Guardian Element

[qtpunkstar27]

Hey i just thought of something better about posting my book I'm going to post it at fanfic.net and I'll see it from there.

[Angelfox]

like i said before, you need to get a proofreader, i see lots of words and spelling errors...not being a ranger fic your setting yourself up for some major teardown, your dialoge needs to be overhauled and your backstory can use some work, a good idea, one that has been done in many different forms but this has definite potential depsite this prolouge being obscure..

[havemercy]

I see you finally learned how to post a new thread. :023: Ata boy!