Power Rangers Maximum Speed

[Maximum Ranger]

When the evil villian known as
Vinatex is unleashed from his
temple. Five warriors are the
only hope for the Earth's survival.
They'll have to use all the arsenals
and zords and more to defeat this
evil, will they succeed and save
the Earth?

Ranger Bios, are on their way right now, going to work on them right now.

[Splush]

A bit shallow.

[Maximum Ranger]

A bit shallow.

What?

[Maximum Ranger]

Edit: Sorry, double post by accident.

[Green Senturion]

A bit shallow.

I agree. What he means, Max, is that your description is very bland. Evil villain, fast zords...so far nothing special. Make your description more INTERESTING. Make us want to read MORE. Good luck! :023:

[Maximum Ranger]

I agree. What he means, Max, is that your description is very bland. Evil villain, fast zords...so far nothing special. Make your description more INTERESTING. Make us want to read MORE. Good luck! :023:

Alright, thanks for your opinions.

[Maximum Ranger]

I changed the storyline. Will have the ranger bios etc. up soon.

[Green Senturion]

When the evil villian known as
Vinatex is unleashed from his
temple. Five warriors are the
only hope for the Earth's survival.
They'll have to use all the arsenals
and zords and more to defeat this
evil, will they succeed and save
the Earth?


Ranger Bios, are on their way right now, going to work on them right now.

So the villain has a name and came out of a temple. The Rangers will use weapons. I still don't see what makes your series unique. It doesn't sound that interesting--why should I read it? You need to use more specifics, or else your fanfic will sound just like anyone else's and no one will want to read it. Make your description more interesting and make us WANT to read more.

[Maximum Ranger]

Do you know where I can read a storyline, to figure out my problem, what I'm doing with my storyline, because I'm very confused, sorry if you think I'm a idiot for that, but I'm new to this fanfic stuff you know?

[Green Senturion]

Do you know where I can read a storyline, to figure out my problem, what I'm doing with my storyline, because I'm very confused, sorry if you think I'm a idiot for that, but I'm new to this fanfic stuff you know?

Hmm...well, look at what Power Rangers does every year. The producers release a sheet explaining what the series is about and who the stars will be. Your problem is that the information you've released is very vague. Who is the villain, and why is he evil? Who are the rangers, and what kind of powers will they use? Who is their mentor? We want interesting SPECIFICS so that we are tempted to read your fic. I hope I've helped. Good luck!

[Maximum Ranger]

Alright, I jsut thought you all just wanted a quick storyline, but now I know, you've helped alot, thank you.