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StrikeForceRed
04-05-2005, 02:35 AM
i wrote this last night, let me no if its worth writing.



Millions of years ago, the earth was ruled by primitave creatures known as apes. They were very powerful beasts, with great intelligence. Thier leader, Cable, was the most powerful ape alive. They enslaved the humans, making them do thier most unpleasant chores, and beating them when they got out of line. Some humans, however, rebeled. They fought the apes with all thier might, but none ever succeeded in defeating an ape. Some humans went on a quest to find an anchient power source that the apes were always searching for, a power that would make the humans powerfull enough to concour the apes, and irradicate them from the earth. After thousands of years, six humans finally came across this power source. The source chose them to become six power rangers, and after a long battle, they had defeated the Ape army. The rest of the apes were turned into semi intellegent creatures thanks to the power source. Cable was the last to fall, but instead of perishing, his was locked into a time vortex, which meant that he was turned to a statue, but time doesn't pass for him, he can not move, he can not think, he can not do anything. The rangers buried him in a cave deep in the earth. They then returned the power to the source, and had it made into six bucklers, before butting them into a sealed container, only to be opened by people pure of heart, incase the Apes ever rose again...That time, is now.

Blue Diamond Ranger
04-05-2005, 06:17 PM
sounds cool, sounds too much like Planet of the Apes, but cool over all.

StrikeForceRed
04-07-2005, 01:18 AM
yea thats kinda where i got the idea from...