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KingRed
12-10-2005, 02:27 PM
Chouoh Sentai Hollanger is written by MPD, aka Michel Peter Dijkhuizen
All credits go to him. Just posting this for him.

Chouoh Sentai Hollanger
Episode 1: “Call of the Christ”
Opening Theme: Nightwish – Wish I had an Angel


“How long was it ago... 2 years, 3 years... I dunno anymore... But I do remember the war me and my friends where involved in... Well friends??? In the beginning I was acting on my own, never accepting the help of the others... But in the end we joined hand’s and forces to save the planet Earth from him... Let me tell you this story”

In outer space, a dark colored castle is flying towards a small little blue planet in the Milky Way Galaxy...

“Earth... Finally... After that bloodied spell that forced me to go into outer space to rot away like trash has finally gotten rid off...” a dark voice crackled as his entire body was invisible in the shadow’s

“Master... We are coming closer to the planet’s surface” a familiar voice replied as it looked at the image screen “Good to hear my loyal servant... Oh look... Your old master’s ship or castle... Whatever is left of it...” the dark voice said emotionless

“Doctor Blackthorn... I have served him for years, only ending up death in his niece clutches” the familiar voice replied with hate in his voice “You really need to control your anger... Be glad that you are reborn Ketamax”

“Ketamax... The first and also loyal General from our enemies forces... We have battled him much more then any of the Kamata’s his master has sent after us... We have never thought that we would eventually end up almost death thanks to that guy”

The strange warrior slowly emerges from the shadows, stepping into a little ray of light, revealing itself as the once loyal warrior Ketamax... Now in a new body

“I live to serve you Lord Gomatré” Ketamax said while kneeling in front of the, in shadows covered, villain who was simply laughing

“Uhng... Lord Gomatré... His name strikes fear into the hearts of million’s... Legend’s told that he was trained by a very powerful warlock called Lord Zarock... But that is just a legend... Lord Gomatré is even worse then Blackthorn was to the Angloman team, I can tell...”

“Very good... Now tell me Ketamax... What are you going to do next...” “I haven’t thought on that part yet my Lord, but which country do you wish to attack???” “That is very easy Ketamax... My goal is to gain the Recygro substance and in order to get that I need to mix Athzeron with poisoned sea water... Great Britannia might have a lot of Athzeron, but the lands are to high for the sea water to reach... Plus those blasted Angloman are still protecting that country” Lord Gomatré explained his servant

“Recygro... I don’t know much about that, only thing that I do know is that Lord Gomatré wants it to crush the Earth... Why you ask??? I don’t know the answer”

“So in other words... You wish to attack the Netherlands???” Ketamax asked confused

“Yes I do Ketamax... Yes I do... Here, catch” Lord Gomatré chuckled as he threw a little piece of paper at Ketamax who catch it “Use the spell’s written on that scroll... It will come very handy considering that you are an undead warrior, you are also capable of summoning long death warriors from far beyond the grave” Gomatré continued

“Go ahead and summon an army of grunt soldiers... I COMMAND YOU!!!” the shrouded villain shout’s as his right arm becomes visible in the little ray of light, a hand with a black glove and a strange looking piece of rope wrapped around the arm itself with a black colored sleeve while holding a strange looking staff with a pentagram placed on top of it, pointing it at Ketamax who quickly cowers from the scepter and kneels, knowing what the scepter can do to him since it was the same scepter that brought him back to life

“Yes master... Cominú... Astreah... Noctroloca... Shincros... Cimun! By these words I command you all to be reborn again from the ashes that destroyed you... Now comfort warriors by the name Ketatraxes” Ketamax calmly spoke the words as lightning and thunder hit the entire corridor as several phoenixes arises from where the lightning hit the ground, creating several warriors who looked like Merlin the Wizard, only more demonical like who all are carrying smaller version’s of the scepter from Lord Gomatré as their faces where covered by mask’s, presenting the face of a phoenix

“Excellent word Ketamax... Now chant a spell over Denmark, France and Great Britain NOW” “Yes Master, I will get right to it” “Good... Without those 3 countries to interfere with MY plan’s, the Benelux will crumble at my feet... Now where is the weak spot of the Netherlands... Ah yes, but off course... The Dam’s” Lord Gomatré laughed maniacal as the image screen showed the Dam’s build at the west coast of the Netherlands, protecting the small country from the North Sea

“Samtrá... Ketrá... Eliasá... Blackná! By these words I command to create 3 dark magic like barriers around the countries of France, Denmark and Great Britain to keep the good guys locked up in their own country!!!” Ketamax chanted the dark barrier spell over the 3 countries in Europe, making sure that the 3 Sentai team’s from those countries will not go to the Benelux

“Stage 1 of my plan is complete... I am very proud Ketamax... Now, take some Ketatraxes with you and attack the Dam’s at the place called Zandvoort!!!” Lord Gomatré yell’s without hesitation at his General

“It shall be done” the cold villain warrior priest bow’s as he and several Ketatraxes vanishes towards Earth, in a stroke of lighting and a ray of black magic
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*Great Britain
In the office of the Minister of Military defences, Caster was sitting their, reading his papers as a female Bio-Android or Bio-Humanoid enters the room

“Professor... professor” “What is it Belle?” “Professor... The entire country of Britain is shrouded by a powerful Barrier” Belle quickly replies at her creator/father

“WHAT! Don’t tell me that Blackthorn has survived?” Caster look’s up in surprise at his mechanical daughter

“No professor... It is not Blackthorn... This barrier is different to the 1 Blackthorn used, this barrier is created by a very powerful spell...” “So another thread has come to take over Great Britain... Are the Angloman rounded up” “I’m afraid not... This barrier is somehow enabling us to make contact with the 7 Angloman’s” “7 Angloman’s??? Where is Green Dublin then” “Professor... He is waiting outside... He and I were about to go to the movies until we noticed the strange barrier”

“I see... Thanks for telling my daughter” Caster said as his ‘daughter’ left the room as Caster smiled a little, only to look stern and pushed a button on his desk

“Put up a com link to France... Now” Caster commanded “Yes sir” a female voice replied
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*France

“Monsieur... Somebody wants to speak to you over the com link” a female android said trough a com link “Transmit it then please Margarine” “Oui Monsieur Prodesseur Aristide” the android replied as the com link was opened between the professor and Caster

“Aaaaaaaaah Monsieur Caster... How can I be of service?” “Professor Aristide Brugonde... Long time no talk... Listen closely... Is your country also trapped by a strange barrier?” Caster asked trough the com link

“Mai oui Monsieur Caster... Our scientist’s are already working as hard as possible with taking down this strange force field... It has struck our Eiffel Towér which is giving the France 5 and our nemesis a hard time fighting... We do not know why we are trapped now... Why do you ask???” “Because Great Britain is also struck by this strange phenomenon... Do you have any idea who did this?” “Mai no Caster... I haven’t gotten a clue... But I wonder why the Benelux isn’t struck by this force field” “Benelux? Dear god no...” “You have an idea why monsieur Caster?” Brugonde asked polite while getting angry as well

“I think because of the Netherlands... Their has being Aztheron discovered in the ground’s, not as much as Great Britain, but enough for a small country like that... Brugonde, when will your team be able of going to the Benelux?” “With our current rate, I’d say never monsieur Caster” “Darn it... I better report to the queen’s as fast as possible... Brugonde... Good luck in the battle against Glou Man Chou and may France be forever protected” “Merci Monsieur Caster... And good luck to you and your old team Angloman as well” Brugonde replied as the com link was terminated

“I hope that the Benelux has their own fighting force... Because I believe that this is going to become the end of us all” Caster said worried as he walked out of his office, towards the Queen of England
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*The Netherlands

In the capital city of the region called ‘Friesland’ called Leeuwarden, in a small church...

“And now... Let us pray to the lord” the priest of the church said as every body in the church folded their hands and started to say their prays to GOD and his son Jesus...

All except for 1 person, who is seeing something very strange ‘behind’ his eyes

“Darkness will fall across the land, the stench of evil of a thousand years ago has risen once again... Death is coming closer to all you non believers... Only YOU can save us... Find the Forge Disc of Fire... Find it and use it... You are destined to become Red Christ”

“WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!” a young boy from around the age of 19 screamed as he opened his eyes

“Jeremy Maximillian Groensma... What is this for a joke... Why do you interrupt the messages to our Father???” the priest said angered, looking at the boy

“I... I am sorry father Harris, but I just have gotten the weirdest dream... Something about Red Christ or something” “Red Christ??? Jeremy, will you please stay here after we are finished???” “Yes father Harris” Jeremy replied with his head turning red from embarrassment

Some time later, in the office from Father Harris

“So, you have gotten the vision... Why am I not surprised” “What do you mean Father???” “I mean that you are destined to use the Forge Disc of Fire, also called the Fire Shield” “A Fire Shield???” Jeremy looked up surprised with big eyes at Father Harris

“Follow me then Jeremy... It is time I am afraid” Father Harris replied as the 2 went to the basement of the church, towards a secret chapel beneath the church
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“It feels good to be back on Earth again... How I missed this Earth... Right then... Ketatraxes... DESTROY THEM DAM’S!!!” Ketamax shout’s out loud at his grunt army who all nodded as they all started to run towards the Dam’s

“Ready... Alright troops... FIRE!!!” a general of the Dutch military forces cries out as the soldiers start’s to shoot at the invading grunt force from the reborn Ketamax

“Foolish human soldiers... DESTROY THEM!!!” Ketamax shout’s out loud as his grunt force start’s to attack in great numbers, killing many soldiers on the battle field with little to no attack’s

“Sir... We are losing to many troops” “I know... But we have to keep on fighting, if Premier Balkenende is right, then we are in deep ****” the General replied
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*At the same time

Jeremy and Father Harris are walking in a great corridor full with mural’s, telling many legend’s and of team’s that once were and have yet to come as they approached a great wooden door with a strange looking symbol placed on it

“It has being a long time since I was here” “What do you mean Father Harris???” “I mean that the last time I was here was the day that the church was being build” Father Harris explained as he pushed the great door open, revealing a room which was lit with fire, colored mostly orange with red shades as in the centre a strange looking shrine was placed with the same symbol placed on the wooden door, lying in front of it

“What is this place Father Harris???” Jeremy asked scared as the 2 walked further into the Great Chamber of Fire

“This place, my child, is called the Sanctuary of Fire... That shrine is called a Forge, but it is not active” “So how do we activate it then???” “You have received a vision send from this place, only you can activate it... Many had tried before you and failed... If I am right, then you are this countries only hope” Father Harris continued

“Only hope??? What do you mean??? Please... Tell me” Jeremy plead against the Father, but the priest guided the youth to the strange looking symbol

“Stand on top of the symbol Jeremy... If I am right, then the energy inside the forge will be re awakened once again. If that happens, then you must put your left hand into the energy” “Kay” Jeremy nodded as he did what he was told, as he walked closer towards the symbol, a spark was activated in the Forge as it started to grow with every step Jeremy made. Finally Jeremy stood on top of the symbol as the energy inside the Forge was glowing brightly as the young lad placed his left hand into the Forge...

All of the sudden, the fire around the room started to twist and turn like mad as it was absorbed by the Forge itself, sending it’s own energy and the fire trough the body of Jeremy who was looking afraid, but at the same time he knew that this was his destiny.

Finally the energy inside the Forge died as the fire was acting normal again, as Jeremy looked at his wrist’s to see 2 shield shaped devices as he was holding a disc with the same symbol placed on it just like on the door and in front of the Forge

“Amazing” the 2 said simultaneous as all of the sudden the same Forge send out an image screen of a sort, showing an intense battle in Zandvoort between the military forces from the Netherlands and the dark grunt forces from Ketamax

“Oh No...” Father Harris said concerned as the Forge all of the sudden opened some sort of a portal

“I have to go... And fight them head on” Jeremy said with courage in his voice

“Are you sure you can handle it my son” “I am sure... They need my help” “Very well then... Go and may GOD, Jesus and the Holy Ghost guide and help you” Father Harris said as Jeremy ran trough the portal, with the disc still in his hand’s, getting transported to the beach of Zandvoort
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“So... The Forge of Fire is activated... It is time to accent into battle” Lord Gomatré said as his face became visible in the light. His face was mostly covered by a mask on his right side of the face, his left side of his face was scarred as his left eye was glowing black and purple while his long, black, raven like hair was put together in a ponytail that was colored black with red streaks as the dark villain disappeared in a gust of black wind towards Earth.

“I have made it... Now to go and to stop them... Whatever they are” Jeremy said as he came out of the portal which closed right after him as he started to look around the place, only to get zapped by a dark blue colored blast from higher ground as Jeremy is knocked into the sand he was walking on, looking up to where or who has fired that attack

“Welcome their young child... I am so happy that you have come” “Who are you” Jeremy yells up at the in black waist coat dressed villain with a shoulder armor attachment on his left shoulder, spiked leg armor attachment’s on his lower leg’s, dark black boot’s, black gloves and a dark brown colored rope wrapped around his right arm as he is holding the scepter of the Devil

“I am Lord Gomatré. Warlord and Warlock in 1 and the future ruler of all the galaxies, once I have crushed this planet from it’s Recygro” “Recygro??? I do not know what that is, but you have NO right of attacking my home country like that” “I don’t??? Well that is to bad, because I always get what I want... Take THIS!!!” Lord Gomatré yelled angered as he fired a very darkened black energy blast right at Jeremy, engulfing him in the pain as he uses the Disc to protect himself with no avail

“I must stop him... But how... Hunggggg... Huh??? Chouoh Holland Henshin???” Jeremy looked in surprised at the inscription written on the disc before being send into the sea by the attack from the evil Warlock

“Their... That takes care of everything and... What is that” Lord Gomatré quickly said surprised as he feel’s a strange rumbling as he sees a red shadow emerging from out of the water, as a red warrior jump’s out of the water with silver colored shoulder pat’s and a visor that resembles the cross with Jesus Christ nailed onto it

“What in the name of the devil...” Lord Gomatré said as he was kicked back by the warrior before he could finish his sentence

“I am the fire that will stop you at all cost... I am Red Christ” he exclaimed as he stood in a battle stance while a red explosion occurred behind him

“Well well well... Red Christ heh... I am not even surprised... Well then... Prepare to be destroyed by my powers” Lord Gomatré yelled as he charged against Red Christ, tackling him in the progress before striking him with his scepter across his chest, sending him flying into the sand below

“Hahahahaha... I can’t remember when was the last time that I had so much fun” Lord Gomatré laughed as he blasted another ray of energy at the falling hero who quickly jump’s over the attack, only to side kick the villain in his stomach, sending him flying a few yards back before landing on the ground

“MAN... That was easy...” Red Christ said as he turned around to run to the dam’s, only to get blasted very hard in the back, sending him crashing into a hard sand like wall

“Pathetic fool... Now you will DIE!!!” Lord Gomatré all of the sudden said as he stood on the back of Red Christ, striking his scepter into the left arm of the red colored hero, blood spurting out of the wound as Red Christ scream’s it out in pain, spin kicking the villain of his back as he slowly stood up, his right hand holding the wound tight on his left arm while breathing heavy

“Hahahahaha... Fool... Now you will end” “NEVER!!!” Red Christ yell’s as all of the sudden an image of the Bible appeared in front of his visor, opening as it show’s him a weapon that is stored in his left holster as he grab the weapon, fold down the sides of the shield as a barrel emerges and fires many energy disc’s rapidly against Lord Gomatré, sending him crashing into the sandy dunes

“Not bad Red Christ... I have found this battle very amusing... Until next time young one” Lord Gomatré said almost sounding happy as he disappeared out of sight
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*Meanwhile at the Dam’s of Zandvoort

The military forces are losing more ground with every second as more then the half of all the squadron’s are totally death while the grunt’s are still moving closer, their scepters already aimed at the Dam’s, waiting for the commend to fire

“Sir... We can’t hold them of much longer” “I know soldier... This is the end people, may GOD have mercy upon us” the General said as Ketamax was simply laughing his head off

“Alright, enough of the laughter... Ketatraxes... Ready... Aim... Fi...” Ketamax said as he was interrupted by a ray of red energy being blasted at him from behind

“WHAT THE!!!” Ketamax shouted angered as he looked behind to see Red Christ running at him, the Shield Gun pointing at him while his right hand was placed onto his left arm

“Ketamax... Return to the Castle of lost Hope... NOW” Lord Gomatré yell’s at Ketamax trough telepathy as Ketamax did what he was told and thus vanishes into the thin air while the Ketatraxes are looking confused before starting to run at Red Christ, ready to strike him head on with their Blade Scepters

“Man... Here we go then” Red Christ said heavily as he took aim and started firing at the grunt’s, taking them down 1 by 1 until the firing stops

“What the... Out of ammo??? Great” Red Christ replied sarcastic as yet again a Bible image appears in front if the visor, opening and revealing the cross with Jesus nailed on it while under the image the word’s ‘Fired up’ flashes by

“I hope that it work’s... Hung... I can use all the help I can get” Red Christ said with pain as he put the Shield Gun back in the holster while the grunt’s are moving in closer

“Here goes nothing... FIRED UP!!!!!!!!!!” Red Christ scream’s as his visor glows red only to fire out a flaming image of his visor as he grab hold of the item. As he grab the item, the fire died and in return a solid, golden weapon with a brown grip was shown as a silver blade emerged on the edge of the item, with a flaming design drawn onto the blade

“Chouoh Christ Sword... POWER UP!!!!!!!!!!” Red Christ yell’s as he start’s to run with every amount of strength he still have in his body as he strikes at a grunt twice, setting it on fire as Red Christ keep’s on running, slashing away with every ounce of strength before striking the blade into the ground to catch his breath while looking behind to see half of the grunt’s still standing

“dam it... Their must be a way of getting rid of them... Without running like a mad man” Red Christ said while breathing heavy as the grunt’s start’s to run at him like crazy, their weapon’s swinging above their head’s...

“Here we go again and huh???” Red Christ said surprised as yet again the bible image appeared, flashing word’s in a rapid speed

“Religion Fire Forge Slash??? Well it is worth a shot... Here GOES NOTHING!!!” Red Christ yelled as he held his sword very tight with both his hands as his visor was burning in red fire

“RELIGION FIRE FORGE SLASH!!!” Red Christ cried out as the blade was engulfed in red fire as Red Christ made a big circle as he slashed 3 times from the centre of the circle, creating the Fire Forge symbol as he slashed trough all the remaining grunt’s with 1 blow as they all exploded as Red Christ turned around and made a vink mark as the blade slowly lost it’s red glow as the explosion became even bigger and louder
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*Meanwhile...

Up high in space, in the Castle of lost Hope, Ketamax comes walking into the main corridor of his master

“Sire, why did you summoned me back from the battle? I could have crushed that Red Warrior with my bare hands” Ketamax said angered

“Don’t YOU DARE TO CHALLENGE MY AUTHORITY!!!” Lord Gomatré yelled furious as he zapped Ketamax with his scepter, forcing the undead warrior to his knees

“My... Apologies... My LORD!!!” Ketamax scream’s in pain

“Good... Now be gone... I will summon you when I need you got that” “Yes sire” Ketamax said as he stood up in pain and slowly walked towards his part of the castle

“Soon Red Christ... Very soon... We will meet again and then I will destroy you... But for now I want you to become stronger... HAhahahahahahahaha” Lord Gomatré started laughing as he was looking at the image screen on his thrown...
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Next Time on Chouoh Sentai Hollanger:
Lord Gomatré is amused by the little fight he had against Red Christ as he discovers a interesting power source which is much the same as the 1 from Red Christ as he orders Ketamax to send down a Kamata monster to not only destroy the Dam’s, but also to destroy the Forge Disc of Water. Can Red Christ make it in time to destroy this monster thread? Or will a new hero emerges from the watery grave??? All this and maybe even more in the next episode entitled “Forge Disc of Water has come”

Ending Theme: HIM – Please don’t let it go

rangermaster
12-11-2005, 06:38 PM
Awesome. This is an awesome fanfiction. I'm totally hooked.