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PHAETON
08-11-2003, 08:57 AM
Ladies and Gentlemen may Introduce you to the Fabulous and newest Power Ranger Novelization....’‘Doomsday’‘ The Novel

Enjoy......

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Darkness, Blood and Sweat is all that represents this personal Hell of mine. It is always Pitch Black with withered trees, Freezing snow and barren of all life. It makes me glad that the fact I am Dead but also an Android. I am Silver the Bio-Hunter, I kneel on the ground and let the head of my own roil on the ground. My white armor which had been previously been scarred by battle had been restored former glory. My red eyes shines brighter then ever before

‘’Lokar I have finished your stupid tests, Now give me what I wanted.’‘ Silver says as an large fireball roars into the dark clouds above. The fireball transforms into an Gigantic Blue head appears shaking its Demonic spikes which served as hair.

‘’It seems you have....Your Ambition staggers me. It could not compare to that of the Wannabe Me witch Rita Repulsa. Nevertheless is one of the keys for my ascension unto your world.’‘ Lokar booms with an Expressionless look on his face.

‘’Cut the small talk will you. Let me have my revenge.’‘ Silver scowls

‘’Do you swear that every slave, Death or Conquered ground in my name ?’‘ Lokar asks with an Sinister grin on his face.

‘’I swear it Lord Lokar that when I triumph in defeat the world will be ripe for your taking. So do your BEST !’‘ Silver yells beckoning for more maliciousness-Begging for more power.’‘

‘’So be it.’‘Lokar booms as he opens his mouth. He unleashes his wicked Breath of Doom upon the Bio- Hunter. The Blueish-white powdery substance engulfs Silver in such a way that he can’t even be seen. The hunter screams of pain and agony from in the cloud.

‘’Silver the Bio-Hunter is no more.............You now are from this day forward.......Biopreadus the Chaotic.’‘Lokar says laughing even more so insanely as the cloud disappears . Although his body is not seen we catch an glimpse of his viscous red eyes glowing as they would if he was in the heat of Battle. Although his voiced has changed deeply from the transformation... He joins his master with his own dark menacing laugh that fades away into the darkness.

*

We cross to the exterior of Angel Grove High School, now were inside the school to see Billy, Trini, Kimberly and Jason walking through an green colored corridor which leads to the Freshmen hallway. Kimberley with the daily ‘Angel Grove Gazette’ within her grasps

Kim reads with an excited feel ‘’....And because of their contributions to Justice, and their unending efforts to protect the entire planet, Angel Grove officials have declared today...... Power Ranger Day !’‘ All four of the teens break into a burst of Laughter and begin to walks of. Zack The black ranger passes by them without noticing. He greets an girl who was walking slowly by then tries to catch up with his friends.

‘’Hey, guys ! What’s up ?’‘ Zack calls as his four friends turn around. He jogs towards them and finally catches up with them. The five friends sit on an nearby staircase.

Trini says ‘’Hey Zack, We’re reading about The Power Rangers !’‘

‘’Oh yeah? What’s it say ?’‘ Zack asks amusingly as Kimberly skims down to find the place where she left it off.

Kimberly again reads with same excited feel as before ‘’ Mayor Carrington hopes that the mysterious superheroes will make a public appearance in the Angel Grove Park, where countless fans will gather to celebrate them.’‘ She closes the paper in sighs with relief. The gang gets up and starts walking away.

Kimberly laughs ‘’I have a feeling The Power Rangers will show up.. Don’t you ?’‘

‘’I would says its an 100% chance they will stop by.’‘ Billy replies and chucking at the same time.

Trini adds on ‘’ Mm..It’s gonna be one heck of a show.’‘ Her and Billy walks behind Kim as they head throughout the doors.

‘’I wouldn’t be surprised.’‘ Says Jason as he slaps Zack hand and catches up with their friends as they walk out of the campus. We now see the bullies Bulk and Skull heavily coming down the stairs.

Skull talks earnestly ‘’C’mon , ya gotta tell me. What are you planning ?’‘

‘’Ok ! All Right !Ok !’‘ Bulk whispers as he shoves Skull down the stairs. Bulk walks ahead slightly and edges around the sides of a pillar. Skull edges around to the other side, focusing all his attention to make sure no-one is looking. Thus he is unprepared when Bulk springs out in front of him. Skull recoils and winces, just as Bulk readies to reveal his master plan.

Bulk talks excitedly ‘’ You know there planning that party for the Power Rangers in the park ?’‘ Skull has an lost look on his face.

‘’Yeah, I think I know whatcha talking about. Please continue.’‘ Skull says with an obvious growing excitement.

Bulk grabs Skull by his coat ‘’We’re gonna steal a bit of their thunder !’‘ Bulk says while lifting Skull up’‘Were gonna show Angel Grove that the Power Rangers aren’t the only Superheroes in this city.’‘

Skull worming still trying to get lose ‘’ Yeah there not the only superheroes in this city.’‘ Bulk drops Skull like it was an reflex.

Skull stands up and says ‘’There not...’‘ Bulk slaps Skull on the back of his head.

‘’Hah, Wait till they get a load of us.’‘ Bulk says laughing manically walking away. Skull still obviously confused tries to catch up with his friend.

*
We cross to the sight of the Beautifully designed Moon Palace. Once inside We see The Wicked Witch of space Rita Repulsa pyrokineticlly ignite her dark candles. Every one her henchmen except that of Finster walks into Rita’s quarters.

‘’I have just had an Epiphany.....I think will attend this party....And give the Power Ranger’s an Big surprise.’‘ Riata cackles

Scorpina strokes Goldar’s shoulder and asks ‘’What is the surprise my Empress ?’‘ The witch opens here mouth to reply but the oafish Baboo steps in front of her.

‘’Will there be any of those little Swedish Meatballs ?’‘ Baboo says rubbing his stomach in delight.

Squat adds on ‘’Or those cute little Balloons or Moonwalks ?’‘ Goldar quickly puts his sword across Baboo’s neck.

‘’Quiet you Bubbleheads! We are not going to The party for an social visit, Were going to destroy the Power Rangers ! ‘’Goldar cackles putting the sword back into his sheath

Our focus changes to that of images following in a quick succession. The first image is that of Rita’s mystic skull flashing its evil red eyes. The second image is that of an darkening clouds beginning to roll. The third is that of an closer look evil skull pulsating with raw energy. The final image is that of Rita Repulsa cackling over her black crystal ball. The Space witch’s high pitched voice can be heard over all of the images.

‘’Thats right, Goldar, and to finish those Pesky Rangers I will channel all the powers of The Dark Magicks to activate the most powerful Warzord in the Galaxy. The powerful........Cyclopsis !’‘

Rita chants as her voice gets louder by every word. ‘’Oh....Thy wicked Star of Doom. FURY of the storms of Sile. An Empress with the blood of Vile. I CHALLENGE YOU to give ME the POWER.’‘ We watch as the veins make themselves noticed on Rita’s pale face. Her grey hair turns jet black and finally Her pupils look like circular obsidian stones throbbing with energy.

Baboo quivers in fear ‘’Oh I can’t watch.’‘

‘’BRING FORTH...CYCLOPSIS .....NOW !’‘ Rita Repulsa unleashes an tower of Black Arts magic that rotates like an tornado. The tower of shoots through the top of the moon palace and almost like an Asteroid begins to enter Earth’s orbit. After the tower of power was finished, Rita completely drained of her magical energy falls over unconscious. Goldar catches his queen and cradles her in his arms.

‘’I shall not fail you my queen, my beautiful Queen ! I will pilot Cyclopsis and send the Power Rangers to their DOOM !’‘ The angered Goldar says laying Rita on her close by king sized Bed, with an hit of his right fist on to his golden chest plate. The henchman teleports away in a fury of flames.

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Next....... How does Tommy feel about giving up his Dragon Coin ? The Bioman team have one hell of an reunion, and The pary is just getting started on .......''Doomsday'' the Novel-Chapter Two

Sparky Ranger
08-11-2003, 09:04 AM
OK I have a couple of pieces of advice.

1) An is only used when followed by a word starting with a vowel, (a, e, i, o, u) or a 'h'

2) Type these things in word and run a grammar and spell check. There weren't many mistakes but those that there were stood out.

But I actually really like this. Good going!

Lord ZEDD
08-11-2003, 09:13 PM
Pretty good start to the novel but one qestion who the hell is silver is he some villain from the Bioman dubb or something. So far the only problem I see fic is your grammer at points and the fact some people haven't seen the Bioman dubb so most might not understand what is going on with that part of the story. but I say your doing a pretty good job.

PHAETON
08-12-2003, 11:37 AM
Thanks guys ch 2 will be comming up soon

Fictional Fan Failure
08-12-2003, 05:36 PM
Not My cup of tea

Panty Strangled
08-12-2003, 05:58 PM
Originally posted by PHAETON
Darkness, Blood and Sweat is all that represents this personal Hell of mine. It is always Pitch Black with withered trees, Freezing snow and barren of all life. It makes me glad that the fact I am Dead but also an Android. I am Silver the Bio-Hunter, I kneel on the ground and let the head of my own roil on the ground. My white armor which had been previously been scarred by battle had been restored former glory. My red eyes shines brighter then ever before

‘’Lokar I have finished your stupid tests, Now give me what I wanted.’‘ Silver says as an large fireball roars into the dark clouds above. The fireball transforms into an Gigantic Blue head appears shaking its Demonic spikes which served as hair.

‘’It seems you have....Your Ambition staggers me. It could not compare to that of the Wannabe Me witch Rita Repulsa. Nevertheless is one of the keys for my ascension unto your world.’‘ Lokar booms with an Expressionless look on his face.

‘’Cut the small talk will you. Let me have my revenge.’‘ Silver scowls

‘’Do you swear that every slave, Death or Conquered ground in my name ?’‘ Lokar asks with an Sinister grin on his face.

‘’I swear it Lord Lokar that when I triumph in defeat the world will be ripe for your taking. So do your BEST !’‘ Silver yells beckoning for more maliciousness-Begging for more power.’‘ [/B]


What the hell did you just say in this paragraph?