Mighty Morphin Power Rangers: The Real Movie

[MMPRblue]

gay title i know, and the writing sucks so far, i'm not a good writer, but here goes:

POWER RANGERS MOVIE

Prologue

A new alien race has risen to power. They call themselves the Barifot. Driving Rita and Zedd from their palace, they began to plot taking over earth as well.
The Power Rangers celebrate the summer by going their separate ways for vacation. The Barifot take advantage of this and send a minion to Tommy. He is downed in combat and the minion takes his white Power Coin. As Tommy lays powerless, the alien scurries away to the moon palace with a new power.
King Ejix of the Barifot utilizes the power of the coin and as the final use of this power, he kills Kimberly, Zach, Billy, and Trini one by one. Destroying their Power Coins, he distributes the released energy to his servants.
On earth, the news of the dead rangers comes hard to Jason and Tommy. All that was seen by anyone was the White Ranger killing the four teens, and Tommy, having no alibi, no longer has Jason’s trust either. Zordon used his remaining energy to restore the Dragon power to the Dragon Power Coin, henceforth rendering himself unable to communicate with the rangers, and Tommy became the Green Ranger once more.

Act 1
Scene 1

*Tommy transports to Kimberly’s body, still not buried. Weeping, he places a boquet of flowers on her and stands, looking to the sky, hatred in his eyes.*
Tommy: I will kill you all, I will destroy your race.
*In a rage, Tommy falls to his knees and screams in pain...*

Scene 2

*Jason is cremating the other three rangers*
Jason: *In thought* These wrongs will be righted! Tommy, you will pay for this! You will be PUNISHED! I’m sorry my friends, for not being there in your final moments...
*Tear falls down Jason’s face*

Scene 3

*Barifot base on Moon*
King Ejix: These humans will be no trouble, we will wipe them out completely, the two remaining Power Rangers are next...
*Minions of the Barifot cheer in unison*

Scene 4

*Jason is in attic, hitting punching bag*
Jason: I will find you Tommy, and you will rue the day you became a Power Ranger.
*Jason yells and hits punching bag harder and harder*

thats all i have so far, and i have no clue when i'll put more up, just whenever i feel like writing more i guess...but yeah, post any suggestions/feedback here

and if you have any better names for like the aliens and stuff just suggest those too cuz idk how good "barifot" and "ejix" are....

[bjlovel]

I like the storyline. Seems interesting

[dragomuseveni]

good idea man

[greenwc]

sweet
although if zordon didn't believe tommy either why would he give his life to give him back his green power?

[MMPRblue]

sweet
although if zordon didn't believe tommy either why would he give his life to give him back his green power?


yeah...good point...i'm going to see if i can fix that.....thanks!




EDIT: AHA! maybe zordon knows whats happening, but he only clues them in a little bit, like some sort of riddle or something, and...okay nevermind.....

[TBF]

Why have the other Rangers die right away though?

And the scenes would only last a few seconds, so you've got a sturdy minute in the movie at best.

And how would Tommy know about the Barifeet? According to all logic, he would only know that he was innocent, but not who did it. Yes, they did steal the White coin, but did they say, "Hey, Tommy! There's loads of us! An entire civilization! We're not Rita and Zedd's cronies!"

[havemercy]

:076: bad writing makes me mad

[MMPRblue]

Why have the other Rangers die right away though?

And the scenes would only last a few seconds, so you've got a sturdy minute in the movie at best.

And how would Tommy know about the Barifeet? According to all logic, he would only know that he was innocent, but not who did it. Yes, they did steal the White coin, but did they say, "Hey, Tommy! There's loads of us! An entire civilization! We're not Rita and Zedd's cronies!"


well the other rangers die right away because me and my friend want to make this into a movie and we're going to show the other rangers dying before they get a chance to morph or anything to save a TON of money on costumes, and we just figured that'd be the easiest way to do it, we're going to do like, a fading pictures kind of thing with the prologue.

and then with the tommy thing, that's just kind of poor writing on my part. somehow i'm going to work the zordon thing out and that tommy thing out. thanks for the comments guys, all this stuff is helping!

EDIT: and i do know that its really short, that's just because i'm too lazy to write any more at the moment. i might be able to get more up later, i just put that part up to basically ask people if i was going in the right direction with it.

[BlackRanger911]

sweet
although if zordon didn't believe tommy either why would he give his life to give him back his green power?

zordon sees everything on his globe in the command center. he knows all.

good story but its short. make the scene that we already have longer. if u don't have time let ur friend do some of it. i bet he'd be glad to contribute

[Dark Knight]

The only problem I see is, if Tommy told Jason that his coin was stolen, especially after he went White, Jason would believe him...

[TheTrueParty]

[QUOTE=MMPRblue]well the other rangers die right away because me and my friend want to make this into a movie and we're going to show the other rangers dying before they get a chance to morph or anything to save a TON of money on costumes, and we just figured that'd be the easiest way to do it, we're going to do like, a fading pictures kind of thing with the prologue.



you know im a bit of a movie buff myself let me know how i can help, also a few comments on your story, if you have any old PR action figures their are several techiniques to do, that way you save budget on effects as well as being able to choreograph cooler fight seasons, in fact im working on somewhat of a movie project myself which will include MMPR-ZEO and revamp and rewrite things

also im not sure if your aware but tommy's clone has the green dragon coin and the dragon dagger back in the 18th century not tommy, plus the reason tommy was the white ranger is because zordon could no longer reinergize the green dragon coin, im not saying you have to follow exactly what happened but thats just thier for your benefit take it how you will,

best wishes

[greenwc]

well will it be written as a fic first?

[MMPRblue]

[QUOTE=MMPRblue]well the other rangers die right away because me and my friend want to make this into a movie and we're going to show the other rangers dying before they get a chance to morph or anything to save a TON of money on costumes, and we just figured that'd be the easiest way to do it, we're going to do like, a fading pictures kind of thing with the prologue.



you know im a bit of a movie buff myself let me know how i can help, also a few comments on your story, if you have any old PR action figures their are several techiniques to do, that way you save budget on effects as well as being able to choreograph cooler fight seasons, in fact im working on somewhat of a movie project myself which will include MMPR-ZEO and revamp and rewrite things

also im not sure if your aware but tommy's clone has the green dragon coin and the dragon dagger back in the 18th century not tommy, plus the reason tommy was the white ranger is because zordon could no longer reinergize the green dragon coin, im not saying you have to follow exactly what happened but thats just thier for your benefit take it how you will,

best wishes

thanks a lot, idk what all i can do about that, so it might have to be off at least a little, but idk, if i can think of anything i'll put it in. most of my friends don't know anything about power rangers except that their uniforms are different colors, and they're mainly the one's i'll be showing the movie to, so idk if i'm making it 100% accurate. thanks for the input though!

well will it be written as a fic first?

yeah im going to type up the whole thing first then make the movie probably next summer