wildranger
08-14-2004, 08:53 PM
when earth is in danger from the emperior mondo . Can five teens with new zords and powers stop emperior mondo from taking over earth. so get ready for power ranger delta force.
coming soon
Kali_WolfChilde
08-14-2004, 10:55 PM
kk. will have a character up in about 5 minutes, maybe a little more.
Kali_WolfChilde
08-14-2004, 11:05 PM
Name: Paige Howard
RD: Pink Ranger
Age: 21
Hair: ear-length, brown, streaked with blonde stripes, messy
Height: 5' 8"
Eyes: brown
Skin: Tanned
Weight: 140 lbs.
Weapons: Delta Force Daggers, Delta Force Blaster
Powers: Air, Flight
Zord: smaller, futurustic version of a Boeing 747. looks more like a jet, and only seats Paige. called the Delta Air Force Jet.
Blaster: on right hip
Daggers: in belt buckle
dairy ranger
08-15-2004, 04:17 AM
Name: Cory Hammond.
RD: Blue Ranger
Age: 19
looks sorta like Jason from MMPR
Height: 6' 0
Weapons: Delta Blaster,Delta Fist.
Zord: looks like TimeFlyer 1. Delta Flyer
Zord Weapon: Delta Missile.
wildranger
08-15-2004, 10:08 AM
villians
emperior mondo: is leader of the machine empire
queen machina: the husband of emperior mondo
prince sprocket: the son of emperior mondo and queen machina
clank & orbis: henchmen of the machine empire
cogs: are foot soldiers of the machine empire
gasket & archmina will what it takes to destory mondo an machina so the can have earth forthem selfs.
wildranger
08-15-2004, 12:20 PM
alies
Zordon: never was destoyed must guide the new rangers to stop the machine empire from taking over earth
Alpha 5: zordon's asstent
Tommy :former ranger turned mentor the rangers
Kat :former ranger turned mentor the rangers
Tanya:former ranger turned mentor the rangers
Adam :former ranger turned mentor the rangers
Jason :former ranger turned mentor the rangers
rocky: killed by the machine empire
Ok, try using the grammer checker on Word. It dousn't always work right, but it will help you.
ModrnEerie
08-15-2004, 12:57 PM
Ok, try using the grammer checker on Word. It dousn't always work right, but it will help you.
Grammar. ;)
Also, work on the story. It makes zero sense. And for Christ's sakes use your own characters! The whole point of writing a fanfic is to express your own imagination. Everything should be yours. It's not your fanfic if you have other people write characters for you...please people, please. No casting calls. Please. I'm begging you...
wildranger
08-15-2004, 01:05 PM
Grammar. ;)
Also, work on the story. It makes zero sense. And for Christ's sakes use your own characters! The whole point of writing a fanfic is to express your own imagination. Everything should be yours. It's not your fanfic if you have other people write characters for you...please people, please. No casting calls. Please. I'm begging you...
i will do that next time but thanks for your feedback i really appractate it
wildranger
08-15-2004, 01:26 PM
beth parker
color yellow
hight 5'8
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fun ,sart loyal to her friends
jake smith
color green
hight 5'10
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best friends with matt
lauren harris
color sliver
hight 5"8
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the first female sixth ranger
wildranger
08-16-2004, 09:27 PM
CHAPTER ONE: "DAY OF THE POWER, PART I."
***
It's a normal day in the city of glenview, with everything moving smoothly, everyone
doing their everyday routines, jobs and whatnot. All the citizens live out their normal lives
in peace, and prosperity. There is not a care in the world that would stop that for them
since everything is going good.
Across the street, Matt, a tall young man, with short, blond hair, and blue eyes. Wearing a
red muscle shirt, and a plad, white and red short, sleved shirt over it. Walks down the side
walk, with his black and red sneakers squeeking a little off the concrete, and his blue jeans
creasing in the wind as he heads down the street.
He just keeps on walking with his hands in his jean pockets, and whisltes away heading
towards this large, brick building. On the front of it it has glenview High School, so now
it's obvious that Matt is a student, but what grade? That is the question.
As he got up to the stairs two guys came out the front door, one a little taller then the
other. The tallest one has long black hair, tied in a ponytail and brown eyes. He is wearing
a white t-shirt, and over that a black vest, along with wearing a pair of black and gray
track pants and white sneakers with black stripes.
The shorter guy's etire is just a blue long sleved shirt and white pants, with gray and blue
sneakers. On the front of his shirt is a tricerratops in gold, and black with red eyes. His
brown messed up hair blow in the wind as he headed down the steps with his larger friend.
Mac suddenly noticed them and stopped and waved to them. "Hey Chris, mike! What's
up?"
"Nothing much." replied the Chris, the taller one.
"You?" asked mike.
"Not much just coming back from lunch."
"Good. We gotta meet leah and Devon at the lunch room." said Chris, stopping then
flowed Matt back up the stairs on his left. mike followed a little behind but nonetheless he
followed them and headed to the door. Mac quickly opened it and both Matt and Chris
walked into the school. mike swiftly grabbed the door before it closed and he too went
quickly inside the school.
***
Deep in the middle of the desert, where no civilization exists, lays the ruins of the untimely
known Command Center/ Power Chamber. Nothing else is there, but the ruins of the
entire building scatterd everywhere around that location.
But deep underground about three hundred feet below ground is the command base, with
the lay out design of the Power Chamber, but having the consoles positioned like the
Command Center. Along with a crystal globe in the far left corner of the room, and in the
front center stands the large dimensional tube, which is clear.
Suddenly this large, blue, floating head glides down to the center of the tube and stares
out into the room. He looks everywhere, wondering where his assistant is? Wondering
why he is late for his duties?
"Alpha." said the head.
"Ayi'yi'yi'yi'yi! Zordon! You're back, how? How could this be?" asked the little, gold, blue
and red robot walking out from this hidden doorway near the far back of the room.
"Alpha, I may have been killed, but you know I am a wizard of course."
"Yes I know Zordon."
"Then you know it is possible for me to be here with you. My soul was never destroyed so
I am able to appear here any time I wish. Which is good." Zordon said in a annoyed voice.
"Yes I know Zordon." replied Alpha walking over to one of the consoles and he began to
tap a few buttons, making the lights flash on the panel.
"And this is the third time I told you Alpha."
"Oh golly, I didn't realize." Alpha said in a quirky tone as he stopped what he was doing
for a second, then he quickly got back to work.
Zordon's mind began to wonder around the world, and he saw everything that was going
on around the planet, making sure he could keep his conscience focused on other tasks.
So he wouldn't have to worry about the world being in danger. He slowly cracked a smile
as he relaxed knowing the world was safe from evil at the moment. But what he didn't
know was this large armada of alien, gothic like, starships head straight for earth.
***
Far away in the solar system, beyond pluto the fleet, of alien, gothic like ships heads closer
to earth moving faster and faster. Making it's way past every planet and moon within the
system making sure that there is no life on them. The only source of life unfortunately is
earth......
And now the closer the armada gets, the sooner the earth is doomed to damnation and to
death, eternal death. Nothing will be left if they arrive without warning, not a single man,
woman or child will make it.
On the bridge of the lead ship, it's dark, gothic, and evil looking, almost like apocalyptic
design in nature. The whole ship was barely lit since darkness was their main theme for
them. Darkness and evilness.
Suddenly the large black, door with an apocalyptic symbol on each panel opened widley,
and filled the room with an enormass amount of tension. Then this tall, cloaked figure
walked in slowly, making all these pions, and his generals bow before him as he passed by
him. Quickly he headed up this stair case all the way up to his gothic, evil looking chair.
He slowly turned around and sat down. His red eyes glared all the way down to his
generals and so he lifted his had and pointed down to one of them.
"Zeldra." said the cloaked being.
"Yes my Master." replied Zeldra, the one general that wears the silver armour and black
suit, along with gold gloves and boots. He looked up and stared up at his master through
the black visor of his helmet.
"Prepare your assualt." said the cloaked figure in a evil tone.
"Yes my Master."
***
Matt, Chris and mike all walked into the lunch room. It was still packed with people, well
in the line up anyways. But swiftly all three of them managed to get out and walk over to
this long table
where these two, very hot girls sat. One on the right side of the table, is tall, with long,
dark brown, shoulder length hair. She's wearing a pink tank top and a pink mini-skirt, with
white and pink sandles. Slowly she casts her hazel eyes up at Mac as he walks over to her
and sits down on the opposite side of the table then her.
"So Devon, what ya doing?" asked Matt.
Nothing. Just sitting, that's all." she replied quickly, giving him a couple quick glances and
a faint smile.
Over to his left sits this other girl, with semi-long yellow and orange hair, tied in a ponytail
of sorts. She just chomps down on her food not even noticing the others, she is just in her
own little world.
"So leah what ya eating?" asked matt trying to reach in for some, but quickly his hand is
swatted out of the way.
"It's chicken dumbass." she replied harshly.
"Sorry....." he said softly.
Then a loud noise, like a buzzer came on and rang through the halls alerting everyone to
go to class, lunch was over. So leah was the first to get up, she had on a hot, yellow
spandex tank-top on. Along with a pair of amry green, track pants, and steel-toed boots.
Quickly she licked her fingers clean and grabbed her skateboard that layed under her chair.
Before leaving she took her lunch tray that had on piece of chicken left on it; mike tried
reaching for it, but he dropped it so fast into the trash, that he had to suffer the loss of it.
"No!...." Sam cried as he watched it fall into the trash.
"Well come on michael let's get out of here, before we are late for class." Devon said
softly as she took his hand, while Sam still stared at the wasted piece of chicken, and
quickly she dragged him off. Matt, Chris and leah followed behind them, with Jo riding her
skateboard out of the lunch room.
***
Now a small fleet of ships hover above the earth, then quickly one by one they each fly
down into the atmosphere and brake through beginning their attack, blasting buildings left
and right, as well as sending down regiments of dreges. Creatures of massive strength and
agility, wearing black and gray amoured suits with bug like head, but with sharp looking
red eyes.
They swiftly spread through the city like a wild fire, destroying everything in their paths,
buildings, cars, people, whatever got in their way was killed or obliterated. Some managed
to recieve just a good beating. But most were unlucky from the outcome of this
predictament.
***
At the Command Center/ Power Chamber ruins deep underground. Zordon quickly
appears in his tube and Alpha swiftly rushes out and runs to one of the consoles closest to
him. He presses a few buttons on a panel and watches on the viewing globe along with
Zordon the monstrosity of what is happening outside.
"Nooooooo!!! Zordon, this isn't happening! Isn't it?!" Alpha asked as he began to freak
out.
"Yes Alpha it is time, for new ranger to stop mondo?"
"Yes, finding new rangers." Alpha shouted in sorrow.
"good luck?" asked Zordon.
"
"Alpha teleport the new rangers to theCommand Center/ Power Chamber
"Huh?" questioned Alpha.
I'll explain later, now teleport them to Command Center/ Power Chamber , hurry Alpha."
he demanded seriously.
"Right away Zordon." Alpha replied . "It is done Zordon ."
Suddenly Alpha looks to see the city being nivaded. Alpha is quickly saddend by this and
he lowers his shiny, golden, disk head.
"Alpha it's time for plan 'a'." Zordon nodded.
"Right.......Zordon......"
***
In the main halls of the high school, Matt, mike, Chris, leah, and Devon race through the
halls as dreges chase them down. Quickly mike and Matt turn to face them, while Chris
gets Devon out of the way, and leah scrapes the tiled floor with her board as she stops
down the hall.
Two come at mikeand Matt, but quickly they block the coming attack and swiftly beat the
heck out of them with kicks and hand techniques. Chris suddenly noticed a couple get
passed them and he took it upon himself to defend Devon.
"You punks want a piece of me. Then bring it on, freaks!" he yelled at them, but the
words didn't make them run, they just stood and looked at each other then ran at Chris.
Swiftly he round-housed the one on the right in the head. Then he spun around and back
kicked the other in the gut knocking the wind out of him. Chris quickly took notice of this
and he upper cutted him in the face. "Alright!"
"Si-yah!" Matt yelled as he spin-kicking a dregs in the face, sending'em to the floor hard,
and in extreme pain and agony.
"Yahhhtttsooo!!!" mike shouts elbowing a dreges out of his misery.
Over at leah, three dart towards her and two leap over her while the third flies straight for
her. Swiftly she kicks up the board and launches it at the dregas head decapatating him,
then leah turns to face the two behind her and she punches them both in the nuts and
quickly elbow them down to the floor face first.
"Whao what the fu--" Devon started to say but she was cut off and all five of them became
glowing coloured light and shot up into the sky adn headed off towards the desert.
***
Soon after they all shot into the the Power Center the new base of operations for Zordon,
Alpha and zordon. . So who will defend the earth now?
"Zordon, what just happened?" asked Mac stepping up towards Zordon's tube.
"The time has come. The Ranger Killer is here."
"Oh shit." mike said staring at the blue floor.
***
To Be Continued...
Next Time on Power RangerS: delta FORCE!- The world has been invaded, all but a team
of five teenages who met Zordon and Alpha . will be come powerr angers, and will they be
able to stop the mondos army? Find out next time on Power RanerS: delta FORCE!
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