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Hydrax
01-13-2007, 12:04 AM
This is my Own Power Rangers story i hope u like the story, i have other chapters so tell me if you like it or not and i will post the others.

Power Ranger: Hydro Knights

Episode 1: Atlantis Rising

Thousands of years ago on Earth, a great and advanced city lived under the sea. They were more advanced than even modern day civilizations and could breathe under water. The Cities of Atlantis were protected by the army and the seven Atlantic warriors. These warriors had the powers of the sea which they commanded with there oceanic sword.

The civilization's army started a rebellion against the monarchy of Atlantis, starting a year long battle. The seven Atlantic warriors were able to defeat the army, but at great cost the city was weakened beyond repair. The armies were banished from the great city never to return. A beast of the ocean came not soon after; this beast was known as Octana a great octopus.

Many of the Atlantean’s were able to flee to the surface world and their heirs still live amongst us today. The Brave Atlantic warrior fought till the end to try and stop Octana but failed. The warriors were destroyed and there swords left floating in the dark waters. The once Prince was sent by the King to hide the swords away from the reach of The Atlantic army if they ever returned. To this very day the swords have still stayed hidden until now……

The motor boat saws toward the peer, Jazz stand tall at the wheel. The boat pulls up, three people jump of the boat and head toward the end.

“Jazz you totally killed that wave out there” stated Bait pulling the water out of his long blonde hair.

“I know man” said Jazz

Bell moved in front of the boys and stopped them.

“We have something more important to do so get your heads of surfing, ok”

“Yes, Bell” replied the boys in a sad voice

“And my wave was better” stated Bell

“Your dead” said Jazz with a smile on his face.

Bell started running to the end as Jazz chased her.

“Wait up” yelled Bait running after them

The three ran up the docks and Jazz crashed straight into some oncoming army men. Both the soldier and Jazz crashed down to the hard ground.

“You ok Jaz…. Kyle that you” asked Bell

“Bell I see you’re making a living” said Kyle in a sarcastic tone

“Just cause you had to join the military doesn’t mean I had to” stated Bell she helped Jazz up

“Is this what dad would have wanted for you, hanging around the beach all day and hanging around with these two wave head” stated Kyle

“Later, sis” said Kyle as he moved off after his felo soldiers

“Wait Kyle, we found something, something big” blurted Bell

“Bell no” whispered Bait

“Can we trust him” asked Jazz

“We found a new island that isn’t on any map in the world if you that doing something with my life” stated Bell with pride

“What you found an island, what next dragons are real, don’t waste my time” Kyle smirked as he walked off.

Deep out in the ocean, another island starts to rise from the sea. The volcano erupts, launching out hundreds of magma out onto the beach like soil.

“Master, is it time to get revenge on the Atlantean’s” said Crosshook raising his iron hook hand up to the volcano.

“The Time for our return is now but with Atlantis destroyed we have to find a new paradise to rule” said Suuperus.

“We have the perfect place set up Barrack Beach, Master” stated Crosshook.

“Mother Ocean has blessed us and now we have the power to strike” Suuperus yelled “For one civilization to rise, one must fall. Barrack beach will sink to the ocean floor and the new Atlantis will be mine and mine alone”.

“What about the warriors, could they stop us” asked Crosshook.

“No, I have already set our plans in motion to recover the swords.

Jazz and the others reach the bait shop.

“How life Bill” asked Bait

“Should you be at the beach fishing with your self bait” replied Bill the shop owner

“My name is Mat, bait just a nickname right guys” asked Bait

“Nope, your nickname is Mat” Jazz stated as he and bell laugh

“Ha Ha not funny” stated Bait

An old man approached the three.

“Hello I am Grant can you show me the island” asked Grant in an English acescent.

“Island what island we don’t know any island” said Bait acting confused

“I overheard you before. I am an archaeologist, please I will give you full credit for the found” pleased Grant

“Ok, but I want a statue of me in the museum” Jazz joked

“Me too” said Bait

“Let’s go” stated Bell.

The boat soared across the ocean toward the island in the distance. The smile on Grant’s face never drop the whole way.

“This is it Grant” Jazz said as the boat came to at a small island with a volcano.

The Four jump off the boat and headed into the bushes.

“Have you been over the island” asked Grant

“Not yet” said Bait

Bait run ahead of the group toward a grey looking object.

“I think a found something” yelled Bait to the others far behind

The other came toward Bait and saw…

“It a door” said Bait like he had found millions of gold

“A door to what” asked Bell

“Open it” said Jazz

“Yes open it” stated Grant like he new what was inside.

Bait opened the door and around the door a temple appeared. It was as high as the volcano.

“I don’t know about you grant but I am going in” stated Bait heading in.

“Wait up” yelled Jazz and Bell together.

The three walked in and soar three swords placed in a large rock.

“What are these” said Bell

“I want one” said Bait as he went to pull one out.

“No, bait” Bell yelled at him

The sword slipped out into his hand like butter.

“I will thank you for not touching my swords” said Grant

Grants body blasted off him like glass revealing a frog looking creature will a mutated body.

“Now give me the swords” He said in a warped voice.

To Be Continued……………………………………

Hydrax
01-13-2007, 05:15 PM
Power Ranger: Hydro Knights

Episode 2: Finders Keepers

“Now give me the swords” stated the frog like creature that used to be Grant

Jazz and Bell moved in front of Bait and covered him from all angles

“What the hell are you?” asked Jazz

“The names Fromania and you can step out of my way and give me the sword or be destroyed" he said

“Are these sword really worth our life’s” asked Bait

The ground shook powerfully, pieces from the roof started drop right near the three's feet. A statue of a man in the temple began to crack reveal pieces of skin under it.

“Run” yelled Bait as he bolted out the door.

The three ran as fast as they could through the bushes, behind then Fromania was leaping like a frog across the ground faster than they could run.

“Theres the boat, hurry up” stated Jazz as their boat came into site.

A green creature leaped in front of the boat before they could get on. He leaped at them punching Jazz into a tree.

“Last time, the sword” said Fromania in his usual warped voice.

“That’s a bad idea” said a man across the beach not one of the three.

“What, who’s that” asked Bait

“Here take these” said the man as he throws the other two swords to Jazz and Bell.

“You” yelled Fromania “You’re an Atlantean”

“Yes and your going back to your sea shell” stated the man

“Not likely Atlantean, Army of the deep arise” yelled Fromania as he put his hand out in front of him.

The sand starts shouting out water which joined together creating 10 Atlanton soldiers of the deep. In their left hands they held spears and the bodies cover with rusted armour.

Their Skin looked like people who had been in the water for too long.

“You three, I am going to need your help, use the swords” said the man

“Use the swords, how?” asked Jazz with terror as the Atlantons ran towards then.

“Say power of the Ocean give me strength, then say Hydro Morph” replied The Man

The Three grabbed there swords with both hand.

“Me first, Power of the Ocean, give me strength” said Bait as water from the sea flew into his sword “Hydro Morph”.

Green Armour flew up from the ground and combined with Bait. The Armour had a black helmet with green squares on it and a green armour plate with a black v across it.

“Green Hydro Ranger ready” said Bait “This is so cool”

Bait flipped into the pack of soldiers and started swing his sword around slashing the army.

“Let’s do this thang” said Jazz

“Power of the Ocean, give me strength” said Jazz and bell at the same time “Hydro morph”.

Purple and Red armour flew up from the ground and combines with them.

“Red Hydro Rangers Ready” yelled Jazz with pride.

“Purple Hydro Ranger powered up” said Bell spinning her sword

“Lets give bait a hand” stated Jazz as he and bell ran into the pack.

The man leaped into the pack, pulling two Atlantons to the ground. The Atlantons turned back into water. The Ranger stood tall, but the battle wasn’t over yet.

“Remember me Rangers, I gave you the easy way, now it time for the hard way” stated Fromania.

Fromania held out his hand and launched a green beam straight into Jazz’s chest. Jazz fell to the ground and the others crowded around him.

“Jazz you ok man” asked Bait but no reply only mutters and half words.

“Who’s next” asked Fromania.

“That wound be me, your going down” yelled Bait running towards Fromania in rage.

Fromania shot beams out of his arm but they all missed, Bait held up his sword ready to strike.

“Ocean strike” yelled Bait.

Water flew into his sword making it glow blue. He slashed the sword across Fromania chest making Fromania explode.

“Hydro Down” said Bait as his armour broke off like a smashed mirror.

“Hydro Down” said The Other two breaking out there armour.

“My name is Ericon prince of Atlantis” stated The man

“Atlantis, you mean under the sea right man” said Jazz.

“You may not believe me but I can show you follow please” said Ericon leading them into the bushes.

“I say we just leave the swords and go” whispered Jazz

“I am going with Ericon” said Bait as he ran after Ericon through the bushes

“Come on lets go get him” said Bell in a disappointed voice.

The four entered the temple, Ericon held up his hand and light shined out of the walls.

“Here in this wall is the History of our ocean city” stated Ericon “They are all in memory crystal I will give you to see the history of my home”.

A crystal from the wall flew down and shot three beams into there heads.

“I will help you make sense of these flash” said Ericon

In the threes head random images were popping up.

“Thousands of year ago Atlantis lived in peace and harmony, but the armies of the Atlantis wanted the crown for themself’s so they attacked the city. The Seven Atlantic warrior were able to defeat them but at great cost. The city was in ruins and was later destroyed” said Ericon as the flashes stopped.

“That’s a lot of info” said Bait in surprise “So where the warriors now right”.

“Yes you are” stated Ericon “But there are four other sword out there we must find before they do”.

“They, didn’t we just defeat them” asked Bell

“That was one of many creature he commands and the other will be a lot stronger” replied Ericon.

“He is who, Santa some else who you don’t think exists” said Jazz sarcastically.

“He is Suuperus, the Commander of the sea and once head of Atlantis’s armies” said Ericon “Suuperus was banished after his rebellion. Never to return but now I fear he has new plans”.

“I am in, Let take this guy down to the deeps” stated Bait

“I am in, we got the power to do something so it’s our right to do it” stated Bell

“I am in, Lets go save the city” said Jazz as they all put there swords in.

“Lets me show you something, your new mode of travel” said Ericon as he pointed to a river in the temple.

It was a vehicle covered in gold and had fins on the side. It was a boat but not a boat from there time but a futuristic vehicle.

“What is that beauty” said Jazz in amazement as the vehicle shined in the suns rays

“This is the Atlantic Rider, one of three Atlantic vehicles we will need to defeat the armies of the deep” explained Ericon

“So where are the others” asked Bait with a smile on his face at the though of other golden boats.

“They are Hidden away just like the other swords” replied Ericon “So we will need to find them”.

indigoravenranger
01-15-2007, 07:06 AM
you should continue I love the concept..great idea

GundamExia
01-15-2007, 11:52 AM
Hmmmm....

The chapters seem a little short, and a bit heavy on the dialogue.

Hydrax
01-15-2007, 04:45 PM
If you like the story go to this link were i have 8 chapters already

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3336327/1/

indigoravenranger
01-15-2007, 05:04 PM
good story man but, it was hard to make out what some of the characters were saying. Just check the spelling and you'll do fine.