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FRAXation
02-03-2004, 04:40 PM
I'm planning on making a fanfic using the Dairanger suits. I'd like to see if the idea is any good or not, since I suck at writing.........
For now, the name is PR: Stellar Force, but that's until I get a better name.
Red: power of Fire w/ a Medievil castle constellation, zord is a Medievil dragon
Green: power of Earth w/ an Egyptian pyramid constellation, zord is a sphinx
Blue: power of Wind w/ a Parthenon constellation, zord is a Pegasus
Yellow: power of Water w/ a Taj Mahal constellation, zord is a sea serpent
Pink: power of Light w/ an Aztec pyramid constellation, zord is a phoenix
Story: Centuries ago, in another galaxy, the wicked Black Knight tried to take over his world and the universe. He had already taken the Sacred Jewels that produced light for the planet, throwing it into darkness and chaos. But the Black Knight was defeated, and as punishment, he and his people were thrown out into deep space, to wander aimlessly to the forgotten realms.
But a prophecy was made that the group would one day arrive at another planet, and the horrors suffered in their homerealm, that planet would also suffer. In present day, the Knight's castle arrives at Earth, and his army is freed. But upon their arrival, the Dai Gosei constellation appeared in Earth's sky, and the Stellar Beasts arrived to defend the planet from its doom. They chose five worthy candidates to become Rangers, and so thus the battle continued.............
GoldRangerX
02-03-2004, 09:03 PM
dude...that sounds really cool! i like it, maybe as a process of making characters you could post your heros and bad guys? but it sounds great.
The one thing I might change is your blue and yellow powers. It jsut seems odd to have a yellow water ranger when blue is available.
Mythical Master
02-04-2004, 08:34 AM
I kind of agree. Change Green to white and give that ranger the power of wind and then give the power of Earth to the Yellow Ranger and the power of water to the Blue Ranger.
Well if we look at the basis for Dai, which is Chi (Qi or Ki), then Green is actually Wood and Yellow is Earth.
I think Green for Earth and Yellow for Wind will be okay.
Heck, if I recall Ginga had Green for Wind as well, so I guess that could work.
For the Chinese (Qi) the elements and colors are as follows:
Fire - Red
Earth - Yellow
Metal - White
Water - Blue or Black
Wood - Green
FRAXation
02-04-2004, 02:22 PM
Well, since Tenmaranger (Blue Dairanger) had a Pegasus zord, I found Wind to be an appropriate element. And when I said Yellow had water, I mean in the sense of golden water from fountains. (kinda like from "Aladdin & The King of Theives" And Green was left with Earth...
Anyway, thanks for the support! :) I'll elaborate on the aords and villains now, and then the Rangers.........
The zords are called the Gingzyu (Stellar Beats), and are based on mythological animals, as you've figured out.
Red has GingDragon, Green has GingSphinx, Blue has GingPegasus, Yellow has GingSerpant, and Pink has GingPhoenix. They descend from the planets of the Dai Gosei constellation. (The planets' formations form the Rangers' building constellations). They combine into the Ginga Megazord. Later, more Gingzyu arrive from all over the universe to help the Rangers in the war.
Later on still, the white fairy Cleasse awoke from deep slumber and arrived on Earth to help out the Rangers. She tried to resurrect the dead warrior White Knight, who she had a romance with before Black Knight killed him. But her spell wasn't performed right. White Knight returned from the dead, but had only a month to live. Cleasse kept him underground so as he wouldn't waste away too quickly. Only if he turned into a dog could he roam aboveground safely. But he turned into White Knight whenever the Rangers needed help. He was accompanied by his Gingzyu, GingSirius, a large black dog who could control the weather. White Knight fought Black Knight for the whole month, until his lifespan finally wore away. He died in Cleasse's arms, but not before telling her of a white gem that could give anyone back their life permanently, till they died again............
More coming soon...
FRAXation
02-04-2004, 04:19 PM
OK, I'm back. Now for thr rangers and villains..........
Rangers: Five young people ranging from 14-20. They receive the power of the five stars of the Dai Gosei constellation. At first totally confused as to what's going on, but soon become committed to defeating this menance. Their morpher is the Ginganizer, and their morph call is "Ginga Henshin"
Gehan is Red, and his power comes from the star Dai Pyros. He's 20, and the oldest. However he often lies about his age, saying he's actually 13. He's pretty much lax about many things, and procrastinates a lot. But eventually he becomes a determined leader. His zord is GingDragon.
Shane is Green, powers come from the star Dai Geos. He's 16, and the most sensible of all of them. He's constantly annoyed by his fellow Rangers' usual lack of effort, and keeps to himself a lot. But he has a softer side, as it's shown with his compassion for Cleasse and later Sora. His zord is GingSphinx
Dillan is Blue, powers of the Dai Aeros star. He's 15, and is the most eager of the group. Often the first to get in trouble, and he hangs out with Kevin, usually bringing him into his crazy feats. Eventually he gets Shane to be more social toward the world. His zord is GingPegasus
Kevin is Yellow, powers of the Dai Hydros star. He's 15 too, and is most like Gehan. He's the physically strongest, and often wisecracks about drugs and alcohol. (Even claims to have taken crack once or twice). Later though, he becomes more responsible and less careless. His zord is GingSerpant.
Sora is Pink, and has the power of the star Dai Spectros. She's Kevin's brother, and at 14, the youngest. She constantly annoys Shane, to his chagrin, and Dillan is the only one who can tolerate her. Eventually Shane softens up and becomes almost a second brother to her. Her zord is GingPhoenix.
villains next...........
FRAXation
02-05-2004, 05:14 PM
villains now....................
As I've said, the villains are a band of pirates and social dregs led by Black Knight. They've arrived on Earth after centuries of wandering, and plan to bring Earth to its doom.......
Black Knight: The leader of the army. His real name was forgotten long ago, and his terrifying appearence is enough to bring people to complete obedience. He's the killer of White Knight, and this fuels Cleasse's vow to destroy him. He wears a silver crown that can house three jewels. This crown was the property of the king of the destroyed galaxy, and was stolen by the Knight. Currently the crown houses two jewels, representing creation and death. The third middle jewel is missing though, and this is the Jewel of Preservation, which BK hunts desperatley for.
In the end, it is revealed that Black Knight and White Knight represent the essance of good and evil, yin and yang. As long as they battled equally, the universe is at a balance. But since BK killed WK, the balance was disturbed and evil took over. WK, before he dies again, tells Cleasse to find the Preservation jewel, which can let him return to life permanently. She succeeds, and WK returns and finally defeats BK. But killing him would once again upset the balance, so WK persuades Cleasse to not kill him, but to strip BK of his power and banish him once again to the ends of the universe.........until another planet enters his reach...
Exun: BK's second in command. He does the most fighting of all his comrades, and has no pity for the helpless. He's eventually killed by Cleasse and thrown into a volcanic pit.
Arachia: A woman pirate, who tries whenever possible to manipulate the situations to her own needs. She has a trove of treasure she's plundered from the galaxies, and ever desires more. She hates Cleasse, and would want nothing more than to drink her magical blood and become next to god-like.........
Graus: a dragon warrior, and Black Knight's esquire. Secretly plots to overthrow his master, which happens after BK is driven away temporarily. He then takes some elixir from Arachia's stores and evolves into the deadly Graulion. Graulion leads the army until BK retuns in rage, and Graulion is executed by Exun.
Skeletrons: Black Knight's footsoldiers, resembling silver skeletons. They are dangerous and extemely deceitful, making them tough opponents.
Well, what do you think??
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