Countdown To Destruction 2

[packfan6]

Hi all, this is going to be my 3rd fanfic(MMRR and Forever Pink being my other two). This takes place after Forever Pink is done, so I won't say much till that's completed(1 episode left). What I will say is that it is an all out battle of good vs. evil from the PR Universe. I will be posting a promo for it in a few days, and then a summary of MMRR and FP so people won't have to go back and read them to understand some things that have happened.

A few side notes: I know this has been done a lot lately, but I have had this planned for about a year, and I hope to make it better then the rest. Also this has nothing to do with C2D the novel.

[MingyMingyJongo]

Code name C2D2? Tee hee.

[PHAETON]

I'f you can pull it off

[y3k]

Code name C2D2? Tee hee.

hmmm......might have some trouble with the SW fans on that one :/

Anyway...I think I might tune in for this one....

[packfan6]

Well, I'm a somewhat big Star Wars fan, still have my SW action figures up in my room and all, so hopefully C2D2 won't scare the SW fans off. Since FP is done I'll start posting stuff about it, so here is the teaser/promo.

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Year after year teams of rangers rise and fall *Shows MMPR S1 team, then Space team, then TF, then NS*

Year after year the good guys have come up on top. *Shows Cole destroying Serpentera while the other Red Rangers watch*

But now a team has fallen *Shows the FP team except Tommy, sitting in the main room of the Astro Megaship Mark 2 looking towards the ground. Then small break as the screen fades to blackness*

Villains have teamed up before *Shows the villains from the first episode of in Space, giving a toast at a table*

Never have they teamed up like this *Shows a shot of the villains near the end of the last episode of FP*

Now the rangers must rise again *Shows Ransik fighting Alex morphed*

Every villain they've ever fought is back *Shows MMPR morphed and fighting Dark Spector.

Can the rangers win in the ultimate test *Shows Tommy morphed as the white ranger along side Jason morphed as the gold ranger*

Countdown To Destruction 2 *Shows Lord Zedd laughing*

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Some feedback to that would be nice.

[metallicarmor2009]

FP Ended beautifully... and now this... can NOT wait to see this one...

[y3k]

I just hope you have a non-corny way to bring back the bad guys from C2D1 :P

[packfan6]

I just hope you have a non-corny way to bring back the bad guys from C2D1 :P

That's partially what FP was for. You'll see when I post the summary to MMRR and FP.

[bjlovel]

This seems like it is going to be good. Can't wait to read it. When will you post the first epiosde?

[greenwc]

2 things
first did anyone who read that teaser hear the superman movie theme in your head like when the words are passing on the screen in star wars or even one of the ranger movies
second ...so forever pink is over or no?

[Blue ninja]

Dude this is an awesome fan fic

[packfan6]

Some responces:

Bjlovel-Probably in a couple of days. Ether today or tomorrow I'll be posting the summary of MMRR/FP, so I'd guess Monday.

Greenwc-Yeah, FP is over, I posted the last episode today.

Blue ninja-I'm glad to see this is an awesome fic and I haven't even posted the first episode yet :)

[Red Lighting Ranger]

I really want to read this fanfic. It; sounds great.

[Apollo]

If it's as good as FP i will certainly be reading it.

[Dr. R.K.Z]

If it's as good as FP i will certainly be reading it.

:o

[Apollo]

:o

What!

[packfan6]

Gold Zeo, RKZ just doesn't like my fic(a lot). Also the first episode will be up Monday if I think it's ready. This is a summary of MMRR and FP so people can understand C2D2 better. If you've already read MMRR and FP, I don't think there was anything new I added, so no need to read this. I sorted MMRR by episode and FP by characters because I think it's easyer to understand that way. If you have read MMRR/FP and this, if I left anything out that you think is important, please tell me.

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MMRR

1-After a month of a team-up of Andros, Ashley, Karone and Zhane with the Alien Rangers to fight a clone of Hydro Hog and his army, Andros started questioning how good of a ranger he was and if he was the best. That night he had a dream he was fighting the red Turbo ranger, leading to an announcement of him holding a tournament for all the red rangers.

Later that day, a team of Kelzacks attacked. The Ninja Storm rangers weren't there to fight, so the four space rangers, Tommy, Kat, Eric and Wes defended the city of Blue Bay Harbor. Once the battle was over, they went on a search for the Ninja rangers and Zurgane.

2-The eight rangers destroyed Zurgane's zord, and saved the Ninja Storm rangers. Then Andros offered to Tommy, Wes, Eric, Shane and Hunter to join the tournament. All of them accepted except Tommy, who said he couldn't because Zordon said he can't use his morpher for personal gain.

3-After a weird dream, Tommy decided to also be in the tournament. Andros went to Mirinoi to get Leo and Rocky who accepted. Tommy found TJ, but was unable to find Jason. Wes and Eric found Carter and Cole who also joined in.

4-Wes was able to convince Carter, while Tommy and Andros got Aurico. The rangers were also informed that almost all the rangers would be able to come to KO-35 to watch the tournament. One of them who wasn't able was Trini, who died in a car accident.

5-Alex and the Time Force rangers from the future arrived. Alex made a deal with Wes, if Wes made it farther in the tournament then him, Jen could stay in the past. If Alex made it farther, Jen would return to the future. Eric and Joel get into a fight, and Jason shows up at the last minute.

6-Tommy found out Jason had no money, was divorced, and came to Aquitar for help. Jason also met Maya, his future girl friend. Jason defeated Cole in the first round.

7-A thief stole the belongings of Aisha and Kim. Tommy defeated Rocky.

8-Andros goes on a date with Ashley, while some other rangers try finding the thief. Andros defeated Aurico

9-TJ and Alex, who were matched up for the battle, talked about one of the real reasons Alex was there. That was to find Marissa, who was currently married to Adam. Adam shot Alex with his Zeo Pistol, which Alex deflected to TJ's eye. The rangers went on to the next battle, where Eric defeated Carter.

10-Eric talked to Taylor about his displeasure with being part of the Silver Guardians. Maya also became a victim to the thief. TJ returned, and defeated Alex.

11-The Time Force rangers went out to lunch, and found Bowling and Bell Org. The Time Force rangers won without Alex, who went back to the future, told the rangers Jen can stay in the past and Adam can stay with Marissa. Wes easily defeated Carter in the last match of the first round.

12/13/14/15/16-Shane and Hunter come to KO-35 to take on Jason and Tommy. Hunter and Kim start a relationship, while Jason defeats Shane. While the rangers are gone, more orgs returned from the dead. The Ninja Storm rangers teamed up with the Wild Force rangers but it wasn't enough to win yet.

Tommy, Hunter, and some other rangers were confronted by Lord Zedd, but were able to get away. Hunter got a cheap win on Tommy. Then Hunter also returned to Blue Bay Harbor. The six Ninja Storm rangers and the Wild Force rangers(except Merrick, who was no where to be found) weren't able to win, but once Tommy came to start a secret mission, the rangers were able to win.

The Phantom Ranger was captured by Zedd and Dark Specter. Zedd used the Phantom's Power Ruby to go into the rangers body and control him. He used this to spy on the other rangers.

17-TJ informed Andros of what happened with Alex, and they tried finding the thief again and finding out why monsters were returning. They decided the Shadow World would be the best place to go for clues, so they sent Ryan to find all he could. Justin was accused of being the thief, and then ran away. Andros defeated TJ in the second round.

18-Wes devised a plan to win, while all of Time Force and Taylor had a pool party. It went a little sour once Eric got mad, that eventually strengthened Taylor and Eric's relationship. Eric defeated Wes in the second round.

19-Because of the battle, Wes was near death. Hunter arrived and tried to be much friendlier to Jason and his friends. Part way through Jason and Hunter's battle, Tommy returned and gave Jason his Dragon Power Coin, which he retrieved from Tom in the past. He went their with Alex, and saved Wes life like he did to Mr. Collins. Jason defeated Hunter in the semifinal.

20-Ryan acted very strange when Andros tried communicating with him. Zordon somehow returned back to life. Zordon called a meeting, and discussed his return along with the return of Zedd and the orgs. It was revealed the Queen Bansheera could be casting a spell within the Shadow World, which would take back the event of one day(C2D). Zordon and Zedd returned before the others because they were stronger, but that didn't explain the orgs or Ryan's behavior.

During Andros and Eric's battle, Mike came running into battle morphed as the Magna Defender. Eric and Andros stopped him, leaving Mike with no memory of what happened. Eric defeated Andros in the semifinal.

21-Kim revealed herself to have a power coin given to her from Ninjor. Bulk and Skull were recruited to help judge the final match. Andros contemplated retiring as a ranger, while Zordon put him responsible for stopping Queen Bansheera in the Shadow World. Alex said good bye to Jen, while Hunter introduced The Ninja Storm rangers to the other rangers.

22-Taylor asked Eric to join him in the Air Force. Maya asked Jason is he would come to Mirinoi to live with her, both Eric and Jason said yes. Andros announced his retirement as a ranger and proposed to Ashley who accepted. Andros passed the responsibility of taking care of Queen Bansheera to Karone.

23/24/25-The battle between Jason and Eric started, but was quickly interrupted by all the orgs, except Master Org and the ones already destroyed in MMRR attacked. They were led by Zen-Aku, who back stabbed Merrick and forced him to join together again. Then Zen-Aku brought the other orgs to life once more. The orgs were destroyed, and Zen-Aku was destroyed by the Red Ranger Ultrazord. The destruction of Zen-Aku also was the death to Merrick.

26-Jason won the battle against Eric, along with the Dragonzord defeating the Q-Rex. Jason was awarded a 5 button Battlizer, which he gave back to Andros because it was given to Andros from the people of KO-35

27-Tommy was given the DinoThunder morphers from Andros(but not the Dino Gems). Karone recruited Kendrix and Dana for the mission against Queen Bansheera. Cole ask Wes for help about his crush on Alyssa, who ended up rejecting him.

28-Most of the rangers returned to their homes on earth. Jason joined Maya on Mirinoi. Rocky and Leo returned to Mirinoi also and started fighting crime. Aurico became president/ruler of Aquitar. Tommy remained on KO-35 more to help Andros. TJ became a race car driver. Carter returned to his life as a fire fighter. Wes returned to the Silver Guardians with Jen. Eric joined Taylor at the Air Force. Cole continued to help animals in Turtle Cove. Shane and Hunter became a teacher's at the wind and thunder Ninja Academies.

FP

Karone-Karone was the leader of the team, but as time went by, she couldn't handle the pressure, and the spell from Queen Bansheera was slowly turning her evil. She nearly killed Delphine because the aliens of Aquitar were created from the people of KO-35, so they were considered slaves. She also kicked Kendrix out for being gay.

Eventually she ran away, but later got help from Tommy and Ecliptor to end the mission. Ecliptor gave Karone a position which stopped her from becoming evil, but it also had side effects.

Ashley/Andros-Ashley was kidnapped by Lord Zedd, and taken to Dark Specter's layer. Andros led a team of rangers who saved her and destroyed Dark Specter.

Zhane-Zhane was originally chosen to be part of Karone's mission, but left her to help Andros. Andros and Zhane were called away after they saved Ashley.

Jason/Maya-Jason and Maya also helped Andros on his mission to save Ashley

Kim/Jen-Kim and Jen played small roles on the mission. They helped the team get part of the key they needed to get inside the Shadow World

Kendrix-Kendrix started the mission by making friends with Alyssa. Kendrix was quickly kicked off the team once Karone found out she was gay. Kendrix helped Andros save Ashley. She remained with Maya on Mirinoi until Tommy and the rest of the rangers came to help.

On Mirinoi, a war was taken place between the natives and the people of Terra Venture. Terra Venture was taking land away from the natives. Kendrix was on the side of the natives with Maya, while the rest of the Lost Galaxy team was on the side of Terra Venture. The rangers ended the war when they came to help.

Alyssa-Alyssa was depressed before and during most of the mission. The only happiness she found was from talking to Kendrix. Alyssa also helped to save Ashley, but then came back to the mission. After much thinking, she found out she wasn't gay.

Cassie/Phantom Ranger/Lord Zedd-In search of the pink Turbo morpher, Cassie was tricked by Zedd, and transformed into a pink Psycho ranger. When the rangers came to the rescue, Zedd wasn't able to control the Phantom Ranger, and it was revealed what Zedd was doing.

The Phantom Ranger also helped save Ashley along with Cassie. Lord Zedd also helped them because he wanted Specter over thrown. Cassie and the Phantom Ranger looked forward to a bright future together after the mission.

Delphine-Delphine was treated like a slave, hidden from the other rangers during the early stages of the mission. Aurico arrived, and took Delphine back home. Delphine remained there until Karone ran away, and ordered an attack on Aquitar. The remaining rangers led by Tommy stopped the attackers, and brought temporary peace to Aquitar.

Tommy/Dana/Kat-During the early stages of the mission, Tommy was ill. While Kat was getting the third and final part of the key to the Shadow World, Dana tricked Tommy into sex. Dana was kicked out of the mission, while Tommy and Kat patched their relationship back together. Once Karone ran away, Tommy took charge of the mission, and decided to bring everyone who left back.

Nadira/Marah/Donny-These three helped during many parts of the mission, Nadira the purple Time Force ranger, Marah the purple Ninja Storm ranger, and Don the Ninja Turtle came up when the rangers needed them most to help.

The End-Once the ranger team was together, they went to Egypt. They found Zedd, 3 Psycho Pink rangers, 1 Psycho White ranger and Ryan. Ivan Ooze also came back from the dead. When Ivan was killed years ago, everything that happened since he came from the dead no longer actually happened.

The Psycho Rangers and Ivan were destroyed, a spell cast on Ryan wore off, and Zedd ran away. The rangers opened up the Shadow World to stop Queen Bansheera from completing the spell, but everything went wrong. All the evil from the Shadow World was unleashed. From the beginning of Mighty Morphin to the end of Lightspeed, the evil was free. Merrick was also in the Shadow World from the evil he'd done, but he was also freed.

[greenwc]

usually i read fics and say yeah that could have happened in the real show and i like the fic because of that with MMRR i liked it cause it was something i wanted to see but personally i think tommy would have won but o well
in FP i think it was all down hill after the lesbo stuff but this is again my opinon and also the with merrick being in the shadow world deal...which i don't remeber him dying or whatever but i don't think it would have happened on the show...mostly cause his evil side being zenaku would have went to the shadow world not him but whatever it's not my story

[Storm Warrior2]

I can't wait



















For it to end.

[Dr. R.K.Z]

And THIS was supposed to be "too good to Mistie?"

Ooohhhhhh Impy, get a move on...

[packfan6]

Some responses:

Greenwc-I think you'll like this just as much or more then MMRR. Merrick died at the end of MMRR, and some people wanted me to bring him back, so I did.

Storm Warrior-*Rolls eyes*

RKZ-It just won't be as fun, their will be too many battle scenes. Also you were saying their wasn't enough constructive critisism, how about you read the first episode when I post it in an hour, and let me see it.

[Dr. R.K.Z]

RKZ-It just won't be as fun, their will be too many battle scenes. Also you were saying their wasn't enough constructive critisism, how about you read the first episode when I post it in an hour, and let me see it.

I will, you've got be equally as irritated you just get "This is GREATZ, PLEEZ CONTINUE"

ENCOURAGE your readers to help out, you'll get better that way

[packfan6]

Yeah, those get a little annoying, but it is better then having no one say anything. Aaron was pretty good at giving critism before he stopped reading, and so did metallicarmor a little. There was this guy from PRN who told me what I need work on, so I have improved some(I think).

This is the first episode of C2D2. I'm really not sure how much people will like the episode. Like RKZ said, I need more then just "great/excellent/good... job, can't wait for the next one", I need to know how to improve. Also I am open to suggestions on how to effect the plot. Anything as big as how you want the ending to go or as small as I want Bulk to get mentioned.

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Tommy gazed at the thousands of monsters that were in front of him, just waiting to take over the world. Some of the other rangers were already fighting, while others were still in shock from seeing all these monsters alive.

Katherine was beside him, not knowing what to do. In front of him was Jen and Kim, both fighting some Quantrons. Above him was Cassie on her Galaxy Glider, probably retreating. Tommy didn't know if he was crazy, or just delusional from being in the hot sun, but he drew Saba and charged at the monsters.

First he stabbed a Tenga in the chest, and went on to find a huge group of cogs. Before he got to them, he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned around and saw Kat.

"Tommy, we can't do this alone." said Kat. "We have to get out of here."

"I guess your right." said Tommy. "Go get the others, we'll make a plan." Kat left Tommy's side to retrieve as many rangers as she could. Tommy went back to fighting the cogs. Tommy jumped in the air, and kicked a cog in the chest. Once he landed, he punched another cog in the chest twice.

Tommy knew the mission was a failure so their was no point in remaining the white ranger. "Zeo Ranger 5, Red!" yelled Tommy. Tommy felt new strength, but he still was weaker then he could ever remember. Tommy drew his sword, and continued attacking Cogs. He couldn't do anything fancy, just hitting them and defending himself.

"Tommy, come on!" yelled Dana. Tommy turned around and saw Kim, Kat, Jen, Dana, Nadira, Zhane and Don together defending themselves against some putties. Tommy jogged to them. "We need to get to the Astro Megaship and fly away."

"Okay, how?" asked Tommy.

"Use the Defender Wheel." said Kat. "That should work." Tommy called for it, and it came. Tommy slowly got inside, and went towards the Astro Megaship. All of the villains got out of his way, not wanting to return to the Shadow World so quickly. When Tommy arrived to the side of the ship, he got out of the Defender Wheel.

A door for him quickly opened, and Tommy went inside while pushing a Batling out of the way. Tommy walked as fast as he could to the control room, where he found Delphine, Cassie, Kendrix, Alyssa, Marah, Ryan, Merrick and Alpha 7.

"We need to fly over there to the others." said Tommy, pointing in the general direction of the others. "Their right at the end of this path I made." Then Tommy fell down on the ground, not having the energy to stand any longer. Cassie started the ship up, and got it in the air. By the time it started flying towards the rangers, every monster disappeared.

The ship landed in front of the other rangers. The door opened again, and each got in. All the rangers went to the main room of the ship except Tommy who was still on the ground. Kat and Alpha also stayed to help care for Tommy. The rangers were no longer morphed, with their heads held down, watching the sweat go down their body's.

"Well, now what?" asked Dana.

"I don't know." replied Cassie.

Alyssa looked up at the group, mainly Dana. She needed some reason, some answer to why they were in this problem. "You know, maybe if you hadn't slept with Tommy, we wouldn't be in this mess."

"Oh, so you blame this on me while this little gay girl ran away and we had to waist all that time to bring her back." snapped Dana.

This made Kendrix get to her feet. "Okay, next time your world is in danger and you need my help, I'll say no!" yelled Kendrix.

"Just everyone, shut up!" yelled Jen. As she got up, Kendrix sat back down. "Pointing fingers isn't going to help anything. We've unleashed all this evil. We were all too confident. Now it doesn't matter who's fault it is, but who's going to do something about it."

Then the screen in the main room turned on, and showed Alex sitting down. "Hello rangers."

"Alex, you have a lot of explaining to do. You send all this backup for us to lose, are you trying to get revenge for me dumping you because if you are-!" yelled Jen before getting cut off.

"Calm down." said Alex. "I'm not getting revenge or anything. This was the only way. If you had any more rangers to help they just would have gotten in the way and if you had any less someone might have been killed." Alex was very calm in his voice.

"I have been preparing for this fight against evil ever since we came back to the present time." continued Alex. "I needed every minute I could get. I'm sorry I set you up to fail Jen, but like I said, it was the only way. Now I need you to set a course for the Command Center for a meeting."

"Wait." said Cassie as she looked up. "The Command Center was destroyed years ago."

"Not the third Command Center." said Alex. "It's located where the old ones were. I built it."

"Course set for the Command Center." said DECA. Then Alex was off the screen. The rangers continued to wait in silence. While they waited they re hydrating themselves and cooled off in the air condition.

At the third Command Center, almost all the rangers who were alive stood around, talking. Original rangers like Jason and Zach from the newest rangers like Shane and Dustin were looking around, wondering why they were there.

This Command Center was much bigger then the others. Instead of one giant tube their were two, and the computers and viewing globe were much bigger. Their was also much more room in the middle, and room inbetween the computer's and outside walls.

The Astro Megaship mark 2 landed outside of the Command Center. From the outside, the Command Center looked almost the same but much bigger. Their was also a building attached to it. Tommy was back on his feet, and after being told what happened, he went outside of the ship like the rest of the rangers. Once all of them were outside, they were teleported inside the Command Center.

"What's going on?" asked Cole as he made his way to Alyssa.

"We blew it." said Alyssa. "We're going to need your help."

Standing by the viewing globe, while hiding in the shadows was Alex. Alex knew for weeks this day would come. The day he arrived at the tournament on KO-35 was the day he started preparing for this.

Once the tournament was over, Alex informed Zordon about the evil that would be unleashed. From that point they built this command center, and received help to recreate powers and zords. Alex had tried constantly to find what would happen, but the information was hidden from him.

"Let's go." whispered Alex.

Then by the viewing globe, Alex walked closer to the center of the Command Center where everyone could see him. Billy, Cam, Alpha 5 and 6 followed him and then went right to the computers and started pushing buttons.

"You're probably wondering why your all here." said Alex, taking off his shades and looking at the group of rangers who were all looking back at him. "You are here because the entire galaxy is in danger, and we need your help. The spell Queen Bansheera cast to take back the day of Zordon's death has succeeded. Because of this, some of the top villain leaders in the world's history are alive once again. The Shadow World has also been opened, meaning all the monsters who were in it are now released."

"Because Alex is from the future and knew about this, we began to get ready" said Zordon, as he appeared in one of the big tubes while Dimitria came into the other. "We asked for help from Cam and Billy who helped rebuild the Command Center along with Alpha 5 and 6. The four of them also helped recreate old powers and zords. Andros and Zhane also came to help."

"Many others also agreed to help us." added Zordon. Then a panel opened from the ground which was in between the computers and wall, and some of the rangers greatest allies have come up. Captain Mitchell, Angela Fairweather, Commander Stantron, Circuit, Mr. Collins, Princess Shayla, Kite, Sensei, and Cyber Cam all came up from the panel. "They have also helped with the building of this and preparing to defend the world." All of them gladly agreed to help, including Kite who came back from the dead knowing the world was in danger.

"Rangers, we can not force you to reignite your past as rangers, but the fate of the world depends on you." said Zordon. "We have also assembled a team of hero's who at some point helped in the fight against evil and will help defend the world again."

Then another panel on the opposite side of the Command Center opened, and a team of hero's arose. The hero's included the Masked Rider, Ninjor, the four other Alien Rangers, Auric, Trey, the Blue Senturion, the three other Ninja Turtles, Kapri, Toxica and Jindrax.

"The Silver Guardians and Ninja's from the three ninja academy's have also offered their assistance." said Dimitria. "I am happy to say that Merrick is back from the Shadow World, but Karone could not help but give into the evil, so she is not with us."

"We are not completely ready to fight back, for we still are not sure if everything in the zords work right, and we know that we have not created powers for the Ninja Storm rangers." added Dimitria.

"For those of you who don't have your morphers, here they are." said Alex as a table came up from another panel in the ground with morphers on it. Most of the Mighty Morphin, Turbo, Galaxy, Lightspeed and Wild Force rangers went to retrieve their powers. Despite the fact that Tommy all ready had two morphers with him, he walked over to Jason to get his green power coin.

"Hey Jason." said Tommy. "Do you still have my green power coin?" His voice was still off from him being so tired.

"No, Alex has it." replied Jason. "I told you if you needed any help to just give me a call."

"Don't you think your a little out of shape for that anyway." joked Tommy. "Alex said you wouldn't have been able to help anyway. I'm going to see what Alex did with that coin."

"Okay, see you out on the battle field." said Jason.

"Yeah." replied Tommy. Tommy walked over to the table that had the morphers, but it was now empty. "Hey Alex, Jason said you had the green power coin."

"Yes." said Alex. "You remember Tom, right?" Tommy nodded his head with a little confusion, wondering why he wouldn't. Then Alex pushed something on his morpher, and Tom teleported into the room. "He will use the green powers, while you can use your Zeo powers."

"Hey Tom, how's it going?" asked Tommy.

"All right. I'm ready to help you guys out again." replied Tom.

"Good, I know you'll do great." said Tommy. Then Tom teleported back to the building attached to the Command Center to help the Silver Guardians and Ninjas train.

Andros was standing alone, ready to fight like he had been the last few days. He thought destroying Dark Spector would be a nice way to end to his ranger carrier, but he was wrong. By this time he accepted the fact that Karone was evil again. He also accepted that Alex really didn't know what would happen from this point on. Now Andros was as poised as ever to get his sister back.

Kim was standing, looking at the viewing globe. She was still pretty fatigued from battle, but she was definitely ready to fight the next one. Hunter made his way through the other rangers, and went behind her.

"Finally I get to get away from my students." said Hunter.

"Is that all you can think about?" asked Kim. "Unless we can stop all the evil all of us have ever faced, there will be no students for you to get away from because we'll all be dead."

"The Abyss of Evil is still closed, so really it's not all the evil all of us have faced." commented Hunter.

"Hunter." said Kim. "I have probably faced over one hundred monsters, and it's been almost impossible to destroy ten at once, how will we take ten times that?"

"I don't know." said Hunter defensively.

"Exactly." replied Kim, and she walked away.

Various rangers from every season were also talking until Alex started yelling to quiet them down. Once everyone was silent, he began to speak. "We don't know if we will win or lose this battle." said Alex. "I would assume we'd win because I still exist, but there are ways for us to lose, yet I remain. Because of our inability to complete the Ninja rangers powers, and not being finished constructing all the zords, it's been decided we won't defend the world even if there is an attack until we have a plan and we're ready."

This started a few people talking, and yelling with the fact that if the world is attacked, they can't defend. "This has been a group decision, and we feel it's best. You've been lucky how few people have died while you've been rangers. In the future it's quiet common, and we must be prepared for it to happen here too" yelled Alex, and then he became silent again.

Cole thought about the fact that the zords are being reconstructed. You can't build the Wild Zords, they were living animals. If they were alive again, then why can't he feel the Red Lion's spirit? Cole knew these questions had to be answered, so he went up to Princess Shayla.

"Are the Wild Zords back?" asked Cole.

"No." replied Princess Shayla. "They'd only be back if the world is in danger from orgs." Then their was an ire silence.

"You feel it too?" asked Cole.

"Yes, their back." said Princess Shayla.

"Wild Access." yelled Cole. Many of the other rangers looked at him. Cole ran out of the Command Center, and teleported to the Animaria. He looked and found his Red Lion, Gorilla, and Falcon, along with the other Wild Zords back.

During this time, Kendrix gathered the five other Galaxy rangers to a corner of the Command Center. Most of the rangers were giving Kendrix weird looks.

"Look." she said. "I know I don't really want to work with all of you. I fell like you guys betrayed me, and you feel like I betrayed you. If we want to save the world, we're going to have to forget about it. I'm willing to work together if you guys are."

"Fine." said Leo.

"Okay." said Maya.

Eric was also alone, which he was used to by now. He had his Quantum Defender in one hand, and kept hitting the bottom of it with the other. Then Taylor walked up to him.

"Ready to save the world again?" asked Taylor.

"I was born ready." said Eric, without making eye contact.

"Are you all right?" asked Taylor.

"Ever wonder what it would be like if the rangers lost?" asked Eric.

"Then we'd all be dead." replied Taylor.

"I'm not ready to die." said Eric. "Those mutents don't deserve to live, and I don't care what anyone said or what's been done, but the greatest red ranger is ready to take them all down.

"Just don't take them all down without the greatest yellow ranger." said Taylor, as she put her hand on Eric's face, and forced him to make eye contact. Then she kissed him.

"Don't worry, I won't." said Eric.

[Dr. R.K.Z]

Right, you wanted constructive criticism, you've got it.

1. I know what you're trying to do with the opening lines, establish a sense of adventure and danger already, but it's been described poorly, the reader wants to feel THREATENED as well as the Rangers, they want to know how serious this scene is, saying "Tommy looked at all the monsters, waiting to take over the Earth" makes me think there reading In-Flight travel magazines at an airport.

2. "Tommy WALKED as fast as he could to the control room?" This kind of mission warrants running.

3. It's "WASTE our time", not "Waist our time"

4. Cole' discovering the Wild Zords are back should be described better like "Cole followed the familiar, feriocious voices to thier source, there, he found the Wild Zords, Cole smiled as he felt the nobility and strength each time the proud creatures roared"

5. Eric is a lesser prick than he was in Time Force now, you're making him sound like he has'nt learned any lessons.

6. Watch your spelling.

[packfan6]

Thank you RKZ.

Also even though I said that stuff about just saying great job, it is still helpful to know how many people are reading it to know if I should continue or not.

[bjlovel]

This is great. Starting of on a good note, but like what rkz said. Eric wasn't that big of a prick now then as he was in Time Force but RKZ remember now that most of the monster are unleashed it could of changed Eric along with some of the other rangers too.

[Dr. R.K.Z]

This is great. Starting of on a good note, but like what rkz said. Eric wasn't that big of a prick now then as he was in Time Force but RKZ remember now that most of the monster are unleashed it could of changed Eric along with some of the other rangers too.


If that is the case, it must fall to Packfan6 to tell the reader that in another chapter, preferibly not as early though, because if you tell the readers the reasons Eric is a prick again in Chapter Two, there's a chance they will avoid reading about his character further

[Apollo]

Eric is my favourate character, he has changed during TF and from what we saw of hime in WF, but he can still be a prick at times.

[packfan6]

I'm gonna be gone for about a week, so it will be a while till episode 2.

[Kali_WolfChilde]

no prob, i can wait. keep up the good work. i liked the WF and NS Rangers the best out of the ones u mentioned, but i didn't really care for Ryan (because of his suit and morpher) and the Alien Rangers (just on principle).

[greenwc]

no prob, i can wait. keep up the good work. i liked the WF and NS Rangers the best out of the ones u mentioned, but i didn't really care for Ryan (because of his suit and morpher) and the Alien Rangers (just on principle).


are you kidding?
the titanium ranger suit is the coolest ranger suit since the orginal green ranger....and by that i mean tommy

[comicstar100]

Pack I have to give you props for the first ch. It was a good start. I will give a few notes to make sure of in a huge team up fic like this. You can't give equal spotlight to all these characters so don't try. Be sure to pick a few main characters giving equal spotlight to them with supporting characters showing up threw the story, so far you have done a good job of that keep it up. If you are going to have Eric be so angry you have to give a reason for it. Since he is a control freak I would say something like he feels so powerless because for the first time in his life he realizes that he is just one man. Thats all I have, I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next. :D

[packfan6]

First off episode 2 will be up soon.

2nd some responses:

Kali_WolfChilde, glad to see you liked it.

Greenwc, the Titanium suit was cool, but not the coolest since Tommy as green.

Comic, I know I can't and won't give them equil spotlight, but I still plan on trying to give them all some spotlight.

To RKZ's 6 things.

1. Thank you, I'll try working on that.
2. Yeah it would warrent running, but Tommy is so tired that he passes out shortly after, so if he ran he would've passed out earlier.
3/6. Yeah, I know I need to work on spellin
4. What you said would've been better, but I want to keep this short enough for people to read.

To the whole Eric thing, I didn't mean to take him that much out of character, so I thought it was resonable what I said. The hardest thing any of the rangers have done in their lifes is be a ranger. Now all of them have to do it again, and this time it will be harder will the villains working together. I'd be pissed too. With Eric stairing into blankness and hit his weapon was my way of showing he's ready to take it all on. Also to show that he knows how big this is and show the readers how big this it. I also wanted to show that he's still a little ticked that he didn't win the tournament, and that when he said he wouldn't forget to let Taylor help was to show that he wasn't going to be stupid and fight alone like he did for most of TF.

[Freindly Spider-Man]

4. What you said would've been better, but I want to keep this short enough for people to read.

Don't allow your own quality to suffer for the sake of a few retards, this forum is trying to ESCAPE that kind of restriction.

[packfan6]

Don't allow your own quality to suffer for the sake of a few retards, this forum is trying to ESCAPE that kind of restriction.

Yeah, but my episodes are already a lot longer then most fics, and I really don't think his way of putting it is that much better. Discription is good, but too much isn't always good. If I read a fic that was full of sentences like how he put it, I wouldn't be able to get past the first episode.

[ranger fan 9000]

hey pack,
you chapter lengths are good don't shorten them for retards like Spider Man said. Keep writing like you do and i'll still read the stiry.

[packfan6]

Here's the 2nd episode. All negative or positive comments are helpful, so please tell me what you think.

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Lord Zedd looked down at Egypt where he saw the Astro Megaship leaving. The best time to attack would be now, but there would be no point in that. He knew he could take over the world at any point of time. Zedd took a step back while in his old palace on the moon, a place where he lived much longer then he would've hoped. He thought the world would be easy to take, and then he'd leave to the next planet, but instead he was forced out by the mighty Machine Empire.

Zedd turned around and looked at a table. It had many chairs around it, with drinks and various items of food on it. Zedd had teleported every villain who escaped from the Shadow World to a separate room in his palace.

Zedd took a deep breath, raised his staff, and teleported some of the greatest villains ever to live into the room he was in.

"How dare you leave us locked up with all those monsters?" screamed Astronema with her staff aimed at Zedd's chest.

"Dad, are you all right?" asked Trakeena. "Help my father up, he is the future ruler of the galaxy."

"No, the Machine Empire will rule everything before Scorpius can take another planet!" yelled King Mondo.

"Silence!" yelled Zedd. "Please, take a seat, have a drink. Vile, help me get Scorpius to his seat." Astronema lowered her staff, and took her seat like many of the other villains. Zedd and Vile helped Scorpius to his specially made seat. Then Zedd and Master Vile took two seats for themselves. Zedd and Rita were at the head of the table. Sitting next to Rita was Master Vile, then King Mondo and Queen Machina, Divatox, Astronema, Scorpius, Trakeena, and Queen Bansheera.

Still standing was Vypra. "You think I'll just sit here and get used like before." said Vypra. "Well you're wrong! I'm not going to be betrayed again."

"Vypra. Not all of us are friends. Most of us hate each other's guts, but right now we must get past that." said Zedd. "You may sit down now and listen and feast, or you may be the one and only one in the Shadow World for all of eternity."

"Fine." pouted Vypra, as she sat down at the table.

"Right now the rangers are flying to California. I would assume for help, but we'll be able to stop all of them if we work together." said Zedd.

"You'll just take over once the rangers are gone." snarled Divatox.

"We can negotiate who gets what now if you'd like." said Zedd.

"What happened to Dark Specter?" asked King Mondo.

"If he was here he'd take over and want the world to himself!" yelled Zedd as he came to his feet. After realizing everyone was staring at him, he sat back down. "Do you really want to be second in command in a small area, or have complete control over a large one?" Zedd took another pause, then decided to tell them where Dark Specter really was. "I sent him to the only place where he can't do a thing to us, the Lost Galaxy."

"Zedd, remember our deal, we get Mariner Bay." said Queen Bansheera.

"Yes." replied Lord Zedd.

"Why would I want to help you?" questioned Scorpius. "I don't care about earth."

"Then what do you want in exchange for helping us destroy the rangers?" asked Zedd.

"The Quasar Sabers." replied Scorpius.

"Okay, then if you help us, you can have the Quasar Sabers." said Zedd.

"But I can get those now. I don't need your help." replied Scorpius. Then Zedd slowly raised his staff and aimed it at Scorpius.

"This needs to be a team effort. Notice how the rangers always do that and win?" asked Zedd.

"Okay, we'll help you." said Trakeena for her father.

"Just knowing the rangers are destroyed is enough for me." said Zedd. "Then you three can fight for earth." Referring to the Machine Empire, Divatox and Astronema.

-

In the year 3004, Ransik looked through the containers at the Cyro Prison. All of his mutants were there, and it was almost time to go. Ransik was counting the monsters to make sure each one was there. Once he was done, a Time Force officer walked in.

"How's it going Ransik?" asked the officer.

"Pretty good." replied Ransik

"I heard now is the time that Alex will really start changing the past." said the official.

"Yes, it is." said Ransik.

"Wow, that is a lot of mutants." said the official, looking at the container. "What are those things with the horns, I don't recall catching any of those."

"I'm not sure." said Ransik. "I must be going." Ransik locked the container of mutants and orgs. Ransik had went through the old Time Force files, and found where the orgs were located. Then he captured each one of them. A chance like this only comes once, and Ransik took it.

"What are you doing?" asked the officer.

"Nothing." replied Ransik. Then he left with the container in hand.

"Where are you going with that? It's not allowed to leave this room!" yelled the officer. Then Ransik set it down lightly, and turned around. Then took a few steps so he was facing the officer. The two looked each other in the eyes, Ransik with strength, the officer with fear. Then Ransik kicked the officer in the chest, making him stumble backwards until he caught himself on the desk where the container was on.

The Time Force officer tried getting out his Chrono Blaster, but Ransik was a step ahead, and punched the officer in the face, smacking him to the ground. Ransik knelled down, and stole the Chrono Blaster. Ransik then set it to stun, and fired at the officer. Ransik put the Blaster back in the officer's holster, walked back to the container to pick it up, and then walked away.

Ransik got into his Time Flier and started flying away. Ransik now had determination in his eyes. If he can control the past, he can control the future. He was able to hide the possible outcome of him returning to the past from Alex for this long, and he wasn't going to end his plan now.

"Hi Daddy." said Nadira. A screen showed up with her at the Command Center. "Have you decided if your going to help us in the past, or does Time Force need you too much in the future."

"I'm going to the past." replied Ransik with a smile.

"Wait!" yelled Alex, as he first glanced at the screen and then looked at it more deeply. "Ransik, what are you doing with the case of mutants!"

"Lord Zedd and the rest of the baddies need them." replied Ransik.

"Dad, what are you doing?" asked Nadira.

"Sorry honey." said Ransik, and then he turned off the screen. Ransik continued to fly towards the Time Shadow so he could get to the past. Soon after, a few more fighter ships came flying at Ransik. "Oh please." said Ransik. "They couldn't do this all those years ago, they think they can do it now?"

Ransik put the ship up to max speed, and within minutes arrived at the time machine. Ransik got out of Time Flier, and started running with the case of the mutants and orgs to the Time Ship. Ransik successfully got in, and started it up. A few ships arrived and fired at the Time Ship, but it was to late. Ransik was off to the past.

Ransik arrived on the moon in 2004, and then took all of his mutants and orgs and ran them through machines on the ship. This made each one return to normal size. Ransik found the three mutorgs, and asked for his powers in exchange for him bringing them back to life, they agreed, and Ransik was part mutant again.

When Ransik was a little kid, names such as Lord Zedd, Astronema and Queen Bansheera had been known as some of the greatest evil masterminds ever, and now he would be able to work along side them. Ransik raised both of his hands, and then teleported all of his mutants and orgs to the room with all the other monsters and robots of the past, while teleporting himself to the room with the leaders.

"Who are you." demanded Zedd.

"My name is Ransik." he said. "I'm from the future. I attacked earth in 2001, but was unsuccessful. I am here to destroy the Power Rangers. I have brought the top criminals from the future, including every org who attacked earth in 2002 except for Master Org."

"And why did you bring the orgs?" signed Divatox.

"Yes. The whole point of having them attack at Andros tournament was to ether destroy the rangers, or make it so the fight between monsters and orgs was over." said Zedd.

"Their leader is dead, I am their new leader." said Ransik.

"Well, it is an honor to have you here." said Zedd. "Please have a seat." Ransik sat himself at the table, with a case of serum near by. "The next order of business. Astronema, Ecliptor is on KO-35. I don't know how evil he is, but we'll need him."

"Okay." said Astronema, and then she vanished.

"And Queen Bansheera, we need the Abyss of Evil opened so our good friend Lothor can help us." said Zedd. Then she also vanished.

Astronema found herself on the streets of KO-35. She decided to not cover herself to hide from getting attention. As she walked to the home she found Ecliptor at before, she was attacked by a man. Astronema fired a shot from her staff, killing him. It felt so natural to be evil and kill once again.

Astronema found the home of Ecliptor, and opened the door.

"My queen has returned. How may I serve you?" said Ecliptor.

"Lord Zedd has united most of the villains in the galaxy." said Astronema. "He's obviously going to back stab us once the rangers are gone, so we need to stay a step ahead. We'll go along with his plans for now, but when the time comes we'll strike."

"Yes my mistress." said Ecliptor. Then Astronema teleported them both back to Zedd's base on the moon. When she arrived Queen Bansheera was still gone.

"Now to discuss strategy." said Zedd. "Astronema, please teleport Ecliptor to the place with the other monsters."

"Why can't he stay here?" asked Astronema.

"Because if we let all the generals stay here, we'd run out of room." replied Zedd. Astronema rolled her eyes, and teleported Ecliptor away. "Now for strategy, first we will send one or two of us, and our generals out to attack whichever city. Then we will see how many rangers attack, and choose what we do based off that."

"I'm not going to be the decoy." said Scorpius.

"Neither will we." said King Mondo.

"We'll choose randomly." said Zedd. "If they send a few rangers, whomever should be able to destroy them. If a lot come, we will attack other places and make easy place a victory."

At Blue Bay Harbor, Queen Bansheera was casting a fairly simple spell to open the Abyss of Evil. Once she was five minutes in, or half way done with the spell, various ninjas from the Ninja Academy's came out to fight, including the six powerless Ninja Storm rangers.

Once Queen Bansheera noticed this, she sent a team of Batlings, lead by Olympious and Diabolico to fight. Five more minutes passed, and the Abyss of Evil was open. All of the villains that the ninja rangers fought were now released. The rangers and students stopped fighting to regroup. Then Shane and Hunter, with everyone else behind them, faced Lothor, his generals, Olympious, Diabolico, Queen Bansheera, his monsters, Batlings and Kelzacks.

In between the two groups of rangers appeared Tommy who teleported there. Tommy walked up to Shane and Hunter. "Zordon and Sensei decided it's time to go back."

"This isn't over." yelled Shane to Lothor the the villains.

"Far from it." replied Lothor with the Green Samurai Amulet still around his neck. The Ninja rangers and students Ninja Streaked away, while Tommy teleported. The villains also teleported to the moon.

"So, Divatox, you got the short straw." said Zedd. "You will go down to earth, now teleport your generals here."

"Fine." said Divatox. She teleported Rygog, Elgar, Porto, and General Havoc to the main room.

"Once rangers come, you can teleport your army, now go to Angel Grove and attack." commanded Zedd. The five villains were teleported to earth.

"Do you plan on telling her you used a spell to give her the short one?" asked Astronema.

"I don't plan on her coming back." replied Zedd. This gave everyone else at the table a laugh except Astronema and Scorpius.

[packfan6]

Anyone, any feedback?

Also I am still open to any suggestions of anything you want to happen in the fic.

[bjlovel]

This chapter was great. Can't wait for the next one

[Freindly Spider-Man]

This chapter was great. Can't wait for the next one


Don't try to be funny, either be constructive or keep quiet.

Anyway

1. Lord Zedd was the star of this chapter, he acted in character and was generally the same trecherous Zedd that had been diminished in the series

2. The tension between the villians and Astronema scheming to betray Zedd gives the story extra tension, now the battles are not just found with the Rangers, but from within the very alliance itself.

3. You seem more occupied with less description of the scenes around Zedd and giving the villains retarded dialouge, particulary THIS scene alone:

"Wait!" yelled Alex, as he first glanced at the screen and then looked at it more deeply. "Ransik, what are you doing with the case of mutants!"

"Lord Zedd and the rest of the baddies need them." replied Ransik.

"Dad, what are you doing?" asked Nadira.

"Sorry honey." said Ransik, and then he turned off the screen. Ransik continued to fly towards the Time Shadow so he could get to the past. Soon after, a few more fighter ships came flying at Ransik. "Oh please." said Ransik. "They couldn't do this all those years ago, they think they can do it now?"


Please, DON'T resort to that kind of dialogue, it's not remotley present in the series.

And did'nt Ransik change his ways at the end of Time Force?

Convulted, confusing continunity with some good moments with the conspiracys, I can see you're trying to improve in some places, but you've got a long way to go before you get close to an engaging story.

[packfan6]

Thank you Spider Man, I'll try working on the diolauge. Also I do know Ransik changed his ways at the end of TF and continued to show it in the end of WF/TF.

Also comments like Bjlovel's are still nice to get. Constructive Critisim is better and more helpful, but it always feels good to here a great job.

[Freindly Spider-Man]

Constructive Critisim is better and more helpful, but it always feels good to here a great job.

Yeah, but those readers don't have a clue what there talking about, they don't see a story, all they see is an ass to kiss because they can't do any better, and don't have the balls to try.

Do not listien to that kind of rubbish, if it does'nt go beyond "Great job", then nothing you write will improve overall, because you're pandering to an audience that can't comprehend what this series is all about or what your story is, there suck-ups.

Encourage criticism at ALL times

[bjlovel]

Yeah, but those readers don't have a clue what there talking about, they don't see a story, all they see is an ass to kiss because they can't do any better, and don't have the balls to try.

Do not listien to that kind of rubbish, if it does'nt go beyond "Great job", then nothing you write will improve overall, because you're pandering to an audience that can't comprehend what this series is all about or what your story is, there suck-ups.

Encourage criticism at ALL times

What is that suppose to mean? In case you didn't know I have 2 fics. Another is that we liked it the way it was. We don't nit pick at stuff. And are you saying that you don't like it when sombody says good job to you about something, then that is just sad.

Criticism is fine, but don't say what other people say is rubbish. I'm not an ass kisser, I like the story the way it is, what is wrong with that.

Another thing, are you calling people who say good job and great job are stupid. I don't see you trying to write your own story, so your the one that doesn't have the balls to try, not me

[comicstar100]

So far good job on setting up the battle, try picturing yourself in the middle of the battle and capture that feeling thats how you want your readers to feel when they read your story. :D

[packfan6]

Next episode up in a few days.

[Lother]

I liked the episodes.

[packfan6]

Glad you liked it Lother. I've been super busy with family and friends, and their is a lot I want to do with episode 3, but I'll try posting it as soon as I can do what I want with the episode. It would also be good to here what everyone else thought about episode 2.

[RangerKing2.0]

Do you have a time frame for the third episode? Because I think the first two are really great. And they was really well written.

[wildranger]

I liked the episodes.

[packfan6]

Thank you for the reply Ranger King, and also wildranger even though he just replied to like, 24 fics. For anyone who cares nominations for fic of the month for July will be up Wed. Hopefully I will have episode 4 up on sat. or something like that. Please give me constructive critisism, and if not then just tell me what you think.

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A high pitched sound went through out the third Command Center. Quickly every head turned to the enlarged viewing globe. On the screen was Divatox, along with Rygog, Elgar, Porto, and General Havoc. Rygog was firing lasers from his eyes at a building while laughing, and then a blast of energy came out of General Havoc's sword, also hitting a building.

"Let's go." said TJ to the other Turbo rangers.

"Wait." yelled Zordon. "Remember the discission we already made."

"Sorry." replied TJ. "But I was chosen to stop Divatox from hurting inocent people and I'm not stopping now."

"I'm with you TJ." said Cassie.

"We can't just let them destroy Angel Grove." added Ashley.

"The rangers are right." said Dimitria "If they don't do something soon, their home will be destroyed." Zordon didn't reply to that. TJ, Ashley and Cassie got out there Turbo morphers, and were ready to morph.

"Don't move." yelled Alex with a Chrono Blaster to TJ's head.

"Alex, I know humans die in the future all the time from mutants, but not now. If you stop me now, then your just as bad as the mutant who killed you." said TJ. Alex lowered his blaster.

Soon Justin and Carlos joined their Turbo teammates. "Shift into Turbo!" yelled TJ. The five rangers put their keys into their morphers, and morphed into the Turbo Power Rangers.

"Tommy." whispered Kat. "Should we use our Zeo powers and help?"

"No." replied Tommy. "Zordon doesn't want us to." Kat didn't like the decision, but did as Zordon and Tommy wished. "Plus I think TJ and the guys can handle them."

Near by was Andros and Zhane. "Should we go, we're also obliged to stop Divatox." asked Zhane.

"No." said Andros rather loudly. "We have a plan and I'm sticking with it. I don't want them to go, but it's their choice."

After hearing this, the Phantom Ranger stepped forward with the Turbo Rangers. "I'm going with you." said the Phantom Ranger while stairing at Cassie.

"And I'm going too." yelled the Blue Senturion.

"Okay." said TJ. "Let's go." The six rangers and police officer teleported to Angel Grove, and faced Divatox.

"Oh." signed Divatox. "The rangers are hear to spoil our fun."

"Turbo Blasters." yelled TJ, and the four rangers quickly followed him as they pulled their Turbo Blasters and fired. General Havoc stepped forward and swung his sword twice, knocking the blast to the ground. The Turbo Rangers put their blasters back in their holsters.

"Piranhatrons." yelled Divatox, and a large team of Piranhatrons arrived. "Attack."

The Piranhatrons and Rangers charged at each other. Ashley came up to one and punched it in the stomach. It took a step back, with it's hand on the stomach. Ashley rolled over the Piranhatron's back, and kicked another while landing.

Ashley was faced by two Piranhatrons who were about to punch her until she ducked. Ashley continued to stay low while she ran into the two Piranhatron's legs, knocking them to the ground. Once Ashley got back up, a Piranhatron charged at her, looking like it was ready to tackle her, so Ashley ducked again forcing the Piranhatron to fly into another Piranhatron.

The Blue Senturion had his sword out, and stabbed the first Piranhatron to get close to him. Once another got close, he swung his sword with the Piranhatron still on, knocking both Piranhatrons down. The Blue Senturion jumped past both of them, and got into a defensive stance, waiting for others to charge.

Three more did, but the Blue Senturion knocked them all back with his sword. They all were able to still fight, so they tried diving at the Blue Senturion, but he made a flip backwards so each fell to the ground.

Carlos waited a few moments before he attacked. He couldn't believe what was happening. Divatox was back, and after living a normal life for so long, he had to go back and save the world again, and on his birthday. Carlos shook his head a little, but then found himself surrounded by Piranhatrons. Carlos jumped and kicked one that was facing him, and then punched the Piranhatron to his left once he landed. The next thing Carlos knew their was a Piranhatron on his back.

Carlos struggled to get him off, but then decided to pull his Turbo Blaster, and Carlos shot the Piranhatron off. Carlos went on to fire at three more.

Justin pulled out his Hand Blasters, and was also ready to fight. Justin began with firing at the closest Piranhatron too him, hitting him to the ground. Then a group charged at him. Justin fired a few of them down, but three got to him.

One Piranhatron kicked Justin, who blocked it with his arm. While Justin was preoccupied with that, a Piranhatron kicked Justin's leg, hitting him to the ground. The third went down to punch Justin, but Justin flipped up to his feet, kicking the Piranhatron in the face.

TJ pulled his Turbo Blaster out, got down on one knee, and fired rapidly at the Piranhatron's in front of him, hitting a few to the ground. He could hear one sneaking up on, and heard when he started throwing a punch. TJ ducked, making the Piranhatron miss. While he was still swinging his arm, TJ moved his back leg behind the Piranhatron, then kicked it forward. This made the Piranhatron fly above him. TJ punched it in the chest making it fly higher up, and then TJ shot it to the ground.

TJ decided it would be more efficient to fight with his Turbo Navigator also, so he pulled that out. He fired at a few more Piranhatrons, and then combined the two together and started to fire at different monsters.

Cassie and the Phantom Ranger decided on a quick plan on how to fight the Piranhatrons. The Phantom Ranger turned invisible and Cassie charged. When she found a group, she punched one in the middle. Next she jumped up, and kicked another close by.

She soon found herself surrounded by Piranhatrons. This is when the Phantom Ranger charged. He kicked the first one in the back, and landed on him. He jumped up in the air, and spun on his side kicking one down, pushing another, making those two make others fall. He turned himself visible, and joined Cassie in combat.

Now that the first major group of Piranhatrons were gone, the rangers could start fighting mutants. The Blue Senturion got on his Senturion Cycle, and charged. The first mutant to attack him was the Wild Weeder. He shot seeds at the Blue Senturion, who in return fired two lasers out of his cycle destroying the seeds. He fired more lasers, hitting the Wild Weeder.

The Blue Senturion soon found himself surrounded. Soon mutants were punching and kicking at his cycle, making it impossible to move. Mr. Goorific fired goo under the cycle, making an explosion. The Blue Senturion flew up in the air, while the surrounding monsters got slightly damaged.

Now the Blue Senturion could focus on just a few monsters. Flamite was the one he choose. The Blue Senturion charged at him, and punched it in the chest. He knew Flamite had quick reflex's, but he had faster. He quickly got him to the ground, not destroying him, and then gazed at all the monsters he had to destroy.

Ashley pulled out her Star Chargers, and got into a defensive stance. Soon the monster known as Strikeout threw a ball at a very fast speed at her. Ashley moved to the side to avoid it, and then charged at Strikeout. Ashley quickly charged at Strikeout as he got ready to throw another pitch. Before Ashley could attack the mutant was able to throw another ball at her. She put her Star Chargers in front of the ball to try deflecting it, but it was too strong. It went right past them, and nailed Ashley.

Ashley fell to the ground in pain, but slowly got back up. Once she got up another ball was thrown at her, but she was able to avoid it. She continued to run at him, and was able to start attacking.

First she rammed one of her Star Chargers into it's stomach, and then threw a punch with the other one into Strikeout's head. This pushed Strikeout into the other monsters, but Ashley followed him. She kicked Strikeout in the chest, and continued to attack him.

TJ found Justin in trouble, so he pulled his Lightning Sword and came to the rescue. He hit the few Piranhatrons remaining away. "Justin, we should probably work together." said TJ.

"Okay." replied Justin, who put away his blasters and pulled out his Turbo Sword.

"Cover my back." said TJ, as he started running. Justin followed him, and hit a few mutants away from attacking TJ. Eventually they got past all the mutants and found Divatox with her generals. General Havoc saw them, and charged.

General Havoc attacked TJ with his sword, but TJ blocked it with his. Justin tried attacking Havoc from the side with his sword, but Havoc kicked it away. TJ was able to step back, and attacked Havoc, hitting him.

The Phantom Ranger, like Ashley, decided to take a defensive strategy. He took out his Laser Pistol, got on one knee, and started firing. Many mutants were hit, but he had to stop once Terrotooth charged at him with his sword.

The Phantom quickly turned his weapon into a sword, and blocked Terrotooth's attack. The Phantom Ranger kicked Terrotooth back, and then turned himself invisible. He ran towards Electovolt who was on his cycle waiting to attack someone. The Phantom Ranger tackled Electrovolt and his bike, making him fall on two Piranhatrons and a mutant. This turned the Phantom Ranger visible, who used his sword to block another attack.

Cassie pulled out her Wind Fire, and also shot at some mutants. She soon found this impossible when a monster named Griller started firing blue energy beams back.

Cassie was starting to feel the fatigue of battling coming back to her. She knew going into melee would be even more tiring, but she had to do something other then this. Cassie decided her best opportunity would be attacking Divatox herself. She pulled her Turbo Sword and used that and Wind Fire to block any attacks as she ran towards Divatox.

When Cassie found Divatox, they glared at each other for a second, until Cassie fired Wind Fire. The attack was blocked by Elgar's sword. Cassie tried running up to Divatox and attack her with her Turbo Sword, but Elgar stepped in the way and successfully hit Cassie knocking her to the ground.

After finishing his fight with the Piranhatrons, he put his Turbo Blaster away and went inside his Turbo Cart. Carlos started by going at a slow speed until Amphibitor shot a purple energy bolt from his knife. At this point he went much faster.

Carlos continued at these quick speeds until he ran into Amphibitor's legs, making him fall right on Carlos. Carlos gave Amphibitor a good punch, making him fall behind Carlos. Carlos continued to go at full speed until blue energy triangles came out of Speed Demon's head. This made the cart come to a complete halt, forcing Carlos to fly out of it.

Carlos landed in a group of Piranhatrons who had swords drawn. Carlos began to get up, but was knocked back to the ground by a Piranhatron's sword. Each Piranhatron raised his sword, and began to quickly lower them.

Before the swords hit him, a Piranhatron seemed to slip and fall on top of him. Each sword hit the Piranhatron. Carlos pushed the Piranhatron away, and then felt someone grab his Turbo Blaster out of it's holster. Carlos looked, but all he could see was a hand with fingernails painted pink.

The Piranhatrons fell one by one, and then the females other hand went towards Carlos. Carlos grabbed it, and she helped him up.

"Thank you." said Carlos to the teenage girl. "The rangers and I should be able to handle it from here on."

"Okay Carlos." she replied.

"How do you know who I am?" asked Carlos.

"Don't you recognize me?" she asked. "I'm Silvy." she said with a smile.

"Okay, we'll catch up later." said Carlos. Carlos and Silvy then saw a monster fire at them. Carlos got in front of the shot, and took his Turbo Blaster back. The shot knocked Carlos to the ground. "Run." yelled Carlos. Silvy ran away from the battle.

TJ and Justin continued to fight General Havoc until they found General Havoc on the ground from an unknown attack. The two rangers turned their head to see Lightning Cruiser and Storm Blaster. The two rangers ran towards the cars, and both got in. TJ flew Lightning Cruiser up in the air while Justin and Storm Blaster remained on the ground.

Storm Blaster started firing at the group of monsters, who in turn fired back. Elgar stopped fighting Cassie, and jumped onto Storm Blaster's back. General Havoc also ran to Storm Blaster and jumped on the front.

Justin pulled his Hand Blasters out, and fired at Elgar first. This knocked him off Storm Blaster. Within this time, several monsters surrounded Storm Blaster, and started attacking it. Storm Blaster tried moving forward, then back, but it was unable to get anywhere.

Justin quickly fired at General Havoc, who used his sword to deflect the shots down to Storm Blaster. Justin tried firing at the monsters, but it was to no use. Soon Storm Blaster was smashed down to a pile of metal. Justin eventually got out, and started firing as fast as he could to defend himself against the dozens of monsters.

TJ transformed Lightning Cruiser into flight mode, and flew up in the air. From the air, TJ had to dodge various attacks from monsters. When Lightning Cruiser had the chance, it fired at the monsters on the ground.

Soon after the flight started, Lightning Cruiser started losing control, and flew wildly in the air, every so often getting shot. After hearing a ticking noise, TJ turned around and found Maniac Mechanic. He also found the back wheels of Lightning Cruiser changed, and a detonator with ten seconds counting down. TJ quickly got out of his seat and tried blasting the detonator with his Turbo Blaster, but it didn't work. Maniac Mechanic was laughing and was ready to jump.

TJ shot Maniac in the chest, making him fall down. TJ stood on Maniac Mechanic's back while trying to shoot the detonator some more. When it was at one second, TJ jumped off, and watched as Lightning Cruiser and Maniac Mechanic blew up.

The Phantom Ranger turned himself invisible again, and ran until he found an ally to help him fight. The first ally he saw was the Blue Senturion, who was looking at the monsters. "Let's work together, we have a better chance of winning that way."

"Okay." replied the Blue Senturion. The Phantom Ranger had his Laser Pistol in the laser mode, so the Blue Senturion also transformed his weapon to a ranged mode. They both started by firing at Lord Litter, who was attacking Justin. Lord Litter turned around and used his wind to shoot parts of Storm Blaster at them. The Phantom Ranger and Blue Senturion together shot all the scraps down.

The Phantom Ranger started running towards Lord Litter, while transforming his weapon back into a sword. The Blue Senturion quickly followed. Lord Litter started firing heavy winds towards them, but it only slowed them down. They were able to both attack Lord Litter with their swords. Lord Litter was defenseless, so he kept getting attacked by the swords until he was destroyed.

Once Carlos fell to the ground, he quickly got back up, and found Justin completely surrounded. Carlos pulled out his Thunder Cannon, and started firing, knocking monsters to the ground making it easier for Justin.

Carlos quickly made an open area for him to run to. He ran towards Justin who had his Turbo Sword and one Hand Blaster. Carlos got himself back to back with Justin, and continued firing while taking shots from monsters.

While on the ground, Cassie found Ashley have success attacking, so she got up and ran to help her. Since Strikeout and Ashley were far enough away, Strikeout was able to throw a baseball at Ashley again. Ashley wasn't ready to block it, but Cassie used Wind Fire to blow up the ball.

Strikeout looked surprised, and turned himself to see Cassie. Strikeout was distracted, so Ashley was able to charge and knock Strikeout to the ground with her Star Chargers. Cassie tried to run as fast as she could to get to Strikeout. By the time Strikeout was up, Cassie was able to stab him in the chest with her Turbo Sword. Then Ashley punched him over and over with her Star Chargers until he was destroyed.

Each of the rangers were fatigued but continued to fight. Each prayed that the other rangers were doing much better then them, but only three of the many monsters were destroyed, leaving many more for them to fight.

[bjlovel]

Not bad, but kinda shocking when the Phantom Ranger disobeyed Zordon. I guess he wasn't as loyal as Tommy was. Adding Sylvie in there was something I wasn't expecting to read.

[Apollo]

I like how each episode has been single, and not tried to fit in interchanging storylines. The one thing i would say is that there should have been a better reason for the Zeo rangers not to join the Turbo rangers in batle other than Zordon doesn't want them to, you could have psooible put it as each set of powers are stronger fighting certain enemys.

[comicstar100]

I liked the chapter. The phantom ranger would only ignore a order from zordon for one reason Cassie. That was my favorite part in this chapter. Some of the fights seemed to drag on a bit to long but they were well done. Oh and who is Silvy?

[bjlovel]

Sylvie was the little girl that found out that Andros and Carlos were power rangers and she is the kid that first pressed 3 on Andros's battleizer to transform him into the Red Battleized Ranger while he was in trouble

[packfan6]

Thank you 3 for your replies. You told me what you think and gave me something to think about. Anyone else have anything they want to say. Next episode in a few days.

[greenwc]

i have a question ,who holds what powers besides the turbo?
and is it me or powers of space vacant?

[packfan6]

i have a question ,who holds what powers besides the turbo?
and is it me or powers of space vacant?

MMPR-Jason, Billy, Zach, Kim, Aisha, Tom(from the past) In my fics Trini has died just like the actress
Zeo-Tommy, Tanya, Kat, Adam, Rocky, Trey
Turbo-In the episode
Space-Andros, Zhane, the other four currently aren't in use
Lost Galaxy-The 1st team, Karone is evil
Lightspeed-Normal Team
Time Force-Normal Team, while Nadira and Alex also have morphers
Wild Force-Normal Team
Ninja Storm-Marah and Kapri also have morphers, but they haven't been able to recreate the other NS powers.

[RangerKing2.0]

packfan, you should've used the Robot Rangers for the four missing Turbo Powers... That way there isn't any vacant PR powers.

[Apollo]

I think it's fine to have vacant powers, since Andros and Zhane were orininally the only members when they defenden KO-35.

[packfan6]

Thank you for the suggestion RangerKing, but what's done is done. I'm still open to any suggestions about things you want to happen. Next episode up Saturday, then I'll be gone a week camping, then once I get back I hope to write a ton.

[comicstar100]

I'd like to see other characters like Masked rider,the beetleborgs or the Vr troopers. :D

[packfan6]

This is episode 4, forgot to post it yesterday. I'll be gone for a week so the 5th episode won't be up till then. Thanks for the feedback in advance, and vote for C2D2 for Fanfic of the month.

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In the Command Center, the viewing globe was tuned into Angel Grove, where the Turbo rangers were fighting around three dozen monsters and hundreds of Piranhatrons. Some rangers were sitting and watching the battle, while others like Taylor were anxious to get back to the battle field were standing. Alex, Billy, Cam and Trip were running some last minute test on the Turbo zords so they could be used when needed.

Andros and Zhane were standing together, watching their teammates fight. Andros started pacing back and forth, trying to resist the urge to teleport to the battle and fight. Eventually he asked Zordon. "How long till we can help?"

"Once Alex feels we're as ready as we can be." replied Zordon. "We're lucky that our opponents aren't ones to kill humans for no reason, so if we don't fight we'll have time before any real harm is done."

Andros knew that Zordon was right, but he still went to Alex. "How long until we're ready?"

"We're done with testing the zords. Now all we need is to figure out how to get the ninja powers to work." said Alex.

"So why can't we just go and help them now?" asked Zhane who was listening in on them.

"Because if we do, we'll start winning, and then they'll send the rest of their monsters, and we won't have the strength to stop them." replied Alex. Andros and Zhane both started watching the fight on the viewing globe.

At the moon, the head villains and their generals were watching the Turbo rangers fight Divatox.

"Yey, we're winning!" said Prince Sprocket.

"Yes, they are." replied King Mondo.

"Shouldn't we be attacking more, starting another battle?" asked Trakeena.

"Now sounds like a good time." replied Zedd. "Queen Bansheera, ready to claim your home back?"

"Yes." yelled Queen Bansheera. "But let me speak with you alone first." Zedd nodded and the two went to the back of the room. "I need Hydro Hog, I think he will be helpful in battle."

"Of course, I will teleport him their, now go with your army." said Zedd.

"Okay." replied Queen Bansheera, who teleported to Marinar Bay. With her came Vypra, Diabolico, Loki, Jinxar, Olympius, and a team of Batlings. Soon after Hydro Hog joined them. "Start draining the water." said Queen Bansheera to Hydro Hog.

"That's what I do best." replied Hydro Hog, who started the task.

At the Command Center, a high pitched sound went through out the room, and now on the viewing globe was Queen Bansheera and her army and Hydro Hog.

"Let's go." said Carter Grayson right away.

"No." replied Chad. "Remember what Zordon said."

"I'm not letting them do this to Marinar Bay." said Carter. "Lightspeed, Rescue." Carter morphed and teleported to Marinar Bay where he faced Queen Bansheera alone. Carter didn't want to here how or why he shouldn't go. He'd rather die to save another then let another die.

"Titanium Power." yelled Ryan.

"Lightspeed Rescue." said Dana, as brother and sister teleported to help Carter in battle. Zordon shook his head, knowing that Alex plan wasn't working.

"Hey, we can't let them have all the fun." said Joel.

Chad rolled his eyes and Kelsey got ready to morph also. "Lightspeed Rescue." said the three of them, as they joined their teammates.

"It's morphing time." yelled Cestro, as he morphed to the Blue Alien Ranger.

"What are you doing?" yelled Aurico.

"I'm not letting Hydro Hog drain the waters of earth." replied Cestro. "You can come with me or not." then Cestro teleported away.

At Angel Grove, the Turbo rangers continued to fight the forces of Divatox.

TJ pulled out his Lightning Sword after he landed from his jump off Lightning Cruiser, and charged to Justin and Carlos who were surrounded by monsters. "Follow me, I have a plan." said TJ. The two rangers pulled out their Turbo Swords, and started following TJ while blocking attacks.

Eventually they found Ashley, Cassie, the Phantom Ranger and Blue Senturion. "Follow me everyone!" yelled TJ. TJ led them all to where they originally teleported. Now the seven faced all the monsters rather then being surrounded by them.

"What's the plan?" asked Carlos.

"Turbo R.A.M." yelled TJ. The five Turbo Weapons combined, and faced the monsters. "If we use this enough, we can get them all. Since this takes some time to recharge, they'll have time to get here so have weapons out to stop them. Fire!"

A blast from the Turbo RAM came out and flew towards the monsters. It hit Count Nocturne, but didn't destroy him. Many monsters started firing at the Turbo RAM, while the rangers fired from Turbo Blasters back at them.

TJ could tell that the Turbo RAM was almost destroyed from all the blast, but he was able to get one more shot out. This hit Count Nocturne again, destroying him. A few more attacks came from monsters, destroying the Turbo RAM. Now the rangers would have to fight without their Turbo Power Weapons.

"Turbine Laser." yelled TJ. "Fire." A powerful blast came out of the Turbine Laser, hitting Goldgoyle, but again not destroying him. The rangers waited for it to recharge so they could shoot again while shooting Turbo Blasters at the group of monsters. The monsters weren't attacking the rangers, but using ranged attack to try destroying the Turbine Laser.

"Fire." yelled TJ again. This time the blast destroyed Goldgoyle. TJ started recharging Turbine Laser again, but the monsters were able to destroy it before it fired again.

Once the Turbine Laser was destroyed, all the monsters charged at the rangers. The rangers fired their Turbo Blasters but it was to no use.

"Stick together." yelled TJ as he pulled out his Turbo Sword. The first monster to attack TJ was Big Burpa. Big Burpa shot rays of red energy from it's head towards TJ. TJ took the blast knowing if he got out of the way it would hit another ranger, and then pushed Big Burpa to the ground with his Turbo Sword. Mouth Piece attacked TJ next, also firing a red laser from a diamond on his head. TJ was able to avoid this without getting anyone in harm, and kicked Mouth Piece to the ground.

Numbor was the next closest monster for TJ. TJ attacked it with his sword, but Numbor deflected it with his staff. Then Numbor used his staff to knock TJ to the ground.

Justin left out his Turbo Blaster, and also got out his Turbo Navigator. First Justin shot down the few Piranhatrons remaining. Then he shot at Blazinator, the fire truck monster. In return, Blazinator shot a red beam of energy towards Justin, knocking him to the ground.

Justin was slow to get up until he saw a blue beam come out of Shrinkasect's hand. Once he saw this, he quickly got up to his feet not wanting to get shrunk by the monster. Justin then concentrated his firing on Elgar.

Despite all the sweat going down Justin's face, Justin was having the time of his life. The last time Justin felt he belonged was when he was with the other Turbo rangers. Once they left, Justin never fit in because of how much younger he was then everyone else. Even at the tournament he still felt somewhat left out because he was acused of being the theif. Now he felt like he belonged once again.

Ashley went inside her Turbo Cart, feeling she could be more offensive and defensive in there. Before she could do anything offensively, Delisha Ennivel attacked.

Pink and Black things came out of Delisha's eyes and went to the wheels of her Turbo Cart. Then the wheels blew up and Ashley flew out of the cart. Once Ashley got back to her feet, she was attacked by Dreadfeather and his pickax. The only thing Ashley could think to do to avoid it was fall down, so she did.

Even though Ashley was in the middle of the hardest battle of her life, her mind wasn't on the battle. Fighting as a Turbo ranger in Angel Grove just reminded her what it was like to live a normal life on earth. Before she left for space, she dreamed of living a fairy tale story where she'd find prince charming and live happily ever after.

For the first time in this battle, she realized she got to live that. She was rescued by her prince charming Andros, and as soon as they can have a wedding to get married. This realization gave her the strength to keep fighting in battle.

Cassie, like TJ, put away her Turbo Blaster and got out her Turbo Sword. She decided to attack Rygog who didn't look like he was doing anything against the rangers, so he would be an easy target. Cassie attacked his blue metal armor twice, leaving some scratch marks. Then Rygog shot Cassie with red lasers coming out of his eyes, both hitting Cassie making her take a few steps backwards.

After stumbling backwards, Cassie took a few steps forwards to try another attack. Before she could Rygog shot lasers from his eyes again. This time Cassie blocked them with her sword, which slowly melt in her arms because of the lasers.

Carlos decided to pull out his Turbo Navigator to go along with his Turbo Blaster. He then started an open fire on Divatox. She got hit a few times and fell to the ground. Divatox got back up, and then teleported away.

Carlos decided to go to the next general. Elgar was being attacked by Justin, and Rygog by Cassie, so he started firing at Porto. Porto seemed to absorb most of the hits, but it also looked like he felt some pain.

While on the ground, TJ put his morpher up to his mouth. "Turbo Zords." TJ got back up, and saw Desert Thunder, Wind Chaser, Dune Star, Mountain Blaster and Red Lightning arrive to the battle scene. The five rangers quickly got in their zords. They quickly tried to drive over the monsters, but they seemed to teleport away.

Within minutes, Clockster came back grown. The five Turbo Zords came together to form the Turbo Megazord. Then Crosspatch and Metal Mangler also arrived as grown monsters. To help the rangers stop the monsters, Blue Senturion called for Robo Racer and transformed it while the Phantom Ranger called for Artillatron.

Flash Head and Volt Meister also arrived at the battle. The Turbo Rangers decided to use their final zord, and teleported Carlos, Cassie and Ashley to the Rescue Zords which combined to form the Rescue Megazord.

The four Megazords and five monsters faced each other and the battle quickly began.

Artillatron was attacked by Flash Head. The bulb on his head flashed causing explosions around Artillatron. Then shooting from Flash Head's hands came blue energy which turned into film rapping up Artillatron.

To prevent this from harming him, the Phantom Ranger turned his zord into three zords. With the zord that had the numbers two and four fired powerful blast at Flash Head, knocking him to the ground.

With the two other zords, the Phantom Ranger circled around Clockster making heavy winds making it fall to the ground. Artillatron put itself back together, and faced the two monsters. From the sky came a huge sword, which Clockster picked up to use in combat. While Artillatron was distracted watching the sword, Flash Head fired at Artillatron again making explosions.

Clockster charged at Artillatron and attacked in right in the chest with his sword. Clockster attacked it again while Artillatron tried firing at Clockster. The Phantom Ranger couldn't get the blasters at a right angle to hit Clockster, so instead he fired at Flash Head and started backing up. Clockster went forward and stabbed Artillatron again, starting a fire. Now the Phantom Ranger tried making the zord into three, but the parts that did that were destroyed.

The Phantom Ranger felt defenseless. His zord wasn't much of an offensive help, but the rangers needed as much help as he could give. Artillatron tried to move backwards but no longer could. Artillatron was getting ripped to pieces by Clockster.

The Phantom did the only offensive thing he could, and clicked the self destruct button, and teleported out of the ship and away from the ground. Seconds later both Artillatron and Clockster blew up.

With the Phantom Ranger fighting two monsters, the rest of the zords only had to face one. The Blue Senturion and Robo Racer decided to take on Volt Meister. Robo Racer attacked Volt Meister by firing at him with his Synergizer Blaster, hitting him.

In return, Volt Meister attacked Robo Racer with his whip. To prevent this, Blue Senturion turned Robo Racer into vehicle mode, and drove it away. Volt Meister attacked again with his whip, missing again. Robo Racer then returned to battle mode.

Volt Meister attacked a third time with his whip, hitting. Electricity ran through Robo Racer badly damaging it. It eventually made Robo Racer fall to the ground, but it was slowly able to get back up. Then Robo Racer used his handcuff to attack Volt Meister. Before the handcuff could get to Volt Meister, he used his whip and rapped it around the handcuff. Volt Meister sent large amounts of electricity through Robo Racer. Blue Senturion quickly teleported out of the ship before he got destroyed.

Blue Senturion joined the Phantom Ranger as they watched the zord blow up.

TJ and Justin in the Turbo Megazord took on Crosspatch. The Turbo Megazord charged and kicked the monster in the chest. Crosspatch took a step back, and then attacked the zord with his sword. The Megazord kicked Crosspatch again, kicking the sword away.

Crosspatch attacked the Turbo Megazord again, hitting it in the chest. To prevent this from happening again, TJ pulled out the Turbo Megazord Saber. Crosspatch attacked again, but the Turbo Megazord blocked with it's sword. Then TJ and Justin attacked, cutting Crosspatch's sword in half.

The Turbo Megazord then did it's spin out move, destroying Crosspatch.

Carlos, Cassie and Ashley controlled the Rescue Megazord in efforts to destroy Metal Mangler. First the rangers pulled out their hand blasters, and started firing at Metal Mangler. Metal Mangler was hit, but acted like he felt nothing.

To stop from being attacked, Metal Mangler shot a gray beam of energy from his eyes, hitting the rangers. This made the rangers float up in the air. The rangers called for the Artillery Cannons, but it was impossible with Artillatron being destroyed.

To take advantage of the ability to float, the rangers broke the Rescue Megazord into five zords, and flew each of them into Metal Mangler, slowly destroying him. The rangers reconnected the parts of the megazord.

Now the Turbo and Rescue Megazord had to take on Flash Head and Volt Meister to save Angel Grove.

[greenwc]

well i know this is silly but i am gonna say it anyway,i don't like how the rangers aren't winning and if Zordon is anything close to what he is supposed to be on the series then he would have more control despite the "he wasn't my mentor" attitude

[comicstar100]

I liked the idea of some of the rangers not listening to zordon. They can only take so much of standing by and doing nothing. Just make sure to keep it in reason of the story. Also What happned to the Alien Rangers they morphed and thats all we heared about them so far. Other than that I liked this chapter my favorite part of the battle was the phantom rangers zord self destructing I could picture that perfect.

[packfan6]

Some replys before I leave for the week camping-

Greenwc-It doesn't sound silly. What I have to stay is stick with reading this, you'll like what you see.

Comicstar-I'm glad you liked it and the Phantom zord going boom. I'm a little confused on the Alien Ranger comment. Before the episode all the Alien Rangers were at the command center, and during this episode Cestro decided to leave to help the Lightspeed rangers because Hydro Hog was also attacking.

Anyone else?

[packfan6]

Next episode up soon, I need to edit it, please tell me what you thought of the last one.

[bjlovel]

Not Bad. I like how not everyone listen's to Zordon because they did not know who he was, or did not know really how wise he is, or how respected he is

[packfan6]

Sorry it took so long to edit. Hope the long fights don't bore you. Please tell me what you think good or bad. Please *Insert puppy dog face here*

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After spoting the seven rangers show up to fight, Queen Bansheera did the same as Divatox, and teleported all of her monsters and some of her Batlings to the battle field.

"Rangers, the whole world is counting on us." said Carter. "We had to lock up Queen Bansheera last time, and now we have to destroy her. It won't be easy-."

"Yeah yeah yeah, let's go!" said Joel.

Several of the rangers charged, but Carter remained standing where he was. He pulled out his Rescue Blaster, and started an open fire. He knew the strategy of taking out the useless monsters would make it easier to fight the hard ones, so he concentrated his shots on the Batlings.

Carter shot down a few Batlings, but a formation of them charged towards him. Carter quickly transformed his blaster into a sword, and hit the closest Batling. One bombarded him with it's sword, but Carter was able to quickly deflect it and then hit the Batling down. Carter continued until all the Batlings near by were destroyed. Then he switched his Rescue Blaster back into a blaster and continued firing.

Dana decided to use her Lightspeed Cycle and bolted at the monsters. Dana quickly fired down a few Batlings leaving her a path to the monsters. When she got close enough so that she was surrounded, she kicked a Batling to the left of her into a few more Batlings while continuing to fire at whatever she could with her cycle.

Eventually she was getting attacked enough that she pushed her cycle out from underneath of her, landing it on a few Batlings, and started fighting without it.

Cestro yanked the sword off his back, and made a few swift and short teleportations through the group of monsters to the near river where Hydro Hog was draining the water. While he was teleporting, he changed his sword into a blaster and when he arrived fired at Hydro Hog.

Ryan pulled out the only weapon he had, his Titanium Blaster, transformed it into an axe, and darted into combat. He quickly went from Batling to Batling, destroying them with single slashes of his axe.

Ryan soon found Diabolico, and foolishly tried to destroy him with a single attack. It was a mystery to him why Diabolico would join Queen Bansheera again. Diabolico knew the only reason Queen Bansheera did that was so she would gain Mariner Bay back, but now with allies such as Zedd, and an entire army back to help, Diabolico gladly came back knowing he would die if he didn't. The attack hit Diabolico knocking him back, and Diabolico quickly vanished into the crowd of monsters.

Chad joined Carter by also using ranged attacks. Chad got out his Thermo Blaster, and attached his Battleizer to it. Chad knew it was overkill to use it on Batlings, but he decided to save energy and do it anyway.

Chad started fire on the Batlings. After destroying a few, a group invaded him. Chad shot the one in front over and over until it caught on fire. Then Chad kicked the Batling back, knocking him into others catching them on fire.

Kelsey got out her V Lancer, and set it to staff mode. Kelsey ran into a group of Batlings and then swung her staff in a circle. This knocked a few Batlings down, but others remained. Then Kelsey planted her staff into the ground, and swung around it hitting the remaining down. Kelsey landed, then hit the Batlings which were on the ground, destroying them.

Kelsey took a few steps back, set her V Lancer to a ranged mode, and started firing at other Batlings and monsters.

Joel watched all the other rangers choose different weapons for combat, so he decided not to use any. Joel ran up to a group of Batlings and punched the first one. Then he kicked another one down before it could attack him. He then went into a defensive stance and waited for an attack.

Since no attack came, Joel ran and tackled a Batling. After beating it while on the ground, Joel found himself on his back surrounded by Batlings. While on the ground, Joel span around with his feet in the air, kicking the Batlings away. Then Joel was able to get back to his feet.

"Rescue Bird" yelled Carter as he put his Rescue Blaster back in it's holster. Chad, Joel, Kelsey and Dana all ran to Carter. Carter broke the bird up into five weapons, and each ranger took their own.

Carter took his drill, and charged at the crowd of monsters. Strikning attacked him by firing three spikes, two of them hitting and knocking Carter to his knees. Carter quickly got back up, and ran to attack Strikning.

Carter stuck his drill through Strikning's armor, and started having the drill drill farther. This made a hole in Strikning and made him fall to the ground. Strikning got up a few feet back, and shot drills at Carter's feet and had lightning come from above. Carter jumped above the spikes and had the lightning hit the drill, which hit the lightning to the ground.

Carter ran to Strikning again, and put the drill back in the hole. Carter drilled enough in Strikning that it made Strikning explode.

Chad was attacked by energy coming from Demonite Clone's sword. Chad went on one knee and watched the energy fly right above his head. Then Chad fired once with his Rescue Laser. Demonite charged at Chad, and swung his sword. Chad put his Rescue Laser in the way so the sword wouldn't hit him, took a step back and fired again, knocking Demonite to the ground. Demonite disappeared, but within seconds reappeared behind Chad stabbing him in the back.

Chad quickly got himself back to a stable position, and fired at Demonite yet again. This completely destroyed Demonite Clone's right arm and sword. Chad watched the monster stumble, and then fired again, sending him back to the Shadow World.

The next thing Chad knew he was on the ground very close to the water. His Rescue Laser landed next to him. Chad reached his hand out to grab it, but stopped when his hand was stepped on by Olympious. Olympious used his other foot to kick the weapon away, and then kicked Chad in the stomach.

Chad slowly got himself up while Olympious laughed. Olympious knocked Chad back to the ground and slightly into the water.

"Here, take this." said a voice.

"Marina, is that you?" asked Chad.

"Yes, take it." said Marina with her fathers staff in hand.

"I can't, this is Neptunes staff." said Chad. Then Olympious kicked Chad again. Chad slowly took the staff and aimed it at Olmpious. A powerful blast came out of the staff and made Olympious fly back into the group of monsters.

"Thank you." said Chad as he gave the staff back. "Will I ever see you again?"

"Yes." replied Marina with a wink. Then she swam away.

Cobra Monster fired green lasers from his eyes to Kelsey's feet, but she was able to jump out of the way. Kelsey, with her Rescue Claw, ran to Cobra Monster and readyed an attack.

Kelsey used her claw to grab Cobra Monster's chest, making many cuts in his chest. To get out of this, Cobra Monster jumped up in the air and started to land on Kelsey. Kelsey quickly dropped her Rescue Claw and pulled her Rescue Blaster. She fired at him, and dropped Cobra Monster to the ground. Kelsey picked her Rescue Claw back up, and attacked Cobra Monster while it was on the ground, slowly destroying him.

Dana had her Rescue Injector and charged towards Mantevil. She quickly stuck her injector in Mantevil, enabling him from flying.Mantevil turned around and fired blast from his hand, knocking the Rescue Injector away from Dana.

Dana quickly pulled her Rescue Blaster and fired, and then ran to her Injector to pick it up. While she picked it up, another blast came from Mantevil knocking her to the ground. Dana slowly got back up and fired from her Rescue Blaster again. While this distracted Mantevil, Dana was able to charge and stab her Rescue Injector in Mantevil again.

This time the Injector drained Mantevil's energy. Once he was powerless enough, Dana got out her V Lancer and stabbed Mantevil, destroying him.

Joel also went in to battle and was attacked by Vilevine. First it sent vines towards Joel's wrist, but Joel destroyed them with his Rescue Cutter. Joel started charging towards Vilevine but was stopped when he was hit with yellow bolts from Vilevine's shoulders. Joel fell to the ground, but slowly got back up.

Joel continued his charge at Vilevine, and started using his Rescue Cutter to cut Vilevine. Everything that Joel cut kept on growing back until Joel cut Vilevine's shoulder. Vilevine let out a loud scream of pain as red ooze came out of the shoulder.

While Vilevine was distracted with his shoulder, Joel cut the other one making another cry of pain. Joel made a few more cuts in Vilevine which didn't grow back, and then Joel cut off Vilevine's head, sending it back to the Shadow World.

Ryan decided to not find Diabolico, and attack Infinitor instead. Ryan fired a blast from his Titanium Laser. The blast reflected off Infinitor's shield, and came back at Ryan hitting him. Ryan quickly decided to change his blaster into an axe and charge.

Ryan attacked Infinitor in the chest hitting, and then Infinitor attacked with his sword hitting. Both stumbled back, but Ryan was able to strike back first, nailing Infinitor making him fall down. Infinitor got back up, but Ryan kicked the shield away from Infinitor leaving him defenseless. Ryan punched Infinitor back down, while he changed his Titanium Laser back to a blaster, and fired over and over until Infinitor was destroyed.

Hydro Hog fell into the water after Cestro's blast. Hydro Hog slowly got back up. "Only one ranger, please." said Hydro Hog sarcasticly. Cestro charged at Hydro Hog now with his sword, and attacked Hydro Hog in the chest twice.

Hydro Hog seemed to be fine, and tried grabbing the sword out of Cestro's hand. Cestro kicked Hydro Hog away, and got into a defensive stance. Hydro Hog shrugged at the defensive stance, and went back to draining water.

Cestro dove towards Hydro Hog who ducked forcing Cestro to fall to the ground. Hydro Hog took Cestro's sword with ease, and threw it towards the battle field. Cestro got back up and started running to retrieve his sword, but Hydro Hog grabbed him and started draining his energy.

At Angel Grove, the Turbo Rangers still had to take care of Flash Head and Volt Meister. TJ, Justin and the Turbo Megazord took on Flash Head. First Flash Head made a flash from his bulb, making explosions around the Turbo Megazord.

The Turbo Megazord pulled out it's sword, and was ready to charge when Flash Head attacked with glowing blue energy, but the Turbo Megazord was able to avoid it. The Turbo Megazord ran up to Flash Head, and attacked the bulb on Flash Head, destroying it. Then the Turbo Megazord did it's spin out move, which seemed to badly damage Flash Head but not destroy them.

Flash Head slowly walked up to the Turbo Megazord, grabbed on, and then blew up, destroying both Flash Head and the Turbo Megazord. TJ and Justin were unable to get out in time.

Carlos, Ashley, Cassie and the Rescue Megazord took on Volt Meister. Volt Meister made the first move, and attacked with it's whip. This drained some of the rangers energy, but the rangers quickly got out blasters and fired the whip away.

The rangers started charging towards Volt Meister. When they were close enough, Volt Meister wrapped his whip around the Rescue Megazord. Then he quickly started sucking the energy out of the Rescue Megazord.

"We have to evacuate!" said Ashley.

"No." replied Carlos. "Then Volt Meister can destroy the city."

"Then what are we going to do?" asked Cassie. Carlos controlled the Rescue Megazord to slowly walk towards Volt Meister who was still draining their energy. Then the Rescue Megazord blew up, also blowing up Volt Meister.

The Phantom Ranger and Blue Senturion quickly ran into the remains of both zords in search for the rangers. After hours, the five rangers were found and were alive, but their powers were destroyed. The seven of them teleported back to the Command Center.

Back at Mariner Bay, Carter, Chad, Joel, Kelsey and Dana reunited and put the Rescue Bird back together.

"Trans Armor Cycle." yelled Carter, and then he got on his cycle.

"Mega Battle Armor." yelled both Chad and Joel who both received battle armor.

This left Kelsey and Dana with the Rescue Bird. They ran until they found Queen Bansheera and fired at her. This just made the queen laugh. Then Queen Bansheera fired big rays of energy at the female rangers, knocking them down.

Ryan noticed by the ocean Hydro Hog draining energy from the Blue Alien Ranger. Ryan ran as fast as he could, and fired his Titanium Laser at Hydro Hog knocking him down. Then Ryan ran up to the blue ranger.

"Are you all right?" asked Ryan.

"I'll be fine, just get me to the water." said Cestro.

"Okay." replied Ryan. Ryan picked up Cestro and started walking to the water. While he was walked, Ryan got attacked by Hydro Hog from his sword. Ryan stumbled slightly, and then ran to the water and set Cestro in.

"Leave me and the ranger alone." said Hydro Hog.

"Not a chance." said Ryan. Then Ryan charged Hydro Hog, firing his Titanium Laser twice. Then Ryan transformed it into an axe, and knocked Hydro Hog down. Hydro Hog got back up, but was knocked to the ground again from a punch thrown by Ryan.

"That's it, I'm leaving." said Hydro Hog, who teleported away. Then Ryan ran back to Cestro.

"Thank you." said Cestro.

"Always here to help a ranger in need." replied Ryan. Cestro teleported back to the Command Center.

Carter rode on his cycle for a minute, and then used the cycle as battle armor. Carter found Memorase, and started firing at him. Memorase started running towards Carter, but before he could get to far, Carter fired the two wheels from his armor at Memorase, destroying him. The explosion was so close to Carter that it also damaged him.

Joel and Chad decided to work together with their Battle Armor on. The two rangers decided to attack Bird Bane knowing that he was a pretty strong monster. First Chad fired with his ice cannon, and started to freeze Bird Bane.

Joel went up to him and used his power saw to destroy the monster. Joel and Chad were both starting to get tired of fighting, but both of them knew they had to.

"Mobile Armor Vehicle." yelled Carter. Then Carter went inside his ship, knowing it would be much easier to fight in that. Carter first fired at Queen Bansheera, who put up a shield to deflect the shot. Then Carter fired at Aquafiend, destroying it.

The six rangers knew they had to fight as hard as they could to win, and seemed to have an advantage now, but a win still seemed doubtful.

[bjlovel]

not bad. Awesome fight scenes

[packfan6]

Glad you liked the fights Bjlovel

Only 1 reply. Grrr

[comicstar100]

Good fights. I never get tired or picturing a zord self-destruct. So I guess the next part of the story will get to see zordon and the rest of the rangers reaction to the two teams running off. Also I have only seen two episodes of lightspeed and one of them was with Marina lol. :D

[packfan6]

Okay, here's how things work.

Ether people reply to a fic, the writter gets happy and writes more. The people reply more, and it's an endless cycle that keeps good fics going.

Or, people stop replying to a fic. Then the writter gets depressed, and the quality of his(or her) episodes goes down because they aren't happy. Because of that less people reply, and the fic slowly dies.

Don't let C2D2 die, tell me what you think!

[Dcaasi98]

I just skimmed through your episode, and its cool. I'll read more tomarrow when I'm finished with this section of my FanFic. Gotta stay focused...lol

[packfan6]

Glad you liked what you saw of it Dcaasi. I have no clue when the next episode will be up since I haven't been motivated enough to get too far into it.

[wildranger]

not bad i like it

[genesis09]

I like your stories. i read Forver Pink & now am here. I know you're getting a couple complaints about the length of the fights but NEVERMIND THEM. There are so many Rangers, each is the favorite of one reader or another. My favorite Ranger is Kimberly so I"ll put up with extensive fight scenes for the rest of the rangers, so long as you continue the trend up to her time to fight. And it's not like the fights you're writing are whack anyway, they're all good. I am surprised to see some of the twists and cool stunts you pull out, even as the stroy goes on just cuz after so many episodes (of Forver Pink, for example) I just expected the writer to run out of creative jiuce. (I can't remember it now, but there was something you did with a fight toward the end of Forever pink that may not have been huged, but I was blown away cuz I fuigured you might be out of steam after writing so many fights for so many people).

That leads me to my next suggestion, or prayer, really. Forever pink got better and better as it went on, then in the climax, I was Shocked, but happily so, that Kim was in the mix at the climax, that she was their to handle things in the end. I like the drama you added there & when I read that her mere hesitation was cause for missing the opportunity to stop the spell, I actually re-read the area cuz I was in utter shock that they lost, & didn't complete the mission (I was unaware of C2D2 at the time).

I like that you had Kim use her Bow so much to, not just to shoot arrows, but to fight like in MMPR S1 & once in S2. So here is my "prayer": Please let Kimberly get redemption for her mistake at the end of Forever Pink. When I read it & it talked about how she hesitated I picured scenes of everything you wrote that was on her mind, like being a ranger & then living in a world where Zordon is dead. I'm not proposing she be the one to destroy all these monsters or something, but something redeeming that is as powerful as the moment she had in the climax of FP.

Also. WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Trini is dead in your fanfics?!?!?! I HATE ThAT!! Now, I didn;t read your 1st fanfic, maybe it happened then, or maybe you never mentioned the why's, how's or when's, but if you can bring back that Ranger (I think his name is Merrick), then you can bring back my girl Trini. I like your stories cuz they've brought everyone back to the forefront, including characters you wouldn't expect like TMNT. And it's cool to see you aren't biased on just including good action or story for whichever Rangers are YOUR favorite, but are doing it with ALL the Rangers. But now I see that isn't the case cuz Trini just got dropped like an abstinent prom date. That's the 2nd part of my "prayer":bring back Trini.

Also, I hate that Tom has the Green Ranger's powers but I'm not gonna bitch cuz at least we got the powers back, unlike in FP. By imlication then, this means the Dragonzord's back in action. GOD HEAR MY PLEA'S: Please let this mean the original Dinozord's were recovered too. I know they may be thopught to be inferior by some or many, but not to a person with a creative mind. These were zords with capacties & battle applications that were ignored just cuz writer's in the 90's (sentai & PR) didn't have the kinds of resources we do now, which lead to things like more extensive morph scenes. I don't think we should ignore the contributions of Attack-Tank-Mode, Dragonzord-Battle-Mode, MegaDragonzord, even the Ultrazord, (& in Zyurangers, Daizyujin alone has ridden Titanus/ King Brachion). And if worse comes to worse, they can just "upgrade" them at will to the Thunderzord's, but not before showing just what the Dinozords are capable of.

That's it from me.................for now.
Thx for listening, if you didn't just skip of the shit I was talking about, and I look forward to hearing more from you. (FYI, I recently came across FP so even though I wanted to comment after every episode, it'd already been months too late, that's why I'm taking the opportunity to talk about it now).

[packfan6]

Wow, this is just what I needed, thank you.

Now to reply to it: I don't want to do any spoilers, but you will be happy with what's to come. About Trini, their was a little bit about her death in MMRR. At the time I wanted to respect the actress, so in my fic I had her dead too. With the Tom having the Green Rangers powers, their was a lot in MMRR about Tommy getting the powers from Tom so Jason could use them in the tournament. That's why in episode 1 of C2D2 he was asking Jason about it. Also in MMRR, Jason used his zord in both Dino and Thunder mode. I'm not sure if I'll have something where both can be used at once, or just can switch and switch back.

Next episode probably up tonight

[genesis09]

I can respect that you want to respect Thuy Trang by letting Trini Rest In Peace too but my problem with this is that her real-life death, I know it's selfish & immature, means Trini can never return, effectively, (I'm pretty sure there was no way anyway, but there was hope) washing out my hopes for a MMPR S1 reunion. The thing is, that is why I started reading the fanfics here on RB (started with Bjovel's "The Return", then to your "Forever Pink", now here) was for the oppotunity I won't have again, except by watching my collection of the Original episodes recorded on tape, which is to get to see everyone again,AND to see them do some cool shit. That's why it's a let down not to actually get that, which was something "Forever Pink" made me believe. And Bjovel's "The Return" is on a LONG hiatus (does have Trini) so now I'm here. it's not a record-breaker though. It won't stop me from enjoying the rest of your story, just not as much as I could. It's probably hard enough anyway to write a story with everyone you're putting into this one. Forever Pink dodn't have a line-up like this.

Is there a head-count here? Do you have a number of how many people are involved in C2D2? Just curious.

[packfan6]

Um, for the good guys about 60 rangers, 10 allies for the battle field, 15 mentors/allies. For the bad guys about 15 head villians, 40 generals, 500 monsters/mutents/orgs, and thousands of foot soldiers. I said at the time I wanted to respect the actress, but that doesn't mean no return in C2D2.

[Blue ninja]

oh but this is a good fic packfan6

[genesis09]

great. i'll keep my fingers crossed and assume we can expect the next episode shortly.

[packfan6]

I'll talk at the end of the episode.

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TJ, Justin, Carlos, Ashley, Cassie, the Phantom Ranger and Blue Senturion returned to the Command Center.

"Rangers." said Alex. "You fought well, but your efforts weren't good enough. Now get some sleep, you'll be needed tomorrow."

The rangers started walking to an area where they could sleep until they were stopped by Andros. "Take these." he said with their four space morphers in his hand. "I'll need all the help I can get when Zordon tells us to go into battle." The four rangers took them and then drifted to sleep.

Alex also walked away to a place where he could be alone and watch the fight, but was interupted by Jen.

"Why didn't you yell at them more, they disobayed dirrect orders?" asked Jen.

"They were just doing what they felt is right, can't blame them too much for that." replied Alex.

The remaining rangers stayed up to watch the Lightspeed rangers on the viewing globe.

Carter remained in his Mobile Armor Vehicle and continued to attack the monsters. Carter swooped down and began open fire, but stopped firing when he felt the ship was no longer moving. Carter found vines holding the vehicle in mid air, and then found the vines were from Queen Bansheera.

After a few moments, Queen Bansheera threw the Mobile Armor Vehicle crashing into the ground. Carter quickly got out before he could get damaged, and got back on his Trans Armor Cycle to ride away from Queen Bansheera. Carter was eventually out of site, so he used the cycle as armor. Then he found the monster Liztwin.

Carter started to shoot at Liztwin, which made Liztwin stumble and fall to the ground. Carter continued shooting at it until he shoot the two wheels of the Trans Armor Cycle at Liztwin, destroying him.

Dark clouds began to gather in the sky. Joel and Chad decided to split up in order to find the cause of this. Chad quickly found Spellbinder chanting some words. Chad drew his Rescue Blaster and fired. This stopped Spellbinder's chanting and the clouds started going away.

Chad started firing with his Ice Cannon, but Spellbinder ran away making Chad's shot his a Batling. Chad fired again, this time hitting Spellbinder's feet making him remain. Then Spellbinder started chanting words very quickly. Chad continued to fire the ice cannon until his waist up was covered. Chad fired with his Rescue Blaster once to stop whatever spell was being cast.

Chad finally got out his V Lancer, and destroyed what was left of Spellbinder.

Kelsey and Dana slowly got back up after getting hit by Queen Bansheera, and then ran once Freezard fired a white liquid at them. The two rangers stopped running, and quickly aimed the Rescue Bird at Freezard, but ha to run before they could get a shot off.

Dana decided to distract him, so she started charging with her Rescue Blaster and fired twice. Freezard fired his white liquid again, and Dana threw her Rescue Blaster at the liquid. This made the blaster freeze and fall to the ground. Dana quickly ducked to the ground, and Kelsey fired a shot from the Rescue Bird at Freezard, hitting.

The blast didn't destroy him, so Dana got back up and was ready to distract him again. This time Dana had nothing to throw when Freezard attacked, so she was frozen solid once the white liquid hit her. She was quickly teleported back to the Command Center, and once she was gone Kelsey fired again destroying Freezard.

After seeing the black clouds go away, Joel decided to attack Triskull. Joel also used his Rescue Blaster and fired at the monster. This made Triskull charge Joel.

Triskull fired green blast from his eyes, which Joel blocked with his power cutter. Then Triskull attacked with his sword. Joel blocked that with his cutter too. Joel then used his cutter, and broke the sword in half.

Joel also used hit cutter, and grabbed Triskull. Joel threw him up in the air and watched him fall on the ground. Then Joel finished Triskull off by cutting him in half, sending him back to the Shadow World.

Ryan returned to the battle scene, and found Queen Bansheera preoccupied with the other rangers, so he attacked her with his Titanium Laser in ax mode. She screamed out in pain, and teleported herself and most of her army back to the moon worried she'd get attacked again.

The only monsters left were a pipe monster, Treevil and Whirlin. Within seconds the three grew to huge sizes. The five remaining rangers got out of armor and reunited on the ground.

"Ms. Fairweather, can we use the zords?" asked Carter.

"All of them except the Omega Megazord, but we're running some last minute checks so if it's absolutely necessary you can use it. Also we still think the Lifeforce Megazord is still too dangerous." replied Angela Fairweather.

"Thank you." said Carter. "Lightspeed Megazord, Supertrain Megazord." Then the two Megazords arrived, with Carter and Joel getting in the Lightspeed while Chad and Kelsey went inside the Supertrain.

"Max Solarzord." yelled Ryan.

A purple energy blast came out of the pipe monsters mouth, and hit the Lightspeed Megazord. The Lightspeed Megazord took a few steps forward, and then used it's repeated punch attack until pipe monster fell to the ground. The Lightspeed Megazord then lifted the monster up, swung it around, and threw it back to the ground.

The pipe monster slowly got back up, but was quickly shot back down by the blasters on the side of the arms of the Lightspeed Megazord.

"This is too easy." said Joel. "Lightspeed Megazord Saber." The saber came into the megazords hand, spun around in a circle, and destroyed the pipe monster.

Chad and Kelsey were in the Supertrain Megazord and took on Treevil. The Megazord also took a few steps forward, and punched Treevil making it stumble backwards. Treevil ran at the zord, and tried punching it but was blocked by the leg of the megazord. The Supertrain Megazord put his foot back on the ground, and then used the other one to kick Treevil.

The Supertrain Megazord took a few steps back, and then began using it's gatling blasters, but Treevil just took the energy, and began to fire it back at the megazord. The blast coming from Treevil and the Supertrain started running into each other and began an explosion. With each blast the explosion got bigger and bigger until it reached Treevil, blowing him up. The Supertrain Megazord was able to avoid the explosion.

The Max Solarzord took on the only monster left on the battlefield, Whirlin. Whirlin started the battle by making a tornado and getting inside. The tornado attacked the city until Ryan fired a laser from the arm of the Solarzord. This knocked Whirlin out and destroyed the tornado.

Before Whirlin could create another tornado, Ryan got out his Fire Shield Cannon, and fired at Whirlin. This knocked Whirlin to the ground, and the Max Solarzord charged. When Whirlin got up, Ryan punched Whirlin, and then kicked Whirlin back to the ground. Ryan then transformed the Max Solarzord to shuttle mode.

Ryan flew in the air while Whirlin got back up and into a tornado. Ryan swooped down, and fired inside the tornado, knocking Whirlin out. Then Ryan flew the Max Solarzord into Whirlin, making a huge explosion and destroyed Whirlin.

"Yes, we won." said Kelsey. Then from the sky appeared Olympius and Diabolico grown.

"Not yet." said Chad.

"Rangers." said the voice of Mrs. Fairweather throughout the megazords. "The Omega Megazord is ready for you to use."

"Oh this is so mine." said Joel, as he teleported into the megazord.

Diabolico started the battle by firing a blast from his staff at the Omega Megazord. The blast hit, making the Omega Megazord fall back. Carter started walking towards Diabolico. Diabolico swung his sword at the Lightspeed Megazord.

Carter stopped the attack by grabbing the sword with the zord's arm. Diabolico kicked the Lightspeed Megazord, knocking it to the ground. Diabolico went on to attack the Omega Megazord again, which now had it's staff out. Diabolico attacked with his sword, which was blocked by the Omega Megazord's staff.

Diabolico withdrew his sword just to attack with it again, but was again blocked by the Omega Megazord's staff. Then Diabolico was grabbed by the arms of the Lightspeed Megazord. The Omega Megazord took a few steps back, and then fired his staff at Diabolico, hitting.

Diabolico cried out in pain, and then turned itself around to fire at the Lightspeed Megazord, knocking it to the ground. Then Diabolico charged at the Omega Megazord, swung it's sword three times destroying the megazord. Before it was completely destroyed, Joel teleported back to the Lightspeed Megazord.

The Supertrain Megazord and Max Solarzord teamed up to fight Olympius. First the Supertrain fired it's Gatling Blasters at Olympius who flew up in the air, making the attack miss. The Max Solarzord flew up in the air after it.

Ryan fired at Olympius with his Fire Shield Cannon. Olympius deflected the shot with his hand, and aimed it back at the Supertrain Megazord.

Olympius landed back on the ground, and found himself being fired at by the Supertrain's Gatling Blasters. Olympius got hit by some of it, then fired fire from his hand to start deflecting it. This worked until Ryan also landed, and started firing at Olympius.

Olympius got hit and fell to the ground. This left the two megazords firing at each other. Both zords got slightly damaged, the Supertrain more then the Max Solarzord. Olympius got off the ground, and started flying towards the Supertrain, firing fire from his mouth and hands. This dismantled the Supertrain into 5 zords. Olympius continued firing until the Max Solarzord punched Olympius. Olympius attacked back with his wings, knocking the Max Solarzord down. Olympius finished his attack by burning the 5 zords till each was destroyed.

Chad and Kelsey both teleported to the Lightspeed Megazord before they were killed.

"This is too easy." said Olympius. Then Olympius and Diabolico teleported away. Moments later Elestomp and Gold Beaked Monster appeared grown.

"Ryan." said Carter through his morpher. "Let's work together to destroy them."

"Right." replied Ryan. "Lightspeed Solarzord." The two megazords combined into one. The battle started when Elestomp charged at the megazord, and tried ramming into it. The rangers stopped this by firing the lasers from it's side at Elestomp, knocking it down.

The Gold Beaked Monster then attacked with gold lasers from it's eyes. The rangers stopped that by firing from the arms of the megazord, making a small explosion.

"Come on guys, these were easy, let's finish them." said Joel.

"Okay." said Carter. "Let's give them everything we got." The rangers then fired all their lasers at Elestomp. This quickly destroyed it. The rangers then faced the Gold Beaked Monster who began to run away. The rangers fired again, destroying him.

"Now what?" asked Chad as the Lightspeed Solarzord stood alone. Then a flash from the sky struck the ground, and Olympius and Diabolico reappeared.

"I told you we shouldn't have left." said Diabolico.

"Just get them." replied Olympius. Diabolico charged at the Lightspeed Solarzord with his sword drawn. Before the rangers could attack, Diabolico attacked twice with his sword. Diabolico got out of the way, so the rangers fired at Olympius.

Olympius flew out of the way just in time, and then fired fire from his hand. This caught a small part of the megazord on fire. Olympius then landed by Diabolico a small ways from the rangers.

"Clouds of evil, come to me." yelled Diabolico. Soon the near night sky was covered in black clouds, and it began to rain.

"We can't get any more energy." said Ryan.

"Let's detach, that way we'll still be able to fight." said Carter.

"We have no chance with just the Lightspeed Megazord." said Joel.

"This is are only chance." replied Carter. The megazord soon turned into two, and the Lightspeed Megazord charged. Olympius quickly flew above the zords, and quickly fired some blast at the Max Solarzord, catching it on fire.

"Rangers, your time is up." said Diabolico who fired a blast from his sword at the Lightspeed Megazord, destroying it. Each of the rangers flew out of the ship and landed together on the ground.

"Now what?" asked Kelsey. "We have no zords, they can just destroy the city."

"Lifeforce Megazord." yelled Carter.

"No, it's too dangerous." said Joel.

"It's the only way." replied Carter. The Lifeforce Megazord aroused and the five rangers got in. The rangers charged with the Lifeforce saber in hand. First they attacked Olympius, knocking him back, and then hit Diabolico. "Lifeforce, Level 2."

The rangers attacked both again, this time knocking them to the ground. The zord still wasn't strong enough, so Carter brought it up to Level 3. The zord attacked Olympius again, who flew up in the air.

"Carter, go back down to level 2, we can't handle this." said Chad.

"We have to stay at three." replied Carter, who had the ship charge at Diabolico. Then the cockpit of the ship was hit from a blast from Diabolico's sword, and then fire from Olympius. Sparks flew threw the cockpit, and electricity was flowing throughout the ship and rangers. Soon the rangers were no longer morphed. The ship began to fall as the rangers were attacked again, but before the ship hit down the rangers were teleported back to the command center.

On the viewing globe, everyone watched as the Lifeforce Megazord became completely destroyed, and then Diabolico and Olympius teleported away.

"Rangers." said Zordon. "First you disobeyed me by leaving and fighting, and then disobeyed Captain Mitchell by using the Lifeforce Megazord."

"Rangers, using that nearly killed Dana." said Mrs. Fairweather. "Do you know how dangerous using the Lifeforce Megazord was."

"You are relived of your duties." said Zordon. The five rangers shook their head's, then Joel looked up at Mrs. Fairweather who looked away. "You will be teleported home shortly."

"If they go, I go." said Eric, as he took a few steps towards Zordon. "They were just trying to save their home, everything they've done in their life is there. I don't know why Alex and all these other rangers are treating you as a god, but I see no point in waiting. So when you teleport them, teleport me too."

"I'm leaving too." said Taylor who put her arm around Eric.

"I'd have to go too." said Wes who got up and stood by Eric.

"Me too." said Cole.

"You guys, stop." said Tommy, as he walked to the small group of rangers. "Leaving won't accomplish anything. To stop the forces of evil, we have to work together." Then Tommy turned to Zordon. "But Zordon, you can't let them go. If you told Jason and the gang to not fight me because they weren't completely ready, then the world would've been destroyed years ago. Zordon, they just want to help, let them stay."

"Okay." said Zordon. "You all may stay." Then Zordon closed his eyes, and held his head low.

"Hey Zordon." said Eric, then he waited for Zordon to look at him. "Thank you."

-

Just so everyone knows, the next episodes aren't going to be 2 parters with a big fight then powers destroyed. Next episode up hopefully in the next week. Please please please tell me what you think.

[Blue ninja]

that's one hell of an episode!

[bjlovel]

Wasn;t a bad eps at all. I just hate how the megazords were easily defeated

[packfan6]

Wasn;t a bad eps at all. I just hate how the megazords were easily defeated

Well, in Lightspeed Diabolico and Olympius powered up were able to destroy the zords, so I was trying to keep it fairly acurate.

Anyone else please reply?

[genesis09]

I liked this episode too. The zord fights are really short, and monsters and zords get destroyed pretty easily, which I don't mind at all cuz I don't know anyone that's been in these fights so far, but it does scare me a little that the trend will be followed when you get to MMPR. I just picture fights being more knock-down-drag-out before they get to a point where a monster actually destroys a zord, especially with lasers and stuff. It'd be a different though if, for example, a monster were to physcially dismantle a megazord and then crush them which would be awesome to see/ read.

[packfan6]

Sorry for the short zord battle. Also I did say the trend with how the episodes are going is stopping, so you'll be getting something very different with MMPR.

[Apollo]

I have been on a few weeks holiday and i haven't really kept up with this fic, but it's still going as strong as ever and i like how they stood up to Zordon.

[packfan6]

yey, glad to see you liked it Gold Zeo.

[packfan6]

Next episode up once I finish writing and editing it.

Anyone else want to reply?

[genesis09]

In retrospect all the Zord destructions I've seen weren't very long fights. With the exception of GwE, all the other Zord destructions weren't very monumental, save for the results. They were just typical zord battles where the Rangers would lose.

[genesis09]

Also, I don't like that these Rangers are getting away with talking to Zordon like this. Not that the problem is the writer, more like with the characters. I just see Zordon as wise & all knowing, and that he should be able to have the last word and always put people in their place. But you could still have Rangers oppose him despite having the last word. I know you can't just have everyone follow his rule, otherwise their would be no action until Zordon commanded it, despite the attacks made by Bansheera & Divatox.

[ranger fan 9000]

hey sorry i haven't replied in a while been a little busy but great story. i love it. keep it coming

[packfan6]

Diabolico and Olympius returned to the main room of Zedd's base on the moon.

"We have destroyed the rangers zords and their powers." reported Diabolico.

"Good work." replied Lord Zedd. "Tomorrow we will have an all out attack. Astronema and Trakeena, you will lead your army's and attack the planet of Eltar."

"I do not wish to fight out on the battlefield. I know Ecliptor is perfectly capable of leading my army." said Astronema.

"Okay, you may stay here during the battle." said Zedd. "Ransik-."

Zedd was interrupted by Ecliptor who was teleported into the room. "Ecliptor, tomorrow you will lead my army in the destruction of Eltar." said Astronema.

"Lord Zedd, if she gets a general in here so do we." said King Mondo.

"Fine." said Zedd. "You may all have a general in here to discuss strategy and what not." Then under his breath, Zedd mumbled "I need Goldar to get some work in here anyway."

Within a minute, Goldar, Klank and Orbus, Rygog, Villamax, Diabolico, Frax and Zurgene were teleported into the room.

"One second." said Ransik as he pulled a sword from his leg. "Frax, do you have any information on what it's like being human."

"I am a robot, I have no information on being human." replied Frax.

"Good." said Ransik. "Continue Lord Zedd."

"Ecliptor, your army will be accompanied by Divatox and Queen Bansheera's army's." said Lord Zedd.

"Rygog, Villamax and Diabolico, let's talk." said Ecliptor. The four went to a corner of the room.

"King Mondo, our army's will be attacking Angel Grove." said Zedd. "Ransik, your army of mutants and orgs will attack Silver Hills or Turtle Cove, I don't care which. Finally Lothor, you will be attacking Blue Bay Harbor. Now everyone get some sleep, in one day from now their will be new rulers of the galaxy."

Rito arrived and helped Goldar clean the place up while Rita and Zedd got some sleep. King Mondo and Queen Machina turned themselves off for the night. Divatox, Astronema, Ransik, Vypra and Queen Bansheera fell asleep.

All of the generals teleported away except Ecliptor, and Villamax who helped Trakeena get Scorpius to a good sleeping position. Once Scorpius was in a good position, he fell asleep and so did Trakeena.

"What are you doing here?" whispered Villamax to Ecliptor.

"Protecting my queen." replied Ecliptor. "What are you doing here?"

"Protecting Scorpius and Trakeena." said Villamax. After two hours, Villamax started walking around.

"What are you doing?" questioned Ecliptor.

"Be quiet, you wouldn't want to wake your queen." replied Villamax. Soon Villamax was out of Ecliptors site because of how dark the room was. Villamax soon found Lothor, so Villamax knelled down by him. Villamax then grabbed the green Samurai amulet which was around Lothor's neck, and pulled. This broke the neck-less that the amulet was on, and now the amulet was in his hand.

"What are you doing?" asked Lothor still half asleep. "No, the amulet." he yelled seeing it in Villamax's hand. Then he fired a blast from his hand at Villamax, but he teleported away before it hit.

Villamax landed in the sands very near the Command Center.

Inside the Command Center, most everyone was asleep. Someone who wasn't was Cam who was working on the morphers. The alarms went storming through the Command Center. On the viewing screen came Villamax.

"The amulet!" yelled Cam. Cam quickly got up, ran out of the Command Center and Ninja streaked to Villamax. "Give me the amulet."

"Here." said Villamax as he reached his hand out with the amulet in it. Cam snatched it, and smiled.

"Thank you." said Cam. "Why are you doing this?" asked Cam confused at how easily he got his amulet back.

"The spell brought evil back to those who died during Zordon's death, and many returned to evil because of this opportunity, but I refuse to turn to evil." said Villamax. "I tried taking more from them but this is all I could get."

"It will be very helpful." said Cam. Then Villamax fell to the ground.

"I think you have something that belongs to me." said Lothor. Trakeena also arrived.

"Get him." yelled Trakeena. Trakeena and Lothor charged. Lothor fired a blast from his hand at Villamax who was getting up. Cam jumped in the way, and the amulet sent a green beam to stop Lothor's blast.

"Samurai Storm, Ranger Form." yelled Cam. Cam morphed into the Green Samurai Ranger, but before he completely morphed, five beams of light came out of the amulet and went towards the Command Center.

Lothor charged at Cam, and started by kicking him. Cam quickly pulled his Samurai Saber, and blocked the kick. Lothor lowered his head, and swung his hair. Cam did a back flip to get out of the way.

"Zordon, teleport us to the Command Center." said Cam.

"Monsters can't enter the Command Center, I will teleport you to Ninja Ops for Villamax safety." said Zordon. Then Cam and Villamax were teleported. After Lothor had attacked Ninja Ops, Cam and Sensei rebuilt it.

"I'm so tired." said Villamax.

"Get some sleep, I'll keep in eye on things." said Cam. Within an hour, Lothor arrived.

"Give me the amulet back!" yelled Lothor.

"Never." replied Cam, who morphed and charged. Lothor fired an energy blast at Cam, making him fly backwards. Then Cam fired at various things at the base, including a shelf which fell on Villamax. "No!" yelled Cam.

Cam went towards Villamax, and tried lifting the shelf. "I don't think so." said Lothor, who kicked Cam in the chest. Cam fell backwards making the shelf fall back on Villamax. Lothor fired more blast from his hands at the ceiling. This started a cave in.

"See you later." said Lothor as he teleported away. Cam quickly got back up and pushed the shelf off Villamax. Cam got Villamax in his arms, and started running. The cave in started getting worse.

"Let me off so you can survive." said Villamax.

"No." said Cam. "I can save you."

"I don't want to be saved." replied Villamax, who struggled to get out of Cam's arms. He fell out. "Go!" yelled Villamax. Cam turned around and ran out of the cave. Ninja Ops completely caved in as Cam got out. Cam returned to the Command Center, and tried to sleep.

Blake was unable to sleep, so he quietly got up and exited the Command Center. Outside he saw Tori sitting down, gazing at the stars.

"What are you doing, shouldn't you be sleeping?" asked Blake.

"I couldn't sleep." replied Tori.

"Me too." said Blake who sat down by Tori. Blake looked for what to say while he staired at Tori stairing at the stars. "Whats going through your head?" asked Blake.

"I'm just a little afraid." said Tori. "After watching what happened to the other rangers."

"Don't worry, I'll be here to save you." replied Blake as he put his arm around Tori. "Come on, let's get back inside, we need to save our energy." Blake got up, and then helped Tori up. The two got into the Command Center and eventually fell asleep.

All of the rangers were awoken to an alarm. On the viewing globe was Lothor, Zurgene, Choobo, Vexacus, Shimazu and Motodrone.

"Zordon, can we go now that we have our powers?" asked Shane.

"Yes, go." said Zordon. The six Ninja Storm rangers, Marah, Kapri and the ninja students Ninja Streaked to the monsters.

"Your party's over." yelled Shane.

"I think it's just begun." said Lothor. Lothor raised his arms, and his army of monsters and Kelzacks arrived. Then Lothor teleported away.

"Ready guys?" asked Shane. The other rangers nodded.

"Ninja Storm, Ranger Form." yelled the eight rangers who all morphed. Marah morphed to the purple wind ranger and Kapri morphed to the orange wind ranger.

Dustin got on his Tsunami Cycle, and charged. Dustin ran the cycle into a Kelzack, and stopped the cycle. Dustin took his Ninja Sword off his back, and jumped up in the air. Dustin landed his feet on the seat of his cycle.

Dustin knelled down, and used his sword to hit many Kelzacks. Dustin then jumped off his cycle, and dug into the ground. Dustin went under the ground for awhile, and then came flying back up, hitting two more Kelzacks.

Dustin put the Ninja Sword back on his back, and pulled out his Lion Hammer. Dustin hit it to the ground, and some Kelzacks flew up, as did Goldwinger. Dustin charged at Goldwinger, and while he charged turned into two yellow rangers. The first one hit Goldwinger with the Lion Hammer. Goldwinger tried attacking back, but the first one jumped in the air. The second one took advantage of Goldwingers missed attacked, and attacked Goldwinger again.

The first Dustin landed, and gave Goldwinger a third hit with the Lion Hammer knocking it to the ground. Both Dustin's attacked one more time, both hitting and destroying Goldwinger.

Hunter got out his Crimson Blaster, and fired at one Kelzack. A bunch of Kelzacks charged at Hunter, but Hunter started shooting them down one by one. Then Hunter found Motodrone, so Hunter charged.

When Hunter was close enough, he fired at Motodrone, hitting him. Motodrone quickly got on his cycle, and charged at Hunter.

"Ninja Glider Cycle." yelled Hunter. Hunter pulled his Thunder Staff off his back, and rode towards Motodrone. Both cycles fired at each other until they were side by side. At this point they both hit each other with their swords. Hunter then decided he didn't want to fight Motodrone yet.

Hunter put his cycle in flight mode, and found Bald Loser. Bald Loser fired a shot at Hunter who dodged it. Hunter swooped down on his glider, and hit Bald Loser with his Thunder staff.. Hunter flew back up in the air, and did an all out attack, firing a large beam of energy at Bald Loser. This almost destroyed him, so Hunter went back down for the kill with his Thunder Staff.

Tori got out her Laser Blaster, and began firing it at a few Kelzacks. Like Hunter, the Kelzacks began attacking her. When this happened Tori changed her blaster to a Ninja Sword, and blocked the Kelzacks attack.

The Kelzacks tried punching her, but Tori used her Ninja Sword to knock them all back. Tori ran to the beach which wasn't to far, and the Kelzacks followed. Tori used her power of water to make a huge wave attack the Kelzacks, destroying them.

Tori got out her Sonic Fin, aimed it at Morty Board, and screamed into it. This made Morty Board fly up into the air, and then land on his face. Morty Board quickly got back up, and charged at Tori. Morty attacked with a sword, but Tori blocked it with her Ninja Sword. Then Tori used her power of water again, and made a wave that took Morty Board in.

Tori used her Sonic Fin again to raise Morty Board just to lower him again in deeper water, eventually drowning him.

"What do we do?" asked Kapri. "We can't stop a monster like them."

"Let's just get some Kelzacks, they weren't that hard, remember?" replied Marah.

"Please, you can't remember what you had for breakfast." said Kapri. Then they found Kelzacks were attacking them. They both got out their Ninja Swords to defend. Marah kicked a Kelzack in front of her away, and then punched the other. She then saved her sister by knocking the other two Kelzack's down with her Ninja Sword.

Quickly Choobo arrived, and fired a small blast at Marah and Kapri. Marah got out her Cow Axe while Kapri got her Bear Baton, and both charged. Marah hit Choobo first with her ax, and then Kapri hit with her baton.

Shane quickly pulled his Hawk Blaster, and shot Kelzacks down one by one. Only one Kelzack was able to get close to Shane, but once the Kelzack was within striking distance it was shot down.

Shane was soon confronted by Vexacus, who shot a laser from his sword at Shane, knocking him down. Shane quickly transformed his morpher to his battlizer and then received Battlizer Armor. Vexacus attacked Shane again with his sword, but Shane blocked it with his arm. Then Shane tried kicking Vexacus who blocked it by knocking it down with his arm. Vexacus tried attacking with his sword again, but Shane grabbed Vexacus arm, and then kicked the sword out of it.

Vexacus ran to his sword while Shane went into flight mode. Shane powered up his ultimate attack while Vexacus retrieved his sword. Shane fired, but Vexacus got out of the way in the last second. The blast instead hit Footzilla.

Footzilla wasn't quiet destroyed, so Shane flew down to him, and used his shield to knock Footzilla down destroying him.

Cam pulled out his Samurai Saber and attacked various Kelzacks and monsters. He made each swing as if it was his last, and improved the strength after each one. Cam was determined to get revenge.

Even though the rangers ended up stopping Lothor a few months ago, he still always felt he lost because he lost his mothers amulet. Then the amulet was handed back to him, but the Innocent creature that gave it back was destroyed, and Cam was going to stop at nothing to get revenge on Lothor.

Even though Cam knew it was overkill, Cam decided to get in the Dragonforce Vehicle. After Cam got in and began his attack, he realized other Innocent people might get killed if he does this recklessly. Cam swooped down with the vehicle, and then got Eyezak in the vehicles mouth. Cam slowly closed the mouth of the vehicle, destroying Eyezak. Cam flew the ship back in the air and prepared his next attack.

Blake led the rest of the Ninja students into battle on his Tsunami Cycle. Blake shot at a few Kelzacks and monsters while on his cycle until Blake flew off it from a blast from another monster.

Blake landed on his back near by. Blake tried to get back up, but was knocked back down by Mad Magnet. Blake eventually was able to get himself back up. He tried pulling his Thunder Staff off his back, but was pushed around too much to get it. Blake then got out his Navy Antlers, but it was kicked away from a monster.

"Blake, catch." yelled a voice of another ninja. Thrown to Blake was a Thunder Blade. The monsters got out of the way, and Blake was able to catch it. Blake then used it to knock down several of the monsters by him. Blake knew the instant he caught it that it belonged to Leanne.

"Take it back." yelled Blake, as he threw it back to Leanne. Blake then got his Thunder Blade out, and ran to Leanne. On his way he got his Navy Antlers. "How long have you been back with us?" asked Blake.

"After I heard what you did I went back to school to help the others train." replied Leanne as she knocked a Kelzack down. Then Leanne grabbed Blake's Thunder Blade, and combined it with her own to form in X. She then threw it at Inflatron destroying him.

Then threw the six main rangers heads was a voice. "One is stronger then six." The six rangers reunited, and knew to combine their weapons. They did this, and fired at Cataonia. This destroyed the monster, and charged up the blaster again. A few monsters came to attack the rangers, but they were able to fire and destroy Chin Dragon before they could get to the weapon. Once Chin Dragon was destroyed, the monsters attacked, so the rangers separated their weapons.

"Remember, they world needs us now." said Shane to the other rangers.

-

Grr, school starting soon, so hopefully I'll keep the episode's up once a week. Also next episode is not a NS episode.

[wildranger]

keep it up this very good

[bjlovel]

this one wasn't your best one, but it was fine

[packfan6]

this one wasn't your best one, but it was fine

What made it not as good as some of the others?

[genesis09]

I don't think there was too much of a difference between this story & others. It was little bit more rushed, which isn't too bad because each of the chapter's aren't too long so we would end up having to sit thru a chapter of drama before we saw some action if this weren't the case. I was also kind of glad there was no Zord battle here they kind of get repetitious--Ranger calls Zord, Zord is destroyed, new team of monsters arrive & new Ranger team arrives to battle them, Rangers call Zords, Zords are destroyed--which also wouldn't be bad but I have only seen MMPR so I have no I idea what's going on when all these megazords appear. This is really my problem & not the stories.

Actually, everything seems to be working in the same realm of all the others. i was especially glad to hear Lord Zedd talk about getting Goldar to work, like he wants him more involved. I can't wait to see Goldar go into battle, and what you do with him. You have my stamp of approval on this episode as well, just like the others.

[bjlovel]

i can't think of anything, it just didn't seem to me like it was the best one

[packfan6]

Meh, Ninja Storm hater!(jk)

Also genesis, MMPR including Goldar will have a bigger role in the future.

Anyone else like to reply?

[packfan6]

Arg, guess not

[genesis09]

Meh, Ninja Storm hater!(jk)

Also genesis, MMPR including Goldar will have a bigger role in the future.

Anyone else like to reply?

cOOL. I won't read a fanfic that doesn't involve MMPR in some way, & the few that do manage to include MMPR but not as anything really special. This is a problem cuz that's how the show was done. It's the least developed of all the seasons since it was 1st at bat, so I'm looking forward to seeing how you can make them compete on par with the newer, allegedly "better" teams, which I think they're capable of. The show was only hindered by it's own "newness" & the times (earliy 90's, might've well been the 80's still).

I was wondering though if you knew how the story is gonna end or if you make it all up as you go along? I'm confused cuz the varying amounts of times between your posts suggests you write them as thy go along, but the chapters are very fluid & play off eachother really, with one leading to the other to the next & so on, each promoting a trend along the plot that makes the story seem like it's already been brainstormed, written, signed & sealed.

[comicstar100]

Pack you might want to make sure and put try and put the feeling of things just totally crashing down around the rangers. So far the story has just been a few battles which is fine but keep in mind c2d had planets being captured and the people of earth in ruins with the rangers among them. Make sure your battles have a major impact is what I'm trying to say. I loved picturing Marah as the purple ranger again I'm glad you included her. This fight was one of my favorites so far keep it coming. :D

[packfan6]

Glad you liked it guys. This whole 'school' thing is really taking up some time, and then the whole going out for the school play is going to take up more, so I really don't know when the next episode will be up.

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