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Space Sheriff Gavan
08-30-2005, 02:07 PM
Narrator: In a dimension parallel to Earth, the parallel planet to Earth, Gaia, is a haven for two dominant species. Humans and Anthromorphs, which are humanoids that take both appearance of an animal and a human-like body. These two species live peacefully in their world, though there are some who are uneasy to others. Anthros dislike humans, and humans dislike anthros. For a time this was merely a racial dispute...Until...

[ The first scene shows a cut away shot of a futuristic looking city, though still modern in many ways. It's still present day technology, but the architecture looks futuristic. We suddenly see a cloud of dark purple smoke forming about this utopian city]

Narrator: [cont.] All the pent up hatred between radical humans and anthros took a manifestation of it's own that was separate from those that caused it.

[The purple smoke forms into three life forms, The one in the middle is the leader. He wears a ceremonial black kimono, and is an anthro wasp. He has antennae, a stinger, and two enormous black eyes. His name is Kaijin-Sama. The figure to the left of him is a female with impressive assets,in terms of her body. She appears to be a human, but wearing demonic-looking black armour that looks like black dragon scales. She is called Kaijin-wife. And the last figure, to the right of Kaijin-sama, is an anthro scorpion, he even has pincers for hands and a large stinger on his back. He is called Kaijin-nii.]

[They materialize from the smoke, and stand upon the roof of a tower, overlooking the city]

Kaijin-Sama: [chuckles] Look upon the masses who birthed us, with their own ignorance

Kaijin-Wife: [smiles coyly] We must thank them then, Husband.

Kaijin-Sama: Indeed we shall. Let us raise this world into our own kingdom of hell!



[cut to Main title]

Narrator: Instinct, and logic as one. It is a sacred power. Fight for the great justice!

Five Voices:Kegawa Sentai...JINRURANGER!!!

Opening theme plays

[Then Episode title appears as the scene fades in, we see a large school, a university]

Narrator: Stage 1: Coming of the Kaijin Family

[The Camera focuses on the exterior of the school for a moment, then cuts to the interior of a classroom. The students are mostly Anthromorphs , of various species, but there are some humans. The teacher is also human.]

Mr. Soijiro (Teacher): Welcome to another semester, returning students, and welcome to college, for the new students. I am Mr. Soijiro [ he writes his name on the large chalkboard and the name of the class, “ History” ] During this semester we will be learning about various forms of human cultural history as well as the predominant anthro species, including some of the extinct anthromorphs, such as gryphons, centaurs, minotaurs, and so on

[ As Soijiro continues speaking, the camera offers brief close-ups of our soon-to-be heroes. The first is a cat anthro in his early twenties. He has the top of his fur on his head (hair) is a “spiked” hairstyle, and dyed red. In terms of breed, he was similar to that of a Russian Blue cat. His name was [B]Godai. Next, the camera focuses on a young woman, about the same age as Godai. She was an anthromorphic bird, more specifically, a peacock. But instead of having a beautiful and large tail, that is known as a trademark for peacock, her trademark was on her hair. She had long flowing hair with feather patterns and several different colors. She wore no clothes, because her body was covered with a layer of black feathers, that had grown on her in the pattern of an evening chest (that slightly exposed her cleavage, but only slightly. She was a living piece of elegance. Her name was Asuki. Next there was another girl, the same age as Asuki. She was a reptilian anthro, with scaled skin, a long tail, and small spikes running down her back. She had no hair, but her lovely face and impressive body made her just as enticing. Her name was Althea. Then there was a rather large male anthro. This was because he was a horse anthro, and thus, his body was built larger. Ironically, he was the youngest of the group, only 18, but he was almost twice the size of all the other students, and the teacher. His name was Len. And finally, there was Makito, the oldest of the five. He was a wolf anthro, and in his late 20’s. ]

Mr Soijiro: So, I will be handing out the class schedule and ---

[ [I]Suddenly he was interrupted when a flash was seen outside the window, followed by a large explosion heard outside, the camera shakes, and the students and teacher react accordinly to emphasize the explosion ]

Mr.Soijiro: What the devil is going on?!

[ Screams are heard outside ]

Mr Soijiro: Students, I suggest you leave this enclosed space and please calmly leave the building. Do not go near the sound of that explosion, just please go out quickly, but carefully and get yourself to a safe distance.

[ All the students get up and walk out quickly, the camera changes to a shot of the hallway outside. Students from all classrooms can be seen leaving as calmly as possible, though there was an evident sense of dread in their movement ]

[ The camera cuts back to the classroom, another explosion occurs outside. Mr Soijiro walks to the window ]

Mr Soijiro: [ Reaches into his pocket and pull something out, then looks out the window. We see from his point of view through the window, The Kaijin family was outside, blasting anyone who was too slow to get away, each human or anthro that was hit caused an explosion. In total, 4 had been hit so far. Mr Soijiro looked down, he had 5 gold coins in his hand, each coin had emblazoned on it, a depiction of a mythical being ] So, the time has come already…

[Commercial break!]

[Back to the show, we see the Kaijin family commencing with the destruction, they soon came upon Godai, and Althea, who had gotten lost from the rest of the class]

Kaijin-Wife: These ones smell different, Husband.

[ Godai grabs Althea by her arm and turns and runs, forcing her to run with him, realizing quickly that they had run right to the source of the danger ]

Kaijin-Nii: How can we allow you to escape with such fruitful life energy! [ His tail extends over his head and fires a bright purple beam of light at them, it hits them both in the back. They fall over, but struggle back onto their knees, and stand slowly, but with an urgent fervor ]

Kaijin-Wife: Eh?

Kaijin-Nii: They’re immune to my venom?!

Kaijin-Sama: It seems you were right about them being different, my wife. All the more reason to make their life energy MINE. [ Kaijin-Sama’s wings begin to move rapidly and he lifts into the air, flying toward them ]

Soijiro: [ Voice only, off screen ] Jinru-change!

[ As Kaijin-Sama is about to grab Godai and Althea, a blur of light blue flashes in between him and the kids, causing Kaijin-Sama to fall to the ground on his back. Godai and Althea stop and look back to see a costumed figure standing before them. The suit was of a light blue color, and had metallic chest armour that depicted a sea serpent on it. This figure was holding a long trident with a light blue staff ]

Mr Soijiro: Kegawa Sentai Jinru-Leviathan!
[ Kaijin-Sama rose and reaches back, pulling off his wings. With a dark flash, they become duel sabers. He rushes at Jinru-Leviathan and begins to attack him fiercely, Jinru-Leviathan taking a step back, and deflecting the sword blows with his trident. This goes on for a minute or so, until Kaijin-Sama slams down on the trident with both sabers, breaking it in two. ]

Jinru-Leviathan: Ah?!

[ Kaijin-Sama lets out a small battle cry, using a side-cut slash on Jinru-Leviathan. This causes damage to his armour, and sparks fly from his body as he falls to the ground, dropping the golden coins. Three of the coins roll away, while two roll directly to Godai and Althea, as if drawn to them ]

Godai: …Huh? [ He slowly reaches down and picks up the coin, emblazoned on it is the mark of Sphinx, which is shown through a close-up shot. ]

Althea: [ Picks up the coin at her feet. The coin had the emblazoned mark of the Medusa on it ]

[Althea and Godai exchange perplexed looks.]

Kaijin-Sama: [ Takes a menacing step towards the fallen Jinru-Leviathan ] Did you really suppose one so weak as you could fell the Kaijin emperor?

Jinru-Leviathan: [ Leans up slowly, grunting in pain, looks back to Godai and Althea ] The ancient coins were drawn to you…Use them!

Godai: What?!

Jinru-Leviathan: [ Struggling to speak ] Search your souls… You and the ancient powers are bonded… You must use them…For great Justice! [ He passes out, or possibly dies ]

Godai: [ He looked to Althea, she looked a bit frightened ]

Godai and Althea: [ They both nod and strike a “heroic” pose ] Jinru-Change!

[ The golden coins shined with a fantastic light and we are shown their transformation for the first time. We see their costumes materialize out of nowhere and appear on their body. Godai’s was a red costume, and he had chest armour like Jinru-Leviathan’s. His suit also had mechanized wings on his back and his helmet was reminiscent of a pharaoh head-dress. A weapon also appeared in his head, a ritual Egyptian sword. Althea’ costume was similar, but designed for a female body. Her costume was green, and her chest armour depicted snakes on it. Her helmet was that of a snake head, and her weapon was a whip that looked like a snake ]

Godai: [ Heroic pose ] To defend Gaia, by the powers bestowed from the heavens… Jinru-Sphinx!

Althea: The elegant justice of sweet deserving venom for those who commit evil [ Strikes a more feminine pose ] Jinru-Medusa!

Kaijin-Sama: [ Taken aback ] What the?!

Kaijin-Wife : [ Smiling flirtatiously ] This is much more exciting.

[ The camera backs away from the shot, we see the characters standing still, in a “calm before the storm” battle pose. Jinru-Leviathan lays fallen, and the ground is on fire in areas where people and anthros were killed and exploded. ]
[End]

[ We now see a cute, small raccoon pop up, in the classroom set, on the teacher’s desk, this character is represented by a puppet, will be referred as “???” ]

???: [ Has a high-pitched and adorable voice ] Bad times Bad times! Kaijin Family appears on Earth and nice Mr. Jinru-Leviathan is hurt! [ A thought bubble appears showing a sad face ] Next time on Kegawa Sentai Jinruranger, Godai and Althea face off against Lord Kaijin-Sama! It will be scary! What about the other coins? And uh-oh, Kaijin-Wife creates a monster that becomes REALLY REALLY big! What will Jinrurangers do? This will be answered next time. Eh? Who am I? This is still secret! [ He jumps off the desk into the wastepaper basket below, to hide, though his tail can still be seen, sticking out ]

[Ending theme plays]

ElementMaster149
08-30-2005, 07:35 PM
its pretty good i suggest you take the what theier doing parts and make it in paragraph form and take out the italics. i would also explain how Makito looks other than thatt great story and characters.

rangermaster
08-30-2005, 09:58 PM
Awesome episode.

Space Sheriff Gavan
08-30-2005, 10:11 PM
its pretty good i suggest you take the what theier doing parts and make it in paragraph form and take out the italics. i would also explain how Makito looks other than thatt great story and characters.

I would, but I've tried writing a Kamen Rider fic in story format before, it just looked atrocious to me. I thought it would look better in script format, and the italics are to indicate action, rather than speaking.

Space Sheriff Gavan
08-31-2005, 11:26 PM
Kaijin-Sama: There's more of them, eh?

Jinru-Sphinx(Godai): [ The red metallic wings on his back spread out] You'll be harming no more innocents today!

Kaijin-Wife: My my, from the mouth of babes.

Kaijin-Sama: Such fools... LISTEN! [ He points one of his wings/sword at them for emphasis] I am the Lord of Hateful Energy. I feed upon this world's anger, fear, greed, and sorrow. This world will soon be my own kingdom of utter desolation.

Jinru-Medusa(Althea): We will never allow it! [ She charges head on toward Kaijin-Sama, draws her whip back and lunges it forward with incredible force.]

[ Kaijin-Sama leaps into the air, doing a flip, and completely evading her attack, positioning his body in the air for a jump-kick, and kicks Jinru-Medusa with both feet, causing her to tumble to the ground]

Kaijin-Sama: It is clear you do not even know how to use your powers, which are feeble, at best. You'd be best put out of your misery... [ He raises his swords]

Jinru-Sphinx: [ He let out a battle cry, running to Kaijin-sama with his sword ready]

Kaijin-Sama: Hmmm [ He turns quickly, his swords clashing against Jinru-Sphinx's ]

[ The camera angle cuts to the other three, Asuki, Len, and Makito, who were still in the process of evacuating, when suddenly, the coins appeared, flying through the air and then striking all three of them in the back of their heads, knocking them down simultaneously. The coins lay there on the ground beside them, glowing faintly.]

[cut to Main title]

Narrator: Instinct, and logic as one. It is a sacred power. Fight for the great justice!

Five Voices:Kegawa Sentai...JINRURANGER!!!

Opening theme plays

[ The scene cuts to the exterior of the college campus, in a small grass-filled area. Makito, Asuki, and Len lay face flat in the grass, the coins beside them, glowing.]

Narrator: Stage 2: Unite the Sacred Power!

[ The three start to come to, rubbing the back of their heads, wincing. Makito looks down and sees his glowing coin. Inquisitively, he picks it up and looks at it. Emblazoned on his golden coin is an image of the Unicorn. Len picks up his coin, the image of a monster wolf, Fenrir (oldest child of Loki), to be specific. Asuki picks up her coin last, depicted on it is the Roc, the mythical white bird of enormous size . They look at each other strangely, but run toward the battle nevertheless, as if they knew what to do ]


[Camera cuts back to the battle, Kaijin-Sama is making short work of the inexperienced Jinru-Sphinx.]

Makito, Asuki, Len: [ Nod to each other and hold out their coins ] Jinru-change!

[ They transform in the same manner that the others did, their suits are similar, but have key differents. Makito's suit is yellow and his helmet is that on an equestrian head with a small silver horn on it. Asuki's suit is white, and her helmet is that of the head of a falcon-like bird. Her weapons are her own hands, in that her suit has two large metal gloves that resemble razor sharp wing feathers. Len's suit is blue, his helmet like the head of a ferocious wolf. His weapon a ball and chain mace. ]

Makito: Sacred power of the ancient beasts, Jinru-Unicorn! [ makes a heroic pose that signifies physical strength ]

Asuki: Pure wind that blows justice! Jinru-Roc! [ She strikes a feminine pose (similar to that of Althea's) but different. A fierce wind blows when she poses. ]

Len: Lone warrior of justice! Jinru-Fenrir! [ Strikes a menacing pose, when he does, the sky turns dark and the moon appears for a moment, the howl of a wolf is heard ]

Jinru-Phoenix: Three more of them... Er...Us?

Kaijin-Sama: Ergh! How many of these little freaks are there?!

Kaijin-Wife: Don't over-exert yourself, dear. Your blood pressure...!

Kaijin-Sama: Do not interrupt me!

Kaijin-Wife: Allow me to deal with them [ She produces a seed from seemingly nowhere. The camera focuses in on it to show it's not a regular plant seed. It is black and has a strange red pattern on it that resembles a non-human skull. She tosses it to the ground, pours water on it and blows a kiss to it ]

[ The seed suddenly enlarges to an enormous height, 10 feet tall, and shatters, a monster remains from inside the seed. The monster looks like a mutated cross between a monkey and a fish]

Monster: [ Chuckles madly]
Subtitle: Crazed Beast Evolukion

Kaijin-Sama: Hardly elegant, but useful. I need not soil my hands crushing these fools.

Kaijin-Wife: [ smiles and giggles, then she and her husband and Kaijin-Nii vanish]

[ Jinru-Sphinx and Jinru-Medusa join the others]

Evolukion: New toys to play with! [ His mouth opens and fires red tadpoles from his mouth ] Primordal missile!

[ The tadpoles hit the Jinru-Rangers, exploding on contact and knocking the rangers over. ]

Evolukion: Ho ho ho ho! It's not very much fun if you don't play along!

Jinru-Sphinx: [ Rises up, breathing deeply, the others standing somewhat slower than he ] You think this is a game?! [ He draws his sword from the sheath on his belt and charges at Evolukion, yelling in a frustrated rage ]

Evolukion: [ A sword made of skeletal bones appears in his hand and he deflects Jinru-Sphinx's attack ] All life is a game.

[ But Jinru-Sphinx has the clear advantage in this swordfight. Because of Evolukion’s inexperience, Jinru-Sphinx’s powerful sword blows soon shatters Evolukian’s sword ]

Evolukion: [ Stumbles back ] Yargh!

[ The scene cuts to a dark cave in an unknown area, however, the cave has been modified to look like a throne room. The room has two thrones, both occupied by Kaijin-Sama and Kaijin-Wife. Kaijin-Nii stand obediently off to the side ]

Kaijin-Wife: How dare they hurt my baby’s feelings! [ She kisses both her hands and blows a kiss. A pair of pink lips form in the air and flies to Evolukion. Once the lips hit him, he glows briefly and grows a long tail ]

Evolukion: I evolve! [ His tail extends and lashes out like a snake, wrapping around Jinru-Sphinx, binding him ]

Jinru-Sphinx: [ Struggles, but to no avail ]

Evolukion: Hee hee hee…! There’s no escape!

[Suddenly, there is a loud screech of a bird above them]

Evolukion: Eh? [ Looks up ]

[ He looks up to see Jinru-Roc circling him, in the air, her wing razor weapons giving her the ability of flight, then dives down and with one sweep of her wing daggers, she slices Evolukion’s tail off ]

Evolukion: Gyaaaaa! Now I’m angry! [ He runs after Jinru-Roc, who is still flying, when Makito jumps into his path ]

Jinru-Unicorn: You wanna play rough, play with me!

[ Evolukion took a swing at him, but Jinru-Unicorn ducked down and evaded the punch, then rose quickly and gave him a few good roundhouse punches, and topped it off with a powerful kick to Evolukion’s chest, which sent him flying, and crashing into one of the campus building’s walls.]

Evolukion: Errr.. [ Starts to stand ]

Jinru-Sphinx: Keep him down!

Jinru-Fenrir: [ Uses a lunging attack with his ball and chain mace, the chain extends to hit Evolukion from a distance, and knocks him down again. ]

[ The Jinru-rangers join together ]

Jinru-Sphinx: Let’s finish him!

[ They combine their weapons, Jinru-Roc’s wing razors becoming the main body of the weapon, the Sphinx sword becoming the barrel, the mace morphs into the handle, supported by Medusa’s whip. It forms into a missile launcher called Monster Bomber ]

Jinru-Rangers: Monster Bomber! Killing Strike! [ The weapon fires, causing an explosion of fire, this fire takes the shape of a ferocious snake, falcon, wolf, sphinx, and horse. This attack is called “Feral Fire”. The Feral Fire rushes to Evolukion and causes him to explode on contact with it, leaving nothing but his charred skeleton. ]

Jinru-Sphinx: [ Cheering ] We did it! [ Jumps up and down in excitement ]

[The other Rangers cheer excitedly as well, except Jinru- Fenrir ]

Jinru-Fenrir: Don’t be so childish

[ Back in the Kaijin throne room ]

Kaijin-Wife: [ Pouts ] Dead?!

Kaijin-Nii: [ Steps forward ] Perhaps not. Revival Venom! [ He fires a blob of green venom from his stinger. It flies straight to Evolukian’s skeleton ]

[ The Venom lands on Evolukian’s skeleton and restores him, and not only that, it makes him grow to titan size ]

Evolukion: [ Stretches ] Now all world is Evolukion’s playground!

[ The Jinru- Rangers look up at the new Evolukion with fear and despair ]

[ The scene cuts to the classroom set. In the corner beside the Teacher’s desk, there is a small old Treasure chest with a word inscribed on it. It simply reads “Tanuki”. The little raccoon from the end of the first episode pops out of the chest ]

Tanuki: Oy! Big Trouble just got bigger! Must call the Ancient Gods for help [ He runs to the end of the classroom and picks up an ancient wooden flute with odd designs on it. The flute was there on the wall as decoration (amongst other things)]

[ Tanuki begins to play into the flute, which is called the “Tanuki Pipe” ( DX Roleplay toy soon available for pre-order at HobbyLinkJapan). The song he plays awakens the ancient God mechs.]

[ Charging from the darkness of oblivion come the Ancient God mechs, first is the Red Sphinx, which looks just like the Egyptian statue, except with wings…and a nose. Next is the large blue wolf mecha, Fenrir, followed by the giant white bird mecha, the Roc. Finally comes the yellow Unicorn mech, with the Green Medusa mech riding it. The Medusa mecha is the only one that is actually humanoid (female), but has snakes where it’s hair would be. The mechs appear before the Jinru-Rangers ]

Ancient God Mechs: Ready to go!

[ The Jinru- Rangers look to each other and nod, then are transported into their respective mechs. ]

Jinru- Sphinx: Let’s combine our powers!

All, except Godai: Okay!

[ The mechs combine, the Sphinx becoming the body and head, the Unicorn becoming the lower torso and legs, the Fenrir becoming the left arm, the Medusa becoming the right, and the Roc becoming the wings on it’s back ]

[The Jinru-Rangers are now in a control room in the mech ]

Jinru-Rangers: Combine powers of the instinct of heaven! Kegawa Gattai Beast Angel!

Evolukion: Hee hee! A new playmate! [ He charges at the mech king, Beast Angel, but Beast Angel spreads his wings and flaps them vigorously, the wind causing Evolukion to tumble back. ]

Evolukion: [ Gets up, rubbing his rear ] tcha tcha tcha! You play too rough! Bacteria Blast! [ He belches, causing a cloud of green smoke to envelope Beast Angel. Sparks fly from Beast Angel, as it is being damaged by attacks from malevolent microbes. ]

Jinru-Sphinx: Gyah!

Jinru- Unicorn: Taken minor damage to chest armour.

Jinru-Sphinx: We have to take him down in one strike!

Jinru- Medusa: Why only one?

[ Evolukion’s hands turn to razor claws ]

Evolukion: Evolution!

Jinru- Sphinx: Because the longer he stays alive, the more he evolves!

Tanuki’s Voice: If you want to do that, summon the Heaven sword!

Jinru-Rangers: Eh?!

Jinru-Sphinx: Who are you?

Tanuki: Nevermind, just do it!

Evolukion: Hee hee! [ He slashes Beast Angel with his new claws, causing more sparks to fly ]

Jinru- Sphinx: Oh hell with it, let’s try it! Summon the Heaven sword!

[ A large sword appears in Beast Angel’s hand, but the Bone sword also re-materializes in Evolukion’s hand ]

[ The two duel for a minute at most, Evolukion manages to strike Beast Angel, but then Beast Angel, using the heaven sword, shatters the bone sword. ]

Evolukion: [ Stumbles back ]

Beast Angel: [ Raises the Heaven Sword, which begins to glow] Divine Strike! [ Beast Angel makes a strong straightforward chop with the sword, the energy emitting from it bursts from the sword and cuts Evolukion in half, though the sword didn’t touch him.]

Evolukion: KYAAAAAAA! [ He falls down slowly and explodes ]

[ in the Kaijin Throne Room ]

Kaijin-Wife: [screams angrily] NO!

Kaijin-Sama: Hmph…Useless…

[ Meanwhile, outside the campus, the mechs are gone and our heroes are not costumed ]

Althea: That was amazing

Godai: You were so cool, Asuki!

Asuki: So were you

Len: HEY!

All, but Len: What?!

Len: … [ points to where the fallen Jinru-Leviathan lay. He is no longer there ]

Godai: Where is Mr. Soijiro…?

[End]

[ In the Class room]

Tanuki: Did you see Beast Angel King Mecha! I was really impressed. But, Oh! Where is Soijiro-san?! Let’s hope we find out next time, or who will feed me?

[ Ending Theme plays ]