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Samurai Ranger
08-22-2004, 12:16 AM
Alright Phaeton, Splush has had his try. Now here's mine. By the way, I will try my best to make this story fit into the timeline, without messing anything up. I can't create more plotholes than Saban or Disney though!

Titanus Ranger Saga
Episode 25.1:
"Control"

Jason strolled through the uncrowded Juice Bar. Somehow, most of the time it just seemed to be spread out. But that wasn't what was his mind right now. He, and he alone, solely obtained Titanus...okay so maybe Tommy helped just a little bit. The point was...he was feeling pretty good about himself. Jason walked up to the front counter, and sat down, as Ernie came up to him.

"'ey Jason, need anything today?" Ernie asked.

"Could I get six drinks?" Jason asked, but as soon as he said it Ernie nodded. "How much?"

"It's on the house." Ernie responded.

"Thanks Ern!" Jason replied, as Ernie walked off.

He sat down near a table where his partners sat. "I think this is a record." Jason leaned back a little bit in his chair. "Rita has waited three days, and still hasn't sent anything to attack."

"Yeah, I bet'cha she wished she could come up with something decent." Tommy said grinning.

"Argh, I wish I could come up with something decent!" Rita yelled from her moon castle. She shook her Cresent Moon Staff. "Finster, I need you to come up with something!"

A little blue cloaked creature walked out. He had pale skin, and a snout of some sort. The easiest thing to say though, was that he was a midget in general. "Mistress, I've come up with something brilliant! What if we took control of their zords?"

"Good thinking Finster! What's the plan?" Rita asked excitedly.

"We lure out their zords, and you can use your Staff as a conductor to implant the negative control from yourself, to the zords, therefore taking control of them." Finster responded.

"So basicly, I just shoot a beam from my staff at them?" Rita questioned.

"Well um...correct." Finster replied.

"Ahahahahaha! Lets see what the rangers will do now!" Rita yelled.

"Mistress, I am sending down Reflecto. He is a remote controled robot, so he'll be almost impervious to the zord attacks. I have it perfectly planned out!" Finster announced.

"Good job bigbrain!" Rita congradgulated. "Just do it already!"

"Yes, of course..." Finster apologized. "Go, Reflecto!"

Beep, beep, beep!

The communicators of the six rangers had begun to beep. Jason, Trini, Billy, Kimberley, Zack, and Tommy walked away from the public and near the entrance. Jason put his communicator up to his mouth, and pressed the answered button. "What's up Zordon?"

"Rangers, I need you to get to the Rock Quarry immediately! One of Rita's monsters are attacking!" Zordon said.

"Done." responded Jason.

They pushed opened the doors, and walked behind the Juice Bar. "Lets do it guys!"

"It's Morphin' Time!" they yelled simaltaneously.

"Dragonzord!"
"Mastrodon!"
"Pteradactyl!"
"Triceratops!"
"Sabertooth Tiger!"
"Tyrannosaurus!"

In a flash, all six of them appeared in a rock quarry, where there were abunch of well...rocks. A monster stood there, as if waiting for them to show up. "Wow, it took you this long just to get here?"

"Are all of Rita's monsters this cocky?" Zack asked from under his helmet.

"Who knows." Kimberley stated. "One things for sure: all of them are ugly."

"Well I'm sure tired of them!" Trini yelled. "Power Daggers!"

She threw one of her daggers at Reflecto, but suddenly, the dagger turned around flying straight at her. Trini felt a hand grasp onto her shoulder, as a chestplate of some sort appeared on her body. The dagger hit the chestplate, as Trini felt a small jolt. Trini turned her head, to see the Green Ranger's hand on her shoulder. Tommy had given her his Dragon Shield.

"Lets show this guy some Gung Ho." Tommy stated.

"You got it." Trini replied giving him the thumbs up.

Both of them backflipped till they were both on either side of Relecto. They bent down, and kicked each of Reflecto's knees so he hit the ground. Reflecto started making mechanical sounds, as he tried to get up, though he only suceeded in flailing.

"Lets bring 'em together!" Jason yelled holding his Power Sword infront of him.

"Power Axe!" Zack yelled, throwing his Power Axe into the air. Miraculously it seemed to float up there, with purple light surrounding it.

"Power Bow!" Kimberley yelled, as she threw hers into the air. Hers connecetd on top of Zack's Power Axe, and was surrounded by a light pink aura.

Trini placed her hand on Tommy's shoulder, as the Dragon Shield appeared back on him. Her other dagger appeared back into her hand. "Power Daggers!"

Her daggers connected with Kimberley's Power Bow, creating small cannons from the bottom of the daggers.

"Power Lances!" Billy's lances connected beside Trini's Power Daggers, and below Kimberley's Power Bow.

"Power Sword!" Jason yelled, as he jumped into the air, placing his sword ontop of the Power Bow in a perfect formationed. He grasped the axe, and landed on the ground.

Tommy ran towards the other rangers, and placed his hand on Kimberley's shoulder. Kimberley placed her hand on Billy's shoulder, as Trini placed her hand on Zack's shoulder. Billy and Zack placed their hands on either side of Jason's shoulder, as Jason held the Power Blaster up at the flailing Reflecto, and fired. "Buh Bye!"

"Ah!" yelled Reflecto, as he blew up, and the rangers turned around in all their glory.

"Make my monster grow!" yelled Rita, throwing her Crescent Staff down at the Earth.

The earth created waves, inflicted with negative energy. They hit Reflecto's remaints, as he reappeared as a giant. The reflections of light all over his body blinded the rangers.

"We need Dinozord Power, now!" yelled Jason raising his palm into the air.

"Dragonzord, come forth!" yelled Tommy, as he played the flute of his Dragon Dagger.

"Dinozords Combine!" Jason shouted, as he and the others simaltanously pressed their Power Crystals into the small slots.

"Megazord Initiation Complete." a male computerized voice stated, as the Pteradactyl finished by creating itself as a chestplate.

The Megazord with it's own Power Sword, foolishly attacked Reflecto. The slash had easily flown off him, and hit the Dragonzord. The Dragonzord hit the ground, and was unable to get back up.

"Get up Dragonzord!" Tommy yelled after playing another tune.

The Dragonzord got up, and also attacked, but that just again reflected and knocked down the Megazord. Jason had remembered, they still had one more chance. He spoke into his com system in his helmet. "Alpha, send Titanus!"

"He's coming Jason!" Alpha stated.

And in only a few moments, Titanus had come. Jason jumped out of the Megazord cockpit and onto Titanus. Titanus arsenal had appeared from his chest. "Tommy, lets finish him!"

"Mistress, send the beam now!" Finster commanded.

"Ha!" yelled Rita, sending a red bolt towards Earth.

Suddenly, Baboon sat on Finster, taking the remote away from him. "Ooo, what does this do?"

Squatt grabbed the remote, and bit it. "It doesn't taste very good."

Back on Earth, the red beam had come towards the zords, but do to Squatt's actions, Reflecto raised his arm, so the red surge went through his body, and than flew through it, and hit Jason and Titanus. Both went down in a red boom, but strangely enough Reflecto had begun to glow crimson and silver.

"Dragonzord, finish him!" Tommy yelled, again playing the tune.

Dragonzord's tail spun, and hit Reflecto across the chest, as the glass all over him shattered. Reflecto fell to the ground and exploded, as the zords knocked the rangers out of their cockpit, and retreated to their hiding places.

"Aw man..." Tommy stated as he walked towards the four of them. "Are you guys okay?"

"We're fine." Billy nodded. "Where's Jason?"

They walked towards Titanus, and looked at Jason demorphed. "Woah buddy or you okay?"

"Yeah, yeah I'm fine." Jason said shaking his head. He wiped some ash off him. "Atleast we defeated that guy, he was pretty strong."

"C'mon, lets get back to the juice bar." responded Zack, as all of them demorphed.

As all six of them teleported away from the scene, a figure rose from the flaming ashes of Reflecto. Blasters were mounted on his chestplate, as white and gold patterns ran along his body. A helmet similiar to the Red Ranger's looked upon the world he had appeared in. Worst of all...the face of Rita Repulsa appeared on his visor. A new threat had been born.

Splush
08-22-2004, 08:22 AM
I think Samuri deserves it simply because he put effort into his...mine was a no effort rush job. :) Sorry Phateon I have two fics in the works.

y3k
08-22-2004, 08:25 AM
hmm.....all this compatition makes me want to enter....

Samurai Ranger
08-22-2004, 09:52 AM
I wonder why everyone keeps on calling me Samuri Ranger, oh well. Thanks Splush, and y2ktm2, I'd advise you to join. I need more competition, 'cause if I don't have any, I can't write a better plot!

Samurai Ranger
08-22-2004, 11:12 AM
Titanus Ranger Saga
Episode 25.2:
"Control" Pt. 2

"Aye Aye Aye, I have a headache." Rita moaned pressing her index and middle finger against her forehead. "Oh god, I'm beginning to sound like that droid."

"I-I'm sorry mistress." Finster piped up. "But it was really Squat-"

"Shut up pipsqueak!" yelled Rita. "Go invent something useful!"

"Y-Yes mistress." Finster nodded, and walked to his little Lab.

"Alpha Five!" boomed Zordon's voice throughout the command center.

"Yes Zordon?" Alpha asked.

"Please contact the rangers. I sense a disturbance!" Zordon boomed once again.

"Yes Zordon." Alpha said again, this time in a stating manor.

Meanwhile in the Juice Bar, Zack, and Tommy were laughing at Bulk and Skull's bad attempts to try to get a date. Jason was working out, trying to sweat off the ash from their previous battle, and Billy was uh...reading a text book. Trini and Kimberley were drinking smoothies, as they saw Bulk and Skull come towards them.

"Oh no, not them." Kimberley sighed.

Both of the girls slowly got up from their table, and go towards Zack and Tommy.

"Hey babes!" Skull said miraculously popping up behind Trini and Kimberley.

"What do you want?" Trini asked in a dissapointed voice.

"Will you go on a date with us?" Bulk asked, too appearing behind the ladies.

Trini and Kimberley looked at eachother and seemed to think for a second. After, both of them simaltanous said,"No".

Bulk and Skull did the same notion, but than fell to their knees, and cuffed their hands together. They actually begged: "Please. Please. PLEASE!"

Trini and Kimberley patted Bulk and Skull's heads like they were dogs. "Don't worry boys, you'll find someone for you someday."

Trini and Kimberley sat down near Zack and Tommy, laughing to themselves. Only a few seconds, later a rather wide female figure walked behind Bulk and Skull, and tapped them on the shoulder. They looked up to see who it was.

"Ernie, what are you doing in a dress?" Bulk asked.

"I'm not Ernie." the female looking like Ernie, with long hair said. "I'm his twin sister: Ernelda!"

Bulk and Skull stared at eachother for a second, and than got up and ran with their hands flailing in the air. "AH!"

The table of four laughed, but soon they heard the familiar beeping sound. Tommy looked at his communicator. The red light was beeping, meaning it was Alpha, and not Zordon. "What's up Alpha?"

"Rangers, Zordon says it's urgent that you get to the Command Center now. He thinks something isn't right." Alpha's voice answered.

Tommy nodded. "Got it." He notioned for Jason and Billy to come over.

"Alpha needs us at the Command Center." Tommy stated.

"Alright, lets go." Jason responded, as all six of them walked near the entrance.

They looked around, to make sure no one was there. They pressed a button on the side of their communicator, and held it. They soon became a rainbow of multicolored lights, as they teleported into the Command Center. Soon enough, they materialized, and looked up at Zordon.

"Rangers, have any of you been staying in Ranger Mode, for over an hour now?" Zordon asked.

They all shook their heads.

"Someone has been giving off a familiar ranger signature. One most like Jason's, but somehow it's different." Zordon stated.

"Zordon, I've been at the Juice Bar with the others sweating my guts out!" Jason protested.

"Don't worry Jason, I don't think it's you." Zordon responded. "It just seems a little paranormal that there's another ranger energy signature around here."

"Considering who we are, 'paranormal' really doesn't mean anything knew to us." Billy interrupted.

Zordon chuckled to himself. That was Billy with the wits. "I need all of you to go back to the Rock Quarry, to check it out."

"Got it. Ready guys?" Jason asked, holding his belt buckle infront of him. After he got a nod from the other five Jason looked straight on. "It's Morphin' Time!"

"Dragonzord!"
"Mastrodon!"
"Pteradactyl!"
"Triceratops!"
"Sabertooth Tiger!"
"Tyrannosaurus!"

The rangers walked around the Rock Quarry, but didn't seem to find anything. After a while Jason noticed something. "Hey guys, where's Tommy?"

The others too looked around, but Tommy was no where in sight.

"Guys, help!" yelled Tommy's voice.

The rangers turned, and ran to a small cave. Tommy was being pressed down by a silver figure. He yelled in a raspy voice,"Titanus, stop them!"

Titanus came and stopped infront of the cave.

"Titanus, what are you doing?" yelled Jason.

"We need to move him, and the only way is by calling the zords!" Billy yelled.

"Right, we need Dinozord Power, NOW!" yelled Jason raising his palm into the air.

The Dinozords arose from their hiding places, and combined into the Megazord. The rangers sat in the cockpit, as the Megazord looked down at Titanus...only Titanus wasn't there. The rangers jumped from their cockpit, and ran to the small cave. Only a demorphed Tommy was there, with his powercoin glowing a faint green.

"Tommy!" yelled Kimberley demorphing.

"We need to get him to the Command Center!" Trini said.

All of them teleported to the Command Center, as Alpha ran towards Tommy flailing his hands in the air. "Ai yi yi yi! What happend to Tommy?"

"Some guy hurt Tommy!" Kimberley yelled.

"Not some guy." Zack stated. "A Power Ranger. I caught a glimpse of him."

"Impossible!" Zordon yelled. "The warriors of the Animarium, and the warriors of Power have been gone for thousands of years!"

"The weird thing was..."Jason had begun. "Was that he had control over Titanus!"

"Does not compute." Alpha started. "Does not compute!"

After Alpha, completely shut down, as it stood still, smoke had began to rise from his back.

"Woah, is Alpha okay?" Trini asked.

"He will be, it's just a minor overload." Zordon stated. "According to Tommy's faint glow though...some of Tommy's energy has been drained. Now he's weaker than before!"

"What?" Billy asked, it even confused him.

"Tommy's Power Coin was fully negative. Whenever he came to our side, half of it become positive. Whoever this was though, has taken all the negative energy in Tommy's Power Coin. The negative and positive energies in Tommy's Power Coin is what made him stronger. Now, by the way his coin is reacting, it's beginning to rechage itself with positive energy!" Zordon explained.

The alarms in the Command Center began ringing again. The demorphed Kimberley, wiped some tears away from her eyes. "So he'll be okay right?"

"Yes." Zordon stated. "You rangers must go, whoever this was is back."

Kimerbeley nodded, and raised her morpher infront of her. "Back to Action!"

The five rangers appeared in the middle of Angel Grove, as a white ranger stood before them. Where their suits were white, his was was gold. Where their suits was their own color, his was white.

"Who are you?" Jason asked, recognizing the other ranger's helmet as his own, just in a different color with a black spike.

"I am the Titanus Ranger." Titanus Ranger responded. "The slave of Rita."

"Another evil ranger?" Jason questioned. "Don't you know good always triumphs?"

"No." Titanus Ranger stated.

And with those last words, the battle was about to begin.

Samurai Ranger
08-22-2004, 06:08 PM
I was thinking, instead of just PHAETON judging this, we can post all the entries by name in the polls section in a month or so, and the fans could vote.

y3k
08-22-2004, 08:37 PM
I wonder why everyone keeps on calling me Samuri Ranger, oh well. Thanks Splush, and y2ktm2, I'd advise you to join. I need more competition, 'cause if I don't have any, I can't write a better plot!

you want competition? Get ready to wet your pants boy! :D j/k

Samurai Ranger
08-23-2004, 03:24 PM
Heh heh, good. Chapter 3 will be up around tonight if I can.

PHAETON
08-23-2004, 08:32 PM
Great Job on the Installment Samurai, I'm all for it your idea for posting isup in the polls section. Good job and can't wait to see more.

PHAETON
12-30-2004, 05:17 PM
come on ol Samurai, ytmk2 was able to finish this fic up on time, I wanna see how this ends.

y3k
12-30-2004, 05:24 PM
its y2ktm2!

Magic Force
12-30-2004, 05:26 PM
What fanfic challenge is this?

~MF~

y3k
12-30-2004, 05:32 PM
What fanfic challenge is this?

~MF~

It's over now. It was back in September. Samurai here just has a habit of never finishing fics ;)

Magic Force
12-30-2004, 05:34 PM
Oh. Well this entry was very good. I liked it a lot.

When will there be another one? What was it about? The contests I mean.

~MF~

y3k
12-30-2004, 05:41 PM
I dunno if there will be any other contests. This is the only one that got off the ground, and it crashed and burned half way though. There was no announcement of who won, and half of them never finished.

There where (I belive) two other challenges, and both of those never even got off the ground.

This was about a Titanus ranger, as the stories read

Splush
12-30-2004, 07:11 PM
I remember this. My heart wasn't in it (I only did 3 pages) so I dropped out... Mabye we should do this challange again guys. I kinda miss writing for fun.