason, and Valerie with the new power disks, Chris gets upset believing he can control one of the new zords. When Aquatiz attacks Angel Grove by making citizens delusional, the rangers must stop but when Chris gets in the way with his notion of controlling one of the new zords, the monster gets away. Now the others including Adam is furious because of Chris's self-purpose. Seeing no way out, Chris tries to see what is going on with him before another mistake like that happens again.
  12. A Golden Opportunity (1)
    Draken sees his chance to face off against the rangers personally, and when they get defeated Draken uses a dark chant that sends the rangers into a parallel world where evil domains and Angel Grove is turned into the foundation of darkness. Seeing no chance to escape, the rangers must find another way before they are trapped forever. Meanwhile, as the rangers are in a different world, and Draken and his forces begin their crusade of darkness through Angel Grove, Adam sees a unbelievable chance to stop the empire and save the rangers, but at the cost of his own life.
  13. A Golden Opportunity (2)
    As the rangers are still trapped in the parallel world and the empire beginning its crusade through the city, Adam goes on a personal journey to face some unresolved feelings and fears before he has a lasting chance to save the rangers while it all leads him to the path of the Golden Ranger. Meanwhile, Draken sends more warriors to wreak havoc in the city; and the rangers fight for their lives when they encounter evil versions of themselves.

This is only the first thirteen of forty fics that are going to correspond to the fanfic. And all of this is based on the Shienkenger sentai series—the potential 2010 season of the Power Rangers.

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To be honest I don't think anyone else is reading it. I might just PM you a detailed rundown of the ending.
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To be honest I don't think anyone else is reading it. I might just PM you a detailed rundown of the ending.
Oh i'm reading, just waiting, and tryin to keep on top of work lol. You Shinkenger adaptation does sound rather good, so i may start reading it, depending if your writing style changes a little, i find it hard to follow with MMPR:TM at times cuz of the change in tense and how it seems to be a slightly more worded screen play.
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In the 12th century, the famous shaolin box-master Bai Yu Feng extended the shaolin art on an inimitable way. By adopting and imitating the techniques and movements of five animal styles.

The animals are…









The night was already upon the city and the Station of the new NBCA channel had already calmed down. Except for the two guards that were patrolling across the area in front of the building. Each of them carried a large flashlight on their shoulder having a special eye on the bushes and corners where unpleasant guest could sneak up.

Suddenly, one of the security guards shook up and held his light directly up to a tree right in front of him. With a short signal, he signed to his comrade to give him some back-up while he stepped closer to the large plant.

“Excuse me!” Somebody said out of the sudden as a green figure landed right behind him. Before the guard could react, he received two blows to the groin and a kick to the head.

His team mate came right to him to aid...
“Oh no you don’t!” Seconds later, the second guard faced a man in red armour blocking his way. And exactly in the moment as the guard wanted to call for help, the armoured guy gave him a head-but sending him to sleep.

“Why do you two always have to be so rude?” Another guy in a black armour called at the two who carried the two unconscious men away.

“How do you think should knock this guys out? Vulcan death grip?” The one in green whispered back.

“No... but be a little more gentle. After all we’re the good guys!”

The three waited for the others to join them. And so the Rangers were now complete. They all gathered a few feet away from the entrance to get into a circle with one knee on the ground.

“Alright... let’s split up! Dan, Schick and Katrin, ya’ three go inside and try to get to the main control, checkin’ out what caused CT and so many other people to become that aggressive. CT, Anja and Me will climb on the outside to the roof to disconnect the signal of the Station to the satellites.” Chris explained.

“Alright, BRAKE!” They all clapped their hands and separated.

With smooth sounds, the blue, pink and green Rangers walked into the building, always trying to avoid any contact with surveillance cameras. Since Dan already had been inside the station, he led the way followed by Alex and Katrin.

Soon they reached a control room were a plan of the complete complex was placed so they could locate the main control. “If I’m not completely mistaken, the main control is in the 23rd stage section B2.” Alex said as he pointed at a large room on the paper.

“Well lets go!” Katrin replied watching out of the door for guards.

Meanwhile, the three other Rangers started a very risked climbing tour upwards the building. They could have teleported themselves on top, but Anja made a very good point that if this was set up by Crogon, he would noticed if something was teleporting on his roof.

“You know what this reminds me of?” CT suddenly asked quietly.

“No! Of what?” Anja replied being very careful with her saugnäpfe.

“Of our fight with the Rooster at the railway station. Do you remember that Chris?”

“Don’t ya’ ever remind of that again CT, I swear to god. I was hit by a train that day. That was a very painful fight.”

They were nearly half the way up the house as Dan and the others reached the high security door that separated the normal rooms and floors from the secret stuff. Alex looked down the floors for trouble while Dan and Katrin worked to get the door open.

“This thing is really tough; I never thought they make doors that strong!” Katrin already used a complete set of door breakers and still couldn’t make anything happen.

“A simple shot out of a blaster would be enough to make this thing open.” Dan remarked pulling his weapon out of his belt.

The pink Ranger turned around to him slowly. “Maybe, but that would run into the same direction as waking up the whole crew of people in here.” She replied frustrated. Finally she drew her sword and started to work with it on the door.

And indeed, with a quiet snap, the door swung open and the way was free for the three Rangers to enter. Inside the main control room was a large generator along with two big transformers creating a constant surring and beeping that soon had an effect on the Rangers minds.

“OK! Let’s analyse this thing as long as I can think clear!” Alex shouted and walked up to the computer desk set in the middle of the room.






Coming soon…


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Old 04-21-2009, 01:10 AM   #816
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Oh i'm reading, just waiting, and tryin to keep on top of work lol. You Shinkenger adaptation does sound rather good, so i may start reading it, depending if your writing style changes a little, i find it hard to follow with MMPR:TM at times cuz of the change in tense and how it seems to be a slightly more worded screen play.
That's kinda the one reason it's so hard to write is that I am a script writer. Traditional novel style writing has always been something that has thrown me a bit, but I like to exercise that as much as I can, but I do know how it can be hard to read.

But the crowd of people who would read a straight script is a small puddle compared to the ocean of fiction readers.
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Old 04-30-2009, 01:37 PM   #817
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Kamen Rider VFX

Back-story

In the year 2010, just outside of Los Angeles, California a mysterious material was found. Similar in properties to the transition metals, this material was dubbed V-Nanoine, because of its structure of the incredibly strong (tougher than diamond), photon emitting (when a certain amount of electric current is passed through) nano particles that it was composed of. Like the transition metals, it had the ability to form many different alloys. But unlike the transition metals it could combine with any element (by forming either covalent, ionic or metallic bonds).

Skip forward to the year 2015, V-Nanoine, has revolutionized the world (Once they found out how to replicate it). It is used to make all manner of appliances, from light fittings to car bodies. But the industry that it has revolutionized the most was the film industry. Because of its tendency to form giant 3-D metallic structures, and ability to change shape when a certain amount of voltage has passed through it, films can now be captured in full 3-D and true 3-Dimensional displays are not just a thing of the past. Unfortunately for the people of earth, this wondrous new material had to come at a price.

This so called “wonder” material just happened to have been the property of an other dimensional terrorist organization known as Erasion Party Volter. They developed V-Nanoine, to be used as armor for their leader. Being enraged by the fact that these worthless humans, even dared to have used what was deemed by them their greatest invention, they decided to do a permanent edit to earth as their name suggested and erase it from all existence.

Luckily for the people of earth, they had a savior. A young film maker unsure of himself donned the V-Drive; spoke the word “Henshin” uttered by many a hero before him and stepped up to the mantle as protector of the earth. Nobody knew why one man would take the burden of the earth upon his shoulders, but they knew that now he was the one person responsible for their very existence. He was Kamen Rider VFX.

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Old 05-04-2009, 08:07 PM   #818
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K, so, alot of people from the Image Creation Threads know of my upcoming PR fic, PR: Centurions. Well, like I did with PRMB, here's some snippets, as well as the theme song and character bios....



The Story...
The World is in turmoil. The Oceans have risen up, growing so unruly that water travel is impossible. Raging storms have permanently blackened the skies day and night. Reports have come in the world over of sightings of the deceased. The Seasons have been thrown out of whack, and people have grown distant to each other, their relations broken. Religious fanatics claim it to be the End of Days, but after an entire month of utter chaos, the next day is perfectly fine. Barely any waves roll across the seas. Clear blue skies, not a cloud in sight. Upon investigation, no cemetaries anywhere were harmed or disturbed. The common weather patterns for each season have but set back in balance, and people love each other again. Overnight, it was like the past month never happened.

Zoe Donder is a college student majoring in Mythology at the University of Athens. Originally from her home town of Lito Creek, USA, Zoe travels back for Spring Break ro find her mother was killed in one of the storm's that plagued Lito Creek. Heartbroken, she mourns her loss until a flash of light heralds a beautiful woman in flowing robes before her. The woman introduces herself as Hera, Queen Goddess of Olympus and Goddess of Marriage, Women, and Motherhood. She tells Zoe of a great war over the past month between the Gods of Olympus, the true Gods, and Kronos, Lord of the Titans, and his generals. The Gods originally banished Kronos to Tartarus, but he was freed, and in doing so, he freed his generals, challenging the Olympians for their title as Gods. The Gods were defeated, and the Titans are set to move on Olympus. With new Gods who have no compassion for the human race, The Human race is at great risk.

All hope, however, was not lost. Years ago, The Fates warned them of a great catastrophe in the future, one that would cripple even them. Fearing the worst, the seeked out humans they loved and conceived children, something that they had forbidden for centuries because of the sheer power the children had. Hera, being the only Olympian to survive the battle, is seeking out the remaining children so they can fight Kronos and keep the Titans from ruling the world. Zoe finds out she is a daughter of Zeus, God of the Sky which would explain the odd encounters with electricity she'd been having. Zoe, together with Pogue Equinas, a Hawaiian Surfer, Hayden Morton, a British Teen Punk, Demi Terrai, an Indian Florist and Nature Rights Activist, and Afton Phillipe, an Italian Star Soccer Player, they are called to ranger up and form POWER RANGERS: CENTURIONS! (Tenrai Sentai Joutenger[Divine Sentai Godranger])

Teh Rangers...
Zoe Donder, Daughter of Zeus, Centurion Yellow


Pogue Equinas, Son of Poseidon, Centurion Blue


Hayden Morton, Son of Hades, Centurion Black


Demi Terrai, Daughter of Demeter, Centurion Green


Afton Phillipe, Son of Aphrodite, Centurion Pink


Aaron Guierra, Son of Ares, Titan/Centurion Red


Teh theme song...(again, all I did was rewrite the words to another song XP)

Hey!(x14)
Let's go, Stormchaser...

First the lightning, then the thunder!
It's the Centu-
Centurions!
(x4)

Lightnin' gonna strike up the ground again,
Thunder gonna pick up the sound again.
Let's go Power Rangers: Centurions!
Save the town again, pick up the ground again!

Stormchaser can't chase the storm away,
Raindancer can't make the storm obey.
Look up, Not a cloud in the sky, today!
It's the Centu-
Centurions!

Run for shelter whenever they hear the call,
suddenly electricity starts to fall.
And you feel the flash over, through every wall,
Hands up tall but respect Olympus' Law!

Earthquake and the wind it begins to roar,
Fireworks in the air and it starts to pour!
Heatstorm and the light's go off and on,
Life goes on and on,
We go on and so!

Cloud to cloud, cloud to ground, ground to cloud, cloud to ground, ground to cloud, cloud to ground.

First the lightnin', then the Thunder!
It's the Centu-,
Centurions!

Finally(promise) is The Prologue, the epic battle betweens the Gods and the Titans!

The explosion shook the very grounds of Olympus. One of many, the blasts bombarded the domain of the Gods into submission. Bursts of energy rained down like sparks, illuminating the carnage below. The once elegant and divine walls now crumbled and smoldered from the attack. It had come so quickly that They didn’t have time to prepare. A young-looking man, thin with dark-blonde, short hair, looked up with horror stricken eyes at the night sky above him. The stars fell from the sky, tearing up the ground wherever they landed. He gazed to the West and saw one star that was not falling, but spewing forth other stars. He saw its shape and caught his breath.

The young man heard a noise that caused him to turn, narrowly missing an attack from a pale white, bony blade. He looked up into the creature’s eyes—if you could call them eyes. They were the emotionless, abyssal holes of a skull. The young man knew their name: Kokalos. Evil, sinister beings they were. They looked like normal humans, except for their skin. It was borderline transparent, a translucent, pale grey. Even more, their bones glowed a pallid white. You could see every bone in their body, but underneath the contours of an average body. Frightening and malicious.

Sto Diaolo, Kokalos!” The young man spat, and vanished in a blur. He reappeared a moment later and the Kokalos around him lay battered and destroyed. He looked to his staff—two snakes entwined its length, leading to the dual wings at its tip—and gripped it tight in victory.

“Hermes! Status Report!” A voice, rumbling and rolling through the air like Thunder, commanded. Hermes looked behind him to the encroaching thunderheads, nodding. In a flash, Hermes set to running, the wind whipping his white robes as he flew at unimaginable speeds. He weaved in and out of the approaching Kokalos horde, knocking out as many as he could.

“How is that barricade coming, Brother?” Hermes said quickly as he rushed past an older man with muscular arms, a balding scalp and flourishing beard. His left leg from the knee down was forged of Olympian Bronze.

The man cracked his knuckles before kneeling and slamming his right fist into the ground. As he did, a pillar of molten hot magma erupted before him, sending the surrounding Kokalos into a frenzy. He stood back up once more, extending his arms outward at his sides forcefully. With that motion, the pillar followed his command, stretching around Olympus in an impenetrable wall of searing lava. “Aye, it’s coming, Hermes.” He called after Hermes with a deeper voice.

He watched as the Kokalos tried to penetrate his wall and burned to cinders. He felt a small gush a wind and noticed some rose petals flowing from behind him into the lava, where they burst into flames. “Hephaestus!” A sweet, sultry female voice spoke from behind. Hephaestus looked back just as a dainty, pure hand rested on his left shoulder. He saw the literal image of beauty, curvaceous with wavy blonde shoulder-length hair. Her garments, a mixture of white and pink, fell fluidly around her. She stepped forward, her hand still on Hephaestus’ shoulder. “My husband, have we made any progress?” Her voice was sincere and hopeful, and her expression seemed almost helpless.

She heard a Kokalos behind her and with great speed and finesse, She spun around. A fan unfurled itself in her hand in the shape of a scallop, and with one swift slash, the attacking Kokalos fell. She turned back to Hephaestus, vanishing her fan and blowing a hair from her face. Hephaestus still held the wall; his concentration was key.

Hephaestus chuckled. “Aphrodite, you have never once called me Husband.” He looked back at the flames and his expression darkened. “Why do you start now?” He clenched his jaw in frustration.

Aphrodite put a hand to his face, the contrast extraordinary. Her hand was vibrant and white against his smoke-darkened skin. Her eyes—subtle, pink eyes—gazed into his. “Because I realize that we stand on the edge of Oblivion.” She stood on her toes and locked her lips with his, no longer ashamed of her husband’s disability. She stepped back, looking once more to Hephaestus. “You are my husband, forevermore.”

A spark glinted in Hephaestus’ eyes, and he smirked with determination. His hands balled into fists and the flames grew higher with a newfound fuel. Aphrodite smiled and turned o the surrounding Kokalos. She extended her hand and pointed to one. “You.” A string of pink light shot into the Kokalos. “Have fun.” She made a dismissive motion and the Kokalos turned to his comrades, beginning to rip them apart. Aphrodite did this to various other Kokalos, controlling them to attack each other.

Hephaestus watched his wife work, marveling at her beauty. He turned back to wall just as he felt it falter. Hephaestus looked closer at the wall and saw a certain area darkening, in the shape of a man. Hephaestus’ eyes widened as the figure stepped forth through the lava. The figure stood taller than Hephaestus, with a body of molten earth and golden armor. His helmet formed the shape of a flying serpent and his cape blew in the wind. “Typhon!” Hephaestus forcefully whispered in shock.

Aphrodite whirled around at the sound of flesh ripping just in time to see Hephaestus fall. “Hephaestus!” She screeched, running over to her husband. As Hephaestus fell, so did the protective wall of magma, allowing a new wave of Kokalos to storm through. Hephaestus coughed up some blood and looked to Aphrodite. “I love you…” He breathed finally.

Aphrodite stood, tears flowing. “You will pay, Titan!” She began to run at Typhon, but stopped immediately in her tracks. She looked down at the blade that now protruded from her stomach. She breathed in and fell to the ground, the spear stuck upright from her back.

Typhon walked to the body, kicking it lightly. It did not move. The spear was pulled from Aphrodite, and Typhon looked up to its possessor. He wore white and red body-length armor, a warrior’s kilt, and golden shoulder armor. His helmet was enclosed with a black visor and a massive red plume jutted from it. Without remorse, the man wiped the blood from the spear’s tip. “Secure the other Gods. Kill any who fight.” Typhon ordered, his voice dark and powerful.

“I’ll do what I please.” The man countered stubbornly.

“You’ll do what Lord Kronos orders, Red!” Typhon roared, flames engulfing his fists.

Red shook his head slowly. “Cool your lava spouts, Volcanohead.” He turned and ran off, brandishing his spear.

“Kids…” Typhon grumbled, stomping off to join the fight.

A massive wave of water crashed over a band of Kokalos, drowning them instantly. From the damp ground, vines shot up, whipping the remaining monsters into submission. “We make a great team, Demeter.” Grinned a weather-beaten man with deep brown shoulder-length hair and lengthy beard in blue and white robes. His muscles bulged all over as he manipulated the sea to his will.

“Hold your seahorses, Poseidon.” An older woman said, whipping razor-sharp leaves into a throng of Kokalos. She wasn’t as thin as others, but shapely nonetheless in her green and white robes. Her golden brown hair, the color of wheat, was pulled into a bun on her head, but the stress of the fight was forcing it to unravel. “We’re a little busy at the moment.” Demeter smiled sheepishly. She raised her hand and watched as a glorious oak tree launched various Kokalos into the air.

Poseidon punched forward, sending a surge of water to take out more Kokalos. He moved closer to Demeter and leaned in close. “It’s never the wrong time for some fun.” He said, nudging Demeter in the side suggestively. He grabbed a Kokalos and flung it miles away, making it a point to show off his musculature.

Demeter commanded vines to grab the nearest Kokalos, lift them up into the air, and fling them farther than Poseidon. Poseidon stood awestruck, losing his steam rather quickly. Demeter turned and winked. “Nice try, Brother. Better luck next time.”

Poseidon, mumbling in anger, grabbed a Kokalos and crushed it in his bare hands. He continued his massacre of the Kokalos until he glanced back to Demeter to see a Kokalos coming up behind her. “Sister! Behind you!” He roared.

Demeter turned to see a Kokalos high in the air, leaped to attack. Just as it reached for her, it fell to the side, barreling into its comrades. Before Demeter, another man shimmered into existence. His pale skin rivaled the color of the Kokalos’ bones, and his short, straight hair and goatee were blacker than the darkest night. His expression was emotionless, the surrounding battle oblivious to him. “Hades, Brother!” Demeter exclaimed, rushing up to hug him. “Many thanks to you.” For once, Hades’ face changed, if only a mere shift of the eyebrow.

“You…thank me?” Hades’ voice was low and solemn, adding only a slight inflection at the end. For as long as Hades knew, Demeter never liked him for loving her daughter.

Poseidon sent out another wave just as Demeter spoke. “I apologize for my temper in the past, Brother. As you can guess,” Demeter motioned to the incoming Kokalos forces. “We cannot last much longer.”

Showing no emotion, Hades nodded in understanding, donning his Helm once more. He vanished, but Demeter saw nearby Kokalos falling from an invisible force. “I feel it, too.” Demeter heard Hades say. She went back to fighting and listened to Hades while doing so. “Every time we lose, I feel it, deep in my core. Every time a soul leaves the battlefield, I can tell.” There was a long pause before he continued, “Hephaestus and Aphrodite have already passed, more and more fleeing by the second.”

Demeter stopped, feeling a lump in her throat. She stared off in the direction she heard the voice coming from, unable to breathe. “They’re…gone!?” She spun in rage, knocking out a Kokalos. “How is that possible!?” Mixed in with her cries of anger, tears fell to the ground below.

“Their power is too great, Sister.” Hades said indifferently. He held no inflection, speaking as if he dealt with this all the time. “Our time has come.” Even through these words, Hades still fought ferociously, taking the many Kokalos by surprise.

“I refuse to believe that, Little Brother.” Poseidon said sternly, ripping into a crowd of Kokalos. He began to speak once more, but was silenced by an encroaching light. The three of them turned, blinding by the light descending towards them from above. “Hit the deck!” Poseidon roared, diving to the side. Demeter was tackled down protectively by an invisible Hades. The light hit the ground, sending chunks of shrapnel flying about in every direction. Demeter looked up from beneath Hades arm and saw before her a shining star, a star glowing with devious power. The light began to fade inward, revealing a young body in silver and navy robes. Demeter looked closer and gasped. The woman had no hair, and her right ear bore a sole gold ring. Her eyes were pure white, gleaming like the very stars that covered her dark skin like the night sky. Stars twinkled on and off across her skin. Demeter no longer felt Hades weight upon her, and she stood up. “Asteria!” She breathed. Determination struck her face, and millions of vines shot forth past her, surging for Asteria. “We will not go down so easily, witch!” She screamed, her arms extended with power.

Asteria leaped and dove, effortlessly moving for Demeter. The vines grasped at air, unable to clutch at their elusive prey. Asteria flipped and landed face-to-face with the Goddess of Nature, then shot a hand in front of her face. Demeter had no time to react. Five stars shone brightly in Asteria’s palm, white lines connecting to form an inverted star.

Poseidon watched from outside the barrage of vines as a blast of white light shone through the gaps. The vines immediately stopped, falling limply to the ground. With their defeat came the image of Demeter’s body falling to its knees, and finally forward to the ground, Asteria’s hand extended. Poseidon roared with rage, bursting forward on a current of water. “Die!” He roared, but watched as Asteria leaped and landed on his back with great speed. The last thing Poseidon heard was a flurry of mumbled words, and he felt Asteria’s cold palm press itself to his neck. A surge of pain coursed through him, and he fell to the ground, motionless.

Asteria stood, stepped off the brutish God’s body and walked forward amidst the running Kokalos. “That’s it, my babies.” She muttered, “Kill them all.” Her head suddenly jerked to the side, and her lips formed a smirk. She walked forward towards thin air, thin air that, at her approach, melted away to reveal Hades. Hades removed his helmet and held it under his arm. He looked down, his face emotionless as ever. Asteria cocked her head to the side. “Why do you not attack, God?” Her voice was far-away, yet present at the same time, as if it was being beckoned from some far off place, but she was speaking as thought it were here. “You above the rest have the power to destroy my existence, Hades, Lord of the Underworld.”

Hades looked up. He spoke without emotion, “No one can control death. No one can prevent death. But everyone can cause it. Simply because I am who I am, does not mean who I am governs me. That was your and your master’s first mistake, Titaness.”

“You are not afraid of death.” Asteria said, more of a statement than question, placing a hand to Hades’ cheek. “How very fitting.”

“By trying to control, you have been controlled.” Hades spoke as he felt his soul flee his body, wrenched out by Asteria’s witchcraft. She stepped over the body of the dead God and walked forward into the growing chaos around her, into the growing throng of Kokalos set to move on the peak of Olympus.

“It’s amazing we have learned to cooperate, Brother.” A gray-robed woman spoke, knocking some Kokalos away with her great shield. Her hair was brown, and an owl fought at her side with each strike of her sword.

A man fought beside the woman, clad in red with. The plume of his helmet shone blood red, and his spear tore through the Kokalos hordes. “Don’t sugarcoat it, Sister.” He said gruffly.

“Ares, you’re such a hard-@$$.” The woman spoke, slashing with her sword.
Ares looked to his sister, and, with angry expression, said, “Be Quiet and fight, Athena.” His spear took out many Kokalos.

Athena mockingly laughed beside her brother, caught up in the thrill of battle. For so long had she gone without such a fight. This challenge was a welcome change. Her brother, Ares, on the other hand, viewed it differently. He lived for the clang of metal and the roar of soldiers. Warfare was as vital to him as food and water. They both lived for the exact same thing, but each approached it differently.

Athena was getting used to the rhythm of this battle. After each Kokalos fell, another would take its place, one after the other. With a cry of power she slashed clean through a stray Kokalos, but what popped up in its place was anything but. The Kokalos fell, materializing into nothing but dust, as they usually do, but Athena saw a glaring red boot step into the dust, crunching it against the earth. She looked up into the visor of a helmet the likes of which she had never seen before. It was indeed a hoplite helmet, like the kind her people wore into battle, but the armor did not stop there. It flowed seamlessly all over the man’s body, a menacing mix of white and red.

Red stepped forward, gripping his spear tightly. His gait was determined, the same gait a wolf would have staring down its prey. “Who are y—?” Athena had no time to finish. Within moments, she was struck down, pinned to the ground by Red’s spear through her chest. Her eyesight faded, and she coughed blood upon the cold ground.

Red jerked his spear out of the God’s corpse, wiping the blood from its tip. Ares turned at the sound of his sister’s voice, immediately laying eyes on Red. “Who are you!?”

“Yeah,” Red said, readjusting his grip on his spear, “I get that a lot.” He broke out in a full sprint for Ares, who in turn raised his shield to block. Red’s spear clashed with Ares’ shield, and the force of the blow nearly knocked Ares down. With a roar of both anger and power, Red pushed the shield away, and swung again with his spear. Ares’ skillfully parried, but once he did, Red was at him again, sending a foot to his jaw. Ares fell back to the ground. He jerked himself back, flipping over onto his feet, and in doing so, dodging a spear aimed straight into the spot his head had been not a moment before. Ares lashed out, slicing with his shield. Red had jumped back, narrowly missing the shield. Ares surged forward, brandishing his spear. Red spun, stopping Ares’ spear with his own. The two battled for power, pouring out each of their strength into their weapon.

“You fight well, Warrior!” Ares spat.

“Too well.” Ares spoke calmly, knocking Ares back. By the time Ares looked back up, Red’s fist connected with his jaw in an uppercut that sent him farther back. Red spun and lunged with his spear, and Ares dodged to the side, narrowly avoiding the blade. It was then that something occurred to the God of War.

“That lunge…” He spoke. Red struck again, but Ares struck him off with his shield. Ares finally saw Red’s moves, attacks, stance. It all correlated to his own, and Ares suddenly knew. “It’s you!” He exclaimed as Red stalked him once more. “Aar—!”

“Don’t call me by that name!” Red roared, charging Ares and sending a kick to his chest. Red landed and the two lunged and parried back and forth with their spears.

“Son, why do you strike at your father in such a way!?” Ares spoke incredulously as he parried Red’s attacks.

Red locked their weapons once more, and leaned in close. “‘Father’? I haven’t had a father in ages!” Red yelled, knocking Ares back and standing at a far enough distance. He held out his spear, pointing accusingly at the God of War. “You let Her die!” Red charged, screaming all the while, “She’s gone because of you!” Red’s spear clashed with Ares’ shield, and with all his might, he pushed Ares back through the crowd of Kokalos, slamming him against a crumbling wall.

Ares’ helmet crashed back against the wall, and he saw stars. He looked back up to see Red standing before him, his spear-arm shaking. “Warfare suits you.” Ares coughed, standing up straight against the wall.

Red’s arm stopped shaking and he gripped his spear tightly. “Like Father like Son.” Ares felt Red’s spear drive into his gut, and his eyes bulged from the pain. He couldn’t see Red’s face, only the cold, black visor of his helmet. Red drove the spear in deeper, twisting it as he did so to extract the most pain possible. As he did, Ares stared with dying disbelief into that cold, black visor. Red let go, leaving his spear to pin the dead God to the wall. Ares’ spear and shield clanged to the ground and his head slouched over, motionless.

Red’s hands balled into fists, his shoulders heaving as he caught his breath. Red looked up, cracking his neck to either side. A red glow spawned in the palm of his hand, and when he held it up to his helmet, a black and red cell phone rested in it. He flipped it open and pressed a button, holding it to his left ear. He drew in a deep breath before speaking into the receiver. “Perimeter is secure. The Twelve are gone, apart from Him. Only minor Gods left to die.” Red paused. “Move in.”

The voice that responded was otherworldly. Millions of echoes all converged into one voice, a voice that transcended time, existing outside of its laws. “Well done, Aaron. Your reward will be great.”

Red’s voice trembled as he spoke. “Thank you…Father.” Red hung up, flipping the phone shut. He turned back to Ares’ body and pulled his spear from him, allowing him to hit the ground hard. Without conscious nor remorse, Red turned and walked off, his spear resting on his shoulders. The throng of Kokalos hid him from sight.

An older man, with bleach white, shoulder length hair and long beard, stood atop Olympus in the Council Chamber, the room where the Gods met. He stepped to one of the hall’s windows, and as he held out his arm, a javelin of electricity burst into his open palm. He hurled the thunderbolt forward, battering away the Kokalos horde. He repeated this countless times, but the Kokalos were relentless. They kept coming and coming, unable to be quelled. “Blast, Hermes! Where is my status report!?” He roared, manifesting several more thunderbolts and flinging them wildly. He roared in anger as he crossed the Council Chamber, heading for the other end. He shot forth more blasts of electricity, but the Kokalos would not stop.

“Hate to break it to you, Thunderhead,” An older woman’s voice spoke from behind him, “but your little carrier pigeon’s been shot down en route.” From behind the God stepped a Goddess, slightly smaller, draped in light blue, with peacock feathers fixed in her hair and one long one clenched in her right hand.

The God turned to the Goddess awestruck, grabbing her left shoulder in one hand. “What do you mean, Hera!?”

Hera shook The God’s hand from her shoulder, lightly dragging her feather across the spot his hand had been moments before. “I mean,” Hera spoke matter-of-factly, “He’s dead. Deceased. Gone. If you haven’t noticed, Zeus, a lot of us are as of the past few minutes.” She stepped to the window, the explosions and carnage casting bright light upon her drawn face. “In fact, I believe we’re the only ones left.” She paused, a rather loud explosion taking up the space. She turned to face Zeus. “So, would you rather repopulate with me or some mortal woman?” Hera shot, laced with acid. She couldn’t really care less what Zeus thought of her at this moment. They were going to die, and she knew it. She had always been faithful to an unfaithful husband, and she had tried to love him through it all, but Zeus always made it so hard. This was her payback.

Zeus turned from Hera, his robes flowing behind him. He stood in the Council Chamber by the pool in the center, staring down at his reflection. “For our sakes, Hera, this is no time for your jealousy!”

“Oh?” Hera said, stepping closer, the heels of her sandals clicking on the once polished marble floors. “And when will it be time, Husband dear?” The sarcasm mixed with her voice shot out as though she were a gun, her lips the barrel.

Zeus let out a monstrous sigh, a sign that he did not want the conversation to continue. Zeus looked up into the starry sky above, now blocked out by the encroaching clouds of smoke. “You must seek out the God Children.” Zeus spoke, his words echoing through the hall.

Hera’s eyebrow rose. “Come again?”

Zeus turned, moving quickly for Hera. His hands enveloped her shoulders, holding her tight. “The God Children. Find them. They are the only ones who can save us.”

Hera didn’t try to escape, but looked deep into Zeus’ eyes. “I doubt a bunch of bastard offspring will deliver us from judgment, Zeus.”

Zeus snarled in rage and lifted Hera’s face to his, holding her in place with his index finger under her chin. “Hera, you must put your petty jealousies aside! We’re dying, here!” It was then that Hera saw a change in Zeus’ eyes. Her cold expression melted away, and with the same love and affection she at first held for her husband, she gazed into his eyes. “I know you don’t realize this, but I love you, and I always have. It may have ebbed and flowed at times, but it was always there, somewhere.” Zeus paused. “I’m going to die here. I’ve accepted that. You will live on, I’ll make sure of it. Flee here as fast as you can. Take Olympus with you. They will have already gained their powers. Seek them out and help them fight. I trust you.” Zeus pulled Hera close and kissed her passionately, and immediately, Hera knew. She needed to do this. She knew of The God Children that Zeus spoke of. They were Demigods, born of an Olympian and a Mortal. They, as far as they knew, grew up human, and none of them knew of their Divine Heritage. Now, though, as their parents died, the powers that dwelled in the Gods would pass on to the children. They needed tutelage, a teacher, a mentor. Hera’s duty was to be that mentor.

Zeus pulled away from Hera. She spoke breathlessly, “I will, Zeus. I’m so sorry for everything!” She buried her head in his chest, tears flowing uncontrollably. Zeus stroked her hair, and she looked back up.

“Just go. If you perished, my death would be meaningless.” Zeus spoke. Hera nodded. They both looked to the entrance corridor, hearing footsteps. Zeus looked back to Hera, hugging her tightly quickly before pushing her away. “Hurry, Hera! Please!” Hera nodded through the tears in her eyes, and she ran across the hall. The footsteps were coming closer, and she had no time to run anywhere else. She dashed behind one of the pillars, standing on the ledge behind it. She crouched and listened.

Zeus turned to the footsteps, and from the darkness of the entrance corridor stepped a boot formed of hardened lava. Typhon stepped forth from the darkness, looking to Zeus and narrowing his eyes. He walked around the hall to the left of the entrance, not once taking his eyes off Zeus. He stopped in front of a pillar, merely a few down from Hera. Zeus heard the movement of rocks and more footsteps, and he looked behind him, opposite the entrance, to see a crimson-clad warrior, Red, stepping up from the ledge outside. A flash to Zeus’ right caused him to turn, and Asteria stood with arms crossed. In all three directions, Zeus was trapped.

Suddenly, Zeus felt cold. It wasn’t the average cold that occurred when the temperature dropped. It was the kind of cold that had no prescribed temperature. It was the kind that began in the pit of your stomach, then crawled slowly up your spine, making sure to extract every bit of fear imaginable from your quivering body. Zeus knew what was coming, and he didn’t like it. He felt his movements slow. It took every ounce of his strength to move his hand an inch, as though all his years were accumulating and pressing down on him at once.

From the darkness before him stepped a gray sandal. Zeus then saw dark gray robes, with lighter gray accents, flowing without reason. The figure had cold, dead skin, skin devoid of age or life. It simply was, and was not affected by the forces of time. His face was covered by a tattered and worn black hood, one that flowed over his right arm. The shadows of the hood hid his face from view. He held an enormous scythe in his left hand. The figure stepped forward, closer to Zeus. With each step, Zeus felt the cold grow and the pressure worsen. The figure spoke with a voice outside of time, one formed from infinite echoes converged into one. “Hello…Son.”
“Kronos.” Zeus managed, hindered by the pressure forced upon him.
“You knew this day would come, Zeus.” Kronos spoke, walking casually around the hall, admiring it in the same manner a homeowner would view a new property on the market. “And yet, you tried to stop its coming. By locking me away in Tartarus along with my Titan Generals, you only prolonged your end.” Kronos paused, his breathing heard throughout the hall. “Now, look what that has brought you.” Kronos turned, walking to Zeus. The pressure was unbearable now, and Zeus began to crumble beneath Kronos’ power. “Your brothers and sisters are all dead, now. And your throne,” Kronos said, looking to the Golden Throne belonging to the King of Olympus, “will belong to me.” Kronos looked back to Zeus, and then extended his hand over him. Zeus immediately fell to his knees, unable to resist time’s force pressing against him.

“No!” Hera whispered, hidden behind her pillar. She had seen the whole thing. Quickly, she looked to each of the three generals. None of them heard her, the carnage below must’ve blocked it out. Hera too felt the cold power radiating from Kronos. She knew of his power. Kronos was the Lord of Time and leader of the Titans. He could bend the very force of time to his advantage, ripping it from its normal flow to do his dirty work.

Kronos looked up from Zeus’ helpless form. He began walking towards the throne, his smile growing into a cold smirk. “At last…it will be as it once was.” Kronos’ hood hid his eyes from view, but only his eyes. No one ever saw his face, only his nose and mouth. Even that was enough to send the greatest beings cowering in fear. Hera saw Kronos move. She knew if he sat in Zeus’ throne, all would be lost. With one last look, she saw Zeus turn his eyes toward her. She could see the pain he felt from Kronos’ power, as well as his desire for her to live. She nodded, and closed her eyes. A shining blue light erupted from a pillar not too far from Typhon. It shot up like a meteor, soaring off into the distance.

All three generals were taken by surprise as it exploded, but Kronos merely turned. He looked back to the throne. He was inches from it. A few more steps and he would rule. Kronos stepped forward, but the ground beneath him shook. “What…?” Before he or the generals could react, a blinding light engulfed the entire Council Chamber. It only lasted a moment, and when it died, the Council Chamber was no longer there. Where it once stood, a crater filled the top of Mount Olympus. The three generals, slowly got up, disoriented from the blast. Kronos looked around, but saw no throne. Without the throne, he could not conquer Olympus. If Olympus was not completely there, he could not fully rule it. He gritted his teeth, a groan of anger rising in his throat. He turned, summoning his generals to his side. “There is still one Olympian alive. Burn the remains of Olympus. Head back to Mount Othrys. I trust you know what will happen if you don’t find them?” All three generals nodded. They all vanished their own way, leaving Kronos in the crater.

“Nice try, Father.” Zeus strained. Kronos turned to his son, grasping his scythe tightly. “You’ll never defeat us now.” He suddenly felt Kronos’ power explode on him, and he lurched forward. He was only able to look up just in time to see Kronos’ scythe descend.

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Hope ya like! (n_~)b the story'll begin with the first six chapters as being the ranger's backstories, then the story really begins! Sorry if it's too long!
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Old 05-09-2009, 12:33 PM   #819
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Interview with Shaun McCall about the Power Rangers Resurrection fan fiction series

This is a interview my friend did with me after answering questions from people in my group about my fan fiction. She did it partially for her journalism class. She gave me a copy.

Yasmin: So everyone, I'm here with writer Shaun McCall on the new Power Rangers Resurrection fan fiction series, did I get that right?

Shaun: Yes. Power Rangers Resurrection is the name.

Yasmin: Alright well can you tell me a little bit about the series?

Shaun: Well Power Rangers Resurrection is a 10 to 12 episode series based around the life of Oliver Scott who is the son of Jason Lee Scott the original Red Ranger. Oliver is a college student who is really into treasure hunting and those type things. When he was 10 his father gave him a treasure map that Oliver thought was just a last minute gift idea his father had. After they discuss how Oliver never used it, he decides to prove his father wrong. So when he goes and searches for the treasure he finds three power coins...

Yasmin: I don't mean to interrupt you but can you tell us which coins he finds?

Shaun: The Dragon, The Pterodactyl, and Tyrannosaurus coin. Yeah so he finds the coins and believes his father planted the coins there on purpose. His father is you know, shocked as well. So he sits Oliver down and tells him the story of the Power Rangers and their history. Jason finds that the power within the coins are dormant so with the advancement of technology he restores them to full power.

Yasmin: Oh that sounds cool. I haven't finished reading the first episode yet but obviously there has to be a main villain. Can you tell me a little about him.

Shaun: Well yes of course there's a villain. I don't want to go to deep into him at the moment because I don't want to spoil the first episode. I will say this though: Jason and Oliver have made their lives more difficult restoring the power to the coins.

Yasmin: I'm sure that a lot of people who will be reading your series will be fans of the original Mighty Morphin Power Rangers like myself. What have you done to make sure you please them?

Shaun: (Laughs) Well it's funny you ask that because writing this series made me watch tons of episodes of Power Rangers, not that I'm complaining or anything, but yeah it made me watch all those episodes so I could make as little inconsistencies as possible. I know a lot of people complain when a fanfiction has inconsistencies so I did everything possible to create as little as I could. Also, I know people don't like waiting months for the next episode of a series so I made sure I wrote 5 episodes at least before I posted any.

Yasmin: Well it sounds like you put alot of effort into this.

Shaun: Tons.

Yasmin: Well from what you told me before the interview, you had at least 4 or 5 characters mentioned in the debut episode. Do you live through any of the characters?

Shaun: (Laughs) I actually got asked that a few hours ago in the game room. To answer your question though uh I'd say I put alot of myself into the character of Oliver. More or less, because if I film a series based on this series I'll play him.

Yasmin: Cool. If you had an all celebrity cast for this series for the characters in the debut episode who would you pick for for the cast?

Shaun: Wow well let me think, I think for the character of Oliver I'd go with Justin Chatwin from DragonBall Evolution. I know the movie got bad press but I thought he did a good job acting. You can't blame him for the movie, he just did his job. Obviously for Jason's part I'd choose Austin St. John the original actor. I can't really think of who I'd choose for the other characters at the moment.

Yasmin: You talked earlier about Oliver finding three Power Coins, who are the three rangers going to be?

Shaun: (laughs) You'll have to find out yourself. I will say that after reading the first episode you will know who one of the Rangers will be and it won't be Jason.

Yasmin: Now let's move out of the fanfiction and focus on you personally, has writing this fan fiction caused anyone to change their opinion on you or think of you negatively?

Shaun: Well yes and no. Obviously I knew going in that telling my friends I was going to write a Power Rangers Fanfiction that they were going to joke about it or tease me from time to time but I think my willingness to admit to being a big fan of the original Power Rangers and not let their comments get to me has shown them my sense of confidence. They'll help me with ideas when I'm stuck and etc but no I haven't been shunned. All I have to say is read the stories and not judge the type of person I am based on the name Power Rangers. My series has mature storylines and more realistic dialogue. There are episodes where the characters cuss and there are some where they don't cuss at all. I think those who read the entire series will be pleased.

Yasmin: Well I appreciate your time and participation for my assignment. In closing describe Power Rangers Resurrection in less than ten words.

Shaun: Mature, awesome, consistency , All questions will be answered throughout the series storyline wise, homage, hot, spicy, amazing, cool, steamy.

Yasmin: (Laughs) I think that was about 14 words but I'll let you pass.

Shaun: Make sure to check out Rangerboard.com and search for Power Rangers Resurrection!
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