packfan6
08-28-2005, 11:06 AM
This is my attempt at another new fic. I've already written around 1/4 of it just to make sure I'm actually going to do it. It's titalled Packfan6's Alternate Universe: Ninja Storm. It is the first of 3 series I plan on making(DT and SPD being the other 2).
What I will be doing is taking NS footage, and ether adding to it or taking away from it to make it more my own. I will also be adding some episodes or omiting them. For example one of the additions will be a WF/NS team-up. If I had the time, I would write out each episode, but I don't have that kind of time.
The purpose of this is mostly to add more continuity to the series, and make the series more interesting. NS will have the least changes to it. DT will have more, and SPD will have the most.
I have seen every episode of NS, most more then once. I also used PR Central's episode guide to help. I will probably have a few issues here and there with keeping everything consistent because I don't remember every single one liner and stuff like that.
Here is episode 1, tell me what you think.
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The door opened in front of Lothor. The room was mostly black, with a large table in the middle. Around it sat villains he had known for a few years now. Trakeena, Vypra, Choobo, Diabolico and Zurgene. Most of them have had their chance to take over, each failing. Lothor felt his time was coming.
"Rumor has it that you're next." said Trakeena. She was in her normal form. "Good luck."
"I won't need luck." replied Lothor.
"Yeah right." said Trakeena with a chuckle. Lothor rolled his eyes and got up from the table. He was growing impatient and started pacing around the room. The meeting was planned for an hour ago, yet his leader hadn't shown up yet.
"Hey, watch where you're-." said Olympious before stopping himself. "I'm sorry Lothor."
"As you should be." replied Lothor. After Lothor said this, their was an awkward silence.
"Take me with you." said Olympious while dropping to his knees. "I know I failed before, but I won't fail again."
"That's not my decision." said Lothor.
"Please, I'm begging you." said Olympious.
"Are you trying to, betray me?" asked a creature standing behind him. Olympious got up and turned around. The creature was Mesogog.
"Of course not master." replied Olympious. A red beam came out of Mesogog's head towards Olympious head, forcing him to fall to the ground. To Mesogog's sides were Zeltrax, Elsa, and Rito Revolto. Lothor and Olympious returned to their seats, while Zeltrax, Elsa and Rito all sat down in empty seats around the table.
Mesogog slowly walked to the table, and looked each villain in the eye. "Now, who can tell me why Master Org failed?"
"Because he wasn't strong enough." shouted out Choobo.
"Because he didn't destroy the rangers when he had the chance." yelled Diabolico.
"Because he wasn't worthy." said Lothor as the other villains became silent. "He was fighting a team led by monkey boy and the team acted like children. He wasn't ready, but I am ready."
"Correct Lothor." said Mesogog.
"So are you going to bring him back?" asked Trakeena calmly.
"In time, he will re-join our army like I allowed the rest of you. Then, we will have our ultimate strike." said Mesogog. "Until then, Lothor will begin his strike on the Ninja Academies like he has wished."
"About time." said Lothor.
"Silence." replied Mesogog. "As you requested, you will have Zurgene as part of your army. but you must also take Choobo and those annoying nieces of yours."
"Oh great." mumbled Lothor. "I won't let you down."
"It would be in your best interest if you didn't." replied Mesogog. The monsters began talking amongst themselves, until Zeltrax fired a blast at the wall. The blast didn't make it to the wall, as it hit an invisible creature. The Phantom Ranger revealed himself. "Get him!" yelled Mesogog.
Olympious was the first to attack, but was kicked in the stomach by the Phantom Ranger. Trakeena attacked next with her staff, which the Phantom Ranger grabbed and punched her in the stomach. Rito attempted to tackle him, but the Phantom Ranger went back to a state of invisibility as Rito fell to the floor. The Phantom Ranger ran until he found an invisiportal, which he entered.
INSERT SCENE WITH RANGERS BEING LATE TO CLASS, TRAINING, SENSAI TALKING TO SHANE, TORI, DUSIN, THEN CAM AND SENSEI TALK.
Sensai walked slowly to his secret Ninja Opps. He pulled out the Scroll of Destiny and sat down. After looking at it for a few moments, he shook his head, and rolled it back up. The Phantom Ranger appeared in the room, and Sensai got to his feet and went into a fighting stance.
"Don't worry, I am the Phantom Ranger, defender of the galaxy." said the Phantom Ranger.
"Oh, good, I apologize for my hostility." replied Sensai. "Would you like to sit down?"
"Sorry, I don't have the time." replied the Phantom Ranger. "I'm here to tell you that Lothor will soon begin his attack on this academy. I will not be able to help you in the fight against Lothor because I have bigger problems to deal with, but I wish you the best of luck against him."
"Good luck to you also." said Sensai shacking the Phantom's hand. "And thank you." The Phantom Ranger nodded his head and vanished. Sensai put the Scroll of Destiny away, and sat back down.
INSERT BEGINNING OF NEXT DAY, AND REST OF EPISODE.
What I will be doing is taking NS footage, and ether adding to it or taking away from it to make it more my own. I will also be adding some episodes or omiting them. For example one of the additions will be a WF/NS team-up. If I had the time, I would write out each episode, but I don't have that kind of time.
The purpose of this is mostly to add more continuity to the series, and make the series more interesting. NS will have the least changes to it. DT will have more, and SPD will have the most.
I have seen every episode of NS, most more then once. I also used PR Central's episode guide to help. I will probably have a few issues here and there with keeping everything consistent because I don't remember every single one liner and stuff like that.
Here is episode 1, tell me what you think.
-
The door opened in front of Lothor. The room was mostly black, with a large table in the middle. Around it sat villains he had known for a few years now. Trakeena, Vypra, Choobo, Diabolico and Zurgene. Most of them have had their chance to take over, each failing. Lothor felt his time was coming.
"Rumor has it that you're next." said Trakeena. She was in her normal form. "Good luck."
"I won't need luck." replied Lothor.
"Yeah right." said Trakeena with a chuckle. Lothor rolled his eyes and got up from the table. He was growing impatient and started pacing around the room. The meeting was planned for an hour ago, yet his leader hadn't shown up yet.
"Hey, watch where you're-." said Olympious before stopping himself. "I'm sorry Lothor."
"As you should be." replied Lothor. After Lothor said this, their was an awkward silence.
"Take me with you." said Olympious while dropping to his knees. "I know I failed before, but I won't fail again."
"That's not my decision." said Lothor.
"Please, I'm begging you." said Olympious.
"Are you trying to, betray me?" asked a creature standing behind him. Olympious got up and turned around. The creature was Mesogog.
"Of course not master." replied Olympious. A red beam came out of Mesogog's head towards Olympious head, forcing him to fall to the ground. To Mesogog's sides were Zeltrax, Elsa, and Rito Revolto. Lothor and Olympious returned to their seats, while Zeltrax, Elsa and Rito all sat down in empty seats around the table.
Mesogog slowly walked to the table, and looked each villain in the eye. "Now, who can tell me why Master Org failed?"
"Because he wasn't strong enough." shouted out Choobo.
"Because he didn't destroy the rangers when he had the chance." yelled Diabolico.
"Because he wasn't worthy." said Lothor as the other villains became silent. "He was fighting a team led by monkey boy and the team acted like children. He wasn't ready, but I am ready."
"Correct Lothor." said Mesogog.
"So are you going to bring him back?" asked Trakeena calmly.
"In time, he will re-join our army like I allowed the rest of you. Then, we will have our ultimate strike." said Mesogog. "Until then, Lothor will begin his strike on the Ninja Academies like he has wished."
"About time." said Lothor.
"Silence." replied Mesogog. "As you requested, you will have Zurgene as part of your army. but you must also take Choobo and those annoying nieces of yours."
"Oh great." mumbled Lothor. "I won't let you down."
"It would be in your best interest if you didn't." replied Mesogog. The monsters began talking amongst themselves, until Zeltrax fired a blast at the wall. The blast didn't make it to the wall, as it hit an invisible creature. The Phantom Ranger revealed himself. "Get him!" yelled Mesogog.
Olympious was the first to attack, but was kicked in the stomach by the Phantom Ranger. Trakeena attacked next with her staff, which the Phantom Ranger grabbed and punched her in the stomach. Rito attempted to tackle him, but the Phantom Ranger went back to a state of invisibility as Rito fell to the floor. The Phantom Ranger ran until he found an invisiportal, which he entered.
INSERT SCENE WITH RANGERS BEING LATE TO CLASS, TRAINING, SENSAI TALKING TO SHANE, TORI, DUSIN, THEN CAM AND SENSEI TALK.
Sensai walked slowly to his secret Ninja Opps. He pulled out the Scroll of Destiny and sat down. After looking at it for a few moments, he shook his head, and rolled it back up. The Phantom Ranger appeared in the room, and Sensai got to his feet and went into a fighting stance.
"Don't worry, I am the Phantom Ranger, defender of the galaxy." said the Phantom Ranger.
"Oh, good, I apologize for my hostility." replied Sensai. "Would you like to sit down?"
"Sorry, I don't have the time." replied the Phantom Ranger. "I'm here to tell you that Lothor will soon begin his attack on this academy. I will not be able to help you in the fight against Lothor because I have bigger problems to deal with, but I wish you the best of luck against him."
"Good luck to you also." said Sensai shacking the Phantom's hand. "And thank you." The Phantom Ranger nodded his head and vanished. Sensai put the Scroll of Destiny away, and sat back down.
INSERT BEGINNING OF NEXT DAY, AND REST OF EPISODE.