PR/Smallville Crossover Story.

[JPHBK]

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[Crystal Ranger]

LOVED IT! You combined two of my five favorite shows on TV this season.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
LOVED IT! You combined two of my five favorite shows on TV this season.


Thanks. I love both shows as well, that is why I had to do a crossover. :)

[White_Knight]

Awesome.....I mean Morphenominal.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Great!!! Another great fic you have in your hands my friend.

[JPHBK]

Thanks for the reviews. I am currently working on the next chapter, but I am unsure when it will be done, hopefully soon.

[Qi]

Not bad.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by QiRanger
Not bad.


Thanks. I am trying to make the coming chapters better. I always feel that my first chapters are usually the worst in the series, because I have to kinda fill in holes and set the tone, in which case I struggle with a little.

[Qi]

No prblem. Keep it up.

[it's time for a gold rush]

good job keep it up

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by it's time for a gold rush
good job keep it up


Thanks, I am as I type working on chapter 2.

[Mythical Master]

Jason was an interesting choice to use in the crossover although the assumption of the other rangers showing up is in my head but I am not going to come out and ask it. I will just assume a crossover means the entire team in some way. It was good. Definitely "Wall of Weird" material for Chole.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Mythical Master
Jason was an interesting choice to use in the crossover although the assumption of the other rangers showing up is in my head but I am not going to come out and ask it. I will just assume a crossover means the entire team in some way. It was good. Definitely "Wall of Weird" material for Chole.




Yeah, Chloe will eventually have a field day with all of the goings on no doubt.

Jason has been the focal character in all of my stories to some degree, they all start out with him, although others do eventually show up. As to this one, well I will probably not buck my own trend. :).

[JPHBK]

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[it's time for a gold rush]

another good chapter I can't wait until jason finds out about clarks powers and vice versa. keep up the good work.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by it's time for a gold rush
another good chapter I can't wait until jason finds out about clarks powers and vice versa. keep up the good work.


Thanks for reviewing again. You might be jumping the gun on that assumption and then again you might not, I won't say.

[Qi]

Definitely enertaining, but two thoughts...

First in your long dialog series, you switched scenes - it might be helpful to put a scene break (* * *) to help readers.

Secondly, Jason's comment, "Clark is probably at the house, last I heard there was a family discussion about money, or lack thereof," seemed a bit out of character. Since he went to the barn to practice and avoid bringing up the subject matter with them, I doubt he'd mention it so easily to Lana.

Otehrwise, great - I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by QiRanger
Definitely enertaining, but two thoughts...

First in your long dialog series, you switched scenes - it might be helpful to put a scene break (* * *) to help readers.

Secondly, Jason's comment, "Clark is probably at the house, last I heard there was a family discussion about money, or lack thereof," seemed a bit out of character. Since he went to the barn to practice and avoid bringing up the subject matter with them, I doubt he'd mention it so easily to Lana.

Otehrwise, great - I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



On the first part, I thought about doing that but I wasn't sure what to use to signify a break, but I will use your suggestion.

Secondly, you do bring up a good point, and I will reword that right now. Thanks, when you are writing these things you don't notice as much as when you are reading them. It is funny when I reread it, I realized I left out something anyway in that scene, so It is completely rewritten, that scene.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Great episode! Can't wait for the next one :D .

[JPHBK]

Thanks Chaos. It is always nice to see your reviews.

[Crystal Ranger]

Another great chapther you have written. Can't wait to see more. you ahve a nack for these series crossovers.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
Another great chapther you have written. Can't wait to see more. you ahve a nack for these series crossovers.



Thank you very much.

[Blue Diamond Ranger]

wow, thats some great writing
keep it up

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Blue Diamond Ranger
wow, thats some great writing
keep it up


Thanks, I am working on the next chapter now.

[JPHBK]

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[Qi]

Good job.

[it's time for a gold rush]

good chapter

[Crystal Ranger]

Another great master piece. Can't wait to see Cahpther 4 or the last of it in general for that matter.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
Another great master piece. Can't wait to see Cahpther 4 or the last of it in general for that matter.



Thanks, and I will try my best to have a good ending to the story. I struggle with endings sometimes, but they come out ok, I guess.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Great episode JPHBK! You've fixed some minor problems you had. Great job!

[JPHBK]

Just a small update, I am not sure when I will be posting the next chapter, I haven't began writing on it just yet. This being the Easter weekend, it has been pretty hectic. I plan to start writing tonight or tomorrow at the latest.


Thanks Chaos. I went over that chapter and redid it several times, every time I would read it to myself it just seemed rushed so I tried to fix that.

[White_Knight]

keep up the awesome work. I would love to see some Dinozord Power in this or one of your stories though.

You have a real talent, my friend.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by White_Knight
keep up the awesome work. I would love to see some Dinozord Power in this or one of your stories though.

You have a real talent, my friend.


Thanks for the compliment.

Also, I am toying with that idea. I am thinking about using the Zords in this story, it is just a matter of finding a place for them, and making them fit the story.

[Mythical Master]

Chapter three was awesome!

[shazamgurl]

PLEASE say you are working on more of this story. I find it very interesting. I can just picture all of this happening in my head.


Oh! and I am assuming that when Jason morphed in the cornfield that Clark was not using his superhuman hearing at the time. Otherwise he would have heard what Jason said!!

Keep up the good work.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by shazamgurl
PLEASE say you are working on more of this story. I find it very interesting. I can just picture all of this happening in my head.


Oh! and I am assuming that when Jason morphed in the cornfield that Clark was not using his superhuman hearing at the time. Otherwise he would have heard what Jason said!!

Keep up the good work.


No Clark wasn't using it either time. The next chapter is almost done.

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[Crystal Ranger]

Awesome, that the only way to discribe it. Loved the ending.

[it's time for a gold rush]

another great chapter, 2 things though will kimberly come to smallville to visit jason and since you are using the theme of werewolves attacking jason will you do a crossover within a crossover and have angel come join the battle.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Lovely! This was a great chapter. Having Angel show up would be interesting, but knowing JPHBK I'm not sure there's much of a chance for that to happen.

Anywho, like I've said before JP, you are one of my favorite writers. Keep it up.

[JPHBK]

Thanks for the reviews.

To answer your questions,


First, as far as Kim showing up, or any of the other Rangers, all I will say is :D

Second, don't count on Angel being in this one. Although never count out another Angel crossover in the future.

Also as far as the werewolves, their origin will be explained next chapter. I will say this, they aren't your typical "werewolf".

[it's time for a gold rush]

Originally posted by JPHBK

Also as far as the werewolves, their origin will be explained next chapter. I will say this, they aren't your typical "werewolf".

I think I know were you are going with this one, I'll keep my thoughts about this to myself for now.

[Mythical Master]

Good chapter

[LivesByTheSword]

I liked it all so far.. Greatness..

[JPHBK]

Thanks again for the reviews and I will begin on the next chapter probably this evening so, it should be up in a couple of days.

[zeoranger0black]

Can you made a Punisher/Pr crossover i have a good line think in the movie
-I don`t like super hoeres red boy

[LivesByTheSword]

Punisher is garbage though..

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by zeoranger0black
Can you made a Punisher/Pr crossover i have a good line think in the movie
-I don`t like super hoeres red boy



I am not real familar with the Punisher, so I can't really write a story with him.

[zeoranger0black]

A smallvile crossover was good, but i want to see more super heorres, and so as de white dragon ranger

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Originally posted by zeoranger0black
A smallvile crossover was good, but i want to see more super heorres, and so as de white dragon ranger

Here you go :p

http://img44.photobucket.com/albums/v134/sosa241/Tommy-White-Dragon.jpg

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Chaos Son of SoS
Here you go :p

http://img44.photobucket.com/albums/v134/sosa241/Tommy-White-Dragon.jpg



I love that pic, it conveys perfectly what I wanted the White Dragon Ranger to look like.


I am halfway through the next chapter, I am hoping to have it up before the weekend is over. I am currently having a touch of writer's block, but I think I can work through it.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Thanks JPHBK. When ever you need another fused character let me know. I'll make it. :)

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[White_Knight]

I am luvvin this so much.

[shazamgurl]

Great chapter!

One thing though. At the Talon, you had written that Clark would see Chloe or Lana tomorrow at school but then back at the Kent farm Martha asked Jonathan to talk to Clark tomorrow because it was a Saturday and he would not be running off to school.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by shazamgurl
Great chapter!

One thing though. At the Talon, you had written that Clark would see Chloe or Lana tomorrow at school but then back at the Kent farm Martha asked Jonathan to talk to Clark tomorrow because it was a Saturday and he would not be running off to school.


Thanks I fixed it. It was one of those cases of ideas merging and little details getting overlooked. Thanks, I always appreciate it when people help me with things I might not normally notice.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Another great chapter. There's no problem for me to disect in this chapter :). Keep it up man.

[jediranger]

This is pretty good. Just one thing I'm a little confused about. At the end of the last chapter, when it said another beam of light showed up, but this one a mixture of green and white, which color is Tommy. Or when Tommy was the green ranger, was his beam green-white. It's been to long.

[White_Knight]

I think Tommy'c coins were merged in the Angel crossover, so he holds the power of both the white and green rangers, The White Dragon Ranger.

There is a pic of him near the top of this page.

[it's time for a gold rush]

good chapter.

[Mythical Master]

Great Chapter

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by jediranger
This is pretty good. Just one thing I'm a little confused about. At the end of the last chapter, when it said another beam of light showed up, but this one a mixture of green and white, which color is Tommy. Or when Tommy was the green ranger, was his beam green-white. It's been to long.


Yeah, exactly what White_Knight said (Thanks WK). He is now the White Dragon Ranger. This was why I linked my previous stories at the beginning of this one, cause they are in continuity with one another. It's alright though, I don't mind answering questions. :)

[JPHBK]

Thanks for all of the reviews as well, I appreciate it. This story has been my most challenging to write for some reason, so it feels good for me to logon and find the good reviews, it is very gratifying.

[Qi]

Well, it's easy to leave feedback whe the stroy and the writing is so good. Keep it up.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Originally posted by QiRanger
Well, it's easy to leave feedback whe the stroy and the writing is so good. Keep it up.

Ditto.

[White_Knight]

what he said *points upwards*

[ranger fan 9000]

great stroy i love it

[jediranger]

All right, I read your other two stories and everything makes sense now. Pretty good idea with how they got there powers back. Won't say how in case someone hasn't read it yet.

[Joravenel]

I am loving this story. Thats all for now. Want more and soon. Please keep it coming.

[JPHBK]

Thanks for all the positive reviews for chapter 5. I am about 75% through with Chapter 6, and expect to have it up either tomorrow or Thursday.

[JPHBK]

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[it's time for a gold rush]

your story is only getting better and better keep it up.

[Mythical Master]

Great Chapter! It was awesome. I loved how you are bringing the Dino Thunder series into it. How will you explain Tommy going from his White Dragon Powers to the Black DinoThunder Ones? It seems that would be hard to explain.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Mythical Master
Great Chapter! It was awesome. I loved how you are bringing the Dino Thunder series into it. How will you explain Tommy going from his White Dragon Powers to the Black DinoThunder Ones? It seems that would be hard to explain.




It will be explained later in the story.

Thanks again for the reviews.

[Mythical Master]

I just skimmed through the two stories that precede this one. I am not a big fan of Buffy and Angel but I do have a fascination for vampires. That is why I didn't really read them. Also I was low on time. Class starts in 20 minutes. Anyway they look from what I read to be good stories.

[JPHBK]

It's ok Mythical. I have had mostly different reviewers on this and the other two stories. Although the first one wasn't a crossover of anything.

[Joravenel]

great chapter. Can not wait for more. Thats all for now.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Great work. One thing:

Clark said referring to his tattered, torn, and burnt clothes.

If his clothes are torn and burnt, why was his jacket still intact? That confused me a bit.

Besides that great chapter. You know I gotta show off your work to the other forums I hang out.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Chaos Son of SoS
Great work. One thing:



If his clothes are torn and burnt, why was his jacket still intact? That confused me a bit.

Besides that great chapter. You know I gotta show off your work to the other forums I hang out.



His jacket was worse for wear but the pockets were still intact. Most of the attacks hit him in the chest therefore his shirt was the worst off of his clothes.


I added a little more dialogue on the subject at the end of the story.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Cool. The added dialogue adds so much to that 'episode'. It really feels like a two part episode. Great job. Now onto the next episode ;) :p

[Mythical Master]

Here is something I realized when reading this fanfic. One, when doing crossovers with shows that are complete opposites in so many ways you need to decide which show is on which show. What this means is make the story follow elements of one of the two shows in the story. Include elements of the other show, yes, that is a must or it wouldn't be a true crossover but make it one over the other. This is what JPHBK is doing with PR/Smallville. It is more of a Smallville episode than a Power Rangers story because of maybe its setting or something. Anyway when reading it I don't see a story that is PR and Smallville. I see a story that is Smallville and has some PR elements in it. I wish I could say that my He-Man/Power Rangers crossover follows this advise but it doesn't completely but there are exceptions to the rules and maybe mine are one of them.

So, anyone out there who wants to write a crossover remember this advise:

Make it one show and contain elements of the other instead of mixing it with two many elements at the same time.

Thank-you

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Mythical Master
Here is something I realized when reading this fanfic. One, when doing crossovers with shows that are complete opposites in so many ways you need to decide which show is on which show. What this means is make the story follow elements of one of the two shows in the story. Include elements of the other show, yes, that is a must or it wouldn't be a true crossover but make it one over the other. This is what JPHBK is doing with PR/Smallville. It is more of a Smallville episode than a Power Rangers story because of maybe its setting or something. Anyway when reading it I don't see a story that is PR and Smallville. I see a story that is Smallville and has some PR elements in it. I wish I could say that my He-Man/Power Rangers crossover follows this advise but it doesn't completely but there are exceptions to the rules and maybe mine are one of them.

So, anyone out there who wants to write a crossover remember this advise:

Make it one show and contain elements of the other instead of mixing it with two many elements at the same time.

Thank-you


I agree with that assesment. I did intend it to be a Smallville based story with PR elements.

[Mythical Master]

This is why my story is an exception. (I just came up with this too.) My story has two settings. The PR/Smallville crossover you are writing has one. There I said it.

[JPHBK]

I am currently working on the next chapter which I hope to have up by weekend. In it the Main villian of the story will be introduced.

[JPHBK]

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[Blue Diamond Ranger]

excellent, cant wait for more

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Excellent chapter! Keep up the good work JP!

[it's time for a gold rush]

Originally posted by Chaos Son of SoS
Excellent chapter! Keep up the good work JP!

what he said

[Qi]

Good Chapter, but I would change the opening paragraph to refelct the two aspects of it...

Jason awoke the next morning, sore as usual. He looked to see that it was almost eight AM. He hadn't finally gotten to sleep until about four so he hadn't much sleep but he had to get to the Talon. Jason got dressed and left his room to notice that no one was stirring, it appeared he was the first one awake. He went down the stairs and out to his car, he got in and started the engine and took off.

Approximately a few seconds later there was a bright flash of light in the woods beside of the Kent's property. In the opening Clark had battled the Rangers the night before now sat a spacecraft. The door came open and out stepped a alien, big in stature, and covered in black armor. He stepped foot on the ground and looked around. He knew what his mission was and he was here to destroy the one known as Kal-El. He walked off into the woods, going in the opposite direction of the Kent's house.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by QiRanger
Good Chapter, but I would change the opening paragraph to refelct the two aspects of it...



That was a good idea, so I changed it. Thanks for the tip.

[Bionic Red]

In chapter 6, you mentioned the word 'Kryptonite.' Kryptonite was not officially named in the Smallville series, as far as I know! We all know that it's Kryptonite, but the word should not even be used...ever!

Just something small you overlooked.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Bionic Red
In chapter 6, you mentioned the word 'Kryptonite.' Kryptonite was not officially named in the Smallville series, as far as I know! We all know that it's Kryptonite, but the word should not even be used...ever!

Just something small you overlooked.



You know I am almost positive it has been mentioned but you could very well be right though. Just to be safe I am changing all mention of the Kryptonite.

Once again thanks for the heads up.

[Crystal Ranger]

You know I am almost positive it has been mentioned but you could very well be right though. Just to be safe I am changing all mention of the Kryptonite.

Yes they have. Clark, Pete, and his parents have used it since they discovered the caves and since Clark talked to Dr. Swan in season two.

Also, great chapter, keep it up.

[JPHBK]

Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
Yes they have. Clark, Pete, and his parents have used it since they discovered the caves and since Clark talked to Dr. Swan in season two.

Also, great chapter, keep it up.



I thought I had heard them say it. Oh well I changed it now. I will keep it in mind for the future though.

Thanks for the review as well.

[Mythical Master]

Great Chapter. Keep up the good work.

[JPHBK]

Thanks again for the reviews.


Also a update. I have yet to begin work on the next chapter, and I probably won't have time today, so I will probably start on it tomorrow. So look for it sometime early to mid next week.

Sorry for the longer then usual delay between stories. I have the next chapter planned and mapped out it is just a matter of having time to write it. Thanks for your patience.

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[Qi]

Nice Job

[Joravenel]

I agree. Please keep it up. I wonder what will happen in Round 2. Thats all for now.

[Mythical Master]

If the whole idea wasn't completely impossible I would recommend that you do a Superman/PR team-up set up a few years down the road. This time make it a PR story with Superman elements. Have Lex Luthor evil and causing some kind of trouble in Angel Grove and have Superman show up to help the Power Rangers and then at some point have them discover that Clark is Superman and they at some point sit down and remember their little adventures they had in "Smallville." Just an idea. And it ain't that impossible. Clark is a High School Junior, he will be a Senior next season. Then a Freshmen in College. And three years to that and two years for traveling and another two years working for Smallville's paper before getting a job at the planet and you have yourself a time setting of 9 years from now. Hey, it is just an idea.

[JPHBK]

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[it's time for a gold rush]

another awesome chapter.

[Joravenel]

I so agree. Can not wait for more and soon. Thats all for now.

[JPHBK]

Update: I am going to begin work on the next chapter, hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback on the last one.


Also I want to thank everyone for the fanfic of the month nominations. I really appreciate it.

[bjlovel]

This is Awesome.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Man, its been a while since I've gotten on the computer.

Great chapters man. I really like the direction the story is taking. Keep up the good work.

[Lord ZEDD]

Great fanfic I just recently started reading your fics and I love em. I like your crossovers the best the Angel one was great but this one is even better so far. Cant wait for Tommy's fight with the Bounty hunter I'm betting your planning to have him crush his coin that way he becomes powerless and then leads to PRDT as Black Ranger.

[Mythical Master]

Am I wrong or will this story in with 10 chapters?

[JPHBK]

Am I wrong or will this story in with 10 chapters?


The story will not be ending in 10 chapters. (If that is what you asked).


Also thanks for all of the new reviews. I am going to try and start on the next chapter today. I was under the weather yesterday, and still am today, but I will try it nonetheless.

[White_Knight]

dedication to the cause.

[JPHBK]

dedication to the cause.


Yeah, I do hope to get started on it soon, while the story is fresh in my head. Here's hoping. :)

[Mythical Master]

The story will not be ending in 10 chapters. (If that is what you asked).


Also thanks for all of the new reviews. I am going to try and start on the next chapter today. I was under the weather yesterday, and still am today, but I will try it nonetheless.

Yes, that is what I was asking. because it seemed like you could have wrapped it all up in just one more chapter. This is just my opinion after briefly reading chapter 9. I was in a rush and didn't want to miss class. I got up late too. I will go back and really read it now.

[JPHBK]

Man, its been a while since I've gotten on the computer.

Great chapters man. I really like the direction the story is taking. Keep up the good work.



Nice to see your reviews again. I was beginning to worry. :)

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Am I wrong or will this story in with 10 chapters?

I think the story is going to be 15 chapter or a lil' more. :)

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Nice to see your reviews again. I was beginning to worry. :)

I been working like a mule lately, too tired to get on the computer when I get home. I'm taking it easy now, so you'll see more of my crippling reviews. :p

[JPHBK]

I think the story is going to be 15 chapter or a lil' more. :)


You would be about right. My goal is 15 chapters. Give or take a couple of chapters.


Update: I am halfway through the next chapter. I am still a little under the weather today, but I do plan on finishing it today and having it up later.

[JPHBK]

Great fanfic I just recently started reading your fics and I love em. I like your crossovers the best the Angel one was great but this one is even better so far. Cant wait for Tommy's fight with the Bounty hunter I'm betting your planning to have him crush his coin that way he becomes powerless and then leads to PRDT as Black Ranger.



Thanks for reading and liking my other stories. It is always nice to hear from a new reader. I appreciate the review.

Also on your theory about Tommy, I won't say one way or another. :D

[Mythical Master]

What's next? A team up with the Charmed Ones? Well first Angel then Smallville, it would make since then you could do Seventh Heaven and Gilmore Girls (boy would that be a hoot) and then Everwood and One Tree Hill. Heck why don't you even try one with the Comedy Reva? Do you get where I am going with this?

[JPHBK]

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[Blue Diamond Ranger]

What's next? A team up with the Charmed Ones? Well first Angel then Smallville, it would make since then you could do Seventh Heaven and Gilmore Girls (boy would that be a hoot) and then Everwood and One Tree Hill. Heck why don't you even try one with the Comedy Reva? Do you get where I am going with this?


What the hell is your problem, the Angel and Smallville crossovers are amazing

[Mythical Master]

What the hell is your problem, the Angel and Smallville crossovers are amazing
Where do you get the idea I have a problem? I was only making a joke. I happen to like the Smallville crossover a lot because I am a big fan of the program. I am not that much of a fan of Angel but I have seen some of it. I really was only making a joke. The writer knows how I feel about the story I am sure he or she isn't that offended and if he or she was he or she would let me know. I don't have a problem I just saw a pattern developing with teaming up Power Rangers with WB programs. There is nothing wrong with that. Perhaps I did go about it the wrong way but that is besides the point.

[Mythical Master]

No not really, and am I sensing some hostility? If so, any perticular reason why?
I apologize but you prove my point to the other person that question my motives. I have no reason whatsoever to be hostile. Like I said before, I saw a pattern and made a comment. I meant it to be nothing more than a joke. I apologize if it was taken otherwise.

[JPHBK]

I apologize but you prove my point to the other person that question my motives. I have no reason whatsoever to be hostile. Like I said before, I saw a pattern and made a comment. I meant it to be nothing more than a joke. I apologize if it was taken otherwise.


No need to apolpgize. I was just afraid I had upset you. I

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[Joravenel]

The dino gems!!! I hope Tommy's powers are not going away. I hope Lex does not find out about the rangers. Thats all for now.

[JPHBK]

The dino gems!!! I hope Tommy's powers are not going away. I hope Lex does not find out about the rangers. Thats all for now.


With me you never know, I sometimes don't go the route you expect. :D

[it's time for a gold rush]

the dino gems do I smell a teamup ?

[Crystal Ranger]

Either way it was a killer chapther. :)

[Lord ZEDD]

Wow great chapter I wonder what draining Tommy hey I geuss I couldn't predict you afterall good way to keep me guessing. I'm glad your adding in some Dino Thunder stuff but hopefully you get Kat and Tommy back together in anther fic I always liked that relationship despite that many others love the Tommy Kim relationship. Anyway great job again.

[jediranger]

Good job with this fic. It is really getting good espically since the dino gems are coming into play. Oh, I know that one guy was just kidding, but a Charmed crossover wouldn't be to bad.

[bjlovel]

This is great. Especially now that the Dino Gems are mentioned, but if it is his first day then that must mean that he won't be able to help out Jason because he will be working with other rangers.

[JPHBK]

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[Chaos Son of SoS]

Damn it! You messed up the story, it was pretty good. I'm dissapointed. :p

Great job on another amazing chapter. Nice twist with the gems. I sort of knew you would incorporate DT into the story :). I've gotten a hang of your writing/storytelling style.

[Mythical Master]

Chapter 10 was excellent. And I accept your apology too. I really do like how this story is going but be careful. Remember what I said earlier about making it filled with elements from both shows. You are right now following my advice at making all Power Ranger elements in a PR setting but remember don't put Smallville elements in the PR setting unless one or more of the Smallville characters shows up there. I would be more specific in naming the PR setting I just can't at this moment remember the setting for DinoThunder. You don't want to cram too many elements of one progam into a setting of the other.

[JPHBK]

Chapter 10 was excellent. And I accept your apology too. I really do like how this story is going but be careful. Remember what I said earlier about making it filled with elements from both shows. You are right now following my advice at making all Power Ranger elements in a PR setting but remember don't put Smallville elements in the PR setting unless one or more of the Smallville characters shows up there. I would be more specific in naming the PR setting I just can't at this moment remember the setting for DinoThunder. You don't want to cram too many elements of one progam into a setting of the other.



Not to worry. The story is still a Smallville story at heart. It just so happens it is in a certain timeline, and as such the DT element had to be discussed and explored somewhat.

[RangerSinceForever]

Can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!

[JPHBK]

Can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!



Thanks for the review and compliment.

I am unsure when the next chapter will be up hopefully before the week is over. I plan to begin work on it either this evening or tomorrow.

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[Blue Diamond Ranger]

this is getting great

[Qi]

Great Job!

[it's time for a gold rush]

good job

[Crystal Ranger]

I loved this chapther.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Perfect!

[Lord ZEDD]

Hehe you got me worried that you were going to kill off Trini there for a second. Good chapter cant wait for the next one.

[RangerSinceForever]

Ohhh, the mystery--who can stop Crahn? Clark Kent--or the Dino Gems? But who can access the power of the Gems?

So great. Wonderful work, keep it up.

[Mythical Master]

Great chapter as always.

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[bjlovel]

This is awesome. Can't wait for more

[Apollo]

strangly enough these weird crossovers actually work and i am enjoying them.

[it's time for a gold rush]

Thanks for all of the great reviews. It does a writer good to know his work is appreciated and liked.

to bad nobody likes mine :(

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another good chapter.

[Mythical Master]

Great Chapter as always but please confirm that Jason won't be morphing in front of Lex. There isn't any reason for him to know is there?

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[Crystal Ranger]

Awesome!

More, I need more!!!

[bjlovel]

Great, can't wait for more.

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[Mythical Master]

Great story! I loved It! If you will once you finish posting all the chapter, email me all the chapters. I would really like to have a personal copy of it once it is finished.

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[foreverhunter]

I don't know if I've given feedback to you, but if not then here ya go. Your story is seriously good. It's believable, something I can imagine seeing on tv. Keep it up.


FH

[Qi]

Great Job. I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap things up.

[bjlovel]

This is great. Can't wait for more.

[Blue Diamond Ranger]

I'll say it again, Incredible

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[Crystal Ranger]

Great chapther, I can't wait to see more.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

It feels like I havent been here in years....

Great job man on all those chapters. You are still one of my favorite writers here, I knew you weren't going to dissapoint me :p. Keep up the fantastic job you've been doing.

What other projects do you have planned?

[Lord ZEDD]

Awsome this one of the best crossover stories I ever read and most of the time I dont like crossover stories.

[it's time for a gold rush]

awesome story I can't wait for more.

[foreverhunter]

Thanks for all of the reviews guys. Once again I can't say enough how much I appreciate it.

The story should be coming to a close in the next couple of chapters, my goal was 15 chapters and things are progressing to where it appears 15 will be enough.


foreverhunter: Thanks for the new review, it is always nice to see a review from a new reader. Thanks for the comment about it being believable enough to be on tv. In some ways I think that is really the ultimate compliment.


I'm just saying what's true. I can't say I see a lot of great fics here, not that I'm some expert. I think anyone who reads a fic should send a review out of courtesy. I wish people felt that way about my own turbo story. lol I guess it hasn't really caught on much, but hopefully that'll change soon when I get back to writing it this weekend (hopefully). I was working 2 jobs this week and quit one of them because I had no time for a life or writing or SLEEP.

Anyway, just read your latest chapter; and wow, serious drama action. Let the blood bath comence.


FH

[bjlovel]

This is great. Can't wait to read more.

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[Mythical Master]

Great chapter as always. Can't wait for the finalle.

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[Poweranimals]

I read the first two chapters for some reason. I don't like fanfics, but this is pretty cool so far.

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[bjlovel]

Awesome. Can't wait for the final chapter.

[Mythical Master]

Great chapter. I really hope you are considering a Superman/PR crossover that picks up where this leaves off if it does I mean.

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[Crystal Ranger]

Awesome. Although I have a feeling there may be a surprise twist since Lex and Lana found out about Clark's powers.

[PR4Eva]

I never thought I'd see the day when two of my favorite shows (Power Rangers and Smallville) would come together like this! :) :D

JPHBK, keep up the good work!

[JPHBK]

Awesome. Although I have a feeling there may be a surprise twist since Lex and Lana found out about Clark's powers.



That's a very astute deduction, Crystal.

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[it's time for a gold rush]

that was an excellent way to end the story. so what series do you have planned now that you are done with this one.

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also to let you know I'm not going to continue my fanfic. As a writer I always thought that if at least one person was reading it then my job as a writer was done. but since no one was reading it I decided to stop. I guess one day soon I will just put up some summarries of what happens in later chapters for it to finish up the fanfic. it's a shame no one liked it because I was going to do another fanfic based on the ending of mine. or maybe one day in the future I'll write again and post it on here or maybe I'll just go somewhere else.

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[it's time for a gold rush]

Good luck with whatever you decide to do with the fic Gold Rush. I enjoyed it, I just didn't get around to reviewing it enough, I apologize for that.

thanks, maybe soon I'll pick the fanfic back up again.

[bjlovel]

This was great. One of the best I have ever read.

[foreverhunter]

It's over. :(



Yet wonderful ending, especially with Lana. :p Clark did the right thing, not erasing her memory. Better to love and lost than never to love at all, right?

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[Chaos Son of SoS]

It's over. :(

Yet wonderful ending, especially with Lana. :p Clark did the right thing, not erasing her memory. Better to love and lost than never to love at all, right?

Ditto.
He said pretty much what I was going to say. Great fic JPHBK! Bravo! You better give me the heads up on your next fic :p

[Crystal Ranger]

Yeah, I kinda hate to see the story go as well, I enjoyed writing it but, I didn't want it to overstay it's welcome, besides I kinda left the door open for a sequel, just in case.

I figured as much with that ending. I'm also glad Clark didn't erase Lana's memory. Now we just have to wait for it to happen on the show. Great fanfic, possible one of the best I've read on Rangerboard.

[TTYO]

Nice fic you got there

Do visit my fanfic, Power Rangers Mammal Rumble

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[RangerSinceForever]

also to let you know I'm not going to continue my fanfic. As a writer I always thought that if at least one person was reading it then my job as a writer was done. but since no one was reading it I decided to stop. I guess one day soon I will just put up some summarries of what happens in later chapters for it to finish up the fanfic. it's a shame no one liked it because I was going to do another fanfic based on the ending of mine. or maybe one day in the future I'll write again and post it on here or maybe I'll just go somewhere else.


Dude, #1--don't take it so hard. Writing these stories is something that people go to school for years to learn how to do and get paid a lot to do it. It's not an easy thing by any stretch of the imagination. #2--If writing them makes you happy, then write. Who cares who's reading them or not reading them? Don't worry about what other people are thinking cause you know what--if they can't write one themselves, then they have no right to criticize. And if they can, well then, they should be working on that instead of tearing apart other people's work.

[RangerSinceForever]

And to the author, a truly grade A piece of work. Wonderful.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

I'd like to thank you for all of your reviews as well, and the compliment.
Ditto.

I hardly come on Rangerboard b/c I hardly have time and when I do I just check out the fics people I'm familiar with read. Don't stop writing/posting your fics. Just because people dont respond to your fic doesn't mean they're not reading it. Look at Bushwacka's fics, he was going to stop b/c of the same reason but he continued to post them b/c he knows there are alot of silent readers on this board. So don't stop posting your fic.


JPHBK: You welcome. You're fics are great, I've enjoyed all of them. Since the first one "Jason/Kim Story". Keep it up.

[Lord ZEDD]

Just finished reading it great fic I loved how you ended it just in case you decide to do a sequel. I hope you do anther fic soon or at least until your done with your break.

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EDIT: My bad on the quoting of the last chapter. I am unsure how that happened, I was trying to edit the last chapter, and that happened somehow, sorry about that.

[Crystal Ranger]

Maybe I've missed something, but why is the last chapther quoted with nothing under it or whatever?

[Mythical Master]

It was a great final chapter. But you knew I was going to say didn't you? Well I hope you do a Power Rangers/Superman crossover because I saw a sort of set-up in the last chapter with Lex asking to go to Angel Grove and of course there was a Mr. Luthor with the body of the villian (Can't remember the name).

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[RainbowRanger18]

Your crossovers are wonderfully AWESOME!! You should become a professional writer if you're not one. The way you put details into the stories is also totally awesome.

[sbb1513]

i think u really should do a sequal. that would b very cool.
~mag~

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