Power Rangers Linkage

[Lunar Wolf Ranger]

This is my very first fan fic. I have written many stories in school. I use to hate writing stories. Now I adore writing stories, so please bare with me here. This part is the very first chapter of Power Ranger Linkage. If you have a better name for it please tell me. :confused: :rolleyes: :o So here it is. :023: :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray

Down in the depths of the Macabre pit in Winsome Town, Texas laid a

ghastly demon by the name of Pyluzur. Sent down there for all eternity by

the past team that consisted of five heroes with extraordinary powers. He

spent the past 6,900 year in this prison in the hallow of earth waiting to

come out when the time was right when someone would be able to read the

message on top of his tomb. He wiggled his gray fingers noticing the three-

inch nails resting upon his three fingers on each of his two hands. He knew

this would be the year he could escape his prison cell and wreck havoc upon

this planet.


As the dawn entered Winsome Town, Texas, Nicolas McIntyre was

opening his eyes catching a catch of the first day of school.

“ Why do I have to go to high school? I want to stay home and watch

S.P.D., Pokemon, and South park all day,” Nick groaned looking down at his

cerulean pajama bottoms and his mom came into his room.

“ Dear, you have to go to school. I’m so sorry you can’t stop school as a

senior in high school, but if you want to graduate and become an

archeologist and try to uncover the Pyramid of Boss and Power or whatever

it’s called the…” he started where she left off.

“Pyramid of Base and Power it’s called mom! It’s also weird how it’s

supposedly located here in Texas. The legend goes like this.” he swallows

and continues in a deeper voice as if talking in a microphone, “Whoever can

uncover its secrets can uncover its great and wonderful power. I sure hope

I do and become a Power Ranger,” Nick jumps off of his bed standing at 5’7

compared to his 5’10 mom.

“Get ready to go to school sweetie and rocket into the shadow,” she

chuckles to herself walking out of his room.

A moment later Nick comes down wearing a filthy indigo shirt and

khaki shorts down pass his knees. He sits down at the kitchen table and

pours himself some Apple Cinnamon Cheerios and munches down on it for a

little while then grabs his car keys and walks out with his gray backpack.

“Bye baby,” his mom calls out after him from outside their one-story

house.

“Mom…” his embarrassingly said while looking down. He clicks on his

metallic blue Saturn Ion and gets into the driver’s seat. As he about to start

up the ignition a girl gets into the car with him wearing a short pink skirt and

a glittery matching pink short sleeve top.

“Sabrina, why do you always sneak up onto me like this. You know

it scares me,” he said while starting up the car.

“Cousin, it’s fun,” she puts her seatbelt on. “So go already!”

They speed off to school and Nick parks in his designated parking

spot of 283 out of 500 students. They both get out as Nick noticing a

metallic red light fly right past him and it make his hair fly to the side as he

watches it fly pass him and fly off. He notices that Sabrina didn’t notice it

but noticed that she was staring off into space in another direction looking

curious with her hair all messed up with like his was.

“Did you see that, Bri?”

“Uh,” she hesitantly answers. “ The pink was beautiful, wasn’t it?”

“You mean the red,” he turns toward her looking angry.

“No pink,” she turns red with frustration. The bell rings that school

has now started on its first day so they leave and go off toward their first

day of school.

Please review since it's my first fan fic. I do accept criticism.

[dairy ranger]

started off well the guy sort of acts like a baby for a senoir. Hope there is more action in the next one

[bjlovel]

this sounds interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes

[Lunar Wolf Ranger]

Thanks for the replies guys. I'm writing my second chapter and I was afraid if it was really long that people would complain about its length. So the next one will be longer and will introduce more people and action.

[ModrnEerie]

Interesting, but grammar and sentance structure needs work.

[Lunar Wolf Ranger]

Sorry guys I took so long. I thought long and hard on this one. Hope you like it! :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :confused: :( :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

Nick and Sabrina walk into their school on their first day and stop dead in their tracks at this enormous school. They are staring at the ceiling that contains pictures from the 1700s all the way to 2015 when a guy wearing a emerald jacket and green pants bumps into Nick. The guy is 6’3 and ironically is late for the first day of school just like Nick and Sabrina are and Nick had to bump by the running back of Winsome High Egyptians. The 6’3 guy with oily brown hair was named Abraham Eve Boorish Jr. but he liked to be called by Boar.
“What it loser,” Boar yelled throwing his hands up in the air while walking away and going to his class.
“Wow, Boar talked to me,” Sabrina yelled out in awe turning to her cousin.
“Wow, I’m so impressed. Let’s get to class. I’m already late.” Nick and Sabrina walked to class and Nick was going through his head what occurred.
Let’s see her. I’m wearing blue, and see a red light. Sabrina is wearing mainly pink and sees a pink light. Our whole school is wearing a mixture of colors, however Boar is wearing all green. I wonder if he saw a green light? Mayb…
“Nick,” Sabrina yells out to him.
“Whatcha want goofy cousin of mine who’s always bugging me and has a thing for bad guys?
“Why don’t you tell us what tan means,” his Pre-Cal teacher Mrs. Precoleus asked him with her awkward glasses sitting on her nose and that annoying pimple on her cheek that won’t ever go away.
Nick was tilting his head glaring at that pimple in wonder on how she won’t cut it off with the Green Samurai Sword or the Tyranno Sword. “Tan is that pimple that won’t go…” she cut him off.
“Detention now Mr. McIntyre,” she yelled out pointing her ruler to the door. He got out of his seat and grabbed his binder, blushing, and walked out of the class to the principal’s office.
“I’ve never been bad. Why now? Why me? What would Tommy Oliver do if he was right now?” While he was walking down the hall, he saw Boar sitting on the bench outside her office, alone. He got over there and sat down next to him.
“May I ask you a question, Boar,” he turned to him in curiosity.
“Like what,” he was looking down at the ground deep in though.
“This morning, did you see a light go right passed you? Was it red or pi..” he cut him off.
“Green.”
Nick gasped. “I saw a red light, and my cousin saw a pink light.”
“What’s that supposed to mean,” Boar asked in wonder, as he looked eye-to-eye with Nick now.
“I think I have an idea, but it’s off the wall,” he smiled at his idea.
“Like what? Are we the next Power Rangers or something,” Boar said in disbelief.
Nick could not believe what he just heard. Boar, the most popular kid at school still knows about Power Rangers. “Yes,” he said quietly.
“What are we waiting for then? Let’s ditch school, grab your cousin who likes me, who I look as another fan of mine, and try to find where our other rangers are,” Boar said in excitement.
“Alright.” Nick and Boar stood up and grabbed their things and walked down the steps which were right next to them, carefully not to make a sound. Nick stopped dead in his tracks.
“What? Did you leave anything,” Boar said in curiosity.
“Yea, my cousin. She also saw the light. Did that just sound like I was high for a second,” he turned around and walked back up the stairs. As they were walking, they both had to be careful not be seen so they wouldn’t be caught. They couldn’t been seen together.
“We’re here, at Bri’s class. I’ll go in saying ‘appointment’.”
“Ok,” Boar whispered back.” Boar stood by the door as Nick walked into the classroom standing tall and brave just like Leo would do when he went into battle.
He turned towards the teacher who was writing something on the marker board and she turned around in wonder of who he was.
“May I help you young man,” she said.
“I’m here to pick up Ms. Sabrina McIntyre for a doctor’s appointment,” he announced a little to loud. He started to blush.
“Oh,” she looked down in shame. “You’re in the wrong classroom, Sir.” The class broke out into laughter.
“That is just wrong,” Boar said as he was watching the scene through the window door. Nick walked out of the class in beet red and glancing down at the floor in embarrassment.
“Shall I try all classes then Boar,” Nick said facing him.
“No, I have a better idea,” he said smiling.
---In a random classroom---
“Is Sabrina McIntyre here? No. Thank you.” “Is Sabrina McIntyre here? No. Thank you.” “Is Sabrina McIntyre here? No. Thank you.” “Is Sabrina McIntyre here? Oh. Really? You’re her?” He started blushing. “You have a doctor’s appointment.”
“No I don’t,” she explained.
“Just go with it,” he whispered to her. “Remember?”
“Oh yea, thank you,” she took his arm with her’s. I’m leaving now. Bye,” they walked out the door and all three ran out of the school in excitement.
“I guess we didn’t need Ferris Beuller after all, did we,” Sabrina screamed over the engine of the car as they raced down the highway.
As they were speeding down Highway 39, they had to stop at a red light they came across. Right when they stopped, another car pulled up next to them. A boy and a girl occupied the gilded Camera.
The boy was driving with his gleaming, blue, Oakley on that was framing his oval face. His crimson hair was pulled back into a ponytail and it showed off his goatee. He was facing to his right, leaning over, and giving a smile to Sabrina that she blushed back and smiled and waved back approvingly. The boy had on a leather jacket with a scarlet W attached to the right side of his jacket that was his initial of his name of William. William James Wan was his name. He may have looked touch and brutal, but deep inside, he was a kind and gentle soul who wouldn’t even hurt a fly unless someone else has attempted murder onto it. The passenger to his right was a beauty, but also can be a little bit on the wild side.
Rosette Violet Vogue is a wild girl who would wear a prom dress while rock climbing. She never was considered a girlly-girl, but she would do some girlly-like stuff. She was on the cheerleading squad. She made it since she was a gymnast since age three and a figure skater since age five. She had a terrible childhood. When she was four, her mother and father had a divorce and she lived with her father since then. Before the divorce, all considered her a girlly-girl, although the divorce changed that and she took up boy activities afterwards. Her father dated sleazy women and Rosette hated them. Later, he married a woman named Tiffany Lilia Jamilioa, who was a porno actress and Rosette thought of her as a whore. In school, she met William, and they bonded nicely. They became inseparable, only as friends. Rosette looked up to him as a brother she never had. They were only 7 ½ months apart so she was younger and she loved it. She sat comfily in the passenger seat wearing her strapless, golden, sparkly, prom dress that she wore even though she and Will didn’t go to the prom.
“Did you two just leave the Prom,” Boar giggled from the backseat of Nick’s Ion.
“No,” Will yelled out.
“Don’t tell them hun. They don’t need to know,” Rosette put her right hand on his right arm, comforting him, making sure he didn’t blurt out something personal.
“We both saw a light of various colors, dudes and dudette.”
All three of them dropped their jaws. They woke up from their trances when they heard honking from behind them. Nick drove off of the road and Will followed him in his Camero. All five of them got out of their cars and stood and looked at the other group getting a good view of each other. Will walked over to the three and said, “What’s it supposed to mean then?”
“I honestly don’t know,” Nick replied.
All five of them stood there when they all heard five distinct sounds coming from above them. They looked above and all saw the colors: red, blue, green, yellow, and pink floating down and each color dissolving into its designated possessor. Nick possessed red, even though her wore blue at the time. Boar acquired green. Will gets blue. Rosette obtained yellow. Pink was assigned to Sabrina. When each color was fully inside its owner, a morpher liquefied onto the users opposite dominant hand. The Linking Morpher was on the left hands on: Will, Boar, and Sabrina. The right hands carried the morpher for: Nick and Rosette.
“This can not be happening to me. I mean to us,” Rosette said in disbelief.
“You bet your ass. This is awesome! I am a superhero. We are superheroes,” Boar said while holding up his left hand in the air as the light shined on his morpher.
“What does this thing do, anyways,” Will said while grasping his morpher with his right hand and studying it carefully.
“Ask Nicholas over there. He is a Power Ranger fan. We are now Power Rangers if I’m correct,” Bri stated while pointing over to Nick who was running around like a dog and yelling out ‘I am a Power Ranger!’ ‘Go, Go, Power Rangers!’ ‘Shift into Turbo (does the 301 different sequences and he does them all perfectly). Will walks over to him and pats him on the shoulder. Nick turns around in fright.
“Woo! You scared me their, Blue Ranger, dude! What can I do for you,” Nick said while placing his hands on his hips and trying to look like a true Red Ranger.
“What do these do anyways, fellow Rager,” Will said sarcasticly.
“First, it’s called ‘Ranger.’ Next,” as he points to his morpher. “These are called morphers. We say a particular phrase and we become Power Rangers,” Nick finished his lecture and rolled his eyes at this newcomer. Will walked off at being basically made fun of.
As the new rangers were socializing with each other, Nick had an uncanny idea. “Why don’t we, just thinking, put our hands into a circle and yell out ‘Power Rangers,” he finished with curious looks from the others.
“It’s something to do,” replied Rosette while twirling her lengthy, gorgeous, brunette hair with her right pointer finger.
The others went into a circle: Nick, Boar, Sabina, Will, and Rosette and each placed their hands in with the morphers on them and yelled out “Power Rangers” and when they said “Ranger” then raised then their hands up into the air and leaped up and unknowingly got zapped by a stranger and was transported to unknown dwelling. They each found themselved lying down on the ground in a well lit up room with torches alongside the walls. As they study the walls, the walls had five weird symbols going down the walls. The symbols were colored as followed going down: pink, yellow, blue, green, and finally red. In the far end of the room stood a frightening man in a black cloak. He then spoke in horrifying voice.
“Hello, Nicholas, William, Abraham, Rosette, and Sabrina. You five have been chosen to become the next Power Rangers. You will become the linking chain of the Power Rangers Linkage,” he raised he hands as he finished and lightning shot out of his hands as he finished.
“I think we just found the real Zordon of Eltar, guys,” Nick spoke and gulped at what he just heard himself say.”

[bjlovel]

interesting. just check your spelling and make sure the paragraphs are spaced out other then that it seems really good

[Nightcrawler]

Break up your paragraphs, check your spelling and grammer. Also try to cut back on the naration about their past. Let THEM tell their pasts to each other. Its better to learn about a character from their own mouths and actions. Otherwise this is interesting, I want to see where it goes.

[ModrnEerie]

Break up your paragraphs, check your spelling and grammer. Also try to cut back on the naration about their past. Let THEM tell their pasts to each other. Its better to learn about a character from their own mouths and actions. Otherwise this is interesting, I want to see where it goes.
Check your spelling OF grammar.

[Nightcrawler]

Check your spelling OF grammar.
good point. :023: