A Jason and Kim Story.

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[Qi]

Excellent story. Nicely written. I think youy captured the characters extremely well. You have chosen a very difficult topic and accomplished what you set out to do.

Qi

[JPHBK]

Thanks for the Compliment. I really appreciated it. I will be posting chapter two sometime soon. It is a 4 chapter story. I was afraid some people might not like it because it doesn't have any Morphed scenes or anything like that. I am glad at least one person enjoyed it.

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[Bionic Red]

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If either would have turned around they would have seen a image of a being smiling at them from in the the ruins. "They finally found one another, My brave warriors," spoke a voice from the ruins.

Zordon?

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[Qi]

Great job again.

[bushwacka666]

Damn: I can honestly say that was one of the better fics that I've read in recent times. Although I personally never gave much thought to Kim and Jason being in a relationship, you seem to make it believable - you make it work. Character development and use of language is excellent, and I don't mind telling you that it's given me some food for thought for my own fics.

Keep up the great work m8 - RangerBoard needs more fics like this. :)

[JPHBK]

Thanks for all the compliments. I honestly thought people here wouldn't like it given it's content. But it is nice to know that people still care for a old fashioned love story. And I hope to get chapter 3 up soon. I am still tweaking it a little. Maybe today if I am lucky.

[Qi]

Don't rush it. It's nice to wait for something of quality.

[JPHBK]

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Don't rush it. It's nice to wait for something of quality.

I realize that. I took me a while to write the story. I am at this point editing the story. It is complete other than a few changes I am making. That is why I might be able to post it today. But more than likely it won't be today.

[Qi]

No worries.

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[Qi]

Good.

The last part of the posting seemed a bit rush. While it's the natural progression for the relationship and nothing's wrong in terms of overall story, it just seems like there's not enough dialog or inner thoughts to support Jason's 'quick' decision to sell the dojo and move to Angel Grove.

I do like it.

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[Qi]

A very nice way to end it.

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[metallicarmor2009]

I loved it... the cutest story I've seen yet... actually a place where you might be able to find some is Written In The Stars. The address is pink-and-red.cjb.net

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Great job. You pulled off what not many can't do, make the relationship like it was a normal thing. I only had one problem with it...
"Jason was better than Tommy at about everything." I eagerly await for the PR/Anger crossover. Don't screw Angel's character or I'll stake you :D....no really I will.

[bushwacka666]

Well, I consider this fic fantastic at the very least. Kim and Jason's relationship developed along nicely. I think somebody else said that maybe it moved forward a little too quickly, and in some respects I am inclined to agree. But then you have to speed things up in a four chapter fic, and so when you consider the length, I don't really see this as a major issue.

The ending was also damn-near perfect, IMO. Evidently you already know why, since you wrote it that way, so I won't bore you by pointing out the specifics. But I'm a sucker for happy endings too, so I was glad to read the ending the way it was.

I also liked one line in particular in the last chapter: "He had been able to read into Kim's soul since Murianthias. Maybe even before that." IMO opinion that's a great line - is Jason able to literally read Kim's soul due to what happened to them on Murianthias, or is it a forged deeper connection due to a shared experience? Is it that Jason could always read Kim like that before then, but just never realised it until Murianthias? I just love double entendres. ;)

Well I guess I've been rambling here, so sorry about that. :D But hey, what I have said has been nothing but positive so well done m8. Give yourself a Power Coin! I wish you the best of luck with your future fics, and if they're half as good as this one was, they'll definitely be worth the read! :)

JPHBK: by the way, the fics I write are your usual series efforts with action scenes, Zords and all the rest of it. I do always fit a few romances in somewhere though - it's a legal requirement :D and something I've focused on heavily with my most recent fic. I used to post them on here a long time ago, but I stopped due to a lack of feedback (it's often the way). I'm debating bringing my latest fic here, but haven't decided yet.

[Chaos Son of SoS]

Post your fics over here Bushwacka. I'll read them. Post all of them :). I'll give feedback on each one of them.

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[JPHBK]

I plan on starting back up on the PR/Angel story I am writing. Maybe as soon as tonight.

[Ibrahim123]

:D I loved this story I give it 20 stars
I loved this story I give it 20 stars
I loved this story I give it 20 stars I loved this story I give it 20 stars

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[Ultimate Hero]

Great Fic, it was an ejoyable read, my favorite chapter was the first.

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[RainbowRanger18]

Thanks. I didn't expect to ever get another review on this story, but must admit it was nice to get another one.

This is one of the best fan fics I've ever read. Good luck on other fan fics 2.