Gavyn
03-25-2005, 11:36 PM
Hmm. Interesting. I haven't been around to read too much of Olympia, but I like this.
KIU.
yami senshi youkaiou
03-25-2005, 11:39 PM
Seems good so far. I like it.
Hmm. Interesting. I haven't been around to read too much of Olympia, but I like this.
KIU.
Heh, I was wondering where you had run off too :023:
Part two will be up...er...sometime within this next week. I'm not sure when to post it. However, it will be in this thread.
Gavyn
03-26-2005, 09:58 AM
Heh, I was wondering where you had run off too :023:
Part two will be up...er...sometime within this next week. I'm not sure when to post it. However, it will be in this thread.
Yeah, I had a post in my last fanfic thread stating where I've been.
I'm looking forward to it. I'm at a relatives' house right now during Spring Break, that's why I have access.
Yeah, I had a post in my last fanfic thread stating where I've been.
I'm looking forward to it. I'm at a relatives' house right now during Spring Break, that's why I have access.
No access at home? :(
>_>
<_<
*slinks off and goes looking for Gayvn's supposed fanfic*
Gavyn
03-26-2005, 10:03 AM
No access at home? :(
>_>
<_<
*slinks off and goes looking for Gayvn's supposed fanfic*
No, my dad and I moved again and the computer we had...broke...let's just put it that way...
So really, any access I have is at 1) My mom's boyfriend's house, which I go to every other weekend and 2) My grandmother's house.
BTW, the last fic I started was Power Rangers: Dragon Sages. Just search for it. ;)
BACK ON TOPIC, I'm looking forward to the next part of the finale. KIU.
No, my dad and I moved again and the computer we had...broke...let's just put it that way...
...Sounds like an interesting story goes with that statement...
Anyway, pt.2 is here. I'll be gone most of tomorrow, so I'm not sure if I'll be on to post another part until Monday. In sort, I might post tomorrow, I might not.
Meh, enjoy:
A golden orb...
Nemesis held it in her hands.
“Gold....powers?”
“Yep” said Intar “It is completely finished. All that is needed is someone to test it”
Nemesis looked the orb over. Then, after a moment, she stood up from her seat in the cockpit.
“Olympic Elemental!”
“Power of Techno!” she cried, and a golden colored uniform covered her body from head to toe. Her power was based off the artificial “element”, technology.
Now clothed as the Gold ranger, Nemesis sat back down.
Suddenly, another, seventh zord approached the area. It was in the shape of a Minotaur.
“Now” said Intar “Its time to combine all seven zords”
*****************
Finally, the red, blue, and yellow rangers had managed to break the door down.
“Can we go inside now?” asked Sing “It’s cold”
The three rangers laughed as they raced inside the massive base, trying to escape from the terrible cold outside.
“How can this place rain?” asked Mintar “I thought this was a dead world”
“It’s probably Chaos” replied Orion “I’m guessing anything can happen with him around”
“Including the end of all things” Sing added.
Orion nodded solemnly “Ya...that too”
“I hope the others are ok” Sing muttered.
“So am I” said Mintar “So am I”
The hallway they where in was dark and damp. Water was leaking in from the outside, and there was apparently no power in this part of the building. Orion surmised that most of the power was being used for the construction of the portal.
“What a wonderful change of scenery from being outside” joked Mintar.
Orion didn’t really care about jokes at this point, as the trio had reached an intersection. “Where to now?” he asked to no one in particular.
The others walked up to him, and looked in all three directions. All three hallways just seemed like endless tunnels, all leading to the same thing.
Darkness.
Hmmmm.....” Sing said, pointing to each of the directions “Eni-meni-mini-mo....”
Underneath his helmet, Orion rolled his eyes “Sing...”
“Strait” she said, heading off in that direction. The two boys followed.
**************
Both the Minotaur and the Colossus zords began to transform.
The Colossus attached first. Its arms folded into the main body and attached to the back of the Mythic Megazord’s wings, forming a larger jetpack. Its legs folded over the shoulders of the Megazord, on both sides of the head, creating cannons.
The Minotaur, however, split apart. Different parts attached to different locations of the Mythic Megazord. Leg armor and chest armor now adorned the new zord formation.
As the two rangers joined up in the same cockpit, Intar looked at Nemesis.
“I have to go help the others. You continue piloting the Megazord” he said to her.
She glanced at him “You got it!”
Intar leaped out of the zord, heading into a free-fall into the ensuing battle below. The silver ranger took out his saw blade, and rushed into battle.....
**************
Vega cut down another enemy. He had been hit several times, and the pain was starting to mount. He didn’t know how much more he could take.
Then he say it.
Or rather...her.
He saw a flash of pink. He ran in that direction, and pushed aside anyone that was in his way. Sure enough, Etri was still fighting.
Just like him.
She fell to her knees as another blow to the shoulder injured her.
He knocked aside another minion, and rushed over to her.
“You ok?” he asked, helping her up.
“I’m hurt, outnumbered a thousand to one…and you ask if I’m ok?!”
“Ok, bad question” he admitted. The two drew their sabers and stood with their backs to each other. Each one had their saber ready, as if daring any enemy troops to attack.
“Perhaps we should get out of here?” asked Etri.
“Good idea” Vega shoved his fist into the ground, causing a shockwave. The resulting blast knocked the surrounding troops into the air.
“Time to go!” Etri grabbed Vega and ran. And she didn’t stop running until they had managed to get though the army lines.
“Wasn’t I supposed to rescue you?” Vega asked, trying to regain his breath.
“Ya…” Etri thought slyly “Think quicker next time” she left a speechless Vega behind as she headed for the base, trying to get the mud off her uniform.
************
Intar didn’t have nearly as much trouble as the others did getting though the battle. He blasted his foes with freezing air, stopping them in their tracks. Any that still managed to get close to him where instantly cut down by his saw blade. Within minutes, he had managed to cut though the entire army, and was on his way to the base himself.
************
The Mythic Battlezord made its way into battle, all weapons armed. The Battlezord’s shoulder cannons fired volley after volley at the enemy, inflicting massive damage on the enemy zords, and causing some of the weaker ones to lose body parts.
Another enemy zord attempted to grab the Battlezord by the left arm and throw it down. However, Nemesis knocked it back with a hit from the Battlezord’s flaming saber. Another slice from the saw blade sealed the opponent’s fate as it fell over and exploded in a blaze of glory.
************
Gaia continued to watch these events transpire.
“The enemy draws nearer” Loki said, looking over her shoulder.
“They won’t get to use in time” she replied “And besides, I still have a few surprises in store for our little friends…..” she smiled as she watched Intar heading for her base.
“Gaia…….” Said a voice. The two gods turned around. It was coming from the black portal.
“Gaia…….” It repeated.
“Yes?” she asked.
“Send defenses….” It ordered “The rangers must not be allowed to enter this chamber until it is time”
“But…power must be diverted from the generator….”
“My power no longer needs your pitiful excuse for a base” said the voice “All I need are the gods I am currently absorbing”
“Of course” said Gaia “I will do so at once”
************
The three rangers continued to cautiously make their way down the hallway when the lights in the base reactivated.
Mintar looked up at the lights “That can’t be a good sign”
That was when the alarms went off, and all sorts of weapons popped out of the walls.
“No….THAT can’t be a good sign” Sing corrected her husband.
“DUCK!” Orion rolled out of the way of a laser blast, and returned fire with his blaster, neutralizing the defense turret. However, by this time, the others had opened fire.
Sing grabbed both of them and raced behind the corner at hyper speeds.
“What now?” she asked Orion.
“We can’t remain out in the open anymore” said Orion, stating the obvious. He looked around, and saw a vent in the ceiling.
“Bingo” he said, as he grabbed onto the sides of the wall. He then hoisted himself into the vent, and held his hand out for the other two. Sing entered the vent first, followed by Mintar.
Mintar tried to adjust to his crowded surroundings. “Where to now?” he asked.
“Uh…” Orion thought “The only way we have. Strait” the red ranger headed down the long path, followed by the other two.
************
The lights went on all around Etri and Vega. These where soon followed by alarms and turrets coming out of the walls.
“Joy” said Vega “The welcome wagon”
“I see your sense of humor as returned” Etri replied.
The guns began blasting, as the rangers rolled out of the way.
“Any bright ideas?” she asked.
“One” Vega said “Run” he stood up and ran at full speeds. As he dodged the oncoming blasts, he couldn’t hope but wish he had Sing’s super speeds…….
************
Intar approached the base. Suddenly, several turrets popped out of the ground around him.
“Hades”
Thinking quick, Intar spun around, freezing the entire collective of turrets in one long, drawn out gust of frozen wind. Further out, he could see more popping out of the ground. It was obvious that even he couldn’t keep them at bay for long. So, he decided to make a run for it. He saw a vent on the side of the building, and quickly hopped inside, successfully avoiding any turret blasts.
************
The Mythic Battlezord fell to the ground, now almost out of power. Nemesis struggled to get it back up off the ground, but it was no use. Enemy zords had it pinned down, and enemy troops where beginning to swarm over it.
But Nemesis wasn’t going to let these ingrates have the Battlezord. Not before she had a chance to tinker with her new Minotaur zord.
So, she did the only thing she could do.
She summoned the zords away. She sent them back to their hiding spots, and jumped down to the ground.
A ground now swarming with enemy troops.
“So…you all want a piece of me?” she calmly asked.
The others gave no answer, but instead came closer and closer, weapons drawn.
“I’ll take that as a yes” she placed both hands in front of her. Instantly, a force field began to form.
“Sucks to be you” she muttered, as the energy shield thrust forward and rammed though the enemy forces, ripping them to shreds.
Any troops still standing charged at the gold ranger. She simply stood there, however. A gun materialized in her hands. It was a rather large gun. More like a hand-held cannon. She opened fire, taking down the few remaining troops with an unrelenting volley of hell and fire.
“I think I’m gonna like this weapon” she smirked to herself, as she headed for the base.
************
“Guys, loom at this” Mintar pointed to a hole in the vent. Below was a large generator. A really big generator. One the size of one that could power a base….
“Figure that could be the source of the station’s power?” asked Sing.
“I’d bet on it” replied Orion “Good work, Mintar. You two go ahead and disable that while I head onto the main chamber”
“You’ll need backup” said Sing “I’ll help”
“No” Orion replied “Stay with him. I can take anything they can dish out until you arrive”
Sing looked at Orion, and began to say something. But she realized that it would have no effect, so she closed her mouth. Mintar had already dropped below. She headed down as well, after giving Orion another glance.
The red ranger sighed, and went on his way. His way….to the heart of the station.
This was it.
************
Intar crawled his way though the vents, cramped, and slightly claustrophobic.
“I hate tight spaces” he thought to himself “Why do they always have to make air vents so friggin tiny?”
************
Vega ran, Etri following close behind him. The two dodged a number of laser blasts that bordered somewhere on the supernatural.
************
Sing and Mintar studied the design of the power plant. They looked for a way to destroy it.
“Any ideas?” asked Mintar.
“One” replied Sing. She grabbed her blaster and opened fire, causing sparks. Within minutes, all power had been disabled, and the lights had gone out.
“Perfect” she said, just before the lights came back on.
“Wait….a backup generator?” asked Mintar “Damnit….its never easy…”
“Don’t I know it” replied Sing. Suddenly, gasses started filling into the room. The door to the chamber also began closing.
“Poison gas” said Mintar.
“Mr. Obvious strikes again” remarked Sing, as she ran for the door. She managed to roll under, just as the door finished shutting. When she got up, she realized that Mintar wasn’t with her.
“Mintar!” she shouted at the door.
“Go!” shouted a muffled voice “I’ll be ok!” she could hear him coughing. Sing had to do something. And fast, because her husband wouldn’t be around for long…
*************
Orion dropped down, into a side chamber. One without weapons. He surmised that he was close to his objective, as no weapons meant that they wouldn’t risk harm to any projects in the area. Either that or an area not important enough to defend.
Suddenly, Intar dropped out of another vent.
“Hello” he said.
“Hey” replied Orion “Any idea where we are?”
“I’m guessing close to the portal”
“Good….”
************
Gaia watched as the Silver and Red rangers talked. She smiled. It was time.
She walked over to a stall to the right of the portal, and put specially designed gloves, boots, and a helmet on. Each object was connected with wires to the computer.
Now Orion would really feel Intar’s wrath…
Gavyn
03-26-2005, 11:28 PM
Nice, Nice, NICE chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
Power of Technology? That's different. I like it. ;)
Gavyn
03-27-2005, 09:00 PM
Awesome episode man, I felt this feeling of deep suspense flowing through me as I read (sounds VERY strange, I know). Keep up the awesome, awesome work.
BeTheSwallow
03-30-2005, 09:10 PM
That was seriously kickass. It's really cool to see a team (and writer) go from just staring out to kickass finale. It's nice to know what happened to the team post-finale, too. Just remember, if you do bring them back, ya gotta stick to what ya said here! :D j/k It's your universe, do what you will with it. And thanks for the shoutout!
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Lookin' forward to your next fic! *Check forum...* Yay!
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I'm not sure whether to laugh or be afraid....
And thanks...
Now get back to writing fics! I havn't seen one from you for a while now!
BeTheSwallow
03-31-2005, 01:05 AM
Now get back to writing fics! I havn't seen one from you for a while now!
Yeah I know. I've been kinda off and on with "Forever" but I swear work gets done on it slowly! :D I have changed my mentality to that of "don't post it until it's completely written." You can do all sorts of fun things that way, like foreshadowing, allusions, etc. :023:
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