PRNS:: Episode 30 "Forever Blue"

[GreenRangerGuy]

it was a normal day in wherever the PR's live(i dont know where they live) , Tori was surfing at the beach , Shane was showing off his skateboarding tricks , and Dustin was riding his bike at that place. lol.

suddenly Tori came to shore and there were two men dressed in blue... one black guy with a shaved head , and the other one had brownish hair , they said to Tori "will you come with us?" , "who are you?"said tori and she went with them....

TO BE CONTINUED...
YOU GUYS PLZ SUGGEST SOME THINGS I CAN PUT IN THIS STORY!!! AND I DONT EVEN HAVE A VILLIAN FOR THIS! HELP! IF YOU HELP ME YOU'LL BE THE BIGGEST PR FAN EVER!

[Sparky Ranger]

Oh dear oh dear oh dear...

[GreenRangerGuy]

HEY DO YOU KNOW THE NAME OF THE BLUE ALEIN RANGER?

[Storm Warrior]

His name is Jimmy.

[GreenRangerGuy]

NO ITS ISNT! ISNT IT LIKE, FRISCA OR SUMTHIN?

[GreenRangerGuy]

I GOT PART 2 OF FOREVER BLUE! HERE IT IS...

"WHO ARE YOU GUYS"? TORI ASKED. "IM ROCKY DESANTOS" SAID THE GUY WITH BROWN HAIR , " IM TJ JOHNSON" SAID THE BLACK GUY. "STAY WITH HIM" SAID ROCKY. "WE HAVE TO GET THE OTHERS" THERE WAS A GUY SITTING AT A TABLE HE WAS BLACK WITH VERY BAD HAIR STYLIN. "HEY IM MAX"...

ROCKY WENT TO MARINER BAY AND WENT TO WHEREVER CHAD LIVES AND SAID "CAN YOU COME WITH ME" .
TJ WENT TO MIRINOI (SOME HOW) AND GOT KAI AND WENT TBACK TO ANGEL GROVE SITTING WITH TORI AND MAX WAS THE BLUE ALEIN RANGER. AND SO FAR THEY HAD 7 BLUE RANGERS. IN THE DISTANCE THEY SAW A GUY WALKING TOWARDS THEM "HEY ITS BILLY" ROCKY SAID. "HEY GUYS" BILLY SIAD. "OK WHATS GOING ON??? WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE??? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME???"

"IVAN OOZE IS BACK" BILLY SAID. EVERYONE BUT ROCKY BILLY AND THE ALEIN RANGER SAID "WHOS IVAN OOZE?" "NO TIME TO EXPLAIN WE HAVE TO GO" MAX SAID.SOMEONE CAME IN A BLUE CAR "HEY GUYS!"JUSTIN SAID. "WAZZUPP?" SAID LUCAS. HEY I THINK ALL OF THE RANGERS ARE HERE NOW.

SUDDENLY A ALL OF THEM HEARD A BIG BOOM!!! IVAN OOZE CAME WALKING OUT OF NOWHERE AND SAID "IM GONNA GET REVENGE ON THE POWER RANGERS FOR DESTROYING ME!" "WHAT DO WE DO?" SAID KAI.

YOU GUYS...
"ITS MORPHIN TIME!" BILLY SAID
"TRISERRATOPS!"

SUDDENLY BILLY WAS WEARING A BLUE SPANDEX WITH WHITE DAIMONDS DESIGN ON IT.
"BLUE MORPHIN RANGER!"

"ZEO RANGER III , BLUE!" ROCKY SAID

"BLUE ZEO RANGER!"

SHIFT INTO TURBO!" , "MOUNTAIN BLASTER TURBO POWER!"
SAID JUSTIN

AND SUDDENLY HE WAS IN A BLUE SPANDEX TOO!

"BLUE TURBO RANGER!"

"LETS ROCKET!" , TJ SAID AND PRESSED 335 ON HIS ASTRO MORPHER.

"BLUE SPACE RANGER!"

"GO GALACTIC!" YELLED KAI. AND HE WAS IN A BLUE SPANDEX TOO BUT IT HAD A BAD STYLE I THINK.

"BLUE GALAXY RANGER!"

"LIGHTSPEED RESCUE!" SAID CHAD AND HE WAS IN A BLUE SPANDEX AS WELL.

"BLUE LIGHTSPEED RANGER!"

"TIME FOR TIME FORCE!" SAID LUCAS AND HE MORPHED INTO A BLUE SPANDEX WITH A COOL DESIGN.

"BLUE TIME FORCE RANGER!"

"WILD ACCESS!" SAID MAX AND SUDDENLY HE WAS IN A BLUE SPANDEX AND HIS HELMET WAS IN THE DESIGN OF A SHARK

"BLUE TIME FORCE RANGER!"

"NINJA STORM , RANGER FORM!" SAID TORI.

"POWER OF WATER!"

"BLUE WIND RANGER!"

"NOW LETS GET THEM!" BILLY YELLED "BLUE RANGERS!!!" THEY ALL SAID.

IVAN OOXE RELEASED HIS OOZE MEN.
BILLY AND TORI JUMPED OVER SOME. AND STARTING FIGHTING THEM AS A TEAM.
MAX AND THE BLUE ALEIN RANGER TEAMED UP TOO.
ROCKY AND LUCAS FOUGHT THE OOZE MEN 2GETHER TOO.
JUSTIN AND CHAD TEAMED UP.
AND FINALLY TJ AND KAI TEAMED UP TOO.
THEY DEFEATED THE OOZE MEN.

AND NOW THEY WENT AFTER IVAN. "I SUGGEST WE PULL OUT THE WEAPONS!"BILLY SAID "GOOD IDEA!"ROCKY REPLIED.

"POWER LANCE!" BILLY SAID.
"ZEO AXES!" ROCKY SAID.
"TURBO HAND BLASTERS!" JUSTIN SAID
"ASTRO AXE!" TJ SAID.
"TRANSDAGGER!" SAID KAI
"V - LANCER!" SAID CHAD
"V WEAPONS!" SAID LUCAS THE BLUE TIME FORCE RANGER
"FIGHTING FINS!" SAID MAX THE BLUE WILD FORCE RANGER
"SONIC FIN!" YELLED THE BLUE WIND RANGER
AND NOW ALL OF THEIR WEAPONS WERE OUT.

SUDDENLY OUT OF NOWHERE...
"NAVY ANTLER!" SAID THE ALREADY MORPHED NAVY THUNDER RANGER.
"BLAKE!" SAID TORI IN SURPRISE
"I THOUGHT I COULD HELP YOU GUYS." SAID BLAKE
"ATTACK!" BILLY COMMANDED AND THEY ALL HIT IVAN OOZE WITH THEIR WEAPONS.
AND ALL OF A SUDDEN IVAN OOZE COMBINED WITH SOME KIND OF STEEL BUG THING. AND GREW LARGER. AND THEN WENT OUT TO SPACE.
"I THINK WE NEED THE ZORDS" SAID THE BLUE ALEIN RANGER.
BILLY CALLED ON HIS WOLF NINJA ZORD AND BLUE SHOGUNZORD.
BLUE ALEIN RANGER SUMMONED HIS BATTLEBORG
ROCKY CALLED ON ZEO ZORD III AND SUPER ZEO ZORD III.
JUSTIN SUMONED SIREN BLASTER.
TJ CALLED ON MEGA V-3
KAI CALLED HIS GORILLA GALACTABEAST.
CHAD GOT HIS HYDRO RESCUE 2.
LUCAS GOT HIS TIME FLIER 2.
MAX CALLED HIS SHARK AND GIRAFFE WILD ZORDS
TORI SUMMONED HER DOLPHIN ZORD.
AND FINALLY BLAKE CALLED ON HIS BEETLEZORD

MEGA V-3 AND TIME FLIER 2 TOOK OFF INTO SPACE. AND THE OTHER BLUE ZORDS GOT A BOOST FROM A SPACE SHUTTLE AND WERE BLASTED INTO SPACE.
AND NOW IT WAS A BATTLE BETWEEN IVAN OOZE AND A BUNCH A BLUE ZORDS. LOL. IVAN MADE A HUGE EXPLOSION. ALL THE ZORDS WERE AFFECTED EXCEPT FOR THE BLUE DOLPHIN! THE BLUE DOLPHIN USED A HEADBUTT AND IVAN OOZE WAS BLASTED TO EARTH AND LANDED IN THE ATLANTIC OCEAN AND BLUE DOLPHIN DIVED INTO THE WATER AND MADE A HUGE WAVE AND DROWNED IVAN AND HE WAS FINALLY DESTROYED.


"WELL I GUESS THIS IS IT." SAID TORI. "THANX FOR ALL OF YOU COMING TO FIGHT THIS THREAT." BILLY SAID. "HEY UMMM. TORI...."SAID LUCAS "WHAT?" ASKED TORI . "WANNA GO OUT ON A DATE WITH ME?" LUCAS SAID. "SURE." SAID TORI. ALL OF THE BLUE RANGERS LAUGHED.THEY ALL GOT IN A CIRCLE AND TORI PUT HER HAND IN THE MIDDLE. AND SO DID THE OTHERS.
"FOREVER BLUE" SAID TORI. AND THEY ALL TOOK THEYRE HANDS OUT AND SAYED THEIR GOODBYES.
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"WHERE WERE YOU?" ASKED SHANE. WE WERE LOOKING FOR YOU EVERYWHERE.! "I WENT TO MEET THE OTHER BLUE RANGERS." SHE SAID WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE. "DID U REALLY?" DUSTIN ASKED IN SURPRISE. "YEAH IT WAS EXHAUSTING." LOL
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[Dami-chan]

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[Red_Ranger2003]

Originally posted by GreenRangerGuy
NO ITS ISNT! ISNT IT LIKE, FRISCA OR SUMTHIN?

IT'S CESTRO!

[Blue Zeo]

WoW! And to think I thought my parody was bad......

[DiamondRangerX]

That was suppose to be a parody?:eek:

[TheOneRJS200]

Well, it might have been good, had you actually spent more than five minutes on it....

[MingyMingyJongo]

Originally posted by TheOneRJS200
Well, it might have been good, had you actually spent more than five minutes on it....

Or didn't type the entire second part in capitals...

Or use an alternate universe villain...

Or...

Oh never mind.

[Sparky Ranger]

Originally posted by Sparky Ranger
Oh dear oh dear oh dear...
I've said it before I won't say it again. Please...just let this post die!

[GreenRangerGuy]

alright i messed up! i accidentally put for justin "red lightning turbo power. (i was thinking of the red turbo ranger) lol. i'll fix it.

[Ace Venom]

Is this a joke?

[Butt Mouth]

"And then uh, Tori went with them in like a huge car and the ran over the bag guy at someplace near...erm...camp david.

And everyone who was murdered to death was magically brought back to life.

The End"

What a pile of cack. I don't usually curse young writers but...wtf.

[MingyMingyJongo]

Originally posted by GreenRangerGuy
alright i messed up! i accidentally put for justin "red lightning turbo power. (i was thinking of the red turbo ranger) lol. i'll fix it.

SEE GUYS! He fixed it! NOW IT'S THE EBST FREAKIN' FAN FIC EVER!

[Imperialwar]

It's not that bad guys

[Samurai Ranger]

Not that bad? No means to be offensive but.......this is the crapiest fic I ever read.

[Imperialwar]

Originally posted by Samurai Ranger
Not that bad? No means to be offensive but.......this is the crapiest fic I ever read.

Can you do better?

[Clu-less]

Originally posted by Imperialwar
Can you do better?

I can. Just read Power Rangers Aura, currently on episode 5 entitled "True Blue".

CHEAP PLUG, WOO!

Anyway, wow GreenRangerGuy. Just...wow.

[OriginalRanger]

For starters, story work is needed. The plot needs improvement. All the blue Rangers get together for no apparent reason, and all of the sudden Ivan Ooze starts jumps out of nowhere and begins attacking them for no apparent reason. There needs to be an explanation behind everything that's going on-and none is provided. More time needed to be invested in creating the plotline.

I hope I've given some good advice.

[GreenRangerGuy]

THEY DIDNT GET 2GETHER FOR NO REASON THEY GOT 2GETHER CUZ IVAN OOZE WANTED REVENGE BECUZ THE POWER RANGERS DESTROYED HIM.

[GreenRangerGuy]

AND I READ POWER RANGERS AURA AND IT WAS THE CRAPPIEST FANFIC EVER. YOU SUCK

[OriginalRanger]

Originally posted by GreenRangerGuy
THEY DIDNT GET 2GETHER FOR NO REASON THEY GOT 2GETHER CUZ IVAN OOZE WANTED REVENGE BECUZ THE POWER RANGERS DESTROYED HIM.

But that has to be explained.

How did Ivan come back? For what purpose was he brought back?

When was a "mission" for the Blue Rangers to get Ivan explained? He just walked out of nowhere pissed and started attacking them.

Just look at "Forever Red: The Novel" or any book out there-the "hows" and "whys" of the plot are explained in full detail.

I really hope this doesn't come off as a flame (I don't want it too); I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism and show a way the story could have been improved.

Good luck on future writing endeavors.

-OR

[Clu-less]

Originally posted by GreenRangerGuy
AND I READ POWER RANGERS AURA AND IT WAS THE CRAPPIEST FANFIC EVER. YOU SUCK

Dude, your definately no one to say my fic sucks. I know it's not the best, but it's WAY better than yours.

[GreenRangerGuy]

NO IT ISNT CLULESS BINNO.

[GreenRangerGuy]

WELL THEN DONT SAY MY FIC SUCKS YOU ASSHOLE I BET NO ONE EVEN LIKES YOU ON THIS BOARD , YOUR TOO BIG OF AN ASSHOLE;)

[Clu-less]

There's no way I'm gonna get in a flaming war with a newb. It's not worth getting my name changed again.

[OriginalRanger]

I hate to diss, but...

Y'know, between this, the 'please show me Dino Thunder Rangers' thread (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=22892), and the 'Jason's Ego' poll (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=22887), I am REALLY beginning to wonder what's up with greenrangerguy.