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TBF
06-15-2005, 04:30 PM
This is essentially a re-write of my fic Another Power Rangers: Real Story.So, without further adu, here's Chapter 1!

Power Rangers: Super Delta
Chapter 1:
"A Real Live Ranger"
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Hi. This is Joe. You might know me as tommysbiggestfan (TBF for short) from RangerBoard. I'm here to tell you about the very weirdest experience I've ever had: being the Black Super Delta Power Ranger. But I'm getting ahead of myself, so let me explain....

It was about 3:30 PM, Wednesday, June 15th. I'd just gotten back from the Wal-Mart Supercenter, with my new Patrol Morpher. I was bored, so I logged onto Rangerboard. I made a few posts in places like the June Caption Thread, PYOPA, Word Game 2, that kind of stuff. Then I noticed that I had a new PM. "I wonder what it is," I thought, and clicked into my Inbox.

The new PM was from a member I'd never heard of before, called The Ultimate Power. I ran a quick check through the Members List. He wasn't there. Interesting.

I clicked on the Private Message from the unknown user. It read,
Dear Joe, aka tommysbiggestfan,

You have been chosen to become a real life Power Ranger. You will have to

I stopped there. This 'Ultimate Power' guy was nuts. How could I become a real Ranger? First, all Power Rangers is is a TV show, or as some people say, a 22 minute toy commercial. Second, I was 12 years old. Even if Rangers actually existed, I would have to pull a 'Justin', and age about seven years to be the right size when morphed. That was impossible. I decided to continue reading, just to see how crazy this guy was.

You will have to choose 2 other members of your team, and battle a great evil that no-one, not even I, can identify.

(Me: Well, duh. You're an old crackpot who thinks Power Rangers is real.)

You will be the leader of your team, as the Black Ranger. Take out your Patrol Morpher, which is on your belt right now. Hold it out to the screen, and reply to this message with 'I accept.', if you feel you can do it.

I thought, 'What the heck?' I held out my Patrol Morpher, and replied to his PM as he told me to.

As soon as I clicked the 'Reply' button, I felt a vibrating numbness that I had felt once before. It was electrocution.

After exactly ten seconds, the shock stopped. I looked at my now-smoking Patrol Morpher. The 'P' in 'SPD' was burnt out. I opened the morpher to Change Mode, and saw something else strange. The SPD badge was different, too. The word 'Police' was burnt out .

The buttons of the cell phone pad were changed too. I examined them, then pushed one. It made a tone like a real phone. I gasped, and quickly hit the 'cancel' button. I had a real cell phone.

I closed the morpher, and then put it into 'Judgement Mode'. I could see instantly that it had lights in the 'X' and 'O', and guessed it would probably function like it did in the show too. I closed the morpher again, and noticed another thing: the power switch was gone.

I looked at the computer screen, and saw I had a new PM from The Ultimate Power again. I entered it, and read:

Dear Joe,

You have now discovered I was not joking. To morph, all you must do is hold the morpher horizontally, say "Super Delta", then turn it 90 degrees, and continue with "Black Ranger". Of course, you will need it in Change mode.

I decided to try it. I stood up, pulled out the Patrol Morpher, and holding it horizontally, called out, "Super Delta," then, while turning it into a vertical position, "Black Ranger!" I pushed the button.

There was a bang, then suddenly I could only see black, feel myself being covered with something. I looked down, and, to my absolute surprise, saw my legs covered in black spandex.

I said to myself, "This is awesome. I'm a Power Ranger."

Suddenly, I heard the sound of knocking at my door. In a rush, I gasped, "Power down, power down, power down!" It worked, and I basically ran to the door, dodging the various Power Rangers toys on the floor.

I unlocked and opened the door, to my sister Ginger. She said, "I need to go through your room. Bob's in the shower." (Our parents are divorced, and Bob is our mom's boyfriend.)

"Fine," I replied. "Just hurry up."

As soon as she was through, I locked the back door into my room between Ginger's room and the bathroom. I then shut down my computer and walked out the room. I called to my mom as I walked outside, "Hey Mom, I'll be in the back yard."

As I walked down the hill to the river from the back yard, I morphed, and looked into the river for my reflection. I noticed that my suit was based mainly on Shadow Ranger's, but recolred to a red and gold color scheme. That wasn't much of a surprise because of my using a Patrol Morpher. I saw that instead of the armor on Shadow Ranger's forelegs, I had standard S.P.D. boots, but colored gold with a red stripe. My eyepiece was a black version of Trent's from Dino Thunder. Also, the 'horns' (Doggie Krueger's ear space) were colored red. And one other detail essential to add: I'd pulled what I call a 'Justin', so I had grown probably about a foot.

My weapons, were, to my surprise, gold versions of my two toy lightsabers. I pulled them out, and activated them. Sure enough, they had black blades, but red glow around them instead of purple. I decided to see how powerful they were. I tapped one against my arm, and felt a slight burn. I knew that it was much stronger, because the suit would protect me from most of the damage. I touched a blade to the water, and saw steam rise up. So the blade was atleast 212 degrees Fahrenheit.

Suddenly, I heard Mom calling, "Joe, we're going to the dollar store! You coming?"

"Yeah!" I called back, then demorphed and jumped into the van.
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About half an hour later, we came home, me with an entire pack of Skittles packed into my mouth, disabling my speech. I motioned that I was going to the back yard again.

I swallowed my Skittles, morphed, and did a bit of fight practice. My skills were greatly heightened, but essentially the same style. I could move faster, hit harder, slice faster, jump higher and farther, and keep amazing balance on my kicks, where I usually fall over when doing a spin kick.

I stopped to rest, and looked down the river. I saw a couple guys messing around. Or so it looked like. I decided if they were doing something wrong, it'd be a good time to test my Ranger skills. I began walking slowly towards them, being cautious not to be seen. When I got close enough, I noticed that it was some kind of mugging. Why it was happening here in Watertown, I had no idea.

"Super Delta, Black Ranger!" I said, and walked right into the view of the mugger.

"What the Hell?" the man said, dropping his victim, who ran. "Hey, your a... a... Power Ranger! Yeah! My.....uh.... kid watches that!" The man was obviously drunk.

"Yeah, and your about to know how we work," I said heroicly. I charged at him, and unleashed a devastating punch. Somehow he dodged, most likely by collapsing from drunkeness. Anyways, he got back up while I pondered how he dodged. I pulled out my Anakin-model lightsaber, and activated it. I swung it at the guy's arm. He had an instant burn. I got his other arm, then deactivated the lightsaber.

I pulled out my Patrol Morpher, and said, "Judgement Time, mister." I activated Judgement Mode, and read off his charges. "You are charged with public intoxication and assault. And the reading is," I paused, while I waited for the morpher's verdict.

"Guilty." I then switched it to the cell phone, and ended my call. See, I had recorded my capture of the drunken man on a call to the police, so they had (most of) the details. I had also reported my location.

I chose to get out of there to avoid questioning. Plus, it was about time for supper. And I had confidential information that it was going to be delicious.
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So, how do you like it?

Lunar Wolf Ranger
06-15-2005, 05:21 PM
It's better than the last time. You should at least take more time in writing them so it's much longer. Maybe a full day as a chapter. That's just my opinion.

TBF
06-15-2005, 08:18 PM
It's better than the last time. You should at least take more time in writing them so it's much longer. Maybe a full day as a chapter. That's just my opinion.
*cookie* hmm.... maybe I'll add in some action, like a little crook fight or something....*starts writing*

BTW, Profiles will be written soon.

TBF
06-15-2005, 09:41 PM
There. I updated it with a fight with a drunk dude.

Lunar Wolf Ranger
06-15-2005, 09:44 PM
Better

Ninjakus
06-15-2005, 09:54 PM
nice better than my shit

TBF
06-15-2005, 09:58 PM
*cookies to LWR and Millenium Ranger*

Ninjakus
06-16-2005, 12:10 AM
pick me pick me I want to be a ranger except i dont have a patrol morpher I bought the shadow ranger morpher sorry i forgot the name *eats cookie* mmmm Cooooookie crisp I am also 12 but I'm 6' 0''

TBF
06-16-2005, 12:16 AM
pick me pick me I want to be a ranger except i dont have a patrol morpher I bought the shadow ranger morpher sorry i forgot the name *eats cookie* mmmm Cooooookie crisp I am also 12 but I'm 6' 0''
Sorry, my roster is pretty much set.

BTW, the Patrol Morpher IS Shadow's morpher.

Ninjakus
06-16-2005, 12:38 AM
sorry thats okay maybe i could come in later as a sixth ranger like fourth ranger and i thought i should ask could i use u im fic as the green legacy ranger you got powers this is directly from my work in process part 2

Joe: Green Legacy Ranger, Solar ranger power, Civilian power able to create temporarily blinding solar flares.

TBF
06-16-2005, 12:44 AM
sorry thats okay maybe i could come in later as a sixth ranger like fourth ranger and i thought i should ask could i use u im fic as the green legacy ranger you got powers this is directly from my work in process part 2

Joe: Green Legacy Ranger, Solar ranger power, Civilian power able to create temporarily blinding solar flares.
Sure. In this fic we've already got 5 Rangers tied down, one that has two prospectives.
BTW, I tried making the suits for you, but it just didn't quite work.

Ninjakus
06-16-2005, 12:47 AM
thanxs for the try how bout sixth ranger thanx for letting me use u what does two prospectives mean i dont mind bein an evil ranger sorry if Im being annoying by keep asking it was kind of rude to ask you if i could be in your fic if you wanted me in you wouldve asked me and im not tryin to guilt trip you(Ihate when adults do that to kids) dude its cool if you already have your rangers picked and stuff

TBF
06-16-2005, 01:22 AM
thanxs for the try how bout sixth ranger thanx for letting me use u what does two prospectives mean i dont mind bein an evil ranger sorry if Im being annoying by keep asking it was kind of rude to ask you if i could be in your fic if you wanted me in you wouldve asked me and im not tryin to guilt trip you(Ihate when adults do that to kids) dude its cool if you already have your rangers picked and stuff
A. The sixth Ranger will be either PhantomReo or my sister.
B. We already have an evil Ranger.
C. I hate guilt trips too.
D. Check the profiles from APR:RS.

BatRanger
06-16-2005, 01:36 AM
this awesome. I like what you did with it.

TBF
06-16-2005, 01:45 AM
this awesome. I like what you did with it.
*cookie* So, did you read through APR:RS first?

BatRanger
06-16-2005, 01:50 AM
I was about too. Decided to take a look at the re-write first. If I get inspiration from something I see, if I give you credit could I use it in my fanfic?

TBF
06-16-2005, 02:53 AM
Here's the Profiles:

Black Super Delta Ranger
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v521/Ginge_pix/JoesStuff/BlackSD100a.bmp
Name: Joe
Age: 12
Special Power: Energy
Morpher: Patrol Morpher
Bio: Joe is tommysbiggestfan from RangerBoard, and the leader of the team. He lives in a divorced family, where the seperate homes are completely opposite. He's been a Power Rangers fan since MMPR started when he was a few months old. His energy abilities allow him to fire energy blasts, make toy morphers function as real morphers, and temporarily bring his toys to life.

Blue Super Delta Ranger
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v521/Ginge_pix/JoesStuff/SD2.bmp
Name: Ryan
Age: 12
Special Power: Transfiguration
Morpher: Thundersaurus Morpher
Bio: Ryan is Joe's monkey-obsessed best friend, who met Joe on the first day of 1st grade. They have been friends ever since. Ryan is a go-kart racer, and his cart is #2. He is obsessed with monkeys, which helps explain his helmet. His transfiguration powers let him transform into any animal.

Green Super Delta Ranger
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v521/Ginge_pix/JoesStuff/SD7.bmp
Name: Nathan
Age: 12
Morpher: Brachio Morpher
Special Power: Telekinesis
Bio: Nathan is another of Joe's best friends, and also met him on the first day of 1st grade. He sometimes seems to be a better friend with Ryan than with Joe. His telekinesis lets him lift, move, and manipulate almost anything.

White Super Delta Ranger
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v521/Ginge_pix/JoesStuff/SDWhite.bmp
Name: Adam
Age: 15
Special Power: Telepathy
Original Form of Morpher: Wind Morpher
Bio: Adam lives in Ontario, and is one of Joe's friends from Rangerboard. He goes under the alias of Deku-Link while on RB. He is gay, but the other Rangers know and are fine with it. He teleports to wherever the other Rangers are when he is needed. His telepathy lets him read some people's and monster's minds, and manipulate them in certain ways.

Red Super Delta Ranger
http://img259.echo.cx/img259/9302/redtitanrangertitanpower7wy.png(evil)http://img267.echo.cx/img267/2048/redmythicthunderrangermythicpo.png(good)
Name:Sean
Age: 17
Special Powers: Tracking and Elements
Morpher: Titanium Morpher
Bio: Sean is the oldest of the group and their mentor when he becomes good after his evil killing spree. When he was evil, he almost defeated the Super Delta Rangers, but he remembered that being good is a lot better and easier than being evil. As the oldest, they look up to him for situations and strategies and so forth. On Ranger Board, he goes by the sn of Lunar Wolf Ranger. His tracking and element powers are copies of Bridge's and Syd's from S.P.D.

Lunar Wolf Ranger
06-16-2005, 09:16 AM
:eusa_danc :eusa_danc :eusa_danc By the way guys, I made my own suits!

TBF
06-17-2005, 12:14 AM
I was about too. Decided to take a look at the re-write first. If I get inspiration from something I see, if I give you credit could I use it in my fanfic?
Yeah, sure. I actually got the concept from Lothos, who thinks the original version is shit.

BatRanger
06-17-2005, 04:14 AM
thanks. Could you take a look at what I have for my fic, and give me your opinion? The thread is called Old School Ranger fanfic. Thanks in advance

TBF
06-17-2005, 09:23 AM
thanks. Could you take a look at what I have for my fic, and give me your opinion? The thread is called Old School Ranger fanfic. Thanks in advance
Sure. I've got nothing to do really, so reading some fics might be fun.

TBF
06-20-2005, 08:59 AM
FYI: I should be writing Chapter 2 this afternoon, if everything goes according to schedule.

TBF
06-20-2005, 08:38 PM
Cool did you coppy this from Pr: The real story
Did you read the first post of APR:RS?
(BTW, this post is originally from APR:RS)

dragomuseveni
06-22-2005, 10:28 PM
hey dude i like what u did with the first chapter, i remember u orginally didnt grow hehehe, and u didnt have ur first fight until much later. that was really cool and u have reinspired me to do better, on my story "thanks bro."

TBF
06-22-2005, 11:01 PM
hey dude i like what u did with the first chapter, i remember u orginally didnt grow hehehe, and u didnt have ur first fight until much later. that was really cool and u have reinspired me to do better, on my story "thanks bro."
No problem. *cookie*

dragomuseveni
06-22-2005, 11:45 PM
eats cookie happily.....:)god im tired well its time to annoy ppl with my guitar, and then rework my story....hehehe

Lunar Wolf Ranger
06-23-2005, 07:56 AM
FYI: I should be writing Chapter 2 this afternoon... according to schedule.
Where's the story?

TBF
06-23-2005, 12:13 PM
Where's the story?
I'm workin' on it! I'm workin' on it! Gimme a break!

TBF
06-23-2005, 12:47 PM
Power Rangers: Super Delta
Chapter 2:
"Ryan Gains the Power"
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It was about a week later, on Monday, June 20, 2005, when I chose my first teammate: my best friend, Ryan.

I packed my Game Boy Advance SP, some Power Rangers toys, my Patrol Morpher, Thundersaurus Morpher, GameBoy games, GameCube games, Delta Blasters, and DeltaMax Striker.

At his house, I told him what had happened to my Patrol Morpher, and details on how. He wanted to see me morphed, so I made sure his family and dog Kendra weren't around, and then pulled it out. I called out the morphing phrase, and became the Black Super Delta Ranger. Ryan went psycho, and almost made me use my powers on him to get him off of me.

Actually, I did accidentally use a power. Ryan had been wearing the Thundersaurus Morpher, with the Tyrannosaurus plate. He had wanted the Triceratops, but I urged him to wear the Tyrannosaurus, since he was wearing a red shirt. Anyway, he had basically tackled me, and I shoved him off, one hand landing on the Thundersaurus Morpher. He flew off of me instantly, and landed five feet away. I quickly removed my helmet, and ran up to him.

He seemed all right, but I noticed the morpher wasn’t. The faceplate was now blue, and had a monkey-like design.

I wondered if this meant something for a split second, then demorphed and ran upstairs. I quickly logged onto Rangerboard, and sure enough, I had a new PM. It said:

Dear Joe,

Your friend Ryan has now been given an energized morpher. It is up to you to decide if he is worthy of it. You can use Judgment Mode to help you.

I held out my Patrol Morpher, flipped it into Judgment Mode. After about ten seconds, it stopped on guilty. I guessed it meant 'guilty of being Ranger material', so I said to Ryan, “Welcome to the legacy of the Power Rangers.”
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Hi. I’m Ryan. Joe’s probably already told you, but I’m monkey-obsessed. That’s why it was no surprise to me when the morpher I was wearing got a monkey face.

Actually, I was surprised. I had no idea what came over me, but I just tackled Joe. He threw me off, and when I landed, the morpher was changed. Joe looked at it, then went running upstairs.

When I caught up with him, he was muttering something to himself, reading on the computer.

He suddenly stood up, pulled out his morpher, and pushed the button. I instantly felt as if I was being watched, and began to fidget. After what seemed like an hour, it stopped, and Joe said, “Welcome to the legacy of the Power Rangers.”

“What?” I asked, confused.

“You passed the test. You’re a Ranger, like me.”

“Cool! So, how do I morph?”

“Well,” Joe said, looking back at the computer screen, “you just say, ‘Super Delta, Blue Ranger!’”

Right before I could try it, my dog Kendra jumped on me, ripped the morpher right off of my wrist, and ran! She got outside just as my mom was coming in, and we chased, after scrambling to put on shoes.

After five minutes of chase, we caught Kendra, and I put the morpher back on. As soon as it was on my wrist securely, Joe and I heard some voices.

Joe looked around the corner to see a couple of guys running down the street, waving guns and sacks of money, we guessed.

“Looks like we get to test out our powers, Ry!” Joe said excitedly. “You ready?”

I nodded, and together we called out, “Super Delta,” then Joe alone, “Black Ranger!” followed by me, with “Blue Ranger!”

We watched each other morph, since we couldn’t really see it for ourselves. Joe just faded out for a bit, then he showed up morphed in a sudden split-second flash of light. I told him what his morph was like, and he told me that mine was like a blue monkey that came out of the morpher fused with me, then we jumped up together, spun, and landed as me morphed. He also noted my suit was S.P.D. Blue's, but with a monkey-themed helmet.

When we were morphed, I noticed I had a lightsaber for a weapon.

Anyways, when we turned around the corner, fully morphed, the guys barely paid attention, until Joe yelled out, “Black Super Delta Ranger!”
I, completely randomly, followed with, “Blue Super Delta Ranger!”

The guys stopped, and one of them said, “Hey! These kids think they’re Power Rangers!” They laughed, until we drew our lightsabers.

One of them said, “Listen, kids, we don’t want to hurt you…”
Joe answered, “Who says we don’t want to hurt you?” and we charged.

I prayed my lightsaber wasn’t powerful enough to kill the man, and started attacking wildly. the guy dodged easily, since I was sort of clumsy in my adult-sized Ranger form, and worried about not hurting the guy too much. I finally stabbed him in the chest, but thankfully, it didn't go straight through him. He fell over, but was obviously only knocked out. I went over to help Joe, but he didn’t need it, as he had already knocked his guy over too.

“So, what are we gonna do now?” I asked him.

“Easy,” Joe replied. “We let the cops take care of it!” And with that, he pulled out his morpher, and began to talk into it after dialing 9-1-1.

“Hello, Officer. I am calling to report the apprehension of two criminals at the corner of Maple and 2nd Street.. No, I do not want an award. Yes, I want to remain unnamed. The Power Rangers. No, I am not joking. Good day to you too.”
He shut off the phone, and said, “Let’s go home.”
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A few minutes later, we got back to Ryan's house. I proposed we trained a bit, and Ryan agreed. We walked over to the big church parking lot on the other side of the street, morphed, and began sparring.

Ryan was actually pretty good, after he got warmed up. He was punching like crazy, and there were quite a few times that I couldn't block them. My style was focused more on kicks, which knocked him over a few times too. When we got to the lightsaber sparring, it got intense.

Ryan came charging at me, lightsaber swinging horizontally at my chest. I jumped back from it just in time to keep it from slicing into me. I drew one of my lightsabers, and we began to have a fight almost like they had in the Star Wars movies, with jumping, dodging, spinning, blocking, and various quick, powerful attacks.

After half an hour of intense lightsaber battling, we switched back to hand-to-hand combat. We ended it after 20 minutes in a tie, out of boredom and tiredness. And anyways, I had to go home soon.
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That night on the news, there was a report of a call coming in to the police station about Power Rangers stopping a crime. They said it was true that the criminals had been captured, but no signs of spandex-wearing superheroes were there, though there were also reports of them training in the Mt. Olive Church parking lot, but no pictures, videos, or sound clips to prove it. I grinned to myself, knowing that they had it all wrong.
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dragomuseveni
06-23-2005, 03:30 PM
it was good, but u were right there wasnt much of a change except for the lightsabers, and since u knew ur powers worked, thus his worked, maybe u want to change the fight scene to u and him practicing so he can get a hang of his powers....just a thought.

TBF
06-23-2005, 11:52 PM
it was good, but u were right there wasnt much of a change except for the lightsabers, and since u knew ur powers worked, thus his worked, maybe u want to change the fight scene to u and him practicing so he can get a hang of his powers....just a thought.
Ya, I'll do that tomorrow, it's about midnight here...

TBF
06-23-2005, 11:54 PM
Just updated profiles with change in Sean's evil suit.

TBF
06-24-2005, 09:33 AM
Edited in a bit of me and Ryan training, and a change in the criminal fight.

dragomuseveni
06-24-2005, 01:09 PM
that was a pretty cool add on tbf. keep it up :D

Red Turtle ranger
06-24-2005, 01:46 PM
This is a great story

dragomuseveni
06-24-2005, 03:14 PM
hey tbf do u mind if i used a somewhat modified version of ur news report in my story, so i can give it that real world feel, and it could connect our stories by saying they are both in the real world. that kinda thing.

TBF
06-24-2005, 04:21 PM
*cookies to Red Turtle ranger and dragomuseveni*
And as I said over MSN Messenger, go ahead with the news report, dragomuseveni.

dragomuseveni
06-28-2005, 12:08 AM
cool thanks bro....its gonna sound really cool when its done, and keep up the beautiful work on ur story

Ninjakus
06-28-2005, 02:21 AM
most impressive

TBF
06-29-2005, 10:42 AM
most impressive
*cookie*

And remember people, nominate this fic in the June FFotM!

Ninjakus
06-29-2005, 11:59 AM
mmm cookie *says more compliment to get more cookies*