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Red_Ranger2003
08-10-2003, 08:19 AM
The Countdown Begins...

Dustin Brooks, the former Yellow Ranger. Dustin was on the track with Blake and Hunter. After a lap, Kelly came to him. "Dustin, some guy told me you should go to the closed Subway"said Kelly. "Why?" "I have no idea." "I'll check it out. I'll come back later.
At Angel Grove...
Justin, who's now 18 years old, was looking at his Martial Arts trophys. 'I'll miss the other guys.' The telephone was ringing. "I'll get it.
Kimberly Hart, was at the Youth Center. The telephone rang. Ernie got it. "Kimberly! Phone's for you."said Ernie. "I'll be back later, Kat." At Aquitar...Tideus was sitting close to the fountain. Then, Cestro came. "What is it?" At the Mirinoi...the Space Rangers were visiting the Galaxy Rangers. They were at the Comet Cafe. Bulk asked Carlos:"May I take your order?" Suddenly, Carlos teleported! "Is that for here or to go? Wait a minute, AHHHHHH!" Carlos teleported to the closed Subway. 3 other people was there. "Where am I?"thought Carlos. Carlos was in the subway. 4 other people were there. "Justin! Is that you?"said Carlos. "Carlos!" Dustin was looking at them. "What a reunion."said Dustin. "Ok. Why am I here with people I don't know at all?"said Kimberly. Suddenly, Tideus teleported in the subway. "It gets weirder."said Dustin. Then, someone who looked like Zordon, and an Alpha appeared. "I am Zoltar, Zordon's brother."said Zoltar. "And I'm Alpha 8." "An evil force has arrived, and only you could stop them. You will have new powers. You will become the Countdown Power Rangers. This is Omputerca, the head of the Cyber Ninjas. This is Megadrive, his henchman. This is Mouser, the person who creates his monsters. And these are his Cyber Warriors, his minions."said Zoltar, showing pictures of them on the Viewing Globe. "Teah but, how could we stop them?"asked Kimberly. "Good question. You will have new powers, like I told you earlier. Carlos, you will be Countdown Ranger 5, Green. Kimberly, you will be Countdown Ranger 4, Pink. Tideus of Aquitar, you will be Countdown Ranger 3, Yellow. Justin, you will be Countdown Ranger 2, Blue. And Dustin, you will be Countdown Ranger 1, Red. Here are your morphers."said Zoltar, as morphers appeared on their wrists. "This is cool and all, but I need to get back to the track."said Dustin. "And I need to go back to Mirinoi."said Carlos. "And I am needed on Aquitar."said Tideus. "Very well. I will alert you when Omputerca strikes."said Zoltar. "Thanks for everything." "See you later!" "Why don't we all take a walk together?"asked Dustin. "Ok, but only a while."said Justin. They walked out of the subway, until something appeared. A woman screamed. Everyone ran away. "We better check it out."said Carlos. Gray minions appeared. "They must be the Cyber Warriors. Come on!"said Dustin. They ran to the Warriors. "Well, I think we should morph."said Tideus. "Countdown Ranger 5, Green!" "Countdown Ranger 4, Pink!" "Countdown Ranger 3, Yellow!" "Countdown Ranger 2, Blue!" "Countdown Ranger 1, Red!" "Wow! This feels awsome!"said Carlos. "Let's do it!" Dustin jumped, and started slashing Warriors with his sword. Justin was using his Bat. Tideus used his Discs, and many more. In just seconds, the Cyber Warriors were defeated. Later at the subway, the rangers celebrated. "That Omputerca guy will be out of here in days!"said Dustin. Omputerca was wacthing the whole thing. "Yeah, right." "Power Rangers, the legand continues!"

Red_Ranger2003
08-10-2003, 08:59 AM
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legacyranger
08-10-2003, 01:24 PM
Its good, but its to short, You should make it a little long

ChromiumRanger1
08-10-2003, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by Red_Ranger2003
The Countdown Begins... pt.1

Dustin Brooks, the former Yellow Ranger. Dustin was on the track with Blake and Hunter. After a lap, Kelly came to him. "Dustin, some guy told me you should go to the closed Subway"said Kelly. "Why?" "I have no idea." "I'll check it out. I'll come back later.
At Angel Grove...
Justin, who's now 18 years old, was looking at his Martial Arts trophys. 'I'll miss the other guys.' The telephone was ringing. "I'll get it.
Kimberly Hart, was at the Youth Center. The telephone rang. Ernie got it. "Kimberly! Phone's for you."said Ernie. "I'll be back later, Kat." At Aquitar...Tideus was sitting close to the fountain. Then, Cestro came. "What is it?" At the Mirinoi...the Space Rangers were visiting the Galaxy Rangers. They were at the Comet Cafe. Bulk asked Carlos:"May I take your order?" Suddenly, Carlos teleported! "Is that for her or to go. Wait a minute, AHHHHHH!" Carlos teleported to the closed Subway. 4 other people was there. "Where am I"thought Carlos.

To Be Continued...

I'd give you constructive criticism but there's no way I could lie to you. That sucked.

Red_Ranger2003
08-11-2003, 03:23 PM
Should I edit the episode to make it longer? Oh, and the reason it's short is because I needed to go somewhere before I finished the episode.

Sparky Ranger
08-11-2003, 03:26 PM
Where did you need to go? Somewhere with a working spelling and grammar check would have been good! They layout and speech is awful

PowerRangerFan7
08-12-2003, 05:33 PM
You need to learn to stretch the story out, That part was all comjumbled and confusing. If you learned to write i correctly it could have easily been better.

Red_Ranger2003
08-15-2003, 08:50 PM
I made the episode longer. Happy?