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y3k
03-27-2004, 04:20 PM
Ok, so the end of the Dark rangers mini-series is the halfway mark. 15 Episodes out of 30. This has left the rangers with a new Megazord at there disposal.

What's comming:
ALOT more Zords (2 more Megazords and a Carrier Zord)

a bit less in the way of filler episodes

A team-up two parter (MightyMorphinPR was orgianaly supposed to help we with this, but since she hasn't updated her fanfic since last year, I'm gonna have to pick a replacement)



Now, I want to heare feedback. Not just "you did good", or "I like", or nothing at all, but some actual feed back. I want to know what you guys would like to see, or if there is anyone interested in a team-up. Or what I need to work on.

Also tell me what you have liked most so far.

ready? POST!
Ultimate Hero
03-27-2004, 04:34 PM
Are you going to hurt me if I dont?

Hmmmmm..... I want a huge scale war where everyone dies except the cockroaches.
y3k
03-27-2004, 05:00 PM
Originally posted by Ultimate Hero
Are you going to hurt me if I dont?

Hmmmmm..... I want a huge scale war where everyone dies except the cockroaches.

*whacks UH with a sack of hammers*
NEXT!:D

seriulsy though, what DO you want?
Ultimate Hero
03-27-2004, 05:20 PM
Well you could add description with the dailogue, unless you are doing it in screenplay format.
y3k
03-27-2004, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by Ultimate Hero
Well you could add description with the dailogue, unless you are doing it in screenplay format.

...as in....
*is confuzzled*
Ultimate Hero
03-27-2004, 05:36 PM
I mean like instead of just doing

"Go kill the dog!" Said Billy.

Jason nodden and killed the dog.

Do

"Go kill the dog!" Said Billy.

Jason nodded in understanding and ran over with the speed of a thousand lions. He unsheated his sword and with a mighty yell sliced open the devlish creature.

You get where Im going
y3k
03-27-2004, 06:02 PM
Originally posted by Ultimate Hero
I mean like instead of just doing

"Go kill the dog!" Said Billy.

Jason nodden and killed the dog.

Do

"Go kill the dog!" Said Billy.

Jason nodded in understanding and ran over with the speed of a thousand lions. He unsheated his sword and with a mighty yell sliced open the devlish creature.

You get where Im going

ah, ok...I'll try

But I don't think I can add a demon dog into the story...unless your talking about Anubis:p j/k