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cyberdn86
11-29-2003, 05:00 PM
Episode 1: Lord Specter's Gonna Get Ya!

Opening Theme Song (Combat By Arron Waters)

Hi Im Erik Swanson A Normal 17 Year Old With A Totally Un-Normal Life! One Day I Was Teleported To A Huge Base Called The Command Center. A Wise Wizard Zordon Who Was Traped In A Time Warp By Rita Repulsa A Evil Witch, All Because She Lost A Coin Toss That If She Won She Would Be Able To Do What She Pleased, But If Zordon Won She Have To Stop Her Evil Ways!

So Zordon Gave Me These Incredible Powers, Morphing Powers To Protect The Earth. He Gave Me The Power Ruby. With It I Could Become The Awesome Phantom Power Ranger. Plus I Have A Laser blaster, And My Very Own Zord Artillatron. He Also Told Me There Are Many Other Power Rangers Out There. There Are The Mighty Morphin Power Rangers, Aquitiar Rangers, Zeo Rangers, Turbo Rangers, Space Rangers, Galaxy Rangers, LightSpeed Rangers, Time Force Rangers, Wild Force Rangers, Ninja Storm Rangers, And The Dino Thunder Rangers. They All Help Protect The Earth From The Evil Forces Of Lord Specter.

Now I'm On My First Mission. Find Lord Specter's Hide Out.
It's Late At Night And I Get A Call From Andros Saying I Must Teleport To The Astro MegaShip Now! So I Did. Andros Said Erik I Need Your Help Finding Lord Specters Hide Out. I Said Sure! We Scanned The Entire Galaxy, And No Sign Of Him AnyWhere. Then I Got SomeThing, He Was In The Lost Galaxy.

We Put The AstroMegaShip Into Hyper Rush 9 Mode, And Blasted Into The Lost Galaxy Portal. We Then Saw A Huge Dark Base In Space. We Found Lord Specter. Then From Out Of Now Where We Were Pulled Into His Fortress By A Net Web. We Were Then Surounded By Putties. We Fought Them Untile Like 30Seconds Later Lord Specter Himself Comes InTo The AstroMegaShip. He Said Well Well Well What Do We Have Here The Red Space Ranger, And The Phantom Ranger. What Do You Want. What Do We Want, We Want You Gone. We Want You Off Our Planet!!!!!!
Me, And Andros Morphed, and started fightning him. i pulled out my lazer blaster, and fired it at him but to no effect. Andros Used His Spiral Saber Booster Mode, but nothing!Specter said what is that all you got. You damn rangers will never be able to defeat me, and my grand forces of evil. Andros, and me said no freakin way. The Power Rangers Will Stop You And Your Evil Forces From Taking Over The Galaxies! We Will Win! We Fight Back, and kick his ass! We Get out of the dark fortess, and tell zordon were lord specter is.

I wonder if the Aquitiar Rangers are able to fight yet. They Have Been sufforing alot from hydro hog. Andros Says don't worry they will be just fine.

He Land back On Earth Tell Zordon The News. He Then Says Thank You Rangers For Your Help, I Will Know Contact EverySingle Power Ranger Alive, And Teleport them here to the New Command Center.

End Credits Song: (I Will Win By Arron Waters)

Clu-less
11-29-2003, 05:12 PM
Aw, my brain. The jumbled mass of letters don't make any sense...

How old are you, cyberdn86?

HydroFlyer
11-29-2003, 05:25 PM
Yeah, it was very confusing, plus every word is capitalized! ?_?

cyberdn86
11-29-2003, 05:28 PM
Im 17 Years Old OK.

Im Trying To Become A Good Writer OK so give me time.

Clu-less
11-29-2003, 07:26 PM
Tip #1: The first letter of every sentence is capitalized, unless it's a proper noun (words like Nissan, Froot Loops and I, as in "I'm going to the store, I'll be back, I am bored, etc., etc.).

Tip#2: Okay, you maybe be 17, but you're writing as though you're 3. I'm 16 and I know all the proper puncation and stuff. Before rushing into a story, take some time to read some other fanfics and get a general idea on how they should be written.

cyberdn86
11-29-2003, 08:14 PM
Thank you for the kind tips. Im sorry my writing is like a 3 year old's but it's hard for me to write.

TheOneRJS200
12-01-2003, 10:59 PM
The whole thing seemed VERY rushed. My first bit of advise would to slow the heck down dude. I mean, give yourself some time to tell a story.