Lisa J
04-06-2005, 03:09 PM
I don't know what to call this, since I'm new to the whole fanfic thing. I guess it's a poem. In any event, read it and tell me what you think. Pretty please?
"Here Ya Go!" by Lisa J
"Here ya go!"
"What is this?"
"Doesn't matter. Just open it."
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Boy! Just upwrap the thing!"
"For what?"
"For you!"
"I said for what, not for who."
"Just give it back to me! You don't want it, I can see."
"Hold up! Wait a minute! Ya gave it to me, and I want it!"
"Ya don't deserve this prized possession! I can see your weird obssession!"
"Prized possession?"
"Yeah, prized possession."
"What's so 'prized' about this thing?"
"Nothing."
"Tell me!"
"Nothing, Tommy!"
"Now there's nothing to this 'prize'?!"
"Why are you still alive?!"
"Easy, easy! Calm down, child."
"Tommy, JUST OPEN THE GIFT!!!!!!!!!!"
"Ummm........ok. But why do ya want me dead?"
"I don't want you dead."
"But that's what you said."
"I didn't say that. That's a lie!"
"Yeah you did! You said, 'Why you alive?'"
"I didn't mean it, ok."
"I know you didn't. This ain't your day."
"This ain't my day??!!"
"This ain't your day, Kimberly."
"This ain't my day???!!! Is that what you say!!!!!??? I give ya a gift, and you go astray, about what it is and how it may be something 'prized' or something strange. I'm tired of your weary game. I'm outta here, this is so lame!!!!"
Kimberly walks out in a fit of rage. Tommy still there amazed. Jason walks in. Tommy gives him a 'hi'. Jason asks what's up, but Tommy gives a sigh.
"What's up with you?"
"I have no clue."
"Does it deal with Kim?"
"Her and her gift."
"What gift?"
"This gift."
"What is this?"
"Doesn't matter. Jase, open it."
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Bro! Just upwrap the thing!"
"For what?"
"I guess for you."
"I said for what, not for who."
"Just give it back to me! You don't want it, I can see."
"Hold up! Wait a minute! Ya gave it to me, and I want it!"
"Ya don't deserve this prized possession! I can see your weird obssession!"
"Prized possession?"
"Yeah, prized possession."
"What's so 'prized' about this thing?"
"Nothing."
"Tell me!"
"Nothing, Jason!"
"Now there's nothing to this 'prize'?!"
"Why are you still alive?!"
"Easy, easy! Calm down, child."
"Jason, JUST OPEN THE GIFT!!!!!!!!!!"
"Ummm........ok. But why do ya want me dead?"
"I don't want you dead."
"But that's what you said."
"I didn't say that. That's a lie!"
"Yeah you did! You said, 'Why you alive?'"
"I didn't mean it, ok."
"I know you didn't. This ain't your day."
"This ain't my day??!!"
"This ain't your day."
"Oh my goodness, this ain't my day. You're saying the things I said today, about the gift and how it may be something 'prized' or something strange. And now I'm saying what Kimberly said, before she left and wished me dead. I really need to go to bed. C ya Jason."
"C ya, bro!"
"Oh boy! I gotta go."
Out goes Tommy, in comes Kimberly. A smile upon her face as she sees Jason.
"Jason, thanks so much! That'll teach him!"
"Kim, you're mean, but I like it!"
"It's just a gift. What's the big deal? And he didn't even open it!"
"What is it?"
"Doesn't matter. Jason, why don't you open it?"
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Boy! Just upwrap the thing........
The End?
"Here Ya Go!" by Lisa J
"Here ya go!"
"What is this?"
"Doesn't matter. Just open it."
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Boy! Just upwrap the thing!"
"For what?"
"For you!"
"I said for what, not for who."
"Just give it back to me! You don't want it, I can see."
"Hold up! Wait a minute! Ya gave it to me, and I want it!"
"Ya don't deserve this prized possession! I can see your weird obssession!"
"Prized possession?"
"Yeah, prized possession."
"What's so 'prized' about this thing?"
"Nothing."
"Tell me!"
"Nothing, Tommy!"
"Now there's nothing to this 'prize'?!"
"Why are you still alive?!"
"Easy, easy! Calm down, child."
"Tommy, JUST OPEN THE GIFT!!!!!!!!!!"
"Ummm........ok. But why do ya want me dead?"
"I don't want you dead."
"But that's what you said."
"I didn't say that. That's a lie!"
"Yeah you did! You said, 'Why you alive?'"
"I didn't mean it, ok."
"I know you didn't. This ain't your day."
"This ain't my day??!!"
"This ain't your day, Kimberly."
"This ain't my day???!!! Is that what you say!!!!!??? I give ya a gift, and you go astray, about what it is and how it may be something 'prized' or something strange. I'm tired of your weary game. I'm outta here, this is so lame!!!!"
Kimberly walks out in a fit of rage. Tommy still there amazed. Jason walks in. Tommy gives him a 'hi'. Jason asks what's up, but Tommy gives a sigh.
"What's up with you?"
"I have no clue."
"Does it deal with Kim?"
"Her and her gift."
"What gift?"
"This gift."
"What is this?"
"Doesn't matter. Jase, open it."
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Bro! Just upwrap the thing!"
"For what?"
"I guess for you."
"I said for what, not for who."
"Just give it back to me! You don't want it, I can see."
"Hold up! Wait a minute! Ya gave it to me, and I want it!"
"Ya don't deserve this prized possession! I can see your weird obssession!"
"Prized possession?"
"Yeah, prized possession."
"What's so 'prized' about this thing?"
"Nothing."
"Tell me!"
"Nothing, Jason!"
"Now there's nothing to this 'prize'?!"
"Why are you still alive?!"
"Easy, easy! Calm down, child."
"Jason, JUST OPEN THE GIFT!!!!!!!!!!"
"Ummm........ok. But why do ya want me dead?"
"I don't want you dead."
"But that's what you said."
"I didn't say that. That's a lie!"
"Yeah you did! You said, 'Why you alive?'"
"I didn't mean it, ok."
"I know you didn't. This ain't your day."
"This ain't my day??!!"
"This ain't your day."
"Oh my goodness, this ain't my day. You're saying the things I said today, about the gift and how it may be something 'prized' or something strange. And now I'm saying what Kimberly said, before she left and wished me dead. I really need to go to bed. C ya Jason."
"C ya, bro!"
"Oh boy! I gotta go."
Out goes Tommy, in comes Kimberly. A smile upon her face as she sees Jason.
"Jason, thanks so much! That'll teach him!"
"Kim, you're mean, but I like it!"
"It's just a gift. What's the big deal? And he didn't even open it!"
"What is it?"
"Doesn't matter. Jason, why don't you open it?"
"What is this I'm opening?"
"Boy! Just upwrap the thing........
The End?