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nickraman
12-06-2006, 04:16 PM
Waiting for a Saint (Nick)….
A Christmas romance between Maddy/Nick of Mystic Force.


SPECIAL THANKS: PR ROMANTICS Clan & Madison Russell for her “inspiration of the Maddick shipping.”

‘Tis were the eve of Christmas, where joy and happiness was spread all around town and even in the country. But somewhere in Briarwood, not all are happy, for our heroine, Madison Rocca is still waiting…just waiting…to share that happiness with someone special.

She grows a frown like a big fat clown as she had to work for the Porium. Where all her friends, including Vida have joined in the spirit of the holidays with gift wrapping cds, decorating the wreaths around the store and what else, Phineas doing the interpretation dance to the Bulgarian Flute Orchestra.

Vida was cool as a cucumber, for she is still DJing for the customer needs. Chip’ s still grip about the whole trip that he happens to surprise his pink-haired companion. Xander’s just happier because of his planner, for he will hope to score girls, who are grander. Lee lee’s so gritty and witty what not, for she will try whip up the shop, with Christmas, Kwanzaa and Hanakkah too, because…well she’s got nothing to do. But enough of me being as a king of all poets; let’s get it going on with the conflict of “Maddick”…

“Coming through!” Leelee exclaimed as she made her way through the store, which was full of holiday spirit. There were only 2 more days until the big day. Her boss, Toby, planned out the whole Christmas going away sale following the next day after Christmas so he wanted his employee’s help to make the whole story look well. “Christmassy.”

Xander, Chip and Vida pitched in to do whatever they can to boost more sales for their boss’s dream store and their paychecks. All seemed almost perfect, that exception was none other than Miss Madison Rocca, who ironically is feeling rather “blue.”

Why is she blue you ask? Well if you were to recall from the final battle between the Mystic Force rangers and the forces of evil, Nick and the rangers had successfully defeated the powers of darkness. Once the battle ended, the rangers went on back with their lives. It was just that once Maddy heard the news that Nick was going to go visit his “adopted parents along with his real parents, Udonna and Leanbow, Maddy was beginning to experience a rather depressing feeling inside of her. Ever since, Nick entered Briarwood as the new guy on the block, she got the first impression from Nick that he was well, “someone special.” In fact, during their ranger days, it was Nick who brought her out of her “filmmaking habits” and motivated her to socialize more with the group. It was him who had the heart to confront Maddy in the times when Vida was going through her vampire transformation. But besides Nick, there were times that well; she would do anything for him. She sacrificed herself against Oculus; when the other rangers vowed to protect the “Light”, namely, Nick himself. When there were times of lost hope of defeating the Terrors and the Master, Maddy would yell at Nick for doing so and would encourage him to not give up and to do his best.

Despite all of this, she knew one thing that the rest of the team didn’t know about. It was her LOVE for Nick. She LOVES Nick deeply. Yes, you read it right, Madison Rocca loves Nick “Bowen” Russell. At times when the others weren’t around, she and Nick would attempt to get closer and mingle, but when the other guys are around, well, that’s another story.

“Will he come back?” Maddy thought as she looked out the cold and freezing snowstorm that was happening outside of Briarwood. Tears were flowing down her face as she believes that she may never see him again with the way the storm’s been coming.
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Depending on demand, I got another installment in the works...

MizBiz
12-06-2006, 06:30 PM
I like it. :) Will be anxiously awaiting more. :)

nickraman
12-06-2006, 07:24 PM
I like it. :) Will be anxiously awaiting more. :)

You can thank a 2oz bottle of Barqs and endless reads of your fic and countless other "Maddick" fics.

I'm enjoying writing this, but the next update won't come till Friday at the most...hehe.

MizBiz
12-06-2006, 11:20 PM
LoL, I'm so glad to hear that my fic inspired you so.

RedAvatarianRanger
12-07-2006, 05:00 PM
Very good. cant wait to hear more.it was very creative how you made Maddies lack of filmaking at the end of the series somewhat feasible. i lovve the complete author commentary too. keep it up!

nickraman
12-07-2006, 09:31 PM
By popular demand, I'm working on the second chapter. Expect by this coming weekend...

MizBiz
12-08-2006, 04:21 AM
Awesome, can't wait. :)

Maxell
12-08-2006, 04:37 AM
Oh Yeah! You need to write more. Nice Job!

nickraman
12-09-2006, 09:39 AM
As promised, the next chapter! Man, I can't believe the demand for the continuation of this fanfic I'm getting here. I posted this @ FF.net and soon end up with 5 reviews wanting more! You want more, you got more! Again, thanks for the support, and here it is, Chapter 2!
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2

“Sis, what are you doing?” Vida questioned Maddy, unknown of her current feelings. Maddy couldn’t respond to Vida’s question as she was in tears and very emotional. She could only fear the worse between her and Nick’s relationship. “Why won’t he come back?” Maddy mumbled with a teary face in a depressed state of mind.

“What did you say?” Vida asked as she approached her shy little sister. “Sis, answer me!” Vida asked again as she shook her sister’s shoulders, but all Maddy could think off was Nick’s return. She was in a state of mind where she had to tell the truth about her love for Nick, or she had to make up a lie for her sadness. Maddy figured that as long as her tough sister and her friends were around, they might understand her and maybe try to sympathize or perhaps, help her cope with her feelings.

Maddy then turned and faced her older sister, Vida, who was in shock to see Maddy’s tears of love cover the majority of her pretty face as well as her blood shot eyes that not only showed that she was emotional, but that her emotions had a purpose. “What’s wrong Maddy!” Vida exclaimed. “You’re crying!”

“I know sis. I know!” Maddy exclaimed back. Vida was astonished by her response. She knew deep down she was shy, but this was new to her. Vida then knew that this isn’t the Maddy she knew since childhood. Vida then decided to try another approach. “Okay sis, spill it. Who’s the guy?”

“Guy?” Maddy stuttered, “What guy?” “Oh drop dead sis!” Vida replied, “Like I knew it was a guy!” The reaction from Vida’s response turned Maddy face into instant red. Not red like those old Goofy cartoons where Goofy replies with “Gawrsh!” But you get the idea. “You’re blushing!” Vida said with passé. “Oh my god! My little sister has a crush!”

“Oh knock it off!” Maddy said as he attempted to push Vida off her space. “It’s Nick.” Maddy then confessed, “Ever since he arrived on Briarwood, I had this weird feeling deep inside of me, but I couldn’t tell what it was. But after fighting as a team together, I began to have these “more than friendship” feelings and I think he did too. When he left for Briarwood after we defeated the Master and the Underworld for good, I thought that I would never see him again and I…well…I couldn’t help…think…” Maddy stuttered and attempted to sob a tear.

“Okay, stop it. Cause you’re making me cry too.” Vida responded. She gave her shy little sister a big hug not because of condolence it was because her shy little sister was growing up. “Sis, do you think he’ll make it past this weather?” Maddy asked Vida. “With the temperature dropping severely by the hour, I highly doubt it.” Vida replied which made Maddy sad at first. Vida then thought up of something and said, “Come on, he’s Nick. He’s the light! He can take on anything! He’ll do anything for you sis.” That sign of encouragement made Maddy feel so much better. Now all she had to do was wait and hope for his safety.

NEXT: Nick’s adopted parent’s house and the secret character!

Maxell
12-09-2006, 11:00 AM
OH YEAH! I want more. It was so nice to see Madison's new side. My little girl has grown up!

MizBiz
12-09-2006, 11:24 AM
Nice update. Can't wait for more.

RedAvatarianRanger
12-09-2006, 01:19 PM
VERY NICE!!! cant wait to see the "secret character".

tommy247
12-10-2006, 07:56 AM
Very good. I like it, keep it up!

Koragg DX
12-10-2006, 12:13 PM
Nice!!!

powerxrangerfan4life
12-10-2006, 06:49 PM
i love reading maddie and nick stories..

i like it so far. keep it up.

nickraman
12-16-2006, 02:11 PM
As promised! NEW CHAPTER! Also, I'll be going on vacation from Sun (12/24) and won't be back till the (12/27) so you can expect another chapter during my winter break. Till then, ENJOY!
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“Hey everybody!” Vida exclaimed. Her dialect and trail of her voice pattern had gotten almost everyone’s attention in the store, everyone except for Phineas, who’s still listening to the Bulgarian Nose-Flute Orchestra, remix version. His sweetheart, Leelee, had to shut off his iPod in order to get his attention towards Vida. With everyone now looking at Vida, they all wonder what the big interruption was about.

“Okay sis, tell ‘em.” Vida whispered to her shy little sister. Madison just waltzed up to everyone, who were standing in a crowd like fashion and began to tell everyone, “the truth.” “So umm does anyone remember Nick?” Maddy questioned her fellow peers, yes Troblin included. “You mean the light?” Phineas joked, which caused his intestines to get punched by Leelee. “We remember Nick, Maddy”, Xander said. “Come on, how could we forget the guy that led us to defeated the forces of the underworld?”

“Yeah, Xander’s right. How can we forget the guy who saved Maddy in almost every battle we faced against the Underworld?” Chip blurted out. This brought much suspicion within the group, to what Chip just said. “Now that you mention it. It’s always coincidental that every time the monster of the week comes face to face with Maddy, Nick’s always there to back her up.” Xander mentioned. “Like that time when we faced that Sniper terror, Oculus.” Chip also mentioned. “Or that time when we almost lost against the Master and Nick got support from Maddy.” Xander said.

“Or that time that once we kicked evil’s butt, Nick passed on his “baby blanket” to my sister and drove off to see his parents.” Vida suspected. “And the point of pointing all these things out is?” Leelee questioned. Phineas then replied, “Oooh, I know!” “Maybe it’s because she’s like a connection to the Light.” This brought a series of confused faces among the group. Maddy however was interested at what Phineas said. “What do you mean?” Leelee asked. Phineas then explained. “Well, there’s a saying back in the old days when a warrior has special powers, they’ll be guided to fight for a cause. Take a light bulb for example. For a light bulb to work, you need a proper electrical conductor to connect with the light bulb. Similarly, since Nick is the light of all goodness, he was helped by Maddy, the conductor to fight for what was right. And in the end, it all worked out well. But that’s just me ranting after having a cup of Joe and reading a bunch of fantasy fiction.”

The reactions among everyone’s faces were unbelievable, Xander especially with his jaw dropped. Leelee couldn’t even believe that Phineas knew this much about the Mystical History than her. Most of all, Vida was astonished at the way he spoke about Maddy and Nick being connected as one. Maddy however thought Phineas’s rant was cute and thought provoking.

“So Maddy, what are you saying about Nick?” Leelee asked. Maddy was turning red and then finally said, “I love Nick.” This had brought joy and happiness among everyone in the store. Even Xander was surprised. “Well I knew you two were something special” He replied. Maddy then said, “But I want Nick to come back for Christmas.” “Isn’t there a way to contact him? I mean, I know he’s with his adopted parent’s house, but..” Maddy then replied, “I called him a week before the holidays and he said, on Christmas eve, you’ll be getting a call from me and then he hung up.” Now it’s Christmas eve already and I’m still wating for his call.

Xander then interrupted. “All the better reason to set up the store for the holiday season!” “Listen everybody. If we can set up the store in less than 2 hours, then I am sure Nick’s gonna give a call to our sweet Maddy here! Now as Plan Manager, let’s move!” Once Xander made his point to the others, they all went back to work setting the store in a holiday fashion. Maddy was just glad to see that everyone supported her love for Nick and that she really wanted him back, not just for the holidays but for her sake.


Several miles away from Briarwood, we are taken to the house of the Russels where almost all of Nick’s relatives have shared great rapport with one another. The Russels were all in a joyous mood and happy that not only that it’s the holiday season but it coming to the fact that Nick’s real parents were found and it was good to meet them, talk with them and compare the parenting styles. All was good, except for Nick. Why? Well, he was happy on the outside, but deep down, he felt something was missing from his heart. Something in his heart was telling him that he needed to confess something or rather someone his feelings. He would deny the fact that he loved Maddy because he really did. It’s that he didn’t have the guts to say it front of his beloved himself. Nick then approached to his family and said, “Guys, I need to go back to Briarwood!” That’s when Nick’s sister, Nicole entered the room full of silence…

Maxell
12-16-2006, 02:37 PM
Secret character: Phineas intelligence or Nicole?

Anyway, you keep entertaining me and this one made me laugh with Phineas... good job!

Sabrina
01-10-2007, 11:04 PM
I l:007: :007: :007: IT More More More please !

sbb1513
01-18-2007, 08:15 PM
nice. keep up the good work.
Bubblez

sbb1513
01-18-2007, 08:25 PM
nice. keep up the good work.
Bubblez