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Old 03-20-2005, 12:57 PM   #1
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What It Takes to Get the Girl

Last year, I wrote a story that envolved characters from PR , well their names and there was drama, romance (alot of it), humor, and more. I got a 100 on the story that was over 20 pages. Anyays, I tried searching for it for over a year and I just found it. I'm retyping it back up and I'm changing very few of it, like cussing. There is alot of NS and DT characters in it, since it was last year and DT was starting up. So, it's just a one timer so, hope you like it!


It was a warm day in Heaven’s Halo, California, when Dustin Brooks

woke up. It was the first day of his junior year. He slides off his bed, staring

up at 5 feet and 11 inches. He walks to his bathroom, but trips on his sheets

of his bed. While he stands in front of his mirror, he notices his looks. He

observed his messy black hair falling to the bottom of his neck. As he

studies his looks, his brown eyes stop to notice a pimple on the tip of his

nose.

“Why me,” he groans. He flips open his cabinet mirror and takes

out concealer for his pimple. After two minutes, he goes and takes a

shower. He gets out and ties a towel around his waist. He takes a step and

trips on the rugs and falls down on his face.

“For a second time, why me,” he groans again.

Dustin stands up teary-eyed seeing his nose is bleeding. He takes

out a cotton ball and pops it in his nose. Afterwards, he takes out hair gel

and fixes his hair. Then, came deoderant. He gets to his closet and notices

his wardrobe. He turned to his chest-of-drawers and puts on boxers. Then,

came a long sleeve, red shirt. A yellow shirt came over it and he then put on

beige, loose, khaki shorts.

When he at the Kitchen table eating, his twin brothers strolled on

in. They were enrolled at the University of California. They were both eating

eggs, when the twins, Blake and Hunter told Dustin to get a move on or he

will be late for school. Dustin jumped up, grabbed his backpack and car

keys. He walked out seeing his beaten-up, dark yellow, Buick. While he was

walking to his car, he noticed a cute, brunette, with a black miniskirt and a

pink shirt on her. The wind blew and lifted up her ponytail. He was dazed

out watching her. He woke up realizing she was gone. He shook his head

and drove off to school.

He parked his car in front of his high school. He got out, grabbed

his backpack, locked his car, and walked to the front of the school.

“Welcome to Hell High, Dust’,” he told himself.

“Wait up, dude,” Dustin turned around and noticed his bed bud, Wesley

Collins.

“Well, did you hear it?” Wes excitedly said.

“What? Has Principal Randall died yet?”

“No! Kimberly Hart broke up with Tommy Oliver!” So, maybe, you’ll

have enough courage to ask Kim out on a date?”

“I can’t dude. I am an outsider. She’s a: cheerleader, top student,

and popular.”

“So?”

“So, I just can’t!”

They walked to the entrance door. Dustin tripped on his own feet,

but something worse happened…

“Look, Kim. I guess WALDO is head-over-heels for you!” Kim’s best

friend giggled. Her long blonde hair flying around while she snickered.

“How did she know my real name,” he said to the grass.

Marah, her friend leaned down to Dustin and waved his journal in his

face. Dustin could not believe it. He had lost his journal, and all of summer,

this preppy cheerleader had it all along!

Marah opened it and read aloud:

Dear Journal,

I was in English class, and I saw Kimberly in the corner of my eyes.

Her long, brown hair was in pigtails and she was so gorgeous!


Marah stopped and closed his journal. She gave it to Kim, who

opened it and read another day…

In Mrs. Hammond’s literature class, Kim answered all of her

questions with ease. She flawlessly was wrong, and even straight A student

Jason Scott could not keep up with Kim’s rightness.

“Ring”

Kim threw the book at Dustin.

“This is a lot worse than the finale of Angel,” Dustin told himself.

Meanwhile. Dustin was trying to pay attention to Mr. Ethan James,

his English teacher, but just could not. Wes leaned to the left and handed

Dustin a note.

“Sorry, bro”

Dustin took it and wrote down a message, and back and forth they

went.


“That’s alright dude”

“So you still like her or not?”

“I don’t know anymore.”

“Yes or no?”

“…..Yes!”

“Mr. Brooks!” Mr. James yelled out. “Hand me that note!” Dustin got up.

He walked to Mr. James, but got tripped by Kim. She giggled and whispered

something to Marah, but Dustin could not translate it.

“Let’s see her. Ha! It’s a note! Mr. James opened it and read

aloud. “Looks like Mr. Brooks loves Ms. Kimberly Ann Hart! Everyone started

to laugh as Dustin became embarrassed. He just ran right to the principal’s

office.

He opened her door, walked in, and closed it behind him.

“Mrs. Randall, I need help!”

“We all do, Mr. Brooks, and please sit down,” As he sat down, he missed the

chair and fell straight down on his butt.

“Klutz!”

“I know. Well, to put it shortly; Mr. James read my note to the

whole class and now everyone knows that I like Kimberly Hart!”

“And you want her to like you back, right?” She put a slight smirk

upon her face.

“Whatcha have in mind? Do you want me to turn into Superman

and save damsels-in-distresses or something?”

“That would be easy, but this would be a lot more logical. I want

you to try out all of the sports at our school.”

“What the fuck?”

“Please, Mr. Brooks, what your language. Now get out!” She

calmed down and then finished saying, “Football practice starts at 4:00 after

school on the field.”

He knew this would not turn out good at all.


Please, tell me, honestly, what you think. And remember, the writing style was from last year, so it may be lame. But, I did change a little of it.
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Old 03-20-2005, 10:14 PM   #2
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So no one is going to comment on it?
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Old 03-21-2005, 02:21 AM   #3
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