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red z-force ranger
04-03-2005, 06:52 PM
THURSDAY MORNING 9AM ZANE AND HIS FRIENDS ARE WATCHING SPIDERMAN 2.

HELGA:ZANE CAN SEE SOMETHING ELSE OTHER THAN TOGEY MCGUIRE IN BLUE AND RED SPANDEX PLEASE.

ZANE:WHAT WRONG WITH SPIDEMAN IT'S THE BEST SUPERHERO MOVIE SINCE THE BATMAN SERIES AND IT'S BETTER THAN LOOKING AT ROMEO AND JULIET AGAIN.

CHAD:I AGREE WITH ZANE YOU KNOW ROMANCE MOVIES SUCK EXCEPT FOR HITCH.

LANCE:THIS COMING FROM A GUY WHO RENTED MAID IN MADHATTEN AND CRIED DURING WHOLE MOVIE.

CHAD: FIRST OFF IT WAS BRYANS SONG AND SECOND WHO IN THE NAME OF RA TOLD THAT.

KARA:YOUR DAD.

ZANE AND KARA'S MOTHER: ZANE TURN TO THE NEWS NOW!

ZANE TURNED TO THE NEWS TO SEE THAT A LARGE SHUTTLE HOVERING ABOVE L.A.

LANCE: IS THAT WHAT I THINK IT IS.

ZANE:IF THINK THAT IT'S A ALIEN SPACECRAFT YOUR RIGHT ON THE MONEY.

KARA:BUT WHAT IS A SPACECRAFT DOING HERE.

AND AS AS SOON AS SHE THAT ALL FIVE TEENS WERE TRANSPORTED TO A ANCIENT TEMPLE WHERE STANDING THERE WAS A OLD MAN STANDING THERE.

KOLAK:AH GOOD IT WORKED.

ZANE:WHAT WORKED AND WHAT ARE WE DOING HERE?

KOLAK:MY TRANSPORTER I HAVE TRANSPORTED ALL FIVE OF HERE TO TEMPLE BECAUSE YOUR WORLD IS IN DANGER.

HELGA: THE FROM WHAT ECXACTLY?

KOLAK:YOU ALL HAVE SEEN THE SHIP HOVERING ABOVE YOUR CITY INSIDE THAT SHIP IS THE BROTHER OF LATE LORD ZEDD PRINCE BELLROGG AND LET TELL YOU HE IS MORE DANGEROUS AND CRAZY THAN HIS BROTHER.

ZANE:SO WHAT DO YOU WHA US TO DO GO UP AGANIST THIS BELLROGG GUY ALONE WITHOUT ANY ASSISTANCE.

KOLAK:NO EXSPECT YOU TO BECOME POWER RANGERS AND FIGHT BELLROGG.

CHAD: POWER RANGERS DUDE COME ON EVERYONE KNOWS THERE IS KNOW...

HELGA:WHAT KIND OF POWER RANGERS.

KOLAK:Z-FORCE RANGERS.

EVERYONE:Z-FORCE?

KOLAK:YES Z-FORCE.

ZANE: COULD YOU GIVE US A MOMENT PLEASE?

AND ALL OF THEM HUDULLED TOGETHER.

KARA:SO FEARLESS LEADER WHAT DO YOU THINK?

ZANE:WELL I THINK HE IS TELLING THE TRUTH AND I ALSO THINK WE SHOULD DO THIS.

HELGA: I AGREE WITH ZANE.

CHAD: ME TOO.

LANCE: ME THREE.

THEY ALL LOKED AT KARA TO SEE WHAT SHE WOULD SAY.

KARA: O.K BUT NO ONE CAN FIND OUT GOT IT.

ALL THREE OF THEM AGREED THEY TURNED AROUND AND ZANE SAID

ZANE:OKAY WERE IN.

KOLAK:GOOD WELL HERE ARE YOUR MORPHERS NOW GO MY SENSERS TELL ME THAT BELLROGGS FORCES ARE ATTACKING YOUR CITY AS WE SPEAK TO MORPH SAY Z-FORCE POWER UP.

ZANE:READY GUYS?

EVERYONE: Z-FORCE POWER UP!!!!

ZANE:RED HAWK!

CHAD:BLUE WOLF!

LANCE:GREEN GATOR!

KARA:YELLOW PANTHER

HELGA: PINK CRANE!

MEANWHILE BELLROGG CHEIF OF COMMAND TEALC WAS ROUNDING THE LAST OF HUMANS.

TEALC:MASTER BELLROGG WE'LL BE PLEASED TO SEE ALL HUMANS HAVE AGREED TO BE HIS SLAVES FOR REST ETERNITY HAHAHAHAHA!

I DON'T THINK SO TINHEAD!

WHEN TEALC TURNED AROUND HE SAW FIVE BEINGS IN DIFFERENT COLOR JUMPSUITS AND DIFFERENT LOOKING HELMETS.

TEALC: POWER RANGERS THE MASTER WILL BE PLEASED DESTROY THEM NOW!

RED RANGER:Z-FORCE GO!

SOON THE BATTLE BEGAN CHAD WAS FIRST HE DID HIS FAMOUS JBL DOUBLE CLOHTES-LINE FROM HELL SENDING TWO ORC-SOLIDERS FLYING AND THEN LANCE DID GATOR PUNCH SENDING 10 FLYING,ZANE WENT AFTER TEALC WITH HIS HAWK SWORD ONLY TO BE TAKEN BY SUPRISE BY A HAMMERHEAD LOOKING MONSTER.

TELC:GILLOX STAY HERE AND DESTROY THEM THE REST OF YOU BACK TO THE SHIP AS FOR U POWER RANGERS IT WAS NICE MEETING YOU.

ZANE: YOU GUYS READY Z-FORCE GO!

SOON THE Z-FORCE WAS BATTLING GILLOX CHAD AND LANCE BOTH HIT THE MONSTER WITH DROP KICKS BUT GILLOX CAUGHT BOTH THEIR FEET AND THOUGH THEM TO THE GROUND THEN HELGA USED HER CROSSBOW BUT HE CAUGHT IT AND BROKE IN TWO BUT THEN KOLAK CALLED THEM AND TOLD THEM TO JOIN THEIR WEPONS TOGETHER TO MAKE A STONGER WEPON.

ZANE:HAWK SWORD.

CHAD:WOLF DAGGERS.

LANCE:GATOR POWER FISTS.

KARA: PANTTHER SAI'S.

HELGA:CRANE CROSSBOW.

ALLTOGETHER: POWER BLASTER.

AND BEFORE GILLOX COULD GET AWAY THEY FIRED THEIR WEPON AND HE WAS DESTORYED.

CHAD: YEAH DOWN AND OUT.

KARA: ITS NOT OVER YET.

LANCE:SHE'S RIGHT WE STILL HAVE BELLROGG TO DEAL WITH.

ZANE:IT DOES NOT MATTER ANYTHING BELLROGG SENDS OUR WAY WE'LL TAKE CARE OF IT BECAUSE WE'RE A TEAM


[THE END]

GreenNinja
04-03-2005, 07:29 PM
Um? Is this a fanfic? Nothin' against you, just that the all-caps and the lack of story kind of hurts it.

Hieron
04-03-2005, 07:53 PM
Rotflmaoooooooooooo

Lunar Wolf Ranger
04-03-2005, 09:14 PM
Rotflmaoooooooooooo
Come on, be nice...ROTFLMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

red z-force ranger
04-04-2005, 12:43 AM
Please tell How U Liked It And Also When To Bring In The Sixth Ranger this is my first time writing a fanfic

TOK-715
04-04-2005, 01:00 AM
I didn't like it. A lot of it barely made sense and the with all the capitalized letters, it got so annoying I couldn't finish reading it.
I'm not trying to be mean, it's just my honest opinion.

the Fanfic seems like it was written by Edmund.