MMPR; something you didn't expect.

[Romanus]

This mmpr rewrite is very different from previous rewrites...I think! Here it is, I've put the theme tune as well so don't hold it against me.

RITA:- AH, AFTER 10,000 YEARS I’M HERE. NOW TO CONQUER EARTH.

ZORDON:- ALPHA, RITA HAS ESCAPED. RECRUIT ME A TEAM OF TEENAGERS WITH ATTITUDE.

GO, GO POWER RANGERS
GO, GO POWER RANGERS
GO, GO POWER RANGERS, MIGHTY MORPHIN’ POWER RANGERS

GO, GO POWER RANGERS
GO, GO POWER RANGERS
GO, GO POWER RANGERS, YOU MIGHTY MORPHIN’ POWER RANGERS

THE DAY OF THE DUMPSTER
PART 1

In the cold vacum of space an object was on a collison course with the moon. The dumpster landed, where it procceded to shoot out five individuals. Goldar was up first, he noticed that his Queen was lying face first in the ground.
“My Queen!” He growled, as he helped her up. Rita looked at him.
“You dolts! You can’t even steer right.” She shouted at the top of her voice. Squatt and Baboo hid behind Finster.
“My Queen,” started Finster. “It was Goldar’s fault as he was the one who got us in he-”
“I don’t care about whose fault it is! We have a job to do.” Rita pointed her staff at the nearby green, white and blue planet.

[LastLine]

Dumpster I think.


But I'm not sure that there's really any more I can say on how little you've given us.

[Romanus]

I'm posting a paragraph at a time. The story isn't actually finished, but you'll see what's new in my next post.

just be patient, that's all I ask.

ps; i've changed it.

[Romanus]

Here we go, the surprise is here.

The Angel Grove youth centre was the place to hang out, if you were 15 years old. Christine Hillard and Jennifer Hart entered the juice bar and found one of their friends sitting around a table.
“Hey!” Jenny said, as she grabbed a nearby table. Hannah Park looked up and acknowledged the two girls. She was decked out in as much black as Jenny was in pink. Chrissy wore a white jacket over a yellow vest and a skirt of the same colour.
In the arena, the fourth member in the quintet of girls our story will follow, stood beside another young girl in blue.
“Okay, that’s good. Now try this.” Erin Scott moved one hand forward from her starting postion. She then brought her other hand up, bringing her left hand back. She then kicked forward with her opposite leg. Stacy Cranston tried to do the same, but failed.
“I’ll never do this!” She said, as she sat at the bench by the side of the arena.
“Yes you will. Stace, even I was beginner once.” Erin sat down next to her best friend. She was wearing a red tank top and joggers. “Come on,” she said, urging Stacy up. Erin was about to walk up the steps when she stopped.
“Hey, sexy! I’m talking to you!” Erin turned and walked forward. She looked at Fargas ‘Bulk’ Bulkmier and sighed. His cohort, Eugene ‘Skull’ Skullovitch, stepped out from behind him.
“Yeah, he’s talking to you!” Skull added. A young man appeared beside Erin.
“Leave her alone!” The young man gave the two a threatening look.
“Oh, and what’s big brother gonna do about it?” Bulk asked.
“Yeah, what are you going to do?” Added Skull. The man walked forward and uncrossed his arms. He felt a hand squeeze his arm. He turned to look at Erin.
“I’ll take care of this, Jason!” Erin approached Bulk. “What is it?”
“I want you to teach, moi, how to beat people up.” Bulk stared at Erin, who sighed again.
“You want advanced stuff, huh.” Bulk kept looking at her. “Alright then, try this.” She turned so that she was beside Bulk. “Roundhouse kick.” Erin struck a fighting stance, she brought her leg up and around into a kick.
“Anything you can do, I can do better.” Bulk struck the same stance and tried to bring his leg around, but he fell on his backside. Skull started to laugh, but soon stopped when Bulk looked at him.
“Class dismissed, guys.” Erin said, as she walked away to join her friends.

[hothead757]

oh cool cant wait to here more and I know who the new ranger is....

[Romanus]

quintet of girls our story will follow

Did you not get the surprise?

[TBF]

Did you not get the surprise?
The Rangers are all chicks, and as far as anyone else knows, it's gonna be a MMPR version of ChiChiRanger.

[Romanus]

well I don't know about this ChiChiRanger, but yes the rangers are female.

Up on the moon, Rita looked down on the world. She laughed as she walked over the threshold of her new palace.
“Finster, create a team of putty patrolers. At once!” Finster scurried in at the mention of his name. He then scurried back into his lab. As he sat down to roll up a few bits of clay, Squatt and Baboo appeared.
“Oh, Finster. What are you doing?” Asked Baboo. Squatt slapped him across the head.
“You idiot, he’s making putties.”
“Would you two leave me alone, please.” Finster said, looking up from the four dozen putty minitures he’d already made. The two left the monster-maker to his duties.

[bushwacka666]

it's gonna be a MMPR version of ChiChiRanger.

You know I actually considered writing something like that myself. Never went through it though - the whole board would lynch me! :P :D

[ceninant]

Yay for self-insertions.

[Romanus]

Don't know what you mean by the self-insertion bit, but... here' the what I have so far.

Meanwhile the five teens sat around a table in the juice bar, talking. Stacy was doubting herself once again.
“Stace, you did great. You’ll get the hang of it eventually.” Stacy looked at her friend.
“I just don’t think I’m cut out for it,” She said, as Ernie walked over with their drinks. Just as he got there, the ground began to shake.

Alpha 5 was hurrying around the command centre, worrying as usual.
“Ay, yi, yi, yi, Zordon. This is the big one, I know it. We’ll all be destroyed.” Suddenly the lights in the white room went out, and a voice called out.
“Do not worry Alpha,” said the voice. “Rita has arrived. Recruit for me a team of teenagers with attitude.” Alpha looked toward the voice, and gasped.
“Teenagers, anything but teenagers.” The little robot then set about finding five young people to take the ancient power.

Back in the youth centre, several teens were trying to leave. Bulk and Skull had run into Ernie and got smoothie dropped on their heads. Erin and the others got up and tried to leave as well, but stopped suddenly.
“Do you guys feel that?” shouted Jenny. Erin took up the leadership role.
“Everyone hold onto somethi-” Before she could finish her sentance, she and the others were dissolved in five beams of colour.

[-Nadira-]

lol poor zordon...at the mercy of 5 TEENAGE girls,6 when the green ranger comes along. But this is an interesting read, and I plan to follow it.

[Lemonik]

You know I actually considered writing something like that myself. Never went through it though - the whole board would lynch me! :P :D
Not George.

[Romanus]

Thanks, i'll try posting tonight.

[Romanus]

The teens landed one on top of the other in a big white room.
“ng! Where the hell are we?” asked Erin, getting to her feet. Stacy got up and straightned her glasses. She looked at the terminals then turned to the others.
“The answer might be in these terminals,” she said as she turned to start typing in commands. Before she could even start, a shrill robotic voice cried out.
“No, don’t tha-” Stacy whipped around and saw something lying face down on the ground. The teens helped the stranger up and Stacy was suddenly amazed.
“Wow, a fully operational sentient automaton!” She said, in awe. The others had looked at her as if to say ‘what?’, when a voice rang out.
“Welcome humans!” The voice said. The teens looked around at a huge cylindrical tube, in which a white head, floating around in nothing, was floating around in nothing.
“Who are you?” asked Hannah.
“Like, what are you?” asked Jenny. The head regarded the two girls, then spoke.
“My name is Zordon, and this is my counterpart Alpha 5. I came here to establish this Command Centre in my never ending struggle against evil.
“With Alpha’s help I have sought you out to give you the power to transform into a super human fighting force. In times of great need, you will be able to call upon colossal assault vehicles, known as Zords.”
“Your identities must remain a secret, or risk losing protection of the power.” Chrissy stepped forward.
“Wait, let me get this straight.” she said, her austrialian accent was very pronounced. “You want us to become super heroes, to fight your little war against evil?”
“Correct, but you will not become just superheroes. You will become power rangers!” Hannah looked up at Zordon and began to laugh.
“You want us to become power rangers! What kind of half baked idea is that? Also I don’t remember hearing that the planet was in danger!” Zordon looked at Hannah.
“A non-believer, observe the viewing globe.” Hannah turned to the crystal ball at the other end od the room. Several images were relayed on it, one of which had a group of people in grey costumes terrorizing the people in the park. “Do you see now?”
“Yeah!” Hannah said, with a gulp. A belt appeared around the girls’ waists.
“Behold, the power morphers.” Zordon announced. Alpha took up the riegns of speech next.
“Hold them to the sky and call out your dinosaur spirit, along with the phrase ‘ranger power’.” Erin took her morpher from the front of her belt. She looked at and saw an image of a T-Rex engraved on a small golden coin. Suddenly an alarm went off sartling the teens.
“What now?” Asked Jenny. Zordon announced that the grey creatures that they saw earlier, were called putties.
“They are the footmen of the evil Rita Repulsa. She has come here to take over the Earth in the name of her emperor, Lord Zedd. Now is the time to save the planet, go and may the power protect you!” Erin looked at her friends, who nodded and placed their hands behind their backs.
“IT’S MORPHIN’ TIME!” Erin shouted.
“MASTODON, RANGER POWER”
“PTERADACTYL, RANGER POWER”
“TRICERATOPS, RANGER POWER”
“SABER-TOOTH TIGER, RANGER POWER”
“TYRANNOSAURUS, RANGER POWER”

[orangezeo]

It's different so i like it. :) u've done a good job Romanus continue with it i'd like to see where it leads. Nice work. :)

[Romanus]

thanks, I shall continue. I should probably say this now, i'm doing green with evil after day of the dumpster.

[Romanus]

Five beams of light streaked through the night air, over the heads of the terrified population of Angel Grove. The power rangers landed in the centre of down-town Angel Grove, and were met by a group of putties. Goldar stood in the middle of them, raised his sword and fired at the rangers. Erin and Stacy jumped out of the way, while the others flew to the opposite side of the street. The rangers got up and heard a voice comming through their helmets.
“Rangers,” came Zordon’s voice. “I am sending to you the power weapons, combine them and they will become a power blaster.” The rangers held out their hands and five weapons appeared. The rangers fired their weapons individually, struck Goldar and destroyed the putties. Goldar bellowed in rage and fired yet another bolt at the rangers.
“Let’s bring them together!” Erin shouted.
“Power Axe!” Shouted Hannah, converting her axe into a cannon and throwing into the air.
“Power Bow” Shouted Jenny throwing her bow in the same direction as Hannah.
“Power Lance” Shouted Stacy, breaking her lance in two and throwing both into the air.
“Power Daggers” Chrissy threw her daggers into the air aswell.
“Power Sword” Erin jumped up with her sword and placed on top of the bow, which was connected to the top of the cannon. It also had the two peices of the lance and the daggers. Erin came back to earth and opened fire on Goldar, with the other rangers around her. Goldar was thrown back into a pile of cars, in which he struggled to get up.

[Romanus]

sorry for the long wait in updates, I'll try posting soon. Don't count on anything though.

[Romanus]

NOTE:- This fan-fic is on hold till after Christmas.