The Legand of the Pirate Rangers!

[Nemises Wolf]

Long ago,in 1799 there was a mysterious power known as the "Pirate Spirit's"
which consisted of the spirit's of those pirates that have fallen.An evil power also existed in that time aswell.The evil power was known as "Tremors".
The Tremors had a battle with the warriors who protected the Pirate Spirit's.The fight raged on for centuries and is still raging on this present day,Right Here,Right Now!Somewhere on this earth.

Present Day
Year:2007
Location:England,Derby

Darren:Come on dude you can do better!
Kane:Yeh i need some good footage!
Aaron:Ok.......I'll try.

Darren:This time try to actually do a kickflip.
Aaron:Fine but don't blame me if i break my neck!

Kane:Alright let's do this! 3.......2.......

*Ground starts to shake*

All:What the heck is going on!?!?

*Suddenly*

*Darren turns into a black blob,Kane turns into a red blob & Aaron turns into a dark blue blob*

*The blobs jump into the air and disapear*

*The blobs reapear in a dark room*

*All of a sudden a bright light shines on the blobs*

*The blobs start to take human form again*

*The blobs complete transformation into Darren,Kane & Aaron*

Darren:Were the heck are we?
Aaron:I dont know.
Kane:You don't think?
Aaron:It's not possibale,is it?
Darren:No it's just a story.
Aaron:But the story say's 3 warrior's were teleported into a dark room,kind of like this one.

Darren:Now you mention it this place is familier.


*A dark hooded figure steps out of the darkness*

Kane:Who is that?

Aaron & Darren:We don't know.

Hooded figure:Welcome warriors...........


To Be Continued.

[Nemises Wolf]

Aaron: Please don't hurt us!
Hooded figure:*starts to laugh*Hurt you?Why would i do that?
Darren:Your'e not going to hurt us?
Hooded figure:No,I called you young boys here to help me.
Kane:Help you?What with?
Hooded figure: Do you know the story about the pirate spirit's and the tremors?
All:Yes.
Kane:Why?

Hooded figure:Gather round.....

*All gather round*
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CHAPTER 2

*At the underground Base of the Tremors*

King Ulthor:It seems our old friend has returned!
Batra:Yes my master..........He has also recruted 3 13 year old boys to help him.
King Ulthor:Yes.......he never could take care of himself.......However maby....
Batra:No he can't......Can he?

King Ulthor:Aargh my head!It's burning like crazy!He's..........REAWOKEN THE PIRATE SPIRITS!!!
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*We join the boys again*

Hooded figure:And that's how it happened.
Darren:Hm........Interesting.

Hooded figure:So do you accept the mission?
All:YES SIR!

Hooded figure:And you can call me Ulderon.
Darren:Ok!Ulderon!

*Ulderon opens up a treasure chest wich contains 3 coloured crystals & 3 daggers shaped like pirate cutlass swords.The swords have holes in the blades in wich the crystals fit*

Ulderon:These are your "PIRATE MORPHERS"


To Be Continued.:023:

[jpurchase875]

I don't know why no-one is giving you props for an interesting concept. I sure am.:D

[Nemises Wolf]

thanks dude,it's my 1st fic lol.I know i spelt Spirits wrong on the 2nd part.
Edit:Fixed it!

[jpurchase875]

thanks dude,it's my 1st fic lol.I know i spelt Spirits wrong on the 2nd part.
Edit:Fixed it!

Ur Welcome!

See: I can't spell either. If you have time go take a look at my fic 'Spirit Strike' (I'm gonna' get grilled for that).

[Hydrax]

This story was pretty good, are u planning to make the rest.

Can u tell me what colours there going to be?

This may be wrong but my first guess is that Ulderon and Ulthor are related.

[Nemises Wolf]

you will have to wait and see*Evil Smirk*.

[Nemises Wolf]

Continued......

Aaron:Wow!
Darren:I knew Power Rangers were real!

*Kane look's confused*

Kane:But why us?
Ulderon:Because your'e aincent Grandfathers were....................The 1st Pirate warriors!

All:They were!?
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*Tremor Base*

King Ulthor:So those pesky little childeren are related to those bastards who locked me away down this fucking hole!
Batra:They are?

King Ulthor:Luckily there is a crack in the ceiling of the hole so my ooze warriors can slide through!
Batra: ooze warriors?

King Ulthor:yes,they were a gift from my old friend "Ivan Ooze".
Batra:wasn't he the one who was destroyed by the..........

King Ulthor:Yes,the Mighty Morphin Power Rangers!

*flashback to when Ivan Ooze was destroyed by that comet*
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*back with the new ranger's*

Ulderon:But i have bad news....
All:What is it?
Ulderon:The leader of the tremors King Ulthor is...............MY BROTHER!




All:HE IS!?!?
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King Ulthor:Send My Warriors!!!!!
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Ulderon:Oh no!Ulthor has sent his warriors to attack your'e school!
Darren:What should we do?
Ulderon:Use them....
Kane:How?
Ulderon:when the time is right the crystals will light up,when they do,take them and put them into the swords and say "Cutlass Pirate Power!"

All: ok!
Ulderon:Squeeze the crystals to teleport to the location of the attack!

All:Let's do this!
*they all squeeze the crystals*
*as they turn into blobs like before*
*they arrive at the location fully transformed*

Kane:Their they are!
All:Cutlass Pirate Power!

*same morphing sequence as spd but with light emerging from the crystal's in their cutlass's*

Darren:Black Pirate Power!
Kane:Red Pirate Power!
Aaron:Blue Pirate Power!

Darren:Woo Hoo!Im the black ranger!Black is my fave colour!
Kane:Yay im red!
Aaron:Blue?Blue?Nooooooo!I wanted to be the black ranger!

Darren:You will have to deal with it!But right now we will have to deal with those evil bastards!

All:CHARGE!

*They run of into battle*

To Be Continued!

[Windcatpersonthing]

Exceedingly low-quality fanfic. Rife with spelling mistakes, horrid execution of script format, plot that really really seems like you're making it up as you go along, and mediocre dialogue. Seriously consider, y'know, revising this before actually continuing.. either that, or start over again.

[Nemises Wolf]

well that is just youre opinion as for me i don't give a shit about what you think!
:)

[Cameron Samurai]

You should "give a shit", there's no excuse for this as an author of any fiction to react to criticism this negativley. The guy was being honest with how clumsy that prowse is, and you gave him heat for it.

This is what kills PR fanfiction for the most part, there's the classics like "New Interpretation" and "SPD Year Two/Three", but that's only because they trace familiar ground, and they actually force people to review them constructivley because of there length and their detail. Ones like these...simply don't, as evident by again, that fabled FF cliche of saying "good job" blindly with no reason attached to it.

Low quality, bad dialouge, and an ackward script format that is too short even for standard "fanfiction episodes", try again.

[Nemises Wolf]

Fuck That!i Am Not Rewriting This!why Don't You Just Ask A Mod To Close This Then!if You Think This Is A Piece Of Shit Then Don't Fucking Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[GundamExia]

I'm going to be blunt here. If you're going to disrespect my opinion like you did with previous ones, you might as well just quit because no one will respect your work. You have to be able to take both good and bad criticism.

You gave us no real plot. We have no clue as to the enemy's motivation. It's okay for them to have secrets, but we really need something to tide us over until the secrets come out.

Typically the enemies and the Rangers have some sort of deeper ties to the theme of the series. What are they after? What are they trying to accomplish?

Not to mention the grammar and spelling are terrible. Hell, you didn't even correctly spell the title. If you want to butcher grammar and spelling in other parts of Rangerboard, fine. The Fan Fic forum is the one place where a person should strive to use both properly.

The writing style is weak. It's one thing to do a full script style, but it's completely another thing when you do like you did and write in it without giving ANY details. We don't know what the environments are like, what the characters look like, or what the suits look like. Not to mention you don't write nearly enough for one chapter. Think of each chapter like an episode. Your chapters are quite a bit less than five minutes in length episode-wise.

Stories are supposed to immerse the readers with details and engaging dialogue and characters who actually have distinct personalities. Your characters don't. We can't tell one from another, other than in name.

Take it from someone who actually took classes in creative writing, your style needs a lot of work. If you tried to walk into a creative writing class and hand that to a teacher, you would fail.

[Nemises Wolf]

Fine.....Fine........I'm Really Really sorry guy's,If there's anything i can do to make it up just let me know. :)

[roc da mic]

your just beginning arn't you.

[Unknown Terminator]

The biggest problem I noticed isn't spelling or grammar - it's length. It's like a 30 second Power Ranger episode. W T F. Seriously, you need to put more time into it.

[Nemises Wolf]

It's only my 1st one.

[roc da mic]

bring it togther then. im not trying to be smart cause im still beginning myself but seriously you need to put more effort into your fic.

[Unknown Terminator]

It's only my 1st one.

Does not matter. You have a chance to fix it, so please do. We have shut down writers that do not put enough effort into it since it's pretty much spam.

[Maxell]

Why don't you go and look at other threads and try to read them? I guess you can use them as an example on how to spell, how long you can do it and how to describe better. There are some good fics in here:) like SPD Year 3