Evil Green Ranger-PRDT-Seen on PRE

[Masondogbot]

This is after the Power Ranger Ninga Storm ranger Epasodes.

Mesagogs place where Elsa make here new Plan to Distroy the rangers.

Mesagog-Elsa what are you doing?
Elsa-I have found a way to distroy the Rangers
Mesagog-Go on
Elsa-Well I am makeing a dino gem out of the same miterial to make the other gems,It has The power Invincibility,Which mean I wont get Hurt or Injured but I need a Human,But who?

Class:
Dr.O:Kids we have a new student today,his name is Clyde Johnson,So Clyde,do you want to share anything with us?
Clyde:No
Dr.O:Ok you will sit(looks at seating chart)Right next to Conner over there.
Kira(to conner):He seems like a happy person.
Dr.O:OK,I will now hand out he tests,
(Ethen gets his and he gets an A)
Clyde(to Ethen):So what are you those video playing dorks?
Ethen:Shut Up
Clyde:You didnt answer my question
Ethen:I said shut up Punk
Clyde:Rather be a Punk than a Dork
Conner(to Clyde):Hey!
Clyde:what?!?!
Conner:When I lose my temper,Your totled
Clyde:Wow I am so Scared,Not,You think I am Scared of you?
Conner:You should be
Clyde:try me
Dr.O:We are doing an Exparement today,Now I will pair you all in a pair of 5,Conner,Kira,Ethen,Trent and Clyde,You will work together.
Clyde:Great
The 5 students are doing an expariment
Clyde:Hello,Hot stuff
Kira: Dream on
Clyde:what,You are those Rebel chicks
Kira:Not really,And if I was I wont date a guy who are mean to my friends
Clyde:Wait,These 2 are your friends
Kira:Yeah
Clyde:So with one you like,Jock Strap(conner)or Lord of the Geeks(ethan)
Kira:Shut up
Trents drawing
Clyde:Let me see that
Takes drawing
Trent:hey,give that back
Clyde:Hey nice drawing off Kira, :D
Conner grabs drawing and gives it back to Trent
Conner:You are really starting to annoy me
Clyde:Really,good
Ethen:Why do you have to tick everyone in here?
Clyde:Just being honest Goody Goody

Megsagogs place and they are spying on the rangers,
Mesagog:Bring me Clyde Johnson,Hes perfet,
Elsa:Yes master

[Masondogbot]

Chapter 2
Conner and the gang are in The Dino Place telling DR.O about Clyde.
CONNER:This guys like evil :mad:
DR.O:Its just a bully
CONNER:Hes a Punk
TRENT:He makes fun of my drawings
ETHEN:He calls me a nerd
CONNER:He thinks Kiras a Blood sucking Vampire that likes her
KIRA:He did not say any thing about me being a Vampire at all
DR.O:Lisen,I face with bullys or Punks before like Bulk and Skull
CONNER:If this guy had Super powers,He would be one of Mesogogs monsters.

Street:
Clyde is walking home with his sun glasses on than Mesogog comes in to be the evil power Ranger.
MESOGOG:Are you Clyde Johnson?
(Takes off sun glasses Quickliy)
CLYDE: Ye..yeah :o
MESOGOG:I am Mesogog,And I want you to become a Power Ranger
CLYDE:Sorry to much work
MESOGOG:Are you sure,You know those teenagers you make fun off?
CLYDE:Yeah,Knight(Conner),Goody(Ethen),Vando(Trent ) and that hot chick(Kira)
MESOGOG:They are the Power Rangers along with your Sciance theacher Mr.Oliver are the good guys and you my good friend can reck there lives with there own medicane.
(Shows Clyde the morper)
CLYDE: Do I need money
MESOGOG:No,but is that a yes
CLYDE:heck yeah :D
Later

MESOGOG:This is Elsa,She made the morpher
ELSA:I will give the dino gem bracelet,Oh yeah when you get this you will have Invicibility and you can Teleport which I added minutes ago
MESOGOG: Do you want to start?
CLYDE:Now,Yeah
ELSA:Ok,All you got to do is say"Green Dino Thunder Ranger Power Up"than press the botton.
CLYDE:Ok,Green Dino thunder Power Up
(Clyde morphing clip:Clyde back flips to a Green tornato than gose on the other side with out the Helmet than the hemet is put on his head.)
CLYDE:Sweet
ELSA:Ok,Do you want me to help?
CLYDE:No

DR.O:Guys,save the small talk for later
CONNER:what do we have?
DR.O:A evil power ranger
CONNER:dont tell me a White one
MR.O:No green
CONNER:What :o
MR.O:This guy looks strong,We all must go and use your Triassic mode to conner
CONNER/KIRA/ETHEN/DR.O: DINO THUNDER POWER UP HA
TRENT:WHITE RANGER POWER UP
CONNER:TRIASSIC MODE

CONNER:Were is he?
DR.O: Dont know
CLYDE:Looking for me? :cool:
KIRA:Ther he is
CONNER:Who are you and what do you want?
CLYDE:Just to have fun
TRENT:Ya,want fun,here you go
(Trent Slashs Clyde with his sword but dose not effect him)
TRENT:What
(dose it agian 5 more times)
DR.O:The guys still standing
CLYDE:I have the power on Invicibility :icon_fU:
(Trent trys to punch him in the face but he failed when clyde teloported)
CLYDE:and I can teloport
DR.O:This is not going to be easy
CONNER:Who are you
CLYDE:Your worse night mare,Rapo sword(his weapeon,a long sword)
(Clyde slashs them all)
CLYDE:This is so easy :shame:

More coming soon

[Masondogbot]

Hello?

[Impy]

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I am SO fucking MSTing this.

[Masondogbot]

....


I am SO fucking MSTing this.

what dose MSTing mean?

[Impy]

Heehee. Doom'd/10

[Masondogbot]

Heehee. Doom'd/10

Okay? I guess

[Masondogbot]

http://img48.exs.cx/img48/1459/untitled6qj.jpg

Here what it looks like

[Masondogbot]

TRENT:This guy is too strong
CONNER:What do we do?
ETHEN:I got an Idea,We use all 3 of are zords on him,And I dont think he has a Zord.
DR.O:To dangerius
ETHEN:Why
DR.O:Lisen if we did the same thing to Trent we can do it on this guy
KIRA:I dant want to do that agian
CONNER:And beside are other friends are Haley,Cassiy and Deven
TRENT:Haley and Cassiy are Girls and I dont think Mesogog will have Deven Be a Ranger
ETHEN:So ya coming or what?
DR.O:OK
(Ethan and the other rangers,Ethen and Kira go on the Dino Thunder Zord W/ Tommy controling Conners place,Conner is on his Triassic zord,and Trent is on his Stega zord.)
CLYDE:OH COME ON,ARE THEY THAT DEPRENTE?
CLYDE:Go RAPO ZORD
(a Green Raptor Zord came by,Mainly it is Just a Green Raptor Rider That is the same size as the Tyranno Zord)
CONNER:NO WAY :o
KIRA:Got to be kidding :o
ETHEN:He has one TO :o
CLYDE:NOW by the power Of Mesogog make me Grow.
(Clyde grows the same size as The Zords)
DR.O:Hes was just Growing
CLYDE:Now I can Distroy you and All of your Friends and Zords Knight
CONNER:What did you call me
CLYDE:Stupid Stupid Stupid
CONNER:The only person who call me Knight was CLYDE
CLYDE:You found out?

[Mystic Fire]

I kinda like this story, but it does need some work.

[Impy]

I kinda like this story, but it does need some work.
SOME work? It's a fuckin' trainwreck!

[Mystic Fire]

It isn't that bad. There have been worse, after all. You've at least got to gib him credit for posting it...

[Impy]

It isn't that bad. There have been worse, after all. You've at least got to gib him credit for posting it...
Guy, i've seen better writing on fucking Barney, mmm'kay?

[Mystic Fire]

Alright, alright, I give up.

[Masondogbot]

You know I was right,Power Ranger Empire is better and nicer,You people on Ranger Bord are DICKS

[jetfire85]

That's because on PRE, people aren't allowed to criticize the work. You have to be nice. Here, at Rangerboard, we don't have that constraint. So if we think the story sucks, we'll tell you. And trust me, this sucks.

[Impy]

You know I was right,Power Ranger Empire is better and nicer,You people on Ranger Bord are DICKS
Lemme guess...you wanna Suit Down Ranger Borad???

[Masondogbot]

Lemme guess...you wanna Suit Down Ranger Borad???

NO,I am just going to go to Power Ranger Empire

[Magic Force]

Impy shut up. Your a jackass. We all get it.

Moving on...

Masondogbot: this does have a good plot and a good general idea. My only suggestion is to work on your grammer some and possibly try a little hard to get in character when writing a fanfic. Some of the things a few characters say aren't exactly something you'd hear in DT. But you hit Conner head on. Good job with that characterization. Also, just ignore the dumbasses on RB who feel the need to flame and insult you every five seconds. Just ignore them and don't listen or reply to them. That's all that they want. Don't leave RB because of the members. Most of them are all jackasses.

~MF~

[Impy]

Impy shut up. Your a jackass. We all get it.

Moving on...

Masondogbot: this does have a good plot and a good general idea. My only suggestion is to work on your grammer some and possibly try a little hard to get in character when writing a fanfic. Some of the things a few characters say aren't exactly something you'd hear in DT. But you hit Conner head on. Good job with that characterization. Also, just ignore the dumbasses on RB who feel the need to flame and insult you every five seconds. Just ignore them and don't listen or reply to them. That's all that they want. Don't leave RB because of the members. Most of them are all jackasses.

~MF~

You know you're an RB reject when you have MF on your side.

[Magic Force]

Mason: you gonna finish the fanfic? I would like to see how it ends.

~MF~

[Impy]

Mason: you gonna finish the fanfic? I would like to see how it ends.

~MF~
Didn't know you were a masochist.

[Magic Force]

No. I'm kind.

But good job in making up words.

~MF~

[jetfire85]

Okay, time for some actual criticism.

I can't comment on the story. Here's why: I cannot, for the life of me, read it. The lines are too scrunched together, the grammar and spelling are terrible, and under no circumstance should you ever use a smiley in a story unless the story is a conversation online.

I won't go into my hatred of the script format right now, but very few people can do a script-style story correctly. To my knowledge, Cosmic Dreamer is the only fanfic writer to get even close to a proper cinematic script format. Try writing in regular format, you'll do better... if you can.

Lastly, fan fiction isn't for everyone. We all have ideas, but we all aren't perfect writers either. So try to improve if you don't want to get slammed by people like Impy.

[Orre Ranger]

The whole idea is okay but it needs alot of work, its destroy, not distroy, other than that it's not half bad

[Mystic Fire]

The whole idea is okay but it needs alot of work, its destroy, not distroy, other than that it's not half bad

Thats what I thought...