Rebirth

[GR Dragonzord]

I would like to thank all those who gave their thoughts about my first fanfic ever. They were VERY encouraging and i appreciate your input. I have finally come up with a name for this fan fic as you can say. I thought The Return of the MMPR was pretty dull so i have name this story REBIRTH. and because It's Time for a Gold Rush said it would be a good idea i have put my fan fic into one post. so check back periodically for updates to this story. I am working constantly on this story. And Again thank you very much and here is part 1 of REBIRTH:

Time: 3:45pm
Place: Angel Grove Industrial Area

Brandon Fong grew up with the Mighty Morphin’ Power Rangers and had always been fascinated with the Dragonzord. And today he was going to find the secret location where the Dragonzord resided in a dormant state. He had learned where the Dragonzord had appeared numerous times through the internet: Angel Grove’s industrial area. “Dude your not gonna find it. It had disappeared for years now. At least 10 years.” said his friend Chris.
“Piece of cake. I’ll find it.” Brandon says earlier that day. Return to the present. Brandon sails out to the middle of the ocean on his boat and prepares to dive in. “Ok the moment of truth Brandon. We’re not leaving until we find it.” He sets his dive watch and dives in. He dives in but doesn’t find anything so he goes deeper towards the bottom. As time passes he comes to the realization that maybe this really wasn’t the place where Dragonzord laid. As he swims towards the surface a green flash of light catches his eye. He wonders “could that be it? Maybe.” He checks his dive watch 2 hours left of air I can make it, and proceeds to swim towards the flash of light. The light came from a hidden cavern in the canyon Brandon continues to swim.
He proceeds to swim deeper into the canyon when all of a sudden he sees the top of the Dragonzord’s head. “Whoa! It cant be.” He swims faster into the canyon to reveal the body of the amazing lost zord. “It is!” He swims to the zord. He circles the zord from the legs to the top of the head. As he passes the front of the head a green energy grabs him and sucks him into the zord. “No way! Im in the Dragonzord!” He digs through his bag and pulls out his cell phone. “Oh yeah like the cell phones gonna really work way down here. Good call Brandon.” He says to himself. He puts the cell phone back into his bag and goes and explores the cock pit. He walks towards the back of the cock pit and sees the Dragonzord emblem in the back. On the edge of the emblem laid the Green Ranger’s power coin. “Hmmm... what’s this?” he quickly picks it up. “Whatever it is Chris is never gonna believe this.” Suddenly the emblem begins to glow with energy and zaps the power coin in his hand. The energy startled him at first but then it began to shock him. “Ahhhhhhh!” A gold morpher appears on his belt buckle and he begins to glow green. As the energy flowed through him he begins to automatically morph. When he’s fully morphed the emblem stops glowing with green energy. “Whoa! I’m... I’m... I’m the Green Ranger?! NO WAY!” He cries out in joy. “Wait till Chris finds out about this.” He goes and takes a seat and explores the control panel. While he begins to push buttons a hologram pops up from the center of the control board. It is a hologram of Zordon.
“Greetings.” Zordon begins to talk.
“Whoa! Who are you?” Brandon quickly says.
“I am Zordon an intergalactic being, caught in a time warp 10000 years ago by Rita Repulsa in his battle against hafter a battle I had with her. I aided the original Mighty Morphin’ Power Rangers in their battle against Rita Repulsa and Lord Zed. If you are watching this that means I am no longer with you, Lord Zed is gone, the Dragonzord has been revived and there is a new threat to earth far more powerful than Lord Zed and Rita combined. Through out time Power Rangers have existed to battle the forces of evil. And now you have been chosen to be a warrior of good. A warrior of virtue. These powers are not to be used as weapons. They are now apart of you. A part of who you are. Use them wisely for they are not a toy. Use them as an extension of yourself. To activate the powers you must hold out your morpher and call out your zord. Finally, there are three simple rules you must follow. You must never use your powers for personal gain. You must never reveal your identity to anyone. And finally you must never initiate battle. Your powers are used to protect never for aggression. With this said I bid you farewell and good luck in your journey to protect Earth. And may the power protect you.” the hologram of Zordon disappears in a matter of seconds.
“Whoa that was intense. So im the Green Ranger. Geez.”
He looks at his watch and realizes its time to go back.. “Now how the hell do you power down?” He begins to think about what Zordon had told him about the powers being a part of him now. “Ok the powers are a part of me. So that means if I will it it would work right. Well then... Power Down.” Brandon powers down then puts the morpher in his pouch.
Brandon returns to the Angel Grove Juice Bar where Chris, Steph, Sarah and Brad were waiting for him in the work out area. Brad and Chris are practicing martial arts and call Brandon over to them. “So... did you find any Dragonzord?” Chris asks him.
“Nah... you were right. There was no Dragonzord there.” Brandon says acting a bit disappointed.
“Well at least you tried right? I mean who knows maybe it would’ve been there and you didn’t try. At least you know for sure now. You know what I mean?” Sarah says to him trying to comfort him.
“Yeah. Thanks.” Brandon says.
“Well come on. Cheer up work out for a little bit.” Chris says.
“Nah. I’m so rusty. I wouldn’t know what to do.” Brandon says.
“Yeah well if you’d come to a class every now and then maybe you wouldn’t be so scared.” Brad says making fun of him.
“Scared? Oh now it’s on. Come on Brad I want you.” Brandon laughs and Brad steps onto the mat in a cocky manner. They begin to spar and Brandon traps his hands. “Hmm... maybe im not so rusty am I.” and he begins to chuckle. Brad gets out of the hold.
“Come on you don’t give me enough credit Brandon. You think I could’ve gotten out of that?” Just as he says that Brandon sweeps him down onto the mat and pins him on the mat.
“Lets see you get out of this.” He says with a witty tone. Suddenly Ernie calls out to the group.
“Hey guys check this out.” The news is on the TV with an urgent message.
“We interrupt this program to bring you a late breaking story. Reef Side is in trouble. A monster has attacked the residential area of Reef Side and the Power Rangers cant stop them. This has been going on since two o’clock when a building was attacked by what looked like an Arabian warrior. This is actual footage of the battle with the monster earlier today.” The TV shows footage of the Power Rangers battling the tyrannodrones.
“Geez what are they gonna do?” Brad says.
Ernie says to them, “I dunno but I wouldn’t worry too much. I’ve seen this happen before the Power Rangers will take care of it.”
“Are you kidding me. Those monsters are whooping up on them. They cant seem to stop that monster.” Brad says. Brandon looks at the TV and thinks about his new powers.
“Hey guys I gotta go. I’ll catch ya all later.” Brandon leaves the Juice Bar and when he gets outside and looks to see if anyone is around to see that no ones around and takes out his morpher from his pocket and gets ready to morph. “It’s Morphin’ Time!” He then continues to morph. Little does he know that there was a figure behind him in a cloak watching from the side of the Juice Bar.

“Dr.O we cant hold them off anymore what are we gonna do?” Conner cries out to Tommy.
“Hang in there guys I have a plan.” Tommy tells them all and takes turns the Brachio Staff to energy orb mode while they’re surrounded by tyrannodrones

[GR Dragonzord]

and here is Part 2 of REBIRTH:

“Dr.O we cant hold them off anymore what are we gonna do?” Conner cries out to Tommy.
“Hang in there guys I have a plan.” Tommy tells them all and takes turns the Brachio Staff to energy orb mode while they’re surrounded by tyrannodrones
“Well whatever it is now’s a good time for it to come into play Dr. O.” Ethan says with a fatigued voice.
“Yeah don’t worry. It’s coming. Follow me.” They fight there way out of the middle and begin to run. Tommy turns towards the tyrannodrones. “ ENERGY ORB ENGAGE!”The energy orb takes out all the tyrannodrones.
“Man why didn’t you do that before?” Ethan asks Tommy.
“Hey cut me some slack will ya?” Tommy says with a big sigh of relief.
“Nothing can make this day worse.” Kira says exhausted.
“I wouldn’t say that.” A voice says behind the rangers.
Tommy turns around. “Aww man not you.”
“Look Trent man we don’t wanna fight you anymore. You’re a ranger. Fight by our side. Break that spell.” Conner says trying to convince Trent to fight with them.
“You don’t have to fight me Red Ranger. I bought a friend for you to play with. Meet Wolfsbane.” Trent says with an evil laugh.
“What? I didn’t know you were working for Mesagog?” Kira says.
“I guess he made me an offer I couldn’t refuse. Wolfsbane attack!” Wolfsbane attacks the Rangers. Too exhausted to take him on Conner, Ethan, and Kira gets beaten easily leaving Tommy to fight the monster on his own, but the monster is too much for him.
Wolfsbane knocks Tommy away and Trent decides to finish him off. “White Dragozord laser arrows!” the arrows hit Tommy and knocks him back and powers him down.
“Dr.O are you ok?” The other fallen rangers run up to him and see how he is.
“That’s it! I’ve had enough of your crap Trent. Friend or no friend this ends NOW!” Conner activates his Dino Rage and attacks Trent. He charges Trent and Trent dodges his attack and uses the laser arrows again and strikes Conner down and powers him down also.
“Now to finish the rest of you off.” Trent gets ready for one more laser arrow attack. Just as the arrows launch a green flash flashes and the arrows explode and standing in front of the fallen rangers playing his Dragon Dagger activating his Dragon Shield.
“Whoa. No way. It can’t be.” Tommy’s eyes widen and his jaw drops as he looks at his past standing in front of him.
“Go. I’ll take it from here.”Brandon drops his hand to his side and slides his left foot out a little. “Come on white ranger. Show me whatcha got. Dragonzord to Dragozord.” Trent just stands there as Wolfsbane charges at him from behind. As Brandon stands there with his arms to his side he powers up the Dragon Dagger and just as Wolfsbane approaches he spins around and slashes him destroying him. “Child’s play.”
“Show off. Fine you want to play. We’ll play. I’ll give you a little edge.” He drops his sword on the ground.
“Ok we’ll do this hand to hand I guess.” Brandon drops the Dragon Dagger. Both rangers charge at each other and fight.
Conner turns to Tommy and asks, “Ok. Is there like an official sign up sheet for Power Ranger powers? Or do they just hand them out at the door?”
Tommy looks at him still shocked, “Don’t look at me. I’m as shocked as you are.” As the two rangers fight Trent tries to absorb Brandon’s Green Ranger powers like he did with Tommy but Brandon kicks him in the mid-section and jumps back.and throws an energy ball at him hitting him in the chest sending him back a few feet.
“Don’t think you can get me that easily do you?” says Brandon as he stands up and dusts himself off.
“You wont be happy when I get done with you.” Trent runs towards his sword and picks it up to slash Brandon with it and connects. Brandon pops right back up as Trent charges at him with his sword and slashes him on the shoulder and Brandon’s shield stops the sword. Brandon shakes his head no and punches Trent in the stomach sending him flying back.
“Not bad. For the new kid in town. What do you say we take this up a little.” Trent says as he stands up.
“Why not.” Brandon walks towards him kicking up his Dragon Dagger along the way. Trent sends a barrage of laser arrows at him and immediately uses his super speed to get behind Brandon.
“Suprise.” And with a swift strike he carves an “X” on Brandon’s chest causing sparks to fly ever where.
“Nice one. Tell me what you think of this though.” runs at Trent does a jumping spinning crescent kick and then a round kick. As soon Trent blocks the round kick Brandon slashes Trent with his dagger cause Trent to stumble back a few feet where Brandon throws a green energy ball at him and teleports behind Trent and shoots a few laser blasts from his Dragon Dagger hitting Trent straight on.
As Trent gets up he breathes hard. He stands there for a few seconds with his back facing Brandon. He slowly turns his head and says, “You are good. I must admit that. But your arrogance shall be your down fall. “We shall meet again. And then you will feel the wrath of my Dragozord.” With that said he leaps away.

[Kali_WolfChilde]

as tony would say; " GRRREEEAAAATTTTT!!!"
and as teh chihuahua on TV would say: " You quiero more story, por favor!"
:p

[it's time for a gold rush]

good job man and if you need any ideas about anything let me know and I'll help you out.

[Zord_Crazy]

keep it coming, keep it coming.

[zeoranger0black]

as tony would say; " GRRREEEAAAATTTTT!!!"
and as teh chihuahua on TV would say: " You quiero more story, por favor!"
:p
This guy loves spanish........ is Yo quiero mas historia por favor, at least, por favor was right and quiero

[GR Dragonzord]

“Kira. Ethan power down.” The Dino Thunder Rangers power down.
“Whoa. That was amazing. Who are you?” Ethan runs over to Brandon extremely excited and stunned at the display of power, but still staggering from the gruesome battle that just took place. Brandon remains quiet for a moment. Tommy walks up to Brandon.
“Yeah man where’d you get those powers?”Conner pats Brandon on the back.
“Yeah where did you get your powers? The Green Ranger powers were destroyed a long time ago by Rita. How are you wielding the Dragon Dagger and the green powers?”
Brandon powers down a turns around. “I don’t know. I had found the Dragonzord in this cavern when I went diving and it just sucked me into it and then I found this coin and then the next thing I know I’m the Green Ranger.”
“But Rita had destroyed it. That’s a fact. That’s why I was given the White Ranger Powers. Cause my Green Ranger powers were destroyed.” Tommy says in a very confused stage.
“Whoa. You were the Green Ranger? You controlled the Dragonzord?” Brandon began to get excited and his eyes opened wide. “I was like your biggest fan. Im Brandon what’s your name? What else can these powers do?”
“Nice to meet you Brandon. But we need to find out how these powers were revived.” Tommy began to think and walk.
“Maybe I can answer that question.” The cloaked figure from the Juice Bar reappears. As he approached he began to remove his hood.
“Who’s that Dr.O?” Kira begins to look intently at the figure. Tommy gazes at the figure as if he recognized the figure but wasn’t too sure of who it was.
“Zordon was the one who revived the powers.” The figure said as he finsihed removing the hood of the cloak.
“Nice to see you again Andros.” Tommy looks at him and smiles. “What do you mean Zordon revived the Dragonzord?”
“Well remember when the Space Rangers fought Astronema?”
“Yeah you guys managed to wipe the Earth clean of evil.” Tommy recollects.
“The only way to do that was to shatter Zordon’s power tube.” Andros explains to the Dino Thunder Rangers and Brandon. “The energy released from the power tube purified all things evil in the universe, or at least for the time being. My guess is. Since the Dragonzord and the Green Ranger powers were powers of the dark side Zordon’s energy managed to revive the powers and there it laid dormit waiting for its time to awaken again.”
Conner interrupts Andros, “Wait so how did you know that the powers were activated or where it even was.”
“I didn’t know where it was. That was the thing. Even though it was powered up again no one could pick up the energy signal. I didn’t know it even existed until Brandon got the power. Once he had gotten the power it sent out a signal and the Astro Mega ship had picked up the power reading. I had decided to follow the signal and it lead me to Angel Grove. I then tracked it to Brandon. When I finally found him it he was here.”
“Wait so you were stalking me?” Brandon asks with a what the heck attitude.
“Kind of. I can only track you when you’re morphed where your energy signal is at its strongest. So I was finally able to track you when you had morphed to come here and help the other Dino Thunder Rangers.”
“I see. Well Why were you trying to track me down? I mean I’m sure I wasn’t the only energy reading out there. I mean with all the monsters and even the White Dino Ranger. Why not track him down.” Brandon asked Andros.
“Cause Tommy was already tracking down the White Dino Ranger and your signal was a familiar one. One from a long time ago. So I had to find out who this energy reading came from.”
“So that’s when you found Brandon.” Kira says to Andros.
“Correct.”
Tommy begins to think, “Wait. Since the Dragonzord was revived by Zordon does that mean that the other zords and powers were revived?”
“I don’t know. It’s a possibility but then again maybe not. The Dragonzord powers were evil so maybe it was revived with the powers of good.” Andros replied. “But there’s only one way to find out.” Andros calls someone with his communicator.
“Dr. O who’s he calling?” Conner asks.
“No idea.” Tommy replies. While all this is going on Brandon had wandered over to a bench, morpher in hand. Kira walked over to Brandon and sits down besides him.
“That was incredible. Where’d you learn to do all that?” Kira asks Brandon.
“No idea. These powers are still new to me. I’m just as surprised as you are at what I just did.”
“We’ve been trying to take Trent down for a while now and failed. But you. You just come in and take him out just like that. Your powers have got to be great.” Kira says trying to get more out of Brandon.
“Well behold the powers of the Dragonzord, and there’s way more where that came from cause the Green Ranger is here to stay.” He says arrogantly and flips his morpher and catches it.
Conner walks over to Brandon, “You know Trent was right about something.”
“Who?” Brandon says with no idea what Conner is talking about.
“Trent the White Ranger you were just fighting.”
“Oh so that’s who he is.”
“Yeah that’s who he is. And as I was saying you can’t be so arrogant when you’re taking him on. He’ll use that against you. And then you’re going to be in a lot of trouble.” Conner warns Brandon.
“I guess you’re right. But I wouldn’t worry too much. I’m a big boy I can take care of myself.”
“Guys lets go.” Tommy calls the other rangers.
“Where’re we going Dr. O?” Conner asks Tommy.
“We’re going to visit some old friends.” Tommy says with a smile on his face.
Back at Angel Grove a familiar face is on the soccer field coaching girls high school soccer. “Come on guys hustle. We have a game on Friday and if we’re gonna win we have to pick up the pace. Sarah don’t wait so long to take a shot. You had a perfect shot. There you go. Good job.”
“Still coaching soccer I see. After all these years.” Andros says to the veteran ranger..
“Yeah why wouldn’t I? I’ve always loved the game. Plus the high school needed a part time soccer coach so I figured why not right.”
“That’s true. Hey look who I brought with me.”
“Carlos. It’s great to see you again man. It’s been such a long time.” Tommy says shaking the Black Space Rangers hand. “Guys I want you to meet Carlos the Black Space Ranger. Carlos meet Conner, Kira, Ethan. The newest members of the Power Rangers line. The Dino Thunder Rangers. And this,” Pointing to Brandon. “... this is Brandon the new Green Ranger, the new Green Dragonzord Ranger.”
“Whoa. Did you say the new Dragonzord Green Ranger? How? I mean weren’t those powers you know destroyed?” Carlos says stunned and shocked.
“Remember when we fought Astronema ?”Andros says to Carlos.
“Yeah. How could I forget. We defeated the powers of evil that day.”
“We’ll I had to shatter Zordon’s power tube inorder to save the world that day. And I think Zordon’s energy had revived the powers of the Dragonzord.”Andros explains.
“Amazing. Hey do you think it revived the other Mighty Morphin’ Power Ranger Powers?” Carlos asks.
“That’s what we’re here to find out.” Brandon chimes in. “If it did then the Might Morphin’ Power Rangers are back in action permanently”

Back at Mesagog’s lair Mesagog is angry at the outcome of Trent’s fight with Brandon. “He caught me off guard. He will not defeat me again. You can’t count on that Mesagog.. I’ll do whatever it takes to take down the Green Ranger and the rest of them.”
“Allow me to ensure his victory master. With me watching over him he most certainly will not fail you again.” Zeltrax pleads with Mesagog to allow him to go.
“You both shall go. But to make sure you both do not fail me take the Tyrannodrones with you and a monster as well. If one of you can not beat them then we shall increase our numbers.”
Zeltrax turns to Elsa, “As you wish master. Elsa initiate the genorandomizer.”
“Mesagog. I assure you I do not need the help from the likes of them to ensure victory.” Trent says Mesagog. “What happened with the Green Ranger was just a minor set back. I will come back with the heads of the rangers next time I face them.”
“I would rather be safe then sorry. I’m sure you understand where I am coming from Trent.” Mesagog says to Trent.
Clenching his teeth Trent replies to Mesagog, “Yes sir. I understand.” He stands up and walks away. As he walks away he mumbles “And I’m sure you understand why I’m going to kill you as soon as the rangers are destroyed.” As Trent walks out of the room the genorandomizer finishes the monster and out walks a figure shrouded in darkness. His eyes glowed red. As he walked forward black clouds of smoked followed. Tall with a thin but muscular build the figure quickly approaches Mesagog. He wore a long black with red trim robe like a monk would wear. Hair down to his mid-back black as the night. His face had hair like a man who hadn’t shaved for a few days. As he approached Mesagog he stopped as Zeltrax stepped forward to introduce the new monster.
“Master I would like you to meet Bushidakai. The heart of a samurai warrior he will be completely faithful to you master.”
“I live to only serve you master.” Bushidakai bows to Mesagog.
“Goooood. Now go with the White Ranger and Zeltrax and destroy the rangers.” Mesagog turns around to return to his chair and stops. “Oh and Zeltrax. Do not bother to come back before destroying the rangers.”
Pausing in fear of what is in store for him if he fails he softly says, “Yes master.”

The rangers sit at a picnic table in the park talking and enjoying a small picnic. “Wow so you really think this could be the return of the Mighty Morphin’ Power Rangers.” Carlos says.
“Yeah I really do.” says Brandon enthusiastically. “I also think that if we can find the original rangers we would be able to form the unstoppable team that once took on Lord Zed and Rita.”
“We weren’t unstoppable.” Tommy interrupt. “If we were, the powers never would’ve been destroyed.”
Carlos had a different idea, “But you guys were the best that ever existed. You guys are legendary. Lead by you the rangers defeated the worlds greatest evil. Not only did you guys beat Lord Zed and Rita but you destroyed the machine empire, Ivan Ooze, Divatox I mean who else could say that?”
“We did our best. But I wouldn’t consider ourselves the best. We did what we had to do. Anyway you, TJ, Ashley, Justin, and Cassie were the ones who defeated Divatox.” Tommy corrected Carlos.
“Yeah but you were the ones who chose us for your replacements.”
Nodding his head in agreement, “Yeah but I’m just saying we’re not the greatest. We were just around longer.”
“I can’t believe this I’m sitting here with three different generations of Power Rangers. This is just awesome.” Brandon says to Kira, Ethan and Conner.
“You know what.” Ethan says to Brandon. “I’m kinda in disbelief also.” Suddenly Tyrannodrones appear surrounding the picnic table.
“Well Ethan prepare to fight along side us then. You guys ready?” Tommy asks the others.
“Lets do it.” Andros replies to Tommy. The rangers try to break through the circle of tyrannodrones but they’re just too many of them.
“Kira lets bring on the noise. CEET KIA!” Tommy cries out then executes a jumping spinning crecent kick.
“Sure thing Dr.O.” Kira lets out a loud screeching noise clearing a nice path for the rangers to escape from.
“Wow that was awesome.” Carlos cries out in awe.
Brandon drift away from the group a bit. And is surrounded by four tyrannodrones. “Aww man. What is this just four? You’ve gotta be kidding me.” As the tyrannodrone in front of him comes in for an over head strike with its blade like arm Brandon checks it with a kick then back kicks the quickly approaching tyrannodrone in back. He then throws a side kick the one in the left and does a cork screw over the one in the right and kicks it in the back before landing. “Heh. Cake.”
Meanwhile Kira, Conner and Ethan are fighting back to back. “Man have you ever seen so many tyrannodrones at once before?” Conner asks them.
“No but then again we are with the best right now.” Kira responds.
“She’s right Conner we don’t have to worry too much.” Ethan says trying to ease his worries as well. A tyrannodrone tries to strike Ethan on his right but with his dino skin he blocks it with his forarm and then blocks the attempted kick to his leg with his shin. “Nice try dino breath.” Ethan punches him sending the tyrannodrone way back into two of Conners tyrannodrones.
Conner turns around and looks at Ethan, “thanks man.”
“No sweat.”
As Conner fights off the Tyrannodrones more seem to come. Now he’s surrounded by five tyrannodrones. “Hmm...” a tyrannodrone tries to slash him but Conner uses his super speed to get out of the way and the tyrannodrone slashes another tyrannodrone. “Try again.” the same tyrannodrone attempts another slash but again Conner speeds out of the way and he hits another tyrannodrone. “Try harder.” This time the tyrannodrone runs and tries to jump on Conner and it jumps onto another tyrannodrone and starts hacking away at the tyrannodrone it landed on not knowing what it was. As it gets a few hits on the other tyrannodrone it realizes it wasn’t Conner. “That’s three strikes you’re out.” Conner quickly kicks it in the head and senses another coming from behind and jumps, spins, and knees the last tyrannodrone in the head. Just as he gets ready to go help Kira a tyrannodrone hits him in the stomach and sends him to the ground. Carlos sees this and tries to go help Conner.
“Conner hold on I’m coming.” Carlos starts to run towards him and jump side kicks a tyrannodrone. But before he lands another tyrannodrone grabs his leg and uses his momentum to send him flying and landing in front of Conner. Andros is distracted with what just happened with Carlos and is caught off guard by a tyrannodrone and sent flying into a tree. Kira and Ethan run over to where Conner and Carlos were and sees if they’re ok. “Yeah we’re fine. Watch out behind you.” A tyrannodrone nails Ethan in the back of the head and Kira turns around to do another sonic scream but is cut off as a tyrannodrone kicks her in the mid-section.
“Kira! I’m coming.” Brandon immediatly runs over to Kira to see if she’s ok. As he runs a tyrannodrone tries to trip him but he flips over it and drop kicks it in the back.. “Are you ok?”
Kira looks him in the eyes, “Yeah I’m fine thanks.” Tommy gets over to the other rangers with Andros by his side.
“There’s too many of them. We have to morph.” Tommy says to the others.
“Yeah I’m defiantly behind you on that one.” Andros helps the other rangers up with Tommy.
“Then lets go.” The rangers get their morphers ready and call out their phrases.
“DINO THUNDER POWER UP!”
“LETS ROCKET!”
“IT’S MORPHIN’ TIME!”
After they all morph they call out, “POWER RANGERS!” They all summon their weapons and take to the field. They almost defeat all of the tyrannodrones until a barrage of lightening bolts and laser arrows strike down the rangers.
“Whoa! What was that?” Conner cries out.
“That would be us.” Bushidakai says while him, Zeltrax, and the White Dino Ranger walk towards them.
“Aww Man. Just when you think things couldn’t get any worse.” Tommy says while trying to get up.
“My master wishes me to destroy you, and destroy you I shall.” Says Bushidakai sending more lighting bolts at them.
“Tommy I’ve got this guy.” Brandon begins to charge at him.
Trying to stop Brandon from going Tommy shouts for him to wait up. “Brandon! No let me help you.”
“Nah I’m good help the others. AIYAAHHH!” Brandon jumps and does a flying side kick and makes contact with Bushidakai, but Bushidakia only stumbles back a few feet. “Hmm... ok try this on then. He goes to slash him with his Dragon Dagger but Bushidakai manages to dodge them and knee him in the gut. And threw him into a tree.
Trent runs over to Bushidakai and grabs him. “This ranger is mine. You can have the others.”
“If you wish. My mission is to destroy the rangers. There are more.” Bushidakai goes off to the other rangers.
“Now. We finish where we left off. Laser arrow go!” Trent sends a barrage of arrows towards Brandon again. This time Trent uses his speed to prevent Brandon from using his Dragon Dagger to activate his shield and the arrows hit.
Brandon stumbles back onto his feet, “Lucky shot. That wont happen again.”He picks the Dragon Dagger and charges at Trent and Trent does the same. They cross swords and Trent says to Brandon.
“This time will not be a repeat of the last. This time I will destroy you one way or another. The Green Ranger will be destroyed yet again and this time will remain gone forever. This all ends today!!!” Trent pushes their hands up and slashes Brandon’s chest twice sending sparks flying everywhere sending Brandon into a populated area of the park. Getting aggravate Brandon lets his emotions get the best of him.
“Andros I need to go help Brandon. I don’t think he can handle the battle with Bushidakai. He’s too worn from the battle with the tyrannodrones.” Tommy says to Andros while fighting off a tyrannodrone.
Andros looks towards Tommy and sees Bushidakai coming at them. “I don’t think that’s going to be a problem Tommy cause here comes Bushidakai.” Just as Andros says that Bushidakai throws electric bolts at them hitting them. Andros gets fed up and activates his battle armor. He takes off into the sky and aims his missiles at Bushidakai. “Tommy go help Brandon I’ll take this guy. Don’t worry.”
Tommy turns his Brachio Staff to Fire mode and prepares to activate it. Andros zeros in on Bushidakai, “Missiles fir!!” As the missiles make their way to Bushidakai, Bushidakai waves his hands and sends the missiles towards Tommy. Tommy sees the missiles coming towards him but can’t react in time to dodge the missiles. And they hit him. The fallen legend tries to get up but can’t because Bushidakai has his foot on his chest. While all this is going on Conner and Ethan are fighting Zeltrax. Ethan has his Tricera shiel and his Thunder max saber.
“After I finish you two off I will kill your teacher.” Zeltrax says while crossing swords with Ethan.
“Dude. What is with you and your unhealthy fixation on Dr.O? That’s just creepy.” Ethan says to Zeltrax after using his Tricerashield to hit Zeltrax’s sword up and slashing him on the chest twice sending sparks flying off his chest.
“Yeah man. They have doctors for that. They’re called shrinks.” Conner uses his TryrannoStaff as a pole vault and does a flying side kick into Zeltrax sending him back three feet. “Carlos how are you holding up over there?” Conner cries out to Carlos who is taking on a bunch of tyrannodrones.
“I can use a little help over here. But other than that I’m holding up great.”
“Where’d Kira go? I thought she was helping you out?” Conner says giving Zeltrax a spinning hook kick to the hand holding the sword then a round kick to the side. Then Ethan uses the Tricera shield to sweep the feet out from under him.
“I think she went to go help Brandon. Trent’s got Brandon so.” Carlos uses his Lunar Staff and takes out four tyrannodrones. “EEEYAAAHH!!”
“Brachio Staff. FIRE MODE ACTIVATE.” Tommy strikes his Brachio Staff on the ground opening up the ground to swallow up Bushidakai but Bushidakai jumps into the air and glides back behind Tommy but Tommy reacts fast and did a jumping spinng back kick and then slashes him with his Brachio Staff. “Ceet KIA! ENERGY ORB ACTIVATE!!!” The energy orb ungulfs Bushidakai and injures him bad.
Andros forms his Mega Blaster and shoots Bushidakai with with and defeats him but does not destroy him. “You have not defeated me yet rangers. I will be back and you all shall perish at my hands.” and he falls
“And if you are. We’ll be waiting for you.” Tommy sheathes his Brachio Staff.
“Guys I can use a little help here!” Carlos is surrounded by at least eighteen tyrannodrones and can not fend them off by himself. The tyrannodrones are piling on top of each other while Carlos is trying to fight them off.
“We’re coming!” Andros tells Carlos.
“Are yo ready to die Green Ranger?” Trent has Brandon on his stomach and puts him in a head lock while on his back.
Laughing Brandon says, “The sun’s not setting on this Green Ranger today.” Brandon bumps Trent up a little so that both his hands land on the ground and he traps his right hand and rolls Trent onto his back. Brandon does a somersault and jumps up and spins and throws an energy orb at Trent but Trent does a back handspring and dodges the energy orb hitting a picnic table and explodes injuring a few civilians. As he lands he faces the direction Trent was and realizes what just happened. “Oh no. What did I just do?” He pauses and looks at his hands as if they were covered with blood.
While this happens Kira is running towards the area Brandon and Trent are fighting. As she approaches she sees the energy orb explode hurting a few civilians.
“OH MY GOD! What just happened?” Kira says frantically she sprints over to Brandon and Trent to see Trent side kick Brandon in the mid-section causing him to fall to his knees and demorphs.
“You know the original Green Ranger never would’ve cared what happened to innocent people unlike you. You’re compassion makes you weak. Without that you would’ve made a formidable opponent.”
The only thing Brandon could say was, “How could I have let that happen?” Still in civilian form Brandon he drops his hands to his side and just kneels there.
Trent runs his White Drago sword along Brandon’s chin, “Pathetic. Look at you. You look like you’ve given up all hope. I’m going to enjoy finishing you off.” He raises his sword and swiftly brings it down towards Brandon’s neck.
“NOOOOO!!!” Kira runs and jumps towards Trent and slices him across his chest with her Terragrips sending sparks flying and Trent back.
“Aww how cute. The Yellow Ranger to the rescue. There’s been a little change in plans.” He says with his back towards them, “ I’m gonna let you live with the fact that you almost killed a handful of civilians let it eat you up inside.” He begins to walk away and pauses for a second and turns his head towards the. “Suddenly being a ranger isn’t such a fun game any more is it.” Trent leaps away.

[it's time for a gold rush]

this is a good story and all man but can I give you some suggestions.

1. put what chapter it is over the chapter so the reader want get confused about what part they are reading.

2. Look at other fanfics on the board so you will know how to better organize and structure your sentences and paragraphs.

I mean don't get me wrong what you have written is good but you have everything jumbled together and it either makes the reader not want to read it or it will make the reader loose interest in what you have written.

Other than that I don't see anything wrong with what you have now. and like I said before good luck with your fanfic and I'll be waiting for another chapter soon.

[dam_it]

Just read your fanfic. Sounded good for a second until you mentioned the power coin. Tommy's double has the power coin in the past. I dont think he went swimming done in the ocean just to put it there.

[it's time for a gold rush]

Just read your fanfic. Sounded good for a second until you mentioned the power coin. Tommy's double has the power coin in the past. I dont think he went swimming done in the ocean just to put it there.

him having the coin in the past wasn't really proven was it. just because he still had magical powers in the past doesn't really mean he still had the power coin, it could mean that some of the power from the wizard of deception was still apart of him. as far as we know the power coin went inside of the wizards wand when tommy took away his clones green ranger power.

[GR Dragonzord]

Just read your fanfic. Sounded good for a second until you mentioned the power coin. Tommy's double has the power coin in the past. I dont think he went swimming done in the ocean just to put it there.

Well think of it this way. It its in the past. It can exist in the future and in the present. It's in time. Just like if u bury a box in the past and come back 100 years later it would still be there. Like the dinosaur fossils. :D :cool: