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Crystal Ranger
10-17-2003, 06:49 AM
I'm thinking about starting a chapther story. Well, here's my Prelude that will give you a good idea of what i to come.

Prelude:
Long ago there was a evil force, one so powerful that it almost caused the end of the universe. That was until a great sage known as Zordon locked it away and never spoke of it, for this was a evil that even he feaerd. As Zordon sealed this evil away he said that a group of rivails would come together and they would defeat this evil. Even after this he wished to do nothing, for he knew it was destiny and that was one thing he did not wish to mess with.
So now under the flaming world known as the other world it lays there, waiting for revenge. However there was one part of the legend that Zordon never told of, one that will seal the universes fate, unless it came to pass. So now it's up to a group of six friends and five evil spirits to work togehter for if they don't, the universe as we know it will no longer be.

ModrnEerie
10-17-2003, 12:56 PM
I thought this would be an imposter..

Crystal Ranger
10-17-2003, 01:38 PM
Crystalranger14

I thought this would be an imposter..

What do you mean by that. Also chapther 1 should be up this weekend.

ZyuGreen
10-17-2003, 02:16 PM
Past Emotions.. Sounds Like a Gundam Wing Song..

NiGhTRanGeR2003
10-17-2003, 02:17 PM
Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
What do you mean by that. Also chapther 1 should be up this weekend.
Talking to yourself? Also, sound intresting.

ModrnEerie
10-17-2003, 06:34 PM
Originally posted by NiGhTRanGeR2003
Talking to yourself? Also, sound intresting. Who is talking to themselves? I honestly thought that this person was going to be an imposter and that the thread would say something about me. :p

Crystal Ranger
10-18-2003, 06:04 AM
First of all, oyur all nuts,now heres chapther 1. Sommething are happening that I wasn't ready for. So I'll try to update this at least once a week.

Chapther 1:Free At Last
Deep in the pits known as the other world. Flames erupt as an explosions erupt around them. Spirits vanish in smoke as a figure marches forward.
The monster is black with patches of decay all over. He has a bald blue head and a gold staff in his hand.
The creature laughs, "At last I am free. Soon my army and I shall have revenge." The monster floats forward. He suddenly stops when he sees five shadows. The creature just smirks, "So, your part of this so called legend to defeat me?"
The center shadow steps up to show himself to be Psycho Red, "That's what we're told. Of course we don't like the one part of it." The creature only lifts his head and laughs, "Hahaha. Yes, I know what my brother said. That you would team up with another group. However considering your past I will doubt that."
Psycho Blue steps forth, "Shows what you know. You see we made a deal with that floating head. Once we take you out we'll get another crack at those goodie goods."
The creature only smirks and whispers to himself, "So they don't know." The creature looks at the five Ranger spirtis, "You are fools to think that you can stop me. Now, rise my fallen generals." Five shadows emerge from the ground to show five monsters. From left to right are Zurgane, Vexacus, Motordrone, Jinderax, and Loki. (Quick note: In this timeline Ninja Storm and Wild Force never took place. Nor did Lightspeed. So I figrued I'd use my favorties from those series of villains.)
Zurgane pulls out his swords. Psycho Red pulls out his from thin air. Zurgane, "Do you think you can stop me?" Psycho Red gloats, "I know I could."
The creature looks at the top of the other world and sees the center point. He aims his staff and fires a gold beam. Debris falls. The Psycho spirits shield themselves as do the five genreals. Vexacus, "At last we will be free."
They all start to fly for the opening when a blue spirit flys past them and blocks the opening. This spirit is Zordon, "Brother, must you do this?"
The creature only laughs, "Mwhahaha! You are a fool big brother. Now step aside. This universe will once again fear the name Destroyer."
Zordon pleads, "Thats not your name. You know your true name, it's...." He is cut off as a beam from Destroyers staff and Zordon falls to the ground in pain. All the villains laugh as they make their way out. The opening starts to close. The Psycho's run to Zordon. Psycho Black, "Now what?"
Zordon's spirit lays on the ground fading, "I'm afraid this is truly the end. There is nothing past death. I will us the last of my energy to leave the opening open long enough to get through. Rememeber, you must put your feelings aside if you wish to have another try at my young friends."
With that he floats up and vanishes. A blue ring stops the opening. Psycho Pink, "I'll go first." She is then backed by the other Psycho Rangers as they leap to the top from cliff to cliff. They exit and the portal closes. Zordon's spirit reappears, "Good luck, you are all that is left to stand in his way. You must work together with them to stop him. You must not let past emotions get to you."
With that, the great sage once known as Zordon fades away. Forever gone, leaving a group of eleven to safe the universe.

Coming soon to chapther 2

Destroyer is free, so are the Psycho Rangers. As Destroyer and his generals deisde their attack plan the Psycho's must find the others that were ment to work with them in this battle. Will they put their emotions aside and not let Zordon's name go to shame. Find out in "Prepare for Battle".

Crystal Ranger
10-18-2003, 06:08 AM
Ok. After chpather two we'll be getting into action. In each chapther Destroyer will send a gernal to attack the Rangers. In each chapther that genreal will get destroyed. The it will come to the big face off. So this looks to be about a eight to ten chapther story.

AbaBlack
10-18-2003, 06:21 AM
Crystal Ranger, you are the one that is nuts because you don't get what they are saying. CrystalRanger14 has been here longer, but recently had a long time away from RangerBoard, about the time you came along. When he got back he thought that you were an imposter, posing as him, and he thought that this thread was going to say something about him, and the name change. It is a common mistake, but your names are a bit TOO similar!

ModrnEerie
10-18-2003, 06:50 AM
Originally posted by AbaBlack
Crystal Ranger, you are the one that is nuts because you don't get what they are saying. CrystalRanger14 has been here longer, but recently had a long time away from RangerBoard, about the time you came along. When he got back he thought that you were an imposter, posing as him, and he thought that this thread was going to say something about him, and the name change. It is a common mistake, but your names are a bit TOO similar! What he said. :p

AbaBlack
10-18-2003, 06:51 AM
lol

Well, at least you agree with me!

NiGhTRanGeR2003
10-18-2003, 07:17 AM
Originally posted by Crystalranger14
Who is talking to themselves? I honestly thought that this person was going to be an imposter and that the thread would say something about me. :p
Oh crap, I just notice those are two different names

Crystal Ranger
10-18-2003, 07:31 AM
Sorry for the mess up. But on messageboards and other things I always go by Crystal Ranger. I've come to call it my online name. I'm sorry for the mix up but I will not change my name just beacuse of you. SO DEAL WITH IT BABY!

And would somebody post some thoughts on chapther 1.

ModrnEerie
10-18-2003, 08:39 AM
Originally posted by Crystal Ranger
Sorry for the mess up. But on messageboards and other things I always go by Crystal Ranger. I've come to call it my online name. I'm sorry for the mix up but I will not change my name just beacuse of you. SO DEAL WITH IT BABY!

And would somebody post some thoughts on chapther 1. Dude, shut the hell up. Past Emotions sucks ass.

Crystal Ranger
10-18-2003, 10:30 AM
Regardless of what that person thinks about my story I'm posting it anyways. I'm one of those people that when I post something i finish it. Plus I hope that there may be at least one person out there that likes it. That said here's chapther 2.


Chapther 2: Prepare for Battle
A peaceful Angel Grove. Suddenly an explosion breaks out. From it comes Destroyer and his generals. Destroyer aims his staff again. He fires it into the air and it spreads. It takes out all buildings in a two mile area. "This is perfect. We've already destroyed half of Angel Grove." They all fire again destroying even more buildings.
"That's enough!" comes a voice. They all turn to see the Psycho Rangers charging. Destroyer smirks, "Destroy them my warriors." With that each general charges.
Psycho Pink takes on Jindrax with a spining left kick. Jindrax blocks it and strikes her across the chest with his swords. She gets up and fires a green lightning bolt from her hand. Jindrax absorbs it into his swords and sends it back at her with a kick to it. She take the hits and falls to the ground.
Psycho Yellow is fighting it out with Loki. He swings his staff and knocks her off her feet. Psycho Yellow gets up and fires her Psycho Slinger. It does nothing other than gather in Loki's orange gem. Which then fires a orange beam at her. She get struck right in the chest and falls.
Psycho Blue, Black, and Red are fightning Zurgane, Vexacus, and Motordrone. All the fighters have their weapons in hand and are in a stand still circle. That is until Vexacus fires a beam from his hand that sends the Psycho men flying. Destroyer gathers with his generals and the Psychos regroup. Psycho Blue remarks, "This is a bunch of crap. They whiped the floor with us." Psycho Black is about to say something when a voice is heard, "Stop right there."
We then see the six Space Rangers running up morphed. Destroyer looks worried, "Retreat generals. We must prepare for the big battle." With that they all vanish. The six Space Rangers turn and get in a battle pose. As do the Psycho Rangers. That's when Psycho Black heres Zordon's voice in his head, "Don't let past emotions get to you. You are the key."
Psycho Black to Red, "Wait, rememeber what Zordon said." Red Ranger looks intersted, "What about Zordon?" Psycho Red turns to him, "He was the one that sent us. He said we had to work together. That that was the key to destroying his brother, his brother's generals, and saving the universe." Silver Ranger steps up, "Why did you agree?"
Psycho Pink, "Before his brother destroyed him he said that if we wish we could have another crack at you." Pink Ranger, "Aside from that it means we can't let past emeotions get the best of us. We must put them aside, work together, and trust each other." Psycho Yellow, "Agreed, but understand this. Once this is over your ours." Yellow Ranger, "Fine. But it looks like we should get people to safty. There may be nothing left in Angel Grove but other citys can be safed." Every Ranger nods to each other and run off. Still not to pleased that fate is making them work together.
A underground hideout. It looks alot like a meeting room with a long black table in the middle. Each general seats in a seat. Destroy stands before them, "We have destroyed Angel Grove, but that is only the start. We must first get rid of the Power Rangers before this so called fate my brother spoke of comes to pass. Who wants to go first?"
Jindrax, "I'll do it. With my army of Putrids that no good group of eleven will be histroy." Destroyer smiles, "See that the are."
And so it has begun. The Psycho and Space Rangers are working together and Destroyer is planing his next attack. He's already destroyed Angel Grove. How many cities and lives will be lost before he is defeated. Or is it possible that this destiny Zordon spoke of not real. Whatever the case may be it is now up to a goup of rivails to protect the universe, destiny or no destiny.

Crystal Ranger
10-23-2003, 02:31 PM
Since no one has showed intrest in this story I'm going to canel it. If you want to know what happens look up my name in the memebers menu and look up my name. My e- mail will be there. Then tell me if you would want the story or just to sum it up.