titan_ranger
09-10-2005, 10:57 PM
Here's a interesting story I'm workining on, review it please.
Power Rangers Turbo- "A Legend Rides Again"
Tommy Olivar had been upstairs all day cleaning his parent's attic. This was not something he enjoyed but his parent's had done so much for him, it's the least he could do. He went through some old papers and pictures, obviously of his distant relatives. He came across a solo picture of some guy in a cowboy hat and a red shirt and couldn't recall him. The name on the picture said his name was Bo Darville and it seemed to be an extremely old. So later on the day he asked his grand ma about the name. His grandma just laughed at the name of Bo Darville. She said he was a really close friend of the family's along time ago. She explained that he had made a name for him self by doing what so many had deemed "impossible". Which usually meant out racing the police, namely Sherriff Bueford T. Justice, hence he earned the nick name of The Bandit, a perverbial legend that his grandfather idolized. She explained about Bandit's trademark Black Firebird. Tommy continued by asking what happened to him but his grandma replied no one really knows, he just dropped off the face of the earth seemingly. Tommy sat in the attic cleaning and going over the things and discovered more papers from Bo. His grandma called later and asked Tommy to stop by sometime she found something that she thinks he might need. He was on his way when his communicator went off. "Perfect timing", he muttered. "Shift Into Turbo!" Tommy morphed into the Red Turbo ranger and the day got worse when they didn't far so well against Divatox's monster, MotorDrone. He visited his grandma and she produced a letter to Tommy which turned out to be a map. Tommy drove his jeep to the middle of what appeared to be nothing but the desert. He almost gave up till he saw something in the distance. He drove up and to his amazement it was an old truck rig.To his amazement the rig's driver door was unlocked. He searched around and found another letter. Inside was a letter from Bo Darville.
To who ever finds this, My name is Bo Darville or some others might know me as The Bandit. I'm 51 and I've decided that it's time to hang my boots up and stop racing. These keys run the rig and the ol dove in the back. Take good care of her and she'll take good care of you. (signed) The Bandit.
Tommy couldn't believe it he was sitting in the rig that was drove by a legend. Out of curiousity, he went to the rear of the rig and opened the back. He nearly fainted at the sight of the old black Firebird.
Power Rangers Turbo- "A Legend Rides Again"
Tommy Olivar had been upstairs all day cleaning his parent's attic. This was not something he enjoyed but his parent's had done so much for him, it's the least he could do. He went through some old papers and pictures, obviously of his distant relatives. He came across a solo picture of some guy in a cowboy hat and a red shirt and couldn't recall him. The name on the picture said his name was Bo Darville and it seemed to be an extremely old. So later on the day he asked his grand ma about the name. His grandma just laughed at the name of Bo Darville. She said he was a really close friend of the family's along time ago. She explained that he had made a name for him self by doing what so many had deemed "impossible". Which usually meant out racing the police, namely Sherriff Bueford T. Justice, hence he earned the nick name of The Bandit, a perverbial legend that his grandfather idolized. She explained about Bandit's trademark Black Firebird. Tommy continued by asking what happened to him but his grandma replied no one really knows, he just dropped off the face of the earth seemingly. Tommy sat in the attic cleaning and going over the things and discovered more papers from Bo. His grandma called later and asked Tommy to stop by sometime she found something that she thinks he might need. He was on his way when his communicator went off. "Perfect timing", he muttered. "Shift Into Turbo!" Tommy morphed into the Red Turbo ranger and the day got worse when they didn't far so well against Divatox's monster, MotorDrone. He visited his grandma and she produced a letter to Tommy which turned out to be a map. Tommy drove his jeep to the middle of what appeared to be nothing but the desert. He almost gave up till he saw something in the distance. He drove up and to his amazement it was an old truck rig.To his amazement the rig's driver door was unlocked. He searched around and found another letter. Inside was a letter from Bo Darville.
To who ever finds this, My name is Bo Darville or some others might know me as The Bandit. I'm 51 and I've decided that it's time to hang my boots up and stop racing. These keys run the rig and the ol dove in the back. Take good care of her and she'll take good care of you. (signed) The Bandit.
Tommy couldn't believe it he was sitting in the rig that was drove by a legend. Out of curiousity, he went to the rear of the rig and opened the back. He nearly fainted at the sight of the old black Firebird.