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dragomuseveni
04-04-2006, 04:55 PM
Hey whats up so this is an idea i have had for awhile. i have been working on the first episode for awhile, but then i had the idea for a little back story so here it is, i will try to post the first ep sometime tommorrow feel free to comment, but please keep it constructive.:023:

Prologue: Prelude to a storm

Upon his banishment over a decade ago the dark ninja Lothor began plotting to take over the planet Earth, as revenge for being cast out by his brother and the Wind Ninja Academy. Realizing however that a large scale attack on a planet that housed Power Rangers would prove difficult, Lothor began attacking lesser planets in the universe. It was his hope that they would provide him with the necessary resources, and militia he needed to take over a planet.

After collecting the resources he deemed necessary Lothor decided to attack the nearest Ranger inhabited planet to test his military’s strength. That planet was Aquitar, home of the Aquitian Power Rangers. His first few attempts to take over the planet were unsuccessful; however he soon learned of another warlord trying to take over the planet. Who went the title of the Emperor of the Dark Water, or Hydro Hog. Deciding that it was in his best interest to gain the aid of this creature Lothor sent him a message to meet him at the north pole of Aquitar. When they met Lothor explained to him the situation, and that they would be better off working together. Reluctantly the Hydro Hog joined Lothor in his war effort.

With the Hydro Hog on his side Lothor’s conquest became much easier. It seemed that everyday he gained more ground on Aquitar. However what Lothor didn’t know was that the Aquitian Rangers were building new Zords to take down the Hydro Hog once and for all. On the final day of for the battle for Aquitar, Aurico the red ranger snuck aboard Lothor’s starship, and challenged him to a ninja duel; the loser would have to leave Aquitar forever. Unbeknownst to dark ninja the Rangers unleashed their newest Zords on the Hydro Hog the moment the duel had been accepted. Eventually the Zords wore down the Emperor of the Dark Water, and destroyed him; leaving the battle between Lothor and Aurico to decide the fate of the planet.

The battle between the dark ninja, and the red ranger lasted for hours neither one wanting the other to gain any ground. In a last ditch effort Lothor launched a powerful energy attack on Aurico, but by using his ninja speed he dodged the attack, and brought his sword to his enemy’s throat, thus banishing the dark ninja from yet another planet.

Reeling from his loss on Aquitar the ninja warlord went back to all the previous planets he had conquered to take all of the natural resources, and military forces he could, so that he could conquer Earth whether they had rangers or not. Once he had colleted everything he needed Lothor began the long journey to Earth from the Onyx star system.

Galwit Mysto!
04-04-2006, 05:10 PM
OoO!! I like!!! NICE JOB! Really cool!:023:

TBF
04-04-2006, 10:03 PM
Cool. Seems like a good premise.

dragomuseveni
04-04-2006, 10:08 PM
hey thanks guys i appreciate it

Galwit Mysto!
04-04-2006, 10:35 PM
welcome! :)

Angelfox
04-06-2006, 01:26 AM
not a bad idea

havemercy
04-06-2006, 09:03 AM
A crockpot of mismatched villians and characters without convincing anyone of the possbility. Evidently, the possibilities are not endless, thanks to writing like this.

WILDKAT
04-06-2006, 10:41 AM
I like it. please continue writing

Angelfox
04-07-2006, 02:30 AM
A crockpot of mismatched villians and characters without convincing anyone of the possbility. Evidently, the possibilities are not endless, thanks to writing like this.
glad you agree its a great idea:D

dragomuseveni
04-07-2006, 08:58 PM
ok so i have hit a few snags i know i said that it would be up yesterday but yeah, i have been thinking about it and the first ep is kinda just goin on forever without substance so im gonna split it up into two parts and just add some filler so it will be up later tonight at the latest tomarrow

Crimson Dragon
04-07-2006, 11:33 PM
Seems like a promising fic, and it is good that the first ep is a two parter.

dragomuseveni
04-12-2006, 08:52 PM
OK well sorry that took so long, lol but i had to do some revision...anyway i know i am using the episode titles out of order, but im using them as they fit and i will use my own when i can hope you all enjoy.:023:

Looming Thunder Pt 1

The sun hadn’t even risen over Blue Bay Harbor when the revving of motors came screaming from the local motocross track. Fortunately for the city’s inhabitance the track was on the outskirts of town. So the only people who heard it were the three teens who caused the racket, and the students of a reclusive ninja academy in the middle of the forest.

The teens had been racing for over thirty minutes, and up until a second ago it had been neck and neck. Pulling ahead of the other two riders was a guy dressed in all black, with a yellow stripe going down the back of his jacket, and like his jacket, the man’s bike was all black with one yellow stripe going length wise across it. However this minor victory was short lived as there was a small ditch a few yards away from the rider, and he drove right into it. Although causing his bike to stop, there was nothing to keep the racer’s body from sailing of the track, and into the surrounding grass field.

The other two riders didn’t event look back after they saw the bike crash. Instead they just kept on to the finish line, and then drove back to where the teen dressed in yellow and black lay.

“Do you think he’s ok?” asked a rider dressed in black, with a crimson stripe going length wish down the right side of his jacket, as he stared down at his injured companion.

“I have an idea bro, why don’t you take off his helmet, and pinch his face? That outta wake him up.” stated the other rider who was also dressed in black with a navy blue stripe going down the left side of his jacket.

“Dude I don’t want to touch his face.”

“Just do it.”

“Fine, whatever.” as soon as he finished saying that the rider clad in crimson and black, slowly took the helmet off of his fallen comrade, and proceeded to pinch his face.

“Aaaaahhhhhh! What the…who the… ALIENS!” screamed the rider in yellow and black. Not realizing that they were his teammates from Storm Chargers Racing, as they were still both in their helmets.

“Whoa…whoa calm down Dustin. It’s us, Hunter, and Blake.” stated the rider in navy and black, as he took off his helmet revealing distinctly Asian features, “Hunter get that helmet off!”

With that Hunter removed his helmet as well, showing Dustin that he was indeed a human and not some monster from a horror film. The moment he saw their faces, and realized that he was laying on the grass just outside the tack, words began to form on Dustin’s lips, “What the hell happened out there?”

“At least we know he doesn’t have a concussion.” whispered Hunter, then Blake elbowed him in the ribs, “Ouch dude, what was that for?”

Leaning forward Blake grabbed Dustin’s hand, and with some effort pulled him into a standing position, “Well,” began Blake, “I think you hit a ditch.”

“Shit! I thought they clean up the track every night dude.” responded Dustin surprised at the lack of attention that was given to the track by the workers.

“Well the track isn’t what worries me,” interjected Hunter as he looked Dustin up and down, “are you okay, I mean we have a big tournament on Saturday.”

“Hmm nothing feels broken, prolly just a few scratches.” With that said the rider in yellow walked over to his bike, propped it up on its wheels, and inspected it for damage, “Damn it, there is no way I’m gonna be able to fix this.” Immediately his teammates ran over to him to investigate the problem, “Ha I got you guys, I just need to replace the tires.”

“Oh I’ll get you for that!” cried Hunter, as he ran at Dustin full boar; he was hoping that Dustin would realize it was a joke, and that he wouldn’t really hit his friend, but he didn’t. So Dustin ran away as fast as he could down the track.

“Could you two stop it!” shouted Blake, “God it’s like hanging out with four year olds. Let’s get our stuff together, and head out. Class starts in an hour.” With that said they all began to walk their bikes to the garage where all the vehicles were stored at the track. After trying in vein to get his bike on a second level storage bay, Hunter, and Blake helped Dustin slide his bike onto it. 20 minutes later bikers had all their gear packed up, and were ready to go to school, for a long day of academic enrichment.



A good 8 hours later, the school bell rang ushering the students out for the weekend. After that no one needed direction they all exited the towering glass doors of Blue Bay High as quickly as possible. And the Storm Chargers racing team was no exception.

“Hey Dustin isn’t that your girlfriend over there?” teased Blake pointing toward the fountain, across the street from the school.

“Come on man, could you shut up about that it’s not a big deal. We’re just hanging out,” replied Dustin in a pleading sort of tone, “besides I don’t think she likes me like that.”

“What’s not to love.” chuckled Hunter.

“You want me to go over there, and ask her out?” asked Dustin fed up with Hunter, and Blake’s attitude toward the girl of his affection.

“Sure why not, but I think we’ll leave you two love birds alone. Hunter and I have a shift at Storm Chargers in thirty minutes.” That was probably the only downside to racing for Storm Chargers, which was you actually had to work at the store. Especially since they always chose the most awkward times of day to be working. But the racers often dismissed that as a problem, because they enjoyed racing far too much to care about pulling a 4-hour shift after school.

“Fine,” said Dustin, “but are you sure you wanna miss this?”

“Yeah I think we can handle it,” stated Hunter calmly, “I mean if it goes bad I’m sure we’ll hear about it tomorrow.”

Grumbling at that last statement by his friends Dustin walked over to the girl of his dreams, as his teammates walked off to the bike shop where they worked. “Hey Mara,” said Dustin grinning, “What’s goin on?”

“Oh not too much,” was her response as the wind gently blew at her silky brown hair, “how bout you? I haven’t seen you all day. I was beginning to wonder if you were sick.”
“Same here I mean about not much is goin on part, not the wondering if I was sick part…” stammered Dustin, “Get it together man,” he thought, but all Mara did was laugh. She found it cute that he couldn’t speak properly around her. In fact she really wanted him to ask her out, since she couldn’t get the courage to ask him herself.

“I…umm…I…do you…I mean…would you want to…umm.” All Mara did in response to Dustin’s antics was nod and smile, which made it even worse for him. “wouldyouwantogooutsometime…”

“Uh Dustin could you repeat that?” asked Mara hopefully.

Finally letting it all out of his system Dustin said, “Would you want to go out with me sometime?” Giggling Mara jumped at the teen, and hugged him tightly; “I’ll take that as a yes?”

“Of course it is. Where would you want to go? I’m up for anything.”

“Well I have a race tomorrow. What do you say we meet up at the track, and go from there?” stated Dustin gaining confidence.

“Sounds great! I’ll see ya there,” replied Mara, “Oh shit I gotta go my Dad isn’t gonna be happy he told me to be home right after school, but I waited so I could see you.”
“Yeah I gotta be goin too, but I will defiantly see you tomorrow.”

“Defiantly.” With that said Mara ran off in the general direction of her house. Smiling Dustin began walking toward the Blue Bay Harbor Mall where he had to meet his lab partners. It had been a long day, but he knew that he could at least get some entertaining conversation out of them.


“You think he’ll show?” asked a Philippino teen dressed in a red t-shirt, and kaki shorts.

“I hope he shows up. Well at least he better, we need to get this project done.” Responded an Asian teen dressed in blue jeans, and a lime green t-shirt.

“Come on guys, he’ll show. Plus I talked to Mara earlier she told me she was gonna wait for him after school.” said a blond girl wearing a blue jean mini skirt, and a light blue tank top.

“Awww, our little Dustin is growing up,” laughed the teen in red, as he reached for the pizza slice on his trey.

“Shane! Shut up, Dustin is a good guy. Mara and him should be together.” scoffed the girl in blue, punching the guy in red in the shoulder.

“Yeah, you should be happy for Dustin.” stated the Asian teen, as he looked at Shane in a disgusted manner.

“Well you know what Cameron, I don’t have to deal with this, same goes for you Victoria. I could just get up and leave right now.” Now everyone knew that this wasn’t true, Shane wasn’t about to get up and walk away from his lab partners even if they were ganging up on him. He had a strong sense of honor, even if he was a bit of a jerk sometimes. For the sake of being sarcastic Shane had called the two teens by their real names; they actually went by Cam, and Tori, respectively.

Cam was you typical nerd, shy, kept to himself, and he knew everything about computers, but couldn’t tell you the names of any of the football players in the NFL. Ironically he was a near expert when it came to the martial arts; however he never let anyone know it. Where as Tori was a surfer girl, and probably the most social teen at Blue Bay High. Even though she was a salacious bombshell to most of the boys at school, she didn’t use it to her advantage, in fact she didn’t think very much of her body at all. Tori had a lot of self asteam issues, because her father left her and her mom when she was very young. She often chalked it up to the fact that her father had married her mom when she was young and pretty, but then when she had a baby, and always looked haggard things changed. Which also meant Tori had a hard time trusting guys.

“Come on Shane. You know you want to stay with us,” teased Tori gently, as she took a bite of her salad.

“Yeah fine, he just better get here soon.”

“Well until then lets get started on the project,” stated Cam flatly, “I would like to get an A on this.”

“Yeah, yeah lets get goin.” Responded Shane. With that said the three teens began working on their project without Dustin, hoping that he would show up soon.


“Man those lights take forever,” thought Dustin as he began crossing the street. It had taken him 15 minutes to get from the school to the mall by foot normally he would have taken his car, but it was in the shop, and he couldn’t ride his bike on the road. “They are gonna kill me.”

Running as fast as he could Dustin made his was across the mall parking lot until he got 30 feet away from the entrance to the food court. That’s when he heard it, an explosion of epic proportion. “What the fuck was that!” thought the teen as he look around wildly, then it occurred to him the noise came from the mall itself. “Oh my god! Anything but terrorists.” And just as that thought raced across the teens mind he saw the food court wall begin to crumble from the force of the explosion. “NO!!!”

To be continued

Angelfox
04-13-2006, 11:35 AM
cool, we like it

WILDKAT
04-13-2006, 12:12 PM
Sweet! I like it! please write more!

mbozzo
04-13-2006, 10:00 PM
It's a good story. I like the guest appearance of the Karurangers of Aquatar in this story. We also meet Hunter and Blake earlier than in the real Ninja Strom series.