LordWrath
08-09-2003, 02:34 AM
Here is the first part of Chapter 4. I am having a little bit of a writers block right now. i know what i want but i'm just trying to figure out how to get there. i just havn't got the right wording down.
Well anyway here it is. Enjoy and as always i would like some feedback.
Chapter 4
Ninjor watched as the old power ranger walked away from the temple to his awaiting spaceship. ‘Why did I help him?’ he thought to himself. ‘Why did I help one of the rangers who left me, who made no attempt to rescue me from Lord Zedd?’ he shook his head at his own thoughts. ‘That ranger has a gift, that’s why I helped him’ he sat down on the rocks, watching the man walk off in the distance. ‘Zordon knew as I do that the boy will make a difference when the time comes. That is why he was chosen, not because of his technical abilities for there are hundreds of humans on earth with that kind of ability but for his connection to the balance of the universe in which he lives.’ He pause thinking hard ‘what was it that Zordon told me about him’ he shook his head trying to remember. ‘Ever time a new villain upset the balance of the good/evil he knew about it.’ He stood back up and started to walk back into the temple.
He stopped and turned back towards the now distance blue ranger as he got into his small spaceship. “I fear for you Billy, for I believe this quest will be your last.” He said softly as the ship blasted off into space. “May the power protect you.” He sighed, inside his helmet a tear rolled down his cheek. He turned and walked back into the temple.
“Eltare Control, this is Astromegaship Mark II requesting permission to land.” Andros said from the pilot seat of his ship.
“Welcome back Andros, you are cleared to land on Docking pad 33. Dimitria has been expecting you.” A female voice replied.
“Expecting me?” Andros said in shock. He hadn’t let anyone know that he was approaching in fear of being followed.
“Yes she will meet you on Docking pad 33.”
“Thank you.”
“Cole!” A loud voice said as Cole sat down for a nice drink at BulkMyers. He turned to look towards the sound of the voice and smiled. He then stood up from his lawn chair and shook the guys hand.
“Carter, nice to see you again.” Cole, the former red wild force ranger said.
“Nice to see you to. We have a problem, Tommy is gathering all the former rangers together.”
“I’m not a ranger and more. My powers were taken away when we defeated master org.”
“I know, but we need you to come anyway.”
“Sure no problem” Cole said and they both left BulkMyers.
Well anyway here it is. Enjoy and as always i would like some feedback.
Chapter 4
Ninjor watched as the old power ranger walked away from the temple to his awaiting spaceship. ‘Why did I help him?’ he thought to himself. ‘Why did I help one of the rangers who left me, who made no attempt to rescue me from Lord Zedd?’ he shook his head at his own thoughts. ‘That ranger has a gift, that’s why I helped him’ he sat down on the rocks, watching the man walk off in the distance. ‘Zordon knew as I do that the boy will make a difference when the time comes. That is why he was chosen, not because of his technical abilities for there are hundreds of humans on earth with that kind of ability but for his connection to the balance of the universe in which he lives.’ He pause thinking hard ‘what was it that Zordon told me about him’ he shook his head trying to remember. ‘Ever time a new villain upset the balance of the good/evil he knew about it.’ He stood back up and started to walk back into the temple.
He stopped and turned back towards the now distance blue ranger as he got into his small spaceship. “I fear for you Billy, for I believe this quest will be your last.” He said softly as the ship blasted off into space. “May the power protect you.” He sighed, inside his helmet a tear rolled down his cheek. He turned and walked back into the temple.
“Eltare Control, this is Astromegaship Mark II requesting permission to land.” Andros said from the pilot seat of his ship.
“Welcome back Andros, you are cleared to land on Docking pad 33. Dimitria has been expecting you.” A female voice replied.
“Expecting me?” Andros said in shock. He hadn’t let anyone know that he was approaching in fear of being followed.
“Yes she will meet you on Docking pad 33.”
“Thank you.”
“Cole!” A loud voice said as Cole sat down for a nice drink at BulkMyers. He turned to look towards the sound of the voice and smiled. He then stood up from his lawn chair and shook the guys hand.
“Carter, nice to see you again.” Cole, the former red wild force ranger said.
“Nice to see you to. We have a problem, Tommy is gathering all the former rangers together.”
“I’m not a ranger and more. My powers were taken away when we defeated master org.”
“I know, but we need you to come anyway.”
“Sure no problem” Cole said and they both left BulkMyers.