Looking For a writing partner!

[AstronemasReturn]

Hi guys! I am creating a story ..but i need a writing partner. if anyone wants to help ..plz reply here!:D

[it's time for a gold rush]

I'm not a fanfic writer but what is the story about.

[Lightspeed Zariass]

Originally posted by AstronemasReturn
Hi guys! I am creating a story ..but i need a writing partner. if anyone wants to help ..plz reply here!:D

It would help to tell us

[AstronemasReturn]

Only Read this if you want to be a writer. Otherwise some secrets of the story will be revealed.

Summary of first 4 (or 5) episodes.


The story starts with a girl names Katrina Fowler as a young girl (around 1996) and her dad and it shows the loving relationship
they had. Her dad is in a car crash and dies , so Katrina goes to live with her uncle.

When Katrina is a Junior in high school (2004) she and her Uncle move back to the house she lived in with her dad. She moves into the room her dads old room and there she finds a secret compartment under the floor containing her fathers diary. Her dads diary tells of a Corpation called Viratech and her father's 2 best friends. She does research at the library and finds that both her fathers friends died around the same time that her dad did.

She reads more into the diary (that is filled with pictures too) and she finds out about the companies evil doings and their evil plans.
She starts school and looks in the old yearbooks and she finds pictures of her dad and his two best friends who have the same last names as two of her classmates ,Kit and Mason.

Katrina confronts them with her findings. At first, they blow her off. And then she asks them if there dad's are alive. They all say no. She asks, if they still live in the same house that there dad lived in. They all say yes. She finally get's there attention. She then shows them her findings. She ask's them to go home and look in there dads old room. Under the floorboards. Each of them find a diary. Suddenly , each of the diaries start glowing and
the teens are sucked into them. They have gone back in time!

They see their fathers past and find out that their dad's were recruited by Viratech to be part of an elite team of heroes , called the Secret Strike Rangers. They thought they were being recruited to fight evil, but it was the exact opposite.They wouldn't cooperate with Viratech and soon fought against them. Viratech, assinates the men , so that the company will remain secret. All of the death's are all covered up. Katrina also finds out that her father made her mother fake her death, because he thought her life was in danger.The Rangers are suddenly teloported
into the present. They are all in shock. They head over to Katrina's house , where she frantically tries to find her mother's whearabouts. Using the internet , she finds an
address off the island of Costa Rica. But how will the teens get there? What happened with the Viratech Company? And what more will they find out about there fathers?

Tune into Power Rangers: Secret Strike

[AstronemasReturn]

Nobody? :( ...whats wrong with the story? Can somebody give me some pointers? :(

[bushwacka666]

Doesn't seem to be anything wrong in my opinion. It sounds like a decent enough concept to me - I think you should give it a trial. :)

[AstronemasReturn]

Thanks! That is the first 4 episodes. The rangers dont get thier powers until the 6th.

[lilwhiteranger]

thats a good story 2 badi suck at writing

[foreverhunter]

Originally posted by AstronemasReturn
Only Read this if you want to be a writer. Otherwise some secrets of the story will be revealed.

Summary of first 4 (or 5) episodes.


The story starts with a girl names Katrina Fowler as a young girl (around 1996) and her dad and it shows the loving relationship
they had. Her dad is in a car crash and dies , so Katrina goes to live with her uncle.

When Katrina is a Junior in high school (2004) she and her Uncle move back to the house she lived in with her dad. She moves into the room her dads old room and there she finds a secret compartment under the floor containing her fathers diary. Her dads diary tells of a Corpation called Viratech and her father's 2 best friends. She does research at the library and finds that both her fathers friends died around the same time that her dad did.

She reads more into the diary (that is filled with pictures too) and she finds out about the companies evil doings and their evil plans.
She starts school and looks in the old yearbooks and she finds pictures of her dad and his two best friends who have the same last names as two of her classmates ,Kit and Mason.

Katrina confronts them with her findings. At first, they blow her off. And then she asks them if there dad's are alive. They all say no. She asks, if they still live in the same house that there dad lived in. They all say yes. She finally get's there attention. She then shows them her findings. She ask's them to go home and look in there dads old room. Under the floorboards. Each of them find a diary. Suddenly , each of the diaries start glowing and
the teens are sucked into them. They have gone back in time!

They see their fathers past and find out that their dad's were recruited by Viratech to be part of an elite team of heroes , called the Secret Strike Rangers. They thought they were being recruited to fight evil, but it was the exact opposite.They wouldn't cooperate with Viratech and soon fought against them. Viratech, assinates the men , so that the company will remain secret. All of the death's are all covered up. Katrina also finds out that her father made her mother fake her death, because he thought her life was in danger.The Rangers are suddenly teloported
into the present. They are all in shock. They head over to Katrina's house , where she frantically tries to find her mother's whearabouts. Using the internet , she finds an
address off the island of Costa Rica. But how will the teens get there? What happened with the Viratech Company? And what more will they find out about there fathers?

Tune into Power Rangers: Secret Strike


I liked the idea up until "Secret Strike". Could you come up with some better title? This board is filled with ridicilous story titles as it is. Your ideas overall have loads of potential by the way. Good luck.



FH

[The Original Green Ranger]

I wouldn't mind helpin you out of ideas and stuff, plus I have my own ideas on another power rangers team and maybe we could cross our Ideas together.

[RltyRngr]

I TRIED HELPING AstronemasReturn with this fic, and this is the part i wrote....AstronemasReturn doesnt have permission to use my writting at all.


As Robert was off to work at Viacorp, it seemed that he was being followed, he walked in public area's just to be safe, but at a point there was not many building and not many people around, he started to get very wary about his surrounding. suddenly there was a dark tinted black car speeding around the corner and that’s when Robert Ashton realized he was not safe, he started to run, and tried to duck away and hide, after a while of coming to lock door after locked door, he finds a store, he goes in, and catches his breathe. He asks the store clerk if her could use the phone. She lets him.

After he gets off the phone, he asks the clerk if her could use the back door to leave, he then left out the back door and headed home. When he got home her took his daughter in his arms and hugged her and told her how much that he loved her. That night after she went to sleep on the couch, he got up and started to pack her things in her little suitcase, and then went to put her in bed.

After he put her down he decided that he needed to get some air. He went to his pocket for the box of cigarettes, and realized that her was out of them, and decided to go to the local store and get a pack, before Katrina woke up.

As he was walking out of know where he was hit to the ground by a shadowed figure, he then got up and was hit over the head with a hard object, knocking him back on the ground, some man picked him up and tossed him to the vehicle but instead of hit in the trunk of the car he hit the pavement in the middle of the street, and before the could pick him up, a car that was speeding down the road hit Robert and killed him before the men could.

[AstronemasReturn]

Ok..um. i TOLD you that i wasnt going to use it , like 5 times. calm down... and clarification guys. By writing partner i mean. Like and actual parnter. we would each do stuff. 50/50 . So if we wrote an 8 page episode , then u would write 4 and i would write 4. just claryfiing.

[RltyRngr]

yes you right that is what a partner is, but you were not being a "partner" you were told me your idea and then what to write, not, "oh, can you write this part, and i will work on this part..." but, "write this for me by tomorrow, or else..."

DONT HELP THIS PERSON YOU WILL REGRET IT!!!

RLTYRNGR

[Guru Bishisama]

This is going to turn into a huge flame war, or something of the similar effect.
If you have a problem with someone, deal with it civilly. Nobody likes dealing with an asshole.

[AstronemasReturn]

write this to me my tomorrow or else? R U CRAZY? i never ever said that!

here is the ending of the convo..

ISetJesusOnFire3: kool
teendreamO7: ok
teendreamO7: you continue it (they are at the hospital ...Rob dies ..Katrina Lives...try to add in whatever you want ..let your imagination flow)
teendreamO7: i have to finsish my HW
teendreamO7: bye
teendreamO7: nice walking to you
ISetJesusOnFire3: walking?
ISetJesusOnFire3: ok, well bye
teendreamO7: lol
teendreamO7: nice TALKING to you
teendreamO7: bye
ISetJesusOnFire3 signed off at 2:57:56 AM.
ISetJesusOnFire3 signed on at 4:43:24 PM.
ISetJesusOnFire3: hows the story
teendreamO7: lol
teendreamO7: same as yesterday
ISetJesusOnFire3: oh
teendreamO7: just got home from school
teendreamO7: did u do what i asked?
ISetJesusOnFire3: ?
teendreamO7: "teendreamO7: you continue it (they are at the hospital ...Rob dies ..Katrina Lives...try to add in whatever you want ..let your imagination flow)
teendreamO7: i have to finsish my HW
teendreamO7: bye
teendreamO7: nice walking to you
ISetJesusOnFire3: walking?
ISetJesusOnFire3: ok, well bye
teendreamO7: lol"
teendreamO7: remember?
ISetJesusOnFire3: you never said that...
ISetJesusOnFire3: i have the conversation
teendreamO7: i did say that
teendreamO7: thats from last night
ISetJesusOnFire3: and let get somthing str8...you dont boss me around...
ISetJesusOnFire3: im 21 years old...and im HELPING you out...
teendreamO7: look..if you dont wanna do this , you dont have too
ISetJesusOnFire3: can you then not use anything i wrote...and if you do, i will let everyone know, we are through
teendreamO7: "ISetJesusOnFire3: good enough to write for you?
teendreamO7: of course
ISetJesusOnFire3: so...?
teendreamO7: well
teendreamO7: i need someone to help me develope some ideas for the serious
ISetJesusOnFire3: what do you want me to write?"
TeenDreamO7: i thought yo WANTED to help?
ISetJesusOnFire3: yes im helping, not doing it ALL
ISetJesusOnFire3: now Nothing!you dont have permission to use my writting
ISetJesusOnFire3: "Hi guys! I am creating a story ..but i need a writing partner. if anyone wants to help ..plz reply here!"
ISetJesusOnFire3: a WRITING PARTNER
teendreamO7: fine..although..i was never trying to boss you around , you said "ISetJesusOnFire3: what do you want me to write?" i thought you wanted me to tell you what to write? but then i say "teendreamO7: you continue it (they are at the hospital ...Rob dies ..Katrina Lives...try to add in whatever you want ..let your imagination flow)" and its bossing you around?
ISetJesusOnFire3: sorry we are done...again you may NOT use MY WRITING!!!
teendreamO7: i heard you the first two times
ISetJesusOnFire3: whats your name?
teendreamO7: look..im sorry. like i said. i never meant to boss you around
ISetJesusOnFire3: too late
teendreamO7: ok then...so what exactly did i do that was so rude or mean to you?
ISetJesusOnFire3: lied to me
ISetJesusOnFire3: bossed me around
teendreamO7: lied to you/
teendreamO7: ?
ISetJesusOnFire3: you said you needed help, not a person to write your fic...
teendreamO7: a writing partner
teendreamO7: to me that is
teendreamO7: say an ep is 8 pages
teendreamO7: i write 4
teendreamO7: you write 4
teendreamO7: partner
ISetJesusOnFire3: bye
teendreamO7: ok
ISetJesusOnFire3: im already adapting what all i have wrote to my fic...
teendreamO7: ok
teendreamO7: but can you not use the names?
ISetJesusOnFire3: ?
teendreamO7: Robert Ashton
teendreamO7: i like that name for mine
teendreamO7: its my teachers name
ISetJesusOnFire3: ok, they are dumb anyway
teendreamO7: um..ok thanks
teendreamO7: bye


i wasnt trying to me bossy to him or overwork him. I dunno why u are saying i said "write this or else" because we both know that is not true.