Power Rangers SPD II: Futrue Force

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

Power Rangers
SPD II Future Force
Episode One: New Beginnings

Prologue

It has been 15 years since the Troobian’s defeat. Most has been peaceful. SPD B-Squad, consisting of Sky Tate the Red Ranger, Bridge Carson the Blue Ranger, Elizabeth “Z” Delgado the Yellow Ranger, and Sydney Drew the Pink Ranger, for 5 years, then a change. Come 2030, Jack Landors, B-Squad Red Ranger of 2025, rejoined as the Green Ranger.

Because of the peace, B-Squad was mainly used for missions to help other planets, as travel is much faster than it was 15 years ago. C-Squad, a special squad of cadets (no morphers), is those cadets sent out to fight those monsters who think they can succeed where Grumm failed.

Chapter One

“Happy birthday!” His friends shouted. Today, March 22, marks Kyle Landors’s, Jack and Z Landors’s son, 14th birthday. He was out in the park with Commander Katharine Manx and the rest of C-Squad (Sam, Ty, Lina, Marin, and Devin).

Kat grabbed a small present out of the pile and handed it to Kyle and said with a grin, “Happy Birthday Kyle.”

Kyle took the present and ripped off the SPD styled paper. Inside was a brown box, strapped with a centimeter tall layer of tape. Kyle ran his finger over the tape, as he did, it melted. He tore off the tape and opened the box to find an Orange badge.

“Thank you! But, don’t you-“ Before he could completely ask how is it that her suit still had a badge, the SPD Base’s alarms began to blare as a loud crash bellowed around them. Kat reached for her watch, pressed a button, and everyone was teleported to the Command Center.

They arrived in the Command Center, which Kat expanded a few years after Doggie's promotion. First thing, Kat rushed to the transmission screen and uttered a low "Uh no!"

"What's wrong Commander? Another robbery?" Devin asked, brushing her blonde hair from her eyes. "Should we get out there?"

"No. Much worse than a robbery!' Kat excalimed.


I have the next chapter somewhat typed. But I want to hear an opinion on this before posting what comes next. Note that not all chapters will be this short.

[havemercy]

Re-Beginnings? So New Beginnings didn't cross your mind as a title? Anyway, this story is awfully rushed without development on any points you mentioned post-Endings.

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

Re-Beginnings? So New Beginnings didn't cross your mind as a title? Anyway, this story is awfully rushed without development on any points you mentioned post-Endings.
Actually, I don't feel I'm rushing it, as this begging is suppose to be setting up the story, This is not near the main part of my story. And I chose Re-Begginnings because this story will be connected to the actual SPD. And the things I mentioned in the epiloge will be better explained soon (as in you will have a better idea of what C-Squad looks like and why Jack and Z aren't even at their own son's b-day). Believe me, it's not rushed. Maybe I should have posted the next chapter.

But I do see how it seems rushed. In fact, I will post the 2nd chapter so that people have a better idea.

[havemercy]

You missed my point. Re-Beginnings is an awful title. It's not even a real word. And that's this what C-Squad looks like business? Are you going to tell a story or just spill out ideas into typed characters like you've done thus far? Your "epilogue" is indication that anything that follows will be similar to what you just shared. You really should take your time and convince us that what you already established is believable and that it actually happened. I don't get that when I read your post.

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

You missed my point. Re-Beginnings is an awful title. It's not even a real word. And that's this what C-Squad looks like business? Are you going to tell a story or just spill out ideas into typed characters like you've done thus far? Your "epilogue" is indication that anything that follows will be similar to what you just shared. You really should take your time and convince us that what you already established is believable and that it actually happened. I don't get that when I read your post.
Katastrophy isn't a real word either.
What they look like as in who they are. They only thing you know is there names (except Sam; age in Kyle's case). I'm working on the story.

Wait, epiloge. I just reliezed that's the end. It should be prolgge. In time I've been working on tihs, I just now dawns on me. Good thing this is only the beginning of the story.

Anyways, it will become a better fan fic soon. How many things start out with the main story? As I said, this is the starter (not to mention first chapter). Give it a chance to actually work. Did you honestly think I would start the main part of the story to start now?

BTW, thank you for trying to help.

[BattleRanger]

Futrue Force ... so true ...

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

Chapter Two

“A giant robot is attacking the city,” said Kat. Devin couldn’t tell if she was more worried than her voice sounded.

“Why you worried? B-Squad can handle it.” Devin tried to reassure.

“Yeah, have the B-Squad use the Swat Megazord!” said Sam.

“B-Squad is dealing with a break in at the SPD Headquarters. I’ll try and contact them” Kat replied, setting up a communication to the Headquarters.

Fortunately, Supreme Commander Cruger answers immediately.

“What’s wrong Kat?” asked Cruger, who was in his ranger form.

“A robot is attacking the city. We need the rangers.” Kat replied.

“The range...” Cruger stopped talking as a confused look appeared on her face. “What’s wrong Kat?”

“The robot. It’s gone. I can’t find a trace of it. Just send the rangers when they are ready.”

“Of course Kat. Good-Bye.” Cruger then hung up and Kat turned to the Cadets.

“Robots don’t just disappear. Are you sure it’s gone?” asked Sam.

“It’s gone. I think this is a warning. I want you six to be on your guard. You’re dismissed,” said Kat

The rangers saluted and left the command center.

“This is to weird. I agree Kat.” Devin said.

As the Cadets entered the living space, they found Boom sitting on the couch, reading what looked like a book filled with schematics.

“What are you doing in here Boom? I thought you retired,” said Ty, going over and sitting next to Boom. Lina sat on the other side. Marin, Devin and Sam, and Kyle sat in the soft, cushiony chairs.

“No way. I’ve been working on some ideas to help SPD.. I just have't showed myself much this past couple months.” Boom said, lifting the book and showing the schematics. “I thought that, with the rangers gone so much, if something were to arise, you 6 might need some assictance. By the way, happy birthday Kyle.”

At this, Kyle nodded and replied, “Thanks Boom. You know about the supposed robot attacking the city? -“ Boom nodded “well, Kat thinks it’s a sign of someone trying to draw us out. In fact, maybe if this happens again, we might become rangers.”

“Possibly. I mean, our powers are starting to really develop,” said Marin

“What are your powers?” asked Boom, looking at all the Cadets.

In turn they told them. Sam had telekinetic powers. Kyle has he power of fire or heat. Kyle also had the power to duplicate things, possibly a modified adaptation of Z’s power to duplicate herself. Ty actually didn’t have powers, but very skilled at martial arts. Marin could read minds. Lina could also read minds, which gave Marin and Lina hours of fun. Devin also has no powers, yet is very strategic.

“Well, I wish you good luck,” said Boom. He stood up and walked to the door. Before he exited, he heard Lina speak.

“Boom, why did you come to SPD? And what are you working on?” she asked.

Boom turned on his heel and looked at her. She could tell this question puzzled him.

“SPD helped me by stopping a monster from killing my parents, so I want to come and try to be a ranger, so to help them too.. Of course, I don’t have any special powers, so I’m not that good a fighter. Not that you need powers to bee good. What am I working on you ask? Hopefully, something that will benefit us.” With that, he left.
How strange. Thought Sam.



Anyone think they can figure out why Boom said the rangers are gone all the time when they don't need to be? We know there are rangers (weither SPD or not) on other planets. As I'm re-doing this story from my written version, so I'm still working on chp 3. But it should be up tomarrow. Thank you to those who have read this.

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

Futrue Force ... so true ...
I fixed that, but it won't show the correction on the main page. One spelling mistake...geez

[BattleRanger]

lol, it happens. You need to find a mod to fix that for you. Its so glaring, lol, but we all do it.

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

lol, it happens. You need to find a mod to fix that for you. Its so glaring, lol, but we all do it.
True, true. What do you think of the fanfic so far?

[BattleRanger]

Tell ya what, I'll shoot straight from the hip. I've said it before, I'll say it again. There is way more to writing a fanfic besides just having a story or an idea. You have to come prepared. You have to plan. You have to have an idea of where your story is going and what's gonna happen with your characters. Nothing leaves a bitter taste in my mouth like fanfics that's basically written three minutes after watching some episode of PR that's inspired them. They wanna carry on a story, they wanna make a sequel like yourself is doing with SPD or they wanna write a different PR Story like Power Rangers: Solar ZEO Force or something. That's good. But you can't just leave it there and write a little premise and design some little suits and call yourself a fanfic writer. There's more to it. Not everyone is a writer. Just because you've got a story to tell doesn't mean you should. That being said, you should do your own thing and do what makes you happy. But unless you follow some basic, fundamental, universal concepts like planning and committment to a story, then you will fall on your face. People on Rangerboard aren't gonna sugar-coat it for ya.

As far as your fic goes, to me, I'm sorry if this hurts, but its another SPD sequel. It doesn't move forward, it moves backwards. You have Jack rejoin because you want him to. But you haven't gotten inside his character and thought, "Would Jack really come back?" .

[Mystic_Pikachu010]

Honestly?
Honestly. I there is something seriously wrong, I wanna know, that way as to make sure it don't happen in future chapters. This is my first Power Ranger fanfic.

[sbb1513]

this is pretty good

Bubblez

[Angelfox]

You missed my point. Re-Beginnings is an awful title. It's not even a real word. And that's this what C-Squad looks like business? Are you going to tell a story or just spill out ideas into typed characters like you've done thus far? Your "epilogue" is indication that anything that follows will be similar to what you just shared. You really should take your time and convince us that what you already established is believable and that it actually happened. I don't get that when I read your post.
gotta agree with havemercy on that one...that is a bad title..has for your charaters, we're sure they'll flush out over time, and Katastrophe was very well chosen has a title..it was an acroynm for Kat, not only has a trophy but has a catastrophy for Doggie Cruger,that was very well done on that title
:023: back to the story, we see lots of potential for this, and a word of advice, have someone other than you proofread your work, so spelling mistakes and other such word errors in there...:023: :023:

[Angelfox]

Tell ya what, I'll shoot straight from the hip. I've said it before, I'll say it again. There is way more to writing a fanfic besides just having a story or an idea. You have to come prepared. You have to plan. You have to have an idea of where your story is going and what's gonna happen with your characters. Nothing leaves a bitter taste in my mouth like fanfics that's basically written three minutes after watching some episode of PR that's inspired them. They wanna carry on a story, they wanna make a sequel like yourself is doing with SPD or they wanna write a different PR Story like Power Rangers: Solar ZEO Force or something. That's good. But you can't just leave it there and write a little premise and design some little suits and call yourself a fanfic writer. There's more to it. Not everyone is a writer. Just because you've got a story to tell doesn't mean you should. That being said, you should do your own thing and do what makes you happy. But unless you follow some basic, fundamental, universal concepts like planning and committment to a story, then you will fall on your face. People on Rangerboard aren't gonna sugar-coat it for ya.

As far as your fic goes, to me, I'm sorry if this hurts, but its another SPD sequel. It doesn't move forward, it moves backwards. You have Jack rejoin because you want him to. But you haven't gotten inside his character and thought, "Would Jack really come back?" .
well said, couldnt agree more