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NeoZeoRedRanger
03-28-2006, 06:30 PM
I loved PRLG, and I always wondered what happeded after the Rangers returned to Mirinoi after Trakeena's Revenge, so i wrote this, leave comments, i really want to know what you guys think.

Power Rangers Lost Galaxy: The Quasar Chronicles

Story
It’s been a few years since the Galaxy Rangers defeated Trakeena and saved the civilians of TerraVenture from harm; but now an old enemy has return, bent on destroying the Rangers and rebuilding his evil empire. The power of the Galaxy Rangers is needed once more. Join Leo, Damon, Kendrix, Maya, and Kai, as they reclaim their sabers to protect their home of Mirinoi. And this time, the Rangers will discover the secretes of the Sixth Quasar Saber; not to mention, facing their most formidable enemies, the Savage Rangers.


Episode 1:
Go Galactic Pt 1: The Mutiny Returns
As the peaceful planet of Mirinoi sits quietly is space, a dark, and familiar shadow makes its way from out of the emptiness towards the unsuspecting planet. As the shadow drew ever closer, it becomes clear on who inhabits this mysterious cloud. A monstrous craft emerged; it appeared to be a dark castle sitting atop of a large boat; in fact the castle was riding on the back of a pirate ship. It was the ruined base of the dreaded Captain Mutiny, who had somehow survived his encounter with Trakeena, and now was on his way to Mirinoi to seek revenge against the Galaxy Rangers for freeing his mining slaves and destroying his mighty empire.

“Barbarax, prepare the Swabbies for battle, we’re going to take this planet for our own and rebuild my glorious empire.” Mutiny exclaimed with excitement. “As you command Captain,” Barbarax answered. “And good news sir, there is one sign of those meddlesome Galaxy Rangers anywhere in the area.” “Excellent,” Mutiny said, “The time has finally come for this captain to rule the universe.”

Down on Mirinoi, we find in the woods on the outskirts of the capital city; Venture City, our former Rangers relaxing and reminiscing about their Ranger days, when Maya get an all-to-familiar feeling in her bones. “Hey Maya, you look troubled, what’s wrong?” Leo asked. Maya turned and looked at her friends, “An evil presence is getting close, really close. I think we should go and see Alpha.” “Good idea,” Kendrix said, “We can have Alpha do a scan of the surrounding area and planets. Anyway, it’s a good chance to see our old friend again.” The other Rangers agreed and they headed out.

Alpha 6, the little android who aided the Rangers back all the way from earth, was now in hiding, keeping a close eye on the Rangers Quasar Sabers, and the stone where they lay waiting; but the Rangers knew exactly where to find him. “Aye, Yi, Yi, Rangers! What are you doing here?” Alpha asked excitedly. “What, we can’t come by just to say hi to our old friend?” Leo said. “Leo, don’t be smart.” Kai started, “Maya had a feeling that something evil is headed towards Mirinoi. Could you check it out for us?” “Absolutely Rangers; just follow me!” Alpha said as he headed in to a darkened part of the woods. The Rangers followed, not knowing where Alpha was taking them.

Up in space Captain Mutiny was ready to begin his attack. “Barbarax now is the time, take the Swabbies down to the city and destroy it all!” The Captain ordered. “Yes sir!” Barbarax answered. “Your will shall be done.” With that said Barbarax teleported out with an army of Swabbies to Venture City; prepared everything and anything that stands in their way.

As the army arrived in the center of town, another familiar figure came out of an ally, confused and nervous to see the Swabbies attacking the city. It was Mike, Leo’s older brother and the former Magna Defender. “It’s not possible,” Mike said, “This can only mean, that Captain Mutiny is still alive! I’ve got to get to the others before the city is destroyed.” Mike rushed down another ally towards the wood where the others were relaxing. He reaches the camp site to find the Rangers gone. “Where could they have gone?” He thought to himself, “I better get back to town and do what I can do to stop the Swabbies, and hope the others return soon!”

The Rangers continue to follow Alpha through the woods, not knowing that the city they call there home is under attack.

To Be Continued.

Angelfox
03-28-2006, 10:44 PM
not bad...not bad at all

havemercy
03-28-2006, 11:54 PM
Bad ..... all bad ....

Angelfox
03-29-2006, 12:05 AM
Bad ..... all bad ....
im sorry did i give you the mistaken impression i asked or care what you think???? let me put this another way...this fic has started in a very good way..i see good things comin from this one if you stick with it:023: :023:

NeoZeoRedRanger
03-29-2006, 12:33 AM
his fic has started in a very good way..i see good things comin from this one if you stick with it:023: :023:
thanks :D
i'll be posting the next episode sometime later-on today

havemercy
03-29-2006, 09:24 AM
You didn't create a world for the reader to believe as real, or personalities, or anything. This is flat.

JCool21c
03-29-2006, 11:21 AM
Seems much much MUCH too rushed. This has potential, but you need to take the time to flesh it out more and immerse the reader much more fully into the storyline.

(nitpicking here, but every time a different person talks it's a good idea to break to a new paragraph, makes it easier to read).