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bjlovel
06-27-2004, 02:18 PM
I decided to work on this story as well as my Stratic Assault fic. I will focuse more on this then Stratic Assault. I hope you like this. It is the first chapter of many to come as the rangers reunite with each other again.
bjlovel
06-27-2004, 02:21 PM
"Man, I can't wait to see them all again,"said Katherine Oliver
"I know what you mean,"replied Thomas Oliver,"It's been way too long,"
"Can I get you guys anything else to drink?" asked Ernie
"No thanks, we're fine for now,"replied Kat
The Juice Bar was busier then ever since Adele and Ernie joined forces. Both of them have franchised the Bar all across the west coast. Adele was off in Seattle setting up a new place their
"Hey, Tommy, Kat!" yelled a girl with a couple of boys coming through the Juice Bar opening
"Adam, Rocky, Aisha, it's good to see you guys again," said Tommy. He couldn't help but smile
"It has been far too long," said Kat
"It has hasn't it," said Aisha
"So when is Jason, Zack, and them gonna show up?" asked Adam
"Well from what I know, Jason and Zack are gonna pick up Kim at the airport, and Trini is going to meet Billy as he comes in from Aquatar," said Tommy
"Billy has probably turned into an alien by now," said Rocky
"Rocky," said Kat hitting him lightly on the shoulder as everyone laughed.
***
"So Jase, when is Kim's uncle flying her back?" asked Zack Taylor
"They left about 2 days ago so they should be here anytime," replied Jason Scott
As he said that a plane was landing on the runway. As it came to a stop, a girl in her late 20's stepped out
"Man, is she as beutiful as ever," said Zack
"Yeah, she is, hey wait" said Jason as he and Zack started to walk towards Kimberly Hart
"Jason, Zack, it is so good to see you again," said Kim
She walked up to both of them and hugged them as they hugged her back
"C'mon where gonna be late," said Zack
The three of them got into Zack's black convertable and started driving
"So Zach, how did you afford to get this car?" asked Kim
"Let's just say being a choreographer pays off. Especially when your clients are JT and Usher," repleid Zack
As they were driving past the park Kim noticed a group of men beating up on somebody
"Jason look," pointed Kim
"We gotta help that person," said Jason
Zack pulls over the car and the 3 of them get out
"Hey, mind if we join the party," said Zack
The group of men left the person an surrounded them. Out of nowhere the men turn into super z-putties.
"What," said Kim"How?"
"I don't know, but they are not wanted here, let's go guys," said Jason
As that said a puttie jumps between the 3 of them and they split up.
Jason hook punches 2 of the putties then does aflying sidekick to another making it land on 3 putties. He does a front kick, then a back kick to putties. He jumps in the air and does a split knocking down 2 more putties.
Zack does a couple dance moves and hits 2 putties in the process. He then sidekicks a putties in the Z makeing it explode. He spins around on the ground a trips a few more putties. He then does a round-house kick knocking 2 more down. He blocks upward of a punch from a puttie and punches it in the Z causing it to explode.
A puttie swings a right hook at Kim. She blocks it and punches it in the Z and it explodes. Another one came flying at her, so she does a back hand spring and kicks the puttie as it flies over her. She them grabes another puttie and flips it over and punches it in the Z. A kick to her back knockes her down to the ground. As a swings at the fallen down Kimberly a women comes around and kicks the puttie 5 times in the stomach and then slams her foot on the back of the puttie.
Jason and Zack regroup by Kim and the young Asian women
"Trini, I can't believe it is you," said kim
"In the flesh," responds Trini
The putties the desenagrate in front of them
"What happened?" asked Zack
"So how do you guys like my new desenagrater," said Billy
The others went up and hugged him
"Hey, when did you get back here?" asked Jason
"A few hours ago. Something bad is happening here on Earth. I have to get to the others as soon as possible," said Billy
"Sure, It will be a tight sqeeze, but I think we all can fit in my car," said Zack
With that said everbody got in Zack's car and drove off.
***
"So ranger's, how do you like my new putties," said a man that was purple and was made of ooze.
"Ivan, what is your next step to reviving your empire," asked a women that look like a scorpian
"That is none of your concern, Scorpina," said Ivan Ooze
***
"So Tommy what have you done since you left?" asked Rocky
"Well I went to collage and met a girl named Haley. She was a certified Genius. I studied Palentolagy. I was asked to go on a dig with and professor of Palentolagy Dr. Anton Mercer,"
"Whoever would of thought Tommy boy would have gone to collage," said Aisha
"Yeah, I thought you were going to go race for your Uncle," said Adam
"I was going to after, but what I found changed my life in a way," said Tommy
"Don't keep them in suspens, Tommy," said Kat
"Okay, okay. Well during that dig I found 3 gems. I felt like they had a power to them. I showed Dr.Mercer them, and for a while both of us studied them. We decided to try and make Tyarannodrones to help people and to have them harness the power of the gems. But I later found out the Dr. Mercer wanted to take the gem's powers for himself. So one night he asked me to close up the laboratory for him. As I was closing I decided to take the gem's to make sure he didn't use the power. As I was leaving the tyarannodrones attacked me, led by their evil leader Mesagog, who wanted to turn the Earth back to the prehistoric age,"
"So now what happend," said Rocky
"Well, I just back back from the mission codenamed Forever Red,"
"How come nobody called me?" asked Rocky.
"Well remember, you gave the tyranosauras coin back to Jason and your Ninja Coin were destroyed," said Kat
"Oh, yeah, sorry,"
"Can we get back to the story please," said Aisha
"After Forever Red I gave my morpher back to Billy. The Island exploded and all that but I made it to safty. I later then met up with Hayley and told her about the Rangers. She said she could harness the gem's powers into 3 new morphers. So she did. I then bought a house and built a secret underground lair for me to study the gems. Kat and I wanted to move to the house in Reefside, but at the last second her sister in Australia had a baby, so Kat went out to see her,"
"Congratulations Kat," said Aisha
"Thanks," replied Kat
"Stop talking so Tommy can get back to the story," said Rocky
"Since Kat went to Ausralia, I decided to move to Reefside and just have Kat meet me there when she gets back. I later became a teacher at Reefside. My first day I had detention duty. I took the 3 kids to a museam because I had to check something out. The 3 went off alone and found the entrance to my lair and took the Gems. I decided to call them Dino Gems. I later found out who the kids were and decided to make them power rangers so they could defend Reefside from Mesagog. The kids names were Conner Mcknight, The Red Dino Thunder Ranger, Kra Ford, The Yellow Dino Thunder Ranger, and Ethan James, The Blue Dino Thunder Ranger."
"I heard about that kid Conner. He is supposedly as good as Freddy Adoo, but never tried out for a professional team," said Adam
"Yeah, Conner had skills in Soccer that made him Captain of his High School Team, which made him prefect to become the red ranger. Mesagog later found another Dino Gem, but I took it from him and you guys will probably never guess what happened. I became the Black Dino Thunder Ranger,"
"Whoa, you became a ranger again," said Aisha
''Black huh. I like it," said Adam
"It is going to be hard to imagine you in all black clothes," said Rocky
"Well let me continue with my story. After a couple of battles an evil White Ranger started to attack us. He was powerful. He later after alot of battles he joined our side. We weakend Mesagog and that is why I am here. To take a vacation from fighting.
"Wow, that was a story," said Adam
"Kat, now it is your turn," said Rocky
''Well I," That's all Kat got out before Billy, Jason, Trini, Kim, and Zack came running in
"Guys, we need to get to the command center," said Billy
"Why Billy what's wrong?" asked Kat
"Something weird is happening. I will explain it to you once we get there," said Billy
"Ah, Billy, the Command Center has been destroyed," said Adam
"It was, but I helped Dimitria build a new one,"
"In that case let's go guys," said Tommy
They all got up and left to go to the Command Center
***
"Scorpina, how is the reasurrecting process going?" asked Ivan Ooze
"Better then we expected. The rangers won't know what hit them," said Scorpina
"Excellent. With all the masters of Evil returning, I will rule once more," said Ivan
He walked over to 5 people tied up in chains
"You will never get away with this Ooze. The rangers will find a way to defeat you," said the person who was former Evil Warlord Zedd
"I will never turn evil again, no matter how hard you try," said the former Pink Galaxy ranger and Monarch of Evil
"Oh, but you will, and when you will, you will work for me," said Ivan
He blasted ooze over their mouths
"Ivan, this plan of yours better work," said a creature that had a dinosaur shape of a head
"Don't worry Mesagog, everything will work out perfectly,"
To Be Continued...
Souds good so far. I like it when people use the orignal rangers. Keep it up.
greenranger22
06-27-2004, 07:32 PM
yea write some more
Splush
06-27-2004, 08:19 PM
yea write some more
You’re so annoying. It is so obvious gr22 and you are the same person, at least change the name around a little bit. Every story you read you reply twice with your two names...why? :confused:
I am not greenranger22. I do not know who they or why they copied my name, but they are ticking me off. I was sincere in liking the fic.
Zord_Crazy
06-27-2004, 08:36 PM
Good stuff. I am loving it. :007: :023: :088:
I guess he/she actully joined 3 days before me, but we are not the same person. I chose my name because green is my favorite color and made it gr to be short. I assure you that we are not the same person though. They have a lot more posts than me because half of the time my computer does not work so I can't post all that often.
bjlovel
06-28-2004, 12:38 AM
Please send me feedback.
The gang arrives at the command center. Everything looks the same as it did before Divatox attacked.
"Billy, so what is so urgent that we had to rush here?" asked Tommy
"Yeah, Billy, what's up," said Rocky
"I just returned from the planet Eltar. I was told that Ivan Ooze has been reasurrected by and Evil Warloard here on Earth," said Billy
"Wait, who is this Ivan Ooze," said Jason
"He sounds like he is disgusting," Kim commented
"Of course I didn't expect you guys to remember. In 1995, we got our Ninja powrs from Ninjor, well from what I found out we already had the power in us,"
"What do you mean Billy?" asked Adam
"Well just before we got our powers, Ivan escaped from his chamber and destroyed the command center and our powers. We were sent on a quest to get the secret power of the ninjettii. We got the power and defeated Ivan Ooze by throwing him in the path of Haley's Comet. With the destruction of Ivan, anybody who even knew about him, their memories were erased. That includes ours," explained Billy
"But we saw our powers destroyed by Rito," said Aisha
"Well when Ivan was destroyed, our powers returned to us," answered Billy
"Who would reasurrect this Ivan Ooze guy?" asked Zack
"Mesagog, no doubt" said Tommy
"How are we suppose to beat this guy?" asked Trini
"With our powers,"
"How though, our powers were destroyed when Master Vile turned us into children along with the zords. And not to mention the coins were destroyed by Goldar," said Rocky
"I convinced Ninjor to create the power over again. He did so, just he wasn't able to do the zords," said Billy,"Here are your morphers and coins,"
Billy handed Aisha, Rocky, Adam, Kat, and Tommy the morphers and coins
"Trini, here, I want you to take back the Sabertooth Tiger coin," said Aisha
''Wow, never thought I would see this thing again," said Trini taking the morpher
"Zack, I believe this belongs to you,'' said Adam as he gave Zack the morpher and Mastodan coin.
"Thanks," said Zack
"Zack, Jason, Trini, Kim, put your morphers into this device. It will restore the power temporairly," said Billy
They put their coins in the machine including Billy's and with a flash of light the rangers put their conins back into their morphers
"Now we all have our powers back, now what?" asked Jason
"I also have some other morphers I think you guys are gonna want," said Billy. He pressed a few buttons on the panel and a silver breifcase appeared
He opened it and showed the rangers what were inside
"The Zeo morphers, I can't believe it," exclaimed Kat
Tommy reached down and grabbed his. Rocky, Kat, and Adam did the same thing
"What about Tanya's?" asked Kat
"Who's, mine," said a Tanya as she wlked through the door
"Tanya!" yelled Kat. She went and hugged her
After they finished hugging she went over and took her morpher
"I believe this is mine," said Tanya
"How did you know?" asked Aisha
"Billy called me up and told me to come here as quickly as I could," explaind Tanya
"Now that were all here can we get back to stopping Ivan," said Jason
''First move we have to do is contact the other ranger teams. Let them know what is going on," said Billy
"Why can't we just take care of Ivan?" asked Rocky
"Because they have histroy with the Warloards that are being reasurrected,"
"Wait, do you mean like Rita and Zedd," said Kim
"Yeah, including Divatox, Astronema, and Ransik,"
"Who is Ransik?'' asked Adam
"Ransik was a mutant that Time Force handled and turned good,"
"Now Ivan and Mesagog are trying to turn them Evil again,'' said Tommy
"Exactly," said Billy," Now we must warn the other ranger teams,"
***
"No the rangers know the plan to soon," said Ivan
"Is there a problem," asked Scorpina
"Send down Prince Gasket to distract the rangers," commanded Ivan
"Yes my lord," responded Scorpina
"This plan is falling apart," said Mesagog
"Don't worry about it," said Ivan,"The plan has just been delayed for a while. I will still follow through,"
"You better," said Mesagog
***
Alarms start blaring
"Those things will never get old," said Rocky
"Guys, Prince Gasket is attacking the city," said Billy
"So it has started," stated Tommy,"The Zeo Rangers will handle this. You guys contact the other rangers,"
"Right, be careful bro," said Jason
Tommy nodded and then said a famous saying.
"It's Morphing Time,"
"Zeo Ranger 1 Pink," said Kat
"Zeo Ranger 2 Yellow," said Tanya
"Zeo Ranger 3 Blue," said Rocky
"Zeo Ranger 4 Green," said Adam
"Zeo Ranger 5 Red," said Tommy
***
"Hold it right there, Gasket," said Zeo Red
"Ahh, Power Rangers, it has been a while, but this time I will win," said Gasket
"Thats, what you think," responded Zeo Red
The rangers and gasket run at eachother. Zeo Blue round house kicked him but was back handed. Zeo Pink punches him but gets thrown over Gasket's back and lands on the ground. Zeo Yellow goes in to punche him too, but she gets hook punched to the ground. Zeo Green front kicks him but gets blocked and kicked in the stomach. Zeo Red did a half crescent kick but his leg was caught. Gasket spun him around and through him into a building. The others rush over to Zeo Red.
"Man, he is tougher then last time," stated Zeo Green
"C'mon guys, we can still beat him,' said Zeo Blue
Zeo Blue runs in towards Gasket. Gasket goes to punch him but he blocks it and kicked him 4 times in the gut and then runs up his body and spins around kicking him backwards. He then takes out his Zeo blaster and blast Gasket backwards.
"Zeo Flying Power Kick!" said Zeo Red. He did a jump Kick . As he was in the air his foot lit up and hit Gasket knocking him down.
"Zeo Cannon!"shouted Zeo Red
"Ready,"
"Ready" they all said
"Fire,"
The energy blast hit Gasket. He fell down and exploded
***
"That gave me enought time to reassurect Trakeena and turned Divatox back into Divatox" said Scorpina
"Good, bring them here," said Ivan
Trakeena and Divatox walked into the room
"Ivan Ooze, thank you for giving me life again," said Trakeena
"Please, he did nothing, but use a simple spell that was created to reasurrect people," said Divatox
"Please, my lovly ladies go in to your rooms. I made them from what I know of you," said Ivan
"Hmph," said Divatox as she walked away
Mesagog walks into the room and accidently knocks into Trakeena
"Hey, watch it Fish Face," said Trakeena
"I'm a dinosaur, you insect," responded Mesagog
Trakeena just continued walking
"Quite an attitude on her doesn't she," said Ivan to Mesagog
"Yes. Are you sure that she will not backstab us," said Mesagog
"Please, you underestimate me. When they were reasurrected before they new what happened Scorpina slipped on a small device. If any on of them try to betray me...us they will be destroyed," said Ivan
"Ecellent," said Mesagog
***
"It was great being back in action," said Rocky
"Yeah, I know what you mean," said Tanya
"Billy how are things going on contacting the other rangers?" asked Adam
"Well, I contacted Andros and he is getting his team togeather. I teleported Jason through the Astro Megaship to get the Lost Galaxy Rangers. I contacted Wes and he is gonna try and contact the Time Force Rangers. I also contacted the Lightspeed Rescue Rangers. Kim and Trini was sent to gather the Wild Force Ranger. Zack was sent to get the Ninja Storm Power Rangers," said Billy
"And I will go get the Dino Thunder Rangers," said Tommy
"I will go with you," said Kat
"Remember when you get them. Come right back here. We don't have much time," said Billy
"Right, Ready to go?" asked Tommy
"Ready," Kat answered
With a Pink and Red light they were gone
"Billy, what are our chances of winning this battle?"asked Rocky
"I say, it is to early to tell," said Billy
***
In a secret compartment, Billy is working on a machine
"With Cam and Hayley working with me, the reassurection machine should be ready to go within a few minutes," Billy said to himself " Hold on Zordon,"
"Ai yai yai yai yai, Billy is that you?" asked a small robot
"Alpha!"exclaimed Billy
He went and hugged Alpha
"What are you doing here?" asked Billy
''Well I sensed that the Command Chamber was built here on Earth so I came and checked it out,"
"Where have you been?" asked Billy
"I went home to the planet Edenoi and helped King Lexian as I did before I became a patner with Zordon,"
"I really could of used your help on Eltar, Alpha," said Billy
"I'm sorry Billy, but I want to help you now,"
"That would be great,"
"Are you making a reasurrection machine?"asked Alpha
"Yes. I'm going to reasurrect Zordon,"
"Ai yai yai yai yai Zordon,"
"That's right Alpha,''
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
06-28-2004, 12:38 AM
In the next couple of pts it will be on the ranger teams getting back togeather the same way the first pt was.
In the next couple of pts it will be on the ranger teams getting back togeather the same way the first pt was.
Good effort. I'm sure you'll settle more into your writing style as the series progresses.
bjlovel
06-29-2004, 12:49 AM
"Andros, so what did Billy say?" asked Ashley Hammond
"We need to get the team back togeather," answered Andros
"Why?"
"Because the Evil Warloards are being reasurrected,"
"What, this is serious. How come I have a feeling that it is something more," said Ashley
"Because he has Karone,"
"What, no, how?"
"Don't know, that is why we have to get the team back togeather,"
"Okay then let's go,"
***
Andros met up with Zhane and told him about what was happening
"Okay then let's get back to the Astro Megaship Mark 2," said Zhane
***
"Okay, I will get T.J., Zhane you will get Carlos, and Ashley you will get Cassie," said Andros
"Got it," said Ashley
"Okay," said Zhane
"Let's go," said Andros
***
"Ivan, the scanners have picked up the Astro Megaship landing here on Earth," said Scorpina
"The Astro Rangers must be trying to get back togeather to help the other rangers. We can't let that happen," said Ivan
"Sir, I will send down the putties to stop them," said Scorpina
"Ivan, maybe now is the time to use our secret weapons," said Mesagog
"No not yet, we can't let them know what we are doing," responded Ivan
''Right," said Mesagog. He starts to walk away and begins to talk to himself"Once everything is done, you will be gone forever,"
***
"Now this is 98 Westminster Ave. Not bad," said Ashley
She walks up to the door and knocks on it. A young Asian women with short black hair answers it
"Oh my god, Ashley, how are you!" exclaimed Cassie Chan as she went in to hug Ashley
"Cassie, my have you changed," said Ashley as she returns the hug
"Please, come in," said Cassie motioning Ashley to come into the house
They go and sit down on the couch
"So what brings you here?" asked Cassie
"I wish I was here on better circumstances," explained Ashley"Andros and Zhane is gathering T.J. and Carlos. Were getting back togeather as a team if you accept?"
"Why, what is wrong?" asked Cassie
"Rita, Zedd, Divatox, and Astronema are all being reasurrected,"
"What Astronema, that means Karone,"
"Yes I know,"
"How is Andros?" asked Cassie
"He is taking it pretty hard. So will you take your powers back?" asked Ashley
"Of course,'' said Cassie. As she finished her sentence some putties appeared outside. At that time Cassie just happened to lok out the window
"Putties are outside. Come on Ashley," said Cassie as she pulled her outside
"Hey putties, you never should of came," said Cassie
"Yeah cause you are about to go right back to where you came from," continued Ashley
Ashley jumped off the porch and sid kicked a puttie in the Z causing it to explode. She then block 2 punches from another puttie, but then gets triped and falls down to the ground. The putties took this oppurtunity and pounced on Ashley.
Cassie saw this and try to go to her friend's aid but the path is blocked by a couple of putties. She runs and jumps in the air and kicks 1 puttie then kicks another puttie while being in the air. she lands on her feet and fron kicks a puttie and then sidekicks another puttie. A puttie comes out of nowhere and tackles Cassie. and holds her down
"Astro Blaster," shouted the blue space ranger as he and the red space ranger flew over head on their galaxy gliders while blasting the putties with their Astro Blasters. Once all the putties were knocked down, Astro Blue picked up Cassie of the ground while Astro Red did the same thing with Ashley. They jumped of their galaxy gliders and de-morphed
"T.J., Andros" said Cassie. She went up and hugged them both while they hugged her back
"T.J. it is good to see you again," said Ashley as she went up and hugged him
"It is good to see both of you guys too," responded Theadore J. Jarvais Johnson
"C'mon, we gotta get back to the ship," said Andros"Deca, teleport us back to the ship,"
In a red, blue, pink, and yellow light the 4 of them were gone
***
"Carlos, nice kick. Well that's it for today," said the coach of the Los Angeles Galaxy
"Carlos, If I'm not careful, you make take Captain from me," said Cobi Jones
"Yeah, thanks, man," responded Carlos Valvertes
"Carlos, hey over here," called Zhane
"Hey Zhane," responded Carlos. He jogged over to where Zhane was standing
"Nice kick," said Zhane
"Hey thanks,' responded Carlos
"Listen, I will get right too the chase. We need your help to stop a master plan an evil bien is planning and we need to get the team back togeather," explained Zhane
"Hold on I will have to ask my coach if I can take a while off,"
Carlos runs over to his coach and then runs back to Zhane
"Yeah I got a week off,"
"What did you tell him?" asked Zhane
"Oh that my sister was having her baby," answered Carlos
"But you don't have a sister,"
"You and I know that, but he doesn't,"
Since that is taken care of, Zhane speaks into his communicater and tells D.E.C.A. 2 to teleprt them to the ship.
In a black and silver light, they were both gone
***
"No, if they join forces with the other ranegrs and will be even harder to deafeat them," said Ivan
"Maybe, you should let me take this mission over, at least I don't mess up," said Mesagog
"Shut it, Mesagog," responds Ivan Ooze"Scorpina, send down Accelerator to stop the Space Ranger,"
"Yes master," responded Scorpina
As Scorpina walks out the door she didn't realize who was listening in on the conversation
"So, Ivan is having trouble keeping this togeather. An oppurtunity may be coming sooner then I thought," said Trakeena to herself
***
The rangers hug and greet each other at the ship
Andros walks over to a panel and presses a button
"Billy, this is Andros, do you copy?" Andros said
"This is Billy," responded Billy through an intercom
"We are back togeather, we will be at the Command Chamber in a few minutes,"
"Okay, we will be waiting for you,"
"Rangers there is a monster attacking the city," said D.E.C.A. 2
"Alright, Zhane contact Billy and tell them that L.A. is in trouble," said Andros
"Got it," responded Zhane
"Ready guys," asked Andros
"Ready," answered T.J.
"Let's Rocket!" said Andros
The 5 rangers input the code 3-3-5
***
"Hold it right there, Accellerator," shouted Astro Blue
"Yeah, cause you are going down," Astro Black said
"Oh really," Accellerator responded
"Let's get him guys," said Astro Red
Astro Pink runs in but gets blasted by a wheel that came out of the monster's belly. Astro Black jumps in the air with his Lunar Lance while at the same time while the monster blast a wheel at Astro Black. He blocks it with his lance and land just before the monster and picks him up with his staff and thros him a distance. Astro Yellow then blast him with her Star Slinger. Astro Blue then spins around with his Astro Axe and slices him 10 times followed by Astro Red energizing his Spiral Saber and slashing it across the chest of Accellerator
"Spiral Saber Booster Mode," said Astro Red
Astro Red combines his Astro Blaster with his Spral Saber to create Spiral Saber Booster Mode
"Quadro Blaster," called Astro Black
The rangers all combine there weapons to form the Quadro Blaster
"Fire!" shouted Astro Red
Both the rangers blast hit him and he fell down and exploded
***
"Who has been reasurrected?" asked Ivan to Scorpina
"Rita and Master Org, sir," answered Scorpina
As she finished her sentence Master Org appeared while Rita cam through the door
"Ivan, you slimball. I thought the rangers destroyed you," said Rita
"Ah, my sweet, how nice to see you again," responded Ivan
"Spare me," said Rita
"Master Org I suppose," said Ivan
''Yes, but I just want you to know that you will not tell me what to do," said Master Org
"Of cousre, I won't tell you what to do or what not to do," answered Ivan"Now please go to your rooms,"
"Yeah, sure, but one question for you," said Rita
"Anything my dear,"
"How did you come back to Earth?" asked Rita
"I reasurrected him," said Mesagog coming out of the shadows
"Huh, who are you?" asked Rita
"So, your the one that is part human, part monster," said Master Org
"Yes, but as what I know so are you, so we have something incommon," said Mesagog
"We have nothing," said Master Org
With that said he teleports to his room
"I never wanted to see another dinosaur in my life after what the rangers did to me, but now I have to look at you. You are going to make me sick," said Rita
She then walks out the room and towards her room
"Phystie isn't she,' said Ivan
"Hmmm, yes," said Mesagog
"Who cares if the rangers join forces. With the strength of the Evil Warlords, we will be un beatable," said Ivan
"That is why I had you come back to life," said Mesagog
"Because you know that I am stronger then you and you could never do this by yourself,"
Mesagog walks away and says something to himself
"I may not been avle to do this myself, but He is not stronger then me,"
***
"Hey everbody," said Carlos
"Cassie, Ashley, Carlos, T.J.," said Kat.
Everybody went up and hugged each other
"Guys, I want you to meet Andros and Zhane, the Red and Silver Power Rangers," said T.J.
The other went and greeted them
***
Everybody went to Bulkmeyer's to get something to drink
"Something big is going to happen," said Rocky
"Yeah no doubt," said Aisha
"Do you think we will win," Ashley asked Andros
"It will be tough, but I think we will be able to pull through it," answered Andros
"Kat, I wanna thank you for making me a ranger," said Cassie
''Well, you deserved it. Everybody deserved it," said Kat
"So Carlos, how is playing for the Los Angelas Galaxy?" asked Adam
"It is great, by the way Adam, I told the coach about your skills and he wants to see you at the next try out," said Carlos
"Relly, that is Awesome," said Adam
"Congratulations," said Tanya
"T.J. I heard that you just signed a contract with the Boston Red Sox to play baseball," said Rocky
"Yeah, I'm excited about playing baseball for my favorite team," answered T.J.
"Cassie, when is your album coming out?" asked Kat
"I gave up on that dream. I just didn't have what it took too be a musician,"
"I'm sorry," said T.J.
"Thanks," responded Cassie
"By the way where has Billy been?" asked Rocky
"Yeah ever since the others left for the mission, I haven't seen him around," said Tanya
"Well, there is one thing we do know, he is not the gold ranger," said Adam jokingly while nudgeing Rocky in the arm
"Hey, if you put the facts togeather at the time, it could of been him," responded Rocky while kinda sluching in his chair
The others laughed
"Don't worry Rocko, he still love you anyway," said Aisha
To Be Continued...
it's time for a gold rush
06-29-2004, 03:01 AM
I like it so far, but one thing bugs me though. why do you keep calling him zach I thought it was spelled zack?
Nitro_Thunder_Ranger
06-29-2004, 03:43 AM
Nicely written,good story I hope to read kore of this soon.
bjlovel
06-29-2004, 01:11 PM
I like it so far, but one thing bugs me though. why do you keep calling him zach I thought it was spelled zack?
Sorry. I completly forgot which way Zack was spelt. I will go and edit his name
KamenRiderRyuki
06-29-2004, 02:09 PM
Like the story and the idea so far. One thing I would reccomend though is slowing it down it seems to be going far to fast and getting a head of itself. Also I would reccomend trying to focus on one ranger team at a time. Seems a little jumbled with all the characters bouncing in and out. Has the makings of a great story though. Keep working on it
bjlovel
06-30-2004, 02:49 AM
On the planet Mirinoi, life was peaceful. The Mirinoit's were getting along and accepted the new ways of the human race. There were people who attended meetings to discuss what would the Mirinoit's give up for the colony Terra Venture and what would Terra Venture give up for the Mirinoit's. Among these people were Maya, Kendrix, Kai, Mike, and Commander Stanton
"I am glad we have come togeather on this decision," said Commander Stanton
"Yes, so am I," responded the Elder of Mirinoi
The meeting ended and everyone left
"Lt. Corbett, see to it that we only take a small chunk of there trees for the new homes," said Comm. Stanton
"Yes, sir," Responded Lt. Mike Corbett
"Lt. Kai, how is the construction going with the new Library?" asked Stanton
"All things are going perfectly, couldn't be better," responded Lt. Kai Chen
"Good, good,"
When Commander Stanton left, Kai, Maya, and Kendrix went to a place called Terra's Food. It was a food place and was named after Terra Venture it's self. They sat down and waited for Leo to arrive.
"How much longer is he gonna be, we have to get back on duty in 20 minutes," complained Kendrix Morgan
"You know Leo, he is never on time," answered Kai
"Hey guys," said Leo as he walked into the place
"Hey Leo," said Kendrix, Kai, and Maya
"So what is new at the settlement conferences?" asked Leo Corbett
"We just got a new place in the woods so we can start building house out their. That is where Mike is now," answered Kai
"Great," said Leo
"Yeah for you guys, but the part that you guys are going to destroy, is where I spent half my life at," said Maya
"I'm sorry Maya, but there is nothing we can do do stop it," said Kendrix
"I know," said Maya
"I'm sure things will work out for the best," said Leo while putting his arm around Maya, trying to comfort her
***
At another part of the colony, Damon Henderson was trying to get the Astro Megaship, up in running again. He has practically rebult it thanks to the help of Alpha 6
"Man, I don't know why this thing won't start up. I did everything right," said Damon kicking the engine room
"Maybe it just needs a power source to jump start it," said Alpha 6
"Do you know what Alpha, that just might work, but where would we get enough power to energize a ship like this?" asked Damon
"Maybe the Lights of Orion would have enough power to make the ship go,"
"Do you know what you maybe right,"
Damon walked out of the engine room and taped Alpha on the head as he walked past the robot
Jason in a beam of red was teleported to the Astro Megaships engine room. Damon saw the light out of the corner of his eye and went back into the room
"Who are you?" Damon said taking a defensive stance
"Whoa buddy, my name is Jason. I am a power ranger and I am here to recruit the Lost Galaxy Rangers for an important mission" Jason said
"What type of mission?" Damon asked
"Look no time for that, I need to see Leo Corbett, he knows me"Jason says
"Fine, I'll take you too him" said Damon as he lowered his defense
***
Damon brings Jason into Terra's Food
"Jason!!!!" Leo says surprisingly
"Leo, my friend, look we don't have that much time to talk" Jason says in a deep tone
"Why, what's wrong?" Leo askes in a soft voice
"I need you to recruit the other rangers and have them meet me at the rock where the Quasar Sabers are" Jason commands
"Sure thing"
***
Jason waits by the stone where 5 sabers are imputted. He notices 5 people come up to the stone, one of them being Leo.
"So this is the Lost Galaxy team" Jason says with a smirk
"Lets get down to business" Kai commmands
"Okay, a sinister bein named Ivan Ooze has been resurrected. He has resurrected all the evil that each ranger has fought including Trakeena" Jason says
"Trakeena?!?!?!?!?!" Kendrix says
"Yes and now I need you rangers to take your Quasar Sabres and your powers and come with me to Earth. We have a mission"
Out of nowhere, Sting Wingers beging to fly towards the rangers. Putties appear out of then air to aid the Sting Wingers
***
"So rangers, you thought that I was just gonna let you get your powers back, think again," said Ivan
***
"Ivan must know we're here," said Jason"I haven't done this since Codename Forever Red,"
"What?" said Maya, Kendrix, Kai, and Damon
"It's Morphing Time!" shouts Jason
"Tyrannosaurus!"
In a flash of red light Jason turns into the red ranger. Leo nodds at the others. They pull the Quasar Sabers from the stone and there Transmorphers appear on their wrists
"Go Galactic!" shouts the rangers
They became transformed into rangers known as the Lost Galaxy Rangers. They get in there positions.
"Galaxy Pink!" shouts Kendrix
"Galaxy Yellow!" shouts Maya
"Galaxy Blue!" shouts Kai
"Galaxy Green!" shouts Damon
"Galaxy Red!" shouts Leo
"Power Rangers!"
"Rangers, you have to hit the putties in the Z to destroy them," tells Tyranno Red
"Alright guys lets teach these goons a lesson," says Galaxy Red
The other rangers nodded.
Galaxy Pink goes into battle. She jump kicks a puttie followed by a punch to the Z and then a round hous kick knocking down a Sting Winger. She sees putties coming at her, so she jumps in the air and grabs holed of 2 Sting Wingers and bangs their heads togeather causing them to go down next to the other putties. She pulls out her Saber and begins to slash away putties and Sting Wingers
Galaxy Yellow runs on the ground and goes underneath the putties and Sting Wingers tripping them while holding on to a Sting Winger and pushing it along the ground into a tree. She then jumps up and knocks down a Sting Winger and then lands on 3 putties. She side kicks a puttie in the Z causing it to explode. She then jumps up to a top of a tree and jumps down while taking 3 Sting Wingers with her and landing on a couple of putties. She then begins to slice away with her Quasar Saber
Galaxy Blue goes in and attacks with his gorilla type tastics. He jumps in the air on to a putties head and begins to run along a group of putties mixed in with the Sting Wingers while being on their head. He then jumps from the last to and closelines 2 putties. He gets up and punches them in the Z causing both of them to explode. He then gets out his saber and begins to hit the Sting Wingers and putties with it.
Galaxy Green takes a different approch. He takes out his Trans Blaster and begins to fire, knocking down putties and shooting down Sting Wingers. He jumps in the air and fires at a group of Sting Wingers hitting every one. As soon as he got on the ground he jumped up and spun around in the air shooting putties and Sting Wingers alike
Galaxy Red runs through putties and Sting Wingers. Hitting the putties in the Z and the Sting Wingers in the stomach, knocking them down. He then does a cresent kick followed by a hook punch and then a front kick. he back kicks a putties and then blocks 3 slasges thrown at his by a Sting Winger. He gives an uppercut to the Stin Winger knocking it down. He then energizes his saber and destroyes some putties and Sting Wingers
Tyranno Red takes out his Blade Blaster and shoots down some Sting Winges. He flips the sidearm into its short sword and takes out a couple putties with it. He puts it back into his holster and jumps in the air while doing a roundhouse kick knocking a Sting Winger out of the air. He then blocks a kick by a putties and hooks it. He then back hands a Sting Winger then he does a split to avoid from being slashed by a Sting Winger and punces it in the gut. When he goes up he uppercuts the Sting Winger. He then jumps in the air and does a split knocking dow 2 putties
The other rangers regroup around Tyranno Red. Galaxy Red steps out in front of the group
"Power of Fire!" shouts Galaxy Red
He holds his hands out in front of his chest and emits a powerful fire blast destroying the putties and Sting Wingers
''Power Down," says Galaxy Red
The others powered down
''Well, it felt good to feel the power going through me," said Kendrix
"Yeah, I forgot how it felt," said Maya
"Guys, I know it must be nice to have gotten your powers back, but we have to get back to Earth in a hurry," says Jason
"We could take the Jet Jammers," mentioned Maya
''Well we can't, see the Astro Megaship needed parts and I had to take some out of the Jammers," said Damon
"Well then how are we suppose to get back?" asked Kai
"Well there may be one way," says Damon
***
"We will have to stop those Galaxy Rangers before they get to this atmosphere," said Mesagog
"I know that," said Ivan "Don't worry, I have a plane for them when they come,''
***
The rangers are outside of the Astro Megaship morphed with their Lights Of Orion on.
"Rangers, the ship is ready to take in the power," said Alpha through the Transmorpher
"Got it," answered Galaxy Red
The rangers powered up the Light and were covered in a gold light. The light was being transferred to the Megaship
"Hold onnnnn, almost thereeeee, complete," said Alpha
The Rangers powered down
"Mike, you sure you don't wanna coome with us?" asked Leo
"Yeah, c'mon Mike," said Kendrix
"I'm sorry guys, I can't I got to much to do here. And Kai, don't worry, I will fill in for you so your not behind," said Mike
"Thanks," Kai said
"Guys, we have to go now," commanded Jason as he started to walk up the ramp
"C'ya," said Leo
He went up and hugged Mike. The others did the same
"Bye, and good luck. You better kick that Ivan Ooze's but,'' said Mike
The rangers got into the Megaship. Damon took the controls
"Alpha, set a course for Earth," commanded Jason
"On it," said Alpha
The ship hovered for a couple of seconds and took off headed towards Earth
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
06-30-2004, 02:51 AM
sorry about Leo's attack. I didn't know what it was called. I also wanna thank Blue Ninja for helping write it and giving me some idea's
Blue ninja
06-30-2004, 01:19 PM
Dude great episoe i loved it!!!
Time Ranger
06-30-2004, 01:58 PM
I like it. great job. Peace God Bless
packfan6
06-30-2004, 07:06 PM
Nice job, I'm liking it.
Mythical Master
07-01-2004, 02:56 PM
Good chapter.
bjlovel
07-15-2004, 12:16 AM
The next chapter should be up by tomorrow night or the next day
Splush
07-15-2004, 09:37 AM
BJOvel I see you put allot of work into this fic but I have a couple of criticism.
1) Be more creative with your writing it seems like I am reading a play manuscript. It’s bland and well to direct.
2) Stop using the words said, replied, asked, try not to use those allot...this is a big MUST.
3) Spell numbers out, instead of 2 write two.
bjlovel
07-15-2004, 01:42 PM
Thanks Splush. I will try that
bjlovel
07-22-2004, 11:43 PM
In the heart of Mariner Bay a fire was just put to sleep. One man who is known for battling evil and saving people's lives is saving lives a different way.
"Good work out there today Carter, those people would of died if it wasn't for you," said a man
"Thank you sir," responded Carter Grayson
"Captain Micthel wants to see you in his office right away,"
"Got it sir,"
***
Carter walks up to a door that says cheif on it and knocks
"C'mon in," he heard
"You wanted to see me sir,"
"Yes, we need you to be ready for another mission,'' said Captain Mitchel
"What kind of mission?" asked Carter
"You will be breifed on it when you follow me to the Aqua Base,"
"Sir, I thought the Aqua Base was destroyed,"
"It was, but over the years Lightspeed has been building a new one with the help of Neptune and the Mer People," said Captain Mitchel"Now lets go, the world doesn't have much time,"
"Oh yeah, Carter your gonna need this," Captin Mitchell opens a breifcase and throw a lightspeed morpher at Carter before they leave
***
"Man, I wish I knew how to work this thing," said Wesly Collins
Wes was looking at two silver rods side by side trying to contact the future
"If only Trip or Circut was here, this would be much easier," said Wes
"You need any help with anything?" asked Eic Meyers
"Yeah that would be great," Wes Responded
"All you have to do is hit it like this,"
Eric took is fist and banged it on a silver panel. All of a sudden a picture of a man appeared between the two silver rods
"Wes, what can I do for you," asked the Alex
"I need the Time Force Rangers to come back to this time. There is something big that is going to happen and the world needs them," said Wes
"I'm sorry, but time travel has been banned," said Alex
"The world really needs there help for this," said Wes
"I know, but this mission is bigger then you think," said Alex
"What do you mean bigger then I think, the world is at stake and we need there help," said Wes
"I'm sorry, but there is only one time travel device and that is shut down,"
"Then open it back up," said Eric
"I wish I can,but I can't. You have enough rangers there to be able to stop this threat,"
With that said Alex shuts down communications. Alex didn't notice the person who was standing behind a wall listening to the conversation he had seconds earlier
"Alex, how could you lie to Wes about something like that?" Jen asked with anger in her voice
"I have my reasons,"
"We have been broken up Alex. Me and you are no longer together remember" said Jen in anger
"Yes"said Alex
"So with that said me and the other rangers are leaving to help Wes and Eric" Demanded Jen
She pushes Alex aside and calls the other rangers to get ready and meet her at the Time Flyers. When she's done talking to them she gets the Time Flyers ready to take off for the year 2004
"Man, I wish I could do something to that guy," said Eric
"Guess we'll have to contact Billy and tell him that it is just us 2 for this mission," said Wes
***
"Tell me Scorpina, who are the closes to being done?"asked Ivan Ooze
"Ransik and Zedd," answered Scorpina
"Excellent," said Ivan
***
Carter and Captain Mitchel walk into the breifing room and the former rangers greet both of them
"Dana, Chad, Joel, Kelsey, Ryan, it is good to see you again," said Carter
"You too," they responded
"Now that we're here we need to get down to buisness, so please take a seat," said Captain Mitchel"We got word from a realiable source that an Evil bein has been reasurrected and is trying to reasurrect all the evil that Earth has ever seen,"
"Wait do you mean, Queen Bansheera, Diabolico, and the rest of them are coming back to life," Kelsey said
"Yes and that is why you will be getting your morphers back. Carter you already have yours, the others, Mrs.Rawlings is getting,''
As he finishes his sentence Mrs.Rawlings comes in with a silver breifcase with a Lightspeed symbol on it. She opened it up and inside were the morphers. The rangers took their respective colors and attached the morphers to their wrist.
"I'm ready to fight evil wherever I have to go," Joel said
"That goes for all of us," said Chad
"Good, you will be taking the hummer to Angel Grove and then follow the coordinates on your gps system and then put it into autodrive and that will take you to where you need to go," explaind Ms.Rawlings
''Right we're leaving now, let's go guys," Carter said with a serious tone
The others nodded and they walked away
***
"Go tell Ransik to send down the cyclobots to defeat the 2 Time Force rangers," Ivan commanded
"Yes sir," Scorpina responded
***
"Lets get going," said Wes
He and Eric get in an SUV and begins to drive to Angel Grove. Out of nowhere Cyclobots showed up in front of them and begins to shoot at them. They stop the SUV and get out.
"This must be one of those things Billy was talking about," said Wes
"We'll lets send these robots back to the scrapyard," said Eric
Eric runs up to a bot and punches it in the gut and then uppercuts it. He backhands another one followed by a front kick. He then trips two Cyclobots and does a back hand spring landing on another bot. He then tries to back kick another bot, but they caught his foot. He does a front flip, making the bot release his foot then he follows it up with a back kick knocking it down. He gets knocked down by a couple of Cyclobots
Wes runs in and jumps in the air while extending his two legs knocking down two bots. He then ducks under a punch and kicks the bot in its side. He blocks another punch and delivers one of his own knocking it down. He picks up a metal bar off of the ground and hits a bot in the stomach then hits it in its back. After he knockes down a few more bots and then throws the bar knocking down a bot. They open fire on him and he gets knocked backwards. Eric then runs over to his side.
"You thinking what I'm think?" Wes asked with a crooked smile on his face
"Oh yeah," answered Eric smiling
"Time For Time Force!" shouted Wes
"Quantum Power!" shouted Eric
In a bright red light, they were transformed
Quantum runs and jump kicks a bot and then round house kicks another followed by a straight punch. He then side kicks another bot and ducks underneath a punch and picks up the bot and throws it over his head. He takes out his Quantum Defender and shoots four bots with it. He changes it to sword mode and slashes one across the chest followed by slicing two more diaginally across the chest. He then slashes upwards knocking another down
Time Red does a clothes line and runs into a group of Cyclobots, knocking them down. He then jumps up and does a split knocking down two more. He trips another and then kicks one in the gut knocking it down. He then punches two more knocking them down. He takes out his chrono blaster and shoots two. He jumps in the air and shoots five more. When he lands, he jumps again and does a spiral getting just high enough to not hit the ground and shoot down some more.
***
"Scorpina, send down a monster that will stop those rangers," commanded Ivan
"Yes, sir," responded Scorpina
***
"Ahh rangers, it is time for you to be destroyed," said Loki, former allie to Diabolico
The two rangers turn around
"Lets, take care of buisness," said Quantum
The 2 rangers rush towards Loki, but only to get blasted away. Time Red jumps in the air and takes out his Chrono Saber, but gets blasted down before he could reach Loki. Quantum runs over to his side and takes out his Quantum Defnder and blast Loki knocking the monster back. He then changes it into sword mode and runs towards Loki. Loki runs towards him with his sword raised.
Quantum tries to get the upperhand and jumps over Loki and lands behind his back and slashes him. Loki then back kicks Quantum followed by 2 slashes across the chest. They then clash with swords. Quantum pushes the monster's sword up and slashs it across the stomach.
Time Red jumps behind Loki and slashes him across the back and kicks him knocking him foward.
"You got lucky rangers, but your luck is about to run out," said Loki
Loki created an energy ball and threw at the 2 rangers. It caused a big explosion and sent Quantum and Time Red flying. They both layed on the ground. Neither of them could get up. Loki stalked towards Time Red with his sword drawn. He backed him up to a building and held his sword at Time Red's throat
"Say goodbye red ranger," Loki said as he begins to bring the sword across Time Red's throat
Out of nowhere a blast hit Loki in the back. The shot came from a Chrono Blaster that a women was holding. On both sides of her were people standing with Time Force uniforms on
"Freeze," said Jen
Loki looked back and saw who they were
"Now I will be able too destroy the whole team," Loki said
"Ready?" asked Jen
"Ready," the others responded
"Time For Time Force!" shouted the Time Force Rangers
Time Red And Quantum re-grouped with the other Time Force Rangers
"How did you get here?" Time Red asked"I though Alex said that time travel had been banned,"
"Alex said a lot of things, but first let's take care of this monster," said Time Pink
"Green Time Force Ranger!" shouted Time Green
"Yellow Time Force Ranger!" shouted Time Yellow
"Blue Time Force Ranger!" shouted Time Blue
"Pink Time Force Ranger!" shouted Time Pink
"Red Time Force Ranger!" shouted Time Red
"Quantum Ranger!" shouted the Quantum Ranger
"Power Rangers!" shouted time Red
"Time Force!" finished the others
"Is that suppose to scare me, huh pathetic," said Loki
"We'll see who's pathetic," answered Time Red
The rangers rush in to fight Loki with their chrono sabers in their hands. Time Yellow goes to slash Loki ,but he ducks underneath it and slices her across the stomach. He then dodged Time Blue's sword and slashed him across the back. He gets hit by Time Green's sword followed by Time Red, Pink, and Quantum's sword.
The Time Force Rangers then took out their V-Weapons and blasted Loki. It was hard for him to get up form the blast.
"Alright guys let's bring em' togeather, Vortex Blaster!" Time Pink shouted
The rangers combined their V-Weapons to make the Vortex Blaster
Time Green and Yellow got on their knees and held the Blaster on their shoulder while Time Blue and Pink got behind them and held the blaster at their side while standing and then Time Red was at the back of the blaster holding it
"Ready, Fire!" Time Red commanded
The Vortex Blaster shot an energy ball and it hit Loki causing him to fall and explode
***
"To many rangers know about what I am doing, I need the others to make my plane work," said Ivan
"Maybe you should also sacrifice yourself and make that one less monster we bring back," said Mesagog
"Shut it," responded Ivan
***
At Wes's mansion, the rangers started talking. They were all in the clothes they were usually in
"So Jen, how did you guys get here?" Eric asked
"Well, what Alex said was a lie. Time travel was never banned, poeple could just not use it under their own freewill," answered Jen
"So Wes, what is this mission we are needed for?" asked Lucas
"Well, I got a call from somebody named Billy, and he told me that an evil bein named Ivan Ooze is trying to reassurect all the evil that has faced this world including Ransik," explained Wes
"And he wants us to go to Angel Grove to meet up with other rangers and talk about this," continued Eric
"So there is going to be a big fight between us and them," said Katie
"Exactly, but there is still one thing I don't understand," said Wes
"What is it?" Jen asked
"What Alex meant when he said that it is bigger then what I thought," said Wes
"Don't know what he meant by that, but I'm sure we will find out soon enough," said Lucas
"C'mon we better get a move on," Eric said
"Wait, where's Trip?" Katie asked wandering where the Green Time Force Ranger was
As she said that Trip came in with circuit flying in after him and landed on Trip's backpack
"Circuit, it is good to see you again," Wes said
"How did you get here?" asked Jen
"He snuck on the Time Ship," answered Trip
"Now that the whole team is back togeather, we have to get going," Eric said
The others nodded and left and got in an SUV and started to drive off
***
"So Carter, what do you think this mission is going to be like?" asked Joel
"Yeah, I didn't even know there were that many ranger team's out there," said Kelsey
"Well, their are a lot I will give you that, but from what I understand is that this mission will decide on weather Earth will be taken over or not," said Carter
"Wait how did you know about the other ranger teams?" asked Dana
"Well let's just say, I have met their red rangers," answered Carter
To Be Continued...
Baby Dumbass Year 2004
07-23-2004, 12:51 AM
It's a really awesome story so far but, let me give you some suggestions.
1- When I write my fanfics, I usually use Microsoft Word so I can see my whole story and edit before the story hits the net. You might want to try it.
2- It's a bit jumpy- try using maybe a few more similes and metaphors to give the reader a sense of detail. One thing that a reader can't get enough of is detail.
3- Brainstorm on a piece of paper what you want to cover in the chapter of the story you are writing.
I really don't mean this to harmfully criticize you, and I'm not saying that your work is crap. If you at least try this, writing your next chapter won't be as stressful or as hard as it was before.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading about the return of some of the early teams of power rangers and I encourage you to keep up the good work.
Fucking Right!!!!
Zord_Crazy
07-23-2004, 10:08 AM
Cool, cool. KIU, my friend.
bjlovel
07-23-2004, 11:24 AM
It's a really awesome story so far but, let me give you some suggestions.
1- When I write my fanfics, I usually use Microsoft Word so I can see my whole story and edit before the story hits the net. You might want to try it.
2- It's a bit jumpy- try using maybe a few more similes and metaphors to give the reader a sense of detail. One thing that a reader can't get enough of is detail.
3- Brainstorm on a piece of paper what you want to cover in the chapter of the story you are writing.
I really don't mean this to harmfully criticize you, and I'm not saying that your work is crap. If you at least try this, writing your next chapter won't be as stressful or as hard as it was before.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading about the return of some of the early teams of power rangers and I encourage you to keep up the good work.
Fucking Right!!!!
I thank you for this. The only reason why it took so long to post is that i was waiting for a person who edit's my stories to get back from vacation. But to anybody out there criticism is welcomed.
lightning_ranger
07-23-2004, 05:06 PM
Just wanted to say this is a really great fic. It would be awesome for them to make a ranger ep like this. Oh, btw, it's Mesogog not Mesagog!
sbb1513
07-24-2004, 05:25 PM
i agree. this is an awesome flic.
~mag~
lightning_ranger
07-24-2004, 06:01 PM
I only have one question, when will there be more?? I look forward to reading more.
greenwc
07-25-2004, 12:44 AM
what about the turbo powers?
will tommy and the others keep there multiple set of powers?
lightning_ranger
07-25-2004, 12:56 AM
I think it might be a little difficult bringing back the Turbo powers since they were destroyed unlike most of the others and all the Turbo Rangers have other powers anyway. He could however have the Time Force Rangers travel back in time and pick up the Green Ranger Tommy clone to join the battle. Anyway, what about the Alien Rangers, Billy should contact them to come don't you think?
lightning_ranger
07-25-2004, 12:59 AM
And what about all the other guys like Ninjor, Gold Ranger Trey, Phantom Ranger, Blue Senturion, Magna Defender, & Masked Rider, will they be a part of this big battle? They should be don't you think? Or at least the Gold Ranger should be.
bjlovel
07-25-2004, 11:04 AM
They all will be in it including the Turbo Powers. And the tommy clone along with the alien rangers will be in it. so don't worry, all the power ranger heroes will be in this
greenwc
07-25-2004, 02:23 PM
i always wanted to write a fic myself where each ranger would have there own powers based on several things
who had those powers first or like if they were the second ranger to hold that color or postion they would go to the next incarnation til all powers were represented then i would choose new rangers out of people the rangers knew that weren't rangers yet...I.E. david,that dude trini liked and curtis zack's cousin and people like that and maybe skull but no bulk sorry but unfortunatly he just doesn't have the build or more factually he had too much build
bjlovel
07-25-2004, 04:43 PM
i always wanted to write a fic myself where each ranger would have there own powers based on several things
who had those powers first or like if they were the second ranger to hold that color or postion they would go to the next incarnation til all powers were represented then i would choose new rangers out of people the rangers knew that weren't rangers yet...I.E. david,that dude trini liked and curtis zack's cousin and people like that and maybe skull but no bulk sorry but unfortunatly he just doesn't have the build or more factually he had too much build
I get what you are saying, just some advice, it was hard to read so use some comma's
greenwc
07-25-2004, 08:34 PM
well i am not a good writer in faact i don't form sentences well as i showed before but,i only write on here when i want to be informed that the story has been updated or just a small opinon ...although i wrote to much before though..oops
wildranger
07-25-2004, 09:01 PM
Nice job
Tenkuujin
07-25-2004, 10:52 PM
I like this fanfic, keep up the great work.
whats gonna happen to tommy? is he gonna have all his morphers or use just one at a time? maybe have him combine all his morphers?
packfan6
07-26-2004, 02:09 PM
Godo job with the episode, your writings getting better.
bjlovel
07-26-2004, 05:46 PM
whats gonna happen to tommy? is he gonna have all his morphers or use just one at a time? maybe have him combine all his morphers?
I don't think I'm gonna have him combine all his morphers, but he will use them one at a time and 2 morphers will be combined eventually and here is a hint: Some rangers will use other ranger's powers
Blue ninja
07-26-2004, 06:00 PM
:)
bjlovel
07-26-2004, 10:35 PM
Look in the sky, it's a bird, no it's a plane, no it's the Anamarium. In a flash of Pink and Yellow energy beams, two young girls are teleported to the Anamarium.
"So who are we looking for again?" Kimberly asked as she looked around the floating island
"Billy said her name was Princess Shayla," Trini answered while also looking around
"Did he say how to find her?"
After Kimberly finished saying that sentence, a women appeared out of a fountain behind them
"Welcome rangers to the Anamarium," said the woman
Trini and Kim looked back and jumped when they saw her
"Are you Princess Shayla?" asked Trini
"Yes, that is who i am, and now what can I do for you rangers?"
"We need to gather the Wild Force Rangers for an important battle," said Kim
"Yes, I sensed a great evil was unleashed,"
"That's right and now we need the rangers help to defeat an evil plane he is making," said Trini
"I don't mean to be a pain, but we need to hurry," mentioned Kim
"Yes, but you will need this," Princess Shayla raised her hand into the air and a morpher appeared
"You will have to give Cole, the Red Wild Foce Ranger his growl phone, and while you are doing that I will get the other rangers," said Princess Shayla
Trini took the phone" We're leaving right now,"
Kim and Trini teleported out of the Anamarium
***
"So those rangers are trying to get the Wild Force rangers back togeather, well not gonna happen," said Ivan"Scorpina, get me Master Org,"
"Yes sir,"
Within a few minutes Master Org Teleports in
"What do you want Ivan?"
"I want you to send down a org to capture the Lunar Wolf Ranger,"
''You got it,"
"Master, if you don't mind me asking, why do you want to capture this ranger, he is one of them?" Scorpina wondered
"Because, he will be reaquanted with an old friend," answered Ivan
***
"How are we suppose to find Cole, there are 6 different pet shops in the area?" asked KIm
"Well, from what Billy told me, he was raised in the jungle, and wanted to help animals out there, so we will start with the one out of town," answeed Trini
***
Kim and Trini were walking and they got into sight of the shop, but out of nowhere Tengas showed up
"What are these things?" asked Trini as she got into a defensive stance
Kim also got into a defensive stance"There Tengas,"
Kim runs into one and drop kicks one of them. She then rolls backwards while on the ground and grabs a Tenga between her feet and flips it over. She then does a backflip kicking one in the beak and then lands on another. She then does a flip over one and grabbes its shoulder while putting her foot in the middle of her back and she flings it over. She then gets picked up by a Tenga and dropped to the ground
Trini waits for a Tenga and she ducks one and it slams its beak into a wall. She sees another one flying towards her so she does a backflip to avoid it while kicking it, semds it even harder against the wall. She the runs up and jump kicks a Tenga knocking it to the ground. She blocks two more punches and slams a fist into the gut of one and then slams her foot on the back slamming it to the ground. Out of nowhere a Tenga runs into her and send's her flying. Kim runs over to her side. Trini slowly gets up holding her arm
"Are you okay?" Kim asked with a concern in her voice
"No, my arm, it kills," whispered Trini while breathing in and out hard
"Okay, stay here, I will handle this," said Kim. She reached her arm behind and brought out her morpher and held it out in front of her. Before she could say anything, a Tenga knocked it lose and it landed in bushes somewhere. She then gets kicked and was sent flying backwards. Trini runs to her side
The Tengas ran at her and Kim, but out of nowhere a blast knocks them down. They slowly get up
"What was that?" asked Trini
Out of the smoke, Trini could make out two figures walking their way. One of them were purple and white and had a cap on. He had a sword in his and a horn on his head. The one beside him looked like a witch. She was purple with some blue on her and also had a horn on her head
"Ehhr, who are those?" one of the Tengas asked
"Ehhr, I don't know, but lets get them," said another Tenga
The Tengas rush the two warriors. The one with the sword slashes a Tenga across the stomach and then slices up with his sword knocking another one down. He then side kicks another and slices it across the chest. He blasts down a few more with his sword
The witch takes out a staff and knocks one away. She then hits a Tenga in the gut and then brings her staff up and knocks it down. She swings her staff around and around knocking down some more Tengas. She then fires a blast from her staff taking down some more Tengas.
Two Tengas get away from the warriors and one of them fly towards Kim and Trini. Just before it got there a person jumps threw the air and knocks down the Tenga. The other one runs towards the person, but he ducks and kicks it in the back knocking it off balance and then he does a jump kick knocking it down.
"Are you two okay?" the man asked as he ran over to Trini and Kim
"Yeah, yeah, we're fine," answered Kim"Wait a minute, are you Cloe Evans?"
"Yes who are you?" asked Cole
"My name is Kim, and this Trini," answered Kim pulling Trini out from behind her"We're Power Rangers,"
"Power Rangers?"
"Yes and we need your help along with the other rangers help in stopping an evil being named Ivan Ooze," said Kim"We need to get back to the Anamarium"
The two warriors walk towards the rangers
"Jindrax, Toxica, thank you for your help," Cole said
"No problem, I could tell those two were rangers from the beginning," said Jindrax
'Wait, what you were saying, how are we suppose to get to the Anamarium, I thought Princess Shayla took it into the skies?" Cole asked
"Just hold on to me, and you will get there," said Kim
"Toxica, Jindrax, you coming?" asked Cole
"No, I don't think so, good luck with whatever you are doing," said Toxica
"Thank you for your help," thanked Kim"Oh and I think your gonna need this, Trini the phone please, Trini, the phone,"
Trini took the phone out of her pocket and held it in her hand. Kim took the phone from Trini's hand and gave it to Cole
"The Growl Phone, alright," Cole said with excitment
Cole then grabbes on to Kim's arm while Kim and Trini reached down to their communicaters and teleported to the Anamarium
***
Master Org teleports into Ivan's lair followed by purtids while they were holding a young man
"Ahh, Merrick, how nice to see you, I will give you two choices, join me the easy way or join me the hard way," told Ivan Ooze
"I will never join you," said Merrick Boltin
"In that case, putrids, put him in chains with the others," Ivan commanded
The putrids walked over to some empty chains. They put his ankles and wrists into chains. Merrick is still trying to struggle free, but is having no luck.
"Doesn't matter how much you strggles your not going to break free," said Ivan
Scorpina walks into the lair"Master, Vypra, Goldar, and Mondo, have been reassurrected," said Scopina
"Excellent, It is only a matter of time before all the monsters I need will be living again,"
***
Cole walks over to Trini with some bandages in his arm
"Are you okay, I brought some bandages for your arm," said Cole
"Thank you," Trini said
"Your blushing, don't worry I will be gental,"
"I know you will be,"
"We have to stop Ivan from doing this," said Taylor Earlhardt
"But how," said Danny
"Rangers, I have some bad news, it... it.. Merrick's been captured," Princess Shayla said. Cole could see a tear in her eye
"Oh my god," said Alyssa
"We gotta get him back," said Danny
"We will, but for right now we have to get back to the Power Chamber," commanded Trini as she walked over to join the group
"Right, let's get going guys," commanded Cole
'Princess Shayla, are you coming with us?" asked Alyssa
"Yes, I will go," she answered
"Alright," said Max
"We can travel by my fountain, indeed it will take longer," said Princess Shayla
"That's a good idea because or communicators are so old they don't have enough juice to get back to the Power Chamber," said Kimberly
"Rangers, you must hold on to me and each other if we are to travel through the fountain," said Princess Shayla
One person grabbed on to Princess Shayla then another one grabbed on to the person who was holding to to Princess Shayla and so on and so on
"I do have one question?'' said Max"Where can I get one of those communicators,"
Everybody laughed and was the transported through the fountain
To Be Continued...
lightning_ranger
07-27-2004, 06:05 AM
Looking good so far. Just one thing though, the Wild Force Rangers did lose their powers, but they were restored by the end of the last episode, so what you wrote doesn't exactly make sense.
bjlovel
07-27-2004, 09:07 AM
Oh, I didn't know that, thanks and I will go and change that
sbb1513
07-28-2004, 06:10 AM
this is really good.
~mag~
bjlovel
07-30-2004, 12:09 PM
I am not going to be here at all next week and will have limited access to the internet so their won't be a new part till i return. Hope I can see some more replies soon
Note: Vote for The Return for Fan-Fic of the month in the polls section of this forum when PackFan makes it, Thank You
Mr Tuesday II
07-31-2004, 01:58 PM
There's still the Robot Turbo Rangers. And they did have Turbo Morphers of their own. Justin got his morpher back from Storm Blaster during PRIS. TJ still has his Turbo Morpher. You could always have Billy make one more trip to Eltar and get the other Turbo Morphers from the Robot Rangers.
lightning_ranger
07-31-2004, 08:35 PM
Yeah, Billy could stop by Eltar on his way to Aquitar when he goes to get the Alien Rangers.
bjlovel
08-09-2004, 12:45 AM
"Hunter cuts through on the inside and he takes the lead, but wait what is this, it seems his brother Blake is right behind him. Noe this is what I call a family Feud people, I'll tell you that. Their coming up on the last triple and, wough, Blake just jumped the triple and passed Hunter for the lead. As they head towards the last turn Hunter tries to speed up. Blake goes to the outside, Hunter goes on the inside and takes the lead back, but Blake gunsmokes is out of the turn and takes the lead back and that does it folks, the winner of this race is Blake, while Hunter comes in second!" shouted the announcer
***
"Ah man, am I ever gonna be able to beat you again?" Hunter Bradley asked as he gave Blake a nookie
"Only in your dreams," responded Blake Bradley
A man walks up to them and shakes both their hands with a secret handshake they created
"Congrats Blake, but I gotta say, I thought Hunter had you bro," said Dustin Brooks
"I thought he did to believe it or not,"
Two more people walk over to them
"Hey, congratulations guys," said Shane Clark
"Yeah, that was the best one yet," added Tori Hanson. She went up and kissed Blake on the lips as he returned it
Hunter's smile turned to a frown when they kissed
"How come you guys can never get a room!"Dustin turned his head away. Blake and Tori broke the kiss as everbody began to laugh except for Hunter
***
At the Abyss of Evil a purple lighting bolt hits the ground and Ivan Ooze appears
"Ahhh, Lothor it is time for you to rise again and be free!" Ivan held up his arms and purple lightning came out and opened up the Abyss of Evil. A shady image appeared before Ivan
"I say this is the worst headache I have ever had," said Lothor
"Lothor, welcome back to Earth,"
"Who are you?"
"My name is Ivan Ooze, future ruler of the galaxy and the strongest being to ever live,"
"They all say that they will rule the universe and they never do, so what makes you so different?"
"Just wait and see my friend,"
A young African-American man runs up to Ivan and Lothor
"Hey what do you two think your doing!" Zack Yelled
"Ahhh, Black Ranger, how nice of you to join us, NOW LEAVE!" shouted Ivan Ooze. He shot two lighting bolts out of his arm towards Zack, but he rolls out of the way just in time" I don't have time for this, Lothor after you finish him off, teleport to the moon," commanded Ivan. Ivan teleports away
"No problem," responded Lothor
"Now Black Ranger, let's see what yoy've got,"
"No problem, It's Morphing Time!" shouts Zack
"Mastodon,"
Mammonth Black runs towards Lothor and delivers a crescent kick. Lothor ducks and tries a round house kick, but Mammoth Black blocks and tries to punch Lothor. Lothor grabes his fist and brings Mammoth Black to his knees
"How do you like this, Black Ranger," Lothor throws Mammoth Black into a tree, causing sparks to come off the suit
***
In Ninja Opps a young man is watching the fight on a monitor
"What, no, how?" were questions Cam Watanabe asked himself"Dad's at the Thunder Academy with the others, I will have to handle this,"
Cam runs out of Ninja Opps
***
Mammoth Black gets blasted by Lothor and falls to the ground in pain
"Give up ranger, you know you are never gonna be able to beat me,"
"Oh Yeah, Power Axe!" Mammoth Black calls upon his personal weapon
Mammoth Black jumps in the air with his axe in front of him, but before he could touch him, Lothor blasted him out of the sky
"Man, I can't get near him"
A Asian man runs up to where the battle was taking place
Lothor, What are you doing back!" shouted Cam
"Ah, Nephew, is that the way to greet your uncle,"
"You are no uncle of mine,"
"Oh really,"
Lothor readies an energy blast in his hands and throw it at Cam, but Mammoth Black jumps in front of him and takes the blast head on. He colapses to his knees while sparks are flying off of his suit. He hits the ground in pain
"Quick, you have to knock that amulet off of him," Cam told the Black Ranger
"Got it," Mammoth Black tries to stand up, but he falls back down"Here, take my Blade Blaster and try and shoot it off,"
"Right," Cam takes the Blade Blaster from Mammoth Black's holster and fires a single shot. Lothor wasn't quick enough to block the shot and the shot cut through the string and the amulet fell off of Lothor's neck and begain to roll towards Cam
"Nooooo!" shoted Lothor. He dives for the amulet, but Cam gets to it first and jumps in the air while doing a flip to avoid Lothor. Lothor looks up while he is still of the ground to see Mammoth Black kick him, sending him into a tree
Lothor slowly gets back up"Your going to pay for that Black Ranger,"
"Hey, Lothor, forgetting something?" Cam holds up the Samurai Amulet
"No,'' Lothor send an energy blast towards Cam
"Samurai Storm, Ranger Form, ha!" shouts Cam. The blast had no effect against Samurai
"Alright," Mammoth Black shouts
''Now lets see what two rangers can do against you," said Samurai
***
At the Thunder Academy, a strange look came upon Sensei's face. The rangers walk in and Shane is the first one to notice the look
"Sensei, are you okay?" he asked. The other rangers finally noticed the look and looked at Sensei
"The Samurai POwers, they have been unleashed
"What, how?" asked Tori
"I do not know, but we have to get over to the Abyss of Evil,"
"Right," said the rangers
***
Samurai throws a side kick at Lothor, but it is blocked and he is punched in the stomach and sent backwards. Mammoth comes in with a punch, but Lothor grabs his fist and pulls him closer and knees him for times in the gut sending upwards. Lothor jumps up and kicks Mammoth Black while he was in the air. Samurai comes back with his Samurai Sword, but Lothor catches it inbetween his hands and kicks Samurai in the gut and then round house kicks him, sending him flying away. Mammoth runs over to where Samurai landed
"Man, this guy is tough," said Mammoth Black out of breath
Six people runs towards the fight
"Lothor, what are you doing back, you are not welcome here," said Sensei. Him and the other rangers get in a defensive stance while Samurai and Mammoth runs towards the other rangers and sensei
"Ah brother, how nice to see you again,"
"With the Samurai Amulet Powers in use again, that means your powers are reastored rangers," said Sensei
"How could that be?" asked Hunter
"When Lothor absorbed your powers, he used the Amulet to do so, so the powers were in the Amulet, but now those powers are back so your powers were realeased," explained Sensei
The morphers appear on the wrist of the rangers
"Alright guys, we're back in action, ready," Shane stepped forward. The others followed
"Ready," they responded
"Ninja Storm!"
"Thunder Storm!"
"Rangers Form, ha!"
In a flash of light, the rangers were transformed
"I don't have time for this, Kelzacks," commanded Lothor. Kelzacks appeared behind Lothor"Attack,"
"Alright guys, let's take care of buisness," commanded Wind Red
Wind Blue runs in and jump kicks a Kelzack sending it flying into two others. She avoids a punch and grabbes the arm of the Kelzack and flips it over. She ducks a kick, and throws a front kick knocking down another Kelzack
"Power of Water!" shouts Wind Blue. Water comes rushing towards some Kelzacks knocking them down
Wind Yellow runs in and does a flip into a kick knocking one down. He then hook punches two more knocking them down. He back flips while hitting one in the jaw fliping it over. He blocks a punch and he returned the punch, then he flips it over his shoulder. He takes out his Ninja Sword an slices two across the chest. He then slices three more
Thunder Blue goes in and jumps on the heads of four Kelzacks and then jumps off of them and lands on two more. He grabbes a kick by a Kelzack and flips it over on its stomach. He back kicks one, then front kicks another followed by a side kick. He takes out his Thunder Staff and hits 4 Kelzacks in the head knocking them down
Thunder Red goes in the middle of a group of Kelzacks. He punches two down and then jump kicks another. He then ducks a hook punch and slams a front spinning kick across the head of a Kelzack. He goes to kick a Kelzack, but it catches his foot and flips him over. Thunder Red lands on hi feet and front kicks a Kelzack in its chin knocking it down. He then takes out his Crimson Blaster and shoot two down. He then spins in the air and shoots three more down
Samurai Slices a Kelzack across the stomach and then cuts another one from left to right knocking it down. He slices two more. He begins to spin around and slices ten acros the chest knocking them down
Wind Red blocks a kick and delivers one of his own, He then does a couple of back flips and finishes them off by landing on a Kelzack. He then side kicks another followed by an upper cut
"Power of Air!" shouts Wind Red. A huge whirlwind comes through and picks up the Kelzacks and send them flying away
Mammoth Black goes in with his Blade Sword knocking down a Kelzack. He gets on one knee and slices a Kelzack across the gut, making it flip over. He changes it to blaster mode and shoots a couple. He then jumps in the air and shoots down a couple more Kelzacks
Sensei charged at Lothor, but Lothor jumps on the air to avoid him. He shoots a blast at Sensei, but he jumps out of the way. Sensei returns a blast of his own, but Lothor deflects it. While Lothor deflected the blast Sensei did a spinning kick hitting Lothor knocking him backwords. He tries to round house kick Lothor, but he block it and returns a punch of his own, but Sensei blocked the punch. Sensei tries to front kick Lothor. Lothor blocks the kick and jumps in the air and kicks Sensei sending him backwards. As he was going backwards, Sensei shot an energy blast which collided with Lothor knocking him out of the sky and onto the ground.
"This isn't over with, brother, I will have my revenge," Lothor teleported away
The rangers de-morphed
"That was Awesome," said Dustin
"Yeah, It felt great to get our powers back," added Blake
"You got that right," responded Hunter
"Hey Sensei, you didn't get turned into a guinea pig this time," said Shane
"C'mon Shane, is that really appropriate right now," responded Cam
"No, I guess your right,"
"Excuse me, rangers, I need to talk to you," Zack said as he walked up to the team.
"Yes, what is it Black Ranger?" responded Sensei
"I was sent here to recruit you for a mission, the fate of the world is at stake,"
"By who?" asked Tori
"His name is Ivan Ooze and he is one that reassurrected Lothor, so rangers, will you help?"
"We can't. I'm sorry, but the Ninja Schools need our help," repiled Shane
"No rangers, you must go, it is your duty as a ranger to go wherever you must to protect the Earth," said Sensei
"If you say so," said Hunter
"Where do we go?" asked Dustin
"Excuse me, Sensei, I was told that you have a teleportation scroll," said Zack
"Yes that is right, if you need it it is yours, follow us,"
"Thank you,"
***
"So where do we go?" asked Dustin again while they were at Ninja Opps
"To Angel Grove and then we will meet up with other rangers," explained Zack
"Wow, you mean there's more, see I always told you guys there were more rangers then just us out there," said Dustin
"Great, now where never gonna hear the end of this," said Hunter
Everbody laughs
Sensei found the scroll and gave it to Cam. Cam unravelled and a portal appeared
"Sweet," Zack said surprised
"Well what are we waiting for, let's get going," said Tori
"Right, bye Sensei," said Shane
"Good luck rangers and remember, may the power protect you,"
Shane nodded and went in. The other rangers followed
packfan6
08-10-2004, 08:29 PM
I liked the episode. Nice to see how you had the MMPR and PRNS rangers react. I also really liked the last few sentences of the chapter, well written. It was nice to finally see, er, read Tori and Blake kissing.
Blue ninja
08-10-2004, 09:52 PM
episode was good like all the other ones it looks as if hunter might be jelious of blake and tori
lightning_ranger
08-10-2004, 10:38 PM
Who wouldn't be, Tori is hot!
Blue ninja
08-10-2004, 10:44 PM
got that right but ashley is hotter!
TheImmortalHulkHogan
08-10-2004, 11:18 PM
Great Fanfic :023: I think I might start writing one.
One question though. Where were bulk and skull? lol.
genesis09
08-11-2004, 06:33 PM
This fanfic is awesome. I'm only a fan of MMPR and don't knw anyone else but enjoyrf it nonetheless. I was worried there might be a bias on your part to write for whatever team was your favorite but you're doing a good job of including everyone. I knew this would be good when the 1st fight inolved my favorite teamof Rangers: the originals. Keep up the good work.This has got my vote already.
genesis09
08-11-2004, 06:33 PM
This fanfic is awesome. I'm only a fan of MMPR and don't knw anyone else but enjoyed it nonetheless. I was worried there might be a bias on your part to write for whatever team was your favorite but you're doing a good job of including everyone. I knew this would be good when the 1st fight inolved my favorite team of Rangers: the originals. Keep up the good work.This has got my vote already.
bjlovel
08-12-2004, 08:02 PM
Immortal- Bulk and Skull will be in it
genesis- glad yoiu like it
blue ninja- thanks for your help in editing the parts
p.s. Tori is fu**ing hot
Dcaasi98
08-12-2004, 08:21 PM
I've skimmed through some of your episodes and I must say, I'm impressed.
Keep it up.
I'll try to read more tomarrow when I have some free time. I'm workin on my Fic right now, and I'm trying to get this one part done tonight.
sbb1513
08-13-2004, 07:50 AM
these really r good.
~mag~ :007:
The Night
08-14-2004, 09:12 PM
Excellent fanfic. Too bad there couldn't be a movie teamup of all the ranger together. I can't wait for the next chapter where I'm guessing Tommy and Kat will go get the DT rangers.
bjlovel
08-14-2004, 09:24 PM
how did u know, lol
r u ever gonna finish this? its a really good fic
bjlovel
08-19-2004, 09:50 AM
I am really busy for the rest of the summer. I have started double sessions in football, which takes up 9 hours a day and the free time i have i am to tired so i am working on the next part piece by piece.
lightning_ranger
08-19-2004, 04:08 PM
9 hours a day of football, for one that's nuts, and I don't think anyone does that.
bjlovel
08-20-2004, 12:05 AM
from 7-11:30a.m. is one practice then 3-7:30p.m. is the second practice. Do the math, that's 9
bjlovel
08-20-2004, 12:06 AM
"I wonder what Dr.O is doing?" asked Kira Ford
"I'm sure he is catching up on old times and having fun at the same time," reasurred Connor Mcknight
"I wish we could of gone, I mean it would be so cool to meet the first ever power rangers," said Ethan James
A beep stops the conversation between the rangers"Go ahead Hayley,"
"Connor, there is a monster attacking downtown, Trent is already there, but I don't think he can hold his own for much longer," said Hayley through the Dino Gems
Connor respond" We're on it. Come on guys, lets get going," Connor nods to the others
"I guess evil never takes a holiday," commented Ethan
"Ready?" asked Connor
"Ready," answered the other two
"Dino Thunder, Power Up, Ha!"
***
Dino White gets thrown into a building
"Had enough white ranger?" A monster was standing over him. It had a long nose, red hair, and big eyes. It reaches down and pickes up Dino White by the throat"Say goodbye,"
The monster made a hole in the ground and was getting ready to throw the White Ranger into it, but he is hit by a couple of blasts and drops Dino White
"Huh, what was that?" asked the creature. He turned his head to see the other three rangers standing there holding their Thundermax Blasters
"I will get you for that rangers,'
"I don't think so, Laser Arrows," Dino White creates the arrows and shoots them at the monster knocking him down
"Alright guys, let's bring em' togeather, Z-Rex Blaster!" shouted Dino Red
Dino Yellow connectes her Ptera Grips to Dino Blue's Tricera Sheild, followed by Dino Red conneting his Tyranno Staff to the Tricera Sheild. Dino Yellow kneels down on the right fron of th eblast while Dino Blue kneels on the right side of the front of the blast whil Dino Red is standing behind the blaster
"Ready?" askes Dino Red
"Fire!" shouts the three rangers
The crature falls over backwrads and explodes
***
"If only Mesogog didn't waist all the power to reassurrect that purple eightiet, I would of been able to destroy those rangers," Elsa says to herself
"It must get really lonely being here yourself," says a voice
"Who are you?" asked Elsa. She looked around the room and couldn't see anybody
"Come with me, I need your help," says the voice. A purple portal appears in front of Elsa
"Why should I go with you?" Elsa asked
''Just come, you will find out soon enough," answers the voice
Elsa nods and relluctently walks into the portal
***
The four rangers walk into Dino Opps
"Is it just me or does Mesogogs monster keep getting weaker and weaker?" asked Kira
"I don't think those are Mesogogs monsters, they are much to easy to defeat," answers Trent Fernandez
"Maybe we are just getting stronger," mentions Connor
"Connor's right, the more you fight, the stronger the Dino Gems gets, as well as yourselves," said Hayley
"Thats sweet, that means Mesogog will be no match for us when we fight him," said Ethan
"Hold it right their Ethan, you guys may be strong, but I don't think you guys are srong enough to take him on quite yet," said Hayley
"Well I'm just glad it is Summer, anybody up for going to the beach?" asked Connor
"I'm in," answers Kira
"Me too," said Ethan
"I can't I gotta work," said Trent
''Dude c'mon, take the day of or something," said Ethan
''Sorry guys, I can't, we have a special guest coming to the cafe and I need to help get it ready,"
"Hayley, what about you, you coming?" asked Connor
"No I don't think so, I have to go to the cafe too and set up," answers Hayley
"Okay, I gues we'll see you two later," said Kira
***
Elsa walks out of the purple portal and into the main room to see a person in ooze standing there waiting for her
"Ivan Ooze, what do you want?" she asked
"I figured you might wanna see somebody," responded Ivan Ooze
"Oh yeah and who would that be?"
Elsa looked over to her right to see a door open up. Standing behind the door was somebody she hasn't seen since the explosion
"Zeltrax? But how?" asked Elsa. She stood there with her mouth opened
Zeltrax had green eyes. His armor is turned red and his sword became black. There are black lines going everywhere on him
"I would like to introduce you to Crimson Zeltrax, a power-up mode of the original," explained Ivan Ooze
"It is nice to see you again, Elsa," said Crimson Zeltrax
"Wish I could say the same," responded Elsa
"Ivan, you fool, what have you done?" asked Mesogog as he walked into the room
"Ahh, there you are, I thought you would of been here sooner,"
"You used the Crimson Ruby, you eightiet, the Crimson Ruby is too strong, for anybody to use," explained Mesogog
"You underestimate me, I know all about the Crimson Ruby, but see I intend to send Zeltrax down to stop the Dino Rangers in coming, unless you have a better idea?"
"Let's just see if your idea will work, Zeltrax go down and attack Reefside and make sure those rangers do not interfear with our plans,"
"Yes Master, Elsa will you be coming, it will be just like old times," said Crimson Zeltrax
"Oh please, just get going,'' responded Elsa
Crimson Zeltrax teleports away
"You better know what you are doing, Ivan," said Mesogog
"Do not worry, everything will be fine," reassured Ivan
***
A Black and Pink light appears at the Cyber Cafe
"Tommy, you sure they will be here?" asked Kat
"Trust me, this is like the Juice Bar of their time," said Tommy
They walk in and they spot Trent and Hayley working
Trent looked up at them "Hey Dr.O, hey Kat,"
''Hey Trent," said Tommy
"Tommy, Kat, over here," Hayley is waving them to the backroom
"So what are you guys doing back so soon?" asked Hayley
"Listen, we don't have much time, Mesogog has joined forces with an evil being named Ivan Ooze, and are planning on taking over Earth,'' explained Tommy
"We need to get the rangers and bring them back to Angel Grove," said Kat
"Why, what's at Angel Grove?" asked Hayley
''We will be meeting with the other ranger teams to discuss the threat," answered Tommy
''Okay, well they are at the beach," said Hayley
"Okay, we will get them and meet up with you and Trent at Dino Opps,"
"Got it,"
***
"Connor over here, kick it!" shouted Ethan
Connor winds up his leg and kicks the ball. Instead of it going towards Ethan, it went towards Kira who was in a two piece yellow bikini tanning
"Kira watch ou..."
The ball hits Kira on the head
Kira begins to rub her head" Okay, who did that?"
"It was all Ethan, I swear," said Connor
"What, what are yo..." Ethan begins to run away while Kira is chasing after him
Ethan runs behind Connor and uses him as a sheild. Explosions rang across the ground knocking the three rangers to the ground. Evreybody begins to run away
Connor slowly gets up"Are you guys okay?"
"Yeah, we're fine," answers Kira as she and Ethan slowly get up
"What was that all about?" asked Ethan
"Don't know," answered Connor
"Rangers, remember me,"
The rangers turn around to see a figure that looks familer
"Zeltrax, Is that you?" asked Kira
"Crimson Zeltrax to you, rangers," answered Crimson Zeltrax
"I gotta say, I like the new look, to bad you won't be around long enough to show it off," said Ethan
"Ready, guys?" asked Connor
"Ready," they answered
"Dino Thunder, Power Up, Ha!"
"Tricera!" shouted Ethan
"Ptera!" shouted Kira
"Tyranno!" shouted Connor
"Dino Thunder, Ha!"
Crimson Zeltrax ran towards the rangers "Those won't save you this time,"
Dino Red goes into round-house kick him, but Zeltrax grabbes his leg and throws him towards Dino Yellow. Dino Blue jumps through the air with his Thundermax Saber, but is shot down by lightning coming out of his hand
"Well that is new," commented Dino Yellow
"Trent, we need your help at the beach right away, an old friend has returned," said Dino Red
"Connor, I'm on my way," answered Trent
Zeltrax holds his hand up in the air and causes the sky to turn black with a thunder and lightning storm
"Welcome to my nightmare, rangers," said Crimson Zeltrax
Lightning comes down and strikes the three rangers sending them flying into the shallow water of the beach. As they try and get up, sparks begin to explode across their suits
"Let's take it up a notch," commanded Dino Red
Dino Yellow and Dino Blue nod "Right,"
"Super Dino Mode!" shouts the rangers
"Now let's see who can take who,'' said Dino Blue
"Let's get him guys," said Dino Yellow
The rangers runs towards Crimson Zeltrax. Dino Blue goes in with a punch, but Crimson Zeltrax blocks it and fires a couple of lighting bolts into the gut of Dino Blue sending him flying backwards and causes him to forcibly de-morph. Dino Yellow flies through the air with her Ptera Grips in hand. Zeltrax tries to blast her, but she dodges the lightning and goes flying towards Zeltrax at a fast amout of speed
Zeltrax points his hand to the sky and a lightning blots strikes Dino Yellow causing her to fall. When she hits the ground, she is forcibly de-morphed "You'll have to do better then that Yellow Ranger,"
"Then how bout' this," Dino Red said. He goes super speed and goes back and forth slicing Zeltrak across the chest . As he goes aorund once more, Crimson Zeltrax takes out his sword and slices it across the stomach of Dino Red, knocking him down. He then fires a chain of lighting and it wraps around Dino Red and lifts him in the air while electricuting him at the same time. Sparks are flying everywhere till Crimson Zeltrax throws him towards the ground causing him to forcibly de-morph
"Now it is time you die rangers, hahahaha,'' Zeltrax holds his hand in the sky and lightning bolts begin to fly into his hand and it creates a white enrgy ball, surging with power. Out of nowhere two people jump-kick Zeltrax and it causes him to lose the ball. The ball explodes and send Crimson Zeltrax into the water
Blue ninja
08-20-2004, 01:09 AM
Dude real great keep it up
sbb1513
08-20-2004, 05:57 AM
it gets better and better each time.
~mag~ :007:
lightning_ranger
08-20-2004, 06:14 AM
Great story, thanks for taking the time out of your busy schedule to post it. But still, 9 hours of football, that's stupid. Don't you have anything better to do with your time and since when is football so important.
bjlovel
08-20-2004, 07:47 AM
since we are defending state champs, and this year their are only 7 senoirs on the team instead of 28 last year
packfan6
08-20-2004, 09:45 AM
Great story, thanks for taking the time out of your busy schedule to post it. But still, 9 hours of football, that's stupid. Don't you have anything better to do with your time and since when is football so important.
Football's always been this important.
Great episode Bjlovel. I could easily see and hear what was going on. Hope you can get the next episode up sometime.
bjlovel
08-20-2004, 12:02 PM
i am gonna wait for a few more replies before i post the next part. The next part will be up saturday night, so watch for it
bjlovel
08-22-2004, 07:17 PM
He slowly gets back up "Who dares to attack me from behi... You, how dare you?''
"Huh, Smitty, what happened to you?" asked Tommy standing their with Kat right next to him
"You like the new and improved me. I finally have the power to defeat the great Tommy Oliver," answered Crimson Zeltrax
Tommy readies his Dino Key "Oh yeah we'll see about that, Ready Kat?"
"Ready," she anwered
"Dino Thunder, Power Up, Eh!"
"Brachio," shouted Tommy
"It's Morphing Time!'
"Zeo Ranger One, Pink!" shouted Kat
"Ah, a pink ranger, that's new," Zeltrax runs towards Zeo Pink and Dino Black
Zeo Pink runs towards Zeltrax with her zeo sword. she swings horizontially towards Zeltrax. He blockes it with his sword and kicks her in the gut and then he slices his sword upards, sending Zeo Pink into a backflip and landing on the ground
Dino Black runs in with his Brachio Staff. They counter each others blows. Crimson Zeltrax gains the upperhand by grabbing on to Dino Blacks arm and slices his wrist making him drop his staff. He then kicks him in the gut a slashes Dino Black a couple of times then fires laser beams towards Dino Black sending him flying backwards
Zeo Pink shoots Zeltrax with her Zeo Pistol. It had no effect against him. He points his arm into the sky and five lighting bolts hit Zeo Pink on all sides at once. She falls down and explodes. All that is left there is Kat unconcious
"Kaaaaaaat, noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!" shouted Dino Black
Dino Black runs towards Crimson Zeltrax, but he creates an Erath Quake and opens up a hole in the ground. Dino Black falls into it. Zeltrax then closes the hole with Dino Black in it. Dino Black is being squeezed to death
"Ahhh, I...ahhhhhh, can't....get....out," Dino Blacks voice begins to fade away
"Oh no, Dr.O," said Ethan slowly cominh through
"Connor we've gotta do something," said Kira slowly trying to get up
"I know, but what?" asked Connor as he slowly got to his feet
"Laser Arrows!" shouts Dino White
The arrows hit Zeltrax in theback knocking him to his knees
Dino White runs towards Dino Black "Hold on Dr.O, Laser Arrows,"
Dino White creates the Arrows and shoots them towards the ground around Dino Black. They exploded along with ground and Dino Black got himself out of the hole
Dino White picks up Dino Black and supporte shim on his shoulder "Thanks Trent," said Dino Black
"No Problem," responded Dino White
"Oh, but there is a problem," said Crimson Zeltrax holding up Kat
"Kat, you let her go or else," said Dino Black out of breath
"Or else what?''
"Or else this!" shouted Ethan
He ran in and used his Dino Power armor to hit Zeltrax in the hand then Kira used her Ptera Scream. The Scream hit his hand and he let go of Kat. Connor then used hid Dino Speed and picked up Kat and ran her to Dino Black and White. Ethan and Kira re-group with the other three
Dino Black gets on one knee and picks up Kat's head
"Kat, honey, can you speak to me, please," begged Dino Black
She slowly opens her eyes "Tommy, wh...wha...what happened?"
"It is a long story, just stay here,"
Kat nods "Okay,"
He stands back up next to Dino White, Connor, Kira, and Ethan
"You guys ready?" asked Dino Black
"Yeah," said Connor
''Then what are you guys waiting for?"
"Dino Thunder, Power Up, Ha!"
The rangers stand side by side
"Connor, I think it is time to go Triassic," mentions Dino Yellow
"Right, Sheild Of Triumph!" Dino Red holds out his arm and the Triassic Sheild appeard
"Triassic Power Engage!" Dino Blue and Dino Yellow stand on the sides of Dino Red and puts some of their power into the sheild
Dino Red transforms into the Triassic Ranger
"Trent, now its out turn," said Dino Black
Dino White nods "You got it,"
"Super Dino Mode!"
"Kira, you ready?" askes Dino Blue
"Yeah," answers Dino Yellow
"Wait you two, you are not stong enough to tranform, stay here and protect Kat,'' commanded Dino Black
"Whatever you say Dr.O," responded Dino Yellow
"Alright guys, let's do it," said Dino Black
"You think those powers will stop me, ha, bring it on," said Crimson Zeltrax
''With pleasue," respond Triassic Ranger
The three rangers runs towards Crimson Zeltrax. Dino Black does a round-house kick, but Zeltrax ducks and side kicks Dino White. He then blast a lightning bolt at Dino Black knockinh him down. He then does the same to Dino White
Triassic Ranger runs towards Zeltrax. Zeltrax fires a lightning bolt at Triassic Ranger, but he block it with his sheild. He then pops out the sword while Zeltrax does the same
The two crash swords a couple of times. Zeltrax sees and opening and tries to take advantage by it and thrust his sword towards the Triassic Ranger. Triassic Ranger saw what he was doing and parried the blow followed by three slices across the chest to Zeltrax finished up with a stab knocking Zeltrax back a bit
Dino White slashes Zeltrax five times and ends it with a drop kick knocking Zeltrax back a little more. Dino Black comes back and slashes Zeltax a few more times followed by a back kick knocking Zeltrax back a little further
"Hey, Zeltrax, how do you like to come to my dimension," Triassic Ranger pulls Zeltrax into his dimension where he has an advantage
"Come out here now Triassic Ranger, I'm not through with you yet!" yells Crimson Zeltrax
'Should be careful what you wish for because it might just come through,'' Triassic Ranger slams a jump-kick into the chest of Zeltrax knocking him down
"Is that the best you got?" Zeltrax creates a white energy ball and throws it at the ceiling of the dimension. The dimension then diappears and alll that is standing there is Crimson Zeltrax and Triassic Ranger
"What no way, nobody hase ever been able to do that," said Dino Yellow
"Connor's gonna have a fight on his hands," said Dino White
"Guys, the only way Connor will be able to defeat Zeltrax is in that dimension, must distract him along enough for Connor to get the power to create it again," said Hayley through the Dino Gems
"Right, Trent lets get going," commanded Dino Black
"Right,"
"Hey Zeltrax!" shouted Dino Black
"What?"
"Energy Orb, Attack!" shouts Dino Black. He moves the Brachio Staff in a circular motion and creates and energy orb. He then throws it at Zeltrax. The blast causes Zeltrax to fall to the ground
He slowly gets back up "You'll have to do better then that,"
"Laser Arrows," Dino White shoots the arrows at Zeltrax hitting him in the back and causing him to fall down to his knees
"Was that enough?" asked Dino White
"Not even close,"
"If that's the case," said Dino Black.
He charges in towards Zeltrax while Dino White charges in at the same time. Dino Black tries to slice Zeltrax, but he blocks it and kicks him in the gut. Dino White treis a round-house kick from behind, but Zeltrax ducks and delivers a side kick to Dino White followed by a slash across the chest
Dino Black slices Crimson Zeltrax across the chest and then ducks and slices him across the stomach followed by a slash upwards. The hit caused Zeltrax to take a few steps back, but he recovers very quickly and shoots a lightning bolt at Dino Black, sending him crashing through a stone wall
Dino White comes back with a slash across the back followed by a front kick. Dino White rushes Zeltrax, but he turns around quick enough and slashes him across the stomach and then across the back sending him rolling across the ground. Dino Black re-groups with Dino White. Zeltrax fires ten lightning bolts at the two rangers. They make a huge explosion and in the ashes were Tommy and Trent un-morphed. Dino Blue carried kat over to them whil Dino Yellow followed
"Oh great now what?" asked Dino Blue
"Look, it's Connor," said Dino Yellow
The Triassic Ranger pulls Crimson Zeltrax back into the dimension
'This place didn't hold me once, what, do you think it could hold me again, I don't think so,"
"Well I do think so," Triassic Ranger go super speed and slashes Zeltrax across the chest knocking him down
"It's time to finish this,"
"Triassic Sheild, Full Power!"
Triassic Ranger energieze's the sword and slashe's it across Crimson Zeltrax. The dimension disappears and Connor runs out of power and is forcibly de-morphed
Crimson Zeltrax has sparks flying across and out of him. He begins to fall down and explodes. The explosion sends the rangers off in opposite directions
***
"Zeltrax put up a fight, and did what I was hoping he could do," said Ivan
''And what was that?" asked Mesogog
"Do enough damage to Tommy and his power rangers to weaken them,"
***
Connor slowly opens up his eyes. The sky has cleared. He sees a women walking towards him
"Connor, Connor, wake-up, Connor," said the women
Connor gets a confused look on his face "Britney Spears?"
The women hits Connor in the arm
"Kira, I knew it was you all along,"
"Ahha, sure, c'mon lets get you up,"
Kira helps Connor to his feet
"Where are the others?" asked Connor
"They are back at Dino Opps, they sent me to get you," answered Kira
Kira puts Connor on the front of the Raptor Cycle. She then gets on and they drive off
***
Scorpina walks into the Ivan's liar
"Master, everybody you need is living again," said Scorpina
Ivan nodds his head "Excellent,"
***
Back at Dino Opps, the rangers with the help of Hayley are nursing their wounds
"Man I say that was the toughest battle yet," said Ethan
"Yeah, no doubt," responded Trent
"Kat are you okay?" asked Tommy
''Yeah I'm fine," responded Kat
"It is time, we have to get going," said Tommy
"Go where?" asked Kira
"Angel Grove, Zeltrax is one thing of many obsticales that will stand in our way. Their is a war coming and all the rangers from the past are getting togeather to stop it," explained Tommy
"Sweet, that means we will get to see all the other rangers," said Ethan excitidly
"Yeah," said Kat
Ethan elbows Connor "Connor, that means the pink ranger,"
"It does doesn't it," replied Connor
Everybody begins to laugh except for Kira and Tommy
Tommy walks over to the comuter and presses a button
"Billy, we're done here we're on our way back," said Tommy
"Got it, hey are you guys okay, I saw the whole fight on the viewing screen, looks like you guys took a beating," responded Billy
"Yeah we're fine, we'll see you soon,"
"What will we tell our parents?" asked Connor
"Just say you guys are going to a summer camp," said Hayley
Ethan nodded "Yeah that should work,"
"Hayley your coming, aren't ya," asked Kat
"I don't know, maybe," responded Hayley
C'mon Hayley," said Trent
"We could really use your help," begged Kat" Besides, I think you will really like Billy,"
"Well okay then," agreed Hayley
To Be Coninued...
lightning_ranger
08-22-2004, 08:08 PM
Britney Spears, lol. That is so Connor. Another great chapter. I can't wait for more.
Blue ninja
08-22-2004, 10:11 PM
nice two parter dude
Apollo
08-23-2004, 01:56 PM
Nice humor, totally DT, can't wait to hear more.
packfan6
08-24-2004, 10:21 AM
Wow, another great episode. Loved the fight scene.
genesis09
08-24-2004, 01:01 PM
Awesome story. I'm just getting back into PR & doing so with PRNS & PRDT on Toon Disney, so their fresh in my mind when I read your stroy and can see everything clearly. I can't wait to see Scorpina in action, and judging be her line about everyone Ivan needing being finally resurrected makes me anxious to see where the action goes from here. Everything is coming along really well and you're doing a good job of depicting each of the Ranger's individual trait's & personality, which is essential to making a good fanfic. Good, however, used as a term to describe your stories, is an understatement.
Dcaasi98
08-24-2004, 11:22 PM
Wow, another great episode. Loved the fight scene.
What he said. I'm really liking the detail.
I hate to say this but this really makes my Fic look like shit, I need to do some work.
The Night
08-24-2004, 11:48 PM
Great 2 episode dealing with DT. I've been busy lately and haven't had the chance to read them until tonight. I can't wait for the next, especially now that every team is meeting together next I'm guessing.
FireOrangeRanger
08-25-2004, 01:30 PM
Wow great story so far. I had a similar Idea to this that I wanted to do. Would any of you guys like to hear my version of this fanfic?
Blue ninja
08-25-2004, 01:58 PM
sure..........
FireOrangeRanger
08-25-2004, 02:12 PM
I'm currently working on the details right now but it's going to be called The Return of Master Vile. I will be focusing on one ranger team at a time starting with MMPR.
lightning_ranger
08-25-2004, 05:51 PM
That sounds like it will also be a good story. We all look forward to you sharing it with us.
genesis09
08-25-2004, 07:06 PM
Yeah, let us know when its up.
FireOrangeRanger
08-25-2004, 11:46 PM
It will probably be up around the weekend. I've started the 1st chapter. Master Vile is going to ressurect the lost villians such as trakeena. I've still got some research to do. Look for a preview tomorrow, either afternoon or evening PDT. :023:
bjlovel
08-26-2004, 10:33 PM
The next eps. should be up sometime during the week-end
genesis09
08-27-2004, 09:54 AM
cool
a04141
08-28-2004, 11:06 PM
Looks good. Can't wait for more. :)
bjlovel
08-29-2004, 09:30 PM
any more replies before i post a new part tonight?
lightning_ranger
08-29-2004, 10:53 PM
Well, what happened to that part you were going to post? We're all really looking forward to the continuation of this story. TIA
bjlovel
08-30-2004, 12:26 AM
"D.E.C.A. how much longer till we reach Aquatar?" asked Leo
"We will be arriving on the planet in 2 gigabites,"
"We're getting a signal from Aquatar," said Kendrix
"Patch it through," commanded Jason
On the monitor, a staticle picture of Cestria appears
"Ra...we are und...er att...ck, we n...eed your.... he...lp,"
The picture disappears
''What was all that about?" asked Kai
Jason shook his head"I don't know, but we have to get to Aquatar now,"
"We are arriving in Aquatar's atmosphere," said D.E.C.A.
"What a coincedence," said Damon
"There are Quanatrons attacking everywhere down there," said Kendrix
''We have to help them," said Maya
"Take us down," commanded Leo
"No problem," answered Damon
***
The Alien Rangers are fighting the Quanatrons
Alien Red is fighting on land and back-kicks a Quanatron. He then grabbes an arm and flips another one over. He takes out his blaster and shoots three of them down. He leaps in the sky and shoots a couple more. As he is in the sky, a blast knocks him down. The Quanatrons didn't waist any time and pounced on him
Alien Blue is fighting on the ocean surface. He jabs a Quanatron in the gut. He hooks another knocking it down. He gets slashed in the black by a blade and falls to his knees. The quanatron that slashed him the first time went back in with its blade, but Alien Blue does a kick and knocks it away followed by another kick knocking it down. Alien Blue then clears some space with his sword.
"Aquatar Waterfall!" shouted Alien Blue
He creates a water fall and drowns fifteen Quanatrons in it. Then blast from all sides against Alien Blue causes him to go to the ground and he forcibly de-morphes
Alien Yellow is fighting on top of the water. He punches a Quanatron. He then grabes onto an arm of a Qaunatron and spins into three other quanatrons. He takes out his sword and slices upwards knocking a Quanatron down. He then slices two more Quanatrons across the chest knocking them down. Alien Yellow then creates a hurricane out of his sword and it makes a tidel wave drowning twelve Quanatrons. He gets blast from the sky and the blast hits his helmit. He loses conciousnes and is forcbly de-morphed. He slowly flots to the bottom of the Ocean
Alien Black and Alien White were fighting back to back. Alien White front kicks a Quanatron then side-kicks another. Alien Black trips three Quanatrons. He then round-house kicks one followed by a spinning kick knocking down two other ones. He takes out his sword and blaster. He blocks a slash from a Quanatron and shoots it with his blaster. He then slices another across the chest
Alien White grabbes two arms of two Quanatrons and flips them over. She then spin-kicks away a blade with her left foot and comes back around and kicks the Quanatron with her right foot. She take out her sword and slices a Quanatron backwards followed by a few more slices knocking down some more Quanatrons. Alien Black and white re-group with each other again. They turn their head to see Hydro Hog walking towards them. He fires a blast that knocks down the two rangers
He walks over to them and begins to de-hydrate them. They de-morph
''This is to easy," said Hydro Hog
Out of nowhere a blast hits him in the black sending him flying
"Huh, who was that?"
The five Galaxy Rangers fly pass Corcus and Delphine knocking down the Quanatrons surrounding them. Tyranno Red jumps of and lands next to the two rangers
"Delphine, Corcus are you guys okay?" asked Tyranno Red. He runs over and picks up Delphines head
She slowly opens her eyes "The Others," she said weakly" They dying, you have to help them,"
"We'll do our best," answered Tyranno Red
"Leo, you guys have to get the others," said Tyranno Red through his helmet
"Got it," answered Galaxy Red
Tyranno Red gets blasted from behind by Hydro Hog and thrown to the ground
***
"Guys, you heard Jason,go find them, I'm gonna go back help him," commanded Galaxy Red
''Got it," they answered
They took off in seperate directions
Galaxy Pink and Yellow were flying over to where Tideus was fighting
Galaxy Pink points down to the water "Maya, look, down there,"
"I'm on it,"
She flies her Jet Jammer into the water. She sees Tideus and goes to pick him up. Galaxy Pink is blasting Quanatrons on the water trying to keep them away from Galaxy Yellow and Tideus. Galaxy Yellow picks up Tideus and flies him out of the water
"Let's go,'' said Galaxy Yellow
The two rangers fly back towards Tyranno Red and Galaxy Red
***
Galaxy Blue flies towerds Cestro
"Oh no, I gotta hurry," he said to himself
He flies his Jet Jammer towards the Quantrons and fires some blasts clearing the Quanatrons away from Cestro
"Cestro, grab my hand," commanded Galaxy Blue
Cestro held his hand up and Galaxy Blue flew by and grabbed his hand and brought him up to the top of the Jet Jammer
"You okay?" asked Galaxy Blue
"Yeah, I'm fine," answered Cestro weakly
"C'mon, lets get back to the others,"
***
Galaxy Green flies towards the Quanatrons holding Aurico
"Aurico, hold on!"
As Galaxy Green goes towards Aurico his Jet Jammer is blasted from the sky. He jumps down and runs towards Aurico. He free's Aurico from the Quanatrons that were holding him
"You okay?" Galaxy Green asked
"Yeah, but we have to get out of here," answered Aurico
Galaxy Green puts his fingers up to his helmet
"Hey guys, we need some help over here,"
Galaxy Pink responds to it "Damon, hold on,"
A Quanatron runs towards Galaxy Green. It throws a punch at Galaxy Green, but he blocks and kicks it in the back knocking it down. He then side kicks a Quanatron followed by a round-house kick to another
***
Tyranno Red round-house kicks Hydro Hog. Hydro Hog grabbes his foot and flips him over. Tyranno Red re-groups and goes in for a side-kick. Hydro Hog blocks it and fires an energy blast connecting to the back of Tyranno Red knocking him to the ground
"Man this guy is tough,"
As Hydro Hog stalks towards Tyranno Red, who is on the ground, a blast hits Hydro Hog knocking him down
"Hold on, Jason," said Galaxy Red as he flew by
"Alright, Leo,"
Galaxy Red jumps down from his Jet Jammer and runs towards Tyranno Red and helps him up
"Jason, what do you say we take care of this one togeather,"
"Right,"
The two red rangers runs towards Hydro Hog. Galaxy Red jumps and does a round-house kick. Tyranno Red jumps and does a side-kick. Both kicks connect and knock Hydro Hog down
"You'll pay for that," Hydro Hog turns around and fire's and energy blast at Delphine and Corcus. Just before the blast connects Galaxy Yellow jumps in between the blast and the two Aquitians. The blast connects. Galaxy Yellow falls down with sparks coming off of her suit and is forcibly de-morphed
"Maya, no!" shouted Galaxy Red
He runs at Hydro Hog with his Quasar Saber in hand. He slashes Hydro Hog across the chest and then upwards followed by a back kick knocking Hydro Hog back a few steps
"Quasar Saber, Full Power!" shouted Galaxy Red
He energized his saber and went to slash Hydro Hog with it. Hydro Hog catches the saber and absorbs the energy from it and throws it back at Galaxy Red. On contact a huge explosion occurred and left Leo on the ground un-morphed
Tyranno Red runs towards Leo"Leo, you okay?"
There was no response. Galaxy Blue blasts Hydro Hog from his Jet Jammer and jumps down next to Maya with Tideus in hand
'Kai, Leo, Jason, you have to help them," said Maya
"Right, watch over Tideus for me," responded Galaxy Blue
"No problem, now go,"
Galaxy Blue takes out his Quasar Saber and slashes Hydro Hog across the back
"Jason, get Leo to Maya, I will hold him,"
Tyranno Red nods and takes Leo over to Maya. Hydro Hog back fist Galaxy Blue and knocks him to the ground.
"You are pathetic," commented Hydro Hog
Tyranno Red jumps towards Hydro Hog "We'll see who's pathetic,"
Tyrano Red blast Hydro Hog three times with his Blade Blaster then does a spinning kick knocking Hydro Hog to the ground
***
Galaxy Green slashes away a Quanatron with his Quasar Saber
Quanatrons surrounded Galaxy Green and Aurico ''Anytime now Kendrix," said Galaxy green through his helmet
Galaxy Pink flies over Galaxy Green and blasts the Quanatrons away
"Grab on," commanded Galaxy Pink
She flew down low enough to grab Galaxy Greens hand while Aurico had Galaxy Greens other hand. Galaxy Pink pulls them up thanks to the momentum
"How was that timing?" asked Galaxy Pink
"Could you of cut it any closer," answered Galaxy Green
She flew back towards the others
***
Tyranno Red went flying to the ground and was forcibly de-morphed. He struggled to get to Maya and the others
Hydro Hog stalks towards Jason "Where do you think you going?''
"Quasar Saber, Energize!"
Galaxy Blue energized his Quasar Saber and slashed it across Hydro Hogs back causing sparks to fly "Where did you think you were going?"
Jason makes it over to Maya and the other rangers. Hydro Hog get sback up and fires an energy blast knocking Galaxy Blue to the ground and was forcibly de-morphed
"What now blue boy?"
A blast hit Hydro Hog knocking him down. Galaxy Pink and Green jumped down to where the other rangers were with Aurico
"I really wish they would stop doing that," commented Hydro Hog
"You guys okay?" asked Galaxy Pink
"We have to get out of here, we can't beat them," said Leo
"I agree," commented Kai
"Rangers, grab on to one of us," said Delphine "We can teleport to a safer place,"
"Alright, you guys go, we will cover you," said Galaxy Green
"No way, there is no way you guys can win," said Maya
"I know, but you guys won't be able to get away, now go," said Galaxy Pink
"May the power protect you," said Jason
Each ranger grabbed on to an alien ranger and was teleported away
Galaxy Green looked over to Galaxy Pink "You ready for this?"
''Lets do it," answered Galaxy Pink
The two rangers charge into battle
To Be Continued in Reunited Pt.XI
bjlovel
08-30-2004, 12:27 AM
sorry I didn't post it last night, I got caught up with the VMA's and I lost track of time
ranger fan 9000
08-30-2004, 01:54 AM
very nice
lightning_ranger
08-30-2004, 06:13 AM
Another great chapter, can't wait for more.
Apollo
08-30-2004, 10:04 AM
Just 1 thing i am not sure of your terminology (sp) "We will be arriving on the planet in 2 gigabites" This is a term of space rather than time but other than that i enjoyed the ep.
genesis09
08-30-2004, 11:24 AM
A good episode. I like that despite all the fights with all the different rangers, you manage to make each one different AND cool. The fights are never boring to me.
bjlovel
08-30-2004, 12:08 PM
Just 1 thing i am not sure of your terminology (sp) "We will be arriving on the planet in 2 gigabites" This is a term of space rather than time but other than that i enjoyed the ep.
Yeah I was trying to say something that the Space Rangers said through their season but I forgot what it was, if someone knows of a word that fits then im me at bjlovel
bjlovel
08-30-2004, 09:27 PM
Any replies anyone?
Dcaasi98
08-31-2004, 09:02 PM
Keep it up Bj. :023:
Well, I think it's a trend that started some time ago... read and not reply. You're doing a great job.
bjlovel
09-02-2004, 01:23 AM
"Everything is working perfectly," said Scorpina
"It is only a matter of time before I have two ranger teams out of my way," said Ivan Ooze
"Elsa, how is it coming finding the rest of the Crimson Ruby?" asked Mesogog
"It is going well master, I just sent Rito and some Tengas after it," answered Elsa
"Excellent," responded Mesogog
***
The rangers teleport into an underwater base that has not been attacked yet. Jason and Kai helped Delphine and Corcus into an energy tube that would re-hydrate them. Cestria was waiting for them and helped Jason and Kai put Delphine and Corcus in the energy tube
"We have to go back for Kendrix and Damon," said Leo
"No, we have to come up with a plan," said Jason "Starting with how Hydro Hog is living again,I mean I thought you defeated him while you were on Earth"
"We do not know how he came back to this life," said Tideus
"Out of the blue, Quntrons appeared and started to attack. We sent out a distress signal when we knew we couldn't win on our own," explained Cestria
"That is when Hydro Hog appeared and started to attack, their combine forces were to much for us to handle and that is when you came in," explained Aurico some more
"That sounds harsh," commented Kai
"How do we stop Hydro Hog?" asked Maya
Delphine and Corcus walked out of the tube fully re-hydrated "We have to go at him with full force, and then we should have enough power to destroy him,"
"Great so what is the plane?" asked Leo
"The plane is....," before Aurico could finish his sentence Hydro Hog appeared on a screen with Kendrix and Damon un-morphed and laying on the ground unconcious
"Kendrix, Damon,"
"If you want to see this two alive again, you will bring me the Aquitians in an hour, or else these two will drown to death," said Hydro Hog through the monitor
"We gotta do something," said Leo
"I have a new plane," said Aurico
The rangers all huddled togeather
***
Damon and Kendrix are up on a cross chained with Quantrons surrounding them
"Looks like your friends are gonna let you die," said Hydro Hog
"When they show up, your gonna regret ever being created," Damon said
"Oh really,"
"Yeah,"
Blasts hit the Quantrons surrounding Damon and Kendrix. A blast from the Alien Rangers hand blsters hit Hydro Hog knocking him down
"You wanted us, well here we are," said Alien Red
"Quantrons get them," commanded Hydro Hog
As the Quantrons rush towards the Alien Rangers, Hydro Hog didn't notice Jason, Leo, Maya, and Kai were sneaking up from behind
As Maya begins to climb up towards Kendrix, Hydro Hog turns around" Ahh, they you are rangers,''
He charges at them as the rangers take a defensive stance
"I don't think so!" shouted a man
The man leapt up in the air and side-kicked Hydro Hog knocking him back a few feet. The rangers eyes open wide when they saw a man in a black suit with a golden sheild holding a staff
"Alright, Trey!" shouted Jason
He ran towards the Gold Ranger
"Are you guys alright?" asked Zeo Gold
"Yeah how did you know we needed help?"
"I picked up the distress signal from Cestria, so I came as soon as possible,"
With the distraction Maya got Kendrix and Damon down with the help of Leo. They run to Jason and Zeo Gold
"You think one more ranger will make a difference, huh, you could have another team and it wouldn't matter,"
The Alien Rangers finished the group of Quantrons and ran to the other rangers, just then more Quantrons appeared and surronded the rangers
Jason looked at the others "What are we waiting for?"
"It's Morphing Time!"
"Tyrannsaurus!"
Jason morphed into the Red Power Ranger
"Go Galactic!"
The other rangers morphed into the Galaxy Rangers and got in a pose
"Now it is time to end this," said Galaxy Red
"Galaxy Rangers!"
"Alien Rangers!"
"Mighty Morphing Power Ranger!"
"Gold Power Ranger!"
"Power rangers!" they all shouted togeather
"Get them," commanded Hydro Hog
The Quantrons run towards the rangers so they split up
Galaxy Blue kicks a Quantron in the stomach followed by a back fist to another. He round-house kicks three of them knocking them down and then does a backflip landing on two more. He takes out his Quasar Saber and slashes one across the gut followed by slicing one upwards knocking it on its stomach
"Quasar Saber, Full Power!," shouted Galaxy Blue
He energized his saber and slashed seven Quantrons with it causing them to explode
Galaxy Green side-kicks a Quantron followed by another side-kick to another. He back kicks one and then jumps in the air with his Trans Blaster and shoots eight more down. He then turns it back to normal and slashes away four more with it. He then takes out his Quasar Saber and slices one more across the chest. He then powers up his Quasar Saber and slashes six with it causing them to explode
Galaxy Pink and Yellow decided to team up. A quantron goes to through a punch at Galaxy Pink, but she blocks it and Galaxy Yellow ficks it in the gut knockng it down. Galaxy Pink then back kicks a Quantron into three more Quantrons. She then takes out her Trans Bow and shoots 3 with it and then turns around and shoots three more down with it
A Quantron jumps at Galaxy Yellow, but she ducks and misses, she then blocks ttwo more punches form some Quantrons and grabs their arms and flips them over. She tackles one Quantron and begins running on the ground with it in hand and knocks down twelve Quantrons while ramming the one in her hand into a tree
Galaxy Red round-house kicks a Quantron followed by another round-house kick to another. He then jumps up and does a fron-kick knocking another down. A Quantron goes to punch him, but he blocks it and punches it in the gut a few times followed by and uppercut knocking it down. He back-kicks another and the trips a few more causing them to fall.He turns and sees Hydro Hog so he takes out his Quasar Saber along with his Trans Dagger and begins hacking away through the Quantrons
Alien Blue punches two Quantrons away follwed by two front-kicks knocking two more done. He round-house kicks another Quantron followed by and side-kick to another. He jumps up in the air and kicks two more down. A Quantron throws a punch at Alien Blue, but he grabes the arm and twisted it followed by a back-kick to a Quantron and then he flips the Quantron he had over to the ground and punches it in the chest
Alien Black does two kicks knocking down two Quantrons. He then punches one in the gut and side-kicks another in the gut. He does a back hand spring kicking the two of them down. He ducks out of the way of a punch and punches it in the gut followed by an elbow to the back knocking it down
Alien Black holds up his sword to the sky "Aquitar Lightning Attack!" shouted Alien Black
Lightning comes down from the sky and causes a huge explosion sending over twenty Quantrons off in different directions
Alien Yellow punches a Quantrons across the face knocking it down follwed by a hook punch to the face of another knocking that one down too. He jumps in the air and does a backflip over two Quantrons. when he lands on the ground he grabes both of their heads and bang them togeather. A Quantron runs up behind Alien Yellow, but he elbows it in the gut and the grabes its head and throws it down in front of him and he punches it in the face. He does a round-house kick follwed by a few more round-house kicks knocking down some more
Alien White trips a Quantron and then does a backflip kicking another one in the jaw. She takes out her Ninja Sword and parries a blade attack from a Quantron and slashes it in the back. She ducks and slashes another across the stomach sending into a spin and into two other Quantrons. Seh rols on the ground and takes out her blaster and shoots three Quantrons in front of her and then turns around and shoots three more down
Alien Red round-house kicks a Quantron followed by a sweeping leg kick to another knocking it down. He grabes a chest plate and the stomach of a Quantron and lifts it above his head and throws it into a group of Quantrons knocking them down. He leaps in the air and over two Quantrons and kicks them in the back and lands in a roll punching two more in the gut, followed by two uppercuts knocking them down. He takes out his Ninja Sword and slices two across the chest followed by slicing another up the chest
Tyranno Red and Zeo Gold are trying to fight their way towards Hydro Hog. Tyranno Red duck a blow and backfists the Quantron in the back followed by a side-step making another Quantron miss
Zeo Gold throws one hook knocking one down followed by another knocking it down. He duck a blow and kicks the Quantron in the back sending it into two more Quantrons. He does a few more side-steps making three Quantrons miss. He gets to Hydro Hog and tries to deliver a hook punch, but it is blocked and he is hit with a punch in the helmet and then in the gut and is then back-fisted onto the ground
Tyranno Red tries a front kick, but it is blocked. He then treis a round-house kick to Hydro Hog, but he blockes it and fires an energy beam off towards his cehst and send him flying back wards into five Quantrons. Zeo Gold jump kicks Hydro Hog knocking him back a few feet. He then side-kicks Hydro Hog and finish of the attack with two straight punches to the gut knocking him back a few more feet
Tyranno Red and Zeo Gold re-group with each other. Tyranno Red takes out his Blade Blaster and shoots it at Hydro Hog while Zeo Gold takes out his Golden Power Staff and shoots and energy beam from it towards Hydro Hog. Hydro Hog absorbs the blast and shoots a blast of his own with the same power he absorbed towards Tyranno Red and Zeo Gold. The blast connects and send thems to the ground un-morphed
Jason slowly gets up " What are we gonna do?"
Trey splits up into three forms of himself " I cannot hold the power of the Gold Ranger any longer, I need you to carry on the legacy of the Gold Ranger,"
Hydro Hog shoots an energy blast at Jason and Trey, but Galaxy Red jumps in between and blocks the blast with his Quasar Saber
To Be Continued in Reunited Pt.XII
P.S. Vote for The Return by bjlovel for Fanfic Of The Month
lightning_ranger
09-02-2004, 06:14 AM
Another awesome chapter!
genesis09
09-02-2004, 10:00 AM
That was awesome; really exciting chapter for me. I loved how you had them all morph, then call out the name of their individual teams, Then "POWER RANGERS!" I never saw any of the other series' but in MMPR when they stopped going from their morphs, into their katas, then "Power Rangers!" or "Power Rangers! Hiya!" I missed it. When I read it in this chapter it got me really into reading on into the fights.
I think it's cool for fans of Zeo to get to se Jase as the Gold Ranger agasin, but please dont make this permanent. I prefer him as his original Ranger form. Maybe it could be like an upgrade when needed, like when he had the Dragon Power on top of his own.
Blue ninja
09-02-2004, 10:17 AM
i like this. Keep it up
Dcaasi98
09-02-2004, 09:36 PM
This was great.
packfan6
09-05-2004, 06:59 PM
Another great episode
lightning_ranger
09-10-2004, 10:59 PM
When are you going to post another episode?
bjlovel
09-10-2004, 11:08 PM
I have been busy with school, so the only time I can write is the week-ends
The next eps. should be up by saturday night or sunday mourning
lightning_ranger
09-11-2004, 12:13 AM
Great, we can't wait.
Joravenel
09-11-2004, 01:15 PM
Totally awesome fic. I am loving how you are bring in all the different teams. Can not wait for more. Thats all for now. Captain J.
bjlovel
09-11-2004, 10:02 PM
"You guys do whatever you need too, I will hold him off," said Galaxy Red
Jason nodded " Right,"
Jason and Trey run into some bushes and into a clearing. They stopped and faced eachother. Jason extends his hand and Trey hands him the Golden Power Staff. Gold lightning begins to come from the staff and into Jason and in a gold light, he transformes into the Gold Ranger
Zeo Gold nods" Don't worry, I won't let you down,"
"I know, the other rangers need your help,"
Zeo Gold runs back out into the battle. He jump-kicks a Quantron followed by a round-house kick to another. He does a crescent kick knocking another one down. He blocks a punch and he grabs the arm and flips over the Quantron. He runs towards where Galaxy red and Hydro Hog are doing battle
Hydro Hog punches Galaxy Red in the chest and then hits him in the back sending him into a roll. Hydro Hog went after Galaxy Red, but Galaxy Red back-kicks him followed by a hook punch to the face, then a back fist to his face again. he gos into hit him a third time, but Hydro HOg grabs his arm and shoots an energy blast at Galaxy red sending him flying to the ground
Zeo Gold does a jump-kick knocking Hydro Hog back a few steps. He helps Galaxy Red to his feet
"Whoa, Jason is that you?" he asked
"Yeah, now what do you say we take care of this creep once and for all?" responded Zeo Gold
"You got it,"
The other rangers runs to Zeo Golds and Galaxy Reds side
"Ready Guys?" asked Galaxy Red
"Ready," responded the Galaxy Rangers
"Lights of Orion, Activate!''
"You think those things will stop me think again," said Hydro Hog
"Lets do it guys," said Galaxy Red
The Galaxy Ranger run at Hydro Hog. Galaxy Yellow tries a round-house kick. Hydro Hog ducks and back-fist her in the Helmet. Galaxy Pink tries to come down with her Quasar Saber, but Hydro Hog catches it and kicks her in the gut and then throws her aside. The last three rangers come down with their sabers, but they had no effect and Hydro Hog blast them away
Zeo Gold fires an energy beam from the Golden Power Staff connecting with Hydro Hog knocking him down
Galaxy Yellow turns to Galaxy Red "Quickly, we have to help the Alien Rangers,"
Galaxy Red nods " Right, lets go,"
A Quantron is holding Alien Blue from all sides so Galaxy blue takes out two Quantrons by a jump-kick and took the others out by slicing them with his Quasar Saber. Galaxy Blue bends down so Alien Blue spins around on Galaxy Blues back and kicks a Quantron. He then round-house kicks another. He takes out his sword and begins slashing away
Galaxy Blue side-kicks a Quantron followed by a slash from left to right across the chest of a Quantron.
Alien Yellow is being held down by a group of Quantrons till Galaxy Yellow throws them off of him. She does a back-kick to a Quantron followed by a back fist to another
Alien Yellow jumps up and extends his legs kicking two Quantrons. He then trips a Quantron and dodges a straigh punch by another. He grabs its arm and flips it over, finishing it with a punch to the chest
Alien White is being over whelmed by Quantrons. One kicks her in the stomach and then slashes her from the stomach up, flipping her over. Another Quantron was about to slash her in the back, but Galaxy Pink does a flying side-kick to it, knocking it down. She helps Alien White up
"You okay?"
"Yeah, c'mon lets do it,"
Galaxy pink nods "Right"
The two rangers run into a group of Quantrons
Alien Black gets kicked in the gut then in the back sending him into a roll. When he came out he was kicked once again knocking him on his back. Galaxy Green shoots some Quantrons around Alien Black with his Trans Blaster. Alien Black gets up and back-kicks a Quantron while Galaxy Green does a fron- kick knocking one down
Alien Red side-kicks a Qauntron followed by a round-house kick to another. He gets kicked in the gut, as the Quantron goes in to kick Alien Red in the gut again, he blocks it and flips it over. Quantrons then surrounded Alien red. Out of no where Galaxy red jumps over some of the Quantrons and lands next to Alien Red
"Time to finish this," said Galaxy Red
Alien Red nods and takes out his sword and blaster while Galaxy Red has out his Quasar Saber and Trans Dagger, both of them waiting for the Quantrons to make the first move. After a couple of seconds all the Quantrons charged towards the two red rangers. They take a defensive stance, but before the Quantrons get to them, a black and gold blur went through all the Quantrons knocking them down. Zeo Gold landed next to Galaxy Red and Alien Red
The other ranger e-grouped around the three rangers
"Jason, that was awesome," said Galaxy Red
"Thanks, but what do u say we finish these egg heads?"
The other rangers nodded
"Lights of Orion, Full Power!" shouted the Galaxy Rangers
The rangers turn into one energy ball and takes out forty Quantrons
"Its Time for a Gold Rush!" shouted Zeo Gold
Zeo Gold takes out thirty Quantrons with his attack
"Aquatar Ranger Blast!"
The Alien Rangers put their swords togeather and the attack also took out forty Quantrons. That attack finished off the Quantrons. The rangers then all run towards Hydro Hog
"Its time for your destruction,'' said Alien White
"Aquatar Ranger Blast!"
"Lights of Orion, Full Power!"
"Its Time for a Gold Rush!"
The combined attacks destroyed Hydro Hog
"Alright guys, we did it!'' shouted Galaxy Green
"Oh no, Trey," Zeo Gold runs over to Trey. He finds him laying on the ground unconsious
Zeo Gold powered down "Trey, c'mon, don't die on me,"
The other rangers followed
"Don't worry," said Cestria as she teleported in " He is just unconsious, he will be fine,"
"Thats great," commented Leo
***
"You got lucky this time rangers, but the next time you will regret," said Ivan Ooze " Scorpina, assemble the warlords, the time has come,"
Scorpina nods " Right away, my master,"
"I could take her you know," said Elsa queitly to Mesogog
"Have patience, the time will come," responded Mesogog
***
"Delphine, their is a room for you and the other rangers filled with water," said Leo, as him and Maya gave a tour to the Alien Rangers
Delphine nods " Thank You,"
In another part of the ship, Jason is standing over Trey who is on a medical bed. Kendrix walks up to him
"Hey, are you okay?" she asks
"Yeah, I'm just wondering something," he responded
"What is it?"
"Its....Its... Its nothing,"
"You sure?''
"Yeah,"
On the bridge of the Astro Megaship, the rangers were all gathered
"DECA set a course for Earth," commanded Leo
The Astro Megaship took off into space on its way towards Earth
To Be Continued...
Blue ninja
09-11-2004, 10:07 PM
looking good dude
lightning_ranger
09-12-2004, 10:41 AM
Another awesome part. I'm wondering what Jason is wondering, lol. We look forward to more.
packfan6
09-13-2004, 04:23 PM
Another nice episode Bj
Dcaasi98
09-14-2004, 08:20 PM
Great thread BJ, cant wait for the next one.
TSoldier
09-15-2004, 11:12 AM
Awesome episode. C2D2 was a huge event & I'm getting that feeling with every episode of "The Return", which is definitely a good thing. I never saw Zeo, but was that Jason's Attack name, "Time for a Gold Rush"? That's whack. They should have put some actual sense into coming up with an attack name. Just "Gold Rush" alone would have been better. I'm getting off topic, but anyway, I'm looking forward to the next episode. Got an ETA?
sbb1513
09-16-2004, 06:06 AM
they keep getting better.
~mag~ :007:
lightning_ranger
09-25-2004, 10:17 PM
Well it's been like what 2, 3 weeks since we got anything from bj. I hope you will continue the story soon. I've been kinda working on my own version, but I don't know if I should post it or not. It's not really that good and I don't want to be known as a copycat or anything.
bjlovel
09-26-2004, 05:06 PM
I am still continuing with this story. I have just had hw and when i had free time i didn't have any motivation to write at that time. there will be a new eps by tuesday
wildranger
09-26-2004, 08:18 PM
Awesome
TSoldier
09-29-2004, 11:14 AM
hmmmm
*checks watch*
*checks calendar*
hmmmm............
lightning_ranger
09-29-2004, 03:51 PM
Well we're still waiting, but hey, take all the time you need, heh.
bjlovel
09-29-2004, 07:50 PM
"Billy, the rangers have started arriving," said Alpha
"Well. lets get going," responded Billy
"Wow, this place is so sweet," said Dustin
"I say it is," responded Shane
As the ranger teams begin to arrive, Alpha escorts them into a big conference room that was built inside the new Power Chanber
"There is alot of power rangers," said Conner as he and the other dino thunder rangers walk into the room
Billy walks out of a room and into the conference room "If I may have your attention please?"
The rangers all turned towards him
"Greetings all rangers, the Earth is in trouble once again, only this time it will need to take all of us to stop this threat, but first let me introduce you rangers to each other,"
As Billy finished saying that, Jason, Kimberly, Zack, Trini, Tanya, Rocky, Adam, Kat, Aisha, and Tommy walked into the room "Rangers, I would like you to meet the Mighty Morphin Power Rangers and the Zeo Rangers"
"No way!?!?!?" exclaimed Max
"This is unreal!'' exclaimed Ethan
"I would like you to meet Jason, the Red and Gold Ranger, Kimberly, the Pink Ranger, Zack the Black Ranger, Trini, the Yellow Ranger, Tommy, The Green, White, Red, and Black Power Ranger, Rocky, the Blue Zeo Ranger, Adam, the Green Zeo Ranger, Kat, the Pink Zeo Ranger, Aisha, the Yellow Ranger, Tanya, the Yellow Zeo Ranger and I am Billy, the Blue Ranger. Them over there are the Turbo Rangers and the Space Rangers; T.J., the Red and Blue Ranger, Ashley, the Yellow Ranger, Cassie, the Pink Ranger, Carlos , the Green and Black Ranger, Zhane, the Silver Ranger, and Andros, the Red Ranger,"
"You guys were the one's that stopped Astronema from invading Earth," said Dana
"Thats us," responded T.J.
"Wait a second, isn't there another Turbo Ranger?" asked Kira
Just then a teen walks into the room. He had spiked hair and were blue clothing and carring a breifcase that had the Turbo Logo on it "I'm right here,"
"And Justin Stewart, the Blue Turbo Ranger," explained Billy
''Justin, oh my god, how you have grown," said Ashley
Justin walked towards Billy "I got the morphers,"
Billy nodded "Well what are you waiting for?''
Justin walkes towards the Turbo Rangers and open's up the breifcase "The Turbo Mophers and Keys!" yelled Cassie.
Each Ranger grabbed their Key and Morpher "But how?" asked Carlos
"Lightning Crusier and Storm Blaster had enough power to recreat them," explained Justin
"Now to continue, I would like to introduce the Galaxy Rangers; Leo, the Red Galaxy Ranger, Kendrix, the Pink Galaxy Ranger, Damon, the Green Galaxy Ranger, Maya, the Yellow Galaxy Ranger, Kai, the Blue Galaxy Ranger,"
"And the rangers over there are the Lightspeed Rescue Rangers; Carter, the Red Lightspeed Ranger, Joel, the Green Lightspeed Ranger, Chad, the Blue Lightspeed Ranger, Dana, the Pink Lightspeed Ranger, Kelsey, the Yellow Lightspeed Ranger, and Ryan, the Titanium Ranger,"
Connor elbows Tommy "This is better then your video documentary,"
"To the right of them are the Time Force Rangers; Wes, the Red Timeforce Ranger, Jen, the Pink Timeforce Ranger, Katie, the Yellow Timeforce Ranger, Trip, the Green Timeforce Ranger, Lucas, the Blue Timeforce Ranger, and Eric, the Quantum Ranger,"
Billy then points to another team of rangers "And they are the Wild Force Rangers; Cole, the Red Wildforce Ranger, Taylor, the Yellow Wildforce Ranger, Alyssa, the White Wildforce Ranger, Max, the Blue Wildforce Ranger, and Danny, the Black Wildforce Ranger,"
"And right next to them are the Ninja Storm Rangers; Shane, the Red Ninja Storm Ranger, Dustin, the Yellow Ninja Storm Ranger, Tori, the Blue Ninja Storm Ranger, Hunter, the Crimson Ranger, Blake, the Navy Ranger, and Cam, the Samurai Ranger,"
"And the latest rangers chosen to protect this Earth are the Dino Thunder Rangers; Conner, the Red Dino Thunder Ranger, Kira, the Yellow Dino Thunder Ranger, Ethan, the Blue Dino Thunder Ranger, Trent, the White Dino Thunder Ranger, and of course Tommy, the Black Dino Thunder Ranger,"
The Alien Rangers were done re-hydrating from Angel Grove Lake and teleported in "And of course the Alien Rangers: Aurico, the Red Alien Ranger, Delphine, the White Alien Ranger, Corcus, the Black Alien ranger, Cestro, the Blue Alien Ranger, Tideus, the yellow Alien Ranger, and their allie Cestria,"
"Sweet, now I know I am not the only male ranger wearing yellow spandex," announced Dustin
The rangers laughed
***
In the palace on the moon, the warlords are all at a table. Starting with Ivan Ooze at the head of the table, to the right of him are Scorpius and Trakeena, next to them are Astronema and next to her are Master Org, Olympius and Rita. To the left of Ivan Ooze are Mesogog, then Mondo and Machina. Next to them are Lothor, Ransik and Divatox, with Zedd at the other head of the table, opposite of Ivan Ooze
"Ooze, you slim, what do you want with us?" asked Zedd
"Yeah spit it out already," said Rita
"Greetings all, I have a plan that will finally be able to destroy those Power Rangers once and for all," said Ivan
"Huh, please, nobody can defeat the Power Rangers," said Lothor
"Excuse me, I believe I defeated the Power Ranger," added in Divatox
''Well we have destroyed more ranger powers then anyone else," said Rita
"Please, you couldn't defeat a blow up machine," said Mondo
"Ladies, Gentleman, please let me finish," said Ivan
"Whatever I will destroy the rangers myself and I won't need your help," said Master Org
"Shut it everyone, none of us have been successful against the rangers so listen to the pink slob," said Mesogog
Ivan nods "Thank you, now I have a gift for you all,I have taken the liberty of reasurrecting all of your top generals,"
A door opens up and out walks Goldar and Rito, General Havoc, Ecliptor, Darkonda, Furio, Deviot, Diabolico, Zen-Aku, Zurgain, and Vexacus
"Oh great, the clown brigade is back," said Rita
'Ah, brother, how nice it is to see you again," said Divatox
Ecliptor walked over towards Astronema"My Queen, it is good to be able to serve under you again,"
"Ecliptor, It is great to have you back at my side," responded Astronema
"What about me?" asked Darkonda
"You can rot in Hell for all I care,''
"Now for the plan, I have recently discovered the hidden locations of the four Masters," said Mesogog
"What, I thought they were only myth's?" said Trakeena
"The only way they will be reasurrected wil be if we can take over these places at once; Angel Grove, Stone Canyon, Mariner Bay, Sliver Hills, Turtle Cove, Blue Bay Harbour, and Reefside," added Ivan
"Wait a second, who are these Master's and what makes them so important?" asked Lothor
"The four masters are Dark Specter, Master Vile, Lokar, and Queen Bansheera,"
"Mother?" asked Olympius
"Yes, and for your other qeustion, they are the definition of Evil. They created the first warlords and once, commanded the entire Galaxy, but Zordon and with the help of others over the years, captured them and sealed them away," explained Ivan Ooze "Rita, was the one first warlords created by the Masters,"
"Who gives a care," said Divatox
"You shut it loud mouth," said Rita pointing her staff at Divatox
"Stop it, we have to begin," said Mesogog
Rita brings her staff and sits back down in her seat
"Now,Zedd, you attack Angel Grove at full force, while Olympius, you will attack Mariner Bay, Ransik. you will attack Silver Hills, Master Org, you will attack Turtle Cove, and Lothor, you will attack Blue Bay Harbour, and Mesogog will attack Reefside," explained Ivan
"What about me?" asked King Mondo
"I want you to gather your forces on your new Machine Base that has been built for you. Once the rangers are engaged you will send down parts of your army and finish them off once and for all,"
"That still leaves me, Scorpius, Trakeena, Rita, and big mouth," said Astronema
Divatox looks over towards Astonema
"Astronema, you will stay here with me and help me get Queen Bansheera and reasurrect Dark Specter, Divatox, you will go with Trakeena and Scorpius to the Lost Galaxy and bring Master Vile back, and Rita, we need your spell to call forth Lokar again," explained Ivan Ooze
"And then the entire Universe will belong its rightful heirs!" screamed Ivan. He holds his hands up in the sky and purple lighting begins to come out of them
***
"So that is Ivan Ooze's plane," said Jason
"Exactly, that is why it is going to take all of us to stop them, but first I would like to introduce to those of you who don't know him, Zordon, Alpha,"
"Zordon?!?!?!" asked Tommy
Out walks Alpha with a device
"With the help of Cam and Hayley, I was able to make a machine that can reasurrect Zordon,"
Billy walks over to the device and presses a button on it. A white beam shoots into the tube and a big head appeared
Kimberly begins to get a tear in her eye "Zordon, I can't believe it is you?"
"This is amazing," said Tommy
"Greetings Rangers, it is great to see you all again, and it is nice to see new faces," said Zordon
"So, this is the legendary Zordon" said Eric
Out from the rangers walks Andros
"Z-o-r-d-o-n?" said Andros
"Andros, it is good to see you my old friend, it has been awhile,"
Andros bowed his head "Zordon, I did what you told me to do,"
"Yes and for that you saved the universe," responded Zordon
Tommy walks up to Andros and puts his hand on his shoulder "You did what you had to,"
Jason then stepped up "Thats right, not many of us could of done what you did,"
Andros nodded
"Now, there is some more people that I would like to intorduce to those who don't know," said Billy
In teleported Blue Senturion, Phantom Ranger, Alex, Nidira, Capt. Mitchell, Mrs. Rawlings, and Sensei Watanabe. Princess Shayla walks up and stands next to the allies
"I figured we could use all the help we can get," said Billy
To Be Continued...
sbb1513
09-30-2004, 05:29 AM
really good. keep it up.
~mag~ :007:
TSoldier
09-30-2004, 01:05 PM
Excellent set up. When you named off the Generals I got anxious in anticipation of how the battles with those 4 would go. This has a huge feel to it. Like it will top any of the other fanfics I've read in terms of intensity. You definitely shuffled up a huge deck of cards. I can't wait to see how you play them. When can we expect the next ep?
bjlovel
09-30-2004, 01:09 PM
the next ep should be up around next week-end and thanks for the replies
lightning_ranger
09-30-2004, 04:04 PM
Awesome man, too bad I won't be around next weekend to read the next part, I guess I will have to wait till I get back.
Joravenel
09-30-2004, 08:45 PM
Totally awesome. I love how you got all of the teams together. Can not wait for the war to begin. Thats all for now. Captain J.
bjlovel
10-03-2004, 08:35 PM
anymore replies?
Blue ninja
10-03-2004, 08:39 PM
That was totally awesome!
wildranger
10-04-2004, 10:29 AM
I like it. great job.
bjlovel
10-10-2004, 12:27 AM
“It is time,” said Ivan Ooze “Send down your armies,”
***
Lord Zedd’s armies of Super Z-Putties and Tengas appeared in the city with Goldar, Rito, and Darkonda
***
Alarms begin blaring
"Ai yai yai yai yai!" shouted Alpha
"Zordon whats going on?" asked Jason
"Lord Zedd and his army are attacking Angel Grove," explained Zordon
"Guess its begun," said Zack
"Jason, you must stop them at all costs," said Zordon
Jason nods
"Zordon, maybe another team should go with them," suggested Tommy
"I think so to, Rocky, you take the Ninjetti Rangers to help Jason," said Zordon
"Right," said Rocky
"Tommy you must stay here, you will be needed soon enough,'' Zordon
Tommy nods
Jason nods at Rocky "You ready?"
Rocky nods back "Oh yeah,"
"It's Morphing Time!" shouted the both of them
"Mastodon!" shouted Zack
"Pterodactyl!" shouted Kimberly
"Triceratops!" shouted Billy
"Saber-Toothed Tiger!" shouted Trini
"Tyrannosaurus!" shouted Jason
"Black Ranger Power!" shouted Adam
"Pink Ranger Power!" shouted Katherine
"Yellow Ranger Power!" shouted Aisha
"Red Ranger Power!" shouted Rocky
''Power Rangers!" they shouted togeather
***
The rangers teleport in front of Zedd and his army
"Rangers, long time no see," said Lord Zedd
"Not long enough," replied Ape Red
"I see no Tommy this time, such shame I was looking forwards to our re-match,"
''We don't need Tommy to take care of you," said Mammoth Black
"Really," responds Zedd "Attack!"
"Let's do it!" shouted Tyranno Red
Tyranno Red side kicks a puttie followed by a back hand to another. He grabbed a Putties wrist and twisted while slamming his shoulder against the clay creature. He then used his hands to block a punch from a Puttie and stepped forward, slamming his elbow against the Puttie. He then grabbed hold of a Puttie's wrist and stepped forward while slamming his knee against its gut. Tyranno Red ducked underneath a Puttie's punch and kicked it in the side. He slammed his foot against another Puttie and pushed off knocking it to the ground. He does some hook punches taking out some more Putties
"Power Axe!"
Mammoth Black cut through a Puttie's chest with his Power Axe followed by another slash aginst another. He spun forward while slamming a reverse sidekick against another Puttie, hitting it in the 'Z' causing it to explode. After his first attack he turned his head behind him to see a group of putties coming towards him. He stood his ground as the group rushed towards him. He swung his Power Axe towards its head. He then used his Power Axe to block a blow. Mammoth Black swung his weapon at the Puttie sending to the ground
Tricera Blue dove forward through a group of Putties with his Blade Sword out. He cut left and right against the group. He then somersaulted across the ground and rose to a crouched position while switching the Blade Sword and shooting down three more Putties. He spun and struck a Puttie down
"Power Lance!"
Tricera Blue split his Power Lance in two. He slashed a Puttie across the chest. Tricera Blue blocked a punch with his left sword, then swung the right sword down through the attacking Puttie. Another Puttie went to punch Tricera Blue, but the Ranger ducked under the blow and moved behind the Puttie and thrashed his two swords across the Puttie's back
Tiger Yellow goes in the middle of some Putties. She punches two down and then jump kicks another. She then ducks a hook punch and slams a front spinning kick across the head of the clay annoyance. She goes to kick a Puttie, but it catches her foot and flips it over. Tiger Yellow lands on her feet and front kicks the Puttie in its chin knocking it down. She then takes out he Blade Blaster and shoots two down. She then spins in the air and shoots three more down
Ptera Pink fromt kicks a Puttie and then slams a reverse round-house kick to the face of another. She trips a Puttie and then does a backflip kicking another one in the jaw. She parries a punch attack from a Puttie and slams a front side kick to the back of the Puttie. She ducks and punches another in the 'Z' causing it to explode
"Power Bow!"
She rolls on the ground and shoots three Putties in front of her and then turns around and shoots seven arrows having five of them connect
Ape Red side-kicks a Tenga followed by a round-house kick to another. He gets kicked in the gut by a Tenga and another goes in to kick Ape Red in the gut again, he blocks it and flips it over. Seven Tengas then jump on Ape Red. Out of no where, he pushes the Tengas off him and takes out his Blade Blaster and shoots the sevens Tengas down. Two more Tengas rushed towards Ape Red from behind. He does a back flip and shoots the two Tengas down
Frog Black round-house kicks a Puttie followed by another round-house kick. He then jumps up and does a front kick knocking another down. A Puttie goes in to punch him, but he blocks it and punches it in the gut a few times followed by a straght punch to the 'Z' and causes it to explode. He back-kicks another and then trips a few more causing them to fall
Bear Yellow knocked a kick away by a Puttie and moved forward with an inner crescent kick that slammed against the Puttie's face. Bear Yellow got kicked in the stomach and was forced back as two Putties pounced forward, swinging their hands towards Bear Yellow's Helmet. She held her arms out and blocked the blow. She then jumps up and extends her legs onto the 'Z's of the two Puttie's and pusehd off causing the Putties to explode
Crane Pink goes into battle. She jump kicks a puttie followed by a punch to the 'Z' and then a round hous kick knocking down another. She sees Putties coming at her, so she jumps in the air and performs a screw kick taking out the middle Puttie. She hits a tree and bounces off of it and lands behind the two Puttie's. She bangs their heads togeather causing them to go down next to the other puttie
"Goldar, now is the time, go in and take out the precious Kimberly," commanded Lord Zedd
"Ed, let me do it, I promise you I won't fail?" asked Rito
"Fine, I'd rather see you destroyed anyhow,"
Rito runs towards Ptera Pink "Alright, Pink has always been my favorite color,"
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
10-10-2004, 12:29 AM
This probably the boring one of them all. I promise you though, There will more exciting fights then these.
Don't ask me when the next one will be up because right now I don't have much time for writing as much as I used to do
greenwc
10-10-2004, 12:41 AM
...can't remeber when i read this one last but i thinks it been awhile so i a kinda lost but it sounded cool,although sucks that there weren't ever a ranger to take over for billy so there would be a blue ninjetti ranger
greenwc
10-10-2004, 01:21 AM
maybe mike could do it?
greenwc
10-10-2004, 01:22 AM
when the ninjetti rangers morph do they use the ninjetti suits or do they use the same suits as jason and crew?
bjlovel
10-10-2004, 09:23 AM
When they say 'its morphing time' its the suits that jason and his crew use, but when they say 'Ninja Ranger Power' they use the ninjetti suit
greenwc
10-10-2004, 11:45 AM
so when they both say it's morphin time they all have the same suits on?
bjlovel
10-10-2004, 06:29 PM
yes only a different symbol in the middle
sbb1513
10-11-2004, 11:34 AM
really good.
~mag~ :007:
TSoldier
10-11-2004, 01:38 PM
It was good to see MMPR get involved here. Everyone was cool. And the whole sub-plot to kidnap Kimberly is a very interesting twist that I can't wait to see more developments for.
Mythical Master
10-12-2004, 04:07 PM
This story is really going good. Keep up the good work.
bjlovel
10-23-2004, 10:15 PM
We say goodbye to a ranger and two rangers have a first encounter with eachother
**********************************************************
Ptera Pink down blocks a puttie and deliveres a punch to the face. Rito fires a blast out of his sword and it slams against Ptera Pink's back and causes her to fall
Tricera Blue looked towards Ptera Pink "Kimberly!!!"
He charges towards Rito with his Power Lance in hand. He hits putties left and right with it trying to get to Ptera Pink. Ptera Pink de-morphes and Rito picks her up. Her clothes were ripped and she had a cut on her back and all over her body. Tricera Blue tries to get to Kim, but there is too many Putties in the way
"Kimmmm!!!"
Kimberly slowly opens one eye and whispers "Billy," before she passes out again
"Noooo!!!,"
Tricera Blue gets shot in the back only by Goldar this time. He slowly gets back up
"Goldar, you dog,"
"Come here blue boy, I got a gift for you,"
Out of nowhere Goldar gets kicked by two red rangers. Tricera Blue runs up to them
"Billy, what do you say we take care of this winged freak?" asked Ape Red
"For Kim," responded Tricera Blue
The three rangers nodded and charged towards Goldar
***
Bear Yellow back hands a Puttie, but then is side kicked sending her to the ground. A Puttie launched itself towards Bear Yellow, but out of nowhere the Puttie is knocked out of the air by a kick. Standing there was Tiger Yellow
"You want her, you will have to go through me first,"
"Trini, thank god,"
Bear Yellow stood next Tiger Yellow. The two of them got in a defensive stance
"Just bring it," said Bear Yellow
The Putties rushed towards the two yellow rangers
***
Mammoth Black side kicks a Puttie followed by a round house kick to another,. He is starting to get fatigued. Zedd saw that his moves were becoming slower and slower
"What's wrong black ranger, tired?" said Lord Zedd
He aimed his staff at Mammoth Black and fired a jagged energy blast towards Mammoth Black. The blast connect's and sends him into a building. He forcibly de-morphed. Parts of the building began to fall on the concious Zack. Frog Black saw what happened and ran to the buried Zack
"Zack, hold on,"
He started pulling parts of the debris till he finally saw Zack's hand. A blast nailes Frog Black in the back causing him to de-morph. He slowly gets back up and stares at Lord Zedd knowing that his day will come
"I have had enough, let's finish this!" yelled Adam as he charged towards Zedd. Just as he got to him a group of Putties pounced on him and picked him up and held him in front of Zedd
"Goodbye black ranger," Zedd shot a blast at Adam as he said his last words to the black and green ranger. Adam was sent flying back, His vision began to blurr as he slowly lost conciousness and drifted into a deep sleep
***
At another part of the battlefeild known as Angel Grove Park, Crane Pink is fighting for her life as she is swarmed by Putties. She feel like she could just stop and collapse right there, but she knew she had to keep fighting. As sweat dropped in her helmet she knifehanded a Puttie sending it to the ground. She then follwed it be an inner crescent kick. She is then kicked in the gut and get slammed by a side kick sending her into a tree causing her to de-morph
"What am I gonna do?" she asked her self while pulling on a branch to help her get up "Tommy, I need you,"
***
"Zordon, I have to go, she needs my help," said Tommy
"Very well," Zordon replied
"Wait, I will go with you," said Tanya
"I'll get Adam," said Justin
"Alright," nodded Tommy
"Its Morphing Time!"
"White Ranger Power!"
"Zeo Ranger Two Yellow!"
"Shift into Turbo, Mountain Blaster Turbo Power!"
"May the power protect you," said Zordon
***
As Putties are about to lunge at Kat, Falcon White landed in between them
"Tommy!" shouted Kat
"You want her, you'll have to go through me claybrains!"
He charged towards the Putties and deliveres a clothesline to eight Putties. He then side kicks one while slamming a front round house kick knocking down another
***
A blue teleprtation light appeared beside the fallen Adam
"Hold on," said Turbo Blue
Before he could pick up Adam he was kicked in the back. Turbo Blue turned his head to see a Puttie standing there
"I heard stories about you, now lets see if ther true," said Turbo Blue
He charged towards the puttie and slammed a front kick to the chest of the Puttie causing it to explode
"That was easy,''
"He turns to see a group of Putties picking up Adam and carrying him off some where
"No, wait!"
Turbo Blue ran towards the Putties holding Adam, but before he could get to him, a group appeared infront of him
"I don't have time for this,"
He took out his Turbo Blaster and started shooting the Putties down. Once they were out of the way he shot the Putties holding Adam down. He fell to the ground
"Thats gonna hurt,"
He pickes up Adam and teleports back to the Power Chamber
***
Ape Red round house kicks Goldar. He ducks under it and slashes his sword across the back of Ape Red.Tricera Blue brakes his Power Lance in two and swings the right part at Goldar. He blocks it, but then is slashed by the left part of the Lance followed by a slash from the right part of the Lance. He then begins to twirl the parts across the chest of Goldar sending him back step by step. He finishes the attack with a drop kick knocking Goldar to the ground. Goldar picks up his head and fires to red energy beams from his eyes connecting with Tricera Blue sending him to the ground. Tyranno Red and Ape Red runs to Tricera Blue
"Billy, you okay?" asked Tyranno Red
"Yeah," Billy responded, but as soon as he went to get back up, he collapsed to the ground and de-morphed
"I'm not strong enough to keep the power intack," said the now de-morphed Billy
"It okay bro, we'll get him for you and Kim," said Tyranno Red
Billy nodded "Right I'll get back to the Power Chamber and begin looking for Kim,"
"Right," said Ape Red
With a blue light Billy teleports out
"Ready to do this?" asked Tyranno Red
"Oh yeah," said Ape Red
The two red rangers charge towards Goldar
***
Zeo Yellow teleports next to Tiger Yellow as she is defending off Putties
"Thought you guys could use some help," she said as she side kicked a Puttie
Tiger Yellow was too tired to respond. She parried a punch and deliveres a punch off her own
Bear Yellow slams a kick to the head of a Puttie followed by a round house kick to another. She gets kicked in the back and sent to the ground
Zeo Yellow leapt forward while slamming a sidekick against a Putties chest. She then moved to her right while snapping off a reverse crescent kick, then swung a knifehand blow against a Putties head before sidekicking the Puttie backwards. She then outer blocked a blow with her right hand before crashing a left hook across the Putties head. She followed by turning to her right and slamming a backfist and hook punch against a another Puttie. A group of Putties appered behind Zeo Yellow, she combined her two blasters and shot the group knocking each one down
Tiger Yellow front kicks a Puttie in the 'z' causing it to explode. She is then side kicked away and lands next to Bear Yellow
"We can't keep this up much longer," acknowledged Bear Yellow
"I know, I don't know what to do," responded Tiger Yellow
***
Turbo Blue teleports into the Power Chamber with Adam and removes his helmet
"Quickly, lets get him hooked up to a Bio Bed," commanded Andros
He, Justin, Danny, and Kai help Adam onto a Bio Bed
"I have to go back," said Justin
"No, you did what you needed to do, now you have to wait your turn,"
"But Zordon none of them can even stand," said Leo
"I know, but we are gonna need all ranger's,"
Just then Billy teleports in. His clother are rip[ed and slowly limps to a console
"Billy, glad you made it back safely," said Zordon
"I have to find Kimberly, Cam set all scanners to lock onto Kim's bio signature, we have to find her,"
Cam nods and goes over to a console
"What about Zack, I mean he is still out there, we don't know if he is still alive or not" said Ashley
"I'm sorry to inform you all this, I cannot sense Zack's life signature anylonger,"
"No," said Billy "Zack..."
"Oh my god, I can't believe this," said Kendrix
Kira walks out of the conference room. Connor followes her
"Kira wait, whats wrong?" he asked
"Is this what we fight for, is this the reason why we were picked to become rangers, just so we can die?" Kira asked with tears in her eyes
"Kira, we are rangers, we all protect the Earth and we all take a chance on accepting the consequences to be a Power Ranger. This is one of those chances,"
"I know, but sometimes, when I wake up, I wonder what will happen, I wonder if today will be the last day I see any of you guys, and I don't know what would happen if I lost any of you," By this time Kira broke into tears and hugged Connor
"Kira...I...,"
"Please just hold me, I need you Connor, more then I needed anyone else before,"
Conner put his hand under her chin and lifted up her face. He then wiped a tear away with his other hand. There heads moved closer and closer togeather till there lips connected
***
Falcon White round house kicks a Puttie
"Kat, you've gotta get back to the Power Chamber, there isn't anything you can do here," commanded Crane White
Kat nods and in a pink light teleports away
"You want some of this, come get it,"
Crane White takes a defensive stance as the putties charged him. he takes out sabe and jumps into the middle of the Putties. He begins to slash whatever Puttie he could reach while blocking any blow that came his way
***
Tyranno Red side kicks Goldar in the gut followed by a back kick by Ape Red knocking him to the ground. Tyranno and Ape Red took out their Blade Blasters and fired them at Goldar causing sparks to fly off of its chest
"If I were you, I would leave right about now," said Ape Red
Goldar slowly gets back up
"Your world is doomed and there is nothing you can do about that," responded Goldar
"We'll just see about that," said Tyranno Red
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
10-23-2004, 10:54 PM
ranger powers:
Mighty Morphin:
Red: Jason
Blue: Billy
Black: Vacant
Yellow: Trini
Pink: Kimberly
Ninja:
Red: Rocky
Blue: Billy
Black: Adam
Yellow: Aisha
Pink: Katherine
White: Tommy
Zeo:
Red: Tommy
Blue: Rocky
Green: Adam
Yellow: Tanya
Pink: Katherine
Gold: Jason
Turbo:
Red: T.J.
Blue: Justin
Green: Carlos
Yellow: Ashley
Pink: Cassie
Space:
Red: Andros
Blue: T.J.
Black: Carlos
Yellow: Ashley
Pink: Cassie
Silver: Zhane
Galaxy:
Red: Leo
Blue: Kai
Green: Damon
Yellow: Maya
Pink: Kendrix
Magna Defender: Vacant
Lightspeed:
Red: Carter
Blue: Chad
Green: Joel
Yellow: Kelsey
Pink: Dana
Titanium: Ryan
Time:
Red: Wes
Blue: Lucas
Green: Trip
Yellow: Katie
Pink: Jen
Quantum: Eric
Wild:
Red: Cole
Blue: Max
Black: Danny
Yellow: Taylor
White: Alyssa
Lunar: Merrick
Storm:
Red: Shane
Blue: Tori
Crimson: Hunter
Navy: Blake
Yellow: Dustin
Samuari: Cam
Dino:
Red: Connor
Blue: Ethan
Black: Tommy
Yellow: Kira
White: Trent
Hey bjlovel, I'm lovin' this fic. I'm also writing a fic where Tommy has access to all his powers except Red Turbo, though the conditions are different. I 'could' let you use a Ranger Kali_WolfChilde made a pic of for me, if you want to use him. You can call him whatever you want, but I call him the Super Tommy Ranger. PM me or something if you want the pic.
Just an idea.
greenwc
10-24-2004, 12:09 PM
how come tommy's green power wasn't listed?
it's not vacant but i don't know of another way or listing it
bjlovel
10-24-2004, 12:53 PM
as of right now the green power coin has no power, but it will later on
Blue ninja
10-24-2004, 01:48 PM
i like it
sbb1513
10-24-2004, 03:53 PM
hey. keep up the good work.
~mag~ :007:
Joravenel
10-24-2004, 08:27 PM
great chapter, I am missing Zack alreadu. I hope we do not lose any one else. I can not wait to see the green powers back. I hope that the teams win the war. Thats all for now.
Captain J
TSoldier
10-25-2004, 10:09 AM
I agree. I miss Zack already, but I'm holding onto the story still & can't wait to see what happens next.
lightning_ranger
11-06-2004, 10:37 PM
Yeah, what happened to this fic. It's been awhile since anything was posted.
still *waiting 4 next chapter*
packfan6
11-13-2004, 06:55 PM
Sorry it was late, but some more nice chapters.
bjlovel
11-14-2004, 08:40 PM
sorry i was busy with playoffs for football 2 weeks ago and i was sick all of last week. expect another chapter to be up this week-end
Mythical Master
11-15-2004, 02:40 PM
o
Did it hurt?
Mythical Master
11-18-2004, 02:38 PM
pervert
That was uncalled for. I am not a pervert. whenever someone says "oh" no matter how you spell it; there was always a joke to go alone with it and what I said was that joke what you said was mean and again uncalled for. Now I am not going to asked you to apologize because I shouldn't have to.
dumbass
11-18-2004, 05:23 PM
That was uncalled for. I am not a pervert. whenever someone says "oh" no matter how you spell it; there was always a joke to go alone with it and what I said was that joke what you said was mean and again uncalled for. Now I am not going to asked you to apologize because I shouldn't have to. :cool: :cool:
Get over it you mama's boy. Comeon. He was just being a NORMAL 11 YEAR OLD KID. Dipshit. You do know that there are brains on sale at walmart? Only $19.99. :023:
btw: I'm his *cough* beloved *cough* sister, and I can garantee that he won't appologise. :P
bjlovel
11-21-2004, 09:39 AM
"Power Sword!"
Tyranno Red charges towards Goldar with his weapon of choice in hand. He brings the sword down horazontally towards Goldar's head. The golden monkey blocks the attack with his sword. He kicks Tyranno Red in the gut then slashes upwards sending Tyranno Red into a backflip and landed him on his chest
Ape Red slashes Goldar in the back three times then dropkicks him sending him to the ground
***
"Ai yai yai yai yai, Zordon, the rangers are in trouble," said Alpha
"Zordon, you have to send down another a rescue team to get them and bring them back," pleaded Cole
"Very well, Carter, you take your team down," commanded Zordon
Carter nods "We won't fail you, Ready?"
The other Rescue Rangers nod "Ready,"
"Lightspeed Rescue!"
"Titanium Power!"
***
Crane White gets kicked in the chest and falls back into the arms of two Putties. They toss Crane White onto his back. He slowly gets up exhausted. He can feel the sweat dripping down knowing that anytime, he could be taken out by a monster
"I gotta do something," Crane White said
The Putties begin to close in. Just as they were about to pounce on Crane White, blasts hit the Putties forcing them back. Standing there was Rescue Pink, and Blue
"Nice timing," said Crane White
The three ranger jump next to Crane White
"Tommy, we were sent to bring you back to the Power Chamber," explained Rescue Blue
"What no, we have to stop them from taking over Angel Grove,"
"If you fight then you will be destroyed," said Rescue Pink
"The other rangers are gonna be meet us back at the Power Chamber," said Rescue Blue
"Now lets go," Rescue Yellow and Rescue Blue grab on to Crane White and teleported out
***
Zeo Yellow side kicks a Puttie sending it to the ground. She then knifehanded another
Tiger Yellow flips two putties to the ground and then knocks to more down with hook punches
Bear Yellow, with Blade Blaster in hand shoots four putties down. A Puttie kicks the gun out of her hand and then delivers a kick to the gut followed by a back kick sending her to the ground. The other two rangers re-group with Bear Yellow
"Trini, we have to get out of here," said Zeo Yellow
"I can't, my communicator is broken," said Tiger Yellow
"Same," mentioned Bear Yellow
"Tanya, you get out of here, at least one of us can," said Tiger Yellow
"I'm not gonna leave you," said Zeo Yellow
Two lights appear next to the girls. The light faded and standing their was Rescue Yellow and Green
"You called," said Rescue Green
"C'mon, we are getting you guys out of here," said Rescue Yellow
The Rescue Yellow grabs Tiger Yellow and Zeo Yellow grabs Bear Yellow. The five rangers teleport out
***
Goldar slashes Ape Red across the chest then turns around and shoots beams out of his eyes at Tyranno Red sending him back and causing him to de-morph. Ape Red runs over to him
"Jason, you okay?" he asked
"Man..we've...got..to...do...something," Jason tried with all his might to speak
"Your gonna pay for that monkey brains," said Ape Red
"What are you gonna do about it, ape brains," retaliated Goldar
"You monster!" Ape Red runs towards Goldar with his Blade sword in hand. A blast then hits Aper Red in the back sending him forward and causing him to forcibly de-morph
Standing from a distance away was Rito "Hey Goldie, thought you could use some help,"
Rocky slowly gets up
"Now it is time to destroy you," Rito charges up his sword and points it at Rocky "Say goodbye,"
Before he could shoot Rocky, Jason kicked the sword out of Rito's hand. He then deliveres a kick to the chest of Rito knocking him back a few feet. He then runs to Rocky and helps him to his feet. Jason looked around to see if their was anyplae they could get to, but all he saw was caious and destruction. He didn't even see any other ranger fighting. Jason and Rocky were surrounded on all sides. One sids were buldings torn to shreds and the other side was Goldar and Rito
"Jase, I say we're in trouble,"
"It ain't till over till it's over,"
Just then Goldar and Rito get hit by a blast and fall to the ground. Jason and Rocky looked up to see Titanium and Rescue Red standing on top of a building. They jump off and land next to the de-morphed red rangers
"Thought you guys could use some help," said Titanium
"C'mon, we have got to get back to the Power Chamber," said Rescue Red
"What about the city?" asked Rocky
"Their isn't anything more we can do," said Rescue Red
"Okay then, lets go," said Jason
The two rangers grab the red rangers and teleport back to the Power Chamber
***
"My plan is working perfectly," Ivan Ooze said with a grin on his face "The rangers are retreating which means Angel Grove is ours,"
Everybody begins to cheer
"Now Lothor, it is your turn,"
"About time," responded Lothor
"Don't fail or else,"
"Shut it slimeball," Lothor teleported away
***
The rangers teleport back to the Power Chamber de-morphed
Tommy walks up to Zordon "We have to send another team down their before it is to late,"
"I'm sorry Tommy, but Angel Grove is lost,"
"No, I won't belive that, their has got to be something we can do,"
"Don't worry bro, we will figure something out." said Jason
Kira and Connor walked back into the room
"Whats everyone doing back?" asked Connor
"They just got their buts handed to them," answered Ethan
Alarms begin to go off again
"Whats happening?" asked Kira
"Lothor is attacking Blue Bay Harbour," said Zordon
"Its our turn," said Shane. He looked to the other ninja storm rangers "Ready?"
The others nod
"Be careful," said Zordon
"Ninja Storm!"
"Thunder Storm!"
"Samurai Storm!"
"Ranger Form, Ha!"
***
Lothor and his army are destroying the city when Ninja Red teleports in front of his army
"Your not gonna get another inch," said Ninja Red
"Really, are you gonna stop me?" asked Lothor
"Yeah,"
"You and what army?"
"This army," said Ninja Blue who stood on top of a building to the right of them. The other rangers stood on top of the buildings surrounding Lothor and his goons
"Get em'' commanded Lothor
"Lets go," commanded Ninja Red
The rangers jumped of the buildings and into the army, Ninja Red side kicks a Kelzack followed by a round house kick
Ninja Blue blocks a straight punch and deliveres one of her own sending the Kelzack to the ground. She takes out her Ninja Sword and slices a Kelzack acrros the chest followes by striking another down
Ninja Yellow slams a reverse side kick to a Kelzack and then front kicks another. He blocks two punches and flips the Kelzacks over
Navy Blue round house kicks a Kelzack. A monster then shoots him from behind knocking Navy Blue to the ground
"Your gonna pay for that," Crimson Red slams a flying side kick to the side of the monster knocking it the ground. Navy Blue re-groups with Crimson Red
"Thanks. Ready to show him the power of thunder?" asked Crimson Red
"Oh yeah," nodded Navy Blue. The two rangers charged towards the monster and Kelzack's
***
Tommy is pacing around the Power Chamber. He turns to the viewing screen and sees the Ninja Rangers having trouble
"Zordon, we have to go, we need to help them. We can't let Ivan take control of Blue Bay Harbor too," said Tommy
"I know, but we need you here, we have to trust they can win," answered Zordon
"Zordon, we couldn't even win, how are they suppose too?" asked Tommy
"Whats that suppose to mean, that they are weak, that you are better then they are?" asked Eric as he walked up to Tommy. Jason stepped in between Tommy and Eric
"Eric just calm down, thats not what Tommy meant," reassured Jason
"No, it is what I meant, they can't do anything, they are pathetic to be called Power Rangers!" Tommy said as he started to raise his voice
"That is out of line, Tommy," said Kat as she was getting of her bio-bed
"Now, now, we are all in this togeather, no one is stronger then another," said Sensei
"Yeah what makes you so sure?" asked Tommy
"Tommy, trust us, if they weren't able to defend the Earth then they never would of been picked in the first place," said Zordon
"Yeah, we'll see," responded Tommy
"Tommy, we need to talk," Jason says as he nods to a corner of the Power Chamber
"No.."
"Now," Tommy walks over to Jason
"What has gotten into you? I have never seen you act like this before,"
"These kids haven't been in a situation like this before. They won't be able to handle it,"
"They are rangers. They look up to us...you...They look up to us for guidance, they look up to us for leadership, its true, they have never been through anything like this before so they are gonna need our help and your not much help right about now,"
Tommy looks down, not being able to face Jason. Billy, Kat and the rest of the Mighty Morphin Power Rangers walk over to where Tommy and Jason are standing
"Jason's right," said Kat
"They need us, more then ever," said Rocky
''We are in this togeather," said Adam
"And we will fight togeather," said Billy
"United we stand," said Trini
"Divided we fall," said Aisha
"What do you say? Ready to be the leader we all know you are?" asked Jason
Tommy looks at everyone and nods "Lets do it,"
Tommy walks back to Eric and extends is hand "Eric, I'm sorry if I upset you, I didn't mean what I said, I was just going through a faze, can you forgive me?"
Eric is silent. He turns his head and looked at Taylor. She nods to him and he nods back. He then extends his hand to meet Tommy "Apolagie accepted,"
"Now that is done, the Ninja Rangers need some help,"
"Zordon, I wanna go and help," said Tommy
"So do we," said Connor as him and the other Dino Rangers step next to Tommy
"We are ready to do our part," said Ethan
"Very well," said Zordon
"You guys sure you wanna do this?" asked Tommy
"Haven't been sure enough," answered Kira
"Alright then. Ready?" Tommy asked
"Ready," the rangers answered
"Dino Thunder, Power Up, Ha!"
"White Ranger, Dino Power!"
To Be Continued...
awesome!
Good to know you're keeping this fic alive
Blue ninja
11-21-2004, 05:05 PM
great! cant wait for more!
Joravenel
11-21-2004, 05:44 PM
I agree with Blue ninja. What will happen next? Will the dino rangers be able to help out the ninja rangers. Will the rangers will or will they fall? Thats all for now.
Captain J
Joravenel
11-21-2004, 05:45 PM
I ment to say win and not will
greenwc
11-22-2004, 08:37 AM
why do you keep callin tommy crane white?
bjlovel
11-22-2004, 02:34 PM
cause that is that is the first thing that came to mind and i went with it not thinking that Tommy should be Falcon White and not Crane White. Don't worry, I will change it for the next part. Thanks for pointing that out
Neomon
11-22-2004, 07:28 PM
This fic is awsome...good job.
why do you keep callin tommy crane white?
damnit, i was gonna say that!
o well, at least someone pointed it out...
Mystical Master better not say "Did it hurt?"
Mythical Master
11-24-2004, 08:41 AM
Don't worry I won't it was used in a sentence and not by itself.
Don't worry I won't it was used in a sentence and not by itself.
good
I ment to say win and not will
then you should edit your post
bjlovel
12-28-2004, 09:03 PM
The Ninja Rangers re-grouped in the middle of the battle. On all sides monster’s from past and present surround them whit Kelzack next to them
Lothor is standing on top of a building in front of the rangers
“Ha ha ha rangers,”
“Lothor, you will never get away with this!” shouted Ninja Yellow
“What’s the matter, a little out numbered? Attack Them!” Commanded Lothor
Before the monsters could get to the Ninja Storm Rangers, explosions erupted knocking some of the monsters back. When the smoke cleared, Dino Rangers
were standing between the Ninja Storm Rangers and Lothor’s army
“Thought you guys could use some help,” mentioned Dino Red
“You guys okay?” asked Dino Black
The Ninja Storm Rangers ran up to the Dino Rangers
“Yeah Thanks,”
“You think another team of rangers are going stop me, huh, Attack!”
“Lets’ do it!” Explosions went off behind them as they charged towards the army
Ninja Blue and Dino Yellow teamed up. Ninja Blue side kicked a Kelzack followed by a round house kick, slamming her foot to the face of another Kelzack. She then bends over and Dino Yellow rolls across her back and slams a foot into a chest of a Kelzack. A blast hits the two rangers and they are sent skidding across the ground. They slowly get back up
A monster stalked towards them. It has red flames and eight arms on him
“Hey, you look formillar, Haven’t we defeated you before?” asked Dino Yellow
“Yes, my name if Skortch and I’m about to turn up the heat,”
Skortch fired a Fire blast towards Dino Yellow and Ninja Blue
“Let me handle this,” said Ninja Blue. She got in front of Dino Yellow
“Power of Water!”
The water attacked went straight through the fire attack and hit Skortch knocking it to the ground
“Super Dino Mode! Need a lift?” asked Dino Yellow
“Oh Yeah,” responded Ninja Blue
Ninja Blue grabbed on to Dino Yellows legs. Both of them had their blasters out. They fired rapid lasers at Skortch till the monster exploded
Ninja Yellow and Dino Blue were on their Tsunami Cycle and Hovercraft Cycle.
They started blasting all the Kelzacks they could. Once they were done they saw a monster behind them
“You thinking what I’m thinking?” asked Dino Blue
“Oh yeah,” responded Ninja Yellow
“Time to take it to the skies,”
Dino Blue coverts the Hovercraft Cycle into an aerial assault machine. He fires rapid blasts at the monster while Ninja Yellow on his Tsunami Cycle also fires rapid blast at the monster. The Monster fell and exploded
The Thunder Rangers and Dino Black started fighting Zurgane. They exchanged fierce blows with their weapons. Zurgane. Sliced Crimson Red across the chest sending him to the ground
Dino Black went in with his Brachio Staff. He sliced Zurgane across the chest twice. He went for it the third time, but was blocked and Zurgane slashed him twice across the chest and kicked him sending Dino Black to the ground.
Zurgane fired and energy blast towards Dino Black, but Navy Blue blocked it with his Thunder Shield. Crimson Red blasted Zurgane a few feet backwards
“I will take it from here,” said Dino Black
“Energy Orb!”
Zurgane fell and exploded
Samurai Green and Dino White were on Dino White’s ATV. He blasted some of the Kelzacks and a monster down. The two of them got off of the ATV
“Super Dino Mode!”
“Super Samurai Mode!”
Dino White sliced a two Kelzacks’ across the chest wile side kicking another. He jumped and glided through the air in-between Kelzacks and sliced them all
Samurai Green slashed one up the chest then slashed another one across the chest. He slammed a round house kick to a jaw of another Kelzack
The monster ran towards Dino White. Dino White jumped over the creature energized his two spikes at the end of his fist and sliced right through the
monster causing it to fall and explode
Ninja Red and Dino Red charged towards two monsters. They both had their swords drawn
Ninja Red slashed a monster across the chest followed by bringing his sword vertically across. He then spins around and slices the monster sending it into a twirl to the ground
Dino Red followed Ninja Red and sliced the monster he was facing across the chest sending it into a twirl to the ground. The two rangers re-grouped
“You thinking what I’m thinking?” asked Dino Red
“Oh yeah,” responded Ninja Red
“Shield of Triumph, Triassic Power!”
“Battlizer!”
Ninja Red flies into the skies and fires and energy blast which destroys one of the monsters
Triassic Red pulls the other monster into another dimension
“Triassic Shield, Full Power!”
The monster falls and explodes. The rangers re-group facing Lothor and his small army of Kelzacks
“Rangers, I have to say I am impressed,” said Lothor
“It’s your turn now!” shouted Ninja Red still in his armor
Ninja Red flies towards Lothor who is still standing on the building. Lothor shoots electricity hitting Ninja Red in the chest and causing him to fall out of the sky and de-morph out of his armor
“Nice try red ranger, don’t worry though, I will be back,” with that said Lothor teleported away
“Alright we did it!” shouted Dustin as he de-morphed. The others followed. All their clothes were ripped. Some were cut. They started to high five each other
Tommy walks up to Shane who is still nursing his chest from where he got hit
“You guys did great out there,” Tommy patted Shane on his back
“Thanks,”
“C’mon, let’s get back to the Power Chamber,”
Lothor is at the long table that previously had the other villains at. In walked Ivan Ooze
“You failed me Lothor,”
“Don’t worry about it, we still got the pink ranger, we are still running the show,”
“True, but I don’t tolerate failure,”
“If that’s the case then I will get those stupid rangers next time,”
“Their won’t be a next time,” Ivan fired Purple energy at Lothor incasing him in some sort of field. He started to lift him up and then teleported away
Ivan teleported to the Abyss of Evil
“What, what are you doing, put me down, I don’t wanna go back in their!” screamed Lothor
“Don’t worry, the others will follow you soon,”
Ivan Ooze tossed Lothor in to the Abyss of Evil
As the Ninja Storm Rangers and Dino Rangers return to the Power Chamber, they are met by the other rangers
“That was awesome,” said Wes as he went up to Shane
“Rangers, I have to congratulate you on your victory. That was very impressive, but don’t let it go to your head, their will be harder times to come,”
Eric walks over to Tommy “So, still doubt they can do it?”
“No way, hey, I’m sorry again about before,”
“Don’t mention it,”
“No, with that type of attitude, you could become one of the greats,”
Carter couldn’t help, but over hear “Great, you just mad his ego even bigger then before,”
The three rangers laughed
Connor pulls Kira aside
“We need to talk,” said Connor
“I know,” responded Kira
“What happened between me and you, was that for real?” asked Connor
“I don’t. I don’t know,”
Trent walks over to them
“What don’t you know?”
“Its nothing,” answered Kira “C’mon Trent, lets go get something to drink,”
It meant something to me… thought Connor
“Billy any luck yet?” asked Jason
“Not any, I can’t even find where Ivan’s palace is,” answered Billy
“We have to find her,” said Jason
“I know, I know,” snapped Billy
Jason didn’t need to be told twice. He turned around and walked off
Hold on Kim, I will find you…
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
12-28-2004, 09:05 PM
Sorry it had been so long since I have posted, I have been busy working on some other fics and haven't had the time to work on this one.
These battles are basically what happened in Thunderstorm.
To remind everybody. This fic takes place before Connor's Battleizer which means before Thunderstorm
Vote for Power Rangers:The Return for Fanfic of the month
Blue ninja
12-28-2004, 09:15 PM
Good chapter, keep up the good work!
-Blue ninja
Joravenel
12-28-2004, 10:16 PM
Great story. I hope that Jason will find Kim and soon. Can not wait to find out what happens next. Thats all for now.
Captain J
lightning_ranger
12-29-2004, 12:28 AM
Is there any chance you might include the villains and rangers from SPD like Gruumm and Anubis and the others? I think it would be cool to include them even if it is practically last minute.
bjlovel
01-27-2005, 05:15 PM
Mike was sleeping in his bed, dreaming about his adventures with the Power Rangers. The team-up with Andros and the rest of the Space Rangers to Kendrix sacrificing herself for the universe to falling down the crevice. He was awaken by a voice
“Mike, wake up, the rangers need your help,”
What he saw surprised him. It was the Magna Defender. Mike saw straight through him as his spirit talked to him
“Mike, the rangers can’t do this on their own, they need your help,”
“I can’t, I don’t have my…your powers anymore,”
“I know, here, take this,” Magna Defender hand Mike the small dagger that was once his sons “Take it,”
Mike reached out and took the dagger from Magna Defenders hand. The dagger turned into a replica of the Magna Defender’s sword
“Thank you but, I can’t take this, it belonged to your son, I wouldn’t feel right about it,”
Zika appears next to his father
“Please, it is my gift to you, for reuniting me and my father,”
“Thank you but, I have no way of getting to Earth,”
“Do not worry, in the forest you will find the next generation of the Defender Torozord. Once you reach the Torozord, you must head to the Lost Galaxy and return to the slave camp.”
"Why? How am I supposed to get there?”
“Their will be a black hole for you opened. You must go now; you have no time to spare,”
Mike nods as the Magna Defender and Zika disappear. Mike gets dressed and heads out to the forest
***
Flying through space is a newly created Scorpion Stinger holding three of the universe’s greatest warlords
“How much longer till we get to the Lost Galaxy?” asked Divatox
“How much longer are you going to keep complaining?” answered Trakeena
“Enough, we have arrived,” said Scorpius
“About time, now where is this Master Vile?” asked Divatox
“He is on that planet over there, in a sealed chamber,” answered Scorpius
The Scorpion Stinger landed on the planet. The planet was a light blue, with no signs of civilization except rusted chains on the ground. The three of them went over to a metal door that was blended in with the planet. Scorpius crawls with his tentacles, using them as legs, up to the door. He lays a tentacle on it. The door suddenly disappeared
Trakeena and Divatox followed Scorpius into the cave. There are fires burning along the sides of the wall giving them light.
As they continue walking a fog begins to follow them. The three of them arrive at a tomb
“So, this must be where he is,” said Divatox
“Way to go ms. obvious,” responded Trakeena
“Shut up, we’re not alone,” said Scorpius
Behind them the fog split up and formed into four creatures. They wear grey armor and each had long type of hair braided. They wear a black latex type outfit underneath their armor
One throws a punch at Trakeena, but one of Scorpius’s tentacles grabs hold of the arm. Another tentacle slams against the chest sending it into a wall
Trakeena back kicked one, knocking it to the ground
Divatox ducks a punch and slams and elbow to the gut and slams an uppercut to the jaw of another, sending it to the ground
Scorpius fires a blast at the last one sending into another wall. The four creatures re-group in front of them
Scorpius begins to giggle a bit “Smoke, I figured I would run into you again,”
The three creatures converted into one
“Scorpius, I cannot let you open that tomb,”
‘”Daddy, you know him?” asked Trakeena
“Yes, he was an old acquaintance of the Magna Defender,” responded Scorpius
“You will pay for what you have done,”
“Let’s see what you got, Sting Wingers,”
A group of Sting Wingers appear before Smoke
Smoke charges towards the Sting Wingers. He ducks under a punch and elbows the Sting Winger in the back. He slams a round house kick across the face of another.
He blocks a few kicks and delivers some of his own. He slams a knife hand blow to a neck of another Sting Winger followed by flipping two more over
“Impressive,” nodded Divatox
“Enough is enough, we have to get this tomb open,” reminded Scorpius
The three of them turn towards the tomb
Smoke blocks a kick and looks towards Scorpius “I have to finish this,”
He dissolves into the fog substance and splits apart. The fog then begins to surge with electricity and electrocutes the Sting Wingers. He then runs towards Scorpius
“I don’t think so,” Divatox extends her tong and wraps it around the neck of Smoke. She then sends bolts of electricity to the body of Smoke
“Are you as stupid as you are ugly?” asked Smoke, clearly unharmed by the current of electricity
“Hey,”
“Electricity only gets stronger with fog, but it doesn’t effect it the way it effects when the power is returned ten times as powerful,”
Smoke sends back the bolts of electricity to Divatox, intensifying it ten fold
It shocks Divatox and causes her to lose consciousness. Trakeena then turns around
“It was a gimme you beat her, but try taking on some one who knows what they are doing,”
Trakeena charges towards Smoke
***
Mike’s new Torozord enters through the black whole
“This brings back memories,”
Flashback…
“Commander, we are not going to make,” said a worker
“Leo, we have to do something?” said Karone
“I know, but what?” answered Leo
The rangers and workers look out to see the Torozord fly into the rift and extend its arms and legs to hold the black hole open. Terra Venture passes through the black whole
The whole is now closing rapidly. It is putting force onto the Torozord
“Mike!” shouted Leo “What are you doing?”
“Leo, I have to, it is the only way you and the others can make it our of the Lost Galaxy,”
“No, we aren’t leaving without you,”
“You must, it is your duty as a Power Ranger to protect the people on Terra Venture, You must go now, I don’t know how much longer I can hold it,”
“No, I won’t leave you again,”
Kai grabs Leo’s shoulder “Mike’s right, we have to get out of here now,”
“Mike….” Leo's last words to his brother were as he pilots the Galaxy Megazord past the Torozord
“Goodbye again, my brother” said Mike
The rangers turn to look at the Torozord and Mike. Only to see that the hole closed and the Torozord with Mike inside exploded
End Flashback…
Smoke threw a punch towards Trakeena. She ducks and elbows Smoke in the gut. She then flips backwards nailing Smokes jaw, sending him to the ground. Smoke jumps back up to his feet
He goes in with a series of punches, all blocked by Trakeena. Smoke tries to round house kick her, but Trakeena dodged the kick. She forms a round house kick of her own connecting to the jaw of Smoke knocking him to the ground. He gets back to his feet again
He goes into her with another series of punches, all blocked again. He tries a leg sweep which Trakeena easily dodges. She front kicks Smoke in the face knocking him back a few steps
Smoke leaps into the air only to be shot down by Trakeena
“I figured you would be more competition,”
“You haven’t seen anything yet,” Smoke turns into the fog and heads towards Trakeena. She begins to twirl her staff and blows the fog into a wall forcing Smoke back to its body
“Nice Try,”
The tomb that holds Master Vile begins to open
“Master Vile, rise up, take revenge on those who imprisoned you years ago,”
“Noooooooooo!” screamed Smoke while he was clutching its chest
“Ha, you are to late, Master Vile has risen and there is nothing you can do about it,” Trakeena laughed
“Maybe he can’t do anything about it, but I can,”
Trakeena and Scorpius turned around to see Mike standing behind Smoke
“You again?”
Divatox slowly regains consciousness “What happened?”
She looks up to see Master Vile standing over her
“Ah, it feels good to be alive again,”
“Master Vile, I Scorpius, my daughter Trakeena welcome you to the Lost Galaxy,”
“Lost Galaxy, this is where Zordon and Dimitria sealed me away,”
“Yeah, and I’m going to seal you back up again,” said Mike as he stepped towards Master Vile. Smoke slowly steps next to Mike, nursing his wound
“Really and how do you plan to do this,”
“All you had to do was ask,”
“Magna Power!”
To Be Conitnued…
bjlovel
01-27-2005, 05:19 PM
For those of you who don't know, Smoke is from Mortal Kombat 2. There may be other characters from Mortal Kombat so look for them
just read the two newest chapters, and they're awesome
greenwc
01-28-2005, 03:52 AM
sweet
lightning_ranger
01-28-2005, 06:14 AM
Great to see another great chapter up, hope to see more up soon!
Mythical Master
01-28-2005, 08:52 AM
I do have a question. In Mike's flashback, is there a specific reason you used Kendrix instead of Karone because Kendrix was not in that episode? If you have a reason, I am not trying to argue whether you should or not but I am just trying to point out that it is a mistake to her in instead of Karone without a good reason.
bjlovel
01-28-2005, 11:38 AM
i didn't know if it was kendrix or karone, I did that out of all memory from seeing that eps when it aired. Thanks for letting me know
Mythical Master
02-01-2005, 02:27 PM
i didn't know if it was kendrix or karone, I did that out of all memory from seeing that eps when it aired. Thanks for letting me know
You're Welcome.
bjlovel
03-14-2005, 10:38 AM
“I found Kim!” yelled Billy
Billy has been searching for her with the help of Cam, Alpha, and Haley since she was taken by Rito Revolto
“Where is she?” asked Jason
He didn’t know what he would do if they couldn’t find her. So many things he wanted to do, so many things he wanted to say. He finally found the courage to talk to her then this happened
“She is in a pocket dimension outside of Stone Canyon,” answered Billy
“Can you get her out of their?” asked Trini
She has been worried about her best friend Kimberly too. They haven’t seen each other since she left for New Zealand
“No, we can’t teleport her out, there is something protecting the dimension,” said Billy
“Is their anything we can do, I mean we already lost Zack, we can’t lose Kimberly,” said Adam
Zack was killed by Lord Zedd in battle. Adam will never forget seeing what Zedd did to him
“Their maybe a way,” Billy walks over to a wall and opens a panel. He pushes a button and the wall turns into a door and opens up. Billy walks in and comes out with two poles that have a round top at the top of them
“Aren’t those the tings we used to get Jason out of the Dark Dimension?” asked Trini
“That’s right and with luck this will still work,”
When the Power Chamber was built, Billy moved all of his gadgets from his garage into a secret compartment that he had specially made. Billy puts them down side by side standing up
“Cam, what are Kimberly’s coordinates?”
“Y-Z-1-6-6,” answered the genius who invented the Wind Morphers for the Ninja Storm Rangers
He doesn’t know much about the rangers he has seen, only that they have protected Earth time and time again. He was fascinated with all this technology in the Power Chamber. He could only imagine what he could do with it
Then there was Zordon, he has heard about him from his father, about how he had to make the ultimate sacrifice to save the galaxy. He knew he was the one who started the original power rangers, and helped his father with building the Ninja Ops and before then helped Master Pablo start the Wind Ninja Academy
Billy inputs the coordinates and a gateway opens up
Jason walks up to it “I’m going in,”
Before Jason could take his first steps Billy stopped him
“Wait, I'm going with you, the portal will close once you get in and only this device will open it back up again,”
Billy pulls out a remote control
Jason nods “Alright then, lets get going,”
“Be careful and let the power protect you,” Zordon said
Jason and Billy walked through the portal
Alarms begin to go off
“Zordon what’s happening?” asked Tommy
“Rito and Tengas are attacking Stone Canyon,”
Rocky, Adam, and Aisha walk up to Zordon
“Zordon, we have to go,” said Aisha
“No you are to weak from your last battle. you are surly going to fail,”
“But Zordon, it is our home, we can’t let it be taken over,” said Rocky
“The Turbo Rangers will go,”
T.J. and the rest of Turbo walk up to Zordon
Flashback...
T.J. has only seen Zordon once before all of this chaos happened. That was when Tommy, Adam, Katherine, and Tanya passed their powers onto him, Carlos, Cassie, and Ashley. He has heard about what Zordon has done to aid the rangers before him in battle. Especially what Tommy told him about how he had helped him when he needed it the most. Then givinghis life for the Galaxy. He didn't know how he could tell Tommy. He knew Zordon was like a father to him. And he knew it was their fault....his fault that Zordon was never rescued
When he first took over the power, he knew he had to fill big shoes after all that Tommy accomplished over his years of being a ranger. He will never forget how Tommy took the information about Zordon being gone
It was only a week after he and the rest of the Space Rangers saved the galaxy. He walked up to an apartment and knocked on the door. He didn't know what the reaction would be from him. When the door opened a young man was standing there. His hair was cut and spiked just like the Forever Red Mission
"T.J. man, am I glad you are alright," Tommy invited T.J. in
"So what has been going on since you, and the rest of your team saved the galaxy?"
"Well, we didn't exctly save it," answered T.J.
"What do you mean?"
"Well, it is hard for me to say, It...It...It was really Zordon who saved the universe,"
"What do you mean?" asked Tommy
T.J. was trying to think of a way to word what happened up in the Dark Fortress without being to straight forward with it
"During the night Andros, he was our Red Ranger, snuck up to the Dark Fortress, their he found his way to Astronema, his sister,"
"Astronema was Andros's sister?" askd Tommy
"Yeah, it effected Andros big time," answered T.J. "Well when he found Astronema, he found Zordon,"
"He ended up fighting his sister and an attack that went wrong hit Astronema. Andros thought that he had killed her, his own sister," said T.J. "After Zordon told Andros to destoy his energy tube and that only the goo energy from his tube could stop the attack. At first he couldn't do it, but he knew deepdown, as a ranger, it was his responsability to save the galaxy,"
"He closed his eyes and destroyed Zordon's energy tube,"
Tommy started to geta tear in his eyes, and T.J. knew that Tommy knew he was gone for good now
"So Zordon is gone?" asked Tommy, trying to hold back from crying while T.J. was there
"Yes, but it stopped the attacks across the galaxy," explained T.J. "Don't be mad at Andros, to tell you it was hard on him, I mean he was handpicked by Zordon to become the Red Ranger,"
"I'm not mad, I know Andros did it for the best and I envy him because I don't know if I would of been able to do it," said Tommy
T.J. started to head towards the door. Tommy looked up and smiled knowing that he made the right choice to leave T.J. to lead a new team of rangers "Thanks T.J., I really appreciate you coming to tell me this, it means alot,"
"T.J. smiles "Not a problem," and walks out of the apartment
End Flashback...
“T.J. you must lead your team to Stone Canyon and stop Rito from taking it over,” explained Zordon
“Right, Shift int…,”
“Wait,” said Adam “I’m sorry Zordon, but we have to go,”
“Very well,” replied Zordon
Katherine, Tanya, Trini, and a fatigued Tommy walk’s up to them
“Guys, we are coming with you,” said Kat “Tommy, I think it will be best if you stay here, you’ve been through enough for now,”
“I believe Katherine is right Tommy, your body is to weak, you must rest,” said Zordon
Tommy backs up and nods “Good luck,”
T.J. nods
“Lets do it!”
“Shift Into Turbo!” yelled T.J.
“It’s Morphing Time!” yelled Rocky
“Zeo Ranger One, Pink!”
“Zeo Ranger Two, Yellow!”
“Zeo Ranger Three, Blue!”
“Zeo Ranger Four, Green!”
“Yellow Ranger Power!”
“Sabertooth Tiger!”
To Be continued...
Mythical Master
03-14-2005, 03:22 PM
First of all I want to say this is a good installment but it should be XVIX for 19 not XVIV. This may have been a misprint I don't know I am just pointing it out.
bjlovel
03-14-2005, 04:53 PM
Your right, sorry about that
Black thunder
03-14-2005, 06:33 PM
Great Chapter
Mythical Master
03-15-2005, 02:51 PM
Actually I am wrong there is no V in the Roman Numeral equiviant of 19 It is XIX not XVIX. I don't know what I was thinking yesterday but I realized my mistake last night when I was working on an outline for a story I am working on. I am not an expert on Roman Numerals but I do know what the basics mean so I apologize for correcting you with another wrong answer. But the story was still good and that is what counts.
packfan6
03-16-2005, 07:01 PM
Another great episode, good job.
sbb1513
03-17-2005, 05:53 AM
that was good.
~mag~ :007:
deathscythe-ranger
03-29-2005, 02:37 PM
i wan't more this is the best storie i ever have read
bjlovel
06-05-2005, 01:58 PM
A portal opens up in the pocket dimension and outcomes Billy and Jason. They land on the floor of the Pocket Dimenesion. They slowly got up and looked around. They saw Kimberly on a table with straps on her neck, wrists, waist, and ankles. Her clothes were torn almost completely off. Covering only a few spots. Jason and Billy ran towards Kimberly
Jason starts to pull on the straps “Billy help me get these straps off of her,”
“Not so fast, Red Ranger,”
Jason didn’t need to turn around. He knew who it was. The monster that haunted his dreams when he was a ranger. The one monster he could never beat
It was Goldar
Jason turns around “Billy find a way to get Kimberly out of here, I will handle Goldilocks,”
Billy nods “Right,” and continues to pull on the straps
“Goldar, I was wandering when you were going to show your ugly face again,”
“Oh, take a long look at it cause it will be the last thing you see,”
“We’ll just have to see about that,”
Jason and Goldar charge towards each other. Jason throws a round house kick that Goldar dodges, He throws his own backhand, but Jason blocks it and slams a round house kick to Goldar’s gut and kicks him again in the back knocking him to the ground
Goldar gets back up and shoots a laser blast towards Jason. Jason rolls out of the way and leaps into the air. He deliveres a flying side kick to the chest of Goldar knocking him to the ground again
“So, I see you have improved since the last time we met,” said Goldar
“Not really, you’ve just gotten slower, dumber, oh yeah and uglier,” responded Jason
While Jason is keeping Goldar busy, Billy gets Kimberly out of the straps. Before he can pick her up, a blast hits Billy in the chest sending him into Jason, knocking them both down
Lord Zedd stepped forwards from the shadows
“You didn’t think I was going let you take the pink ranger so easily did you?”
Goldar re-groups with Lord Zedd with his sword in hand
“Jason, I think this is a good time to morph,” mentioned Billy as he slowly got up holding his now bare chest
“I think your right,” Jason shouted “Its Morphing Time!”
Nothing happened
“Its Morphing Time!”
Nothing happened
“Billy, why can’t we morph?” asked Jason
“No need to explain Blue Ranger, I will tell him myself,” said Lord Zedd
“You see, there is a protective barrier around this dimension that doesn’t allow you to access the Morphing Grid from here, so to put it in simple terms, you have no power here,”
“We may not have out powers, but we can still take you!” yelled Jason
“Jason, we don’t have time, if we don’t get out of here within the next…” Billy looks at his watch “30 seconds,”
“No, we can’t leave without Kim,”
“We have to go now, I don’t like it, but if we don’t we won’t be able to get back to the Power Chamber,”
Billy pulls out the device from his pocket and presses a button. The portal came through before re-opened
“Jason, we have to go now,”
Jason points to Lord Zedd and Goldar
“Till we meet again,”
Zedd waves “Goodbye rangers,”
Jason and Billy jump back through the portal
“Now, we just need to get the other Pink Rangers, and my plan can be put into place,”
“Sire, how are we suppose to get the others, it’s not like their gonna be in one big group and we can just take them?” asked Goldar
“No, but if we draw them out in battle, that’s when we will strike,” Lord Zedd said
“ Now go down and get the Pink Zeo Ranger and the Pink Turbo Ranger and bring them back to the dimension in the Nebula System,”
“Right away,” responded Goldar
***
Zeo Pink backhands a Tenga then delivers a side kick to another
A Tenga comes flying towards Zeo Pink, but Turbo Pink nails it with a flying side kick
Zeo Pink looks towards Turbo Pink “Thanks,”
“No Problem,” responded Turbo Pink
Flashback…
“I will never forget what Cassie and T.J. did for me and Tommy,” Cassie and T.J. fighting Piranhatrons in front of Katherine while she is on the ground with a twisted ankle
“If it wasn’t for their bravery, me and Tommy wouldn’t of survived. They saved my life, I will always be in their debt,”
End Flashback…
Zeo Pink gets hit in the chest by and energy blast sending her into Turbo Pink. They slowly get up, Zeo Pink looks to see who hit her only to see Rito standing in front of her and Turbo Pink
“Rito you’re going to pay for that,” Zeo Pink charges towards Rito
She gets hit by another energy blast and is thrown to the ground again. She looks up and sees Goldar standing there
Goldar walks up next to Rito
“Pink Ranger, you are coming with me,” says Goldar
“Don’t think so Monkey Brains!”
Turbo Pink blasts Goldar and Rito with her Turbo Blaster as she runs next to Zeo Pink
“Kat, are you okay?”
“Yeah, let’s get them.”
Zeo Pink takes out her Zeo Laser Pistol and Zeo Blade and combines them. She and Turbo Pink fire their Blaster at Rito and Goldar causing sparks to fly off the two monsters
“Alright, nice shot Cassie,” says Zeo Pink
“Good shot indeed, but now you two are mine,” A net appears in Goldar’s hand and he throws on Zeo and Turbo Pink. The net was covered with some magic and causes the two pink rangers to forcibly de-morph
“The net is draining your power, no use to fight it,” says Goldar
Cassie and Katherine try to fight it, but can’t and they black out
Turbo Red side kicks a Tenga and looks to see the net covering Cassie and Katherine and Goldar and Rito walking towards them
“Goldar, stop right their!” yelled Turbo Red
The Red Ranger ran towards the two girls, but is suddenly tackled by a group of Tengas and is pinned down to the ground
The Red Ranger looks and sees out of the corner of his eye the Green Zeo Ranger fending of Tengas
“Adam!” shout’s Turbo Red
Flashback…
T.J. didn’t know Adam that well. He has only seen him twice, the first time during the Power Transfer and then once again when he morphed into the black ranger and helped Carlos
He and Adam didn’t talk much to each other. Carlos was the one to tell Adam about what happened to Zordon instead of him. He wish he knew him better then he did
End Flashback…
Zeo Green looks over at T.J. pinned down then looks and see’s Katherine and Cassie caught in the net. He charges towards them and hit’s Rito in the back knocking him down. He nails Goldar in the gut with a kick, then nails him in the back knocking him down too
He goes to grab the net. He touches the net and an electrical surge is sent through his body sending him backwards. Goldar and Rito re-group
“Nice try, Green Ranger,” says Goldar
“Yeah what he said,” Rito says
“You are going to pay for this,” Zeo Green charges with his Zeo Hatchets in hand
I can’t let the same thing happen to Katherine and Cassie that happened to Zack, I won’t allow it…
Zeo Green unleashed a battle cry as he charges towards Goldar and Rito
“Ha!”
“Goodbye Adam,” said Goldar. He and Rito fire two energy beams each from their eyes and gets a direct shot in on the Green Ranger. the impact caused a rumble and sent Zeo Green flying into a building
“Rito take the Pink Rangers back to Lord Zedd right now,” commanded Goldar
“What about you?” asked Rito
“I will be right behind you,” responds Goldar
Rito nods and teleports away with the Katherine and Cassie
Goldar looks towards the building that Zeo Green was blasted into. Goldar shoots some more energy beams at the base of the building causing it to collapse with Adam, the Green Zeo Ranger still inside
Goldar laughs and teleports away
To Be Continued...
bjlovel
06-05-2005, 01:59 PM
Sorry this took so long, I had no ambition to write anything. Hope you enjoy it.
Black thunder
06-05-2005, 02:05 PM
Yet again, great job
Mythical Master
06-06-2005, 01:36 PM
This story is great!
Dragen
06-07-2005, 04:11 AM
When is the next chapter??
Dragen
06-07-2005, 04:43 AM
Just finished reading Reunited pt.VII... and what can I say but cool. However, why didn't you give the rangers new powers for, and new Zords. If there is a new BAD, they would need new powers, specially as all the evil is being returned.
bjlovel
06-07-2005, 01:50 PM
this isn't a fic of new rangers getting power. It is about the rangers combating the evil with the powers they have now
Dragen
06-07-2005, 08:10 PM
ok... just thought it would be a good idea, so when is the next chapter
Dcaasi98
06-13-2005, 02:40 PM
Wow, nice bj. I like that a lot.
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