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jaguarranger
04-20-2006, 03:50 PM
This is a fic about a romatic coupling that came to me. I think the coupling is an interesting one, so I wrote about it. It also helps balance out all the slash out there. That's right, it's femslash. Want to learn who the couple is? Then read on.









Dear Diary,
I’m starting to feel isolated and lonely. I want someone to love, someone to love me. Me and the other Rangers and Princess Shayla are like family, but it’s not enough. Family is important, but what I want is someone special. Someone to love in that special way. Someone to hold me only as a lover can. What I want is someone to call my lover. Everyone seems to have someone or something to fill that void except for me. Shayla and Merrick have each other, Danny has Kendall, even though they can’t be together, Cole is in love with nature, Max is in love with life in general. I have school and my dream of becoming a teacher, but that seems so far off with the fight against the Orgs, and even then, that’s a dream, not a romance. Nature and life may work for Cole and Max, but I need someone in my life.

The worst part of it all is that I know who the someone I want is. It’s Taylor. I’m in love with Taylor. But it could never be. She was in the military, and I’ve heard how homophobic they are. If she ever found out…

But I can’t help it, I love her just the same. I’ve admired her ever since I became a Ranger. Her strength, her courage in fighting the Orgs alone, the leadership with which she held the team together before Cole joined. When Cole joined and was made leader, my admiration grew as she accepted his authority. It must have been hard on her, having leadership taken from her through no fault of her own, but she got over it relatively quickly. As I got to know her as a person, the qualities I admired about her as a Ranger merged with the what I admired about her a person-the caring person capable of smiling and laughter underneath the front-and what was simple admiration became true love.

It’s horrible. I love her, but she can never know. I’m so close to her, yet too far away.

Tears stained the page as Alyssa closed her diary, crying heavily. It wasn’t fair. Why did she have to be in love with someone she couldn’t have? Approaching footsteps made her aware of someone coming behind her. It was none other than Taylor, the object of Alyssa’s affection.

Taylor looked at Alyssa in concern. “Alyssa? Is something wrong?”

She’s so beautiful, Alyssa thought. “No,” she tried to lie, “everything’s fine.” But she couldn’t hold back the tears that told the truth. Sobbing, she ran out of the part of the Animarium that served as her bedroom.

Taylor turned to follow but was stopped by a thud as something hit the ground. In her haste, Alyssa had knocked her diary over. Taylor bent to pick it up, and then stopped. The diary had also been knocked open. Taylor wouldn’t read Alyssa’s diary without asking, but one sentence caught her attention and froze Taylor in her tracks.

I’m in love with Taylor.

She can’t seriously mean me, Taylor thought. Can she? She loves…me?

“Alyssa, wait!” Taylor hurried out of the room in search of her.

Alyssa had gone to a remote part of the Animarium where she could be alone. She sat there for hours, crying her eyes out, wishing she loved anyone but Taylor. She didn’t care who, as long as it was someone else, someone she could actually have. The hours passed and day turned to night as Alyssa cried. Finally, she heard someone coming. Please, not Taylor, she thought. But it was none other than her. Alyssa got up to run again, but Taylor stopped her. “Alyssa, please wait!”

That was the last thing Alyssa wanted to do, but she couldn’t refuse. She slowly sat back down, her eyes filled with tears.

“I…”Taylor began, and then stopped. This would be hard to say, but she had to say it. In a burst of strength, she said “I saw your diary entry.”

Alyssa began to cry again, not because of a feeling of betrayal, she knew Taylor wouldn’t purposefully read her diary, but because Taylor now knew. “I can’t help it,” she sobbed.

Taylor put an arm around Alyssa’s shoulder. “It’s nothing to be ashamed of,” she said. “We can’t help who we fall in love with.”

“I’m not ashamed of being in love with another woman,” Alyssa protested between sobs. “What I’m crying about is the fact I’m in love with you! Why did it have to be you? You’re someone I can’t have!”

“Why is that?”

“Well, you were in the Air Force. I know how homophobic the military is!”

Taylor smiled. “Not all of us are like that. I don’t believe that we fall in love with men or women. I believe we fall in love with people.”

“Really?”

“Yes,” Taylor said. She took a deep breath before continuing. “And I love you, Alyssa.”

Alyssa was stunned. “You love me?”

Taylor nodded. “Yes. You’re kind and caring and cheerful, always smiling. And you’re also brave, dedicated, and loyal. You’re everything I admire in a person and more. You have that special something. The thing you can't put your finger on, but lets you know you're in love with them. I love you.”

“Are you just saying that?”

“No, I truly love you, Alyssa. Let me prove how much.” Without another word, Taylor leaned in, and putting her lips against Alyssa’s, engaged in the kind of kiss only a lover can give.

As Taylor pulled away, Alyssa was crying again. But this time they were tears of joy, the kind that comes when you learn that your love is reciprocated. Her face beaming, she leaned in for another kiss. When it was done, she could only say “I love you, Taylor Earheart.”

Taylor smiled. “I love you, Alyssa Enrile.”

Storm Warrior2
04-20-2006, 05:13 PM
So............................................

is there going to be more?

jaguarranger
04-20-2006, 05:21 PM
No, this was a oneshot.

Did you like it?

havemercy
04-20-2006, 10:00 PM
sicko

Storm Warrior2
04-20-2006, 10:04 PM
sicko

Interesting how it's "sick" for someone to write a lesbain romance fic, but any other romantic fic ("Believe," for example) is fine.

Hmmm.

And I happened to like it....

havemercy
04-20-2006, 10:11 PM
Never read Believe and Rangers are NOT gay.

Storm Warrior2
04-20-2006, 10:41 PM
Wow...is it just me, or are you missing the point of FanFics?

Arrow
04-20-2006, 10:41 PM
Never read Believe and Rangers are NOT gay.

OMG DANNY AND MAX =/

That said, I had a bit of an issue with the ending, because I personally think they wouldn't jump that far into a relationship that fast, but it wasn't a bad story.

jaguarranger
04-21-2006, 12:01 AM
Yeah, I guess the ending could have been improved, but I'm glad you liked it.

Truth be told, part of the reason I wrote this is I was tired of all the slash out there and said "Well if those people are entitled to write slash, I'm entitled to write some femslash." PR fanfiction seems to be filled with a huge amount of slash, but relatively little femslash. I do think Taylor and Alyssa would make an interesting couple, though.

Arrow
04-21-2006, 12:52 AM
The idea of Taylor/Alyssa reminds me a bit of Adam/Tanya actually, the way the personalities would mix, with a little of Sky/Syd mixed in.

jaguarranger
04-21-2006, 12:54 AM
I can see the Sky/Syd comparision but if you could explain the Adam/Tanya one? My memory for the older seasons is fuzzy.

And how do you think Taylor/Alyssa would work as a couple?

Knuckles
04-21-2006, 03:38 AM
sicko

Who are your two favourite male rangers? I'll write a love fic about them - just for you... ;)

Edit: By the way, I'll be reading this later and add something more constructive...

Arrow
04-21-2006, 06:00 AM
I was thinking along the lines of Taylor having pieces of Adam's "I'm secretly meek in nature so I think I work better alone when I really don't" and Sky's "I've got a stick up my ass", while Alyssa encompasses Syd's naivety and love of life along with Tanya's outgoingness when it comes to people she doesn't know.

As an ongoing couple, I never considered it before actually. It could theoretically work well, as long as Alyssa's willing to be patient with Taylor's occasional explosion.

havemercy
04-21-2006, 07:13 AM
Who are your two favourite male rangers? I'll write a love fic about them - just for you... ;)

Edit: By the way, I'll be reading this later and add something more constructive...


It's twisted. Keep your sick fantasies to yourself.

Crimson Dragon
04-21-2006, 11:17 AM
Dude, it is a Fan fic. Key word, fan. If someone wants to write a lesbian story, its fine.

And what is so sick about this? I atually wnt to know, becuase I see nothing wrong with this.

havemercy
04-21-2006, 12:06 PM
What's sick about this? How about gay Rangers for starters? They were never and never are going to be gay. Keep your confushed sexual feelings to yourself.

jaguarranger
04-22-2006, 02:37 AM
I've made a slight addition to the story, more changes might come.

Knuckles
04-23-2006, 07:32 AM
Just read it. It was an interesting read, however, it all went by rather too fast. The jump from expressing her feelings on page, to Taylor finding out, to the confrontation, to Taylor expressing that she had those same feelings, to the kiss ... all to quick.

It was quite well written though. I would have liked to have seen it expanded and such, but you did mention that it was a one off. All in all, a nice, but short read.

It's twisted. Keep your sick fantasies to yourself.

You still haven't told me your two favourite male rangers. Don't make me have to search through your old posts... ;)

Splush
04-24-2006, 06:48 AM
Never read Believe and Rangers are NOT gay.

Personally these types of stories don't spark my interest. BUT if you do not wish to read a story containing gay or lesbian subject matter, than don't read it and shut up. It’s stupid to disrespect something and especially a person just because you don't relate to their artistic expression.

bushwacka666
04-24-2006, 09:13 AM
Well said Splush! :)

If some people out there like this story and its approach, then honestly they have a right to voice their approval.

Those that hate it most likely do so for one of two reasons: 1) you don't approve of it all all (which you also have the right not to do), in which case why read and reply? Or 2) because there's not enough to satisfy your perverted desires, in which case you should start writing your own. :D