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Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:00 AM
Ok. Here's a series based on the upcoming Magiranger adaptation. I hope you'll like it.
First things first, let's begin with the characters, weapons, etc.
Power Rangers Magic Masters/ Mythic Magicians
A fan series, made for the upcoming Magiranger adaptation
Let’s begin with the characters......
Seth Slyver
Red Magician
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Phoenix
Special power: Fire powers, turning into a flaming Phoenix
Bio: Seth was a young kid on Terra Venture years ago. Now he is a 16 almost 17 years old young boy at Mirinoi. He likes rock-music, and metal, and since Mirinoi succesfully made contact with Earth, he asks for the newest tracks.
Dave Jones
Yellow Magician
Age: 16
Mythic creature: Garuda
Special power: Flying, creating enormous winds
Bio: Dave is high school boy at Earth, in New York. He is kinda magic fan, and loves everything connected to magic. Unluckily, the other kids at school now this, and the though guys and bullies make a joke of him. The call him Magic Geek or Dave Potter.
Laura Jones
Blue Witch
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Mermiad
Special power: Water powers, creating water out of nowhere(just like Tori)
Bio: Laura is the older sister of Dave. She always protects her little brother, when he needs it. She, just like her brother, loves mythic creatures. But she keeps it a secret. She isn’t the social one, however she is beautiful, and there are a lots of oys around him. She and Seth develop a bond.
Clark Anderson
Green Magician
Age: 17
Mythich creature: Taurus
Special power: Incredible strenght
Bio: Clark was one of the bullies, who Dave had to face, but later, he turned out to be a ‘good guy’, shortly after he got his powers. He is strong, and he’s a wrestler type guy. He is the oldest one in the team, and sometimes takes leadership.
Chloe McNemara
Pink Witch
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Fairy
Special power: Flying
Bio: Chloe is a blonde, but not stupid girl. Her favourite color is pink. She was a rival of Laura, because she was jealous, when she saw the many boys around her. She is beautiful too, and the other favourite girl of the boys.
Power sources:
The teams source of power are five gems with special powers. They were created in the time when mythical beast lived on Earth. These creatures gave powers to the gems. The gems are hidden in various places. Four is hidden on Earth, and the fifth, the Phoenix Gem is hidden on Mirinoi. They give special powers to their holders, because they bond with them(just like the Dino Gems). They turn into smaller gems, and with a gem colored brace, they equip on the owner’s hand. The gems are sorrounded by and M-shape on the brace.
Weapons/Gear:
Magic Dagger:
A small dagger, with and M-shape. All 5 rangers have them. They can transform into personal weapons with a small, mythic creature hsaped crystal. The rangers put their crystals to the handle’s end, and the daggers turn into a sowrd for red, a bow for yellow, an axe for green. The daggers stay at their normal form for pink and blue.
Magic Morphers
A cell phone for the rangers. They use them to communicate with each other. Before morphing, each ranger’s gem ejects from the brace, and flies into the morpher. Then they push the round button, and say: Magic Masters, Power Up!
Phoenix Battlizer: Seth’s battlizer. It’s a power up for his gem. He can acces it, by saying: Phoenix Battlizer, power up!
Combined weapoms coming soon...................................
Vehicles:
Magic Riders:
Small, flying streamlined shuttles. All five rangers got one.
Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:01 AM
Allies villains and Zords.........
Power Rangers Magic Masters/ Mythic Magicians
A fan series, made for the upcoming Magiranger adaptation
Let’s begin with the characters......
Seth Slyver
Red Magician
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Phoenix
Special power: Fire powers, turning into a flaming Phoenix
Bio: Seth was a young kid on Terra Venture years ago. Now he is a 16 almost 17 years old young boy at Mirinoi. He likes rock-music, and metal, and since Mirinoi succesfully made contact with Earth, he asks for the newest tracks.
Dave Jones
Yellow Magician
Age: 16
Mythic creature: Garuda
Special power: Flying, creating enormous winds
Bio: Dave is high school boy at Earth, in New York. He is kinda magic fan, and loves everything connected to magic. Unluckily, the other kids at school now this, and the though guys and bullies make a joke of him. The call him Magic Geek or Dave Potter.
Laura Jones
Blue Witch
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Mermiad
Special power: Water powers, creating water out of nowhere(just like Tori)
Bio: Laura is the older sister of Dave. She always protects his little brother, when he needs it. She, just like his brother, loves mythic creatures. But she keeps it a secret. She isn’t the social one, however she is beautiful, and there are a lots of oys around him. She and Seth develop a bond.
Clark Anderson
Green Magician
Age: 17
Mythich creature: Taurus
Special power: Incredible strenght
Bio: Clark was one of the bullies, who Dave had to face, but later, he turned out to be a ‘good guy’, shortly after he got his powers. He is strong, and he’s a wrestler type guy. He is the oldest one in the team, and sometimes takes leadership.
Chloe McNemara
Pink Witch
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Fairy
Special power: Flying
Bio: Chloe is a blonde, but not stupid girl. Her favourite color is pink. She was a rival of Laura, because she was jealous, when she saw the many boys around her. She is beautiful too, and the other favourite girl of the boys.
Power sources:
The teams source of power are five gems with special powers. They were created in the time when mythical beast lived on Earth. These creatures gave powers to the gems. The gems are hidden in various places. Four is hidden on Earth, and the fifth, the Phoenix Gem is hidden on Mirinoi. They give special powers to their holders, because they bond with them(just like the Dino Gems). They turn into smaller gems, and with a gem colored brace, they equip on the owner’s hand. The gems are sorrounded by and M-shape on the brace.
Weapons/Gear:
Magic Dagger:
A small dagger, with and M-shape. All 5 rangers have them. They can transform into personal weapons with a small, mythic creature hsaped crystal. The rangers put their crystals to the handle’s end, and the daggers turn into a sowrd for red, a bow for yellow, an axe for green. The daggers stay at their normal form for pink and blue.
Magic Morphers
A cell phone for the rangers. They use them to communicate with each other. Before morphing, each ranger’s gem ejects from the brace, and flies into the morpher. Then they push the round button, and say: Magic Masters, Power Up!
Phoenix Battlizer: Seth’s battlizer. It’s a power up for his gem. He can acces it, by saying: Phoenix Battlizer, power up!
Combined weapoms coming soon...................................
Vehicles:
Magic Riders:
Small, flying streamlined shuttles. All five rangers got one.
Allies:
The rangers’s mentor is Hyla, a beautiful witch. She is the strongest, and last of her kind. All the witches and magicians were killed by the Dark Queen and her soldiers. Hyla escaped and gave up most of her powers, and turned into a white owl, to remain hidden from the queen’s forces. When she saw that everybody gone, she decided to leave Earth once and for all, and moved to Mirinoi. There she turned back to her human form, and discovered the red gem in a cave. She decided to protect it. She kept the gem for the chosen one, Seth.
Another allie of the rangers is Gremlick, a wizard. He was a powerful magician in his time, but when the Dark Queen released her demons and warlocks, he gave up his power, to help his fellow magiacians.
Villains:
The Dark Magic Empire:
In the time, when magic ruled the Earth, everything was peaceful. Each magician and witch were protecting humans, until the Dark Queen appeard. She released her soldiers, demons and warlocks, to destroy all magicians and witches, and destroy Earth. The magicians alongside with the witches fought until their dead, but defeated the Queen. They reamined ones sealed away the Queen and her forces into another dimension, with every magical powers and things connected to magic, to prevent this happening again.
Dark Queen: A powerful witch, who once was good, but got possessed by an evil, and powerful spirit, and decided to wipe out the magicians and withces.
Belthazor. The Queen’s first man, and a powerful demon. Belthazor can turn into a human. Technically, he is half demon and half human. As a human, he is the history teacher of Chloe’s class.
Warlocks: The endless army of powerful creaturess. They are the footsoldiers of the Queen.
Zords:
The rangers are the Zords of themselfs. They grow into humanoid robots. They can form two types of Megazord. The Magic Megazord, and the Phoenix Dragon Master.
Places:
Ancient Cave on Mirinoi
The cave, where the gems were hidden, until Seth found it. Seth didn’t find the entire underground cave, just a small part of it, where a huge rock with five gem slots can be found. Only the red gem was in the rock. After all of the kids arrived on Mirinoi with their gems, they put them into the rock, and the hidden chamber/cave was revealed.
The Mythic
A club in Raodville, the kids’s hang-out place. The place is owned by their mentor, Hyla.
Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:03 AM
And the first episode....the second is coming soon....I think later this week......
Power Rangers Magic Masters
Episode 01
Magical Beginning, part 1
A dark, rainy night, a creepy castle, a fearsome laugh, and many screams. A woman, chased by strange creatures runs into the woods. She stops running, and tuns back to the creatures. They stop, and preapire for battle. Suddenly, the woman throws a creature away, by using her magical powers. The others attack her. She levitates, and kicks away a few creatures. Suddenly thunder strikes, and the woman falls to the ground. A shadow appears, but we don’t see the shadow’s owner. The woman looks at him, and suddenly a huge light covers the woods, and an owl, and a red thing flies away.
Present day, Mirinoi. A boy and his friends walk out of school. A boy says:
“Yo Seth, that was awseome!”
“Yeah man! The way you throw that ball…….”
“Okay, okay, I know.”says Seth “But let’s talk about something else”
“Sorry pal, but i have to go home”sad the first boy.
“Me too” sad the other.
After this, Seth and the other two boys went in to diffrent ways. He switched on his mp3 player, and began to listen music. While listening to music, he went on a different path, but he didn’t noticed it. While he was walking, he stumbled in a small rock, and started to roll down to somewhere. On a tree, a white owl was watching him rolling down.
Finally, Seth stopped. While he was getting on, he noticed something. He landed before a cave. The entrance was covered by some leafes. Seth took his bag up, and walked to the entrance. He took down some leaves, and entered the cave. He took out a flash-light from his bag. A mysterious power was pulling him in. He didn’t know what, but he was curious. While walking, he noticed some paintings on the walls. All picture was about a mythical creature, a phoenix. At the end of the tunnel, he wanted to turn back, but noticed something in the wall. It was a slot, or something. He wanted to touch it, but before he could reach it, the cave shaked, and the tunnel’s end opened.
It opened to a smaller cave, with a rock in the middle. The rock had five slots. Four was empty, but there was something in the fifth. It was shining. Seth walked closer. When he looked at the gem, he saw that the gem is in a bird shaped slot. Guided by an unknown force, Seth touched the gem, and took it out of the slot. It shined more brighter then before. Behind him, the white owl appeard, and turned into a woman. After the gem finished shining, Seth noticed something. He saw his hand flaming. He scared a bit, and sttarted to wave it.
“Stop!” sad the woman “There’s nothing to be scared of”
Seth stopped for a moment, when he saw the beautiful woman. Then he got back.
“What?!?!?!? My hand is flaming”
“Yes it is. But do you feel it hot? Or do you feel pain?”
“No…..no I don’t……..why?”
“This is because the mighty gem chose you to be it’s holder, and it gave you the power of the mythical Phoenix!”
“Phoenix? That bird thing, who reborns from it’s ashes?”
“Yes Seth”
“W…wait! How did you know my name, and who are you?”
“I’m Hyla, the protector of the gem.”
“OK…..This is a joke right?”
“No. If this was a ‘joke’, you’d be ahses for now.”
“…………………………….”
Seth’s hand finished flaming. Hyla sad that he and the phoenix are one now. Seth still couldn’t belive it. Before Seth coulld answer something, Hyla turned into and owl again, and flied out of the cave. Seth ran after the owl, but it disappeard. Then his hand started to flame again. He opened it, and looked at the gem. It was shining. Suddenly he heard a a mysterious voice.
“It is time for you to go to Earth, and find the oher chosen ones!”
Before Seth could ask how, the answer appeard in his mind. He remembered to what Hyla sad about the phoenix and him. He concentrated, and his flaming body turned into a falming Phoenix. He took off, and flew away.
On Earth, everything was going as normal. Somewhere in California, two high school classes were walking. They were on a field trip. The classes are from Roadville high. They were walking in the woods. A young boy with glasses stayed behind, to do something. A few older boys noticedd it in the group, and they turned back too.
The young boy was looking for something in his bag, when the older boys arrived, they took his bag, and started to play with it.
“What are you doing magic geek?”asked the bully “Looking for a spell?”
“Hey! Give me back my bag!”shouted the boy
“A-a-aaaaa Dave POTTER!” sad the other
“My name is not Potter!”
“We now JONES! But Poter is better! Hahahahhahahh!”
A girl in the gorup noticed that Dave is missing. Then she heard some boys laughing. Quickly she ran away. Her friends noticed it, and they didn’t know why did she do it. When the girl arrived, the boys were still throwing Dave’s bag. The girl got mad.
“What the hell are you doin Jeff?” asked the girl
“Nothing Laura! We were just playing! Right guys?”
“Yes” sad the other two
“Messing with my brother means playing for you?”
“Whoa! Little Lauara get mad! Hahahahahahaha!”
Laura suddenly grabbed Jeff’s hand, and with a quick move, she throw him to the ground. Jeff’s friends stopped laughing.
“You want more?” asked Laura
“N...n...nn.....n...o!” sad the boys, and ran after the class.
“As for you, Jeffrey! Don’t mess with my brother again! Okay?!”
“Y...y....yes!” sad Jeff, and ran back to the class.
Laura then helped his brother up, and gave back his bag. Then they both went back to the class. In the other class, a blonde girl were talking with her girlfirends. They were talking about blonde stuff. Shopping, beauty stuff, and of course boys. About boys. There were a lot of boys around them. The girls gave orders to the boys, and the boys did them without asking a thing. One of the boys called the blonde girl Chloe. Chloe suddenly fell to the ground. Four boys ran there to help her up.
Near the forefront of the group an athletic young boy was joined by Jeff and his friends. The two boys were talking about how Laura took care of Jeff. They were of course laughing. The athletic boy started to laugh. When Jeff saw it, he aksed him sonething.
“What are you laughing at Clark?” asked Jeff
“No offense dude, but being beaten up by a girl?” sad Clark
“Hey man! She was just lucky, nothing else!”
“Yeah, right. I’d say the same! And don’t be suprised. I told you, not to mess with Dave.”
“You’re saying this like you never playing with him!” sad Jeff
“I did. But I realize that it’s useless, and you should finish it too!”
“Oh yeah? No one tells me what to do!!”
Suddenly, Jeff hit Clark on his face. Clark first did nothing, but then kicked the leg out under Jeff, which made him fall to the ground. Jeff’s friends laughed at him again. After this, Clark walked away. He looked for Laura and Dave, and he found them. Then the three started to talk. After a few minutes, their teacher, Mr. Tuner walked to them, and sad that he heard, what have they done to Jeff. Behind Turner, Jeff was playing thee good guy, and sometmes jelled ouch. Clark sad they didn’t do anything, but Turner didn’t belive this. Behind them, Chloe was just arriving. Meanwhile Turner sad to the three that they have detentioned. They have walk around the woods, and find the bus in a different way. When Chloe heard this, she started to laugh. Turner noticed this.
“Well, well, well.......Ms McNemara! You find this funny? Well then. I think you should join the ‘expedition team’!!!!” sad Turner
“B..b....but Mr Turner! I didn’t do anything!”
“Of course you didn’t........” sad Turner “.......but, you laughed at their task, and I thought you should help them finding the bus. Now. You wait five minutes after we leave, and then go to that direction. You will end up at the bus, if you follow that path, but a little later than us. And no running! Good luck!”
After this Mr. Turner and the classes walked away, while Jeff and his friends were laughing. The four detentioned youngs were just staring after their group. After five minutes, they went on the path, which Tuner shown. After a few minutes walk, Chloe started to act like a true blonde.
“Oho, my foot hurts, there is dirt under my nails, and I’m tired!” sad Chloe
“Oh please shut up blondie! Oh my nails! Oh my foot! Come on!” sad Laura
“Oh, miss perfect marled haired girl! You think you so smart?” asked Chloe
“I’m not perferct, but I’m not a puling girl like you!”
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeah!!!!”
While they were arguing, and the boys were smiling, suddenly they all heard something. They looked to the sky, and saw a red flame thing fliing to the ground. They all ran to the piont where that thing landed. When they arrived, they saw Seth.
“Whoa! Who are you?!” asked Clark
“Ammmmm, my name is Seth Slyver, and you?”
“Clark Anderson. He is Dave and Laura Jones, and the blondie is Chloe McNemara!” sad Clark
“Hey! My name is not blondie!” jelled Chloe
“Well....nice to meet you” sad Seth “What are you doing here?”
“We? What are you doing here?” aksed Laura
“Well, aaaaaa, i was just walking here....you know.........”
“Alone?” asked Dave
“Yeah! You know I like walkin’ alone in the woods!” answered Clark “And you?”
“Well....we got detentioned, and we saw a fire thingy fliing on the sky, and.....” sad Dave
“Blondie and Laura almost get tussled!” continued Clark
“Flying fire thingy ha? Are you serious?” asked Seth
But before Seth could continue, the gem in his pocket started to shine. The others noticed it, and they asked him about it. Seth sad nothing, and the gem stopped shining. Then the five kids went on their way. After a few minutes walking and talking, the gem shined again in Seth’s pocket. Before Laura can ask him about it again, they fall into a giant sinkhole. After a few minutes unconsciousness, everybody waked up. They standed up, and the phoenix gem shined again. Seth now took it out of his pocket, and suddenly fire get out of it, which broke the wal in, and made a tunnel. When the other four saw this, they astonished.
“What the heck was that?” asked Clark “and what is that thing, an where did you get that?”
“Uh.......it’s a long story.......” answered Seth a bit cofused
“Well...this tunnel is long, and we have time!” sad Chloe
The kids started to walk through the tunnel. While they were walking, Seth started his story.
“Ever heard of Terra Venture?” asked Seth
“Nuh-uh.....” answered Laura
“The space colonnie which took off a few years ago?” asked Dave
“Yes” sad Seth “Well, I was on that ship. After a few long months, we landed on a beautiful planet, what the local natives called Mirinoi. During are journey we encountered a space villain called Trakeena, and another called Captain Mutiny. But the Power Rangers defeated them....”
“Whoa. Hold on a second. You sad Power Rangers?” asked Dave
“Yes. Why?”
“Power Rangers are just ‘urban legends’..” sad Clark
“Well as I and the people of Terra Venture saw, they aren’t urban legends. Anyway, we landed on Mirioni, and built houses, schools and other stuffs. A few hours ago, I found a cave, and I found this red gem thing in the cave. I met a woman too, who was and owl, and then turned into a woman, and then turned into an owl. She sad something about the mythical phoenix, and chosen ones, and I heard a voice telling me to come here, to find these chosen ones, and now, here I am!”
“An owl, who turnes into a woman ha?” asked Chloe
When Chloe asked this, they reached a room, which was at the end of the tunnel. On the walls, there were pictures of four mythic creatures. A mermaid, a fairy, a garuda and a taurus. There were ancient writings on the walls too. In the middle of the roon, there was a round rock thing, with four shining gems. Seth hear the same voice-which he heard on Mirinoi-again, which told him that these are the other four gems, and the chosen ones are with him. From this Seth understood, that Dave, Clark, Laura and Chloe are the other chosen ones. Seth wanted to say something, but he saw that the four are at the gems, adn looking at them. Guided by a mysterious force, they all removed the gems, Dave the yellow, Laura the blue, Chloe the pink, and Clark the green. The five gems shined at the same time, and become equipped on the chosen one’s wrist by a brace, of the gem’s color. They bonded with the chosen ones.
“Whoa......”sad Clark
“Cool stuff!” sad Dave, while looking at his brace
“I agree little brother!” sad Laura “And what about you blondie?”
“Yeah.......cool......” sad Chloe in amazement
“The prophecy have been fulfilled” sad a voice “it shouldn’t be, but with dark powers rising, it became necessary!”
“I know this voice...........Hyla!” sad Seth
The owl flew in, and turned into Hyla. Dave, Chloe, Laura and Clark astonished.
“The mythic creaturs have chosen you to become the masters of all magic!” sad Hyla
By hearing this, all five kids astonished.
At another place, between dark clouds, and cold air, a dark castle appeard. In the castle, a woman’s voice ordered some creatures to find the gems, and bing them to her. Strange creatures flew out of the castle. Elswhere, Mr. Tuner’s eyes changed into black..........
To Be Continued...........
TOK-715
01-10-2005, 08:15 AM
Well I'm not a huge fan of fanfics so I didn't read it all, but you need to fix up some grammer & spelling mistakes.
Example:
Laura Jones
Blue Witch
Age: 17
Mythic creature: Mermiad
Special power: Water powers, creating water out of nowhere(just like Tori)
Bio: Laura is the older sister of Dave. She always protects his little brother, when he needs it.
You're refering Laura Jones as a guy there :rolleyes: & it's mermaid. There's several other errors, just be sure to do some editting before posting it. Run it through MS Word's spelling & grammer check once atleast.
You're also using way too many periods at the end of each speech or sentence. Three is enough, four max including the period meaning the sentence has ended.
"Yes sir...."
"No... I thought you were going to pick up dad."
Replace "......................................" with: Blahblah was silenced for a moment, but then she spoke up, "blahblahblah."
Just noticed you didn't used the word "said" once, replace sad with said. Yep I know, minor spelling error. Again read it over a few times, better yet have someone else edit it for your before you post it.
Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:30 AM
Thanx.....I knew that there are spelling errors. Forgive me. I'm a hungarian 16 years old boy, with an intermediate level english langeue exam. Thanx again. I will correct them. But do you like it?
Oh and sorry for mixing his and her, I was doing it fast, becuase the ideas were just coming out of me, and my mother behind was saying "turn off the computer..." so again...sorry! :)
TOK-715
01-10-2005, 08:35 AM
It's a working progress, I got a bit confused into the story. It was a bit hard to tell who was talking in some parts. Just keep working on it, no one gets a perfect fanfic on their first try... well there are some exceptions. Anyway, good luck. Use www.dictionary.com if you need help spelling something.
Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:39 AM
Thanx a lot! Thank you for helping me! I will watch out for these little mistakes, errors in the second and later episodes... ;)
TOK-715
01-10-2005, 08:45 AM
No problem, but you still should go back over on the profile & episode 1 :cool:
Sylvester
01-10-2005, 08:56 AM
Oh and what's this? MS Word's spelling & grammer????
MegaRed
01-10-2005, 08:58 AM
FanFiction goes in the FanFiction section. Sylvester, 2 day ban.
JediMB
01-10-2005, 09:08 AM
*moves*
TOK-715
01-10-2005, 07:26 PM
Oh and what's this? MS Word's spelling & grammer????
Microsoft Word, it's a program you use to type on the computer. I used it for essays for school then & I used the spelling & grammer check to fix errors that I made.
Demon Hunter
01-10-2005, 08:26 PM
Pretty good dude, keep up the good work.
T-Rexor Ranger
01-10-2005, 08:29 PM
Does anyone notice this guy is banned?
TOK-715
01-10-2005, 11:51 PM
Yes, but it's only 2 days. He'll read the feedback when he makes his return.
Well...I talked with Sylvester yesterday, and he said that he is working on episode 02, and correcting the grammar and typing errors. But he will tell this when he comes back, which will happen within one hour. :D :023:
Oh and one more thing! He said something about his another fanfic, which is still at the planning stage. It's title isn't clear for him yet, but he said that the Andromeda ship from Andromeda will play a huge role. :cool:
Sylvester
01-12-2005, 08:50 AM
Well hello! I'm BACK!!!!!!!!! I'm happy too see that you liked the first ep. Don't worry, ep2 is coming. And I saw that my little friend Seth was telling you something about my upcoming fanfic.
Well yes. It's still in the planning stages, but what is sure now that the leader ranger will be female, and will be around 17. I'm not sure of the team's colors yet, because I was thinking about red blue and yellow, but I also thinked about black, gray/silver and white. Yes, it will be a 3 ranger team. And the three rangers with a few allies wil travell in the ship Andromeda.
Sylvester
01-12-2005, 09:05 AM
N-Guy! Sorry for my stupidness, when I read your answer to my question, I feeled very stupid. That was because I know MS Word, and I write the eps in it, but when I saw the word MS, I didn't realize what you're talking about. And there's a problem. My MS Word is configurated to Hungarian grammar, and when I switch to English, it asks for the install CD, to install autamitic grammar and spelling error fix. So I'm waiting for my brother to come home, so I can install that part again.
TOK-715
01-12-2005, 10:31 AM
Okay sounds good, looking forward to Episode 2.
Sylvester
01-13-2005, 05:29 AM
Well......you should! Because it'll be great! :cool:
And about the other fic of mine! I titled it Power Rangers Andromeda, but it isn't sure. The leader of the team is Lexi Xyranos, the white ranger. But this is sure. :cool:
Sylvester
01-17-2005, 08:06 AM
Ok...here's episode 02. Sorry for the late post. I had several problems (school and personal) and I didn't have time to finish it. But here's it now!!!!
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Power Rangers Magic Masters
Episode 02
Magical Beginning, part2
Back at the cave, Hyla appeard before the kids.
“Kids! The creaures of legends and myths gave their powers to you, to defeat the rising evil!” started Hyla
“Mythic creatures, rising evil? What is this? Some kind of kids’s story?” asked the confused Clark
“This is not a kids’s story as you said. This is reality. This is all real. The creatures and the gems chose you, becuase the Dark Magic Empire is rising again, and only you can fight them!” asnwered Hyla
The five kids still couldn’t say anything. They were just standing there, and staring at Hyla. Suddenly, something happened. The sky outside turned to black, and lightning strated ti struck. Hyla knew, that the Dark Queen returned. While the kids were listening to the thundering, Hyla turned into her owl form again, and flew away. While she was leaving, she said something.
“Kids! I have to leave! No it is you time to fight!” these were Hyla’s last words.
Then the owl disappeard. The kids didn’t know what to do, and what did Hyla meant on it’s their time to fight, but they all agreed that it’s time for them to get out of the cave.
“Let’s get out of this freaky cave” as blondie, I mean Chloe said
A few minutes later, when the kids reached the place where they strated, they realized the fact that they are in a hole, and they can’t climb up. Dave was thinking. He got any idea, and he shared it with the others.
“Hey guys!” he said “the woman.... um what’s her name...”
“Hyla?” said Laura, by making a quetion of her answer
“...yes Hyla. Remember waht she said about the mighty creatures, who have chosen us?” continued the magic expert (Dave)
“...Yeah...I think...” answered Chloe
“Oh come on blondie! Anyway. I think she said that thos creatures or whatever she said, gave their powers to us...right?” said and asked Laura
“Yes! That’s right. So if that happened, we all have special powers on our own!” said the happy Dave
“Whoa...hold on a sec wizard boy! You mean we have super powers like Superman or something?” asked the still confused Clark.
“Yes! And I think we can use them to get out of this hole!” said Dave
“Yeah...right. But for starting, which creatures have chosen us?” asked Chloe
“Well...” started Seth “I have the power of the legendary Phoenix, and...well you guys?...I’m not sure. I think Dave here, our expert as I see get the power of the mythic Garuda, you Chloe get the power of Fairy, you Laura get the power of the Mermais, and you dave, well I think you get the power of the mighty Taurus”
“Taurus?” asked Clark “that huge animal kinda whatever with horns?”
“Yes.” Answered Clark
“Wow! I got the power of Garuda! This is cool!” thought Dave
“Oh yeah! The mermaid...the queen of the ocean...cool!” said Laura
“And me? The Fairy?!?!?! How could it...” asked the bit upset Chloe
Before Laura could answer to this, strong wind rised in the hole, and it was getting stronger. Nobody knew waht’s happening, only Seth, who saw Dave concentrating. Chloe scared a bit, because the wind started to wind her up. She was the first who strated to float to the surface. Seth knew that it not just happened because of the wind, but because of Chloe’s power, which was fliing. Laura looked up for Chloe, and when she looked back to her friends, she saw her brother concentrating. She didn’t know what is her brother doing, and when tried to walk closer to him, she suddenly lifted off, alongside of Clark. When the wind was very strong, Dave opened his eyes, and smiled, and then started to laugh. He looked at at Seth, who was also smiling. He beckoned to him, and his body and eyes started to flame. Dave took off, just like Seth. The two flown out of the hole at the same time. They arrived just in time to see their sourrounded by mysterious and strange creatures. Those creatures were Warlocks. But the kids didn’t know this. When a few warlocks noticed Dave and Seth, they teleported near to them, and jumped over Dave. Dave covered his face with his hands, because he scared, but Seth, still in flame power, fired the warlocks. Two disappeard from the three, because they got a lot of fire. After this, the fight began. All of the kids used their small fighting knowledge in this battle. Everybody was doing fine, well almost fine, except Seth. Due to a few hits, he powered down from his half phoenix form. Then a lot of warlocks jumped over him. (Like Smith clones jumping on Neo in Matrix Reloaded). Laura and Dave saw it, and they wanted to help him. But suddenly with a huge boom, the warlocks bursted in peaces. Seth stood up. He was flaming. His eyes were flaming too. He got angry, and launched many fireballs to the warlocks. The warlocks have been defeated. But then, a strange guy appeard. His skin was red, and had black patterns on his face. He had red-yellow eyes. Chloe scared when she saw him. The demon looked at Seth. It seemed like he wanted him. Seth somehow felt this, but he didn’t do anything. The demon showed an evil smile, and throw a fireball on Seth. Seth raised his arm, and cathced the ball. He smiled, but the demon smiled too. Suddenly the ball exploded in Seth’s hand, which made him to power down for a moment, which gave the demon a never returning chance. He launched many energy and fireballs on Seth. Many of them hit Seth. The kids were just watching their friend taking so much hurt. Dave wasn’t able to stand, and do nothing, so he stepped in the way of the demon. The demon amazed a bit, and raised his arm, and wanted to grab Dave. But suddenly wind rised, which started to push the demon back. Laura and the others were just watching how Dave was defending Seth. But the demon seemed to be stronger, and started to walk towards Dave again. Dave now raised his arm, and the wind got stronger. It still wasn’t enough, so Dave closed his eyes, and the wind transformed into a tornado. It grabbed the demon, and pulled him up. The demon was just spinning in the twister. Dave was watching how the demon is getting weaker, when it suddenly disappeard. Due to the fact that the demon was gone, Dave stopped the tornado. Then he helped up Seth, who was very weak. Clark, Laura and Chloe ran to the two. Laura hugged her brother.
“Dave! That was awesome! I’m proud of you” said Laura
“Thanks sis!”
“Yo Dave! Thank you for defending me” sad the weak Seth
“Anytime! You would do the same! I was just helping my friend!”
“Friend?” asked back Seth “But we just know each other since an hour or less...how can you call me your friend?”
“Simple. You helped us, I, we helped you. That’s waht friends do!” answered Dave “So...friends?”
“Friends!” said Laura
‘”Friends!” said Clark and Chloe. Then they all looked to Seth. Seth answered.
“Friends!” and he put his hand together with the others’s.
Somewhere in a dark place, the demon had returned to the castle. He walked to the Queen, whose face was covered.
“You failed!” said the mysterious queen
“I’m sorry my queen! It won’t happen again!” answered the weakened demon.
“I’m sure about that...” the queen moved, and her mouth could be seen “...Belthazor!” right when the queen said this, Belthazor’s body flamed up. Belthzor was howling in his pain.
Back to the woods, the kids were walking to the bus. The sky was still dark, and they didn’t know why. Before they reached the buses, Seth disappeard to somewhere, because they agreed about this prevously. They agreed about Seth will be seperated from them, because he isn’t a student of Roadville high, and it’s better on this way. After a few minutes of Seth’s disappearance they reached the buses, where everybody was waiting for them. Mr. Turner was the first, who greeted the “excursionals”.
“Well. I see you found the bus, and I hope that this was a lesson for you about not to hurt your classmates, and to respect your fellow classmates. Now, get on the bus!” finished his speech Mr. Turner
All the four kids get on the bus, and the buses move off. Seth was watching the buses from the sky. Then the Phoenix/Seth flew away.
Next day, at Roadville high, Dave and Laura just arrived, and get off the school bus. They were walking in, when they were joined by Clark. They started to talk about the events of the previous day. While they were talking Dave looked at his brace, and noticed that the gem began to shine. Laura’s and Clark’s did the same. Then they all heard an ululation. They all looke on the three beside of them, and saw a white owl on the tree. It was Hyla. The owl looked at them, and flew away. Then the three continued their walk. Near them, Chloe was with her friends. Her friends were talking about the usual blonde stuff, but Chloe doesn’t seemed to be intrested, or enjoy it. She changed. When she saw her new friends, she ran to them. Laura was a bit suprised to see Chloe joining them.
“Hey!” said Chloe
“Blondie? What are you doing here?” asked the suprised Laura
“Hey!!! My name is not Blondie, Lara!” answered Chloe
“Lara?!?!?! I hate it when somebody calls me Lara!” answered the bit pissed off Laura “Anyway...waht are you doing here...ammm...Chloe?”
“See? It’s not that hard! I’m just here to talk with you!”
“Talk? About what?” aksed Clark
“About yesterday. I mean...that was cool...I mean without those freaky creatures and that painted guy...but it was cool! Right?” answered and asked Chloe
“Yeah! Oh and about it. We all agree, noone talks about this. To anyone. No matter what!” asked Dave
“Okay! So we keep this a secret. Right?” asked Chloe
“Right!” said Laura
“Secret!” said Clark
After this the kids went to class. When the lessons were over, they all walked to the football filed of the school. They were talking, when dark clouds appeard, adn the sky became dark again. All of them know that it isn’t good, and they contacted Seth. A minute later Seth appeard. Hyla, in her owl form also appeard. She looked at the kids, and in a telepatic way, she said to the kids to go to the cave, where they found the gems. The kids agreed, and ran away.
In the castle, the Queen ordered many Warlocks to get into the city, and start destroying. She also sent Belthazor.
When the kids arrived to the cave, Hyla and Seth were there, and were waiting for them. Hyla said that it is time for them to become Power Rangers.
“Power Rangers?!” asked Clark
“Yes! It is your time to fight agains the evil Queen, as rangers!” answered Hyla
“Okay…there is some miss understood…we are just teens, and not super heroes!?’ said Clark “We don’t have super powers…”
“But you do!” said Hyla
“Oh yeah…I forgot…” said Clark
“We have powers…but how will we be Power Rangers?” asked Dave
“With these!”
When Hyla said this, five Magic Phones appeard in the airm over each ranger.
“Take them!” said Hyla
All of the kids raised their left hand, where was the gem. They all touched the phones at the same time. Suddenly huge light covered the cave, and when the kids were able to see again, they noticed that the phones were gone. They amazed a bit. Hyla siad the phones and the gems become one. If they need the morphers, they only have to say their mythic creature’s name, and the brace will turn into the phone. Dave was happy. Laura didn’t know what to say. Chloe was amazed, and Clark and Seth smiled.
“Now go! Warlock and Demons are all over the city! You have to do something!” said Hyla
The kids ran away. When they got out of the cave, Dave, Chloe and Seth decided to fly to the city. Laura and Dave asked how will they get to the city. Seth said to Laura to use her waterpowers, to create some wave like thing, so she and Clark can get to the city. Laura agreed. Then all five rangers head to the city.
The city was a chaos when the rangers appeard. Warlocks were destroyin everything what they saw. Before they could do anything, Belthazor appeard with a few warlocks, and challenged the rangers. The rangers accepted it, and they started to fight. Belthazor appeard before Seth. He grabbed him, and threw away. Seth flew into a few cardboard boxes. He stood up, and his body started to flame. He was a bit angry, and his eyes were flaming too. The battle of the two began. They launched many fireballs on the other. The other kids were doing their best to defeat the endless army of Warlocks, but it seemed to be useless. After a few minutes fight, the four kids were thrown to the gournd one by one. Belthazor thrown a huge energy ball on Seth, and he fall to the ground, where his friends were. Then the five stood up.
“They are too many!” said Chloe
“I agree!” said Laura
“Then I think it’s time…” said Clark
“Well then…” began Seth “Phoenix!”
“Taurus!”
“Garuda!”
“Fairy!”
“Mermaid!”
The braces turned into Magic Phones. They all got the phones ready…
“What do we say?” whispered Seth
“Umm…Magic Masters Power Up?!” asked and said Dave
“Magic Masters? Oh well…MAGIC MASTERS” said the kids, opened the phones, pushed the black button in the phone “POWER UP!”
The kids raise their phones to the air. All of them stand in their creatures’s natural sorrundings (fire, earth, air, nature, water). From the sorroundings the cratures appear, and fly into the phones. Then the suit appears on the kids. After this we can see their faces. The helmets with opened visors appear on their heads. Then their creatures fly before the visors, and the visors close, and the rangers pose before a background of their creature.
“Red Phoenix Master!”
“Green Taurus Master!”
“Yellow Garuda Master!”
“Pink Fairy Master!”
“Blue Mermaid Master!”
The battle of the morphed masters and the warlocks began. The kids in their ranger forms seemed stronger. They were beating up the warlocks, as they were nothing. In the battle, the rangers used their weapons.
“Magic Sword!”
“Magic Axe!”
“Magic Bow!”
“Magic Dagger!” said Chloe and Laura
With their weapons, they destroyed the Warlocks. Then they turned their faces on Belthazor. Belthazor got angry. He threw huge energy balls on the rangers, which made them fall to the ground. While they were standing up, Hyla appeard in her white owl form, on a tree near to them. All of the rangers heard:
“Combine your weapons!”
The kids did it, and the launched a huge energy ball on Belthazor. Before the ball could reach him, he duplicated himself, and the real Belthazor teleported away. The ball destroyed the clone. When the rangers saw it, they all said: Hurray!
“Come back to the Cave!” they heard, and when they looked at the tree, the owl wasn’t there.
A few minutes later, the rangers in their human form arrived to the cave. There, Hyla said what she wanted to say.
“Kids! The battle just began! The Dark Queen won’t rest until she destroys the city, and gets her hands on the powers of the Mythic Creatures, your gems. She will use everything, magic, dark magic. Spells, everything what she can. But the city and the world is safe, until you, Magic Masters are here!” said Hyla
In the dark castle, the Queen’s evil laugh could be heard. Getting closer, the Queen’s mouth, and later, her glowing eyes could be seen.
Sylvester
01-18-2005, 07:25 AM
Nobody reading??? Come on! Comments or something?!?!?!?!?!?
rangermaster
01-23-2005, 09:59 PM
I've only read the first episode and I love this I'm going to read the second episode now.
Sylvester
01-24-2005, 07:42 AM
Well...thanks. Episode 3 is coming soon!!!!
rangermaster
01-24-2005, 10:27 AM
LOVE THE SECOND EPISODE. Keep up the great work.
epd2004
01-24-2005, 03:44 PM
I think it all sounds rather interesting and look forwards to reading more...
PHAETON
01-24-2005, 04:32 PM
pretty good fan fic, you got youreself her selvester. Although alittle bit hard to read, I love the Ranger's Origins and Gem Powers. I would like to see more Intense fight scenes...and try breaking up some of the actions so it's easier on the eyes. Keep it comming
Sylvester
01-26-2005, 07:37 AM
Geeee! Thanx everybody!!!!! Oh...do you know why Belthazor want Seth?
Sylvester
02-14-2005, 08:32 AM
Hello again. Sorry for the fact that there are no new eps, but don't worry!!!! I'm working on them very hard, because I'm working on a complex story, with full of mysteries!
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