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Rita_lives
12-07-2005, 02:42 AM
ok here is goes... I decide that i would join in on the fun and remake my favorite series: ZYURANGER!
I really dont think i can write that well but ok... I will enjoy any comments bad and good. Dont hold back! O yeah the story will kinds start out like Zyuranger did but it will change with time! Ok now, here it goes:

“Zeon Dinosaur Rangers” (Sorry, I just liked Zeon Dinosaur Rangers...)

Episode 1: Awaken, Prehistoric heroes!
Today on Zeon Dinosaur Rangers Bandora, an intergalactic witch escapes from her prison and she is not at all happy. However, down on earth five warriors are awakening from a deep slumber. Can the warriors stop Bandora? Find out today on Zeon Dinosaur Rangers!
A war broke out many years ago...

A war of Satan VS God. I went on for years until it ended with the

death of all the dinosaurs and the imprisonment of Satan’s best witch,

Bandora, She was locked away with her minions and they were long since

forgotten.

Each kingdom placed their heirs in suspended animation and granted

them the powers of the five dinosaur Shuugozyuus. Geki of the Yamato

kingdom was entrusted the power of Tyrannosaurus, Goushi of the Sharma

kingdom was given the power of the Mammoth, Dan of the Etof kingdom was

granted the Triceratops’ power, Boi of the Daim kingdom gained the strength

of the saber-toothed tiger, and Mei of the Risha kingdom was given the

power of the pterodactyl. They were to be watched over by Barza, a great

white wizard. The year 2006 marks the year of the return of Bandora and the

hell that is her legacy..

Barza, who is now an owner of a great hotel, sits out side of his

hotel watching on as time passes him by. He is an old man in a brown

baseball cap and overalls he watches a large group of Japanese

schoolchildren lead by their teacher passes him. They walk up to a store

window and watch through it in amazement. Confusion and curiosity hits him

like a bag of bricks. He gets up out of his chair and walks up to them. He also

looks through the window to find a large TV screen broadcasting a shuttle

launch. It is already in space and the TV is getting a view from inside the

space shuttle.

“We have only been in space a few minutes and we are already 300

miles away from Nemesis’s atmosphere.” An astronaut’s voice boom from the

TV. Shock spreads over Barza’s face like cancer. He runs to his hotel trying

not to fall. He is quickly out of breath as fear enters him. He quickly runs up

the fire escape making his way up to the roof.

Up in space the space shuttle quickly speeds at the speed of light

towards Nemesis. Inside is a twelve-year-old boy, his sister and two men.

The boy walks up to his father with a smile on his face.

“How long till we get to Nemesis?” The boy asks.

“About a half an hour or less.” His father tells him. “I don’t think it

will be that long because we seem to be caught in gravitational pull to it.”

The father says looking back at them worried.

“Will we be able to land alright?” The other astronaut asks.

“I think we will it looks like we can.” He says smiling a fake smile.

The spacecraft speeds toward the dead planet picking up speed.

Back on earth Barza’s ear grows to revel a pointed ear able to hear

anything. He over hears their conversations as the get closer and closer to

Nemeses.

Down on the planet’s surface the land is dead and forgotten.

Nothing but sand and rocks. The planet is filled with a melancholy

atmosphere. The only thing not dead on the surface of this dead plant is the

containment vessel where Bandora and her crew were thrown away in. The

wind begins to pick up as the large space shuttle begins to fly into the

atmosphere of Nemeses. They come crashing down near the containment

vessel that is halfway buried in the sand of Nemesis. The two men emerge

from the shuttle fully clothed in space suites.

"Hey, do you smell something funny?" One Astronaut asks.

"Nah, maybe it's your spacesuit." The other one responds. Alight in

the distance flashes.

"I think it's coming from there!" He says They slowly walk toward

the containment vessel as the jewel on the lid begins to glow as if calling

their names.

"Yeah, now I smell it!"

"Check it out! Looks like a big trash can!"

"Wow, it's so big! Let's open 'er up!" The Astronauts remove the lid,

and The father slowly reaches out toward it and unlocks it. The ground

begins to rumble as laughter fills the air and streaks of light fly out.

"Hey, what's that?"

"I'm not waiting to find out!" The father says as they flee from the

vessel

One beam of light dies to show Bandora’s personal bodyguard. He

spreads his wings and lets out a monstrous growl. He is covered from head to

toe in golden armor. He is a lion-faced griffin knight who wields the

Grifocaliber IV sword & can fly by the help of his large raven like wings.

グリフォーザー

(Goldar)

Another light disappears and a wingless vampire bat monster

appears. He is a scatterbrain alien alchemist. He begins to look around

shocked by how much has not changed.

トット・パッ

(Baboo)

Baboo’s leisurely hobgoblin partner appears. Squatt sneezes as snot

slowly runs donw his nose. He has a large purse and armed with the

Bukkrapper pistol

ブック・バック

(Squatt)

An ingenious monster-maker emerges from a beam of light Finster

begins to look through his magnifying glass at all the asteroids that have hit

at them over the years.

プリプリカン

(Finster)

"Hey, Bandora, wake up! Come on, come on! We're free!" Squatt

Screams.

"Oh, after 10,000 years, it's good to be free again." Finster says

smiling.

A witch emerges from the vessel as she stretches out her arms

letting out a large yawn. She laughs to herself as she spots the astronauts.

Her hair was styled in two cones wrapped in brown cloth on her head looking

like horns. An encircling neckpiece, bordered with large blue spikes, lay on her

shoulders. She has make up covering her wrinkled Asian face with eyes

embellished with neat make up, and lips painted to perfection, she is roughly

thirty billion years of age An elegant gown, decorated with golden swirls, fits

her body, and on the chest she wears a cone bra, also with golden design.

She clutches a large staff with a red jewel in the middle of an outsized ring

resembling the moon. She turns with pleasure to see her henchmen.

魔人・バンドーラ

(Bandora)

"Ugh, morning breath! Here's a mint!" Squatt says looking in his

purse. Baboo then smacks Squatt telling him he needs to shut up.

“It is time for our return!” Bandora says looking up at earth as she

tries to get out. “I tried to take over earth long ago now I will finish what I

started.” Bandora says as she looks up at earth.

"Let me help you, o powerful one.” Baboo says helping Bandora out

of dumpster. “Walk with me, talk with me…”

"Ugh, you made me step in a puddle, you idiot. Out of my way,

monkeyface!" Bandora screams as she blasts dumpster with wand She

watches as the Astronauts try to scramble away.

"So you want help getting away, do you? I think I can arrange

that.” Bandora screams. Then anger spreads on her face as she looks down

to the astronauts. She begins to laugh catching them off guard. She

suddenly stops, letting out an acid breath blowing them off into space. Their

screams echoes back to the space ship. A smile spreads on her face. “To

celebrate our freedom, I think we should pay the Earth a visit, and then

destroy it!"

“Long live, Bandora.” Bandora’s henchmen say together as they

hold there fists up in her honor. Bandora’s mouth spreads wider into a large

evil smile as she holds her wand up and sends a beam to earth.

The streets of Dawson Springs begin to crumble, buildings begin to

move, one even flies up in the air, and many people begin to evacuate to the

south side of the city. Just then the building the same building that flew up

into the sky come crashing down to earth at a fast pace. Just then, it

crashes down to earth and on top of the enormous skyscraper is a large

castle a huge, spiky, demonic looking fortress. It has a glowing neon sign

above its doors: Bandora palace. Just then out of the balcony comes

Bandora on a bike she begins to laugh at the frightened humans that look at

her in fear and confusion. Out comes another creature, Goldar, He has

extended his wings again and now begins to fly.

“Your world will be mine in a matter of seconds!” Bandora says as

she begins to points her finger at many of the humans. She blasts at many

buildings in one blast sending panic in the heart of the citizens of Dawson

Springs. All the TV’s in Dawson Springs where broadcasting the attacks.

Barza is watching the attack through a window of an electronic store. He

looks at the TV as if he knew of this all a long. He runs away to a building

leavening Bandora to attack all that she can.

“Bandora, you must stop this at once!” The old Man says

commanding the evil witch. He is standing on top on a roof of a building.

“It is you!” Bandora screams at him. “I now it is you Barza You

don’t have to hide under all that human stuff!” Barza spins reveling he is the

snow wizard Bandora battled long ago. He points his staff at her.

Nevertheless, she points hers back and blasts.

“I will take care of you Barza!” Bandora screams. “But before I do I

want to show you my new prisoners.” Bandora begins to cackle and she

extends her wand reveling a screen showing the boy and his sister still in

their space ship. “The space shuttle has been shrunk down to travel size so

it will be easier to destroy.” Bandora begins to laugh at her joke but then her

bike then begins to fall from low power. She lets out a scream, which causes

her titan warrior, Goldar, to fly to catch her in one hand and her bike in

another. His raven like wings carries them to the safety of their palace.

Bandora is now staring down at her Warrior Goldar . He is on one

knee bowing to her.

“My Magic has thinned over the years we were in that vessel; I will

have to rest until I have enough powers to crush the universe. I shall send

Goldar and the Golems to attack earth.” Bandora announces to her evil mob

of space aliens. “Golems arise!” Bandora says Just then the ground shacks

and 5-inch clay people begin to dance around. The many citizens of Dawson

Springs let their guard down and think the mini people are cute. Just then the

mini clay people grow into monsters clay rocky figures, their eyes are red

their face is emotionless. Their whole body is light gray except their face and

hand they are a rocky dark gray, and they have black tiger stripes on their

chest. Just then, Goldar flies off the balcony into the city and falls in front of

the Golems.

Deep down into the earth There is an under ground cavern that

holds the Dino Warriors. Just then, out of two large doors Barza appears. He

is wrapped in many robes He holds a wooden wand. Age has not been good

to him ether his Asian face has many cracks and wrinkles then the Grand

Canyon. He puts his wand in a hole in the wall in the shape of it. Barza then

walks over to all five doors opening them as he passes them. Once he gets

to the last door of the Tyrannosaurus it is unable to open.

“The key is broke!“ Barza screams back to the warriors. Barza holds

his hands up and begins to chant a spell to release the

warrior.

“How do we get up there, Barza?” Dan asks turning away from the

projection screen.

“Go through this door.” Barza says toping what he is doing. Then a

door appears it looks like a useless door for it is in the middle of the room.

Just then the door swings opens reveling a vortex.

“I will try to release Geki.” Barza says as he turns back to the door

and begins to chant again.

Bandora palace sits on top of the highest sky-scrapper in Dawson

Springs. It is in the middle of the city so she has the perfect view of

everything going on in the large town. Bandora walks from her balcony and

enters into Finster’s workshop with a devilish smile on her old wrinkled face.

She walks up to a workbench to admire her shrunken ship. She stares

through the window to watch the little kids inside squirm

“Majo Bandora! The Dino Warriors are approaching.” Babbo screams

pointing off the balcony to the warriors below on their bikes.

“No, this isn’t possible!” Bandora screams running to her

balcony. “They are only five their leader is gone!” She laughs as she points

her wand at the warriors.

Down bellow the warriors get off their bikes and teleports in front of

the palace with their weapons out. They charge into the doors to see a

beach. The ocean is vary calm no danger in sight. The perfect surrounding

becomes nothing but chaos’s the sky shatters to reveal black and purple

backdrop with fiery shapes flying. Then out of the water comes an unearthly

big screen TV with Bandora right on the screen. She then jolts to life and

begins to attack the warriors. They are unable to keep the witch away. The

weapons go through her not even scratching her. It was like they where

fighting a ghost.

Then the entire beach shatters causing a cage to form around

them. Squatt looks down from a balcony looking over a miniaturized model of

Dawson Springs with the cage in the middle. Squatt looks down and laughs

as he pulls on a lever causing fire to emerge from under the cage.

“More sweat!” Squatt screams after them as he spins them around

the fire. Sweat begins to form on their fore heads as the heat gets to

them.

Down under the earth, Barza shoots a canon at the Tyranno Door.

He smiles as the smoke clears. But his smile quickly turns to a frown as he

sees the door is unharmed.

“Daizyujin, I need your help!” Barza screams with teary eyes. The

Tyranno statue above the Dino-Cavern moves and sends red lazars at the

door opening it…

Bandora laughs as the cage spins around and around the fire. The

warriors scream in pain as Bandora and her crew laugh at them.

“Majo Bandora, Shall I kill them now?” Squatt asks looking up at his

queen as she smiles to herself.

“No, I want to see them squirm.” She says cackling aloud. All of a

sudden down below the balcony a door opens to revel Geki, the fifth

warrior.

“Wait!” He screams as he jumps up and slashes the chain that holds

the cage to the balcony.

“Golems Arise!” Bandora says as she points her wand at the Dino

warriors. Just then, Goldar and an army of Golems charge.

Geki Jumps in the air and lands on top a Golem, sending it to the

ground. Mei then pulls out a bow and some arrows Mei then shoots three

arrows at the same time. One arrow flies in a Golem’s eye, one arrow in a

golem’s chest and another arrow in a golems face. Goushi slashes a golems

with his axe sending it down to the ground in a pile of rocks and clay.

The warriors jump from the palace onto a building to find Burai

holding five golden coins. He smiles as he opens his hand to them.

“Call on the ancient sprits of your dinosaurs by using these.” Barza

says as he hands them each a coin. “When in trouble put these Dino Coins in

your Dino Buckler, and call on your Dino sprits.”

“Dino Buckler!” the five shouted as energy shimmered around them

and they transformed into multi-colored suits of light armor. The Rangers

assumed fighting stances and shouted their names.

“Tyranno Ranger, Red!” .

“Mammoth Ranger, Black!” .

“Tricera Ranger, Blue!”

“Tiger Ranger, Yellow!”

“Ptera Ranger, Pink!”

“Dragon Ranger! Green!”

“We are Zeon…Dinosaur Rangers!” They shouted in unison Just then

they pull out their ranger sticks from their belts and charge at their enemies.

Tyranno ranger kicks a golem to the ground and goes after Goldar as the

golem turns back to a clay figure.

The others go after the Golems, Tricera Ranger slashes a Golem

causing it turn into a pile of clay and rocks. Tiger Ranger slashes a golem

sending it crashing into another Golem they both then fall into a pile of clay

and rocks. Mammoth Ranger picks a golem up over his head and sends it

crashing into the street below. Tyranno Ranger begins to win while Goldar is

weak because of his wounds. Just then, He spreads his wings and Goldar

begins to fly back to Bandora’s palace.

“You must get that space shuttle Inside Bandora’s palace! “ Barza

commands walking up to the rangers.

“I am on it!” Ptera Rangers says as she looks at the evil fortress.

She leaps off the building and she sores through the air toward the palace.

Tricera Ranger jumps after her not thinking.

They land on the dark balcony to find it completely empty. They

sees the spacecraft sitting on a table deep inside the dark palace. Ptera

Ranger runs through the dark smog trying to save the shrunken spacecraft.

She feels the evil all around her. She grabs the shuttle and Turns to Tricera

Ranger.

Then a hand emerges from a wall grabbing the Space shuttle.

Just then, buildings begin to explode as earth quacks that sound

like footsteps overcome Dawson Springs. Buildings shack causing debris to

fall, hitting the ground. Fireballs emerge from the building as the earth quacks

continue. Cars swerve off the road as the tremors become more violent.

“Look at that!“ Geki screams pointing to Bandora. Bandora looks

over a sky scrapper to see the rangers.

“We can take her!” Goushi screams as he tries to keep his self-

steady. Bandora turns to the rangers and begins to laugh at his comment.

“What is she doing?” Dan screams as he looks toward the evil

witch. Bandora raises her staff up in front of her.

“She is going to destroy the city!” Boi screams. Bandora blasts

buildings killing people and causing panic.

. The Ptera stands by her friends as she watches Bandora. She

holds her hands in front of her face as if she is praying. The ground begins to

shake sending the rangers off the building. They fall screaming hoping they

will be saved.

They land with a thud on each of their respectable Shuugozyuu.

They stand up surprised they are alive. The rangers jump into their

Shogozyus and charge off after Bandora. The T-Rex Shogozyu charges first

at high speed. She points her hand at it sending a red beam at it knocking

the Tyranno Ranger out. The pterodactyl Shuugozyuu flies fast after the evil

witch about to send a beam at her. Bandora throws her wand sending it to

fly at it throwing it down. The Mastodon charges at her sending a smoke that

freezes every thing in its path. Bandora sends a black beam at it causing it

to fall back on its back. She laughs as she is engulfed in fire and her palace

disappears.

The ranger look around at the destruction Bandora caused with fear

and grief in their heart. They all demorph and Gather together.

“That was way too easy.” Mei says as she turns to her teammates.

“Yeah Bandora would not have given up this easy.” Geki says

looking up into space. “She will be back.” he finishes.

Just then, a beam of black light shoots down from the sky and hit

the warriors. The earth around them begins to crumble falling into a

bottomless pit.

“What is going on?” Mei asks the others as they begin to fall one by

one into the earth.

Up on the moon Bandora’s palace sits buried in the rocks of the

moon, the palace looked as if it crashed there, inside the palace Bandora

looks cold down on her titan warrior as his gold armor shines in the light of

the chandelier, he is kneeling before Bandora.

“Your lucky I have a limited amount of power and I can’t waste it

on punishments!” Bandora screams at him as she balls her hand into a fist

and raises it at Goldar.

“YEAH! YOU STUPID MONKEY FACED NITWIT!” Baboo screams in a

childish tone. Goldar flashes Baboo an angry glare.

“We must use teamwork because that is how we are going to

destroy the rangers and if you all continue this childish fighting with each

other we will never kill them.” Bandora says raising her staff in the air turn

toward the earth. Just then a lighting bolt hit Bandora‘s wand sending her to

the ground in pain. Lightening flashes causing a skull to appear before them.

It floats around as they eyes flash in a anger.

“You will need a lot more then teamwork.” a voice says to Bandora.

“I have the rangers trapped on the island of legend.” Bandora says

into empty space as she reaches for her wand.

“You fool, you know what is there!” Satan says as a blue light

engulfs the entire balcony.

“Yes, but the warriors will be incased in stone before they realize

where they are.” Bandora says she tries to save herself from another

shock. “and the world will be yours.”

Down on the island of legend, the warriors sit on rocks trying to

keep warm.

“If I would have known that Bandora would have escaped I would

have moved for the death penalty.” Geki says as he tries to make a fire.

“Where are we?” Boi asks looking at Dan as if he would hold the

answer.

“We are on the island of legend.” Mei says walking in front of

Dan “There are 5 legendary weapons here.” Mei continues. Everyone looks at

her shocked that she knew of the warriors current surroundings.

“She is right if the legends are correct there should be a castle in

the western hills that hold the mystical weapons.” Dan says standing up

walking to Mei’s side. “But the only thing is we have a time limit of how long

we can seat foot on the island.” he adds on.

Up on the moon, Bandora watches the rangers talk about the island

of legend of which they are on.

“Good god, I thought it would take more time for them to realize

they where on that island.” Bandora whispers to herself. Bandora walks over

to Finster’s workshop because she knew Satan was also watching the

warriors.

“I need a monster to take care of the rangers.” Bandora says as

she looks at the many clay figures that stand on Finster workbench. Finally,

one Figure catches her eye, a female figure about 8 inches tall. “This is the

one Finster.” Bandora screeches. He takes up the figure and slowly walks to

a bulky machine. He places it on a conveyer belt smiling to himself. Puling a

lever the machine jumps to life as it shakes and jumps sucking the clay figure

in. Smoke rises up from pipes as Bandora waits for her monster to pop out

the other end.

BOOM a figure pops out of a large tube hanging from the large

machine. Out of the smoke emerges Dora Laygor. She has a blue-jewel of

great power on her crown. Her long blue hair is braided to the sides with a

large amount flowing past her butt. She is wearing white robes and has an

emotionless face.

“You will go down to the island of legend and destroy those

rangers!” Bandora screams pointing at Dora Laygor.

Down on the island the warriors begin their journey for the weapons

as the temperature dramatically goes up. The hot hellish sun beats down on

the over heated warriors. Sweat begins to form on their faces in large beads

as they heat begins to get to them.

Dora Laygor appears in the sky from out of no where and flies down

at the warriors sending backwards. They grab their Dino-Bulkers from their

belts and raise them to the sky.

“DINO BULKER!!!” they scream in unison as their armor forms around

them. Tyranno ranger flies at her with his fists outstretched. Dora Laygor’s

pigtails come alive and throw him into a cliff. Her hair then grabs a hold of

Ptera Range and Tiger Ranger sending them away to the other side of the

island. Tyranno Ranger stands to his feet as Mammoth and Tricera ranger

struggle to stand. The Dora monster slowly flies threw the air after them as

she giggles to herself.

“Come on bitch is that all u got?!” Tyranno ranger screams as he

stands his ground. Geki jumps into the air and kicks her onto her back.

Bandora watches from her balcony as a battle breaks out. She

laughs as she points her wand out sending a small army of Golems.

Dora Laygor punches Tyranno ranger as the other two take care of

the golems. The Dora monster sores threw the sky and lands on top of

Tyranno ranger, she then picks him and hurls him at his fellow rangers.

“Come back to the Palace!” A voice booms from the heavens. Dora

Laygor laughs as she teleports away from the fight.

Up on the moon, Bandora smiles to herself as she watches the

three warriors look for Boi and Mei.

“They will turn to stone before they can regroup and find the

castle. And then the world will be all for Satan.” Bandora screams as she

turns to her monster who is sitting in Finster’s work shop.

“Don’t worry my empress, I’ll get those rangers! You just give me

the word…”

“No, I want them to feel the pain of that island!”

To be Continued…

Tell me what you think and tell me any thing i need some story ideals!

Faqa
12-07-2005, 11:15 AM
Punctuate and space that. My brain ran out of breath by the first paragraph.

Cool idea though.

Rita_lives
12-07-2005, 06:03 PM
Sorry! I'll fix it!