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BlackMystechRanger
01-18-2005, 05:37 PM
Name: GreenMystechRanger/PinkRanger/PinkNinja/PinkRanger/PinkRanger/PinkNinjetti: Kimberly Hart

Weapons: GreenMystechBlaster/PinkPowerBow/PinkBladeBlaster

Vehicles: GreenMystechCycle/PinkSideCar/PinkBattleBike/PinkThunderBike/PinkSharkCycle

PowerSource: GreenMystechMorpher/GreenMystechGem/PinkPowerCoin/PinkPowerMorpher/PteradactylPower/FireBirdPower/ PinkNinjaPowerCoin/PinkNinjaPowerMorpher/CranePower/PinkNinjaPower/PinkMetalliArmor/PinkNinjettiPowerCoin/ PinkNinjettiPowerMorpher/PinkGreatPowerOfPhaedosPower/PinkNinjettiPower/PinkSharkPower/PinkHorsePower

Zords: GreenMystechZord/PteradactylZord/FireBirdZord/CraneZord/PinkShogunZord/AncientPinkCraneZord

Name: BlackMystechRanger/GreenRanger/GreenNinja: George Rodd

Weapon: BlackMystechCannon/MytechBlaster/InfinityCannon/DragonDagger/GreenBladeBlaster

Vehicle: BlackMystechCycle/GreenSharkCycle

Zords: BlackMystechZord/GreenShogunZord/GreenPhoenixZord
/AncientPhoenixZord

PowerSource: BlackMystechGem/BlackMystechMorpher/GreenNinjaPowerCoin/GreenNinjaPowerMorpher/PhoenixPower/GreenNinjettiPowerCoin/GreenNinjettiPowerMorpher/GreenNinjettiPower/GreenNinjaPower/GreenMetallicArmorPower/GreenSharkPower/GreenGreatPowerOfPhaedos

EDIT: Please learn to use the space bar, having to scroll across the screen is really annoying

bushwacka666
01-19-2005, 04:35 AM
Aren't you cute?

Seraphis Cain
01-20-2005, 08:34 AM
I think my head is going to explode.....

onslaught
01-24-2005, 02:10 AM
George, you have left me speechless.

BlackMystechRanger
01-31-2005, 08:55 PM
A synopsis of the future MystechRangers stories!

A time of great evil is about to rise from an unknown threat, for the Rangers Universe an other universes, this threat will be faced by Rangers from the past, present, future, the team will face this evil together or die trying!

yami senshi youkaiou
01-31-2005, 09:07 PM
what are the Mystech zords?

BlackMystechRanger
01-31-2005, 09:09 PM
what are the Mystech zords?

The MystechZords are newer versions of the ShogunZords!

yami senshi youkaiou
01-31-2005, 09:11 PM
The MystechZords are newer versions of the ShogunZords!
oh, ok

BlackMystechRanger
01-31-2005, 09:18 PM
oh, ok

Explanation on the MystechZords, unlike the ShogunZords they work on multiple PowerSources of each Ranger team!

BlackMystechRanger
02-23-2005, 01:01 AM
Mystech Villains for the story are, Parallax: Hal Jordan is the head villain, DemonBorg(CyborgDemon), Cybotic(CyborgMutantDemon), Dragonex(MutantOrg), BloodStar(CyborgDemon), SolarDemon(CyborgDemon), Mutrox(Hybrid), PuttyPatrollers, KelZacks!

BlackMystechRanger
02-23-2005, 01:40 AM
Villains: Loki, OozeMen, PsychoRangers, Shang Tsung!

QuickKick
02-23-2005, 02:02 AM
Villains: Loki, OozeMen, PsychoRangers, Shang Tsung!

No human being is this dumb. It's impossible.

BlackMystechRanger
02-23-2005, 08:01 AM
No human being is this dumb. It's impossible.

Would you shut up, these are villains for my MystechRangers storyline!

BlackMystechRanger
02-24-2005, 08:25 AM
Villains: Quantrons, StingWingers, Putrids, TengaWariors, TenguWarriors, SuperPuttyPatrollers, ZPuttyPatrollers!

BlackMystechRanger
02-27-2005, 08:39 PM
MystechRangers: By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________

Prologue: Sir a time of great darkness is almost here, I was afraid of this, it is time for the MystechRangers to come forth, I am George Rodd leader of the MystechRangers, I was secretly selected by Ninjor to be secret Ranger, but I was not called up until a year ago, he said that I was to create the Ultimate team of Rangers, but who will be the leader of group and will select the Rangers that are needed? Now go and prepare everything for the fight! Now who will join? Computer search Rangers files, hmm conputer give me file P1, file P1 is now ready, I see P1 is a Gymnast, hmm she was training for a great game! Compute activate file GWRB, file activated, hmm so he was a RaceCarDriver an is now a teacher, interesting an it also saids that he has a Clone! Computer activate Hj, file is now ready, so he was a former GL an cause of a problem with his former masters, has went bad! Computer that is enough data for now, please go to standbye mode! Now I must go and prepare!

y3k
02-27-2005, 11:03 PM
Oh god, he's actually doing what we've been telling him to do for the last year.



He's making a fanfic.

Oh, the irony.

BlackMystechRanger
02-27-2005, 11:19 PM
Oh god, he's actually doing what we've been telling him to do for the last year.



He's making a fanfic.

Oh, the irony.

Yes isn't the irony sweet!

wildranger
02-28-2005, 08:49 PM
MystechRangers: By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________

Prologue: Sir a time of great darkness is almost here, I was afraid of this, it is time for the MystechRangers to come forth, I am George Rodd leader of the MystechRangers, I was secretly selected by Ninjor to be secret Ranger, but I was not called up until a year ago, he said that I was to create the Ultimate team of Rangers, but who will be the leader of group and will select the Rangers that are needed? Now go and prepare everything for the fight! Now who will join? Computer search Rangers files, hmm conputer give me file P1, file P1 is now ready, I see P1 is a Gymnast, hmm she was training for a great game! Compute activate file GWRB, file activated, hmm so he was a RaceCarDriver an is now a teacher, interesting an it also saids that he has a Clone! Computer activate Hj, file is now ready, so he was a former GL an cause of a problem with his former masters, has went bad! Computer that is enough data for now, please go to standbye mode! Now I must go and prepare!this is boring and it put me to sleep :015:

Techni
02-28-2005, 10:03 PM
I...I...I...

*My brain explodes, coating the entirety of this forum in grey matter and pieces of skull*

Owwie...

y3k
02-28-2005, 10:07 PM
I...I...I...

*My brain explodes, coating the entirety of this forum in grey matter and pieces of skull*

Owwie...


Eeew....I ain't cleaning that up...

Impy
02-28-2005, 10:09 PM
Please stop typing. Forever.

BlackMystechRanger
02-28-2005, 11:57 PM
Hey this was my first time writing one!

Impy
02-28-2005, 11:58 PM
And you failed. Most terribly.

TOK-715
03-01-2005, 02:10 AM
Hey this was my first time writing one!
i loved it, keep writing. :rolleyes:

ringmaster316ms
03-03-2005, 09:14 AM
use your apparent reputation as a fool to further your writing. like another famous ex-member

yami senshi youkaiou
03-03-2005, 04:00 PM
I think the names for the monsters are cool.

BlackMystechRanger
03-10-2005, 12:28 AM
Villains: Cogs, Battlings, WhiteDragoRanger(Clone)!

TOK-715
03-30-2005, 11:59 PM
Update George, update.

BlackMystechRanger
03-31-2005, 12:02 AM
I am considering on having MystechRangers face off against an Evil BeetleBorg, yes ShadowBorg!

Impy
03-31-2005, 12:04 AM
George...don't do it. Your fic is shit.

TOK-715
03-31-2005, 12:04 AM
What do you use to write your stories George?

Impy
03-31-2005, 12:05 AM
What do you use to write your stories George?
He just urinates on his keyboard and it writes itself.

TOK-715
03-31-2005, 12:06 AM
Rofl.

BlackMystechRanger
03-31-2005, 12:07 AM
What do you use to write your stories George?

I am writing the story down on paper then writing it down with webtv!

TOK-715
03-31-2005, 12:08 AM
George please, use a program like Microsoft Word.

BlackMystechRanger
03-31-2005, 12:09 AM
I don't have a computer remember, I only have webtv!

TOK-715
03-31-2005, 12:10 AM
I don't have a computer remember, I only have webtv!
uhhhh :rolleyes:

Impy
03-31-2005, 12:38 AM
Note to self: smash George's TV

RitoRevolto
03-31-2005, 12:49 AM
Wow, with powers like that, say it with me....


THE POSSIBILITIES ARE ENDLESS!

WhiteTigerRanger
03-31-2005, 06:00 PM
Wow, with powers like that, say it with me....


THE POSSIBILITIES ARE ENDLESS!

Why do I see that in almost every thread?!?!?!

GreenNinja
03-31-2005, 06:55 PM
Because, with George's love of combining powers, and so many powers in existence, the possibilities are endless! That, and it's fun to say!

Green1
03-31-2005, 11:34 PM
Why do I see that in almost every thread?!?!?!

Because good ol' GR here loves to say it when making reference to the fact that he can combine any number of things with any number of other things to make idiotic posts.

RitoRevolto
03-31-2005, 11:47 PM
Why do I see that in almost every thread?!?!?!

Because it's true, they are.

BlackMystechRanger
04-02-2005, 10:26 PM
I am considering on having the PhoenixForce show up in my story sometime, what you think?

BlackMystechRanger
04-02-2005, 10:36 PM
Who should get the power of Phoenix, out of the female Rangers, which female would you choose?

Green1
04-02-2005, 10:37 PM
I am considering on having the PhoenixForce show up in my story sometime, what you think?

I think you'd be ripping off Ryuranger.

BlackMystechRanger
04-02-2005, 10:42 PM
I think you'd be ripping off Ryuranger.

Explain please?

Green1
04-02-2005, 11:17 PM
The fact that he's currently writing HIS Phoenix Force/PR Fanfic, and its on the first page. Phoenix Force (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?t=55678)

BlackMystechRanger
04-02-2005, 11:19 PM
The fact that he's currently writing HIS Phoenix Force/PR Fanfic, and its on the first page. Phoenix Force (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?t=55678)

As I said before I am only considering the idea currently, does not mean I will use it!

BlackMystechRanger
04-02-2005, 11:38 PM
I could always use CaptainUniverse/EnigmaForce and the PhoenixForce powers!

V-Dramon
04-02-2005, 11:52 PM
i'm new here, so this might be a dumb question, but is this george's rodd guy for real, a jokester, or an rb member playing a joke?

TOK-715
04-03-2005, 05:23 AM
i'm new here, so this might be a dumb question, but is this george's rodd guy for real, a jokester, or an rb member playing a joke?
We really don't know.

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 02:39 PM
I will be starting second prologue to MystechRangers and starting first story!

ShadowRanger
04-12-2005, 03:09 PM
The fact that he's currently writing HIS Phoenix Force/PR Fanfic, and its on the first page. Phoenix Force (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?t=55678)

There is nothing that says that two or more authors cannot have or write the same idea. Yes Ryu is doing a version of that idea, if George wants to try it he can too.

Green1
04-12-2005, 03:20 PM
There is nothing that says that two or more authors cannot have or write the same idea. Yes Ryu is doing a version of that idea, if George wants to try it he can too.

I never said he couldn't. He asked what we thought about him using the Phoenix Force in his Fanfic, just as Ryu had started his Phoenix Force storyline. So, my opinion was that he did it because he saw someone else doing it, and in grand GR fashion, figured he could smush it into his storyline. Nothing more, nothing less.

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 10:55 PM
MystechRangers
By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
Prologue2: Computer activate, tell me more bout Kimberly Hart, Kimberly is a gymnast who was chosen by Zordon for his Rangers, she was chosen to be the PinkRanger, she was given the PinkPowerCoin and PinkPowerMorpher, she eventually gotten the PinkNinjaPowerCoin and PinkNinjaPowerMorpher, but at some point had to get the PinkNinjettiPowerCoin and PinkNinjettiPowerMorpher, she will one day be the Ranger who has every Ranger power of the whole Ranger teams! Computer calibration of future for Kimberly, is she gets the PhoenixForce and EnigmaForce and CaptainUniverse power, and another future is her death, third future is she becomes Satan's bitch! Computer calculate the chances of Kimberly holding Cosmic Power, calculation for her is at 100%! I see what is she doing right now, she is currently in Angel Grove visiting her friends! Kimberly has an ancestor in the past during the Wild West peroid, also Kimberly has a secret destiny which is connected to you George Rodd! I see so what is this destiny, sorry can't tell you until that time! Thank you computer, now go on standbye untill needed!

y3k
04-12-2005, 10:56 PM
Satan's.....bitch....

o_0

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 11:01 PM
Satan's.....bitch....

o_0

Hey it's a story in the works!

TOK-715
04-12-2005, 11:08 PM
So George, have you ever used a "period" before?
Also, you might want to clarify who's speaking in the story - it sounds like one person rambling on to him or herself.

jetfire85
04-12-2005, 11:10 PM
Periods? Nah, he's just impersonating Jim Shooter! with all the exclamation points.

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 11:11 PM
So George, have you ever used a "period" before?
Also, you might want to clarify who's speaking in the story - it sounds like one person rambling on to him or herself.


The person who is rambling on is me in the second prologue for my story!

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 11:22 PM
Periods? Nah, he's just impersonating Jim Shooter! with all the exclamation points.

Yes I am doing the story Jim Shooter style of writing!

jetfire85
04-12-2005, 11:28 PM
That's the reason I took "Secret Wars" back to the comic shop. I can't stand anything written by Jim Shooter! or anyone else in that style.

BlackMystechRanger
04-12-2005, 11:29 PM
That's the reason I took "Secret Wars" back to the comic shop. I can't stand anything written by Jim Shooter! or anyone else in that style.

Well don't read my story then!

BlackMystechRanger
04-16-2005, 01:58 AM
Will finish rest of MystechRangers prologue2 later!

BlackMystechRanger
04-18-2005, 01:40 AM
Later today will be start of the MystechRangers story!

BlackMystechRanger
04-20-2005, 11:45 PM
MystechRangers: The Begining

By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
In the deapest regions of Infinity comes a vilain from another reality! Sir were near the rift that will allow us to crossover to a new reality! Were now crossing over into the new reality, sir the data wee need is coming in, looks at the data that is recieved sir! So this world has many Villains and Heroes, so master what are your orders, we attack the planet now! Meanwhile at the city of SurfSide mayors office, mayor our InterReality Detector is detecting a huge enemy coming into our Dimension, alert George Rodd at MystechCommandCenter! Hello this is George Rodd, yes Mr. Mayor I understand thank you! Compute prepare to send the emails to the various people I need! Emails sent who should I summon first? summon Kimberly Hart here, but first let me set a reason why she is here! Calls up government contacts and tells them to say she is here for a secret government assignment! Also tells the government to arrange for private plane to pick up Kimberly Hart! Now locate Trini Kwan and Katherine Hillard, Trini Kwan is currently in hospital for broken leg, how did that occur, she was skiing and took a nast spill, that broke her leg in 2 places, send Trini Kwan flowers to get well! I located Katherine Hillard, she is currently in Australlia visting her familly, send her an email as soon as possible, I will send the email out as possible, also scan Katherine Hillard for strange anomalies in her, scanning now, she still has the power to become Pc the Cat and the CatMonster plus her Zeo and Turbo power and trace of her PinkNinja power, interesting those powers could come in handy! Sir we got a huge problem, whats the problem? We are having trouble stabilizing the new power, I see, have you tried to equalize the power, I see basically your saying to balance it, exactly! Sir we recieved email saying Kimberly Hart has been contacted and will be here within 24 hrs! Good, prepare Kimberly's room, as will be done! Meanwhile Kimberly Hart is contacted and is being escorted by armed guards to her destination, Computer check data on all Zords of the past, calculate the chance of combining all the Zord, calculations calculate 100% chance of doing so! Computer consult with other databases for any records of past Rangers, checking now for info, I located a file in the Soviet database, this file is from 1944, it seems that there was RedStrikerRanger, who was like CaptainAmerica, he had the RedStrikerMorpher, he had many battles against the Axis power, but ended up holding onto a rocket that went into space, and he was not seen again, computer calculate where he went, calculations complete, he went flying into deep space! Is it possible to retrieve the RedStrikerMorpher, yes but it will take awhile before the Morpher arrives, thank you computer, your welcome! About 24 hrs later Kimberly Hart arrives, Miss Hart please follow, ok Kimberly saids, she follows him to office, and is told to sit in chair, Kim ask why is she here, I see straight and to the point Miss Hart, call me Kimberly ok, your here to become a Ranger again, the universe needs your help! Kimberly asks so what the problem that I am being called back to action, the problem is named Parallax, he is from another reality, and has such power to destroy us all, my computer computed that your one of the ones to help fight him! Kimberly ask so what color am I, you will be the GreenMystechRanger, I now give you the GreenMystechMorpher and GreenMystechGem, your Zord is the GreenMystechZord, which is part of the MystechMegaZord, do you accept the chance to be a Ranger again? I do Kimberly saids! Welcome back to the team Kimberly! Kimberlyb ask who is Parallax, Parallax is a former GreenLantern who killed his fellow GreenLanternCorps members and the GuardiansOfOa! I see so let me guess he is her in our universe, yes and is recruiting every footsoldier of the past and present! So when do we began, as soon as your training commences! I have a gift for you Kimberly take this GreenLanternPowerRing and GreenLanternPowerBatter, the ring has the combined power of every GreenLantern in all realities! So whats the training I need, you will trained in fighting Matrix Style! So Kimberly asks when does training start? Tomorrow, so get rested up! The end of chapter1!

TOK-715
04-21-2005, 12:04 AM
So that's it - that's chapter 1?

TSoldier
04-21-2005, 12:31 AM
Yes I am doing the story Jim Shooter style of writing!
What is Jim shooter style writing?

jetfire85
04-21-2005, 12:40 AM
What is Jim shooter style writing?

No periods. All exclamation points and the occasional question mark. Bizarre plotting. Think Silver Age comics. If you've read "Secret Wars", that's a perfect example of the Jim Shooter! style of writing. (The style has warped my brain so much that I add an exclamation point whenever I type Jim Shooter!.)

BlackMystechRanger
04-21-2005, 01:04 AM
So that's it - that's chapter 1?

No chapter 1 is not finished yet, I still have more to add!

TOK-715
04-21-2005, 01:17 AM
No chapter 1 is not finished yet, I still have more to add!
So why'd you PM me saying the same thing?


No I am not done with chapter 1 yet! The rest of it has to be done first! I am posting as I finsh parts of it!

BlackMystechRanger
04-21-2005, 01:18 AM
So why'd you PM me saying the same thing?

I just wanted to make sure you knew how I was going to write the story!

BlackMystechRanger
05-17-2005, 01:03 AM
Should the Flea gueststar in my story?

Hou Hissatsu
05-17-2005, 01:41 AM
You mean...Mucha Lucha Flea?
PS. Your fanfic gave me cerebral cancr plz stop writing i kthnxbye

BlackMystechRanger
05-17-2005, 01:42 AM
You mean...Mucha Lucha Flea?

Uh yeah that Flea!

Uma_Dekablue_Sakuranbo
09-02-2005, 07:21 PM
*looks into George's eyes, growing extremely demonic looking every second; finally roars out the question that's eating him up inside*

WHY WON'T YOU DIE?!

*goes away*

y3k
09-02-2005, 09:59 PM
*looks into George's eyes, growing extremely demonic looking every second; finally roars out the question that's eating him up inside*

WHY WON'T YOU DIE?!

*goes away*

Ya know whats dreadfully funny? The fact that while your bashing him, telling him to go away....your digging up a several month old thread of his.

yami senshi youkaiou
09-02-2005, 10:17 PM
Ya know whats dreadfully funny? The fact that while your bashing him, telling him to go away....your digging up a several month old thread of his.
*AHEM*
It's those damn cookies!

ZeoSaturn
09-02-2005, 11:05 PM
*looks into George's eyes, growing extremely demonic looking every second; finally roars out the question that's eating him up inside*

WHY WON'T YOU DIE?!

*goes away*


Why the hell did you post in a thread that died months ago? IT would have have STAYED dead!

Juri
09-02-2005, 11:15 PM
ooo my head hurts..but good job on the fan fic..not making fun of you or any thing..can you use the enter and space key..cux it really gets the eyes and head for a matter of fact lol

yami senshi youkaiou
09-02-2005, 11:51 PM
I'm just surprised George did'nt make his Zords animals/wehicles/humanoids.

Sean_Shane_zeo
09-03-2005, 12:30 AM
That fanfic was hilarious. Imagine the comedy that would ensue if George and Edmund got together and worked on a PR story. :005:

BlackMystechRanger
09-03-2005, 01:35 AM
ooo my head hurts..but good job on the fan fic..not making fun of you or any thing..can you use the enter and space key..cux it really gets the eyes and head for a matter of fact lol

Thank you!

Lemonik
09-10-2005, 11:20 PM
Great First Fic Georgimus Roddimus. But I wana be a mystech Ranger too!!!!

yami senshi youkaiou
09-10-2005, 11:43 PM
The only thing I have with it is that every "chapter" is only a paragraph long.

BlackMystechRanger
09-10-2005, 11:46 PM
The only thing I have with it is that every "chapter" is only a paragraph long.

Um this is still chapter 1!

yami senshi youkaiou
09-10-2005, 11:51 PM
Oh, well I'm just saying that i'd rather see a chapter all at once intead of bit by bit.

Angelfox
09-12-2005, 02:00 AM
this guy needs to learn a thing or to on how to use a keyboard, and the english laungage in general before goin any further with this fic....

Dr. House
09-12-2005, 02:02 AM
this guy needs to learn a thing or to on how to use a keyboard, and the english laungage in general before goin any further with this fic....

You need to STFU.

Cache

Nyranger
09-12-2005, 07:15 PM
How many months does it take to write a chapter...

BlackMystechRanger
09-17-2005, 10:18 PM
Test

Nyranger
09-17-2005, 10:24 PM
test? wtf r u testing for?!

Nitros
09-17-2005, 10:27 PM
it's amazing. We all hated george with a passion just months ago, and now we all have a tolerance for him. It's especially noticable with Impy's comments.

BlackMystechRanger
09-19-2005, 09:48 PM
Chapter1 is now complete coming soon chapter2!

-Nadira-
09-21-2005, 01:56 PM
George, I as well as some RB members would like to know, what exactly is going on in your head sometimes?

TOK-715
09-22-2005, 12:05 PM
MystechRangers: The Begining

By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
In the deapest regions of Infinity comes a vilain from another reality! Sir were near the rift that will allow us to crossover to a new reality! Were now crossing over into the new reality, sir the data wee need is coming in, looks at the data that is recieved sir! So this world has many Villains and Heroes, so master what are your orders, we attack the planet now! Meanwhile at the city of SurfSide mayors office, mayor our InterReality Detector is detecting a huge enemy coming into our Dimension, alert George Rodd at MystechCommandCenter! Hello this is George Rodd, yes Mr. Mayor I understand thank you! Compute prepare to send the emails to the various people I need! Emails sent who should I summon first? summon Kimberly Hart here, but first let me set a reason why she is here! Calls up government contacts and tells them to say she is here for a secret government assignment! Also tells the government to arrange for private plane to pick up Kimberly Hart! Now locate Trini Kwan and Katherine Hillard, Trini Kwan is currently in hospital for broken leg, how did that occur, she was skiing and took a nast spill, that broke her leg in 2 places, send Trini Kwan flowers to get well! I located Katherine Hillard, she is currently in Australlia visting her familly, send her an email as soon as possible, I will send the email out as possible, also scan Katherine Hillard for strange anomalies in her, scanning now, she still has the power to become Pc the Cat and the CatMonster plus her Zeo and Turbo power and trace of her PinkNinja power, interesting those powers could come in handy! Sir we got a huge problem, whats the problem? We are having trouble stabilizing the new power, I see, have you tried to equalize the power, I see basically your saying to balance it, exactly! Sir we recieved email saying Kimberly Hart has been contacted and will be here within 24 hrs! Good, prepare Kimberly's room, as will be done! Meanwhile Kimberly Hart is contacted and is being escorted by armed guards to her destination, Computer check data on all Zords of the past, calculate the chance of combining all the Zord, calculations calculate 100% chance of doing so! Computer consult with other databases for any records of past Rangers, checking now for info, I located a file in the Soviet database, this file is from 1944, it seems that there was RedStrikerRanger, who was like CaptainAmerica, he had the RedStrikerMorpher, he had many battles against the Axis power, but ended up holding onto a rocket that went into space, and he was not seen again, computer calculate where he went, calculations complete, he went flying into deep space! Is it possible to retrieve the RedStrikerMorpher, yes but it will take awhile before the Morpher arrives, thank you computer, your welcome! About 24 hrs later Kimberly Hart arrives, Miss Hart please follow, ok Kimberly saids, she follows him to office, and is told to sit in chair, Kim ask why is she here, I see straight and to the point Miss Hart, call me Kimberly ok, your here to become a Ranger again, the universe needs your help! Kimberly asks so what the problem that I am being called back to action, the problem is named Parallax, he is from another reality, and has such power to destroy us all, my computer computed that your one of the ones to help fight him! Kimberly ask so what color am I, you will be the GreenMystechRanger, I now give you the GreenMystechMorpher and GreenMystechGem, your Zord is the GreenMystechZord, which is part of the MystechMegaZord, do you accept the chance to be a Ranger again? I do Kimberly saids! Welcome back to the team Kimberly! Kimberlyb ask who is Parallax, Parallax is a former GreenLantern who killed his fellow GreenLanternCorps members and the GuardiansOfOa! I see so let me guess he is her in our universe, yes and is recruiting every footsoldier of the past and present! So when do we began, as soon as your training commences! I have a gift for you Kimberly take this GreenLanternPowerRing and GreenLanternPowerBatter, the ring has the combined power of every GreenLantern in all realities! So whats the training I need, you will trained in fighting Matrix Style! So Kimberly asks when does training start? Tomorrow, so get rested up! The end of chapter1!

It's so hard to tell who's talking.

nickraman
09-22-2005, 06:35 PM
t3h possibilities are endles!!!11111

BlackMystechRanger
09-23-2005, 06:04 PM
Part2 is now in planning stages!

Ninjakus
09-23-2005, 11:10 PM
*wants to be a ranger!* I would loves to bes a ranger! think blue!

BlackMystechRanger
09-28-2005, 07:15 AM
Sorry I have all the Rangers I need scheduled for the story! I will be trying to write part2 this weekend!

Ninjakus
09-28-2005, 10:25 PM
Even a 6th ranger! or 7th or 8th! *wink wink* I wuv you george!





























get ur mind out of the gutter not in that way

BlackMystechRanger
09-29-2005, 12:04 AM
Even a 6th ranger! or 7th or 8th! *wink wink* I wuv you george!





























get ur mind out of the gutter not in that way

Sorry I already have my Rangers selected for it, so no to you be in story, and quit bugging me about it!

Ninjakus
09-29-2005, 05:18 PM
ok!

Lemonik
09-29-2005, 11:41 PM
Its cuz your not a chick. Besides George they are all chicks. Ill allow it.

BlackMystechRanger
10-12-2005, 11:55 PM
Hmm HMystechRangers?

BlackMystechRanger
11-18-2005, 09:50 PM
MystechRangers: Day1 Training
Chapter2
___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________

Kimberly do you have any questions! Kimberly asks, Yes, what is the Mystech Power? Kimberly good question, the Mystech Power is TechnoMagic, basically it's Magic combined with Science! Kimberly asks whats my role in the group? You are second leader of the team along with me, so if I am out of town, you will be leading the group! Kimberly asks, do we have Zords? Yes Kimberly we do have Zords, they are called MystechZords, these Zords are more powerful than any other Zords ever! Kimberly asks, does the MystechZords, have any secrets! Yes Kimberly the MystechZords can form the MystechMegaZord, and it does have lots of secret, one of them is Sex Power! Kimberly asks, is Sex Power what I think it is? Yes Kimberly it is, I have some connections that will hook into specific Female Rangers of the Mystech team, your one of the specific Females, also the MystechMegaZord has some tentacles in it, that will connect to you and the other Female Rangers, the Sex Power is to be used in dire emergency only! Kimberly saids, OH MY FUCKING GOD YOUR A PERVERT! Yep, I hope I did not offend you Kimberly! Kimberly saids, I am not offended George, good Kimberly I am glad to hear it! Kimberly I must tell you that there is a good chance you will die in battle sooner or later! Kimberly asks? Why may I die? Cause Kimberly the evil is known as Parallax, he is from another reality, his real name is Hal Jordan, who was a GreenLantern, who turned against the GreenLanternCorps and GuardiansOfOa, he killed almost everyone of the Guardians and few of the GreenLanternCorps Members! Kimberly ask? Kimberly asks, so is that why I have the GreenMystechRanger powers? Yes that is the reason Kimberly! Kimberly do you have anymore questions? Kimberly asks so how do you know about Zordon? Well Kimberly, Zordon left me a file on every single Ranger known, along with every Vehicle and Weapons and Items and other stuff! Kimberly asks were you destined to be a Ranger, Yes Kimberly, I was supposed to be second GreenRanger! Kimberly asks, why were you not brought to the CommandCenter, when we could have used you? Well I guess that the creation of the Clone of Tommy Oliver, changed the path I was supposed to go! Kimberly please follow me to your room! Kimberly saids ok, and when we get to the door I tell Kimberly to put her hand on door palm reader! Kimberly sees the door open ands saids holy fucking shit this is big room! Kimberly get your sleep I will get you up soon! Kimberly goes into her room and strips to her sleeping gear! A few hrs later, Kimberly hears a ring come on, Kimberly time to wait up and get training! Kim changes to her training suit, and goes to combat room, and see me in Black Gear, Kimberly I am your opponent in this exercise, Kimberly asks what is she to do? Kimberly you must beat me thru this course and stop me from getting to end! Kimberly saids I can do this! Kim said want to make a side bet if I beat you? Hmm whats the bet then? She saids if I beat you, your my slave for week, and what do I get if I beat you Kimberly, Kimberly saids you can fuck me all you want and when you want! Ok Kimberly I agree to bet Kimberly! Kimberly saids lets begin the race, she jumps thru the training rings and kicks me in face, and then flies thru rings and see me roundhouse her ass, she flies across room and then gets back up, and kicks my ass, then I flip her into wall and slide kick her into wall! Kimberly looks up and punch my nuts, She sees me jump thru last ring an cross the goal, I win Kim, dammit Kim saids, a bet is a bet and I will uphold my end of bet, Kim said and you can fuck me when you want! Kim please go to your room, and get in the shower and wait for me, I will be along soon! Kimberly is in the shower soaping her hot pussy, Kimberly feels a kiss on Neck, hmmm George your kinky! Kimberly turns around an kisses George, and starts to kiss his lower body, Kimberly starts to lick the side of cock, and slowly takes it in mouth! Kimberly slides the cock into her mouth, and slowly starts pumping the shaft, Kimberly feels the cock growing in her mouth as she pumps away, Kimberly removes the cock from her mouth an licks the side, she swirls her tongue around the cocks head! Kimberly puts the cock back in her mouth, and starts pumping hard, she feels the cock building till it about to explode, she takes the cock in all the way, and feels the cock explode in mouth, she feels the cum pouring out of it and down her throat! Kim swallows every single drop! Kim see me spread open and start licking her hot juice from her pussy, she starts moaning and said oh god I am cumming like crazy! Kim see me slide cock into her pussy and feel me pumping her hard! Kimberly moans as she getting rammed, Kim saids I am cumming an I tell her I am cumming too, she and I explode together in 1 shot! Kim and I cuddle the rest of night and fall asleep!

-Nadira-
11-18-2005, 10:12 PM
:confused: Where is all the punctuation? Is this the new George Rodd style of writing? It seems short...

BlackMystechRanger
11-18-2005, 10:14 PM
The story is a write in progress, which mean more to add later!

Faqa
11-19-2005, 10:38 AM
No, it's a shit in progress. Man, at least write GRAMMATICAL ultimate splooging fanboy wank.

XGWOLVERINE
11-19-2005, 11:39 AM
???

Faqa
11-19-2005, 12:13 PM
????

BlackMystechRanger
11-19-2005, 12:22 PM
What The Fucking Hell Is Wrong With You Faqa? If You Don't Like It Don't Read Asshole!

MegaRed
11-19-2005, 12:27 PM
No, it's a shit in progress. Man, at least write GRAMMATICAL ultimate splooging fanboy wank.
Knock it off

Faqa
11-19-2005, 12:52 PM
Hey, George. Can YOU fucking read this story? Cause most people sure as hell can't. Seperate it into paragraphs, at the very least.

I retract the complaint about ultimate splooging fanboy wank. It's a given 90% of the time you post anyway.

BlackMystechRanger
11-19-2005, 01:33 PM
Yes I can read my story, I am doing the story my way!

ShadowRanger
11-19-2005, 01:37 PM
Faqa: 2 day ban: Flaming

NinjaHurricane
11-19-2005, 01:47 PM
But in all seriousness, it would help readers understand what is going on in your story if you added punctuation. Here's an example using your latest entry:

"Kimberly, do you have any questions?"
"Yes," Kimberly asked, "What is the Mystech Power?"
"Good question Kimberly. The Mystech Power is TechnoMagic. Basically, it's magic combined with science!"
"What's my role in the group?" Kimberly asked.
"You are second leader of the team along with me, so if I am out of town, you will be leading the group!"

Just a friendly suggestion.

Koragg
11-20-2005, 02:17 AM
I agree with NinjaHurricane. It would certainly help readers understand your fan-fiction, as he suggested. I've came across my own writing mistakes, although no one is perfect. I'll continue to read and hopefully see how this fan-fiction proceeds.

Also, I apoligize for intruding. I had to concur.

NinjaHurricane
11-20-2005, 02:32 AM
Haha it's "NinjaHurricane"...but you wouldn't be the first to mix the two of us up.

Koragg
11-21-2005, 08:37 PM
Haha it's "NinjaHurricane"...but you wouldn't be the first to mix the two of us up.
I made a big mistake. :005:

I'm very sorry dude. I wasn't myself that night and didn't look at the name right. I'll go and modified my post. Thanks for clearing that up. :eusa_wall

BlackMystechRanger
11-26-2005, 12:32 AM
Updated some of Mystech!

TOK-715
11-26-2005, 12:41 AM
also the MystechMegaZord has some tentacles in it, that will connect to you and the other Female Rangers, the Sex Power is to be used in dire emergency only! Kimberly saids, OH MY FUCKING GOD YOUR A PERVERT! Yep, I hope I did not offend you Kimberly! Kimberly saids, I am not offended George, good Kimberly I am glad to hear it! Kimberly I must tell you that there is a good chance you will die in battle sooner or later!

I wish you wouldn't mix Hentai with Power Rangers.

-Nadira-
11-26-2005, 07:51 PM
Ee Gad George, your story hurts just trying to read it...

Carlito
12-15-2005, 11:15 PM
More!

Nyranger
12-15-2005, 11:48 PM
MystechRangers
By George Rodd
___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
Prologue2: Computer activate, tell me more bout Kimberly Hart, Kimberly is a gymnast who was chosen by Zordon for his Rangers, she was chosen to be the PinkRanger, she was given the PinkPowerCoin and PinkPowerMorpher, she eventually gotten the PinkNinjaPowerCoin and PinkNinjaPowerMorpher, but at some point had to get the PinkNinjettiPowerCoin and PinkNinjettiPowerMorpher, she will one day be the Ranger who has every Ranger power of the whole Ranger teams! Computer calibration of future for Kimberly, is she gets the PhoenixForce and EnigmaForce and CaptainUniverse power, and another future is her death, third future is she becomes Satan's bitch! Computer calculate the chances of Kimberly holding Cosmic Power, calculation for her is at 100%! I see what is she doing right now, she is currently in Angel Grove visiting her friends! Kimberly has an ancestor in the past during the Wild West peroid, also Kimberly has a secret destiny which is connected to you George Rodd! I see so what is this destiny, sorry can't tell you until that time! Thank you computer, now go on standbye untill needed!
If there are 3 possible outcomes, how can one future be 100% set?

BlackMystechRanger
02-16-2006, 11:20 PM
Update tonight!

bearfunit24
02-17-2006, 08:44 AM
Ooooooooookaaay.....this make me head hurt....*walks away*

PurpleKnight
02-17-2006, 09:44 AM
Gayest. Story. Ever.


























Fits the member perfectly...

Fearless Frank
02-17-2006, 10:19 AM
PurpleKnight, Two Day Ban: Flaming.

BlackMystechRanger
03-20-2006, 11:44 PM
Slightly updated!

BlackMystechRanger
03-25-2006, 11:05 PM
Chapter2 done bitches1

SnoopsWarner
03-26-2006, 10:21 AM
Facinating. Megazord Sex Power. Controlled by a tentacle that rapes Kimberley, who isnt offended at all.

I dont think this actually counts as a story.

BlackMystechRanger
04-07-2006, 11:48 PM
Facinating. Megazord Sex Power. Controlled by a tentacle that rapes Kimberley, who isnt offended at all.

I dont think this actually counts as a story.

SHUT UP AND DIE!

Impy
04-08-2006, 12:12 AM
SHUT UP AND DIE!
...it took you eleven days to come up with that?

Storm Warrior2
04-08-2006, 01:23 PM
This story scares the hell out of me.

Dark Knight
04-08-2006, 07:42 PM
Any story where the Megazord gets a powerup by raping Kimberly is A-OK in my book.

SnoopsWarner
04-30-2006, 10:56 AM
SHUT UP AND DIE!

It's a really bad story. Honestly, it is. You have a Megazord tenticle raping Kimberly. It's the worst "story" any of us have ever read.

ANY OF US.


Advice: Get a story. Write it. Then delete it.

BlackMystechRanger
04-30-2006, 02:59 PM
Shut up snoopswarner!

Lil' Red Lightning
04-30-2006, 03:26 PM
Any story where the Megazord gets a powerup by raping Kimberly is A-OK in my book.
and u wonder y Amy Jo. doesnt like PR lol

j/k

SnoopsWarner
04-30-2006, 06:28 PM
Shut up snoopswarner!

I'm trying to give advice! It's truly disasterous! You have to either a: learn to Write or b: Give Up Writing.

havemercy
04-30-2006, 07:59 PM
I'm trying to give advice! It's truly disasterous! You have to either a: learn to Write or b: Give Up Writing.


Preach it preacha!

GekiCrimson
05-01-2006, 01:58 PM
What's up with the sex scene between you and Kim, George? It's pretty graphic.

BlackMystechRanger
05-13-2006, 10:24 PM
MystechRangers: Day3 MystechRangers Saves The Day!!!!!!!!!*************************************************************** **********************
The next morning Kimberly awakes an goes for a run, while I cook up some breakfast, Kimberly walks into kitchen from her run, Kimberly Hart: Hi George! George Rodd: Hi Kim, how was the run, Kimberly Hart: The run was great, but it started thundering bad outside! George Rodd: I made you breakfast with the works! Kimberly Hart: Thank You George! After breakfast the alert system of the base goes off, Bwooooooop bwooop all Rangers report to MystechCommandCenter! Kimberly Hart and George Rodd: What the hell? Computer what going on, Computer saids, it seems we got an intruder on the grounds! George Rodd: Computer scan for the intruder and give me info on the person! Computer saids, I found out it CrossWorldCity own ace reporter Kaitlin Star who is also a VrTrooper! George Rodd: I see so she is a superhero, computer lock on an track her! Meanwhile on the outside Kaitlin Star is investigating the new Ranger base! Kimberly Hart: saids I know her, I met her in florida awhile back, when I was getting ready for the PanGlobalGames!! George Rodd: I see, Kimberly I am bringing Kaitlin in and well have a talk, computer prepare some coffee, tea an such! Computer: said will do! George Rodd: Computer teleport Kaitlin Star to main room! Computer: Will do sir, teleporting now! Mean while on the outside Kaitlin Star is feeling funny as she teleports in!, Kaitlin Star: What the hell, where the fuck am I? George Rodd and Kimberly Hart: Welcome to the MystechCommandCenter Miss Star! Kaitlin Star: Why am I here? George Rodd: Your here Miss Star cause you were snooping around our base! Kaitlin: Sorry I was sent here on assignment to investigate the Mystech rumor! Kimberly: Hello Kaitlin! Kaitlin: Kimberly Hart is that you! Kimberly: Yep it's me! Kaitlin: Whats going on why are you here? Where are we anyway? George Rodd: This is the MystechCommandCenter otherwise known as the Aeryie! We are a special Ranger team, that is to fight the most extreme Evils! Our main goal is to protect the universe from this threat! Kaitlin: Who is this threat? George: His name is Parallax, he is a former GreenLantern who name is Hal Jordan, he got pissed at his former bosses the GuardiansOfOa, and took the power of the GreenLanterns into himself, transforming him into the villain Parallax! Our job is to defeat this threat at any cost! Kaitlin: I see now, is there anyway I can help? Kimberly: Yes Kaitlin you can help us, by informing us on his whereabouts! George: Kaitlin I give you this Teleporter/WristCommunicator to bring you here with the info! Kaitlin: Thank You! George: Kaitlin we may need the help of you and your fellow VrTroopers one day! Kaitlin: Why? George: To help with our enemy! Kaitlin: I see! I will talk to fellow VrTroopers on this! George: Thank you! Kaitlin: Your welcome! Kimberly: But you must keep the Teleporter/WristCommunicator a secret! Kaitlin: I see! Kaitlin: Kimberly you should know I figured out you were a Ranger, during the PanGlobalGames coverage! Kimberly: How did you find out? Kaitlin: Easy I had Professor Hortaio Heart do a check on you, for any strange anamolies in your system, and he said he located traces of PinkDinoEnergy and PinkNinjaEnergy in your body! Kimberly: Shit I knew one day someone would find out! Kaitlin I have to go back to CrossWorldCity, and write my news story! George: Kaitlin before you leave, I must tell ya to tell Professor Heart, that he must retrieve Ryan Steele's original VrTroopers Power! Kaitlin: Why? George: Cause Ryan is going to need them! Kaitlin: I see, I have a few questions I need answered! George and Kimberly: So whats your questions? Kaitlin: So George where do the Mystech powers come from? An what are other threat Mystech may face? Also George and Kimberly where do you get the powers from? George and Kimberly: The Mystech power comes from the MorphingGrid, as for threats we may face, we could face the RedSkull, or Korvac, or anything, the power comes from the MystechGems, which is based on the DinoGems! Kaitlin: I must now go an I promise to not tell about MystechRangers until I am told to! George: Computer I ask you now to transport Kaitlin to her vehicle! Computer: Will do my amigo! George and Kimbely: GoodBye Kaitlin! Kaitlin: GoodBye George and Kimberly! George: Computer I have a name for you now, your name will be Zeus! Computer: Zeus I like it and thank you for the name! George: No problem! Meanwhile on Parallax ship! Parallax: Which monster shall I use on my first attack, ah I know, I summon Peckster! Peckster: Where am I an who the hell are you? Parallax: I am Parallax, and I am your new master! Peckster: What do you want me to do master? Parallax: Peckster I am going to change you into Dragonex(MutantOrg), you are charged to destroy Mystech, an kill George Rodd and Kimberly Hart, now TRANSFORM INTO DRAGONNEX! Dragonex: As you command my master! Flies off to Earth: Zeus: Ranger alert, all MystechRanger to CommandChamber, and get your asses here quick! Kimberly and George: What's going on Zeus? Zeus we got a monster attack! Kimberly please show us the monster? Zeus: This is Dragonex and he is MutantOrg, formerly was known as Peckster! Kimberly: Did you just say he was Peckster! Zeus: Yes Kimberly, the same Peckster you fought as PinkRanger! Kimberly: Why is he back? Zeus: He has been sent down by Parallax, to kill you two! George and Kimberly: Fuck if he is here to kill us, then it's going to be rough, so how are we going to stop him? Zeus: It's time to activate the MystechMorphers an become the MystechRanger! George and Kimberly: IT'S MORPHING TIME! George: BLACKMYSTECHRANGER POWER! Kimberly: GREENMYSTECHRANGER POWER! Kimberly and George teleports out! Meanwhile in deepspace a rift in space opens an a RedStrikerMorpher crashes out and lands in Pacific Ocean! Two streak of Green and Black Energy appear in the SurfSide park! Dragonex: Ah the BlackMystechRanger and GreenMystechRangers, I am here to kill you! BlackMystechRanger and GreenMystechRanger: You wont succeed Dragonex or should we call you Peckster! Dragonex: You know who I really was, then that mean GreenMystech is Kimberly the PinkRanger! GreenMystechRanger: Yep thats me! Dragonex: PUTTIES ATTACK! PuttyPatrollers and SuperPuttyPatrollers appear! The Putties Charge! BlackMystechRanger: I will take the SuperPuttyPatrollers, and you take the PuttyPatrollers GreenMystechRanger! GreenMystechRanger: Spin Kick! She sends a PuttyPatroller flying into sign! Meanwhile the SuperPuttyPatrollers sends BlackMystechRanger flying into SemiTruck! BlackMystechRanger: Dragon Punch! Sends 2 SuperPatties into sky! Dragonex attacks, and uses a Bicycle Kick on GreenMystechRanger and BlackMystechRanger! The kick sends Green and Black into wall, where bones are heard cracking! GreenMystechRanger: We need help! BlackMystechRanger: Your right GreenMystechRanger, Zeus emergency teleport back to base! BlackMystechRanger and GreenMystechRanger demorphs as they reappear in MystechCommandCenter! George Rodd: Send the other emails out to Trini Kwan, Jason Lee Scott, Tommy Oliver, Billy Cranston, Zack Taylor, Rocky Desantos, Adam Park, Aisha Cambell, Katherine Hillard, Tanya Sloan, Ninjor, and tell to report to nearest airport, where airplane is waiting for them, and tell that car is waiting too pick them up and bring them here! Kimberly: Also send an email to Aquitar, an tell Delphine, Tideus, Cestro, Aurico, Cestria, Corcus! Kimberly Hart and George Rodd: Send a psychic message to Dulcea, that she needs to get to Earth immediately! Zeus: All sent dude and dudette! Zeus: I already sent for Alpha5, Alpha6, Alpha7, and they will be here shortly for treatment of your injuries! George Rodd and Kimberly: Thank You Zeus! Both passes out from injuries! End of chapter 3!

Storm Warrior2
05-13-2006, 11:00 PM
*claps* it's back!

Dark Knight
05-14-2006, 12:10 AM
That was the single greatest chapter of anything ever, including Lord of the Rings and the Bible.

Storm Warrior2
05-14-2006, 12:53 AM
Nah, it'll be better when he starts using our ideas.

Dark Knight
05-14-2006, 01:02 AM
Maybe I was a bit hasty when I said it was better than the Bible.

It was better than the Old Testament, for sure. Once he starts up with our ideas, it'll finally surpass the New Testament.

BlackMystechRanger
05-14-2006, 01:02 AM
Nah, it'll be better when he starts using our ideas.

Actually a few of the ideas you gave me will appear in chapter3!

Dark Knight
05-14-2006, 01:07 AM
Yay us!

BlackMystechRanger
05-14-2006, 01:21 AM
This chapter will be longer!

Storm Warrior2
05-14-2006, 03:12 AM
Hooray!

Dark Knight
05-14-2006, 08:16 AM
Freakin' sweet!

ZeoFury
05-14-2006, 08:34 PM
http://i1.tinypic.com/zslgza.jpg

bearfunit24
05-15-2006, 01:57 AM
*Wonders when George decides to include an all God-Mode in his morpher*

MahouMaster
05-15-2006, 06:33 AM
George, is your space bar broken? And is the 1 key stuck on caps? (caps 1 is !)

SnoopsWarner
05-15-2006, 08:23 AM
Actually a few of the ideas you gave me will appear in chapter3!

You'll finally stop using the internet?

Storm Warrior2
05-15-2006, 09:55 PM
George is the next chapter done yet?

BlackMystechRanger
05-15-2006, 10:19 PM
George is the next chapter done yet?

No, but I am planning on bringing UnityRanger into Mystech!

SnoopsWarner
05-17-2006, 06:25 AM
Dont forget Lamp Ranger- He Loves Lamp!

Storm Warrior2
05-17-2006, 06:59 AM
George hurry! I need more!

Dark Knight
05-17-2006, 10:56 AM
Make us proud, George!

BlackMystechRanger
06-25-2006, 01:52 AM
Mystech has been updated!

Storm Warrior2
06-25-2006, 02:02 AM
Where? I can't find it! What page?

BlackMystechRanger
06-25-2006, 02:11 AM
Where? I can't find it! What page?

Page 7!

bearfunit24
06-25-2006, 04:11 AM
Yes!!! Mystech is back!!

Dark Knight
06-25-2006, 08:37 AM
Holy shit.

That was the greatest thing to come off this board since... well, anything.

This deserves FFoTM, The Pulitzer, and the Nobel Peace Prize, all rolled into one and hung around the neck of naked Kimberly.

SnoopsWarner
06-25-2006, 09:03 AM
More! We want to see why Kimberley wants to be raped by Black MysteryTech Rangers!

I bet she deserves it, right? But only in an emergency, mind!

Dark Knight
06-25-2006, 09:11 AM
The tentacles loosen her up to be violated later by the monstrous penis of George himself.

It's a brilliant piece of storytelling.

SnoopsWarner
06-25-2006, 09:15 AM
Because she's asking for it! It's her destiny!

BlackMystechRanger
06-25-2006, 09:30 AM
SnoopsWarner SHUT THE FUCK UP!

SnoopsWarner
06-25-2006, 09:31 AM
Please dont start flaming, George. It's against the rules!

Dark Knight
06-25-2006, 09:47 AM
SnoopsWarner SHUT THE FUCK UP!

But he's on our side, buddy!

BlackMystechRanger
06-25-2006, 10:03 AM
Please dont start flaming, George. It's against the rules!

Sorry I am just under pressure in writing my fic, so sorry SnoopWarner! I just had many ideas running in my head for my fic!

SnoopsWarner
06-25-2006, 10:54 AM
:023:

BlackMystechRanger
06-25-2006, 11:01 AM
As Rita Repulsa would say: Ugh I have a headache!

SnoopsWarner
06-25-2006, 11:02 AM
Or use your Magic Wand to make your monster grow!

Phantom6
06-25-2006, 10:52 PM
Wow, George, Umm... I'm really not sure how to put this.


Okay, GO find a book. A NOVEL, something with more than 300 pages and no pictures.


Read it. In fact, go buy the Superman Returns Novel. It's $10 and out now.

Read it. While you do that take notice of the sentence structure, the way the story isn't so much just words but how it forms itself in your mind.

Now, when you're writing you want to do something like that. You want the reader to forget they're reading something and instead have it seem like they're almost experiencing it.


The way you write now is... well, not good.


The sentences all run on, the characters are flat. You need to take what's been shown on the shows and build on that.

You need to infuse the story with emotion and realism (as real as a story about teenagers and giant robots fighting evil intergalactic space aliens can be anyway).


As your story stands now I couldn't make it beyond the third line before I had to stop.

First though, if you're going to write you NEED something better than WebTV. There's a reason they don't sell those things anymore, they sucked when they were new and they suck even more now.

A new computer, bottom of the line new, shouldn't be more than about $400.

Hell, go to a Pawn shop and buy one from there. You can probably grab a decent writing system for about $200 or so.


Microsoft Word isn't the best but it gets the job done.

Storm Warrior2
06-25-2006, 10:53 PM
.......George uses WEBTV?

Dark Knight
06-25-2006, 10:54 PM
Don't listen, George. Just keep writing this fantastic piece of art!

Phantom6
06-25-2006, 11:05 PM
Don't listen, George. Just keep writing this fantastic piece of art!


George actually PM'ed me and asked me to post my opinion and advice.



And yes, he does use WebTV. He's always used WebTV.


And until that little box from hell dies that's all he'll ever use.

The Real Torhu
06-25-2006, 11:22 PM
Kim said and you can fuck me when you want!....*snip*
Oh. My. God.

Dude, I understand you've got certain...feelings...towards the characters. But dude, everything that comes after that sentence is just wrong. It's PR, it's a kids show...and even though we all enjoy it...you're taking things a bit too far there.

Tone it down, man. Seriously.

Phantom6
06-25-2006, 11:29 PM
Oh. My. God.

Dude, I understand you've got certain...feelings...towards the characters. But dude, everything that comes after that sentence is just wrong. It's PR, it's a kids show...and even though we all enjoy it...you're taking things a bit too far there.

Tone it down, man. Seriously.



I'm so glad I never made it to that part.

The Real Torhu
06-25-2006, 11:36 PM
I'm so glad I never made it to that part.
You think I read all that to get there?

I was scanning down the page trying to figure out what the heck was going on, and suddenly I see "licking pussy"

That naturally made me go "WTF" which lead to me reading the surrounding material.

And...wow.

Phantom6
06-26-2006, 02:54 AM
You think I read all that to get there?

I was scanning down the page trying to figure out what the heck was going on, and suddenly I see "licking pussy"

That naturally made me go "WTF" which lead to me reading the surrounding material.

And...wow.



Good, I was afraid we'd have to lock you up. My brain was spinning after four updates.

GekiCrimson
07-07-2006, 01:32 PM
I was scanning down the page trying to figure out what the heck was going on, and suddenly I see "licking pussy"

That naturally made me go "WTF" which lead to me reading the surrounding material.

And...wow.


I had the same reaction.

SnoopsWarner
07-07-2006, 01:34 PM
More art! More art! More art!

BlackMystechRanger
07-12-2006, 10:02 PM
It's updated!

Storm Warrior2
07-12-2006, 10:03 PM
The return of Peckster=George wins the internet.

BlackMystechRanger
07-13-2006, 05:50 PM
I have other Monsters returning too, but you will be shocked at who returns!

GekiCrimson
07-14-2006, 12:59 PM
Nice work, George! :023:

BlackMystechRanger
07-17-2006, 07:14 PM
Thanks everyone!

Dark Knight
07-17-2006, 11:42 PM
George, this is awesome.

I don't know much, but I know what's awesome, and this is it!

The Real Torhu
07-19-2006, 12:12 PM
Where...are....the paragraphs!

*head explodes*

Dark Knight
07-19-2006, 08:35 PM
Paragraphs are for shitty stories.

George has transcended the need for your primitive "paragraphs".

Jason Voorhees
07-21-2006, 08:17 PM
Best. Fic. Ever. :023:

BlackMystechRanger
08-07-2006, 04:33 PM
Now I need to write the Ranger battle!

Stradivarius
08-07-2006, 10:05 PM
I don't have a computer remember, I only have webtv!

excuse my french,but what the flippity FUCK is webtv?

GundamExia
08-07-2006, 10:30 PM
excuse my french,but what the flippity FUCK is webtv?

Ever hear of Google?

Arrow
08-07-2006, 11:06 PM
http://www.justfuckinggoogleit.com/?query=WebTV

:)

BlackMystechRanger
03-16-2007, 07:43 AM
The return of this fic is tonight!

BlackMystechRanger
03-16-2007, 11:12 PM
My fic has been updated and I like to extend a big thank you to RangerOfOz!

BlackMystechRanger
04-11-2007, 12:36 AM
MystechRangers is now updated with chapter 3 now completed!

BlackMystechRanger
01-11-2008, 01:28 PM
Coming soon more Mystech!

Nightcrawler
01-29-2008, 10:17 AM
Wow...Imaginative story.

BLANKS
01-29-2008, 12:29 PM
just wait till George gets his Hentai Kim pic from me. Then ya fukkers are in for some trouble, bwahahahaha!

Fellow member of the House of George since 0666!