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Tommy Oliver's Wife
03-28-2004, 06:36 PM
*Opening Theme*
*Tommy and his wife Tasha are sitting in the living room talking when police officers barge in and grab Tommy.*
Tasha: What's going on?
Officer: This man has been sentenced to RMH. Reefside Mental Hospital.
Tasha: Tommy is by no means insane.
Tommy: Lemme go!
Tasha: Tommy doesn't belong in a mental istitution!
Officer: Madam this man is guilty of killing three families.
Tasha: No there has to be a mistake! Tommy would never hurt a fly!
Tommy: She's right! I never killed anybody!
Officer: That's what they all say.
*Then the officers take Tommy outside and to the RMH. Tasha then calls the other rangers and tells them to meet them in the lab A.S.A.P.*
Kira: What's going on? Where's Dr. O.
Tasha: That's why I called y'all here.
Conner: Is he okay? He's not hurt is he?
Tasha: No he's not hurt. This morning we were talking in the living room when a couple of officers came in and took him to the RMH.
Ethan: What's the RMH.
Tasha: Reefside Metal Hospital.
Kira: WHAT?! Dr. O. is anything but insane!
Tasha: Calm down Kira. That's what I told them. They said Tommy had killed three families.
Ethan: WHAT?! Dr. Oliver would never do a thing like that!
Tasha: Realx Ethan. I told them that as well. But they took him anyway.
Kira: Wait a minute. How can we be sure those guys were really officers? How can we be sure they don't work for Mesogog?
Tasha: I'm investifating that theory right now. We should have the results in just a few minutes.
*Then the results come up on the computer.*
Tasha: Couldn't have timed that better. Let's see what it says...Hmm, looks like your suspicions were correct Kira. Those two DO work for Mesogog.
Kira: I knew this had to be a trick. Dr. Oliver would never hurt anyone much less kill three families.
Ethan: I'll give ya three guesses as to where Dr. O. is right now and the first two don't count.
Tasha: Right! I just gotta find an invisiportal. Gimme a few minutes. I've got a lock on a portal. Let's go get the Raptor Cycles. I've just programmed them with the coordinates.
Conner: You ready?
All three others: Ready.
All rangers: Dino Thunder...Power up!
*Then they ride to the coordinates of portal. Where they find Elsa, Zeltrax, and a group of tyrannadrones.*
Zeltrax: The only way we'll let you through that portal is in chains.
Kira: I know I could pull that look off but these guys no way.
Tasha: I say...let's do it!
*Then the rangers do battle with them and eventually make it through the portal.*
Tasha: The lab is just around here. Don't count on the element of surprise.
*Mesogog then rounds the corner.*
Mesogog: Welcome rangers! We've been awaiting your arrival.
Tasha: Get out of our way Mesogog. We've got important work to do.
Mesogog: I know. I'm here to stop you from ruining my plans.
Kira: Yeah well you better get used to disappointment 'cause we're here to make sure you don't succeed.
Mesogog: You are in need of some discipline.
*He summons Elsa and a monster.*
Tasha: This way! Hurry!
Conner: Right behind you!
*Then they reach the room where Tommy was being held captive.*
Tasha: Tommy!
Tommy: Tasha? Is it really you?
Tasha: Yes Tommy. We're gonna get you outta here.
Tommy: Press the red button on the panel.
Ethan: On it.
*Tasha then frees Tommy.*
*Then all rangers leave and head for home>*

I know this fan fic sucks but gimme a break. I'm just gettin started writing fanfics. Lemme know what I should add, what I should delete, what you like, what you dislike, what you love, what you hate, that sort of thing. Later!

Ultimate Hero
03-28-2004, 07:02 PM
Add more than just dialugue.

Ultimate Hero
03-28-2004, 07:04 PM
I've canged my mind, just stop posting fanfics until you have read some good ones, such as.....help me out here people!

y3k
03-28-2004, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by Ultimate Hero
I've canged my mind, just stop posting fanfics until you have read some good ones, such as.....help me out here people!

I'll help you.

Tommy, read some other people's fanfics first. See how it's done. my personal sugession? The Mechine War by Knuckels is somewhere on the 1st or 2nd page.

JPHBK
03-28-2004, 07:45 PM
Originally posted by y2ktm2
I'll help you.

Tommy, read some other people's fanfics first. See how it's done. my personal sugession? The Mechine War by Knuckels is somewhere on the 1st or 2nd page.




The search feature is what that is for. It really depends on the type of story she is looking to write. That is a good choice though.

Bionic Red
03-29-2004, 07:07 PM
Read Ryuranger's stuff. It's the best place to start.

comicstar100
03-29-2004, 08:15 PM
Also read some of Forever Red The Novel its in the archives.:cool:

Ultimate Hero
03-29-2004, 08:23 PM
ComicStar Jason fic is done just to let you know.

Storm Warrior2
03-29-2004, 08:27 PM
Who's Tasha?

y3k
03-29-2004, 08:40 PM
Originally posted by comicstar100
Also read some of Forever Red The Novel its in the archives.:cool:

holy shit, how could I have forgotten about that?! The ultamite Fanfic.

JPHBK
03-30-2004, 10:52 AM
Originally posted by y2ktm2
holy shit, how could I have forgotten about that?! The ultamite Fanfic.


lol. I kinda did too. Oh well.

Tommy Oliver's Wife
03-30-2004, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by Storm Warrior2
Who's Tasha?
I'm Tasha. It's a character I added in. I do my own version of fanfics where if my friends or I would like to be on the show I just write them into the fanfic. I hope that clears it up for you. My parents were gonna name my sister Tasha Rhianne but she died before she was born. She would have been a year older than me. That's why I chose the name Tasha. Later!