Dogbots

[Masondogbot]

Hope this has better comments then my last fanfics
When kid missed the bus and skipped school they find this comet and became Dogbot human dog worrors.They must stop Tigerstar a tiger monster who wants to distroy the world and make it his own.Will they win.

Rangers:
Dylan Smith
Age:18
Dogbot:Red Firedog
Bio:Dylan is a rebel kid who cares about himself and Sydney his fioncee.

Sydney Jessica
Age:18
Dogbot:Blue Waterdog
Bio:She is sometimes a witch or a bitch

Ray Indigo
Age:18
Dogbot:Green Airdog
Bio:He is well the goof who distroyed everything

Paige Parker
Age:18
Dogbot:Yellow Earthdog
Bio:She is like Ray but more social stupid

Lance Novel
Age:18
Dogbot:Black Darkdog
Bio:He is a Jock,Mature and Honest

Allies:
Trent Conner
Age:18
Helps:He just well....the friend in need mainly
Bio:He is often picked on by the kids at his high school

Kenny Merrick (Epasode 5 and over)
Age:17
Helps:Dose not,he is just in the show
Bio:A famus actor who is Paiges New boyfriend in epasode 5

Villians:
Tigerstar
Age:30
Bio:He is the boss of the crew

Rovion(Ro-vin)
Age:21
Bio:He is the first mate.(ie Zeltrax,Goldar,etc.)

Rage
Age:19
Bio:Navigater

Theme song
(whisper:Dogbots,Dogbots,Dogbots)
5 kids missed the bus....
And then they skipped school
along the way they find a coment and became.....
Power ranger DogBots,DogBots they are idiotic,its true
DogBot,DogBots,one of them distroyed the droids(Zords)
(Long Gutar solo;whispering DogBots over and over during solo)
DogBots,DogBots,Omg we are doomed
DogBots DogBots this song dose not make sence
DogBots DogBots I am sick of saying that word

DOGBOTS,Heck Yeah

[Masondogbot]

Summery:They get there powers;Lance haves a problem with Dylan being the leader

Chapter 1:
In a ship were we meet are enemies Tigerstar,Rovion,and Rage heading for a planet to make there own.

TIGERSTAR: Rage were are we heading?
RAGE: For Jupiter, Mars and Earth.
ROVION: So which one?
TIGERSTAR: Earth
ROVION: But it has life?
TIGERSTAR: Simple we tern them to monsters and boom Tiger Planet
ROVION: Good point
TIGERSTAR: Whose going to stop me? Ha Ha Ha

Then a comet is heading for Earth in Sweetvile, Michigan

We find are heroes running to the bus stop but they did not make it
RAY: Damn it, We are 4 house away
DYLAN: Don’t stop!
(The bus leaves)
SYDNEY: Crap, What now
TRENT: We can drive
DYLAN:I say we skip
PAIGE: Oh my god, The bus is gone, what do we do?
(They stare at Paige)
LANCE: Well I am going
DYLAN: Ok who votes for No school
(Dylan, Jessie, Ray and Paige raise there hands)
SYDNEY: Well I win so lets go
LANCE: All right
SYDNEY: But were do we go?
DYLAN: We lie say its Senior skip day
SYDNEY: Yeah
RAY: Its May so its a good Idea

Chapter 2:
The gang are have in a good day and then a comet came
(Comet comes)
DYLAN: What is it
TRENT:A comet
PAIGE: Dose anyone wants to touch it?
TRENT:I will
(Trent Fells the Comet)
TRENT: See nothing
(Then Beams have made them Morphers on there Right hand on Dylan, Sydney, Ray, Paige and Lance)
DYLAN: Dude
(Then the Tigership comes by)
JESSIE: Oh man
ROVION:I am Rovion
DYLAN: What
ROVION: Rovion
RAY: Never herd of it
DYLAN:I know that Ray
ROVION: Its Just a name
DYLAN: Whatever, What?
ROVION:I am here to make this my planet
DYLAN: Oh ok
ROVION: With no TV
DYLAN:NO TV! YOU SON OF A...... :evil9:
(Dylan punches Rovion like 5 houses down)
ROVION: Holycrap
DYLAN:OHH MY GOD
DYLAN:I have super Strength
(Rage Comes out of Ship)
RAGE: What’s going on
ROVION: He beat me
PAIGE: Hay what dose this button do
(She pushes button on morphed and morphs to yellow ranger)
PAIGE: Holycrap
ROVION: Oh no She’s a Dogbot
RAY: What
ROVION: Dogbots, There are 5 of them, Firedog is the Red Dogbot with Fire and Super Strength, Waterdog is Blue and has Water attacks and Telekinesis, Airdog is the Green one and has a Rubber Body, Earthdog who is that one over there has Super Speed and Earth Powers and Finally Darkdog is Black and has Eye beams and dark powers.
DYLAN: Wow good to know, not, I am leavening
RAGE: Lets go Rovion
ROVION: yeah

Chapter 3:
Everyone is at Trent’s lab for training.
TRENT: Well we found out are Powers and Who we are so I made some weapons.
DYLAN: So what did you got
TRENT: Well from the comet gave me some, Like these laser guns
RAY: Can I see
TRENT: sure
(Trent gives him a laser)
RAY:I am the terminator
(Shoots gun at window)
TRENT: Don’t, Do that
SYDNEY: give me one
(Grabs a gun and shoots it)
TRENT: hey don’t
(Try to get gun)
TRENT: give me that
SYDNEY: Shut Up
(She pushes Trent away)
DYLAN: Give me one
(Everyone grabs a gun)
TRENT: That’s it I am hiding
(Goes under desk)

Now everyone is done playing
SYDNEY: How do we communicate?
TRENT: With these
(gives him 2 cups tied to a string)
SYDNEY: What is with this
TRENT: You destroyed the communicators when you were playing around
DYLAN: Ooh, Ohh yeah

Trent shows them the Zords
TRENT: These are your Zords
RAY: What dose this button do?
TRENT: Don’t press that
(They destroy the Zords)
DYLAN: Ahh man that’s the 3rd time we cant do anything right,

TRENT: Ok time for training
the Rangers start training

Chapter 4:
The Rangers have finished there training and the only one who passed is Lance.

TRENT: Well yet again you all failed to do your job.
DYLAN: Yeah,I am really disappointed in all of you, Expect my fiancé Sydney
LANCE: You and Jessie lost to, mainly I should be the leader
DYLAN: Hey...........
(long pause)
DYLAN: shut up
SYDNEY: mainly Ray is the problem
DYLAN: destroyed the watches and Zords
RAY: well it was an accident
TRENT: yeah right what were you thinking?
RAY: hhmmm,
(He was thinking of a South park episode)
RAY:I for get
PAIGE: Oh my god, I have a weird watch
(Press her morphed and became a Dogbot)
SYDNEY: You are such a retart
PAIGE: hey I am not retarted
SYDNEY: You just notice stuff
PAIGE: Yeah well
SYDNEY:I am Paige and I am stupid
PAIGE:DOG FACE
(Pouches Sydney W/ her Speed)
SYDNEY: Why you
(They both fight)
DYLAN: Wow, Hot, aaaaaaaahhhhhhh, Well
(Kicks lance W/Strength)
LANCE: Hey
(They both fight)
RAY: What the hell
(Kicks Trent)
TRENT:EVERYONE STOP
(they all stop)
TRENT: Don’t you see what’s going on? Since we had these gifts we were all just fighting,
DYLAN: Yeah I am hitting Ray
(Space ship comes)
DYLAN: Not again with Rovinny

They go to the street
ROVION: Now we are ready for battle I suppose
DYLAN: Yeah whatever
(The Tiger team got there weapons, Rovion:Sword/ Rage: Mirror)
DYLAN: Ready
LANCE: hm
RANGERS:DOGBOTS GO
(They morph and they summon there swords)
DYLAN: Yeah
(Trent hides under a mailbox and They fight, Dylan vs. Rovion and Dogbots vs. Rage)

Chapter 5:
DURING SWORD FIGHT:
ROVION: You are strong Firedog
DYLAN: Yeah, so
ROVION: You should join are team
DYLAN: Join you, well you now what
(Slashes Rovion)
ROVION: AHHHh
(And then Dylan Cokes him and threw Rovion on the ship)
ROVION:AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
DYLAN: Hell yeah

later they all got along
TRENT: So you all learn your lessen
DYLAN: What, Lessen?
TRENT: That friendship is more important than Power
DYLAN: Hell no, Power is important
TRENT: Well, When, Ahh forget it

Chapter 6:
One week later they still don’t know about Tigerstar or there powers and they face a monster called Inka who is made out of Ink

Fight:
DYLAN: Come on b**ch,bring it
LANCE: OK, Dylan, I have a plan, First we have Paige.......
DYLAN: Don’t worry I got this tanked care of
INKA: Sooo,wwiicch oonnee oooff yyoouu jjaacckkkaasssees aarree ggooiinngg ttoo fiihhggtt mmee?
DYLAN: Me b**th
(Kicks Inka but her Ink powers made her to a ball)
DYLAN: What?!?!
(Kicks again)
DYLAN: God damn it
(They do it again)
DYLAN: Jebus
(Kicks her like 4 times and cant hit her)
INKA: Yyyooouu aaarrreee wwweeeaaakkk
LANCE(to Paige):Paige, use your Earthquake attack
PAIGE: hhhmmm, OK, Earth shaker
(Uses attack to hit Inka)
INKA:WWHHHAAATT,NNOOO
LANCE: Now eye beam
DYLAN: Fire sword
(Dylan hits Inka with firesword but did no effect also curses Lance attack to miss)
LANCE:I all most got him, you wreck everything
INKA:TTTHHHEEERRREEE IIIISSSS NNNOOO CCCHHHAAANNNCCCEE TTTOO BBBEEEAAATTT MMMEEE!
DYLAN: Oh yeah, Sydney use your Ice attack
SYDNEY: all right
(uses Ice attack to freeze her)
LANCE: ok I'll
DYLAN: Now body slam
(Dylan body slams Inka and destroys her)
LANCE: Can you just lower your ego?
DYLAN: What?
LANCE: Well you just defeat the enemy for your self
DYLAN: With Sydney
LANCE: but still,
DYLAN: Listen I am the leader here
LANCE: but, Hey

The gang is at Shop class, Lance is with Trent

TRENT: So what’s with today?
LANCE: It sucked
TRENT: Why
LANCE: because Dylan hugs the fire
TRENT: Well he is the leader, It will go soon
LANCE: What if I was Leader?
TRENT: You cant, The Red one must be a leader
LANCE: For a day
TRENT: Well you are Smart and Popular
(A bully comes by and pushes Trent Project on the ground and leaves)
BULLY:HA HA
LANCE: And your well a wreck
TRENT: Sh*t

Chapter 7:
Lance wants to talk to Dylan
LANCE: Dylan I want to talk
DYLAN: What is it Novel Spit it
LANCE: Its about your leadership
DYLAN: My god
LANCE:I just want to be Leader, For one mission
DYLAN: Ok, But I am a good one then you
LANCE:OK

(Space ship in Tigerstar)
ROVION: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH, Not again
RAGE: So master what do we do?
ROVION: Don’t ask him
RAGE: Shut Up and Smoke your Cigarette
TIGERSTAR: Guys Guys shut up, I am really board and I want to fight them
ROVION: You cant fight them they are strong
TIGERSTAR:I am too powerful, Unlike Its the last battle
ROVION:OK, We are going
TIGERSTAR: No, I am just going to do this game myself
ROVION: Its life, Not a game
TIGERSTAR: To me it is.
(Tigerstar leaves)
ROVION: Who told you I smoke?
RAGE: You did just now?

Alert comes, It was Tigerstar making trouble

DYLAN: Guys come on lets go
LANCE: Remember I am the leader
DYLAN:I know, but this is....
LANCE: Listen I don’t care
DYLAN: Alright
(They all morph)
DYLAN: Where is he?
(Tigerstar teleports to them)
TIGERSTAR: Here
DYLAN: Who are you
LANCE: What do you want
TIGERSTAR:I am Tigerstar, I am the one who send Rovion and Rage on you
DYLAN: Why are you here
TIGERSTAR:I am really bored, I also want to make this my world
DYLAN: Herd I going
(gain Fire sword)
LANCE: No I am the leader
TIGERSTAR: No way
(Throws Star at lance)
LANCE: Ahh
(Star comes back to Tigerstar)
DYLAN: Dude that’s F**ked up
LANCE: I am ok
DYLAN: Listen I should be leader
LANCE: Leave me alone
DYLAN: Come on
LANCE:Lisen Leader or not, dose not mean I have to obey you.
TIGERSTAR: That’s true
(Used hand beam)
LANCE: Ahh
PAIGE: He is getting his ass kicked
SYDNEY: Ice be...
DYLAN: No honey, Lance dose not want that
LANCE: Shut up
DYLAN: No you shut up
TIGERSTAR:I am leavening
(Leaves)
LANCE:ahhh

Chapter 8:
Back at the Tigabase
TIGERSTAR: To strong for them
ROVION: So what now
TIGERSTAR:I got a Doggem from the comet
RAGE: Really
TIGERSTAR: Yeah, Guys meat the White Lightdog Ranger
(Lightdog appers)

DYLAN: Well we learn some thing today, wait, Lance don’t you want to say it?
LANCE: No
DYLAN: Say it
LANCE: Don’t want to
DYLAN: Say it
LANCE: Because your the leader I don’t have to obey you
DYLAN: Say it Mother F**Ker!
LANCE: OK, You were Right and I was wrong
DYLAN: See hard?
LANCE: But wait, I just got my ass kicked, there is no debate?!
DYLAN: Bye
(Dylan leaves)
LANCE: That kid F**Ked

[DangerBoy]

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! OMG there are so many things wrong with this fic, yet there are so many things RIGHT! I mean okay the grammar for one is a little weak, but hey no body's perfect. But what you got right is the comedy. hahahah I was laughing out loud at some parts. Like when Ray randomly destroyed the zords and the communicator's! and then Rovion saying his name and Ray says "Never heard of it." hahaha I guess just cuz most of the stuff is so random is why I thought it was funny.

SYDNEY: How do we communicate?
TRENT: With these
(gives him 2 cups tied to a string)

hahaahaha!

PAIGE: Oh my god, I have a weird watch
(Press her morphed and became a Dogbot)
SYDNEY: You are such a retart

hahaha yeah she is!

don't take this the wrong way but reading ur fic is like watching one of those really bad cheesy B movies. Where its so bad that its good/funny. I am probably in the minority here but I would enjoy reading at least one more installment. At least to find out who this White Lightdog ranger is.

[Masondogbot]

Well I am working on epasode 2:White Light Blows were he appers.

[TOK-715]

To be honest after reading that, I feel like beating you with a stick. :( Yep it's mean, but i just had to be honest.

[Masondogbot]

To be honest after reading that, I feel like beating you with a stick. :( Yep it's mean, but i just had to be honest.

How can it be that bad,come on?Are you mad by the 2 cups and a string joke as commuticaters?

[TOK-715]

No i'm just a bit annoyed by the fact they're "dog" rangers, you used the name "Trent", when you could've been a bit more creative and used something else. The entire structure isn't detailed enough, everything's rushed. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, just honest.

Put some work into the spelling & grammer as well. There doesn't seem to be any .. um... emotions in the rangers, it's just ... fight fight, win win, end.
Example:
"later they all got along"

Could be explained more, I'm curious how they all got along.

[Masondogbot]

No i'm just a bit annoyed by the fact they're "dog" rangers, you used the name "Trent", when you could've been a bit more creative and used something else. The entire structure isn't detailed enough, everything's rushed. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, just honest.

Put some work into the spelling & grammer as well. There doesn't seem to be any .. um... emotions in the rangers, it's just ... fight fight, win win, end.
Example:
"later they all got along"

Could be explained more, I'm curious how they all got along.

True,But that is not the Trent from PRDT,The Trent in the Story is diffrent than him,The Trent in the Story is like,the mentor.

[TOK-715]

True,But that is not the Trent from PRDT,The Trent in the Story is diffrent than him,The Trent in the Story is like,the mentor.
Oh i know they're not the same, I just have this problem where you shouldn't use the name again if it's already once used.

Take some time in your fanfic, don't rush it.
I'm writing one as well right now, I think I'll be done in about a year-ish.
I've re-written it twice already, 50% through the introduction story. I just don't want it sucking balls y'know.

[Masondogbot]

Summery:The White Ranger Lightdog appers but he is evil;Ray brakes Lance's model ship and he blames it on Sydney.

TRENT: Guys I have to go
DYLAN: Why
TRENT: Job interview
DYLAN: Oh ok
(He leave)
LANCE:GUYS COME IN MY ROOM QUICK
DYLAN: Damn, Now I am watching North Park
(Throws Remote)
DYLAN: Damn
(They go to lance's room)
DYLAN: What?
LANCE: Look at this
SYDNEY: What is it?
LANCE:A boat, Made it for 6 hours, I making another one later
PAIGE: Pretty, Can I see it
LANCE: No! No one is felling it, Even You and Ray
PAIGE: Hey why me?
SYDNEY: cuse your an...well....ah...Idiot
PAIGE:HEY DONT.. hhmm
LANCE: Now, No one is touch in it.
DYLAN: Missed North park for nothing
(Goes back in TV room)
DYLAN:AAHH,MAN!LENNY IS ALL READY DEAD
(They all leave)
RAY: hhmmm
(Ray goes to the room)
RAY: Cool ship, Why dose he not trust me?
(Drops Ship)
RAY: oops
(Door opens)
PAIGE: hey Ray you coming?
RAY: Yeah in a sec
(Puts it back on the desk)
RAY:HM

(Tigerstar is in the lab working on Lightdog)
ROVION:I want to know what he is doing
RAGE: Making Lightdog remember
ROVION:I want to know what he looks like
(Tigerstar come in)
TIGERSTAR: Yes I am finish
ROVION: Tiger, are you sure he is good for a mission
TIGERSTAR: Hell yeah, He is a Dogbot
ROVION: So, Lets see him
TIGERSTAR: Now here is Lightdog
(Lightdog comes in)
LIGHTDOG: Ha Ha Ha
RAGE: Are very own Dogbot
ROVION:I will teach him everything I know
TIGERSTAR:3..2..1..Done
ROVION: Not funny
TIGERSTAR: Ready?
LIGHTDOG: Yeah, Ready to kick some mother F**king ass
ROVION: He’s a sailor to, Arr. HA
(No one is laughing)
LIGHTDOG: You Suck

(Some noise comes)
DYLAN: What was that?
LANCE: Trent’s computer, It can track down if there is a monster to fight
SYDNEY: So who is it?
LANCE: Ahhh, White Dogbot
RAY: What
LANCE: Look
DYLAN: Its Evil, trust me
RAY: You don’t know that
DYLAN: Hey, I watch a lot of shows, and there is an Evil enemies similar to the good guys
RAY: This is Life not a TV show you Jacka$$
LANCE: We must go any ways
(They morph)
(They teleport)
DYLAN: Hi, ahh, so are you a good guy or bad
LIGHTDOG:.........
SYDNEY: We are Firedog, Airdog, Darkdog, Earthdog and I am Waterdog
RAY: We can tell you are real names but you must be a good guy.
DYLAN: So, You good?
(Holds out his hand for him to shake it)
LIGHTDOG:I don’t
DYLAN: Hmm?
(Lightdog Grabs Dylan’s Rist and Throws him to a Brick Building)
DYLAN(while in air):OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH SSSSSSHH*******TTTTT
(Smacks face first and then on the ground)
SYDNEY: Oh no
(pause)
RAY: hahehee
(they all look at Ray)
RAY: hee,ha,whoho
LIGHTDOG:I am Lightdog,I work for Tigerstar
DYLAN: No Sh*t, We know
LIGHTING: Shut up
(Trows some sort of lighting ball at Dylan)
DYLAN: ah ho, damn
PAIGE: Who are you?
LIGHTDOG:I am a.....
DYLAN: Lightdog you Idiot
LIGHTDOG: Will you shut the F*ck up, Jebus
(Dose it again)
DYLAN: Ahhh
LIGHTDOG: now, I am just a guy who wants to have fun
DYLAN:I am confuse, are you Lightdog or a guy who wants to have fun?
LIGHTDOG:MY GOD LET ME FINISH
(Dose it again)
DYLAN: Ouch, that hurts
SYDNEY: That’s it, That is the last time you hit my Boyfriend!
DYLAN: Don't stick up for me please
LIGHTDOG:EEERRRR
DYLAN: Ahh, Not again
(Dylan runs away from the scene)
LIGHTDOG: My god? What do you see in him
JESSIE: That’s it, Ice Beam
(She use her powers to get Lightdog frozen)
RAY: Easy
(But Lightdog gets out of the Ice and became free)
LIGHTDOG: No way
(He was back to normal)
PAIGE: Well, maybe Earth can do it. Earthquake
(She made an earthquake)
LIGHTDOG: Ha
(he jumped back to a roof of a building)
SYDNEY: No
LIGHTDOG: Ha Ha
(But Dylan was on a building)
DYLAN: Not for long
PAIGE: Yeah
LIGHTDOG: So you want to end this
DYLAN: Yeah
LIGHTDOG: Well bring it on
DYLAN:AHHHH
(He runs and going to punch Lightdog)
DYLAN: That’s it, FIRE PUNCH
(Firedog punches Lightdog but he miss and he fell of a building)
DYLAN: What no
(everyone is scared because he was going to get hit in the street and may get hit by a Car)
DYLAN: AHHHHHHHHHHHhh
SYDNEY:NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO
LIGHTDOG(in a younger voice):What? No


(Dylan is still falling)
DYLAN: aaaaahhhhhh, Sydney what ever you do, DONT MARRY RAY
(Lightdog saves him and teleports to the roof)
DYLAN: wait you just save my life
LIGHTDOG:I don’t like fast deaths
DYLAN: what
LIGHTDOG: now, Lightdog wave
DYLAN: ohh S**t
(Dylan runs)
LIGHTDOG: ahhh
(Light ball hits Dylan in the back)
DYLAN:AHHH waaaha
LIGHTDOG: Now for those 4
(Teleports to the rest)
PAIGE: oh god
(comes to them
LIGHTDOG: honey I am home
LANCE:I got a plan, Paige holds Rays feet
RAY: why
PAIGE:OK
(Holds his feet)
LANCE: Now,Paige use your speed to spin him around and Ray you streach.
RAY:OK
LANCE: Now Go
(Paige Spins Ray and Ray Grows)
LANCE: Now Lightdog
LIGHTDOG: No way
(Lightdog grabs Rays head a he use thunderbolt)
LANCE: no
LIGHTDOG: ahh ahh
(Ray and Paige were electrocuted)
RAY: Ah, awesome
LANCE: are you ok
RAY: Ha Ha sleep
LANCE: That’s it, Moon beam
(A giant moon floats on top of him and the moon made a beam)
LIGHTDOG: Light beats Dark, Thunda ball
(Used Thunder ball to destroy the moon)
LANCE:ahhh, Darkdogwave
(Uses a big ball of darkness)
LIGHTDOG: Lightdog Wave
(dose the same)
LANCE: Go
LIGHTDOG:arr
(Lightdog wave destroyed Darkdog wave)
LANCE:ahhh
LIGHTDOG: Now, Light sword,
LANCE:ohh Sh*t
(Lightdog made a Sword of lighting)
LANCE: Ahhh
(Lightdog made an X on Darkdog by sword and it Exploded)
SYDNEY: Ice beam
LIGHTDOG: Not again
(Blocks Ice beam by sword and It hit Sydney)
SYDNEY: Mother Fu...
(she freezes)
LIGHTDOG: No,My work is done
(Teleports back)


10 minutes later they all got free and they go back to the house
(They come in)
SYDNEY:God,2nd time that happened
TRENT: Where were you guys
DYLAN: Fighting a Dogbot and we lost, Again
TRENT: Glad I am Not You
DYLAN:F*ck this I am going to bed

(Ray is fixing the boat that he broke)
RAY: There, Finish
(The flag broke off)
RAY:aaahhhh. What now, I know blame some one, but who?
(Ray gets out of Lances room and Sydney walks by)
SYDNEY: oh, Hey
(She goes to her room)
RAY(thinking):Sydney, Of Corse
RAY: But how do I pull it of

the next day, Lance is talking to his dad about the boat
LANCE: Yeah its really great
(Lance goes to his room finding his boat broken)
LANCE: Oh My god
(Drops phone)
MOM(on phone):Hello? Honey
(Lance picks up the phone)
LANCE: Sorry, My boat is broken
(Sydney walks by)
SYDNEY: Oh, Hi
(On her back its a sign saying "I hate boats and I destroyed Lances for no reason)
LANCE: And I know who

Lance have a meeting with Sydney and Ray is easdroping
LANCE: You broke my boat
SYDNEY: Me why me?
LANCE: It says it on your back
SYDNEY: What?
(Looks at sign)
SYDNEY: oh, but I don’t remember
LANCE: see
SYDNEY: What now?
LANCE:YOU HAVE TO PAY.....$20.00
SYDNEY:$20.00,OK,fine for me
(Gives lance the money)
RAY(whispering):oh no
LANCE: See, easy,
SYDNEY: whatever

The Dogbots (NO TRENT)are at school guessing who Lightdog is.
LANCE: Ok, everyone think
DYLAN: Its a robot, Mabey
RAY: How about that gay guy
LANCE: Don Janie
RAY: yeah
LANCE: No, then he would be on tippy toes
SYDNEY: Jack
DYLAN: Good one
LANCE: true
PAIGE: Trent
DYLAN: No Trent is are friend
PAIGE: So, Maybe he is controlled or something
DYLAN: That is the only thing that sounds smart but that’s impossible
SYDNEY: Mr.M?
DYLAN: Hell yeah, that guy treats me a lot last year, Trust me
SYDNEY: What he say?
DYLAN: Don’t want to talk about it
LANCE: Rovion
DYLAN: Ok, On the list. Jack, Mr.M and Rovion or a Robot
RAY:I am going to the lunch line
SYDNEY: me too

SYDNEY: aahhh, Pretzels are today
(Goes in wallet)
SYDNEY: Ahh man, forgot I had to give lance that 20,But I can by chips
RAY: Felling Guilty
SYDNEY: What?
RAY: Nothing
SYDNEY: Weird

Back at the Tigaship
TIGERSTAR: Yeah,You did it
LIGHTDOG:I know but, I ,I
TIGERSTAR: What is it son?
LIGHTDOG:I need a weapon
TIGERSTAR: hhmmm,I know!
(Gets some thing from the Closet)
ROVION: Wow
TIGERSTAR: Its a shallow was going to give it to Rovion but you are stronger.
ROVION:what?
LIGHTDOG:Kickass
TIGERSTAR:Your well come
ROVION:Well are little boy is growing up.Ha Ha Ha
(Silence)
LIGHTDOG:Dude,Lay off the jokes
ROVION:Why
LIGHTDOG:Becuse they are stupid

It is 4th period and Ray is crazy now
RAY:Happy thoughts
(Dylan come in)
DYLAN:Hey
RAY:Whats new
DYLAN:ahh,Trent decided to ditch school for the rest of the day
RAY:Wow
DYLAN:Ray,you look, Tweaked
RAY:You are going to kick my ass If I tell you
DYLAN:OK
RAY:I broke Lances ship
DYLAN:.....so
RAY:I blamed Sydney
DYLAN:What
(Sydney comes in)
SYDNEY:Hi guys
DYLAN:hey
SYDNEY:Whats going on
DYLAN:Ready to kick this guys ass
SYDNEY:why
DYLAN:It all started when Ray broke the ship
SYDNEY:What?
(Crash)
DYLAN:What was that?

(THEY GO OUTSIDE)
DYLAN:Holy$*it
SYDNEY:Quick get Lance and what’s her name
RAY: Not now
DYLAN:We got to morph
RAY:Were
SYDNEY: Janitors closet
(They head there and broke inside)
RAY:ready?
(they morph)
DYLAN:Now lets go
LIGHTDOG:Dogbots, were are you?
DYLAN:hear
LIGHTDOG:do you like my pet?
RAY:Yeah and we gots some to
DYLAN:No we don’t,We destroyed them, Remember
RAY:oh,oh yeah
LIGHTDOG:ha ha ha
SYDNEY: laugh at this,Whirlpool
(She made a vortex)
LIGHTDOG:Finaly a new attack
SYDNEY: Now Ice beam
(Freezes the head of Zord)
SYDNEY:now Dil
DYLAN:Fireblast
(use fire attack on head and destroys it)
LIGHTDOG:ahh man
(Lightdog jumps from ship, the Tigaship came)
LIGHTDOG:What do you want?
ROVION:Can we help
LIGHTDOG:No, get the F*ck out
ROVION:Dick
(they leave)
SYDNEY:Those guys are dorks
LIGHTDOG:Tell me about it
(The rest come in)
LANCE:Sorry we are late
RAY:Better late than never
LIGHTDOG:What. My god
RAY:Shut it, Tornado
(He makes a tornado)
LIGHTDOG:Thundershock
(They both attack and made a Thunder tornado)
RAY:Its beautiful
(heads for the good guys)
RAY:ahh
(he runs but got caugt)
RAY:ahhhh
LIGHTDOG:Ha Ha
RAY:think, wait I have a rubber body
(stretch arm on building)
RAY:ya
(Frees)
LIGHTDOG:Dont worry I have a friend.
RAY:shoot

DYLAN:what is that?
SYDNEY:A shallow
RAY:cool looking
LIGHTDOG:Yeah, Now die
(Lightdog try to destroy the Dogbots)
DYLAN:Fire Punch
(Hits him in the face)
LIGHTDOG:ahh, that’s it
(Trips Dylan)
DYLAN:Hey, mother
(Than he put shallow near his face)
LIGHTDOG: Any last words
DYLAN: yeah, see you in hell
LIGHTDOG: ahhh
(Dose the final blow)
LIGHTDOG:Ahhhh
DYLAN:what
(miss)
LIGHTDOG(YOUNG VOICE):Don’t do it
LIGHTDOG:I must
LIGHTDOG(YOUNG VOICE):No you cant
LIGHTDOG:ahh, Must go now
(Teleports back)
DYLAN:OK

the Dogbots continue there routine
SYDNEY: So Ray tell him
RAY:ahhh
SYDNEY: Do it
RAY:Ok,I broke the ship then I blamed it on Sydney
SYDNEY: the sign and everything
RAY:yes
LANCE:OK,You will have to pay
RAY:what
LANCE: relax, just 20.00
RAY: Twenty dollars
LANCE:Yeah
RAY:OK,here
(gives Lance money)
SYDNEY:So pay up
LANCE:when we get home
RAY:that was hard.


At the ship
TIGERSTAR: What happened right there?
LIGHTDOG:I don’t know? My human self is trying to take control
TIGERSTAR: Well don’t let it happened again
LIGHTDOG:yes sir
ROVION:I got the new kid for you for tomorrow
TIGERSTAR: bring him in
(The guy comes in)
TIGERSTAR: Slash are you ready
SLASH: Yes sir
TIGERSTAR: perfect

[Impy]

God, your fics suck.

<---So MSTing this

[wildranger]

this does not make any since at all

[jetfire85]

Okay, time for some actual criticism.

I can't comment on the story. Here's why: I cannot, for the life of me, read it. The lines are too scrunched together, the grammar and spelling are terrible, and there's no reason to use asterisks in the curse words. This is Rangerboard, not Victorian England.

I won't go into my hatred of the script format right now, but very few people can do a script-style story correctly. To my knowledge, Cosmic Dreamer is the only fanfic writer to get even close to a proper cinematic script format. Try writing in regular format, you'll do better... if you can.

Lastly, fan fiction isn't for everyone. We all have ideas, but we all aren't perfect writers either. So try to improve if you don't want to get slammed by people like Impy.

[Impy]

Another suggestion: fics based on good ideas.

[jetfire85]

That's true too.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

dear God you are doing this shit again, my God, this is the worest fic I've ever seen on here. You don't even take advice when it's given either do ya? Fucking hell this is for fanfiction not Saturday morning shit-toons.

[Masondogbot]

Okay, time for some actual criticism.

I can't comment on the story. Here's why: I cannot, for the life of me, read it. The lines are too scrunched together, the grammar and spelling are terrible, and there's no reason to use asterisks in the curse words. This is Rangerboard, not Victorian England.

I won't go into my hatred of the script format right now, but very few people can do a script-style story correctly. To my knowledge, Cosmic Dreamer is the only fanfic writer to get even close to a proper cinematic script format. Try writing in regular format, you'll do better... if you can.

Lastly, fan fiction isn't for everyone. We all have ideas, but we all aren't perfect writers either. So try to improve if you don't want to get slammed by people like Impy.

MY GOD,What is your problem,You allways think that a fanfic allways have to be perfect?What the fuck?FUCK YOU

[Masondogbot]

Another suggestion: fics based on good ideas.

You,You are a bitch mother fucker with drunks as parents,You suck and Jewish,don't forget that Bitch,FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!!FUCK YOU!!!! And It is true!!!

[Masondogbot]

dear God you are doing this shit again, my God, this is the worest fic I've ever seen on here. You don't even take advice when it's given either do ya? Fucking hell this is for fanfiction not Saturday morning shit-toons.

Go to hell T-Rexor ranger,You should die for saying shit like that you JD

[Masondogbot]

This is my last post,PRE Rules so RB FUCK YOU!!!!! :068: :068: :fenforcer :fenforcer :fenforcer :fsniper: :fsniper: :067: :067: :frocket: :frocket: :071: :071: :071: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :068: :068: :fenforcer :fenforcer :fenforcer :fsniper: :fsniper: :067: :067: :frocket: :frocket: :071: :071: :071: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: :icon_fU: Ban me I dont give a flying Fuck about RangerBoard!!!!!

[Impy]

-_-;

Way to overreact, you spaz. "MY FIC ISN'T GOOD! YOU R TEH LYYYARR! (racial slurs and incoherent babble)!"

[jetfire85]

[QUOTE=Masondogbot]You suck and Jewish,[QUOTE]

That's it. Ban him.

[BeTheSwallow]

Wow. Just... wow.

[Masondogbot]

I am still here :eusa_whis

[Impy]

I am still here :eusa_whis
Despite saying:

This is my last post,PRE Rules so RB FUCK YOU!!!!!

Don't get our hopes up like that again, M.

[Masondogbot]

Despite saying:



Don't get our hopes up like that again, M.

I guess I was wrong with that and this board,most people hate you all

[Impy]

I guess I was wrong with that and this board,most people hate you all
Type properly.

[y3k]

....This thread really scares me....

I was just starting to regain respect for humanity too....

[Lunar Wolf Ranger]

You,You are a bitch mother fucker with drunks as parents,You suck and Jewish,don't forget that Bitch,FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!! FUCK YOU!!!!FUCK YOU!!!! And It is true!!!


Do you hate Jews?

[Masondogbot]

Do you hate Jews?
No,Trying to piss Impy off and get my self banned so I am sorry for that if I Offended any one I am So sorry.Can they just ban me and get me outta here?

[GeddonZord]

Yet another reason this board should be fascist rather than anarchic..on GOOD boards, this thread would be closed at the first sign of hostility, and there would be an auto-censor.

[y3k]

No,Trying to piss Impy off and get my self banned so I am sorry for that if I Offended any one I am So sorry.Can they just ban me and get me outta here?

What, not have enough will power to stay out on your own?

Go post a bunch of porn threads in GD. I'm sure they'll ban you there.

[BeTheSwallow]

No,Trying to piss Impy off and get my self banned so I am sorry for that if I Offended any one I am So sorry.Can they just ban me and get me outta here?

Wait, so was the story supposed to be bad?

[wildranger]

this has no plot for story

[T-Rexor Ranger]

Yes this is just plain shit, that's why it sucks, now Masondogbot should crawl in a hole and stay there.

[Adam West]

When you write you can't immediately think "My shit is gold!" just cause it looks good to you and people will kiss your ass and be like WRIte MORE!! If you can't handle the crictism of rangerboard then don't try.

[Masondogbot]

My hopefully last post.

Brittney Spears SUCK,She is a drunk,She is a Slut,She is a Stupid Bloned,Her music sounds like she wants to get laid.Like come on?

[Impy]

My hopefully last post.

Brittney Spears SUCK,She is a drunk,She is a Slut,She is a Stupid Bloned,Her music sounds like she wants to get laid.Like come on?
First of all, I don't think you have actually been taught to read and write and secondly, the Britney rule was revoked. Does ANYONE read the fuckin' rules?

[BeTheSwallow]

First of all, I don't think you have actually been taught to read and write and secondly, the Britney rule was revoked. Does ANYONE read the fuckin' rules?

Quiet! Or he'll start mentioning "Forever Red!"

[Masondogbot]

Quiet! Or he'll start mentioning "Forever Red!"

I don't have a problem with forever red.He is a nice guy.

[Masondogbot]

First of all, I don't think you have actually been taught to read and write and secondly, the Britney rule was revoked. Does ANYONE read the fuckin' rules?

Mabey if you guys wernt assholes I would continue,You I have a problem with impy,I hate you you suck.Most Power Ranger Boards hate ya,Like Power Ranger Empire,Most off them hate ya,They even regret signing on here you guys suck.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

Fuck yourself dude, and shut up!

[Masondogbot]

Fuck yourself dude, and shut up!

All becuse you tell me to do something dose not mean I have to do it.

[Impy]

-_-
I'm too young to lose faith in humanity...

[Masondogbot]

-_-
I'm too young to lose faith in humanity...

I lost that when I was 9.I don't trust people and Shits like you are one of those people that made me lost it.I am bullyed alot.So ban me.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

Dude, you can't write worth shit, so quit trying to fight us!

[Masondogbot]

Dude, you can't write worth shit, so quit trying to fight us!

Dear God,
Why is he back.Can he just leave.Can I get band?You suck and you should be cursed for saying things like that you snob.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

shut the hell up loser.

[Masondogbot]

shut the hell up loser.

I am not a Loser.Are you on on the evil side?

[Kali_WolfChilde]

O-KAY, WTF r u all flamin each other for? u shouldn't be flaming each other just because u wanna get banned. u could merely ignore ur account, u know. and T-Rexor, i've never heard u talk this way.

[Impy]

Kali, this guy's fic is undoubtedly one of the worst i've seen on RB. And i've seen some pretty bad shit. Tasha, anyone? Honestly, grammar aside, this guy's fic has a shitty plot, awful characters, and dialogue that makes Edmund look like a bleedin' genius. Honestly, what happpens in the next chapter, the rangers say to the villains that They Are Verry Bad Mens We Suit Down Villains???

I say we start a fund to send Mason to writing classes so his fic can at least get a good review from someone who isn't a moron.

[Masondogbot]

Kali, this guy's fic is undoubtedly one of the worst i've seen on RB. And i've seen some pretty bad shit. Tasha, anyone? Honestly, grammar aside, this guy's fic has a shitty plot, awful characters, and dialogue that makes Edmund look like a bleedin' genius. Honestly, what happpens in the next chapter, the rangers say to the villains that They Are Verry Bad Mens We Suit Down Villains???

I say we start a fund to send Mason to writing classes so his fic can at least get a good review from someone who isn't a moron.

No,They braek in the ship that the enimies are in and Trent gets in a fight with this one kid named Jack.The main reason I hate you Impy(Get a new name?)That you are a Snob.So Fuck you

[y3k]

-_-
I'm too young to lose faith in humanity...

You know, you always think that...but in truth, the quicker you do, the less denial you have to put yourself through. Like this whole thread. Since I had already lost all hope, it was just a normal "Hey look, another moron trying to pass his entrails off as a fanfic" thread.

Meso, your fanfic (and by association, your IQ) can be summed up in the following Family Guy quote:

Peter: "Brian, my alphabet soup has a message! "Oooooh!""
Brian: "Peter, those are cheerios..."

[Masondogbot]

You know, you always think that...but in truth, the quicker you do, the less denial you have to put yourself through. Like this whole thread. Since I had already lost all hope, it was just a normal "Hey look, another moron trying to pass his entrails off as a fanfic" thread.

Meso, your fanfic (and by association, your IQ) can be summed up in the following Family Guy quote:

Peter: "Brian, my alphabet soup has a message! "Oooooh!""
Brian: "Peter, those are cheerios..."

You never insult my IQ,DIE MOTHER FUCKN DIE AND GO TO HELL AND HAVE SATAN RAPE YOU.

[Adam West]

No,They braek in the ship that the enimies are in and Trent gets in a fight with this one kid named Jack.The main reason I hate you Impy(Get a new name?)That you are a Snob.So Fuck you and Die!!!

You obviously enjoying this or else you would of left by now. You should of made an attemp to fix your overall writing style after the first person found something wrong with it in your other fic. Nobodys perfect but your almost trying to force your fics down the readers throats and say "here this is the way I write and you will like it."

Last thing read some popular fics and almost try and inmitate them in a sense I don't mean plain out copy but learn why people enjoy the way its set up and written.

[Masondogbot]

You obviously enjoying this or else you would of left by now. You should of made an attemp to fix your overall writing style after the first person found something wrong with it in your other fic. Nobodys perfect but your almost trying to force your fics down the readers throats and say "here this is the way I write and you will like it."

Last thing read some popular fics and almost try and inmitate them in a sense I don't mean plain out copy but learn why people enjoy the way its set up and written.

I Dont bow down for any one you fucking snob,If I don't get banned then I am gonna continue.

[BeTheSwallow]

Am I the only one who finds this whole thing oddly ammusing?

And y2k, that is the single funniest quote in all of Family Guy history (and it's up against some stiff competition!)

[y3k]

You never insult my IQ,DIE MOTHER FUCKN DIE AND GO TO HELL AND HAVE SATAN RAPE YOU.

RAWR! I R BIGGER MAN BECAUSE I R SPEEK IN BIGGER FONT! RAWRZ0RZ!!!!!!!1111

>_>

[BeTheSwallow]

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Don't make him angy. You wouldn't like him when he's angry...

[Masondogbot]

RAWR! I R BIGGER MAN BECAUSE I R SPEEK IN BIGGER FONT! RAWRZ0RZ!!!!!!!1111

>_>

Gay ass

[T-Rexor Ranger]

Lmao!!!!

[y3k]

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Don't make him angy. You wouldn't like him when he's angry...

BUM BUM BUM.....

[y3k]

Gay ass

I didn't know your ass had a preference. So tell me, is your ass the one typing right now, coming out of the closet? Because that would explain your grammer skills.

[BeTheSwallow]

I didn't know your ass had a preference. So tell me, is your ass the one typing right now, coming out of the closet? Because that would explain your grammer skills.

His ass is so far in the closet it's finding Christmas presents. (More Family Guy fun!)

[Adam West]

MasonDogbot: Mason mad, Mason want crush rangerboard. But it time for Mason nap now. Mason like fluffy Dogbots.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

rofl!

[y3k]

His ass is so far in the closet it's finding Christmas presents. (More Family Guy fun!)

You know what the best thing about this is? Mods hardly ever pop into the forum, so we can poke fun at this guy all we want!

[Masondogbot]

No,It is not in the closet and me girlfriends well you get the rest...

[BeTheSwallow]

You know what the best thing about this is? Mods hardly ever pop into the forum, so we can poke fun at this guy all we want!

Yeah. If he wants to get banned, he's in the wrong forum. :D

[y3k]

No,It is not in the closet and me girlfriends well you get the rest...

Your Girlfreind is your ass?

Damn dude....thats both sad and sick at the same time...

[T-Rexor Ranger]

lol!

[Masondogbot]

MasonDogbot: Mason mad, Mason want crush rangerboard. But it time for Mason nap now. Mason like fluffy Dogbots.

Fuck you adam west,do you watch batman in the 60's?That show was gay.

[BeTheSwallow]

Your Girlfreind is your ass?

Damn dude....thats both sad and sick at the same time...

Mason, when they say "get some ass" that's not what they mean...

And don't even get me started defending Batman's sexual orientation. He's all about the ladies, dammit!

[Impy]

No,It is not in the closet and me girlfriends well you get the rest...
"And me girlfriends well you get the rest?"

You know what this questionable grammar means? ANIMUTATION TIME!

TV said donuts are high in fat (kazoo), found a hobo in my room. It's Princess Leia, the yodel of life! Give back my sweater or i'll play the guitar!

Seriously man, be honest: are you Edmund?

[Adam West]

Fuck you adam west,do you watch batman in the 60's?That show was gay.

Nice one , no seriously I'm reeling from it.

[y3k]

Seriously man, be honest: are you Edmund?

No, he's the result of a dark experiment that was probably illegal. Megared tried to combinded George's Rodd with UMJ, Tasha, and Edmund. He sucedded...but all to well...

[BeTheSwallow]

Nice one , no seriously I'm reeling from it.

You should be. Or at least pretending to be. It's all he's got man,humor him or he'll leave, robbing us of our fun!

On a side note, I'm curious as to who actually owns me. Adam West and y2k have both laid claim. Who do I belong to? :(

[Masondogbot]

"And me girlfriends well you get the rest?"

You know what this questionable grammar means? ANIMUTATION TIME!

TV said donuts are high in fat (kazoo), found a hobo in my room. It's Princess Leia, the yodel of life! Give back my sweater or i'll play the guitar!

Seriously man, be honest: are you Edmund?

No.I know who he is.Mesogog told me on PRE.

[y3k]

You should be. Or at least pretending to be. It's all he's got man,humor him or he'll leave, robbing us of our fun!

On a side note, I'm curious as to who actually owns me. Adam West and y2k have both laid claim. Who do I belong to? :(

me. MWHAHAHAHA!

[BeTheSwallow]

No, he's the result of a dark experiment that was probably illegal. Megared tried to combinded George's Rodd with UMJ, Tasha, and Edmund. He sucedded...but all to well...

This is why man shouldn't play God. When will we learn, dammit!? WHEN!? DAMN YOU DIRTY APES! GOD DAMN YOU ALL TO HELL! It was Earth all along...

[Adam West]

You should be. Or at least pretending to be. It's all he's got man,humor him or he'll leave, robbing us of our fun!

On a side note, I'm curious as to who actually owns me. Adam West and y2k have both laid claim. Who do I belong to? :(

Uh ok Im not understanding about the bottom part I mean.

[T-Rexor Ranger]

www.lol.com-not real link.

[wildranger]

Gay ass go fuck your dad ass clown

[Impy]

No.I know who he is.Mesogog told me on PRE.
Wow, I care who this person is, and about PRE. Honestly, none of us care 'bout your shit-board.

[BeTheSwallow]

Uh ok Im not understanding about the bottom part I mean.

The little description under your name. Like I'm apparently not Batman. Yours says "owns you."

[T-Rexor Ranger]

Ya Know PRE sucks in the fanfic section, since no one bothers to reply to anything.

[Masondogbot]

go fuck your dad ass clown

I live alone.

[Adam West]

I wonder if Mason and Edmund got into a fight who would win?

[BeTheSwallow]

I wonder if Mason and Edmund got into a fight who would win?

The universe would implode.

[Adam West]

The little description under your name. Like I'm apparently not Batman. Yours says "owns you."

ooooooo ok

[T-Rexor Ranger]

www.lmao.ca

[BeTheSwallow]

I live alone.

I thought that was assumed.

[Impy]

I wonder if Mason and Edmund got into a fight who would win?
They'd stop fighting, because they would fall madly in love!

"Oh Mason You Are Right Name Calling PErson???"

[Adam West]

A fight of immense retardation, so much that the universe would collapse under it weight!!!!! yeah I'd pay to see that...it's like DBZ but even worse dubbing.

<--is a dbz fan... don't kill me

[BeTheSwallow]

Only if George's Rodd is the special guest referee.

[BeTheSwallow]

They'd stop fighting, because they would fall madly in love!

"Oh Mason You Are Right Name Calling PErson???"

"SUIT ME DOWN, BABY!!! SUIT ME DOWN!!!!!"

[Impy]

Only if George's Rodd is the special guest referee.
Oh, he'd be their dirty uncle.

[wildranger]

I live alone.sure you do is your dead yet from gay sex you have done to him

[Impy]

sure you do is your dead yet from gay sex you have done to him
-_-
You're as bad as Mason.

[wildranger]

who in the blue hell is mason

[Impy]

who in the blue hell is mason
-_-

The guy you're insulting, genius.

[BeTheSwallow]

who in the blue hell is mason

Ok, this is just sad...

EDIT: 101!!??!? Damn you Impy!

[wildranger]

-_-

The guy you're insulting, genius. that dumbass

[TOK-715]

Goddamn this is hilarious, anyway... the guy's been banned, let's all move on :rolleyes:

[BeTheSwallow]

Goddamn this is hilarious, anyway... the guy's been banned, let's all move on :rolleyes:

Awwww...... Now what are we supposed to do?

[Impy]

Awwww...... Now what are we supposed to do?
MST his fic on AIM.

[BeTheSwallow]

Lol this should be good.

[Impy]

Lol this should be good.
Sign on and i'll ping ya.

[jetfire85]

BUM BUM BUM.....

The Witch Boy!

Oh, sorry, wrong fandom.

[Seraphis Cain]

Hate to bring up this thread again, but look at this:

http://www.powerrangerempire.com/showthread.php?t=1580&page=1&pp=20

He's apparently posted his fic on PRE.....And he's under the illusion that it DOESN'T suck just because he has ONE fanboy that's either an idiot OR just doesn't want Dog-brain to kill himself cause nobody likes his fic. Seriously, in 303 posts it's only been Dog-ass and one other guy posting. Maybe nobody else over at PRE wants to tell him how bad it sucks. Seriously, how can you like something THAT bad. Edmund and George could get together and write a better fic. Also, look at this:

http://www.powerrangerempire.com/showthread.php?t=603

He revived a thread from August 2004 just to say how much he hates RB. Sad.

[BeTheSwallow]

Wow... Just Wow....

(On a side note, those huge banner/picture things underneath everyone's posts get really annoying. Are they even allowed on RB? I hope not.)

And on that semi-hypocritical note:

* PMD! Emergency! *

[Impy]

Heh. Mason is pathetic. Wonder if he's permabanned yet.

[thunderblade]

You suck and Jewish,

I know it's been done before and he's banned already, but I couldn't leave this alone. This is some really bad shit. And then, of course, when asked if he hates Jews, he says he was just using it as an insult. Hardly the best way to pick up the mess.

</mini-rant>

[jetfire85]

I know it's been done before and he's banned already, but I couldn't leave this alone. This is some really bad shit. And then, of course, when asked if he hates Jews, he says he was just using it as an insult. Hardly the best way to pick up the mess.

</mini-rant>

That did go over the edge, and I called him out on it on the second page. Sadly the guy can't take a hint. He's just to impulsive to not sign into his account anymore.

[y3k]

(On a side note, those huge banner/picture things underneath everyone's posts get really annoying. Are they even allowed on RB? I hope not.)

Those are called signatures. They are disabled on RB, but most forums allow them. I personally like them, and use them on other sites (weather its banners, quotes, or random info/crap)

And Mason is on a several day ban for a thread he created in GD.

[BeTheSwallow]

Well to each their own I suppose. Avatars and little humourus sign offs are enough for me (for now! Mwahahahaha!)






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