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Fire ranger
11-07-2004, 06:17 PM
“So now we’ve got three guardians with the power of morphing. This is not good.” Queen Amasa said to Pyra, Shadowvox and Steelvix.

“I agree my queen it is certainly not good.” Pyra added.

“There is still is that one guardian who can’t morph. We must stop him before he finds his power and morph just like his friends.” explained Shadowvox to the others.

From the front door of the palace came a large gray rock like monster with arms bigger than its head. The monster clapped it giant hands together causing the place to slightly shake.

“Meet Rumbler.” Shadowvox announced to everyone. “He’ll surely defeat the guardians for you my queen.”

“Excellent. Now go and destroy the guardians once and for all!” Queen Amasa yelled out with her voice echoing through the room.

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“Van.” Orpheus said to Van inside the temple. “You are the last of the guardians who has received the power of morph. Now it is your turn to go in search and find your power.”

“Where will I find it?” Van asked.

“The power has been hidden somewhere in the city. Now go find it before one of Queen Amasa’s latest creations does.” replied Orpheus.

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Van came to downtown Ocean Cove and began scouring the area for any signs of something.

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Meanwhile Rumbler appeared in a plaza outside of downtown Ocean Cove with a group of Hackers.

“Hackers attack and make sure you find the power!” Rumbler ordered to the Hackers who began tearing the plaza apart in search of the power that Van was searching for.

Kent, Jordan and Alison suddenly arrived and fired off blasts of their element out of the cell phones at the Hackers blowing them away from civilians.

“Hold it right there you pile of rocks.” Alison ordered at Rumbler.

Alison, Jordan and Kent got into a row and flipped open their phone and dialed in their Gate Code and morphed into their Ranger forms.

“Keeper of the Flame!” Kent yelled out fully morphed. “Dragon Tail Sword!”

“Keeper of the Wave!” exclaimed Jordan as loud as he could. “Unicorn Winged Bow!”

“Keeper of the Breeze!” Alison roared out loudly letting it be known who she was. “Phoenix Claw Daggers!”

Alison and Jordan charged at the Hackers while Kent went after Rumbler. Kent thrust his Dragon Tail Sword towards Rumbler but realized his sword couldn’t penetrate Rumbler’s tough exterior.

“Stop it that tickles!” Rumbler said giggling slightly.

Rumbler then grabbed Kent by the neck and threw him at Alison and Jordan.

“We need Van’s help.” Jordan said as he pushed Kent off of him and Alison.

“I’ll contact him.” replied Kent as he pulled out his cell phone and contacted Van.

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As Van went in search of his power, his cell phone began to ring. He answered it and on the other end was Kent.

“Where are you?” asked Kent loudly. “We need you here in the plaza. Queen Amasa’s sent one of her newest creations and we can’t hold it off my longer.”

“I can’t come. Orpheus told me that I need to find my power so that I could morph.” Van replied before he flipped his phone closed and noticed a green light coming out of the side of a building.

“That must be it!” Van said as he started running for it but was suddenly pushed away by a kick from a Hacker that appeared in front of him.

More Hackers suddenly appeared surrounding Van.

“Like I need this right now.” commented Van as he put his fists up and began fighting the Hackers one by one.

Van flipped open his cell phone and pulled out his Protector Staff which he used to slash through the Hackers finishing them off. The remaining Hackers ran away in fear and disappeared in a flash.

“Glad that’s done with. Now where was I.” said Van as he went over to the light and with his Protector Staff he hit the side of the wall revealing a green sphere.

The green sphere flew into Van’s cell phone finally giving him the power of morph.

“I’d better go help the others!” Van suddenly realized causing him to leave in a rush for the plaza.

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Van arrived at the plaza to see the others lying on the ground in pain.

“What were you doing? Rough housing?” Van asked Rumbler as he came to the plaza. “Gate Code 486! Gate of Earth!”

With that said a green light came out of Van’s cell phone and wrapped around his body. The glowing stopped after a little while and Van was placed in a suit with a white chest and green leggings and arms. His suit resembled that of the other Rangers.

“He finally morphed. Guess that means he found it.” Alison said as she and the others looked at him.

“Griffin Head Launchers!” Van called out for causing two guns to appear in his hands with the head of a griffin at the barrel.

Van fired several shots at Rumbler pushing Rumbler back with every blast.

“Gate of Teleportation!” Van yelled vanishing through a green circle that appeared on the ground. Another green circle appeared a few feet behind Rumbler and out of it came Van firing several blasts from his weapon straight at Rumbler.

“I see you’ve gotten your powers. I’ll be off then. Goodbye for now Rangers.” Rumbler said before vanishing into thin air.

As soon as Rumbler left Van went to the others to see if they were alright.

“What took you so long?” Kent said in anger. “I called you and asked you to come but you took forever.”

“I found the power that could make me morph but before I could get it I was attacked by some Hackers. I had to finish them off before I could do anything else.” explained Van to Kent.

“Stop! Alright. You should’ve been here when I asked you to come. But you didn’t.” with that said Kent left the plaza leaving the other Rangers as well.

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“Why haven’t you destroyed the Power Rangers yet?!” Queen Amasa asked becoming more and more enraged at Rumbler.

“I was about to finish them off but then the green guy came and ruined everything for me. I promise you I’ll finish them off the next time I see them.” Rumbler said frightened at the sight of the enraged queen.

“He’s done a better job than all those others monster. I mean he’s still here!” Steelvix added with some surprise in his voice.

Rumbler left in a flash of bright lights.

“If he doesn’t defeat those Power Rangers then all of you had better watch out!” Queen Amasa said roaring at everyone in the room.

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Rumbler appeared once again but this time he was at the park. Within minutes of his appearance the Rangers came fully morphed.

“Dragon Tail Sword!” Kent exclaimed pulling out his Dragon Tail Sword from behind him which he used to strike Rumbler with but it was again no use.

“I got you!” Rumbler said in a joking voice as he grabbed Kent by the arms.

“Griffin Head Launchers!” Van exclaimed as he came from behind firing rounds of blasts at Rumbler until his grip on Kent was loosened.

“Did I ask for your help?” Kent said facing directly at Van.

“Guys would you cut it out we’ve got to take care of this right now.” Jordan said stepping between Van and Kent.

“Rangers.” said the voice of Orpheus inside the Rangers’ heads. “Combine your weapons together to get the extra firepower you need.”

“You heard the man lets put them together!” Alison said.

Van placed the tops of the Griffin Head Launchers together while Jordan placed his Unicorn Winged Bow on top of the two guns. On the wings of the bow, Alison attached the Phoenix Claw Daggers and Kent placed the Dragon Tail Sword on top of the Unicorn Winged Bow and Griffin Head Launchers.

“Gate Revolver! Ready!” said the four Rangers in unison with Alison and Van holding the front end and Jordan and Kent holding up the back. “Launch!” the four said together.

A large sphere of light was fired out of the Gate Revolver and directed at Rumbler. Rumbler was hit by the sphere of light and destroyed into several giant pieces.

“You think you’re done with him that easily?” Pyra said as she appeared next to the remains of Rumbler. “Well think again.” she as she threw down the steel card into the remains resurrecting a large Rumbler.

“Now I’m even more big and bad!” Rumbler said looking down at the tiny Rangers.

“We’re gonna need the big ones for this one.” Kent said looking up to see the Dragon of the Flame, Unicorn of the Wave, and Phoenix of the Wind arriving by air.

Suddenly everyone heard another roar and saw a griffin flying through the sky and landing on the ground to run towards Rumbler.

“Lets go!” Jordan said as everyone jumped onto the head of their animal.

All four animals began attacking Rumbler but Rumbler knocked down everyone of them easily with his giant fists.

“Come Griffin of the Rumble lets show them what we got!” Van said before the Griffin of the Rumble roared out loud.

The Griffin of the Rumble charged forth at Rumbler and grabbed him by the arms with its claws and shot straight up into the air. Once the Griffin of the Rumble was high enough it let go of Rumbler letting him plummet all the way down to the ground where the other animals attacked him.

“Its still not enough.” Kent realized. “What should we do Orpheus?”

“Combine the animals into one and then you’ll be able to stop Rumbler.” said the voice of Orpheus.

The four animals came together and charged with the Dragon of the Flame and Phoenix of the Wind flying overhead of the Griffin of the Rumble and the Unicorn of the Wave.

Four color coordinated circles appeared in front of the animals and enlarged before the animal flew through it. Once the animals had gone through it the four animals their exterior was mechanical and individually colored.

The Dragon of the Flame flew up into the sky and its stomach moved in on itself. The Griffin of the Rumble split into two separate pieces and each part was attached to one of the Dragon’s legs. The Unicorn of the Wave split into two pieces as well and attached to the arms of the Dragon’s with the hands coming out of the mouth and each wing twirling around the hand. The Phoenix of the Wind came from behind and placed its claws on the waist. The head of the Phoenix of the Wind attached with the Dragon of the Flame and twisted half way revealing a new face with the four Rangers in it. Kent was in the middle, Van was below him, Jordan was on the right and Alison was on the left. The entire Megazord was hit by a bolt of lightning giving it maneuverability.

“Gate Master Megazord! Ready!” said the four Rangers together in unison.

“You think combining your pets into one robot will scare me?” Rumbler said before he charged at the newly formed Megazord.

The Megazord jumped up into the air avoiding the oncoming Rumbler. The Gate Master Megazord came back down and slashed Rumbler with the wings wrapped around its hands. The wings cut through the tough rocky exterior on Rumbler.

“Its been fun Rumbler but this is where we part ways.” Kent said as the Megazord placed its hands together aligning the wings.

The Megazord opened its fists and let out a ball of energy that was followed by points of light coming from the wings. Rumbler was hit and destroyed once and for all.

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“Again! Why must this always happen to me!” Queen Amasa said to herself as she cried and let out bolts of lighting at Shadowvox, Steelvix and Pyra.

<>

Later that day at the temple Kent came up to Van and said, “Hey Van I’m sorry for getting all mad at you back at the plaza. I was just upset that we were losing.”

“Hey its no problem man.” Van replied.

“You forgive me?” asked Kent.

“Of course.” Van said.

Time Ranger
11-07-2004, 06:33 PM
This is a really good fic. Fire Ranger you got talent. Van is my favorite charcter. Queen Amasa sure is mean to her allies. This episode was really good. I hope to see more. Good Luck. Peace God Bless

Magic Force
11-07-2004, 06:33 PM
This is my first time readng you fanfic, but I really like it.

Please keep posting more episodes, I WANT more!!!

No really. It is a great story.

Now off to read the other episodes.

*runs off*

^V^

Dynomutt Megaship
11-07-2004, 06:37 PM
You seem unable to distinguish between telling a story in prose format, or script format, and it comes off as something you'd tell to some pre-school student, the dialouge is well placed in some areas, but overall, is utterly usless and something that could come out of DIC's Sailor Moon dubs, the story is fairly tame, straightforward, and unappealing.

"Gate Guardians" has been used about a billion times, and what kind of episode title is that? Did you come from the Sheryl Saban school of writing?

Magic Force
11-07-2004, 06:38 PM
That's rude, Dynomutt. That wasn't constructive criticsm. It was just one big insult.

Oddly, I haven't seen a fanfic of yours... ever.

^V^

ModrnEerie
11-07-2004, 06:39 PM
You seem unable to distnguish between telling a story in prowse format, or script format, and it comes off as something you'd tell to some pre-school student, the dialouge is well placed in some areas, but overall, is utterly usless and something that could come out of DIC's Sailor Moon dubs, the story is fairly tame, straightforward, and unappealing.
*ahem*

It's "prose".

Dynomutt Megaship
11-07-2004, 06:40 PM
*ahem*

It's "prose".


It was a typo.

ModrnEerie
11-07-2004, 06:40 PM
It was a typo.
Sure sure...I'll "believe" you. ;)

Fire ranger
11-07-2004, 06:42 PM
You seem unable to distinguish between telling a story in prose format, or script format, and it comes off as something you'd tell to some pre-school student, the dialouge is well placed in some areas, but overall, is utterly usless and something that could come out of DIC's Sailor Moon dubs, the story is fairly tame, straightforward, and unappealing.

"Gate Guardians" has been used about a billion times, and what kind of episode title is that? Did you come from the Sheryl Saban school of writing?
I couldn't think of a better name for the episode. And if you don't like my story then don't read it.

Time Ranger
11-07-2004, 06:43 PM
You seem unable to distinguish between telling a story in prose format, or script format, and it comes off as something you'd tell to some pre-school student, the dialouge is well placed in some areas, but overall, is utterly usless and something that could come out of DIC's Sailor Moon dubs, the story is fairly tame, straightforward, and unappealing.

"Gate Guardians" has been used about a billion times, and what kind of episode title is that? Did you come from the Sheryl Saban school of writing?


Do you have a Fan Fic. I don't see one. So shut you mouth.

Magic Force
11-07-2004, 06:45 PM
I know! That's what I've been asking him.

He makes all these remarks like he's all knowing but in the end, I've never seen a fanfic of his!

I think I smell the real poser.

^V^

Dynomutt Megaship
11-07-2004, 06:46 PM
I couldn't think of a better name for the episode. And if you don't like my story then don't read it.


I won't read any more of your insepid garbage, I just decided to give you some REAL criticism as opposed to the shit you're currently getting from the other "authors", if you can't take real opinions, don't bother coming here and wasting this forum's time.

Dynomutt Megaship
11-07-2004, 06:47 PM
Do you have a Fan Fic. I don't see one. So shut you mouth.


Such harsh words from one who beleives in God :005:

"peace god bless", you sappy excuse for a reviewer.

Magic Force
11-07-2004, 06:48 PM
I won't read any more of your insepid garbage, I just decided to give you some REAL criticism as opposed to the shit you're currently getting from the other "authors", if you can't take real opinions, don't bother coming here and wasting this forum's time.

You are insensitive!

You make the other people WHO HAVE ACTUALLY WRITTEN fanfics sound like we don't know anything.

Again I say... where's your fanfic? I don't think anyone has seen some of your writing- besides the stupid and rude posts you always make.

If you aren't going to say something nice, or give constructive criticsm then don't say anything at all.

For all our sakes.

^V^

ModrnEerie
11-07-2004, 06:53 PM
Will you guys shut the fuck up before I close this thread?

rangermaster
01-09-2005, 05:05 PM
Awesome I love it.