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ZeoSaturn
08-04-2006, 03:48 PM
Ok. I'm got inspired to start a fic and I'm not sure if it's going to be the third installment of the DT/Zeo crossover I'd worked on before but it might be if I can figure out some of the story a bit. I hope you like this. I really hope I can continue this.


Friend or Foe?
by ZeoSaturn (aka Tommy's Mistress)


His head felt like someone had taken a sword to it. The pain was a result from something he knew but he wasn’t sure what. He tried to open his eyes but had great difficulty doing so. The light that entered his opening eyes was blinding him. When he was finally able to open them, he could see bubbles floating upwards and wires coming in all directions.

‘What is this?’ he thought to himself.

“Sir! The specimen is awake,” a cold sounding male voice said.

“Excellent!” a familiar voice said. He knew the voice but he was having a hard time thinking who it was. “Tell the General that the Ranger is almost ready.”

“General? Ranger? What is he talking about?” he said. At that moment, a white blur moved and then disappeared out of sight. The man then realized that he was in a glass tube in a tank of liquid with a breathing apparatus on. He flowed closer to the edge of the glass to try to see what was outside his confinement. He was finally able to see the owner of one of the voice that he heard earlier. There he saw a man with blond hair, gray eyes and dressed in a lab coat. The man was reading something on his clipboard and talking to someone at one of the computers nearby.

‘What the hell is going on?’ he asked himself. ‘Where am I?! And why the hell are they doing this to me!?’ Just then, a man in a green military uniform came into the room dressed very sharply. The Ranger knew that he was a big wig because he had a lot of the decorations on him.

“How is the test specimen, doctor?” the General asked. The Ranger narrowed his eyes at the both of them in contempt.

“Sir, as you may know, we acquired him after we staged a fake robbery hoping that we would be able to attract at least one of the Rangers that were stationed at Reefside,” the doctor said. “Even though we weren’t able to capture one of the Rangers that were fighting Mesogog after he returned.”

“Yes I know that, Brooks! Tell me how goes the experiment!” The Ranger recalled what had happened before. He remembered how a robber was mugging a woman and he had gone to help her. He then remembered her reaching into her bag and grabbed what looked like mace at the time and he thought she was going to spray the robber, but all he remembered after that was his head going dizzy and the alley way were they were start spinning.

The doctor coughed before he continued. “Anyway, we found out how to get his suit off him and then studied the Rangers reflexes and physical body. He is a fit man and looks like an ordinary man. I would assume that he is a martial artist do to the observations we had made on that team before.” The General walked up to the glass and tapped on it.

“How are you, Ranger?” the General said tauntingly as he smiled with a look of satisfaction on his face. The Ranger looked angrily into the General’s eyes, which were black and cold looking. “Like the accommodations? You will be here for a long time until we are able to get you freaks in here.” The Ranger punched the glass and the General laughed at him. “You can’t get out of there. This is made of bulletproof glass and you surely won’t be able to punch your way out of it.” The Ranger’s hand was throbbing. He had got the idea.

“Why did you kidnap me?!” the Ranger yelled, but soon realized due to the apparatus his words were being muffled. The General scoffed.

“You think that you Rangers are so high and mighty,” the General said as he paced back and forth in front of the glass almost looking like he was taunting him that he was out there and that the Ranger was in there. “You have all your weapons, fighting and your monstrous zords stampeding through the downtown of wherever you call home. Heh! The government as been trying for years to figure out the identities of the first Rangers and NOW just recently the latest two, NinjaStorm and DinoThunder! But since we have you… the edge that you all had on us is going to change.”

“But sir, the other Ranger teams…how come we didn’t go after them?” Dr. Brooks interrupted. “The ones that we know.”

“You idiot!” the General said. “The government has protected them! Because the government has their identities, they have rights! We can’t touch them. But since the ones that haven’t given their identities…what the government won’t know won’t hurt them.”

‘You bastard!’ the Ranger thought to himself.

“General Oplitz, the copy is ready,” a female lab assistant said as she ran up to them.

‘Copy?!’

“Excellent! Show me!” General Oplitz said in delight and turned to another tube that was to the right side of the tube the Ranger was in covered with a purple curtain. The female assistant pushed a button and the curtains opened to reveal another person in the tube. “Are you sure that we can control him?”

“Yes, sir,” Doctor Brooks said as he came up to the tube. The chip we implanted into the brain will make sure of that. He might look and act like Adam Park, but he is under our control.”

“Once we acquire more Rangers, we can make a whole army of them!”

“WHAT?!” The Ranger said as he looked at the person inside the tube. He saw a Korean-looking man with black curly hair, and brown eyes looking at General Oplitz with an emotionless look. Adam couldn’t believe his eyes. It was a perfect copy of him.

Slepnir
08-04-2006, 03:57 PM
Very intriguing, I'd really like to read more.

Lisa J
08-07-2006, 11:38 PM
Ok, where da rest at? YO KATIE, pick up DA SLACK! :D

Angelfox
08-08-2006, 01:29 AM
More More More More More More

Arrow
08-08-2006, 06:51 AM
This is hot. Can't wait for more.

[]V[]etal []_ion
08-09-2006, 07:05 AM
intriging man

ZeoSaturn
08-28-2006, 12:16 PM
Ok. More of the fic finally. I've just haven't been motivated recently to get stuff done. Ok, if you guys want me to continue this fic, just say so.

On with the fic!

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Reefside High School:

RING! The school bell rang signaling the end of the last day before the holidays. All the students in Katherine Hillard’s drama class grabbed their backpacks and things and began to head for the door.

“Happy Holidays, everyone! Stay safe!” she yelled of the commotion. A few of the students yelled back and/or waved goodbye to their teacher. She walked around the room muttering to herself about “how some of the students are pigs” as she picked up food wrappers. She went up to her desk and started grabbing everything she needed in order to make the trip home. To make sure she didn’t forget anything that she thought she might need, she went into the auditorium that was right next door to her room. She went in, got on stage and took a through look around. “Looks like I have everything.”

“I remember the last time I saw you on stage,” a familiar voice said from the seats of the auditorium. Katherine was startled for a second, turned to the direction of the voice and then sequined to get a better view of the person who was hiding in the darkness. The person walked toward the stage coming into view. “You were playing the Sugar Plum Fairy just before you went to London.”

“Tommy,” she said with a smile on her face blushing quite a bit. “How long have you been there?”

“Not long. Are you ready?”

“Yeah I think so. I remember when I saw you on stage last.”

“Oh?” Tommy said. “When?”

“When you were practicing that one time for music class,” Katherine said she smiled slyly. “Just after we got that spell off of you and Tanya. I hate to say it Tommy, but you were pretty flat at times during that whole fiasco.” Tommy turned red remembering that day.

“Oh god, don’t remind me please! I got a bad enough rap from Jason.” Katherine giggled. “You know you’re cute when…you laugh like…that.” Tommy said stammering the words out. Katherine immediately stopped giggling and turned beat red. “I’m sorry Kat, I…” Katherine had put her finger on his lips to keep him continuing.

“I know.” Katherine then met Tommy’s eyes as he did with hers. Katherine’s heart began to beat fast when she saw him drawing closer to her. She knew what he was trying to do and had been waiting for a long time for him to kiss her. She closed her eyes, as he was about to touch her lips to his.

“Come on you two! Get a room!” a man yelled from the doorway of the auditorium. Tommy and Kat immediately pushed each other way with total embarrassment on their faces.

“Damn it, Rocky!” a woman said after a thud was heard. The woman had hit the man in the back of the head. “They finally want to do it and you blow it! Jeez!” The two walked up to the stage as Katherine and Tommy were getting off of it. Tanya had an annoyed look on her face as Rocky was rubbing where she had slapped him at the back of the head. “Are you two ready to meet up with Elsa and Anton?”

“Yeah, we are,” Katherine said as the four of them exited the auditorium. “Did Adam call you to tell you he’s there?”

“No, not yet,” Tanya said who was still annoyed. “I wish he won’t go on that camping trip every year with his friends. Their cell phones don’t work up there and I’m worried have the time that something might happen again.”

“Huh?” Tommy said. “What happened?”

“His friend Aaron broke his leg and it took them about a whole day longer just to get out of there. They couldn’t call until they got a signal when they got out of that canyon.”

“And you’re afraid something like that would happen again?” Rocky said as if he had nothing to worry about. “I know Adam. If he really needed help, he would call us. AND if it was really serious, he would CONTACT us.” Rocky of course was referring to Ranger business. Tanya shook her head unimpressed.

“So, Tommy. Have you heard anything from your SPECIAL students?” Katherine asked. “You haven’t talked about them in a while.”

“They’ve been so busy they haven’t been sending me letters,” Tommy said. “But I did hear from Ethan and Trent a couple of days ago. They just finished school and are headed home tomorrow.”

“That’s good,” Rocky said. “Is Hayley still putting on that Christmas party?”

“Yeah, she is,” Katherine said. “Matter of fact, I need to pick up a few things later for that.” At that point, Tanya saw Anton Mercer and his new fiancée Elsa coming down the hallway.

“Hello everyone,” Anton said. “Everyone ready?”

“Yeah,” Tommy said. “I think we’re all set here. Where are we eating?”

“I was thinking at the new Italian places down near the new convention center they’re building. They say it’s good……what’s wrong Tanya?” Anton had looked over at her and saw that she had a worried look on her face. Rocky rolled his eyes at her and sighed in annoyance.

“He’s fine, Tanya! Adam is a big boy and can take care of himself!” Rocky yelled.

“Rocky!” Tommy said as he narrowed his eyes at him. “Leave her alone. Geez…” Anton and Elsa looked at each other as they had come in at the wrong time.

“Come on guys,” Elsa said as she took Tanya by the arm and guided her to the exit. “I think we are just hungry. Come on. We’ll cheer you up.”

“Thanks,” Tanya said with a small smile on her face. Rocky smacked his hand to his face and pulled down it in frustration.

Katherine shook her head with a smirk on her face, because she felt that this situation was too stupid to be arguing about. She walked a ways a little but then stopped when she realized that Tommy was trailing the group with a look of worry on his face.

“Tommy, what’s wrong?” she asked.

“I have a bad feeling something is about to happen,” he said as he caught up to her. “Adam should have called her by now.”

“You think something’s wrong?”

“Possibly.” The two realized that they had fallen behind and began to quicken their pace to catch up to them.

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“Sir!” another female scientist said as she came up to General Oplitz. “We caught another one!”

“Really?” he said with excitement in his voice. “Bring the Ranger in!”

Adam had over heard what General Oplitz said and got up against the glass to get a better look of what Ranger they were about to bring in. The doors opened and in came in a huge white man who looked like he could have been on WWE carrying in a girl in yellow. The girl was unconscious and looked very limp in his arms.

“She’s a ranger?” Oplitz said dissatisfied. “She barely looks like she’s eighteen! She couldn’t be a Ranger.”

“She is, sir,” the female scientist said. “She fell into the same trap that one did, but at the last moment she realized what we were going to do and she started putting up a fight. Moore managed to spray her before she could get away.”

Adam squinted to get a better look at the Ranger that just came in. He still couldn’t make out if he even knew whom the Ranger himself. He slammed on the glass in frustration. This drew the attention of Oplitz, but he just scoffed at him.

“Put her in the tank next to Park there,” he ordered. “Brooks! Have you identified the new Ranger….I mean our new subject?”

“Yes we have sir,” he said as they brought the Ranger into Adam’s view. His eyes grew wide when he saw the Ranger. He did know her. “She is the Yellow DinoThunder Ranger. Her real name is Kira Ford.”

[]V[]etal []_ion
08-28-2006, 02:06 PM
nice !!!

Lisa J
08-28-2006, 06:20 PM
The only thing I would say is try to describe things more instead of letting everyone say everything. For example, when Anton is talking about the italian restaurant, unless that restaurant us uber-important to the story, then we don't need to hear him to talk about it. Just mention it as the narrator.

I really like the story so far. Bah, I smell a Tommy/Kat ship, but I'll forgive you ;)

Angelfox
08-29-2006, 12:16 AM
nice building of the suspence...but why o why did it have to be Kira????